Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind · forum

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-04T12:10:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月7日 at 下午 05:22:30

Artist: Xi-on
Title: Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind
Source: Xi-on C77
Tags: Touhou unidentified fantastic object byakuren hijiri
BPM: 168
Filesize: 7165kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.75 stars, 282 notes)
Insane (4.89 stars, 365 notes)
Normal (3.72 stars, 220 notes)

Download: Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I love rock.
I love touhou.
So I choose this song.

New BG uploaded.Please redownload this map if you downloaded it before 7/2/2010

Last edited by beat4you 2010-02-07T09:24:11+00:00, edited 33 times in total.

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-01-06T04:45:08+00:00

nice map

[General]

删掉osb文件
应该再做个Easy或者Normal

[Hard]

00:07:246 和 00:10:103 - 这两个break可以不要,HP drain rate不高
02:04:389 - 从这开始可以添加以下配合鼓声的clap感觉会很好:3

[Insane]

00:23:317 (2) - spacing稍大
00:26:174 (2) - ^
00:39:746 (3) - new combo
00:51:889 (1,2,3,4) - 同一个combo里不该有这么大的spacing差距吧,如果要jump的话1,2,3,4分别new combo比较好
00:57:603 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:746 (5,6,7) - jump, new combo
02:39:031 (2) - spacing 显得大了点

其他都不错
star+ kds star

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-06T12:05:21+00:00

Breeze wrote:
nice map

[General]
删掉osb文件
应该再做个Easy或者Normal
[Hard]
00:07:246 和 00:10:103 - 这两个break可以不要,HP drain rate不高
02:04:389 - 从这开始可以添加以下配合鼓声的clap感觉会很好:3
[Insane]
00:23:317 (2) - spacing稍大
00:26:174 (2) - ^
00:39:746 (3) - new combo
00:51:889 (1,2,3,4) - 同一个combo里不该有这么大的spacing差距吧,如果要jump的话1,2,3,4分别new combo比较好
00:57:603 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:746 (5,6,7) - jump, new combo
02:39:031 (2) - spacing 显得大了点
其他都不错
star+ kds star

第一次玩spacing,好像過分了......"
以上的大致上都修改好了,就差hard的clap sound,這個我不太會加.....
normal制作中....

al2e10

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al2e10 2010-01-07T10:06:58+00:00

My dif ~

Download: Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind (beat4you) [AL2e's Hard].osu

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2010-01-08T14:35:54+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Armin

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Armin 2010-01-08T15:37:55+00:00

[Hard]

Overall: I love this difficulty. No major problems found, just add more hitsounds (for this, download the .osu at the end of the post).

02:00:460 (1,2,3) Even if these beats are following the Distance snap (because you added a 0,5 BPM section), their position is a bit confusing. Stack them or use the 1,6x Distance Snap
02:03:496 Very short break, you can remove it
01:55:103 (4) Make this slider better
02:25:103 (x) Add a hitcircle here, place a whistle and then make the next spinner 1/4 shorter
02:47:960 (x) As above but add a clap/finish instead

Overall Rating 9/10

[Insane]

Overall: All perfect, download the .osu file at the end of the post for the hitsounds.

02:03:496 Short break, consider to remove it
02:25:103 (x) Add a hitcircle here, place a clap and then make the next spinner 1/4 shorter
02:47:960 As above, just don't add hitsounds

Overall Rating 9/10

Download: Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind (beat4you) [Hard].osu

Download: Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind (beat4you) [Insane].osu

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-01-08T18:52:11+00:00

[Normal]
02:52:246 (x) - end the kiai.

[Hard]
01:23:674 (1,2,3,4) - make these more parallel and with the same distance between them.
02:52:246 (x) - end the kiai.

[Insane]
You have to choose. either have breaks in the small holes or not (talking for all diffs).

Damn, that's great

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-01-09T05:05:43+00:00

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beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-09T06:59:17+00:00

To Armin:
Thx for your hitsound:)

To Sushi971:
All fixed.

To Leorda:
All fixed.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2010-01-10T13:59:10+00:00

Hello

[Normal]

01:50:103 (4) End at 01:50:281

[Hard]

00:15:103 (5) New combo
00:54:210 (3) Add 1 more reverse
02:40:817 (8) New combo

[Insane]

02:12:960 (3) 1 grid up
02:35:639 (1) Delete new combo

star

Alace

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Alace 2010-01-10T14:08:24+00:00

Normal is a bit hard.you can try to make it easier

<Hitsounds>
try to use kiouclaps XD

Download: 11940 Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind.rar

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-01-10T17:28:00+00:00

[Tags]
Maybe add:
unidentified fantastic object byakuren hijiri

[Hard]
02:40:103 (5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe, don't have (5) overlap (8).
02:46:174 (4,5,6) - Usually, you have (4,5) stacked onto (6), make it consistent?

good beatmap, *star

yaya

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yaya 2010-01-10T21:38:30+00:00

我觉得第三个break time完全没必要。
我改了一些东西。只是放的节奏。你如果觉得可取的话可以用~
其他的在insane里面我觉得whistle+clap不太好听。
别没什么了。
nice map

Download: Xi-on - Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind (beat4you) [test].osu

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2010-01-11T04:17:00+00:00

Good~

No problem. >.<

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-01-11T09:11:18+00:00

~Normal~
00:50:639 (5) - silence the slidertick
00:56:353 (5) - ^
02:05:103 (1) - wrong side

~Hard~
Fine

~Insane~
Fine.

+Star

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-11T10:06:08+00:00

To sonnyc:
All fixed,except this: [Hard] 00:54:210 (3) Add 1 more reverse

To Alace:
這個hitsound好像....怪怪的.....
我覺得內置的比較好.....

To Dusty:
Tags added

[Hard]
02:40:103 (5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe, don't have (5) overlap (8).
02:46:174 (4,5,6) - Usually, you have (4,5) stacked onto (6), make it consistent?
^^^^^^^^^^
I think it is unnecessary to chage this....

To osu_CN_yaya:
第三段的音樂重複了,所以我不想加上去....
whistle+clap我換成了whistle和clap分別出

To DJpop:
All fixed.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-01-12T06:01:48+00:00

Normal
Fine.

Hard
Fine.

Insane
00:06:532 (1, 2, 1, 2) - Maybe makes these jumps?

Possibly to make it most Insane, you could decrease Circle Size by 1.

Just make an Easy, and I'll be 100% happy, but if you don't...

anyway, ~ star ~

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2010-01-13T15:51:16+00:00

Normal
00:15:103 (5,1,3) - new combo on 5th blue and 3rd yellow, remove the other new combo
00:23:674 (3) - new combo

Hard
01:56:174 (1) - move it a square down

Insane
00:39:746 (1,2) - fix spacing

Since Bpm value changes often creating various slow-down sections, I suggest you tofix some spacing points or to add some storyboarded advises (like slow down,etc..)
Plus, fix overall hitsound-placing on Hard, too! Sometimes is quite strange...
Anyway, I admire your map because it's the FIRST Touhou map that has an Insane mode instead of an unoriginal Lunatic one... that's originality. And I'll award that with a star :3

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-14T07:57:19+00:00

Lokamp wrote:
Normal
00:15:103 (5,1,3) - new combo on 5th blue and 3rd yellow, remove the other new combo
00:23:674 (3) - new combo

Hard
01:56:174 (1) - move it a square down

Insane
00:39:746 (1,2) - fix spacing

Since Bpm value changes often creating various slow-down sections, I suggest you tofix some spacing points or to add some storyboarded advises (like slow down,etc..)
Plus, fix overall hitsound-placing on Hard, too! Sometimes is quite strange...
Anyway, I admire your map because it's the FIRST Touhou map that has an Insane mode instead of an unoriginal Lunatic one... that's originality. And I'll award that with a star :3

All fixed except this:
Insane
00:39:746 (1,2) - fix spacing
Is this spacing illegal?

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-01-14T09:13:16+00:00

Nothing to edit for me, super fine map!

star~

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sesito71 2010-01-16T19:35:23+00:00

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beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-17T06:26:52+00:00

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Shulin

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Shulin 2010-01-19T19:42:37+00:00

General:

-- Resize BG to 1024x768 or 800x600 if you can (it will look better).
-- Delete .osb and full submit.
-- BG color black on all difficulties. (Currently only Insane has BG as black)
-- Maybe make an easy?

Remove: “Ranked beatmap: Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days s/8733 nb” from Creator’s words put it in your signature or something lol.

Normal:

Maybe too hard for the easiest difficulty, otherwise it's good.

01:50:817 – Move this inheriting section to 01:50:639 so you silence the whole spinner.
02:13:674 - ^ but move to 02:13:496
02:39:389 – Delete this inheriting section.
02:44:924 ^

Hard:

01:21:174 (1) – Odd spacing change, space it without the x0.5 section and then reinsert the x0.5.
01:50:817 – Start this inheriting section on 01:50:639 so the whole spinner is silenced.
02:13:684 – ^ Start at 02:13:496
02:39:389 – Delete this inheriting section.

Insane:

01:50:639 (1) – Same thing I mentioned earlier make sure the whole spinner is silenced.
02:13:496 (1) - ^

Nice maps with some nice jumps in Insane, consider making an Easy.

~ Star.

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-20T02:53:47+00:00

Shulin wrote:
General:

-- Resize BG to 1024x768 or 800x600 if you can (it will look better).
-- Delete .osb and full submit.
-- BG color black on all difficulties. (Currently only Insane has BG as black)
-- Maybe make an easy?

Remove: “Ranked beatmap: Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days s/8733 nb” from Creator’s words put it in your signature or something lol.

Normal:

Maybe too hard for the easiest difficulty, otherwise it's good.

01:50:817 – Move this inheriting section to 01:50:639 so you silence the whole spinner.
02:13:674 - ^ but move to 02:13:496
02:39:389 – Delete this inheriting section.
02:44:924 ^

Hard:

01:21:174 (1) – Odd spacing change, space it without the x0.5 section and then reinsert the x0.5.
01:50:817 – Start this inheriting section on 01:50:639 so the whole spinner is silenced.
02:13:684 – ^ Start at 02:13:496
02:39:389 – Delete this inheriting section.

Insane:

01:50:639 (1) – Same thing I mentioned earlier make sure the whole spinner is silenced.
02:13:496 (1) - ^

Nice maps with some nice jumps in Insane, consider making an Easy.

~ Star.

I am sorry to tell you that this normal is the easiest diff. that I can make.....
I suck at making easy diff. .......
I dont know how to resize the bg.Maybe I will find someone to help me......
Except the above,all fixed.

kino77

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kino77 2010-01-20T11:39:07+00:00

Hi~
Nice map~

[Normal]
01:20:817 (4) - Move it away from 3? It will mislead player...

[Hard]
00:16:353 (3,4) - Spacing?

[Insane]
00:39:746 (1) - Reverse the slider for the spacing?

Cool~star~

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-01-22T17:18:10+00:00

[General]

Delete the .osb.
Cut the MP3 to where you need it and find a new offset.
Normal is kinda borderline for the easiest difficulty...

[Normal]

00:15:817 (2,3) - The 3 coming on the red tick is quite surprising; make it a bit more readable by not stacking it under the 2?
00:21:531 (2,3) - ^
00:27:246 (2,3) - ^

I didn't like how many repeating sliders there were, since sometimes the number of repeats became an issue for reading.

[Hard]

Looks okay.

[Insane]

00:22:960 (1) - A bit hard to see this is a slider.
00:26:531 (1) - Repeat is covered.
00:39:746 (1,2,3) - Spacing.

Man, those spinners are really borderline.

01:38:317 (5) - Concealed repeat.
02:45:103 (3,4,5,6) - Still don't really like this spacing.

That's it. Nice map!

Star~

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-01-23T04:32:10+00:00

Normal
too hard for a normal diff
i think you shouldn't use changes of bpm in normal
02:05:103 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
02:24:567 (6) - repeat one more, move the spinner half beat later. end point the same
02:35:817 (5) - end it at 02:36:174 -

Hard
00:17:246 (4) - new combo
00:28:317 - how about mapping this break time?
02:18:496 (6) - wrong spacing
02:35:817 (5) - end it at 02:36:174 -

Insane
00:28:317 - how about mapping this break time?
00:39:746 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing o.o
02:35:817 (6) - end it at 02:36:174 -
01:37:603 (8) - same, use new combo if this is a jump

i like the hitsounds
Star!

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-23T17:54:40+00:00

[Insane]
00:39:746 (1,2,3)<<<Is it really illegal?
00:39:656(4)=>00:39:746(1) is a spacing,00:39:746(1)=>00:40:281 follows the distance snap.

Symbolic

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Symbolic 2010-01-24T09:29:14+00:00

- in General

Remove .osb file, it's unused.
You probably need an [Easy] too, since the [Normal] is pretty hard.

- Normal

HP Drain Rate 1 tick to the left.
Overall Difficulty 1 tick to the left.

00:50:639 (5) - You might SB a warning for this, it's hard to see it coming.
00:56:353 (5) - ^
02:17:960 (5) - ^

- Hard

00:07:246 (x) - Insert break.
00:10:103 (x) - ^

- Insane

00:39:746 (1,2,3) - This is really confusing, change the spacing here..
02:45:103 (3,4,5,6) - ^

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-01-24T20:11:50+00:00

Insane:

All good and all other suggestions here would be nazi ^^

Hard:

Good too

Normal:

Perfect ^_^

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-25T09:29:24+00:00

Most fixed.

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-01-25T11:20:30+00:00

00:06:51(1)(2), 00:09:38(1)(2)This stacking in Normal is too confusing IMO, at least the first stacking.

Other than that I found nothing wrong, decide if you want to change that.

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-25T14:45:58+00:00

deepsea wrote:
00:06:51(1)(2), 00:09:38(1)(2)This stacking in Normal is too confusing IMO, at least the first stacking.

Other than that I found nothing wrong, decide if you want to change that.

Fixed.You are welcome to list any change

Shinde

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Shinde 2010-01-26T14:13:27+00:00

http://up.ppy.sh/files/emotionalskyscra ... icmind.mp3

Cut off about a minute at the end that wasn't used and faded it out. This would cut 2.3~ MB off from the filesize if you pop it in. It shouldn't require an offset change. Remember to reupload after you switch it and double check that everything's fine.

The only thing that worries me is Normal's difficulty. The reverses and spacing and BPM changes make this a bit hard for a Normal. I can't say I mind them that badly though, I think this is a very good mapset.

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-28T10:27:50+00:00

Shinde wrote:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/emotionalskyscraper~cosmicmind.mp3

Cut off about a minute at the end that wasn't used and faded it out. This would cut 2.3~ MB off from the filesize if you pop it in. It shouldn't require an offset change. Remember to reupload after you switch it and double check that everything's fine.

The only thing that worries me is Normal's difficulty. The reverses and spacing and BPM changes make this a bit hard for a Normal. I can't say I mind them that badly though, I think this is a very good mapset.

Thanks for the mp3

OK,I recieve lofs of complaints about the normal difficulty.......
An "easy" normal will come soon.......

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-01-30T18:53:23+00:00

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deepsea

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deepsea 2010-02-03T12:12:08+00:00

O_O

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kingcobra52 2010-02-04T22:45:16+00:00

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beat4you

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beat4you 2010-02-05T11:24:54+00:00

kingcobra52 wrote:
Offset: 6,552 (+20). Feel free to tweak it from there, but it's definitely early now.

Insane

00:25:123 (11) - 17's a bit high. New combo here?

Starred.

offset changed
[Hard] 1:37:801(1,2,3,4,5):change notes' position.
[Insane] 0:24:409,0:25:123 : new combo

New BG uploaded

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2010-02-07T17:53:34+00:00

Better now.

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-13T01:34:01+00:00

happy new year.

Cyclone

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Cyclone 2010-02-13T16:39:57+00:00

Hey guys, that's a HORRIBLE source tag. 'Touhou' would have been appropriate. Source tags are supposed to show where the song originally comes from, not what event it was released at...

EDIT: In fact, I'm changing it. A quick update should make everybody's files correct.

beat4you

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beat4you 2010-02-13T17:16:04+00:00

Cyclone wrote:
Hey guys, that's a HORRIBLE source tag. 'Touhou' would have been appropriate. Source tags are supposed to show where the song originally comes from, not what event it was released at...

EDIT: In fact, I'm changing it. A quick update should make everybody's files correct.

Oh.......I've never thought of that