1. Easy (0.98 stars, 109 notes)
2. Hard (4.25 stars, 212 notes)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~
Inherit the timing section at 23,938ms. Then resnap all notes. Oops. Thanks for catching this.
02:23:13 (2) - Suggestion: Stack on top of 1.[/size]Done

Hard~
00:43:88 (9) - This is... bad =\Without knowing exactly what you meant, I moved this a bit.
00:50:63 (5) - Redo break after this slider. It'll shorten a lot.Done. Thanks for modding!


Nice job!! Thank you

Ekaru wrote:

Here are some *suggestions*.

Hard:

00:09:88 (5) - Move down a grid, because 4 is slightly overlapping it when the other 1/2s don't overlap each other. Just for prettiness, nothing big. Done.

00:20:38 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move the notes under 2 so they're out of the way. 2 covers the notes, making it hard to read and not fun for the player. Moved this section around a bit.

00:32:50 (2,3,4,5) - I recommend stacking. You essentially have a messy version of a stack here. I recommend turning it into an actual stack. Sure! My first map and wasn't sure when I could ignore distance snap.

00:41:63 (6) - Turn the end of this slider away from the notes before it, so you can easily see the end of it.Moved this to the left slightly

00:43:88 (9) - Turn end of 9 a bit so it's not under 8. As-is, you think it's a hit circle and not a slider. ><;Moved this.

Delete the short break after that note, it's so short it doesn't do much and can mislead the player into thinking they have more time to rest than they actually do.This was kind of intended, I'm a bit evil like that I'll think about it.

Break after that one is fine, BTW. Long enough to not mislead the player. Woops, already changed this per mafia *shrug*

00:54:63 (1,2) - You probably didn't know this, but you shouldn't overlap sliders on top of each other like this. This is why you asked for this map to get modded. I would just turn 1 into a hit circle to match the lyrics, and keep it where it is. That would skip over the problem altogether while still playing well.Yeah I was a bit unsure about this section. Made it into one slider.

01:07:13 (1) - I recommend deleting this short spinner. Just feels like filler and not fully enjoyable.I'll think about this too, and the one at 1:27

01:27:13 (1) - Ditto, makes no sense here.

02:03:63 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1) - I recommend redoing this section, kind of messy.Good point, I re-did this a bit.

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Nice map, had fun playing it. Just some things to fix up. Thank you

Easy:

02:15:13 (5) - Stack under the end of 4

02:23:00 (1,2) - Stack these properly, please. Both of these done, I wasn't sure when it's fine to ignore distance snap. Thanks for modding!

Good map, again, was fun. Ask in chat if you don't know what any of these suggestions mean. Viola! Thanks!

Aoitenshi wrote:

the easy's slider's speed is the slowest i ever see....

Easy :
Just fine for me.

Hard :
00:40:130 : Place clap at the end of the slider
00:40:380 - 00:43:630 : Place clap to all of the note in this time, sounds better.
00:43:180 : Place finish to the sliders.
02:20:130 - 02:21:880 : Move these sliders to 02:20:225 - 02:22:005, It's not rhyme with the song.
02:24:130 : Place a Note with Finish and place the timing option kiai here. It's not fun to use kiai randomly like that, it's fun when there's a very nice part or a note with finish

This map will be nicer if you remod it yourself many times. Shooting star! It's worthy to have this.

kino77 wrote:

[Easy]
I dont like circles pile up there...change distance spacing rate?
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