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Motoaki Furukawai - SWEET ANGEL

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月30日 at 下午 05:46:07

Artist: Motoaki Furukawa
Title: SWEET ANGEL
Source: jubeat ripples
Tags: spboxer3 ZHSteven No_Gu
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3734kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.47 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Basic (2.75 stars, 116 notes)
  3. Extreme (5 stars, 304 notes)
  4. Sp3's Jubiko (4.89 stars, 597 notes)
  5. Steven's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 498 notes)
Download: Motoaki Furukawa - SWEET ANGEL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ 4th Ranked Map ~

Basic by No_Gu
Advanced by me
Extreme by me
Sp3's Jubiko by spboxer3
Steven's Taiko Oni by ZHSteven


Thanks for mod!
  1. LKs
  2. 3er123
  3. -Bakari-
  4. l1106188
  5. kosiga
  6. -Baby Strawberry-
  7. ikari_kyon
  8. -HaRuNa-
  9. OnosakiHito
  10. No_Gu
  11. popner
  12. wmfchris
  13. AoiX
  14. DarknessAngel
  15. B2IN
  16. Verdisphena
  17. Kurisuchianu
  18. KiyoshiX101
  19. Jebok
  20. Genkishi
  21. karenying
  22. DJPop Bubbled!
  23. Shiirn Ranked!
sunny day
丢星星~
Uan
gogo 老大!!
xiao6_old
一看就是未来的神MAPER,星星送上
wmfchris
[Extreme]
0:34:361 (3,4,5,6,7,8) up 1 grid
0:44:761 (4) down 2 grids to make parallelogram
0:49:161 (5) right 1 grid to make it symmetrical
0:56:361 (1) right 1 grid to make it symmetrical
0:57:561 (4) left 2 grid
1:00:561 (3,4) make it symmetrical to (1,2)

[Advanced]
0:14:761 (4) left 1 grid
0:40:361 (4) right 1 grid
1:01:961 (3) down 1 grid
I wonder why combo colour are all pink in the later part lol

star~
A8A_old
GOOD
happy123370
nice map~
Nele_old
支持啊!支持!
Mary
好MAP!
Mary

Mary Gibbs wrote:

好MAP!
ZHSteven
一颗星星~~~
MAP 我看了下。。
不是太会mod就不多说什么了。。
就是extreme那slider velocity 会不会太快了? 貌似和整张图的spacing 不符= =
顺便求 ctb guest diff~
另外kudosu不要乱给= =别人的mod 有帮助了再给~~
MisakaMikoto
星星星星
wang211926
star~ :)
andrea123_old
= =蛮简单的....
ryanenter2
Star for this song :)
ZQR
:)
spboxer3
LKs
[EX]
[00:12;161] whistle 这里不是后面
[00:26;761] 这一系列的whistle都没必要 换成original的whistle吧 或者把whistle压在歌曲的clap上

另外作为EX难度还是有点不够 再大胆点可以
No_Gu
716 Girl
Sorry if I bad modded
M4M
Basic
00:27:961 (4) - i think ugly
00:53:561 (3,1,2) - maybe place http://puu.sh/iI6f so
01:29:961 (1,2) - 2 - 2 grid right (grid level 3)
Advanced
00:13:561 (1,2) - overlap
00:46:761 (4,5) - ^
00:56:361 (3,4,5) - ^
00:56:961 (4) - maybe repeat?
00:06:761 (1) - 1-2 grid right
00:22:161 (3) - repeat
00:22:161 (3) - non symmetry
Extreme
00:31:461 (8) - place so http://puu.sh/iI7Q
00:51:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks not good http://puu.sh/iI85
01:25:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:26:361 (5) - maybe little below
01:34:761 (2) - overlap?

Kiai time in advanced started in 38:765
in Etreme in 38:761 Fix it
in Advanced end in 0:51:561
in Extreme in 01:03:961

Good Luck~
riffy
Hi~
Boss asked me for mod :3

General
please, use 1024x768 bg ><
or 800x600 (your bg is too small)

maybe change 1st combo-colour?
Combo1 : 202,255,255

Extreme
00:25:361 (5) - new combo?
01:34:761 (2) - let's make a looooong spinner ><

Advanced
00:15:561 - circle here? ><

Basic
00:35:561 (1,2,3) - maybe slider?
00:39:161 (2) - strange shape ><
01:16:361 (5,6) - slider?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sorry, my mod is too short. Your map is too great ><
Good luck!~
sweeet boss \:D/
/me runs
Loneight
Request from my friendship is mutual!~~

以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[Gerneral]
00:49:783的bookmark...?!
BG圖640x480有點小的感覺lol 不過沒問題XD!!!

[Basic]
沒有可以建議的了 GD

[Advanced]

00:48:361 (1) - finish?
00:54:761 (1) - ^

[Insane]
好多綠線!!!
00:45:761 (2) - 這個...應該沒影響到吧?!XD

好美的圖
Good song and map~
Star~~~
kosiga
Hi~ bossandy~ :)

from my queue~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - Only Sp3's Jubiko diff is different. I think unnecessary. remove check it
  2. Song folder - bg.png - Artist's name 「Motoaki Furukawa」 is correct. but the name of this BG is written as 「Motoaki Yoshikawa」. why ?x?
    「Motoaki Furukawa」 ⇒ 古川もとあき is correct xD
    hahaha :P I think that you do not need to mind it if this found it somewhere :roll:
[Basic]
  1. 00:25:961 (1) - why do you put a color same as NC before ? I think that you must change it even if this is intentional. because this diff is beginner's diff. Such a confusing thing is a not good :(
  2. 00:36:761 (4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jNAN because 00:37:161 - here is strong tuning, it is better to put something ><!
[Advanced]
  1. 00:16:361 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jNGb or http://puu.sh/jNGg ( 00:14:761 (2,3,4) - Since you are using some of the 1/2beat, rhythm of now does not agree with me a little :(
  2. 00:19:961 (2) - why only here use DS0.6x ? i think use DS0.8x is better.
  3. 00:56:961 (4,5) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jNJg ( I think that the one that made simple here fits )
[Extreme]
  1. 00:37:861 (x) - It matches music even if I put note here. Do you dislike 4 repeated blows? http://puu.sh/jNOM
  2. 01:04:361 - I think that speedchange of this slider does not match, because it return to the original speed from the next slider :( only I may feel it, please hear the opinion of other people
  3. 01:06:761 (1) - remove NC
sorry, poor mod :?

Please do not throw kudosu if worthless.

very nice map~. star☆~ :)

Good luck~ :oops:
-Baby Strawberry-
hi老大~!

【Extreme】
SPOILER
01:06:761 (1,1) - 这两个吧我觉得可以做成个Z型走位如图【不过我觉得看上去乱】http://puu.sh/khyh
01:34:761 (2) - 稍微向上来一点?
做得挺好的哇!

【Advanced】
SPOILER
AR不要加1~2嘛。。。
00:12:161 (4) - 我只是觉得形状不大好看, 圆圆的会好看些吧?http://puu.sh/khzR
00:22:761 (1) - 我觉得钩子方向向下好看些http://puu.sh/khAo
01:17:961 (1,2) - 我觉得这两个做成和后面黄色的拉条同样节奏会比较好。。。
01:26:761 (1,2) - 我有新形状~!http://puu.sh/khCG

【Basic】

蛮好的~! 小星星一颗~! :)
jossieP
;3; Im really late sorry, take this as apology

[Basic]

- maybe low the AR 1 tick? there are some weird rhythms at start
  1. 00:09:961 (1) - whistle instead finish on end of slider, the finish on next slider sounds enough
  2. 00:24:761 (4) - make the end of this point to next start slider? for better flow
  3. 00:32:361 (1) - forgot your finish?
  4. 00:35:561 (1) - ↑
  5. 00:51:561 (1) - backtrack, make a moar soft placement for newbies? also the next slider looks a bit weird since their curves are opposed

[Advanced]

  1. 00:26:761 (1) - covered by previous spinner hitburst, oh wait this is like hard xD its ok sorry
  2. 00:52:561 (2) - hmm, make a better covering with previous slider?
  3. 01:20:361 (1,2) - this 2 follow the music on a better way than 2 previous, just saying, cant find a better snapping

[Extreme

  1. 00:11:361 (2,3) - move 3 grids each one to the centre to make a nicer blanket?
  2. 00:34:561 (4) - make the next stream closer? you used a low spacing 00:33:561 (7,1) here
  3. 00:40:361 (1) - Im sure that this qualify as a burai slider, but maybe just me
  4. 00:51:961 (3,4,5,6) - nicer formation?
  5. 01:04:361 (1) - I didnt espect a slowdown here, but the ticks are visible so I think is fine
  6. 01:26:161 (4) - one grit to right and one grid down, for make same spacing with (2,6) god Im too nazi today D:
  7. 01:34:761 (2) - 2 grids up for avoid the overlap on previous slider, damn still nazi xD

And about the taiko diffs just want to say 4 things
1.- [Steven's taiko] I think the name should be [Steven's Taiko], the "T" on caps
2.- Use the same volume and soundset for 2 diffs, [Steven's taiko] uses soft soundset at 100% volume and [Sp3's Jubiko] normal soundset at 50% volume, ask to guest to use a common soundset and volume
3.- Both Taiko diffs are awesome
4.- use this BG D:!!!

Also I saw that bakari asked you to a bigger BG image, well
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko Mod by bossandy

Sp3's Jubiko
Hitcircles:
00:11:161(1) - kat, seams like this fits better to the other parts.
01:10:561 - k D (01:04:361 - is the only part with finishes, you should use the other finishes I suggested as counterpart, since it feels empty without them)
01:11:361 - ^
01:23:561(1) - D (as counterpart for 01:17:161(1) - )
01:29:961(1) - ^
01:33:161 - delete spinner, add D's according to the sound and add as last note a K or spinner up to 01:39:261 -
{ x = 1/2 space
1. DxxDxxDxSpinner
2. DxxDxxDxK
}

@sp3: You used the two-plets really good.

Steven's Taiko
Generel:
- Audio volumen needs to be Normal without custom overrdrives
- I suggest OD 6
- About the diff. name, I recommend to use the name ,,Steven's Taiko Oni"

Hitcircles:
00:40:761(196) - not sure about this, but how about a d?
01:12:961(4) - slider should be up to 01:13:961 - because the last tick is not visible in 01:14:161 -. Also it fits better in this way.
01:32:361(101) - delete this note please, seams better without.

@Steven: Good streams.

That's it. Taikos are well made.
Good luck!
spboxer3
ZHSteven
-HaRuNa-
Hello, 老大~
我還是個新手modder, 只能給些建議 ;w;

[Basic]


00:32:761 (2) - out of window
00:35:561 (1) - ^
01:01:161 (1) - ^
01:07:161 (5) - ^
01:11:961 (3) - ^
01:15:961 (4) - ^

[Advanced]


00:15:361 (3) - 我覺得不要疊比較好...
00:54:361 (6) - ^
01:00:161 (5) - ^

[Extreme]


找不出問題~

That's all~
It's a good map~

如果你覺得mod不好請無視 ;w;
No_Gu
request from my queue

Skin缺个slider的折返箭头
color不统一

[Advanced]
00:56:961 (4,5) - overlap太严重

[Extreme]
00:37:561 00:38:361都别断掉好了。。stream突然断总感觉不太好
01:05:161 (2) - 速度改回来了那就NC下好了


orz mod好少
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Basic]

01:12:761 (4,2) - 弯得大一些?

[Advanced]

没看出什么。。

[Extreme]

00:39:761 (6,1) - 形状弄好一些?00:40:361 (1)往左移1-2grid
00:51:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - 五边形略歪
00:38:561 (9,10) - clap?

GL~
wmfchris
0.0

[Ext]
AR 9 for streams?
00:40:361 (1) - curve like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269589 ?
00:52:161 (4,5) - [Nazi] placement fix: (4) (276,192), (5) (276,48)

[Adv]
00:31:961 (6) - remove clap at middle

[Basic]
nice

[sp3]
00:16:561 - 音樂出現在red tick上 與ddk ddk在white tick地方變奏不相符
00:25:961 - 完成一句音樂以d過渡自然一點
00:49:961 (1) - broken slider, it only give 6 hit

- ddddkdddddddkdddd好少人用 你是第2個我看過用這條的人 我第一個(誤
- 沒1/3耶真好

[ZHS]
00:11:561 - long muscial note so I don't prefer using slider (which = 1/4 stream)
00:17:961 (55,56) - broken slider
00:19:561 - try D
00:24:361 (82) - broken
00:32:361 - the music didn't go like that... try ddkdddk / ddddkkd remap the coming stream orz
00:53:161 - music goes low -> high, try ddkdkkk
01:10:261 - try dk

-原來sp3的鬼畜都這裡學的
-broken slider = testing中沒給出正確slider hit point的滑條 再拉一次就ok
ZHSteven

wmfchris wrote:

0.0
[ZHS]
00:11:561 - long muscial note so I don't prefer using slider (which = 1/4 stream)
I make it into some short slider+ 1/2 note.
00:17:961 (55,56) - broken slider
00:24:361 (82) - broken
About these slider, I find that I cannot make the full hit point in the path. So Change it to spinner instead.
00:19:561 - try D
Fixed
00:32:361 - the music didn't go like that... try ddkdddk / ddddkkd remap the coming stream orz
remapped. and also remapped some of the long stream at kiai time.
00:53:161 - music goes low -> high, try ddkdkkk
fixed.
01:10:261 - try dk
fixed

-原來sp3的鬼畜都這裡學的
。。这和我没关系啊。。
-broken slider = testing中沒給出正確slider hit point的滑條 再拉一次就ok
Download: Motoaki Furukawa - SWEET ANGEL (bossandy) [Steven's Taiko Oni].osu
AoiX
Request from Queue & extra slot for sp3

Aoi's 酱油 Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
  1. 背景图片用jpg体积比较小
SB/Skin
  1. N/A
Extreme
  1. 00:25:961 (1) - 这个的finish太轻了,因为这前后是不同的clap,区分明显点比较好
  2. 00:51:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果这是个五边形的话也长得太别扭了。。。主要是6的位置
  3. 01:26:761 (1) - 第一个圈finish
Advanced
  1. 00:17:961 (1) - 这里节奏还是补齐比较好
  2. 00:22:761 (1) - ^
Basic
  1. 屁股什么问题
太鼓什么的,SP3这种鬼畜谱完全不敢直视啊
No_Gu

AoiX wrote:

Basic
  1. 屁股什么问题
DarknessAngel
request from in-game ~ :)

對不起拖那麼久lol


Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


Extrame

  1. 我覺得應該是沒問題,很柔和又不難的連打,不錯 ~
  2. 另一個值得一提的是你的音效,下的很用心,我很喜歡 ~ :3

Advanced

  1. 00:40:361 (3) - 在折返上加個whistle才不會讓音效顯得有點空 ~
  2. 00:47:361 (5) - 在頭上放個whistle,理由同上

Basic



  • 沒看出東西


恩...找不到什麼可以挑的...
如果沒用就別給kd了
S.T.A.R ! !
good luck ~

:)

Edit : 我又忘記給星了:P,已補上!
B2IN
[General]
1024*768 http://puu.sh/mEaT
[Basic]
00:41:161 (4) - left 1grid
[Advanced]
fine
[Extreme]
00:31:161 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - how about this one ?


01:27:361 (2) - down 1grid (Third dot)
that all 'v' i can't found more

good luck ~ !
Verdisphena
General
8-) !

Extreme

00:20:761 (2,3) - Ctrl + R
00:26:761 (1) - I don't like this jump
00:35:961 (4,5,6,7) - Very hard to see due the hitburst http://puu.sh/mGbf
00:41:961 (1) - Change to a 1/2 slider and add a note in 00:42:361 - if you change this
00:45:161 (1) - Same as above
01:06:761 (6) - Same as above
01:20:161 (x) - Add a note here

Jubiko

01:34:861 (x) - Add a spinner here?

Advanced

00:17:961 (1) - End this slider in 00:18:561 - and add a repeat
00:22:761 (1) - Why a long slider here? It doesn't fit

Basic
Slider tick rate 2 ?
Nothing found

Another taiko diff is fine
Cristian
Taiko mod as requested o/

[Steven's Taiko Oni]
00:23:461 (22) - Delete this note
00:49:361 (175,176,177,178,179) - This not fit in the music, change the patterns
01:34:761 - I sugest spinner to this part

[Sp3's Jubiko]
00:07:061 (3) - Delete note
00:37:361 (3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This sounds beter moving it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/278936
01:34:761 - sugest to spin this part

ok
ZHSteven

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Taiko mod as requested o/

[Steven's Taiko Oni]
00:23:461 (22) - Delete this note nope. but moving the triplet partten 1 note after which I think it will be better.
00:49:361 (175,176,177,178,179) - This not fit in the music, change the patterns
This 5 note is a continuous pattern from 00:48:361 (168) here. So sorry I cannot change.
01:34:761 - I sugest spinner to this part
I dont think it needs a spinner here.. the big blue note is enough to show that it is an end.
ok
Thanks for mod~
@bossandy
I realized there is some small and good change in my diff. I accept those changes.
My point is: next time better ask the guest mapper first before doing these changes.
Although I dont mind, but in the future, I am sure there is some people very sensitive about that.

Just advice~ I hope you dont mind.
Download: Motoaki Furukawa - SWEET ANGEL (bossandy) [Steven's Taiko Oni].osu
[Luxord]
Hello there!

Extreme:
00:15:661
Add a circle, this part sounds better as stream in my opinion :3

Other modes are perfect :3 Good luck~

regards~
Jebok_old
Love your sliders, really nice and symmetrical ;)

Basic
01:07:961 (2) - Should be at the same Y axis as (1) or (5). Looks dodgy where it is now
01:34:361 (2,3) - Should be on the same X axis

Advanced
00:42:761 (3) - Should be at the same Y axis as (1), so that 1,2 and 3 (beginning) makes a triangle!

Extreme
00:07:961 (5) - This: 00:45:761 (2) - This: 01:26:361 (5,6) - Eww placing, place (5) x:204 and y:272. Place (6) x:192 and y:360 (Ys and Xs are below beat snap divisor)
Genkishi
Hello!!

  • [Basic]
  1. 01:02:761 (3) - 1 grid up on this slider

  • [Advance]
  1. 01:04:361 (1) - New cobmo here
  2. 01:04:961 (2) - Remove New combo
  • [Extreme]
    Try adding some snaps also on other diffs
Very good map! :)))
Kotone
hey boss

General
  1. soft-hitclap.wav聽上去雖然可以但到kiai的時候挺違和..? 這個如何 http://up.ppy.sh/files/clap2.wav
  2. 其他可以
Basic
  1. AR/OD可+1
00:41:961 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/oRqY

Advanced
00:33:961 (2,3) - 其他隔這么遠 這兩個body卻這么近不覺得很醜么...
00:53:561 (4,5,6) - 這...(5)曲一下..

Extreme
01:03:761 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+R如何
01:29:961 (2) - ...orz這不是屁股嗎

mod無能了
DJPop
- What is tag "No_Gu" ?


~Basic~
Fine

~Advance~
01:29:961 (1) - move down, shouldn't be overlapped with previous slider

~Extreme~
00:13:361 (2) - move to left blue tick [From here til 00:24:761 (3) , the pattern 2-2 is more fit to the music than 1-3]
01:33:161 (1,2) - move up, put (2) on the center of spinner
DJPop
Sorry for checking late :(


~Extreme~
- Let me guide you about 2-2 rhythm I mentioned
00:14:761 (1) - end on blue tick
00:18:061 - add note here
00:18:161 (2) - remove note on red tick
00:24:361 (1) - end on blue tick
DJPop
Looks good, bubble.
Shiirn
looks good
Kotone
好 說好的真相呢
spboxer3
gratz~
Derekku
Removed a bunch of illegit/duplicate kd from the thread. Please only give kudosu to mod posts (and ones that aren't only 1-2 lines at that...) in the future!
Poggo
Gratz <3
Beige
congratz!!! :) You're Good mapper
EmPao
恭喜~!
Loneight
老大!!恭喜!!! :)
路過突然看到
Akemi_Homura
gratz~! :3
kosiga
gratz :3

:) :)
Dino99
Gratz!!~~~~
AIR315
Congratz~
Nagae-Iku
gratz~ :3
Sure
恭喜 :D
Frostmourne
YEAH ! CONGRATZ BOSS ! :D
DarknessAngel
恭喜 ~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
恭喜~
No_Gu
=_=...
Megurine Luka
Sweet Andy
Topic Starter
bossandy

W h i t e wrote:

congratz!!! :) You're Good mapper
very thanks ~~:DD
Thanks~ Shiirn >w<
and thanks everyone ~~
Verdisphena
Hey, grats boss
Luna
Sorry for necroing this thread, but I was just wondering what the source for the BG is. Is it something "official" or user-made content?
Reason for asking is that I'm kinda confused by the name as it's written on the BG. The composer's name is Furukawa - which in kanji would be 古川. The BG however displays it as 吉川 which would be pronounced Yoshigawa or something similar (several possible readings for this, none of them being Furukawa). Since this irritated me a bit I googled his name and also only found sources for 古川 so now I'm confused about the origins of this BG :?
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