This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月12日 at 23:24:02

Artist: Rita
Title: Alicemagic
Source: Little Busters!
Tags: frost-b-spec,NatsumeRin
BPM: 166
Filesize: 5572kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.9 stars, 113 notes)
2. fbs's Normal (4.36 stars, 163 notes)
3. Hard (4.81 stars, 192 notes)
4. Insane (4.97 stars, 313 notes)
5. Rin's Taiko (4.83 stars, 507 notes)

Download: Rita - Alicemagic
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 1st beat map.
Please give advice to me.

i make Normal diff and chat mod. XD
star

star~~~~~~~~~~~

>digiaria
thx star~

Σ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ☆とりゃ

＞S i R i R uさん
教えやら☆やらいろいろありがとうございます！

(　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡°star！star！
Insane is very good!
oh...URYYYY!

（ ﾟωﾟ ）Star!!

masuo is very ***

　　___　_
　 ヽo,´-'─ 、
　　 r, "~~~~"ヽ
　　 i. ,'ﾉﾚノﾚ!ﾚ〉
　__ '!从.ﾟ ヮﾟﾉﾙ　♪
　ゝﾝ〈(つY_i(つ　　
　 ｀,.く,§_,_,ゝ,
　　　~i_ﾝｲﾉ~´

（　＾ω＾）

＞tobaku2784
＞nxoirx123
＞Silver acute398
＞zero11

Thank you for your star.

Rita　VeryGood!!

＞Ry-HOROiD

Thank you for the star.

star

＞taros
Thank you for the star.

Edit1: timing: BPM 166 offset: about +12
a [Insane] hitsounds suggestion here...
mapping taiko now. and i'm here to ask your permission again...can i make another osu diff= =..?

Edit2: taiko diff finished...hope you like it. if there's any problems, pm me, i'll fix it as soon as possible.

Edit3: [Rin's Style] diff added...but not finished... with custom sound files.

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [Insane hitsounds].osu

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [Rin's Taiko].osu

Download: Alicemagic~.rar

>NatsumeRin

thank you star~
I was allowed to mend.

しりるさんありがとー
こちらも直しました。

Alicemagic!
hope there will be more ranked Little Busters maps, therefore I am here to give some suggestions~

[Easy]
00:43:212 (1) add clap?
01:23:689 (3,4) spacing (as you 1/4 note to overlap at 01:20:978, but you use 1/2 note to overlap here...)

[Normal]
I can find Nothing ! Nice~

[Rin's Taiko]
dunno how to mod Taiko, but it should set a preview point, right??
preview point : 01:16:280

[Hard]
00:47:729 clap in this part is good, but should be in lower volume and more clap
add clap at these notes :
00:48:896 (2) the end of the slider
00:48:994 (3,4,5,7,8)
00:50:621 (9) add finish on the start and the end of the slider
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00:54:415 this part should echo with the previous, but you miss a note on 00:55:319
would you like to try this?
add clap on 00:54:596 (2,4), 00:55:139, 00:55:500, 00:56:222
to continue the echo, also add clap on 00:56:403 (1,4,5,6), 01:00:198 (1)
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01:05:257 (2) add finish?
01:08:149 this part can be more euphonious, consider to try this:
01:08:149 (1) finish
01:08:510 (2,6,8) clap
01:08:691 (3,9) clap on the start of the slider, also clap on 01:10:679
01:11:040 (9) finish on the end of the slider
01:11:401 add clap on (1,3) the start of slider
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01:18:810 (13) this slider should end at 01:19:171 or 01:19:352
01:36:880 (X) add a note here
01:37:784 (14) move to 01:37:964
01:38:145 (x) add a note here and start the spinner at 01:38:326


[Insane]
set a preview point~ that should be 01:16:280 like other difficulties
00:30:568 (6) this note is unneccesary, but there should be a note at 00:30:749
01:25:327 (1) try to end at 01:27:315 or 01::27:676, if you choose the former, consider to add a note at 01:27:676
01:36:893 (x) add a note here?
01:37:797 (6) move it to 01:37:977
01:38:158 (x) add a note and start the spinner at 01:38:339
lol just realize, why the offset here is different form others??
try to find out which is better and fix it~ (I'm not good at timing, sor~)

Anyway, good map, Get my star and good luck~

Thanks Mod and stars～　＝ω＝

こんにちは
私はリトバスとかRitaとか好きですよ
ナイス譜面だと思います
modしてみました
個人的意見なのでスルーしてもいいです

Easy
00:37:795 (2) 個人的にリズムが合わないと思いますので普通にホワイトラインに合わせたほうが自然だと思います
01:16:650 (3) 1 個下、続きの4~6も

Insane
00:41:951 (7) 1個右では？
00:59:120 (3) （1）の位置と真ん中縦軸対称にしたほうがよさそう

starノ☆
Good luck!

Easy
00:37:795 (2) 個人的にリズムが合わないと思いますので普通にホワイトラインに合わせたほうが自然だと思います
01:16:650 (3) 1 個下、続きの4~6も

BPM変えたとき00:37:795 (2)のスライダーだけ変わってませんでしたｗ　白線に合わせました。
01:16:650 (3) 1 個下、続きの4~6も　直しました。

Insane
00:41:951 (7) 1個右では？
00:59:120 (3) （1）の位置と真ん中縦軸対称にしたほうがよさそう

ずれていたので直しました。

こんにちは
私はリトバスとかRitaとか好きですよ

ナイス譜面だと思います
starノ☆
Good luck!

ありがと～

赤：修正必須
緑：一マスずれてるとか、前のパターンとマスが違うとか。態となら問題なしのところ。
色なし：意見

ところどころgridsnapを使っていないようですが、
使っていたら配置できない所以外は使ったほうがやりやすいですよ。
まぁ素人の意見ですけどｗ
重ねるところはディスタンスを×0にすると、gridsnap使っていようがスライダーだろうが綺麗に重なります。


[Easy]
変えたら後ろのNotesもよく確認してください。
00:34:915 (7) - 1マス右
00:43:228 (4) - 1マス左
00:50:096 (6) - スペーシングミス
00:54:795 (6,7) - 左に1マス
00:58:048 (3,4,5) -
01:11:783 (7,8) - を下に1マス
01:12:506 (9) - を左に1マス（↑とセット）
01:12:506 (9) - スライダー終点のタイミングが間違っています。
01:16:662 (3) - スペーシングミス
ここからスペーシングミスが目立ちます。AIMODを使いながら直してください。
01:24:433 (5) - 左と下にそれぞれ1マス

[Hard]
00:38:891 (5)
と
00:39:614 (7) - - パターンから外れています。
00:43:590 (9) -
00:45:759 (3) - グリッドスナップを使わないでちょうど1と2の真ん中にするか、1と2をもう1マス離す。
00:49:373 (4) -
01:16:481 (2) - 1マス上へ
01:31:120 (1,2,3,4,5) -

[Insane]
Offsetを変えたようですね。
Timing → Resnap All Notesをしてください。
00:41:961 (7,8,9) - のスペーシング。
00:13:228 (6) - 斜め具合を(5)と統一するなら調整。
00:15:578 (3) - (1.2) と同じような配列にするならこれ以降を右に3、下に2。
でもこの後をいろいろ変えなくちゃいけなくなるので、このままでもスペーシングはおkだからそのままでも。
これ以降同じような指摘は緑色にします。
00:36:361 (5) - 右に1グリッド
00:44:313 (3)から -
00:48:650 (4) -
00:51:361 (12) -
00:54:975 (2,4) - 微妙に重なってるはずがずれています。態とでないのなら修正。
00:56:783 (3,4) - 3は1と2の真ん中にするなら右に1グリッド、下へは自由に。4は3にあわせるなら右へ1グリッド。
00:59:132 (3) - 右、下にそれぞれ1グリッド。
01:12:144 (8) - 下に1グリッド。01:12:506 (1) - 以降の移動も忘れずに。
01:20:819 (6,7,8) -
01:21:361 (9) - これらを変えるなら10,11,12も忘れずに。
01:22:445 (1,2,3,4) - 1と4の高さが違う。
01:25:337 (1) -の終点を 01:27:325 ではなく 01:26:923 (1) - にしてみてはいかがでしょう。
01:28:409 (4,5,6,7) - gridsnap使っていないので、正確なマス目を言うことはできませんが、
修正するなら、3,4,6のそれぞれの高さの違い。4と7の高さの違い。5と6の間に4を挟んだときの高さの半端さ。

少し細かすぎたかもしれません（；＞＜）

[Easy]
変えたら後ろのNotesもよく確認してください。
00:34:915 (7) - 1マス右
00:43:228 (4) - 1マス左
00:50:096 (6) - スペーシングミス
00:54:795 (6,7) - 左に1マス
00:58:048 (3,4,5) -
01:11:783 (7,8) - を下に1マス
01:12:506 (9) - を左に1マス（↑とセット）
01:12:506 (9) - スライダー終点のタイミングが間違っています。
01:16:662 (3) - スペーシングミス
ここからスペーシングミスが目立ちます。AIMODを使いながら直してください。
01:24:433 (5) - 左と下にそれぞれ1マス

[Hard]
00:38:891 (5)
と
00:39:614 (7) - - パターンから外れています。
00:43:590 (9) -
00:45:759 (3) - グリッドスナップを使わないでちょうど1と2の真ん中にするか、1と2をもう1マス離す。
00:49:373 (4) -
01:16:481 (2) - 1マス上へ
01:31:120 (1,2,3,4,5) -

[Insane]
Offsetを変えたようですね。
Timing → Resnap All Notesをしてください。
00:41:961 (7,8,9) - のスペーシング。
00:13:228 (6) - 斜め具合を(5)と統一するなら調整。
00:15:578 (3) - (1.2) と同じような配列にするならこれ以降を右に3、下に2。
でもこの後をいろいろ変えなくちゃいけなくなるので、このままでもスペーシングはおkだからそのままでも。
これ以降同じような指摘は緑色にします。
00:36:361 (5) - 右に1グリッド
00:44:313 (3)から -
00:48:650 (4) -
00:51:361 (12) -
00:54:975 (2,4) - 微妙に重なってるはずがずれています。態とでないのなら修正。
00:56:783 (3,4) - 3は1と2の真ん中にするなら右に1グリッド、下へは自由に。4は3にあわせるなら右へ1グリッド。
00:59:132 (3) - 右、下にそれぞれ1グリッド。
01:12:144 (8) - 下に1グリッド。01:12:506 (1) - 以降の移動も忘れずに。
01:20:819 (6,7,8) -
01:21:361 (9) - これらを変えるなら10,11,12も忘れずに。
01:22:445 (1,2,3,4) - 1と4の高さが違う。
01:25:337 (1) -の終点を 01:27:325 ではなく 01:26:923 (1) - にしてみてはいかがでしょう。
01:28:409 (4,5,6,7) - gridsnap使っていないので、正確なマス目を言うことはできませんが、
修正するなら、3,4,6のそれぞれの高さの違い。4と7の高さの違い。5と6の間に4を挟んだときの高さの半端さ。

すべて修正しました

BMPを2倍にしてスライダーの早さを半分にしたので、イージーはResnap All Notesしたさい配置がそのままタイミングがずれてしまったていたのでスペーシングがおかしくなっていました。醜かったと思います。すいませんでした＞＜

oh...Mr.Huguta!

This map is good!

Star

Star　Thanks～

Star

Thanks～

☆

Thanks Star~

All

delete Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [.osb file and fullsubmit
use same Stack Leniency D:

img_85667_198171_2.jpeg
img_760484_22942627_0.jpeg
img_843290_9835515_1.jpeg
(should be 1024x768 pixels)

comboburst-0.png
comboburst-1.png
(should be 500x600 pixels)

delet SB/Thumbs.db O.O

Insane

STR :1 or 2
01:25:337 (1) - start at 01:25:518
01:37:445 (5) - end at 01:38:168
01:38:349 (1) - start at 01:38:530

Hard

HP-2
01:02:566 (6) - remove
01:25:427 (1) - ??? start at 01:25:518

Normal

STR : 1
00:29:493 (1,2,3,4) - strange._.
00:52:265 (3) - end at 00:53:349 (feels better for Normal <3
00:55:156 (7) - ^
01:03:831 (3) - ^
01:06:722 (7) - ^
01:16:120 (9,1) - too hard(spacing) for Normal D:
01:38:349 (1) - move to 01:38:530

Easy

01:13:951 (10) - new combo ?

☆⌒Σ(≧ε≦)

AngelHoney wrote:

All

delete Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [.osb file and fullsubmit
use same Stack Leniency D:

img_85667_198171_2.jpeg
img_760484_22942627_0.jpeg
img_843290_9835515_1.jpeg
(should be 1024x768 pixels)

comboburst-0.png
comboburst-1.png
(should be 500x600 pixels)　　　　

delet SB/Thumbs.db O.O

Insane

STR :1 or 2
01:25:337 (1) - start at 01:25:518
01:37:445 (5) - end at 01:38:168
01:38:349 (1) - start at 01:38:530 　　　　not done.　01:38:349 (6) - Add a note

Hard

HP-2
01:02:566 (6) - remove
01:25:427 (1) - ??? start at 01:25:518

Easy

01:13:951 (10) - new combo ?

☆⌒Σ(≧ε≦)

Thanks　Mod　And　Star~

AngelHoney wrote:

All
Normal

STR : 1
00:29:493 (1,2,3,4) - strange._.
01:16:120 (9,1) - too hard(spacing) for Normal D:

☆⌒Σ(≧ε≦)

done. other is not done,i think fine...
thx modding

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [fbs's Normal].osu

starrrrr!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks　Star~

star~!!

must star

Thanks　Star~

easy

only suggestion at 01:32:385 (3) -
i think you can change note like this.
i think it's better imo.



normal

i suggest + 1 overall difficult because there are alot of circle sticking

hard

not find any error


insane



i just test play this diff alot i found returnslider (9) is hard to see a return marking because it's behind note (7)

it's good if you turn the thatslider tail to other ways

that 's all . i'm not good at modder . i'm just a new mapper . if you have a times please suggest for my beatmap.

it 's alicemagic too but it's remix songs http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15780

i hope your map got ranked. Stars +

Thanks　Star~

★<

Last mod was 8 months ago. D:

[General]
With tags, you don't need to separate them with a comma, only a space. So set them to "frost-b-spec NatsumeRin"
Remove Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [.osb and full submit.
Also mfqa.png

[Skin]
comboburst-0 has a lot of un-needed transparency on it. Also, can you do a horizontal flip on it so she doesn't come out backwards?
comboburst-1 has the transparency on top that could be removed.

[Easy]
HP drain way too high. >< Lower it by 2 at least, possibly 3.
00:34:915 (7) - New combo
00:35:277 (8,9) - I am not a fan of stacks in easy difficulties - especially when they have a different rhythm than most of the notes before. Maybe do a long slider from 7 to 9?
00:46:481 (8) - New combo
00:47:566 (1) - Remove new combo
00:47:927 (2) - New combo
00:49:373 (4) - New combo. Also same comment as before: do a slider from 4 to 6 - it would play much better from an easy standpoint.
01:02:746 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:831 (3) - New combo. Bah, well, consider checking up on your combos to make sure they are more consistent and not too long for the difficulty.
01:25:518 (8,9,10) - May be better off as a repeat slider
01:20:457 (3,4) - Stacks involving sliders on easy... orz I don't like 'em. :<
Phew, the rest of the kiai is really hard for an easy. Please consider toning it down a little bit. Try longer sliders to make up for some beats and simplify things some.

[fbs's Normal]
00:50:638 (1) - Really really short for a normal diff. Consider using a slider instead.

[Hard]
Feels really overmapped, and some of the rhythms didn't feel right with the song like 00:29:855 (2,3,4) - , 00:35:277 (6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:22:897 (2) - , etc.
01:25:518 (1) - This spinner doesn't end in a good place. End it at 01:26:963 - or 01:27:686 - , though the latter may be pushing it for a hard difficulty.

[Rin's Taiko]
Wow, haven't seen a taiko diff from you in a while. :P End your kiai though.
Set the preview point the same as the other difficulties, please.
Add NatsumeRin to tags

[Insane]
Set the preview point the same as the other difficulties, please.
There are some spots that feel empty of hit sounds. Maybe go through this and see what you can spruce up.
00:26:602 - Strange this is the only difficulty with a break.
00:40:156 - Considering the amount of notes you use, I'm surprised there isn't a note here

In general, the majority of the maps felt kind of slow due to the really slow slider speeds compared to the semi-fast BPM. I know it's pretty far into this map's life to suggest a remap, but perhaps try to maybe augment what you've learned in the past 8 months of playing and perhaps apply that to this map set?

>Garven
fixed Normal diff!
thx!

and little changed!

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [fbs's Normal].osu

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