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Neo Cortex - I Want You (Nightcore Mix)
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Topic Starter
Topic Starter
Updated
Added another difficultie and changed the names
Added another difficultie and changed the names
General:
No need to change anything, but I think I've seen that BG in another ranked nightcore song somewhere.
Though there's no audio lead in, for some reason the song starts a couple seconds late, with a noticeable empty space. The delay is annoying, though probably not significant.
Soft Love:
00:08:660 (2) - I know this is an easy version and it's important to have notes not to close together in terms of timing, but it fits the song much better placed at 00:08:481.
True Love:
00:35:624- Add a circle
00:35:981- Add a circle
01:00:981- Add a circle
01:39:017 (1) - Confusingly close to (6), move farther away
Insane Love:
Too many streams! I'm just not a stream kind of person, so I can't really do much on this map =(
Nice, although I think a hard version, like 4.5 to 5 stars, would be good. I like the shooting star in the SB. Starred!
No need to change anything, but I think I've seen that BG in another ranked nightcore song somewhere.
Though there's no audio lead in, for some reason the song starts a couple seconds late, with a noticeable empty space. The delay is annoying, though probably not significant.
Soft Love:
00:08:660 (2) - I know this is an easy version and it's important to have notes not to close together in terms of timing, but it fits the song much better placed at 00:08:481.
True Love:
00:35:624- Add a circle
00:35:981- Add a circle
01:00:981- Add a circle
01:39:017 (1) - Confusingly close to (6), move farther away
Insane Love:
Too many streams! I'm just not a stream kind of person, so I can't really do much on this map =(
Nice, although I think a hard version, like 4.5 to 5 stars, would be good. I like the shooting star in the SB. Starred!
Topic Starter
Updated ~
General
- Keep preview times the same for all diffs!
- Set the audio lead-in to 2 for all diffs!
True Love
AR is waaaaaay too high. Set it to 4
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150
map is fine
~star~
- Keep preview times the same for all diffs!
- Set the audio lead-in to 2 for all diffs!
True Love
AR is waaaaaay too high. Set it to 4
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150
map is fine
~star~
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150 ~there is a skin why do you delete it? If you keep the skin you see the repeat perfectly.
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150 ~there is a skin why do you delete it? If you keep the skin you see the repeat perfectly.
Topic Starter
Thank'sWeezy wrote:
General
- Keep preview times the same for all diffs!
- Set the audio lead-in to 2 for all diffs! The SB is the "Lead-In"
True Love
AR is waaaaaay too high. Set it to 4 Kidding .___.? it's better for playing
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150
map is fine
~star~
Looks very nice, but:
Some things 'bout the insane one:
Some things 'bout the insane one:
- Decrese the life drain by 1.
01:00:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read in adition of skin and storyboard; maybe replace it a little bit, so it's not through the storyboards focus-glowing-area (no idea how to discribe that... lolz)
01:22:927 (7,8,9,1) - that row of sliders is not the best thing for me, but you have to decide it yourself either you change it or not
Hii there~
Soft Love:
0:11:517 - New combo
0:12:946 - Don't repeat, add a note and make a new combo 2/1 later instead.
0:14:374 - No new combo
0:21:517 - No new combo
0:22:946 - New combo
0:28:660 - Looks nice colourful, so new combo here?
0:31:517 - ^
0:45:803 - I think you should just repeat the slider and remove (1,2).
0:58:660 - new combo
1:00:088 - No new combo
1:01:517 - New combo
1:46:160 - Instead of repeating many times, why not just place a spinner?
True Love:
0:13:303 - New combo has got to be here because this is a new verse in the lyrics~
0:23:838 - The sequence would feel better if you'd add a note here.
0:28:660 - I think you should not make a different sequence than at 0:25:803 because this bit is not much different than the one at 0:25:803... You can also do it the other way around. Anyways, without this fix I think it feels weird~
0:35:803 - I think it is rather that this note is 1/4 erlier?
0:48:264 - I think the hole is too long. Insert break time.
1:04:731 - New combo here, not at 1:06:160 :<
1:07:588 - New combo here not at 1:09:017
1:19:374 (3,4,1,2) - Don't make them go over themselves... I heard that it is unrankable~
1:38:660 - New combo here not 1/1 later so that it is on the big white tick (the song is prefect 1/4 combo here so that is how it should be)
1:41:517 - ^
Soft Love:
0:11:517 - New combo
0:12:946 - Don't repeat, add a note and make a new combo 2/1 later instead.
0:14:374 - No new combo
0:21:517 - No new combo
0:22:946 - New combo
0:28:660 - Looks nice colourful, so new combo here?
0:31:517 - ^
0:45:803 - I think you should just repeat the slider and remove (1,2).
0:58:660 - new combo
1:00:088 - No new combo
1:01:517 - New combo
1:46:160 - Instead of repeating many times, why not just place a spinner?
True Love:
0:13:303 - New combo has got to be here because this is a new verse in the lyrics~
0:23:838 - The sequence would feel better if you'd add a note here.
0:28:660 - I think you should not make a different sequence than at 0:25:803 because this bit is not much different than the one at 0:25:803... You can also do it the other way around. Anyways, without this fix I think it feels weird~
0:35:803 - I think it is rather that this note is 1/4 erlier?
0:48:264 - I think the hole is too long. Insert break time.
1:04:731 - New combo here, not at 1:06:160 :<
1:07:588 - New combo here not at 1:09:017
1:19:374 (3,4,1,2) - Don't make them go over themselves... I heard that it is unrankable~
1:38:660 - New combo here not 1/1 later so that it is on the big white tick (the song is prefect 1/4 combo here so that is how it should be)
1:41:517 - ^
Topic Starter
Thanks for the good mod and the star *o*Hushu wrote:
Hii there~
Soft Love:
0:11:517 - New combo
0:12:946 - Don't repeat, add a note and make a new combo 2/1 later instead.
0:14:374 - No new combo
0:21:517 - No new combo
0:22:946 - New combo
0:28:660 - Looks nice colourful, so new combo here?
0:31:517 - ^
0:45:803 - I think you should just repeat the slider and remove (1,2). No D:
0:58:660 - new combo
1:00:088 - No new combo
1:01:517 - New combo
1:46:160 - Instead of repeating many times, why not just place a spinner?
True Love:
0:13:303 - New combo has got to be here because this is a new verse in the lyrics~
0:23:838 - The sequence would feel better if you'd add a note here.
0:28:660 - I think you should not make a different sequence than at 0:25:803 because this bit is not much different than the one at 0:25:803... You can also do it the other way around. Anyways, without this fix I think it feels weird~
0:35:803 - I think it is rather that this note is 1/4 erlier?
0:48:264 - I think the hole is too long. Insert break time.
1:04:731 - New combo here, not at 1:06:160 :<
1:07:588 - New combo here not at 1:09:017
1:19:374 (3,4,1,2) - Don't make them go over themselves... I heard that it is unrankable~
1:38:660 - New combo here not 1/1 later so that it is on the big white tick (the song is prefect 1/4 combo here so that is how it should be)
1:41:517 - ^
Fixed and updated
NO PLEASE NO
Topic Starter
What's wrong?
star :O great
[Color Legend]
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this!
[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one
[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps )
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803
01:24:731 - Map this break too
Everything seems fine for me here
[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break
01:11:160 - Add a beat?
01:24:731 - Map this break too
Everything seems fine for me here
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead
[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star
Sorry for the late check
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this!
[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one
[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps )
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803
01:24:731 - Map this break too
Everything seems fine for me here
[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break
01:11:160 - Add a beat?
01:24:731 - Map this break too
Everything seems fine for me here
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead
[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star
Sorry for the late check
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod ♥Kite wrote:
[Color Legend]
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this! Fixed
[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one Fixed
[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps ) Fixed
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803 Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x
Everything seems fine for me here
[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break No x.x
01:11:160 - Add a beat? Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x
Everything seems fine for me here
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead
[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star
Sorry for the late check
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe? ~no sry
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section? ~kay
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927 ~i want to keep it >~<
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3) ~something like this done ye
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998? ~kay
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead ~yup
thx Kite!
Download: Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Version) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe? ~no sry
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section? ~kay
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927 ~i want to keep it >~<
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3) ~something like this done ye
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998? ~kay
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead ~yup
thx Kite!
Download: Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Version) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
nice map*
staaaaaar
Title
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Hello there! All right, time for a mod :3
[Soft Love]
00:19:731 - add a note?
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:06:517 - maybe add a note here?
01:09:374 - ^
01:24:017 - ^
01:40:803 - Maybe shorten to 01:41:160 and add a note at 01:41:517?
01:41:160 - add a clap
[True Love]
Is this a normal or a hard?
00:36:517 - why add a break here? I feel as though you could've kept going...
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:03:838 - shorten it to the white tick and then add a note on that red tick?
01:06:517 - ^
01:09:553 - ^
I really like this diff
[Insane Love]
I love these patterns. Sadly I cannot mod insanes
[Soft Love]
00:19:731 - add a note?
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:06:517 - maybe add a note here?
01:09:374 - ^
01:24:017 - ^
01:40:803 - Maybe shorten to 01:41:160 and add a note at 01:41:517?
01:41:160 - add a clap
[True Love]
00:36:517 - why add a break here? I feel as though you could've kept going...
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:03:838 - shorten it to the white tick and then add a note on that red tick?
01:06:517 - ^
01:09:553 - ^
I really like this diff
[Insane Love]
I love these patterns. Sadly I cannot mod insanes
Topic Starter
Hmm.. yaLouis Cyphre wrote:
Title
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Folder, Skin
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars
Full submit after this fixes.
General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that...
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love.
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs.
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue?
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it
Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm
[SB 18+]
After 20sec I thought that pepole on bg are fucking xD
Really, a bit strange pulsations )))
Lennox
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?
True Love
00:01:517 (1,2,3) - 10% volume... Notes must be hearable +10% ?
00:13:303 (1,2,3) - imo, better
00:17:946 (1,2) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:32:946 (3) - spot of start : 00:32:767 , spot of end leave as is (1/2 longer)
01:03:839 (5) - add whistle to the end
01:06:696 (5) - ^
01:09:553 (5) - ^
01:12:053 - add note+finish or add reverse to (1) + finish
01:32:946 (1) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 01:34:374 (2,3,4,5) - try this (timiline) : 01:47:499 - kiai must be at white tick (1/4 later)
Soft Love
00:01:517 (1) - + 10% volume
00:04:374 (4,5) - try this : (timiline) : 00:36:874 (1,2,3,4) - claps everywhere. from here until 00:44:374
01:12:946 - kiai from white section, not blue
Star~
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars
Full submit after this fixes.
General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that...
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love.
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs.
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue?
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it
Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm
[SB 18+]
After 20sec I thought that pepole on bg are fucking xD
Really, a bit strange pulsations )))
Lennox
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?
True Love
00:01:517 (1,2,3) - 10% volume... Notes must be hearable +10% ?
00:13:303 (1,2,3) - imo, better
00:17:946 (1,2) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:32:946 (3) - spot of start : 00:32:767 , spot of end leave as is (1/2 longer)
01:03:839 (5) - add whistle to the end
01:06:696 (5) - ^
01:09:553 (5) - ^
01:12:053 - add note+finish or add reverse to (1) + finish
01:32:946 (1) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 01:34:374 (2,3,4,5) - try this (timiline) : 01:47:499 - kiai must be at white tick (1/4 later)
Soft Love
00:01:517 (1) - + 10% volume
00:04:374 (4,5) - try this : (timiline) : 00:36:874 (1,2,3,4) - claps everywhere. from here until 00:44:374
01:12:946 - kiai from white section, not blue
Star~
Topic Starter
Aleks719 wrote:
Folder, Skin
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them Fixed
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay Fixed
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768 No
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars - No
Full submit after this fixes.
General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that... Fixed
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love. It was already 2 ^^
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love Fixed
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs. There is the SB-Lead-In
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue? So important? - Don't think so^^
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly Fixed - Lennox chose it for his map
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it It is.. o.ô
Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm
[Lennox]
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?
All done, only the last point.
Download: Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
star~
@Lennox' Diff: Could you kind of re-order the part with the spacing-increasing tripplets? Like to let them all point to the mid or forming a great circle, since just tripple-stacks don't play that great, but that's a subjective suggestion (would look way better though).
Broetchen8441 wrote:
@Lennox' Diff: Could you kind of re-order the part with the spacing-increasing tripplets? Like to let them all point to the mid or forming a great circle, since just tripple-stacks don't play that great, but that's a subjective suggestion (would look way better though).
Yes i know... if i get the chance i will re-map the map.. it was a old map from mine so ehhh i don't know.
Edit:
yeah du hasn kudosu von mir xDD
so, ich bekomm jetzt was
so, ich bekomm jetzt was
Topic Starter
BounceBabe gives a kiss on Psycho's cheek ♥PsychoSkill wrote:
yeah du hasn kudosu von mir xDD
so, ich bekomm jetzt was
what a nice storyboard and map.
loving lennox's insane on this mapset!
have my star.
loving lennox's insane on this mapset!
have my star.
[Soft Love]
01:13:660 (2) - Move down 2 grids? (nazi)
01:16:517 (2) - Move left for 0.8 spacing
01:32:946 (1) - I think you should start this a half a beat earlier
[True Love]
There seems to be inconsistent spacing in a lot of places, I suggest using the same spacing for a normal difficulty.
00:13:303 (1,2) - One grid to the right (nazi)
-Nice difficulty overall
[Insane Love]
-You use more than 3 slider speeds which is unrankable
00:15:267 (1,2,3) - Stack these perfectly under each other
01:24:017 (2,3) - These are a little hard to see because of 01:23:392 (9). Maybe move some stuff around? It doesn't matter too much since this is an insane
-Very nice insane
Star and good luck with the map
01:13:660 (2) - Move down 2 grids? (nazi)
01:16:517 (2) - Move left for 0.8 spacing
01:32:946 (1) - I think you should start this a half a beat earlier
[True Love]
There seems to be inconsistent spacing in a lot of places, I suggest using the same spacing for a normal difficulty.
00:13:303 (1,2) - One grid to the right (nazi)
-Nice difficulty overall
[Insane Love]
-You use more than 3 slider speeds which is unrankable
00:15:267 (1,2,3) - Stack these perfectly under each other
01:24:017 (2,3) - These are a little hard to see because of 01:23:392 (9). Maybe move some stuff around? It doesn't matter too much since this is an insane
-Very nice insane
Star and good luck with the map
Hey there.
If you have any questions about my mod, let me know in-game.
Anyway, here's a star for all your hard work~
General
- Add "Trance" in the tags?
- I've seen this skin a couple of times before... Whose skin did you borrow from? you should probably credit the mapper who created this skin.
- You have two osb. files. Delete one of them.
Soft Love
- 00:20:088 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
- 00:21:517 (5)-^?
- 00:36:874 to 00:44:017-Add a couple of claps please. It would be great if you do. (:
- 00:50:088 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
- 01:04:731 (6)-Put a new combo here.
- 01:12:946 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
True Love
- The Overall Difficulty is a bit too low... Set the Overall Difficulty at 6?
- Set the HP Drain Rate by 6?
- 00:18:481 (2)-Move this 1/2 back. And shorten this by 1/2. Like this for example.
And don't forget to use the distance snap on it. I think it's best to do that because, it would sound better and play better. And add a whistle on the end? - 01:38:660 (1)-Add a finish?
- 01:41:517 (1)-^?
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- 00:06:517 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/3CFm It's unrankable to have a hitburst covering the reverse arrow, man. No matter which skin you're using, it's still unrankable. :/ Try a different type of mapping pattern.
- 00:12:588 (1, 1, 2)-O_o Did you really left this intentional or by mistake... If it was a mistake, please fix the timing points on slider 1 and fix the spacing a bit on notes 1 and 2.
- 01:01:517 (5)-Add a finish?
If you have any questions about my mod, let me know in-game.
Anyway, here's a star for all your hard work~
Jessi könntest du den mod fixxen? Ich weiß du machst das richtige, kann grad net wirklich in osu rein.
Hello~ Here's my modding :> (some suggestions)
(mods inside the spoilerbox)
Cute Map~ >w<
Have a star~
(mods inside the spoilerbox)
SPOILER
[Soft Love]
00:30:088 (2,3) - These hit circles' place are kind of irrelevant. Try fixing their formation.
01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (not so sure about this, but it looks a little irrelevant too.)
[True Love]
01:43:124 (5) - Try dragging this hit circle upwards. (As shown on this pic:)
01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (same with "Soft Love")
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
(looks fine
)
00:30:088 (2,3) - These hit circles' place are kind of irrelevant. Try fixing their formation.
01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (not so sure about this, but it looks a little irrelevant too.)
[True Love]
01:43:124 (5) - Try dragging this hit circle upwards. (As shown on this pic:)
01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (same with "Soft Love")
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
(looks fine
)Cute Map~ >w<
Have a star~
[General]
Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.
[Soft Love]
00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.
[True Love]
00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck
Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.
[Soft Love]
00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.
[True Love]
00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck
Shohei Ohtani
Insane:
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enough
Hard:
00:58:660 (1) - It's generally a bad idea to have a slider with many repeats. It looks lazy and it doesn't play that well ;~;. Do something sexier, please ;D.
Easy:
01:46:160 (1) - Same as hard~.
uguu buugu.
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enough
Hard:
00:58:660 (1) - It's generally a bad idea to have a slider with many repeats. It looks lazy and it doesn't play that well ;~;. Do something sexier, please ;D.
Easy:
01:46:160 (1) - Same as hard~.
uguu buugu.
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]blahblah
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
Edit: (ninja CDFA)
Insane:
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enough
Download: Neo Cortex - I Want You (Nightcore Mix) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
Topic Starter
Fixed and updated ♥osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.
[Soft Love]
00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.
[True Love]
00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck