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ZUN - Song of the Night Sparrow ~ Night Bird

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Lucy_Heartfilia_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月15日 at 19:38:48

Artist: ZUN
Title: Song of the Night Sparrow ~ Night Bird
Source: Touhou
Tags: Eiyashou Imperishable Night Mystia Lorelei
BPM: 165.05
Filesize: 3879kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.01 stars, 129 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 418 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 606 notes)
  4. Normal (4.39 stars, 238 notes)
Download: ZUN - Song of the Night Sparrow ~ Night Bird
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Touhou.the BGM come from Mission 2
Thank you for all mod.
Normal = deepsea + kissfly
upload → graveyard → resurrect → graveyard → resurrect → ?
ZLOdeuka-
[ G E N E R A L ](×̯×)

look ctrl+shift+a

circumcise MP3 file

make the sound quieter to 80% You can even up to 70...

[ E A S Y ](×̯×)

song setup ~ difficulty ~ HP -1 ~ Approach Rate -1 ~ Overall difficulty -1

In your place I would have pulled down the whole easy and made from scratch, it's difficult...

(†) Kiai-time finish here 02:03:197

after the start here 02:15:190 and finish here 02:26:819 (†)

(×̯×)[ N O R M A L ](×̯×)

kiai-time the same as in easy.

NORMAL is not it ... it is difficult....

[ H A R D ] and [ L U N A T I C ]

oh..

kiai-time ^^^^^
wmfchris
2. Don't put the download link here but beatmap thread / scoring page instead.
Anyway I'm now going to mod this

-general : kiai too long, end kiai after the playtime finishes

[lunatic]
-the claps in 1/4 is too loud? Try to lower the hitsound
1:57:746 (1~12,1~4) (1,3,5,7,1,3) and (2,4,6,8,2,4) should form a stright line respectively.

A nice trial with no obvious spacing error, but there're not enough patterns, the 1/4 5-plets appear too often and sometime they don't suit the music~ try to learn from others maps~
James2250
-Looking at the star system, Easy should be below 3 stars and Normal should be below 4 stars
-The maximum allowed size for a background is 1024x768 (yours is 1600x1200), resize it
-Every difficulty needs a previous point (plays 10 seconds into the song), under timing
-Delete osb file in folder
-Put Touhou in the source
-Countdown doesn't really fit
-End kiai time at the end of the spinner
-Cut the mp3
-165.05 BPM seems to work more (don't forget to resnap all notes)

Easy:
At the moment this is a hard Normal, need to change that
Don't really like having kiai time during a break
00:15:263 (4,5,6) - avoid triplets on easy (that goes for all of them)
01:03:597 (1,1) - don't have notes so close to the end of spinners (on easy)
Although there isn't much technically wrong it is so repetitive, try and make some interesting patterns and more than just notes every white tick
For an Easy it has too many notes 1 after the other with no breaks, a beginner can't keep playing for so long. Try and remove some notes

Normal:
Again too hard, make circles 1 size bigger and make it closer to 3.7 stars or lower if possible
Although a few is ok, too many triplets for a Normal
00:18:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't have spacing like this
00:36:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - make sure spacing stays equal
01:00:690 (1) - don't have spinner this short (in a Normal) especially with notes right after them
01:05:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - stuff like this fits a Hard more
01:49:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - good for Hard~

Hard:
Make BPM same as others
This is fine for a Hard
Nicer patterns~
I would expect Hard to have a lower slider velocity than Lunatic
00:23:627 (2,3) - don't stack these, the slider is hidden
01:03:787 (3,4,5,6,7) - odd spacing
01:26:320 (1) - don't start on blue tick
01:28:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - add hitosunds
02:15:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) and on - slight overuse of claps

Lunatic:
Make sure all parts have hitsounds
Again too many claps at the end

Once you fix Easy/Normal this will be a pretty nice map set
*star*
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

- Background image is 1600x1200...Resize it to 1024x768
- Set a Preview Point for all difficulties
- Use custom colors...Something that goes with the BG
- Source...Just put Touhou...
- 02:26:828 Put an inheriting timing section here (without kiai time on)
- Your Hitsound placements...Are loud and annoying...Try fixing around to get a better sound out of them (or ask some one for a hitsound mod)

[Easy]
This difficulty should be less than 3 stars
01:19:224 (4) - extend this slider to end at 01:19:587 (removing 5)
01:22:131 (4) - ^ do the same thing here
02:00:653 (1) - very weird and ugly slider...Fix this up
Break in Kiai Time...Doesnt look to good...You might as well end Kiai time before the break...And start it again, after the break

[Normal]
Use Large Circle Size
This difficulty is too hard...Lower this to about 3.25-3.75
00:46:335 (9) - remove clap
Just fix around and make it easier...

[Hard]
Use the same BPM as all the other diffs...Makes things easier...
375 UNSNAPPED NOTES!!! Fix those!
Use 1.60 Slider Velocity...So its not the same as Lunatic (will cause remapping)

[Lunatic]
02:01:744 (6) - move back 1 tick so its on the blue tick
02:24:457 - This stream...Is a little too much...Mix in some sliders and notes..

Overall
It seems like a decent map...Just needs to be fixed around a lot more...But its on its way...(I'd get someone to do a Sound Mod for you...It will help...)

~STAR
Hades_U
这张图打过之后觉得不错,节奏应该没有什么问题,音乐我也很喜欢,绝对值得一玩
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
I have improve my song.AI mod think OK.difficult is change.the only problem of this song is hitsound may be.
Thank you for your help.i have given your kosu.
sweet870107
作的很好XD

會做圖的都是強人(點頭
Goingdown_Log
节奏感很给力啊...不是很高不可攀的样子....
Nekomura Iroha
虽然个别地方不喜欢 还是给星吧~

辛苦了:D
belolian
不错的图,特来加星

mapper加油哦( ̄ 3 ̄)y-~~~
xyj909
还不错`-.-
barlowlsj

kissfly wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月29日 at 16:19:14

Artist: ZUN
Title: Night Bird
Source: th08
Tags: Touhou
BPM: 165.05
Filesize: 4112kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.92 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 425 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 547 notes)
  4. Normal+ (4.24 stars, 213 notes)
Download: ZUN - Night Bird
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Touhou.th08,the BGM come from Mission 2.
Thanks for ZLOdeuka、wmfchris、James2250、Zetsubou Sensei's suggestions.
Charles445
Wow, this is really good!

As for the map, I'm having better luck with the offset on 7278.
*star*
Cirno
pretty nice map... star (被推销... >.>
感觉hard在00:09:731 00:12:640 00:18:456这类的地方好像缺点声响...?

BPM = 165.000 (acquired from the original MIDI file of th08

resnap if you use this BPM
Becca
I like it!

It's rlly fun :)
cmn_891127
very nice map~~
MSR-00100S
tye to use some different rhythm and styles, anyway star

fight
Amitiel_S
nice!! I can't find anywhere for change :)
lllllllllllllll_old_1
还是感觉hard过于送分,o(╯□╰)o
Mizu_banned
Zuuuuun <3
(:
Star~
Kotone
change title : Song of the Night Sparrow ~ Night Bird
明天mod
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
-,- 换标题的话的悲剧了。不是=重新上传一首歌了吗?
Kotone

kissfly wrote:

-,- 换标题的话的悲剧了。不是=重新上传一首歌了吗?
有方法的。
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
恩,我去想办法改了标题,中文那段忘记翻译了-,-
这图BAT可以通过吗?
感觉就LUNATIC单调了些,别的没什么问题。我从来没RANK过,一下子做不出很触的图应该也可以理解的把-,-
Joon
hi

my modding

[General]
Preview Point unified. all diff

[Easy]
00:53:809 (1) - chnage finish
00:54:536 (3) - remove whistle
01:51:973 (1) - add finish
01:57:789 (1) - Start Notes remove clap
01:58:880 (2) - remove clap
01:59:607 (4) - ^
02:02:515 (3) - add clap

[Normal+]
01:16:347 (2) - u can use Soft Audio?
02:00:334 (2) - add clap
02:00:698 (3) - remove whistle
02:01:061 (4) - add clap
02:03:969 (2,4,6) - add clap
02:06:878 (2,4,6) - ^
02:12:331 (1) - remove New combo
02:12:694 (2) - remove Notes
02:13:058 (1) - 02:12:694 Start here
02:21:782 (3) - fix snap
02:21:055 (1,2,3,4) - End Notes remove clap
02:24:690 (1) - chnage finish

[Hard]
02:19:238 (1) - add clap
02:19:965 (5) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:46:357 (6) - remove clap

hmm...used a lot of clap ... it reduced... :(

+star
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
hitsound have been improved OK,and improve Lunatic's partern and difficult.Thank you for your all suggestions.
appppppple_old
GJ
Musty
Visual Mod :p

Offset : 1 461

[Normal+]

Approach Rate : +1

[Hard]

HP Drain Rate : +1
Circle Size : +1

[Insane]

Fine.

Good Map

Star~
IceBeam
Preview Point doesn't seem well.
Choose 00:18:819 or where first Kiai starts,or anything else.

Somehow I feel like offset is late.
00:46:357 (7) - Yeah,it follows a piano note,but it's out of the rhytm.Really out,please move it back to 00:46:175.However,it still sounds a bit laggy.Maybe you have to save a note here and just add additional to 00:46:175.Well,try to work out this pattern.
01:10:531 (4) - Fix distance.It's too close.
01:34:524 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern isn't filled with hitsounds.Add claps to (2)-(4) at least.

[Normal+]
01:39:613 (1) - This spinner is a bit short,I'd like you to remove it.

[Hard]
00:24:000 (3) - Completely stacked sliders are unrankable,fix this.
01:36:160 (1) - Increase distance.

[Lunatic]
Jumps make no sense to me,I'm sorry,I think it's overmapped.

Star~
Lunaba
~Overall~
  1. Maybe you should put not THAT vivid combo colors. At least they look harsh :
  2. The source is...uh, nvm.
  3. Offset: 1470 (I had 0ms overall with this on Hard)
  4. 02:26:860 - Eh, what's the section? Remove it '-'
  5. 01:28:707 - 01:39:976 - I suggest you change to Soft Sound Set here. Normal set sound too loud and rude. :
~Easy~
  1. 00:44:721 (5,6,7) - Oh c'mon, don't confuse people. Make spacing as it should be.
  2. 01:06:169 (2,1) - Little spacing mistake. You should keep it constant on easier difficulties..i think.
  3. 01:06:896 (1) - Move new combo to (2)
  4. 01:12:712 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:25:072 (4) - Clap here.
  6. 02:00:334 (6) - Remove whistle.
~Normal~
  1. 00:14:912 (6) - New combo. (Ow, u lost suck a pattern :( )
  2. 00:16:002 (1) - Maybe you should it like this?
  3. 00:17:093 (2) - Don't forget to replace it if you'll do -^
  4. 00:44:721 (5) - Put whistle on (4) instead.
~Hard~
  1. 00:17:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Any claps here? :(
  2. 00:24:008 (3) - Ow-ow, hidden reverse arrow, unrankable.
  3. 01:29:443 (5) - Make it 1/4 longer.
  4. 01:32:351 (5) - ^
  5. 01:35:259 (3) - ^
  6. 01:38:167 (5) - ^
Insane is full of Clap Spam D: But overall, map is nice.

<3~
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
I have improved this map from IceBeam to Lunaba's suggestions.Thank you.
lovhin456
Hi ~

Info of the Song;
- Source >> Touhou
- Tags >> Remove Touhou, add Eiyashou Imperishable Night Mystia Lorelei

General;
- You have 2 osb. files, delete them
- Set a preview time on all diffs. It could be good to set it at the start of the first kiai time, it has to be the same for all diffs.
- Use this colors for the circles
Combo1 : 235,148,202
Combo2 : 235,48,146
Combo3 : 156,188,226
Combo4 : 131,65,65
- I don't like the fact that this song ends so suddenly ...

Skin;
- I just don't like the fact that the border of the numbers is a gray-ish thing color, AT ALL. Sorry, I'm really picky I guess. Maybe change it to black or white ?? With a glow ... ??

Easy;
- Slider tick rate 1 sounds better
- 00:42:184 >> Do you need this timing section ?? :<
- 01:05:450 >> ^
- 01:21:445 >> one grid up
- 01:35:986 (1,2,3,4) >> one grid left
- 02:00:706 >> Ugly slider
- 02:26:789 >> End 2nd kiai time here

Normal +;
- This is just Normal imo ...
- Okk, I guess ... just that maybe you have some timing sections that aren't necessary
- 02:26:789 >> End 2nd kiai time here

Hard;
- Okk ...
- 02:26:789 >> End 2nd kiai time here

Luncatic;
- WHA- Okk, you are using streams where they shouldn't be streams also, Lunatic doesn't mean, steams all over the map, you can map a good Lunatics map without using so many streams
- 00:41:457 >> unrankable spinner, auto must be able to do 2000 bonus
- 01:16:265 >> ^
- Those claps on the streams ... ughh, I don't like them at all ...

* Star ..
Garven
You keep missing the end of my queue, hehe.

[General]
I find it kind of odd that you skin only the score numbers. It doesn't really fit anything... I'd remove it unless you plan on adding more skin elements such as the combo numbers and hit circles or something.
A better kiai time would be from 02:03:614 - all the way to the end. If you'd like, an extra kiai burst at 02:15:247 - would be pretty cool too.

[All difficulties]
Please keep the break times consistent throughout all of your difficulties. Some feel really early and others too close to the next one. I like the way Hard has it's break set up - maybe use that one for all difficulties?
End your final spinner on the red tick to the left. Also I'd remove the finish from it. It sticks out a lot compared to the song at the end. Maybe change it to a soft-hitnormal.

[Easy]
01:05:450 (1) - Okay, this is way too soon after a spinner. You may be better off mapping through the spinner.
01:07:631 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:358 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, check your spacing here. Sudden half-spacing in an easy is a no-no without good musical emphasis to back it up.
01:36:350 (2) - Miss a clap?
01:37:440 (1) - May as well extend this to 01:40:349 if you leave that break there
02:03:614 - Aaah, such a weird spot for a break. The song's revving up for a big climactic end! Keep on mapping!

The general rhythms used here were kind of bland since it was mostly just on the beat the entire time. Maybe try to mix it up with some following of the trumpets or something?

[Normal+]
Just name it normal.
00:21:100 (3,4) - Think you can position these so they aren't covered by up the slider as much?
00:26:916 (6) - Maybe angle to the right to reduce overlap with the next slider?
01:29:443 (2) - I was kind of expecting this slider to go with the piano. Maybe end it at the blue tick to the left?
01:32:351 (2) - ^
02:15:247 (1) - I over-looked the other one like this since it was a slider AND in the center, but this is just too hard for a normal. Please move it close to the center, or give the player more time to adjust.

The general rhythms used here too, were kind of bland since it was mostly just on the beat the entire time. Maybe try to mix it up with some following of the trumpets or something?

[Hard]
00:08:286 (3) - Should be like this on the time line:

There are a lot of these, so look through your difficulty and see where you used these on this part of the song.
00:53:090 (5) - Move this note to 00:53:272 (5)
01:03:814 (3,4,5,6,7) - These kind of play awkwardly. Maybe have a one note break between them so the time line looks like this:

01:32:351 (5) - Can you reposition this so it's not overlapping with the 3? Also make it end on the blue tick to the left. The same length as 01:29:443 (5) :)
01:35:259 (3) - Same length issue here
01:38:167 (5) - And here
02:09:431 (1) - Hrm, maybe rearrange to something else? Doing the same pattern three times in a row is kind of boring.

[Insane]
00:16:374 (2,3,4) - Whoa, check your spacing here. Keep it consistent please.
00:44:366 (4,5,6) - There a need for this? There's nothing in the music that really justifies this rhythm.
00:50:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - Hrm, instead of using the 1/4 rhythms, you should set the Beat snap divisor to 1/3 (slider bar in the upper right corner) and adjust the beats to the brown ticks. This will play MUCH better that way.
01:16:265 (1) - This spinner is too short for ranking standards. When playing with auto mode on, it needs to be able to get at least 2000 bonus points.
01:27:989 (1) - ^
01:29:443 (6) - Some more of that rhythm problem again mentioned in hard. Comb through here and see what you can fix up too.
01:49:800 (3) - Extend to the blue tick

Keep working at it!
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Good modding! ^_^ Thank you!! i have changed a lot of your suggestions,but all.
All:
skin delete.KIAI(break) time don't change sorry. -,-
end spinner is change and do soft hitsound.
EASY:
01:05:450 this spinner not change.other suggestions have been observed.
NORMAL+:
difficult name not change,because it beyond 4 star.
02:15:247 not change.it's normal+,it is hard to miss.it is a problem that people do it 100 or 300?other suggestins have been changed.
Hard:
00:08:286 not change.If fix it like you do,it is very hard to play-,-
00:53:090 not change.i think it's no problem.
01:03:814 not change.^
other suggestion have been observed.
Lunatic:
01:29:443 not change.In hard,i don't use 0.5 timing,so the sliders must long 1/4 than hard.^ ^
All thank you for you!!!
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
i have uploaded this map from lovhin456 to Garven's suggestions.
flyingkiss
この曲の作ったおいしいですよ。テンポとかは完璧。
flyingkiss
哈哈,我滴日语水平不错吧
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
那么多动漫又不是白看的。现在要看日文和中文都有的字幕-,-QQ聊好了,这里说麻烦
Kiddo-Kun
Break my rules will yeah?

[General]
Mp3 cut off is ugly.

[Easy]
Boring. Nothing really wrong with it. Just plain boring. IMO

[Normal+]

Not really Normal+ IMO
The hitsounds piss me. Inconsistent.

[Hard]
00:07:286 (1) - Finish
00:38:549 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:716 - The claps from here to the next section don't sound nice.

[Lunatic]

I didn't find much wrong. The claps next to each other sound bad.

Overall: I didn't mod this properly since you broke my queue rule. But from what I saw, it's good.

Star
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. disable countdown 在F4菜单的Storyboarding里可以找到 这首歌应该不太适合3,2,1,go...
  2. 虽然现在不用说什么.osb的问题 但是文件夹里有两个.osb了 @_@ 都删了重传下吧
[Easy]:
  1. 比较单调 但是作为一个Easy应该是中规中矩了...
[Normal+]:
  1. fine
[Hard]:
  1. 00:30:370 (4) - 这个感觉删掉会不错
  2. 01:03:814 (3,4,5,6) - 这个间距打起来绝对有问题 - - 需要把间距改成目前的一半
[Lunatic]:
  1. 作为Lunatic虽然note足够密,但是全部塞满1/2不是很好的选择...而且很多1拍的空隙都没有必要留着 (比如00:24:372 (6,1,2,3) - 这样的处理就很好,当然不仅限于这种方式)
  2. 00:29:643 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 3到4的间距一下就变小了 很不正常
  3. 00:35:368 (4) - 删掉
  4. 00:37:549 (8) - ^
  5. 00:58:543 (4) - 这个末尾偏向左边会好看点._.
  6. 01:15:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5到6的间距 这个很坑人
  7. 01:33:987 (6,7,8) - 这三个最好不要叠 考虑拉大间距做点小jump之类
  8. 01:40:258,01:40:349 (T) - 补俩note
  9. 01:55:344 (3) - 建议删了
  10. 01:56:071 (8) - ^
  11. 01:56:798 (5) - ^ 大规模连续的3连不太符合(至少是这里)
  12. 02:01:888 (5) - 删... 曲子钢琴音很明显
  13. 02:03:433 (7,8,1) - 8到1间距
  14. 02:03:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 头尾相接的slider频繁出现 只能想出是偷懒的表现了 @_@
  15. 最后的1/2海 ._. 重做吧
star~
Firo Prochainezo
Easy:
00:30:552: Try to map this break.
I don't see anything wrong with it though, only with that break.

Normal+:
00:30:552: Try to map this break.
01:13:357: (3) Flip vertically this slider?
01:24:626: (1,2,3,4) Remove the "New Combo" from them.
01:52:709: (3) Redo this slider, the red tick doesn't fit.

Hard:
Don't see anything wrong.

Insane:
Don't see anything wrong.

I don't think this post merits a kudosu, but if you want to give it I don't see any problems.
forjune
Good job!!!
Hope earier Ranked ^_^
mekadon_old
Ohh, reminds me of me 1CCing IN on Lunatic looool

[Easy]
00:13:102 (1) - I wish both the slider startpoint and endpoint were at the same line, but okay for me
00:43:639 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 spacing for an Easy? I don't recommend it though
00:46:365 (7) - Move one red tick forward
00:47:274 - Suggestion:
00:54:544 (3) - I don't like backbeats much, so IMO remove it
01:00:361 (3) - ^
01:33:078 (3) - Isn't perpendicular to 2 and 4. Google it if you don't know what I mean :P
01:57:071 (7) - Adding clap sounds better
02:11:612 (7,8) - Align at the same y axis as (1,2)

[Normal]
01:23:990 (4) - Isn't perpendicular to 2 and 3

[Lunatic]
00:48:728 to 00:52:363- I wish there is a deathstream lool
Slightly overmapped, but okay for me though

Nothing much to point out on Hard. Star for you.
Charles445
Wow, this beatmap changed quite a lot. Good job.
Kissflying
GJ
thekillerhjkhjk
General

all timing sections which change sound must be at least 1/4 beat before the note to be changed

[lunatic]
00:09:467 (4,5,6,7,8) - claps are WAAAAAY too loud
00:12:557 (2,3,4) - ^
00:14:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:27:098 (5,6,7,8,9) - take away a few claps from here
00:35:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:38:549 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:47:637 (1,2,3,4) - too loud
00:48:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:52:545 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^
01:04:905 (11,12,13,14,15) - you don't need finishes on all of these
01:16:356 (6) - move this further away from (5)
01:51:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - omg spacing too big X.X
02:05:432 (6) - please move this INSIDE the playfield more :3

everything else is ok

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HeyByeQ
[報價 =“kissfly”] [大小= 85]這 beatmap提交使用遊戲中提交的關於 2010年10月11日在18點 36分39秒[/尺寸]

選項 [B]藝人:[/乙]尊
選項 [B]標題:[/乙]宋之夜麻雀〜夜鶯
選項 [B]來源:[/乙] Eiyashou不滅之夜Mystia洛勒萊
[b]的標籤:[/乙] Touhou
選項 [B]的BPM:[/乙] 165.05
選項 [B]文件大小:[/乙] 3805kb
選項 [B]播放時間:[/乙] 02:23
選項 [B]難點可用:[/乙]
[列表][*][網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/ZUN%20 - %20Song%20of%第二十條%20Night%20Sparrow%20%7e%20Night%20Bird%20(kissfly) %20%5bEasy%5d.osu]簡單 [/網址](3.01星,215筆記)
[*] [網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/ZUN%20 - %20Song%20of%第二十條%20Night%20Sparrow%20%7e%20Night%20Bird%20(kissfly)%20% 5bHard%5d.osu]硬盤 [/網址](5星級,432筆記)
[*] [網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/ZUN%20 - %20Song%20of%第二十條%20Night%20Sparrow%20%7e%20Night%20Bird%20(kissfly)%20% 5bLunatic%5d.osu]瘋子 [/網址](5星級,673筆記)
[*] [網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/ZUN%20 - %20Song%20of%第二十條%20Night%20Sparrow%20%7e%20Night%20Bird%20(kissfly)%20% 5bNormal%2b干擾素%5d.osu]正常+ [/網址](4.19星,229筆記)[/列表]

[大小= 150] [乙]下載:[網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/d/20843]尊 - 宋之夜麻雀〜夜鶯 [/網址] [/乙] [/尺寸]
選項 [B]資料:[/乙] [網址 = http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20843]分數 / Beatmap上市[/網址]
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Touhou.th08,在BGM來自使命2。
感謝 thekillerhjkhjk ZLOdeuka lovhin456 IceBeam科林侯Lunaba Mustaash加文wmfchris James2250 Zetsubou老師 hujune karenying和Charles445的建議。[/報價]
nott_old
姐姐帮你赞一个~对于第一个作品来说还是不错的。看着别人的意见你慢慢改吧~~
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