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DJ Melodie - Take Me Up To Heaven (Nightcore Mix)

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Luneko

lolcubes wrote:

Changed offset to 1308

[Hard]:
  1. 01:10:116 (1) - Remove new combo. nah
  2. 01:56:521 to 02:06:478 - These sliders don't fit into a "Hard" difficulty profile. I suggest you remove them and add jumps instead (or just do it like in the insane with small jumps). Something like this, but not exactly like it, this kinda looks crude and unimaginitive. Sorry I can't help you exactly here cause atm I don't have any ideas. :p its ok how it is right now imo
[Insane]:
  1. 00:18:732 (1) - I am not sure if this looks right. I would remove new combo from this note. no
  2. 01:56:521 to 02:06:478 - Just like in hard, this looks a bit too easy to fit an insane profile. You should definitely use jumps here. its not meant to be hard, it just fits the flow how it is
That's pretty much it, couldn't really find something big.
Good luck. :3 thx
GamerX4life
Ich finde die Beatmap ist sehr gut geworden :)
HakuNoKaemi
[deadbeat's Easy]:

Technically good.. was better if you played on slider

[Tenshi's Normal]:

use more triplets?

[Hard]:

Don't use double whistle like 00:37:578 (3) - , use it only in the start of the short slider.. for example

[Insane]:
00:33:133 (x) - copypaste 00:32:422 (6) -, move and rotate
00:33:845 (x) - ^
01:30:029 (x) - copypaste 01:29:318 (6) - , move and rotate
01:30:740 (x) - ^
02:16:968 (x) - copypaste 02:16:257 (6) - , move and rotate
02:17:679 (x) - ^
02:18:390 (x) - ^
Topic Starter
Luneko
Sry i like how it is
Nothing fixed
Sandpig
I think the map is fine.

but I personally think it goes with the lyric too much. it would be better if you use more notes to make your rhythm more complete.

sometimes I think I should make a hit , but there is nothing I can click, and I can't do anything but want until the next circle appears.
KingKrishna
source?
Topic Starter
Luneko
There is no source :V
OnosakiHito
Ich wollte mal fragen ob schon die SB in der Taiko diff. entfernt wurde?
Topic Starter
Luneko
jap
OnosakiHito
Alles klar! Danke dir.~
loveFantasy
hi~sorry for being a bit late

[General]
- add KIAI section(s)?

[Easy]
- following vocal too much thus may be a little difficult for newbies since it's changeful
<00:58:203> add finish
<01:08:871, 01:09:227> map these white ticks?
<01:27:362> add a note
<01:56:521> add finish
<01:57:944> remove clap
<02:01:500> add a note
<02:04:344> ^
<02:06:478> remove clap
<02:07:545> ^
<02:07:900> use finish instead
- the whistle-during-slider in last part is a bit noisy for me

[Normal]
- well done
- suggest slider tick rate 0.5

[Hard]
<00:32:600> end spinner here and map the blank space after?
<00:36:689> circle and slider from 00:36:867 sounds better, and you can remove whistle on 00:36:245 and add on 00:36:423 and 00:36:867 if you do change the slider, same to the later combo
<00:58:203> finish and delete whistle on endpoint
<02:07:900> finish instead

[Insane]
<00:18:732> remove new combo
<00:58:203> finish
<01:56:521..> 4 beats blank space during combos are empty..
<02:27:369> (6) move toward top-right? maybe x:328 y:144

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Topic Starter
Luneko

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~sorry for being a bit late

[General]
- add KIAI section(s)? - i think the SB has enough flashing things

[Easy]
- following vocal too much thus may be a little difficult for newbies since it's changeful
<00:58:203> add finish - k
<01:08:871, 01:09:227> map these white ticks? - added a slider
<01:27:362> add a note - k
<01:56:521> add finish - this part is fine how it is
<01:57:944> remove clap - ^
<02:01:500> add a note - ^
<02:04:344> ^ - ^
<02:06:478> remove clap - ^
<02:07:545> ^ - ^
<02:07:900> use finish instead - ^
- the whistle-during-slider in last part is a bit noisy for me

[Hard]
<00:32:600> end spinner here and map the blank space after? - nah looks good to me
<00:36:689> circle and slider from 00:36:867 sounds better, and you can remove whistle on 00:36:245 and add on 00:36:423 and 00:36:867 if you do change the slider, same to the later combo - i like it
<00:58:203> finish and delete whistle on endpoint - k
<02:07:900> finish instead -k

[Insane]
<00:18:732> remove new combo - k
<00:58:203> finish - k
<01:56:521..> 4 beats blank space during combos are empty.. - it's ok this part isnt meant to be hard or something, just relaxing
<02:27:369> (6) move toward top-right? maybe x:328 y:144 - k
RobotoRaccoon
Star~ :)
Because I can.
Because it's Nightcore.
Because I like it!
:D
deadbeat

loveFantasy wrote:

[General]
- add KIAI section(s)?
Kiai isn't needed..don't add it to my diff..i refuse to use it without good reasons

loveFantasy wrote:

[Easy]
- following vocal too much thus may be a little difficult for newbies since it's changeful
I'm sorry D:
i'd remap..but i really can't :(
akrolsmir
Nice song, though I prefer those with faster vocals.

General:

Combo colors 1 and 3 seemed too similar. Making it somewhat confusing. Try adding a lighter color in between or changing them to:
Combo1 : 0,0,125
Combo2 : 0,150,220
Combo3 : 25,50,255

SB: Although I'm not very experienced in this it seems better if each line of text was placed a line below and slightly right to the one before it, creating an effect of temporal motion. Perhaps continue until "I hide", which reaches about the middle of the screen, and then start over with the next set of lines.

Example: (Just an idea of how it might look, not fine-tuned at all)
SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"text1.png",320,240
M,0,92673,,240,55
S,0,92673,,0.45
F,0,92673,93029,0,1
F,0,93029,94095,1
F,0,94095,94451,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"text2.png",320,240
M,0,94807,,271,81
S,0,94807,,0.45
F,0,94807,95162,0,1
F,0,95162,96940,1
F,0,96940,97296,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"text3.png",320,240
M,0,97651,,301,110
S,0,97651,,0.45
F,0,97651,98007,0,1
F,0,98007,99785,1
F,0,99785,100141,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"text4.png",320,240
M,0,100496,,286,135
S,0,100496,,0.45
F,0,100496,100852,0,1
F,0,100852,101385,1
F,0,101385,101741,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"text5.png",320,240
M,0,101919,,307,162
S,0,101919,,0.45
F,0,101919,102274,0,1
F,0,102274,102630,1
F,0,102630,102985,1,0


Deadbeat's Easy:
No changes. Also, I think following the vocal is fine; IMO "Easy" doesn't mean newbies have to be able to pass it in one go; a couple of attempts and they should get the hang of it, it's not that confusing.

Tenshi's Normal:
Fine. Although I actually found the beginning following the beat more confusing after playing through Easy.

Hard:
... No visible problems... Nice sliders.

Insane:
Yeah, I guess my modding of this song will be limited to making slight visual tweaks. (This seems flawless after examination with halftime).

Very well put-together. Starred!
Topic Starter
Luneko
Thank you, Fixed the Combos
I like the Text in the SB how it is ^.^
LesTrucsRoses
Hard
00:26:911 (3,4,5) - Either move the 4 so that it isn't overlayed like that, or move the 5 so the end isn't overlayed like that.
01:14:205 (x) - Add a beat here. Whistle hitsound.
01:19:895 (x) - Add a beat here. Whistle hitsound.

Insane
No problems found.
Topic Starter
Luneko
Nothing fixed
But thank you anyways
Cirno
Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Insane]
00:31:533 (3,4,5,6) - I guess you're going for symmetry? Make it like this then. Remember to make the second slider with Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R.
00:35:445 - From this part on many notes are not promptly hidden, I wonder if you have intended to do so? If not, please adjust the positions of the notes to make sure they are promptly hidden:
Changes
00:37:401 (3) - hide under 00:36:423 (5)
00:41:134 (1) - hide the start of this slider under the start of 00:40:245 (3)
00:44:246 (2) - hide under 00:42:824 (2)
00:45:224 (1) - hide slider end under 00:44:513 (3)
00:45:935 (3) - hide under 00:44:957 (6)
00:47:357 (2) - under the start of 00:46:113 (4)
00:54:647 (4,5) - under the end of 00:53:758 (1)
00:54:914 (6) - under 00:53:491 (6). There's a 1-grid difference
00:56:603 (1) - hide the slider end under 00:55:892 (3)
Others okay I think
I would have liked this diff more if you added some jumps and not just DS DS DS >.>

[Hard]
I think it's fine, though imo it's more like a [Normal] than [Hard].

[Tenshi's Normal]
Nice~ Just one thing:
01:21:317 (1) - imo It would be better if the red control point is at the center of the ball at 01:21:406, like this:
Same goes with 01:22:739 (4).

[deadbeat's Easy]
Lower volume...
00:13:042 - add beat here plz, it's very confusing now. Make it a slider until 00:13:220, or just add a circle here.
00:16:598 - add circle please
00:16:776 (2) - that normal-hitfinish x.x remove or lower volume
00:20:688 (1) - move to 00:20:688 (1)
00:36:512 (3) - this circle is misplaced. place it at 00:36:512 (3). If you think blue ticks are too hard for beginners just place a slider.
00:41:134 - add circle please
also some occurrences later similiar to those, I'm not going to list them all.
x.x omg the normal whistles screwed my ears

Star~

Topic Starter
Luneko

Cirno wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:533 (3,4,5,6) - I guess you're going for symmetry? Make it like this then. Remember to make the second slider with Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R. - kk
00:35:445 - From this part on many notes are not promptly hidden, I wonder if you have intended to do so? If not, please adjust the positions of the notes to make sure they are promptly hidden: - its suposed to be like that
I would have liked this diff more if you added some jumps and not just DS DS DS >.> - maybe next time :3

[Hard]
I think it's fine, though imo it's more like a [Normal] than [Hard]. - It was intendet to be a normal but i named it hard because tenshi made a normal

[deadbeat's Easy]
Lower volume... - sounds good imo :V
00:13:042 - add beat here plz, it's very confusing now. Make it a slider until 00:13:220, or just add a circle here. - doesnt look confusing to me
00:16:598 - add circle please - nah
00:16:776 (2) - that normal-hitfinish x.x remove or lower volume - removed first finish
00:20:688 (1) - move to 00:20:688 (1) - nah
00:36:512 (3) - this circle is misplaced. place it at 00:36:512 (3). If you think blue ticks are too hard for beginners just place a slider. - looks good imo
00:41:134 - add circle please - k
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Slowmotion_old
deadbeat's easy

Adjust the volume for 35% ( your volume are so high >.< ) IMO

00:16:776 (2) - i don't like >.<
00:29:044 (1) - remove the whistles
00:51:802 (1) - ^
02:19:991 (1) - ^ Omg

Tenshi's normal

02:03:278 (3,4) - i don't like :X
02:06:122 (2,3) - ^

Hard

00:17:665 (1,2,3) - use your mind. you can make combos better then. ( sorry for bad english >< )
00:26:911 (3,4,5) - it's so confuse ( imo )
01:14:561 (1,2) - use your mind ~
02:29:947 (1) - ugly slider D:

Ono's taiko oni

i don't know how to mod taiko diffs D:

Insane

00:23:355 (1,2,3) - ugly combo ><
00:26:199 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:250 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:095 (1,2,3) - ^ o my god

Confuse diff ( insane )

done~ + Star
Topic Starter
Luneko

Slowmotion wrote:

deadbeat's easy

Adjust the volume for 35% ( your volume are so high >.< ) IMO

00:16:776 (2) - i don't like >.< - i like
00:29:044 (1) - remove the whistles - no, fits well
00:51:802 (1) - ^ - k
02:19:991 (1) - ^ Omg - omfg k

Hard

00:17:665 (1,2,3) - use your mind. you can make combos better then. ( sorry for bad english >< ) - its ok
00:26:911 (3,4,5) - it's so confuse ( imo ) - then dont play hard :V
01:14:561 (1,2) - use your mind ~ - no im stupid
02:29:947 (1) - ugly slider D: - looks not to bad, its ok

Insane

00:23:355 (1,2,3) - ugly combo >< - no
00:26:199 (1,2,3) - ^ -no
01:20:250 (1,2,3) - ^ -no
01:23:095 (1,2,3) - ^ o my god -no

Confuse diff ( insane ) - its supposed to be hard
Leorda
Hi hi

General
* Crop the unnecessary transparent space in all your SB elements, or the gameplay will running poorly for low PC

deadbeat's Easy
00:37:578 (1) - Place the repeating slider on white tick? Since the head slider is following the trumpet?
02:21:946 (2,3,4) - Is that necessary to add finish for this?
02:31:370 (1) - End at 02:32:081?

Tenshi's Normal
00:22:643 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
00:58:559 (1) - A little bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff

Hard
* Some short slider (e.g. 00:36:156 (2)) have a whistle, but I think it's better if you remove the whistle at tail slider, so it's keep clean to hear

01:09:760 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay

Insane
* Enable the epilepsy warning please

I don't have any ticket to heaven :o
Topic Starter
Luneko

Leorda wrote:

Hi hi

General
* Crop the unnecessary transparent space in all your SB elements, or the gameplay will running poorly for low PC -i rly dont want to do everything, and i haven seen someone where it lags so if no other people complain about this i will leave it hop if is sry. also the SB Load is under 3 everytime and 3 isnt much :V

Hard
* Some short slider (e.g. 00:36:156 (2)) have a whistle, but I think it's better if you remove the whistle at tail slider, so it's keep clean to hear -sounds good to me

01:09:760 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay -works good IMO

Insane
* Enable the epilepsy warning please -k

I don't have any ticket to heaven -buy one 666$ on amazon :3
Tenshi-nyan
Updates... inklusive n Paar Spielerein an den Hitsounds.

BTW, das Timing is falsch. Gegen Ende des Songs is irgenwie alles völlig off-beat ._.

Würde ma sagen

00:41:134 - da ne neue inherited line mit 169 BPM
und alles resnappen + doppelt checken
hab noch nix am Timing geändert

GAAAAH hol jemanden der gut im timen is. Das timing so wies jez is auf jeden fall völlig FALSCH

http://puu.sh/1CJm

Nochwas:
Reduzier die Lautstärke der Hitsounds... nix sollte lauter als 70% sein...

Why did no-one ever notice that the timing is fucked up? ._.
Topic Starter
Luneko
Da is nix off-beat wtf?

Updated + Hitsounds etwas leiser gemacht
Shiirn
Offset 1,238
BPM 170.000
resnap all notes
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 168.750
Offset: 1312

Artist: Diana Fox
DJ Melodie goes to tags =w=

Nice song ~

btw, there are over 5.00x SB loads in some parts, take care.
Tenshi-nyan

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 168.750
Offset: 1312

Artist: Diana Fox
DJ Melodie goes to tags =w=

Nice song ~

btw, there are over 5.00x SB loads in some parts, take care.
That timing sounds just right to me. Told ya the timing was off, Rindi.
I checked my diff, and updating the diff with the new timing didn't cause any trouble with badly snapped notes, so go ahead and update it~

And the SB, there are elements with 9.00x SB loads in it~

Topic Starter
Luneko

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 168.750
Offset: 1312
- kk fixed
Artist: Diana Fox
DJ Melodie goes to tags =w= - no it wont, its the nightcored version of the song by DJ Melodie, but i can add Diana Fox to the tags

Nice song ~

btw, there are over 5.00x SB loads in some parts, take care. - not here, but i have to redo the SB anyway because of the timing change
Dark_Ai
Hey :D

Ich durfte ja die map modden, aber ich denke das ich es nicht verbessern kann ): Finde die Map toll ;D
Also bekommst du nur nen Star~!
und Viel glück :)
Topic Starter
Luneko
Uploading Now

Redone the SB
With less effects, doenst look so good now but i rly dont want to redo everything.
Also the SB Load never goes over 3,64 now.
Selee
Again, Artist: Diana Fox

Do a little more research and read this website plz ._.

also this...Read the left top words of the album cover..


now my timing worth a kds or not? lol
Topic Starter
Luneko
You dont understand me.
The Original Song is by Diana Fox.
DJ Melodie Made a techno version out of it.
And the versio by DJ Melodie got Nightcored.
So DJ Melodie is the Artist.
Tanzklaue
star ^^
Anonymus_old
Star :3
kurohana
star :33
DerekMcD
Hello.

  • Blue: You must fix this.
    Red: You better fix it!
    Orange: Screenshot ahead.
    Black: Just suggestions though.

    deadbeat's Easy
  1. 01:07:267 (2): Move this to x:248 y:192 then a little bit spacing.
  2. 02:23:534 (4): Move one grid down.

    Tenshi's Normal
  3. Have nothing to say...

    Hard
  4. 01:09:756 (3): Maybe you could turn off both snaps and stack it straight right under (2).

    Insane
  5. Have nothing to say...
That's it and here's your star. I'm about to be addicted to Nightcore...

Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
Luneko

kokoroanime wrote:

deadbeat's Easy
[*]01:07:267 (2): Move this to x:248 y:192 then a little bit spacing. - nah, spacing is correct
[*]02:23:534 (4): Move one grid down. - k

Hard
[*]01:09:756 (3): Maybe you could turn off both snaps and stack it straight right under (2). - forgot to do that thx
ziin
[deadbeat]
Not a fan of this difficulty or the rhythms presented within. It's very hard to follow, and I don't know how to fix it.

[tenshi]
00:33:578 (4,5) - circle, (repeating) slider

[hard]
00:36:689 (1,1) - sliding over beat 1 is very disorienting. Coupled with the short sliders on 3, it's just tedious to get this right. Something like this would be much better: http://puu.sh/2nGl
That's the only real problem, but it repeats a bunch.

[insane]
01:58:289 - this is awfully empty. Just fill in some notes.
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