1. Hard (4,93 stars, 325 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 543 notes)
3. Normal (2,97 stars, 141 notes)
4. Taiko Oni (5 stars, 926 notes)

01:08 <autonom> : Hey Loli Cjj, can you mod my mod please?
01:08 *autonom is listening to (Adraen - Big Up Toronto)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36710]
01:08 <autonom> : mod my map*
01:17 <Loli_Cjj> : oo...kaaay...
01:17 <Loli_Cjj> : I'll post the result on the forum, okay?
01:31 <autonom> : ok thx

Source: lapfox trax
Tags: Renard Adraen the grey goo scenario

Autonom wrote:

that kudosu is for the SB

1. Preview Point - It is not unified >< ( Normal:40046 / Hard,Insane:-1) plz unify it in all diff
2. Song Setup - Source and Tags - It is not unified (Hard diff source:lapfox trax. tags:Renard Adraen the grey goo scenario / Normal,Insane diff source:notting. tags:lapfox trax Renard the grey goo scenario ) plz unify it in all diff

1. HD -1 (I think that it is too high)
2. 00:40:361 (1) - spacing too far (0.97x) plz use DS 0.9x and add finish instead to whistle to slider of the start ?
3. 00:44:291 (2) - spacing too far (0.98x) plz use DS 0.9x
4. 00:45:392 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider
5. 00:46:021 (2) - ^ and end of the slider
6. 00:46:807 (3) - spacing too far (1.06x) plz use DS 0.9x
7. 00:47:279 (1) - add whistle to start&end of the slider
8. 00:53:568 (1) - spacing too close (0.60x)
9. 00:57:342 (1) - ^ (0.58x)
10. 01:05:518 (3) - add NC
11. 01:13:065 (3) - ^
12. 01:39:523 (4) - add NC ?
13. 01:40:766 (1) - add finish instead to whistle to slider of the start ?
14. 01:48:317 (1) - this repeat slider is unrankable. repeat arrow is hidden with 01:47:058 (1) hitburst
15. 02:16:004 (1,2) - use DS1.0x. DS is just not good at changing this
16. 02:24:971 (2) - spacing too far (0.96x) plz use DS 0.9x
17. 02:26:072 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider
18. 02:26:702 (2) - ^ and end of the slider
19. 02:27:488 (3) - spacing too far (1.00x) plz use DS 0.9x
20. 02:27:960 (1) - add whistle to start&end of the slider
21. 02:34:253 (1) - spacing too close (0.60x)
22. 02:38:028 (1) - ^ (0.58x)
23. 02:41:175 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far (1.1x)
24. 02:49:984 (1) - not stack. this stack is difficult for beginners
25. 02:49:984 (1) - remove NC and 02:51:243 (2) - add NC
26. 02:52:501 (1) - remove NC and 02:55:018 (1) - remove NC
27. 02:56:277 (2) - add NC and 02:57:535 (1) - remove NC
28. 02:56:277 (2) - touch HP bar. This touches too much it. plz change it.
    
    rhythm that is difficult for a beginner

1. OD-2 ( OD8 is too high in hard diff and Please lower it from insane diff )
2. 00:40:361 (2) - add NC ( same Normal/Insane diff opening )
3. 00:52:782 (3) - spacing too close
4. 01:02:373 (4) - ^
5. 01:04:260 (1) - i think dose not match rhythm. slider end 01:04:574 is better
6. 01:08:977 (5) - spacing too close
7. 01:09:606 (2) - ^. I am confused in this
8. 01:11:021 (2) - spacing too close
9. 01:11:807 (5) - spacing too far
10. 01:40:469 - add note
11. 01:58:385 (1) - spacing too close
12. 02:27:803 (1) - ^
13. 02:33:466 (3) - ^
    
    Please clean more aligned with the DS

1. 00:43:033 (7) - spacing too close
2. 01:00:801 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:12:436 (7) - add NC ?
4. 01:13:065 (1) - spacing too far. I think that many people make a mistake here
5. 01:16:838 (4) - add NC and 01:17:310 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:40:469 - add note
7. 01:49:261 (4) - add NC
8. 02:29:376 (5) - add NC ?
9. 02:39:444 (5) - ^

1. fine. nice SB

1. you bg is 1024x718 this just unrank try size to 1024x768 then full submitt
   
2. you TAG inconsistency you Hard is "Renard the grey goo scenario", normal and insane are "lapfox trax Renard the grey goo scenario"
   you hard is different then is unrank pleasse make same all diff TAG
   
3. BPM red line are inconsistency only Insane the 00:05:140 BPM 190.800 is differente another diff because another diff are "00:05:141
   don't forget Resnapp all note

1. Go ai mod and you have 28 Unsnapped pleasse Resnapp all note
   
2. AR Need +1 and HP need -1 then is most better read IMO

1. 00:44:763 (1) - unless combo pleasse remove new combo
2. 00:48:851 (3) - Grid 1 left to make symentrick with 00:48:222 (2)
3. 00:50:424 (1) - I get 300 and is ugly overlaps with 00:50:738 (2,3) and bad read i mean this http://puu.sh/fu4p so try this http://puu.sh/fu4U or something you owm also carefully spacing
4. 00:54:826 (1) - Again unless combo pleasse remove new combo
5. 00:58:285 (2,3) - inconsistency spacing
6. 00:58:285 (2,3,4,5) - bad square symentric should be this http://puu.sh/fu8b or intentional? also carefully spacing
7. 01:03:002 (3,1) - inconsistency spacing
8. 02:12:700 (4,1) - I so sorry this part is too hard for this normal remap this part or something
9. 02:15:218 (4,1) - ^ same happened
10. 02:28:899 (2,3,4,5) - I can see my owm is bad square and bad symentric same happened 00:58:285 (2,3,4,5)
11. 02:25:440 (1) - unless combo pleasse remove new combo
12. 02:35:503 (1) - ^
13. 02:38:962 (2,3,4,5) - same happened 00:58:285 (2,3,4,5)

1. Again un-snapped go ai mod so pleasse resnapp all note
   
2. You OD is not fine is too catch hard try increasse http://puu.sh/fudC
   and HP -1

1. 00:48:065 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I Test this I feel is insane i really wanna stack http://puu.sh/fufA this should better gameplay if this diff is hard no insane IMO also if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:50:424 (1)
2. 01:14:637 (2) - try this change because this http://puu.sh/fugI is bad pleasse change shape
3. 01:45:170 (1,2,3) - too hard and confused I should change slider repeat like this http://puu.sh/fuhJ also if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:45:800 (1)
4. 01:50:204 (1,2,3) - same happened 01:45:170 (1,2,3)
5. 01:55:238 (1,2,3) - same happened 01:45:170 (1,2,3)
6. 02:28:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same happened 00:48:065 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)

1. First of all, open every diff in Notepad and fix SliderVelocity, then save it and press CTRL+L in editor. You don't need such numbers as 0.99999990463257, so just round them. Be careful, though done via IRC
2. Your timing is a lil bit wrong fixed by giving the right one via IRC

1. Well, I suggest decreasing SV down to 0.9x or 1x, fits more for Normal
2. 00:42:247 (1,2) - fix spacing
3. 00:44:763 (3) - you have useless red joint on its end (nothing serious, just a really smalllllll fix). Also, add clap to the end?
4. 00:45:392 (1) - the same. Try to follow rhythm with claps by putting them on the 2nd and 4th ticks, as they appear in music
5. 00:47:908 — add a note for more smooth gameplay. Then put new combo on it and remove NC from previous slider
6. 00:50:424 (1) - add finish
7. 00:51:524 (3) - start it 1/2 earlier? Sounds better, in my opinion
8. 00:50:738 (2) - add repeat? And yess, remove that red joint again, it doesn't do anything
9. 01:00:500 (1) - this slider is good.. in some ways. But I advice you to change its shape. Here are two ways:
   
   1. Curvy one. Example: http://puu.sh/fFlW
   2. Straight one which looks simpler: http://puu.sh/fFm7
   3. Mixed style. Something like this: http://puu.sh/fFmm
   Please, remember that all the elements of map should be combined well and make something solid. Avoid disbalance, such as overusing of straight lines, empty places, "notes only" zones.
   
   And yes, don't forget that every element is for playing, not just for looking at it. Sliders which have good, simple and comfortable shape are easier to play.
10. 01:01:757 (2) - the same as above. It'll be awesome if you use something like this (example only!): http://puu.sh/fFnE
11. 01:04:273 (1) - 1/2 longer?
12. 01:06:160 (2) - same, 1/2 longer please (sounds better for me, you may have a different opinion though)
13. 01:10:562 (1) - finish to beginning because it exists in music, yeah! Also, fix it a little, it looks like it's broken http://puu.sh/fFod
14. 01:13:707 (3) - this one is good
15. 01:30:704 (1) - remove clap from the end, it's noticeable that it doesn't exist in music and there are two claps surrounding it, so it sounds off
16. 01:35:737 (1) - the end is bad, it's too small
17. 01:39:511 (1) - add whistle to the end and remove new combo
18. 01:42:028 (1) - add clap to the end and remove new combo
19. 01:44:544 (1) - the same (both NC removing and adding a clap). I won't mention it anymore, check them until 01:50:678
20. 01:50:835 (1) - add finish to beginning
21. 02:00:586 — add note here with whistle and fix break delay after it (set it right on the big white tick)
22. 02:15:999 (1,2) - make these claps more quiet
23. 02:17:257 (2) - make it 1/2 longer
24. 02:22:927 (1,2) - I dunno, the next note&slider composition has another spacing. You better use the same distance anywhere
25. 02:27:960 (1) - remove NC, make it 1/1 longer for smoother gameplay or add a note on next white tick with NC on it
26. 02:31:106 (1) - add finish
27. 02:34:252 (1) - 1/2 longer, please
28. 02:36:769 (2) - whistle to the end
29. 02:41:173 (1) and all the sliders after it — aww, here we meet bad-looking sliders again. Well, I wrote how to fix moments like this one, so it's the time to do it

1. Increase approach rate by 1 point. The less objects player sees, the less chance of getting lost is
2. 00:40:361 (2) - add new combo to it and finish to beginning
3. 00:50:424 (1) - the same about finish
4. 01:00:500 (1) - remove clap
5. 01:01:128 (4) - kinda uncomfortable for playing. Slidertrack should be visible and clear, no shitty overlaps or putting beginning and end in the same point
6. 01:04:273 (1) - I don't like how does its end look. Move red joint close to beginning and rise that white one up to give slider the same length as before
7. 01:05:059 (3) - remove repeats, give player a little break! Also, don't forget to add note on big white tick, yeah
8. 01:09:619 (2) - looks ugly, sorry. Better change it
9. 01:11:034 (1) - remove NC
10. 01:19:367 (1) - add finish
    Uh, that was intense enough. Don't forget, it's 191 bpm, so you shouldn't spam notes all the way. Give people an extra second or half of it for rest, and you'll make them happy. Otherwise they will probably fail combo very soon, haha
11. 01:30:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use straight lines and angles less often, it looks not really cool for me if I see it almost everywhere.
    Also, I suggest to reduce spacing a little since it's "calm" part (not rly, of course, but it's slower than usual ones)
12. 01:35:422 (3) - add whistle to the end
13. 01:40:455 (12) - add new combo and whistle
    Ok, now I see copypasta. Please, use it less often and change elements or/and their position, so it will be less noticeable
14. 02:00:901 — drag break's beginning here
15. 02:12:224 (2) - NC should be here, not on previous element. Basically, it should be on new part in music (read "on big white ticks") or jumps on map; although there may be exceptions, such as pattern combo
16. 02:15:999 (1) - add clap
17. 02:21:040 (1) - add finish
18. 02:27:960 (2) - use slider here, not note. Slider fits better because of music, yea. In short, swap 02:27:960 (2,3)
19. 02:31:106 (1) - add finish
20. 02:34:410 (2) - its end overlaps next slider a little
21. 02:41:173 (1) - add finish or clap, but not both together
22. 02:46:207 (1) - add finish? and so on
23. 02:41:802 (3,1) - ah, I see you went lazy. It doesn't really fit music
24. 02:43:061 (3) - the same (won't mention it anymore)
25. 02:51:555 (1,2,3) - no. Don't spam finishes, remove all of them. You may use them on every second big white tick, then on every first.. get it?
26. 02:52:498 (1,2,3,4) - get rid of these claps. Keep rhythm constant (I mean, 2nd and 4th ticks)
27. Repeat these two things until the end of map, hehe.

1. 00:40:361 (1) - add finish to beginning. And yes, check all the finishes: if it exists in music, it should be in map
2. 01:00:408 (16) - remove it since it doesn't exist in music
3. 01:01:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - inaccurate stream shape D: Turn grid off while you make streams
4. 01:37:467 (2) - remove whistle from beginning
5. 01:40:455 (5) - add new combo and whistle
6. 01:40:770 (1) - bad idea. Don't be lazy, leave only one repeat and add other elements. Also, don't use clap here: 01:41:556 (that red tick)
7. 01:42:028 (4,1,2,3,4) - claps spam again. Don't do it, please
8. 01:45:409 (2) - kinda unexpected, there were no notes on blue ticks before it, so people will either miss here or get precious 50
9. 01:45:802 (1) - same about laziness
10. 01:52:093 (7) - add new combo here, not on next note, and change its shape to better one
11. 02:00:901 — drag break's beginning here
12. 02:19:773 (1) - clap?
13. 02:41:173 (1,2,3,5,1) and so on — oh no, too many claps again. Get rid of some of them
14. 02:51:869 (2) - end it 1/4 earlier
15. 02:53:128 (4) - ^ (also change its shape to normal one)
    Also, FINISH SPAM
16. 02:58:476 (8) - place its beginning right under the end of prev. slider using zero spacing
17. 03:00:049 (1) - I'm not sure if this finish fits here

General
Use bookmarks please. At least here: 00:40:046 - Nobody wants to listen 19% of the song. fixed

Normal
Overall Difficulty: +1 or +2 fixed

01:10:562 (1) - kinda ugly slider? especially this part: fixed

Claps sound too loud. Use 30-40% for claps. Especially for this part: 01:30:704 - fixed
And 50-60% for kiai.fixed
02:00:901 - Add Note. nope :/
02:10:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I didn't get whistles in this part. but okay changed
Random sliders, nice idea.
Good diff.

Hard
Overall Difficulty: +2 fixed

02:00:901 - Add note. nope :/
Same clap suggestion goes for this diff too.fixed
02:48:723 (1) - This one doesn't look good next to this 02:48:409 (4) - so Rotate (Ctrl + Shift + R) 02:48:723 (1,2) - by 45 and place like this maybe?:fixed
02:58:790 (1) - Use Finish like Normal diff.fixed

Insane
01:30:704 - No claps for this part? P: since i didn't map the musiclayer with the claps on it
oh god almost no claps here. Use theeeeeeeeeem
02:00:901 - Add note nope :/
And the second kiai has claps. hm. since i did map the musiclayer with the claps on it

Good patterns. Still needs more modding though. Good luck~

Normal at 02:00:938 maybe you can add new note in there

Hard and Insane at 02:00:979 same with normal