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Topic Starter
[hard]
0:10:132 (2) spacing, try x:259, y:120
0:22:513 (4) symmetrical - left 1 grid?
0:30:846 (1) down 1 grid
0:31:798 (4,5) follow stream spacing
0:53:108 (8,9) ^
0:58:703 (!5) up 1 grid?
1:31:798 (16,1) follow stream spacing
1:35:489 (18,1) ^
1:43:227 (8) finish
1:45:132 (1) finish
[normal]
0:14:536 (3,4,5) arrangement too hard for normal?
1:20~1:28 those 1/2 on blue ticks are offbeat, all 1/4 backward
1:33:584 (2) left 1 grid
nice trial and nice song, star~
0:10:132 (2) spacing, try x:259, y:120
0:22:513 (4) symmetrical - left 1 grid?
0:30:846 (1) down 1 grid
0:31:798 (4,5) follow stream spacing
0:53:108 (8,9) ^
0:58:703 (!5) up 1 grid?
1:31:798 (16,1) follow stream spacing
1:35:489 (18,1) ^
1:43:227 (8) finish
1:45:132 (1) finish
[normal]
0:14:536 (3,4,5) arrangement too hard for normal?
1:20~1:28 those 1/2 on blue ticks are offbeat, all 1/4 backward
1:33:584 (2) left 1 grid
nice trial and nice song, star~
Topic Starter
1:20~1:28 those 1/2 on blue ticks are offbeat, all 1/4 backward << was meant to be like it
for others, thank you! all done!
for others, thank you! all done!
wmfchris wrote:
[hard]
0:10:132 (2) spacing, try x:259, y:120
0:22:513 (4) symmetrical - left 1 grid?
0:30:846 (1) down 1 grid
0:31:798 (4,5) follow stream spacing
0:53:108 (8,9) ^
0:58:703 (!5) up 1 grid?
1:31:798 (16,1) follow stream spacing
1:35:489 (18,1) ^
1:43:227 (8) finish
1:45:132 (1) finish
[normal]
0:14:536 (3,4,5) arrangement too hard for normal?
1:20~1:28 those 1/2 on blue ticks are offbeat, all 1/4 backward
1:33:584 (2) left 1 grid
nice trial and nice song, star~
General
Aritst: Ryo Yoshimata
Background should be 1024*768 or 800*600,but your background is 480*363, find new one?
Delete .osb file
then full sub.
Easy
lend-in 0
add hitsound please OTZ
00:15:608(2) - spacing
00:17:513(3,1) - separate them
00:26:084(2) - spacing
00:29:655(1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard for easy diff, use slider to supersede them
00:33:465(2,3,4) - ^ & spacing
00:34:655(4) - 1 grid down?
00:37:274(2,3,4) - use slider to supersede them
00:37:989(5) - spacing
00:43:108(2) - the arrowhead should be downward
00:47:513(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:00:370(3,4) - ^
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
01:05:132 - 1.5x unrank,check please
01:25:132(1,2,3) - spacing,hard for easy diff
01:32:513(1,2,3,1,2,3) - use slider to supersede them
Normal
lend-in 0
This is Hard Diff
add hitsound please OTZ x2
00:40:370(3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
Hard
lend-in 0
This is Insane Diff
Slider tick rate:2
add hitsound please OTZ x3
very crazy
00:20:727(13) - little spacing
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
01:42:513(5) - more far please
01:43:465 - Delete Break
nice song
Aritst: Ryo Yoshimata
Background should be 1024*768 or 800*600,but your background is 480*363, find new one?
Delete .osb file
then full sub.
Easy
lend-in 0
add hitsound please OTZ
00:15:608(2) - spacing
00:17:513(3,1) - separate them
00:26:084(2) - spacing
00:29:655(1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard for easy diff, use slider to supersede them
00:33:465(2,3,4) - ^ & spacing
00:34:655(4) - 1 grid down?
00:37:274(2,3,4) - use slider to supersede them
00:37:989(5) - spacing
00:43:108(2) - the arrowhead should be downward
00:47:513(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:00:370(3,4) - ^
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
01:05:132 - 1.5x unrank,check please
01:25:132(1,2,3) - spacing,hard for easy diff
01:32:513(1,2,3,1,2,3) - use slider to supersede them
Normal
lend-in 0
This is Hard Diff
add hitsound please OTZ x2
00:40:370(3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
Hard
lend-in 0
This is Insane Diff
Slider tick rate:2
add hitsound please OTZ x3
very crazy
00:20:727(13) - little spacing
01:03:227(1) - shorten to 01:03:108
01:42:513(5) - more far please
01:43:465 - Delete Break
nice song
Nice map so far, but the placing of circles etc. must be improved. You should also use hitsounds, that's why I added a file, it contains the Hard dif with an example of how you could use hitsounds there. Put the file into your song folder (File -> Open Song Folder)
Here my other suggestions for Hard:
Hard
In my opinion, way to many parts where you didn't use distance spacing
You have a lot of overlapping in your map, it isn't bad in general, but I think in the following cases, you should think about something else
00:03:227 (3,4) - slider overlaps circle, doesn't look so nice
00:07:989 (5,7) - slider overlaps circle
00:07:989 (5,7) - slider overlaps slider
00:18:346 (2,3) - circle overlaps slider
00:20:132 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - i would put it more to the top
00:42:274 (1) - doesn't look so nice there
00:44:179 (6) - doesn't look so nice there
00:44:179 (6) - ^
00:53:227 (9) - same time, same spacing... move it up
01:01:322 (1) - you should make this spinner noisless <3 (can see it in the added file)
01:24:417 (3,4,5,6) - overlapping
I hope this coold help you :3
Download: Ryo Yoshitama - Resolver (haha5957) [Hard Mod].osu
Here my other suggestions for Hard:
Hard
In my opinion, way to many parts where you didn't use distance spacing
You have a lot of overlapping in your map, it isn't bad in general, but I think in the following cases, you should think about something else
00:03:227 (3,4) - slider overlaps circle, doesn't look so nice
00:07:989 (5,7) - slider overlaps circle
00:07:989 (5,7) - slider overlaps slider
00:18:346 (2,3) - circle overlaps slider
00:20:132 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - i would put it more to the top
00:42:274 (1) - doesn't look so nice there
00:44:179 (6) - doesn't look so nice there
00:44:179 (6) - ^
00:53:227 (9) - same time, same spacing... move it up
01:01:322 (1) - you should make this spinner noisless <3 (can see it in the added file)
01:24:417 (3,4,5,6) - overlapping
I hope this coold help you :3
Download: Ryo Yoshitama - Resolver (haha5957) [Hard Mod].osu
Topic Starter
MoonShade & karenying // thank you!
fixed most of them!
it helped alot!
fixed most of them!
it helped alot!
Hi.
Only suggestions.
~Easy~
00:17:513 : add finish
00:25:132 : finish . D:
00:38:465 (1,2,3) : finish
00:42:274 : remove new combo :S
00:42:989 : add new combo
01:00:846 : fix the spacing.
01:20:370 : finish.
01:25:132 (1,2,3) : fix the spacing PLZ.
~Normal~
rename to "Hard"
00:21:322 : remove new combo.
00:22:274 : add new combo
01:20:846 (2) : back one repition
01:21:441 (3,4,5,6) : back one places.
01:22:751 (2) : same as 01:20:846
01:23:346 (3,4,5,6) : same as 01:21:441
01:25:251 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:27:155 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:30:846 : new combo
~Hard~
rename to "Insane"
Very Fine diffie. awesome
STARRED FOR DEDICATION
GOOD LUCK.
Only suggestions.
~Easy~
00:17:513 : add finish
00:25:132 : finish . D:
00:38:465 (1,2,3) : finish
00:42:274 : remove new combo :S
00:42:989 : add new combo
01:00:846 : fix the spacing.
01:20:370 : finish.
01:25:132 (1,2,3) : fix the spacing PLZ.
~Normal~
rename to "Hard"
00:21:322 : remove new combo.
00:22:274 : add new combo
01:20:846 (2) : back one repition
01:21:441 (3,4,5,6) : back one places.
01:22:751 (2) : same as 01:20:846
01:23:346 (3,4,5,6) : same as 01:21:441
01:25:251 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:27:155 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:30:846 : new combo
~Hard~
rename to "Insane"
Very Fine diffie. awesome
STARRED FOR DEDICATION
GOOD LUCK.
Topic Starter
Normal => Hard
Hard => Insane
Easy
Fixed most of suggestions
Hard
note approach speed quicken
fixed most of suggestions
Insane
added some notes (star rating 4.98 => 4.99, note 336 => 348)
Thanks a lot!
Hard => Insane
Easy
Fixed most of suggestions
Hard
note approach speed quicken
fixed most of suggestions
Insane
added some notes (star rating 4.98 => 4.99, note 336 => 348)
Thanks a lot!
Revengexsoyah wrote:
Hi.
Only suggestions.
~Easy~
00:17:513 : add finish
00:25:132 : finish . D:
00:38:465 (1,2,3) : finish
00:42:274 : remove new combo :S
00:42:989 : add new combo
01:00:846 : fix the spacing.
01:20:370 : finish.
01:25:132 (1,2,3) : fix the spacing PLZ.
~Normal~
rename to "Hard"
00:21:322 : remove new combo.
00:22:274 : add new combo
01:20:846 (2) : back one repition
01:21:441 (3,4,5,6) : back one places.
01:22:751 (2) : same as 01:20:846
01:23:346 (3,4,5,6) : same as 01:21:441
01:25:251 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:27:155 (1,2,3,4) : back one place
01:30:846 : new combo
~Hard~
rename to "Insane"
Very Fine diffie. awesome
STARRED FOR DEDICATION
GOOD LUCK.
General
- The BG quality is too low, try to get something better?
- Remove "Ryo Yoshimata" and "Resolver" of tags , It's already included in the title
- Preview Point must be the same for all the diffs.
- 00:05:132 (4) - Move it 1 grid down to align it.
- 00:09:417 (5,1) - Fix Spacing.
- 00:16:560 (3,1) - ^
- 00:25:132 (1) - ^ , the circle is too close.
- 00:34:179 (5) - ^
- 00:29:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These patterns are too hard for easy, delete 00:29:774 (2) & 00:30:727 (5)
- Go trough the diff with Distance Snapping enabled and make sure everything is correctly spaced.
- 01:14:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too messy move some circles away
- 01:41:322 (1) - This slider is a bit confusing.
- Go trough the diff with Distance Snapping enabled and make sure everything is correctly spaced.
- Oh fine.
Easy
00:29:655 1,2,3 Why not use sliders instead?
00:30:608 4,5,6 ^
00:33:465 2,3,4 ^
00:37:274 2,3,4 ^
00:47:513 1,2 isn't the jump abit too hard for an easy map?
01:22:274 3 not stacked properly.
01:32:513 1,2,3 Same as 00:29:655
01:33:465 1,2,3 ^
Some suggestions
I'm not really a modder so feel free to disregard my suggestions
I came here to give you a Star.
00:29:655 1,2,3 Why not use sliders instead?
00:30:608 4,5,6 ^
00:33:465 2,3,4 ^
00:37:274 2,3,4 ^
00:47:513 1,2 isn't the jump abit too hard for an easy map?
01:22:274 3 not stacked properly.
01:32:513 1,2,3 Same as 00:29:655
01:33:465 1,2,3 ^
Some suggestions
I'm not really a modder so feel free to disregard my suggestions
I came here to give you a Star.
Topic Starter
Thx!
Saten-san wrote:
Easy
00:29:655 1,2,3 Why not use sliders instead? It gets 'too' easy.00:30:608 4,5,6 ^ ^
00:33:465 2,3,4 ^ ^
00:37:274 2,3,4 ^ ^
00:47:513 1,2 isn't the jump abit too hard for an easy map? I think so! It's the only hard part in easy diff..!01:22:274 3 not stacked properly. Fixed
01:32:513 1,2,3 Same as 00:29:655
01:33:465 1,2,3 ^
Some suggestions
I'm not really a modder so feel free to disregard my suggestions
I came here to give you a Star.
Topic Starter
Thx! Fixed most of them
Gonzvlo wrote:
GeneralEasy
- The BG quality is too low, try to get something better?
- Remove "Ryo Yoshimata" and "Resolver" of tags , It's already included in the title
- Preview Point must be the same for all the diffs.
Hard
- 00:05:132 (4) - Move it 1 grid down to align it.
- 00:09:417 (5,1) - Fix Spacing.
- 00:16:560 (3,1) - ^
- 00:25:132 (1) - ^ , the circle is too close.
- 00:34:179 (5) - ^
- 00:29:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These patterns are too hard for easy, delete 00:29:774 (2) & 00:30:727 (5)
- Go trough the diff with Distance Snapping enabled and make sure everything is correctly spaced.
Insane
- 01:14:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too messy move some circles away
- 01:41:322 (1) - This slider is a bit confusing.
- Go trough the diff with Distance Snapping enabled and make sure everything is correctly spaced.
Needs a little work but ok.
- Oh fine.
[Easy]
O....kay, why is the entire map on claps? This really sounds annoying.
Try putting a clap every 2 white ticks, instead of on every single beat.
Also, try never to put 1/4 streams on an Easy. They are much too hard for beginners. Remove every beat that's on a blue tick.
[Hard]
00:02:275 - 00:17:036 - Good use of claps. Follow this style for Easy.
00:45:846 (2,3,4) - Sounds weird. make the claps on 2 and 4 instead to follow the previous beats.
00:48:703 (3,4,5) - ^
00:50:608 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:513 (6,7,8) - ^
00:54:417 (2,3,4) - ^
[Insane]
00:53:703 (10) - New combo
00:57:513 (8) - ^
01:34:655 (12) - ^
01:36:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - TOO MANY CLAPS.
O....kay, why is the entire map on claps? This really sounds annoying.
Try putting a clap every 2 white ticks, instead of on every single beat.
Also, try never to put 1/4 streams on an Easy. They are much too hard for beginners. Remove every beat that's on a blue tick.
[Hard]
00:02:275 - 00:17:036 - Good use of claps. Follow this style for Easy.
00:45:846 (2,3,4) - Sounds weird. make the claps on 2 and 4 instead to follow the previous beats.
00:48:703 (3,4,5) - ^
00:50:608 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:513 (6,7,8) - ^
00:54:417 (2,3,4) - ^
[Insane]
00:53:703 (10) - New combo
00:57:513 (8) - ^
01:34:655 (12) - ^
01:36:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - TOO MANY CLAPS.
Hiiiii :3
[General]
I remind you this is a mod4mod, and the map i asked you to mod was: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21894
Seems okay, but why that low definition of a Background and it's me or there are a lot of claps? D:
[Easy]
THE SPACING IS INCORRECT CHECK IT ;W;
00:17:513 (1) - This is confusioning, try move it distant from the precedent slider.
00:22:274 (4) - Following your pattern, this should be New Combo.
00:33:465 (2,3,4) - Streams are not allowed on Easy, if i don't get it wrong.
00:37:274 (2,3,4) - ^.
00:42:989 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:132 (2) - New Combo.
01:32:513 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here we go again with streams.
[Hard]
00:17:513 (1) - This could be sudden to make it at 2x, maybe a litle advice during map should makle it okay.
Fun!
[General]
I remind you this is a mod4mod, and the map i asked you to mod was: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21894
Seems okay, but why that low definition of a Background and it's me or there are a lot of claps? D:
[Easy]
THE SPACING IS INCORRECT CHECK IT ;W;
00:17:513 (1) - This is confusioning, try move it distant from the precedent slider.
00:22:274 (4) - Following your pattern, this should be New Combo.
00:33:465 (2,3,4) - Streams are not allowed on Easy, if i don't get it wrong.
00:37:274 (2,3,4) - ^.
00:42:989 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:132 (2) - New Combo.
01:32:513 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here we go again with streams.
[Hard]
00:17:513 (1) - This could be sudden to make it at 2x, maybe a litle advice during map should makle it okay.
Fun!
Hi sorry for the late reply
My mod is pretty much the same as Mok
Can you search for a better resolution BG?
Please take a look at Easy diff, there so many spacing inconsistency. You should used a same spacing on easy, use Ctrl+Shift+A to see them
[Insane]
01:29:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make them all into the same spacing
This is a nice map but still need more polishing
star
My mod is pretty much the same as Mok
Can you search for a better resolution BG?
Please take a look at Easy diff, there so many spacing inconsistency. You should used a same spacing on easy, use Ctrl+Shift+A to see them
[Insane]
01:29:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make them all into the same spacing
This is a nice map but still need more polishing
star
Hard:
00:35:370 (2,3,4) - streams like these have constant changing spacing. thats not a good idea.
01:15:489 (3,4,5,6) - this is confusing.
Insane:
00:15:608 (1,2,3,4) - fix these by deleting sliders 2,3,4 and do a rotational of 90 degrees of the first slider to make them even.
00:49:894: start new combo here
00:53:703: new combo here
00:57:513: new combo here
01:10:846: new combo here
01:14:655: new combo here
01:16:560 (1,2,3,4) - fix these by deleting sliders 2,3,4 and do a rotational of 90 degrees of the first slider to make them even.
01:35:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this random note placement is unrankable.
00:35:370 (2,3,4) - streams like these have constant changing spacing. thats not a good idea.
01:15:489 (3,4,5,6) - this is confusing.
Insane:
00:15:608 (1,2,3,4) - fix these by deleting sliders 2,3,4 and do a rotational of 90 degrees of the first slider to make them even.
00:49:894: start new combo here
00:53:703: new combo here
00:57:513: new combo here
01:10:846: new combo here
01:14:655: new combo here
01:16:560 (1,2,3,4) - fix these by deleting sliders 2,3,4 and do a rotational of 90 degrees of the first slider to make them even.
01:35:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this random note placement is unrankable.
Topic Starter
Thanks to everyone
and those who asked for mod4mod, I am sorry for my late mod, but maybe you have to wait more cuz test is coming..
Sorry! But near sometime, I sure will mod yours
New background Image (much better resolution)
Easy Difficulty Removed =>
Normal Difficulty Added. (and I'm preety sure that most of suggestions for easy are in Normal difficulty)
Hard - Slider Velosity Quicken, most of suggestions are done
Insane - most of suggestions are done
and those who asked for mod4mod, I am sorry for my late mod, but maybe you have to wait more cuz test is coming..
Sorry! But near sometime, I sure will mod yours
New background Image (much better resolution)
Easy Difficulty Removed =>
Normal Difficulty Added. (and I'm preety sure that most of suggestions for easy are in Normal difficulty)
Hard - Slider Velosity Quicken, most of suggestions are done
Insane - most of suggestions are done