01:34:048 - I don't think a Kiai fountain fits here.
and
00:46:005 (8) - Hidden for me.

Sorry to say it, but you need an easier difficulty.

[Down to Up]
I understand why so many sliders, but the problem is that, almost all the notes aren't far from the center. It may seem a bit boring for other people.

[Wrong to Wrong]
Woah, be careful with this difficulty. I think I understand why "Wrong to Wrong", but everything looks like a complete mess. o_o;

Why don't you use the custom hitsound? Use hitnormal-normal as hitsoft-clap.

I don't see that White.png is being used

I see a silent sectionpass.wav in the folder (awesome, by the way), but what about sectionfail.png?

03:03:075 (4,2) - Don't overlap xp
03:04:541 (3,3) - ^

*I'd change the aqua/light blue hit color to perhaps lavender or yellow to match the background better

*I really don't see anything "wrong" with this diff, but parts of it seem a little bit sloppy. There are overlapping circles/sliders that are kinda messy and I would like to see some better patterns out of everything.

1. 02:37:053 (9) - New combo here.

1. These counter-clockwise sliders, are not curved so well.
2. Too many new combos. It's annoying.

1. Storyboard elements (after [Down to Up] ends). I would set them diff. specific for [Right to Left], and [CounterClockwise]. Reason is simple - these elements, are useless in [Down to Up].

Why's there different BGs for each diff?

The only problem I have with the mapping is the silenced notes in Right to Left. Silenced notes give the impression that they shouldn't be there, and most of yours wouldn't sound bad if they were just softer. It'd be less confusing and sound better like that IMO

Also, the muted slider ends in left to right feel out of place and awkward.

Combo1 : 100,100,100
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 128,128,128

With the way you chose to switch between sound sets on sliders, it sounds really weird hearing parts of the slider slide half-there, then gone, and back again. Unless this is your intention, in which I would propose that it sounds rather wrong to m- ooooh.

jericho2442 wrote:

weird mapping style done in a lazy way.......srry just a lot of not needed copy paste

i get the feels some of this map is meant to be 1/3 (1/6) but meh i guess it still plays fine

first off i totally agree with Garven, the way the slider works at parts like [crosswise] 00:38:721 (1) - sounds HORRID, having half a slider normal then half of it silent no thanks >_> I tried to highlight the "WROoooNG" phrase. But OK, I fixed it. Redownload map.

CrossWise

get rid of the not used timing points please 00:54:748, 00:55:114, 00:55:480 .......ok there is LOADS of timing sections you need to delete, please go through the whole map and get rid of all the ones you dont use ok

01:54:916 (4) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern ok

Down to Up

Combo Colours are too close, make them a bit more different I don't think so. Changed a bit.

02:19:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - come on dude, dont you think this is taking copy paste a bit TOO far, i understand the style your doing, but still at least make your patterns change a little bit >_> ok. I remaked this place.

Right to Left

00:50:077 (7) - replace with a single note, sounds and plays MUCH better, atm it is going on one note to far for the part you are following I enlarged sliders instead of this
00:51:542 (3) - same here
00:53:008 (6) - same here
00:54:473 (1) - this spinner plays BAD, it just dont suit having to spin here, a slider insted suits much better ok
01:17:918 (3) - newcombo, your breaking the pattern you used last time ok
01:25:244 (7) - replace with a single note, sounds and plays MUCH better, atm it is going on one note to far for the part you are followin
01:26:709 (3) - same here
01:28:175 (6) - same here
01:31:105 (4) - same here
01:32:571 (3) - same here

(suggestion) i think this suits better ok
02:22:390 (4) - newcombo
02:28:252 (4) - newcombo
02:34:113 (4) - newcombo
02:39:974 (4) - newcombo

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kudo for trying something new although with more original patterns this could of been epic, as it is its great sorry, I'm very bad mapper for any original patterns

1. Those three difficulties have different Combo Colors setup. Its not a good idea to blend the colors with the background. ._. Just stick with one Combo Color setup and apply it to all the difficulties.

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Sorry for the delay. My computer was wasn't working for a couple of days but now its okay....I hope.

General:

1. Those three difficulties have different Combo Colors setup. Its not a good idea to blend the colors with the background. ._. Just stick with one Combo Color setup and apply it to all the difficulties.

I don't think so. But if these colors are unrankable, I will change it

CrossWise:
02:19:460 (2)-Add a clap on the end of that slider? noo

Down to up:
Nothing I can point out.

Right to Left:
Same here on this one.

Nice work on this map set you have.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!

rust45 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod

[SB]
Unless I'm mistaken, the SB in every map is exactly the same. If this is the case, why not put the SB in the .osb and not in all the maps? It would make the .osu's look cleaner and save some room. it's slightly different in CrossWise

[Right to Left]
I don't really like the beginning with all the breaks.

I couldn't really find anything too wrong with the maps. But Right to Left's style didn't really appeal to me much. The map is fine, I just don't really like the map. Anyway, have a star for having a rankable map.

Krisom wrote:

Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:46 pm (2 weeks ago)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Krisom wrote:

Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:46 pm (2 weeks ago)

Oh my god.

Let's fix this.

EDIT: i just noticed the extra diff in the description...
IT'S GREAT WHY DIDN'T YOU ADD IT AWWWWW