1. CHAS' Hard (4.82 stars, 385 notes)
2. Easy (2.57 stars, 165 notes)
3. Normal (4.34 stars, 302 notes)
4. vincerio's Insane (4.99 stars, 508 notes)

digiaria wrote:

offset不准确

offset:3,135

CHAS wrote:

厄....Artist: OToGi 8->OToGi8 (?) 這個無誤

[easy]
00:40:657 (1) distance
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:48:734 (7) 向左移一格(?)
00:49:695 (1) distance
00:55:849 (1) ^
01:00:465 (7,8) ^
01:03:157 (2,3) ^(?)

[Normal]
00:12:195 (1) distance
00:24:503 (1) ^
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:55:080 (5) ^
00:58:926 (1) ^

^^all fixed(大概吧...)

嗯 這是你第一張beatmap 加油哦~~~~
如果你不介意 我能否幫你添加一個Hard難度? 這個就勞煩前輩了

Vikon wrote:

[CHAS's H]
1) 把H改做Hard 囧? wwwwww... 好吧wwwwww
2) timing point 請置於note前面，不要與note重疊，避免誤打而失去效用。 咦咦...原來我放了在note上www

Charles445 wrote:

CHAS's Hard

SPOILER

00:49:852 through 00:54:275
I know these are perfectly allowed, but I hate the crap out of them.
01:02:160 through 01:05:045
^^
01:20:429 New combo
01:21:968 Remove new combo
01:20:622 Use Linear Slider
02:15:622 ^^
02:21:391 ^^
02:23:314 ^^
02:25:237 ^^
02:26:775 ^^
02:36:968 ^^

Nice Difficulty.

Nice map, star.

Charles445 wrote:

Easy ALL FIXED.

SPOILER

00:31:968 New Combo
00:32:737 Remove new combo
00:33:506 New Combo
00:34:275 Remove new combo
00:35:045 New Combo
00:35:814 Remove new combo
00:36:583 New Combo
00:46:968 ^^

It's too short and dull, make it longer and spice it up
I adimit that it is dull and I will try to spice it up. But I won't make it longer...

Normal ALL FIXED.

SPOILER

00:12:929 Use Linear Slider
00:25:237 ^^

Nice difficulty.

Nice map, star.

Fight69 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]

Fine, but you should add some break ! >.<

Fight69 wrote:

[General]

Damn ! You need to reencode your mp3 (320 kbit/s)
Try asking someone about that :/
Look this topic : viewtopic.php?f=60&t=36657&start=0
The mp3 I used is encoded VBR(average 214kbps). It should be fine.

[Easy]

Circles are a bit too close between them IMO <--you are not the first one who mentioned it...
Exemple : 00:55:814 (1,2,3,4), a bit hard to read

00:09:660 (4) - New combo
00:18:891 (1) - This note appear too fast after the spinner for an Easy !
00:40:045 (1,1,1) - I don't understand these new combo... :/
00:43:506 (1) - ^
^^ALL FIXED.
[Normal]

00:37:352 (1,2,3,4) - Try to do a nice pattern like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31832
00:46:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not really fan about jumps on a Normal... :/
01:14:275 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:045 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing about jumps here
^^I think jumps are all right there... others are fixed.

Disoy wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:43:121 (6) - 加個hitclap
01:10:814 (1) - ^

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO, sorry for delay

[General]
1) Title : Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [I-pop Ver.], To avoid from duplicate map because changing Title/Artist, First, change the title to "Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [I-pop Ver.]", DON'T QUIT/EXIT FROM EDITIOR, and then, full submit

2) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, you need to lower a bit rate, or ask James2250 or #modhelp

[Easy]
*) If this an easy diff, please remove or replace short slider, it's really inapropriate for easy diff. For example : 00:13:122 (3) and 00:40:045 (1)
*) Please map this until end of song, half mapped is stupid

00:11:198 (2) - Whistle at slider trace is odd for me, remove whistle and add whistle at start, all repeating slider, and end of slider
00:18:891 (1) - A little bit too far from spinner

[Normal]
00:12:929 (5) - Linear slider are stupid, use Bezier
00:25:237 (5) - ^
01:22:737 (3) - Ugly slider, use Bezier
01:51:198 (1) - Too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff
02:04:660 (5,1) - Spacing?

[CHAS's Insane] <--it's a hard difficulty.
Fine

Nice song
STAR

Joon wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:37:737 (2) - add clap
00:38:506 (4) - ^
00:39:275 (2) - ^
01:00:429 (7) - Start Notes add finish
01:01:968 (11) - add finish
02:00:621 (4) - 2,4,6 remove clap

karenying wrote:

Easy

lead in → 0
00:17:352(7) - whistle (slider end)
00:13:122(3) - New combo
00:14:660(5) - ^
00:28:122(4) - whistle
00:24:660(3) - whistle (reverse)
00:36:583(1) - whistle
00:41:006(3) - 搬去 00:40:622
00:41:755(1) - 由00:41:006開始
01:08:122(1,2) - 不要這兩note, spinner 從01:07:833開始
01:17:352(2) - New combo
01:33:122(4) - ^
01:35:814(7) - whistle (slider end)
01:48:314(1,2,3,4) - 建議用 normal hitsound,音量約90~80%
02:15:045(1,2,3,4) - 難讀的擺法,Easy 不適用
02:31:583(1) - 從02:31:102開始

Normal

hitsound弄得像Easy較好
ugly slider
lead in → 0
00:06:198(x) - 加note,whistle
00:12:352(2) - whistle
00:12:929(5) - ugly slider
00:16:198(5) - ^
00:24:660(2) - whistle
00:25:045(4) - ugly slider
00:28:122(1) - whistle
00:46:583(1,2,3,4) - spacing <--這裏想jump的...
接下來你懂的 <--我不懂.

karenying wrote:

CHAS's Hard

lead in → 0
00:06:198(1) - whistle or normal hitsound
00:23:122(5,6,7,8,9) - 太多clap,好吵
00:28:122(5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:37:160(1) - add whistle no clap

jericho2442 wrote:

CHAS's Hard
00:49:852 (1,1,1) - remove the note at 00:53:698 and give your sliders this timing no.


i kinda think theres too many spinners in this diff

justnobody wrote:

i realized my sliders are tasteless...

yongtw123 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
Like jericho2442 said there's a bit of spinner abuse here :/

00:49:852 (1,1,1) - yep, same spot. Do consider mapping it. Rhythm goodness. done(?)
01:02:160 (1,1) - ^
01:20:621 (2) - this slider is off the rhythm, consider fixing it? done
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - place these better
02:09:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is a bit boring, have some variations? done
02:17:545 (1) - meh...
02:19:083 (1) - mehhhh...

yongtw123 wrote:

justnobody wrote:

i realized my sliders are tasteless...

I really hope you can fix that lol
Use more geometry in both slider-shaping and your patterns.
And due to this I will only do rhythm-based modding.

Anyways, as requested:

Overall:
Ehm, let's choose a happier BG shall we? lol~

[Easy]
Use a larger distance spacing (e.g. 1.0~1.2x), it's easier (and more eye-appealing).

00:21:968 (3,1) - make (3) a slider and (1) a note; namely switch the two's positions on timeline
02:03:506 (x) - map this break? (or at least put a note 02:03:506?)
02:15:045 (1) - I suggest this:[attachment=1:4b776]sc_01.jpg[/attachment:4b776]
02:30:045 (1) - spacing too close

[Normal]
Break times are somewhat strange and longer than [Easy]?

00:25:045 (4) - Hmm, how about this? [attachment=0:4b776]sc_02.jpg[/attachment:4b776]
00:26:775 (1) - don't repeat that much, map some of it
00:28:506 (x) - this break is too long, map it like in [Easy]
01:05:045 (1) - end in 01:08:122? (Actually I suggest not put a spinner here, delay it and map here like in [Easy].)
01:22:737 (3) - shorten to previous white tick and add a note 01:23:314?
01:23:891 (6) - start the slider on 01:23:698 instead?
01:32:929 (x) - add a note here?
01:36:198 (7) - start slider 01:36:006?
01:38:122 (x) - consider mapping this break?

1. All I'm getting is Easy and Normal. =( Try to full submit with all those 3 difficulties.
2. The bitrate for the mp3 is over 192 kbps ._. That's unrankable. =( Try to convert this at 192 or lower.

James2250 wrote:

CHAS's Hard:
Why audio lead in? 1000->0 done
No break in a 2:30 map? I would include a least one in the middle somewhere
Don't really like the spinners one after the other
OD +1? no.

Roddie wrote:

CHAS's Hard (I downloaded this difficulty separately, keep in mind.) :
00:43:506 (1)-Add a finish.
00:48:122 (6, 8)-Add finishes.
00:55:622 (6)Put a New combo there? And add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:01:006 (8)-^?
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish.
01:56:391 (8)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (3)-Add a finish.
02:08:122 (6)-^
02:25:045 (3)-^
02:26:583 (3)-^
02:28:122 (3)-^

James2250 wrote:

I don't get CHAS's Hard when I download, try and do full submit after this (I downloaded it separately)
Make sure the preview point is the same on every difficulty
End final spinner at the same place on your difficulties? fixed.

Easy:
Stuff like 00:40:622 (2,3) might confuse beginners with small spacing like that, maybe make some of them sliders
Don't really like how the spacing looks and I would increase it, but it has been mentioned before~
Ticks look odd on alot of the sliders to me Tried tick rate 2.
AR -1 for Easy?
00:16:198 (1,1) - try and avoid anti jumps if possible
01:07:833 (1) - start at 01:07:929?
Map isn't too bad I just think it looks pretty clumped together in general
all fixed.
Normal:
Might want to tone a few of those streams down for a Normal killed most streams.
00:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:41:775 (1) - semi short for a Normal it's okay i think...
00:56:391 (3) - add note
02:06:583 (1) - so many anchor points and could prob look slightly better~ oh...
others are fixed.
Maps don't look too bad
Star'ed

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Blue: Suggestions
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed

General:

1. All I'm getting is Easy and Normal. =( Try to full submit with all those 3 difficulties.
2. The bitrate for the mp3 is over 192 kbps ._. That's unrankable. =( Try to convert this at 192 or lower.

reencoded. problems should be fixed.
Easy:
00:49:083 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
00:55:814 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
01:51:198 (1)-^
01:57:352 (1)-^
02:25:045 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?


Normal:
00:49:660 (2)-Add a finish.
00:55:622 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (2)^
02:25:045 (3)-Add a finish?
02:26:583 (3)^
02:28:122 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
02:28:122 (2)-^
all fixed.
Cool song and Hard looks promising

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. -_- i thought you ignored me...

[Easy]
00:39:660 (5,1) - These might work better as a slider - with the really low distance snap it's hard to tell the rhythm change. changed.
00:43:506 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'll probably have an easier time mapping through this instead of trying to balance it out. Newer players have a hard time realigning after a spinner.shortened the slider to make it a bit easier.
00:49:083 (1) - End this at 00:49:660 - fixed.
00:57:160 (3,4) - I really don't like to see stacks on easy diffs - especially when there's a slider on the bottom. Please try something else.killed circle 00:57:160 (3).
01:07:929 (1) - Start this at 01:08:122 - fixed.
02:15:237 (2,3) - May work better as a slider fixed.
Felt kind of slow due to the really low distance snap. :/

[Normal]
Some of the shorter streams like 00:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - are kind of pushing it for a normal.
00:41:775 (1) - Kinda short of a spinner for Normal, and the note after it is still really too soon. :/ make it like the easy diff.
00:55:622 (1) - I kind of expected this to go until the start of the 2 slider due to the lyrics...fixed?
01:51:198 (1) - Soon after a spinner again. Try to give at least two beats after a spinner for a normal at this BPM.make it like the last one.
02:16:006 (2) - I know it's going with the synth, but it still feels awkward to play this note.changed it to a slider.

[CHAS's Hard]
Just my opinion here, but it felt as if there were waaay too many spinners.
Also would have been nice to have a short break or two. 01:10:045 - to 01:14:275 - would have been a good spot
Jumps might be a bit difficult for the spread, but for the map itself they're fine.
Otherwise, this is nice~

This is pretty nice for your first map, justnobody.

j35u5891221 wrote:

sorry for delaying... T_T

Here's my mod...

[easy]

SPOILER

- Increase Slider Speed to 0.8, or Slider Tick to 0.5 slider tick changed to 0.5
- 00:06:198 (1) - Add Finish instead of Whistle (?)
- 00:13:122 (2) - i suggest a minimal (really minimal) fix...something like this
- 00:16:198 (1) - i suggest fix this slider like this.
- 00:40:814 (3) - why not to overlap with 00:40:622 (2) - ? ...
- 00:46:583 (1) - 1 grid to the left (lvl3)
- 00:57:352 (3) - 1 gid up and then 1 to the left (lvl3)
- 01:36:198 (-) - instead of that break, i suggest to put a spinner, which starts from that time mentioned to 01:38:122 and put a finish.
- 01:40:429 (1) - Remove New Combo
- 01:43:506 (1) - ^
Nothing more noticeable.

others are all fixed.

[Normal]

SPOILER

- 00:16:006 (6) - move 4 grids to left and 2 down (lvl3)
- 00:25:237 (5) - That slider is awful. Please fix it... that's really awful. (should be) fixed.
- 00:28:506 (-) - put a Spinner.
- 00:33:506 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right (lvl3)
- 00:35:045 (2) - Move 3 grid up (lvl3) (?)
- 00:40:237 (5) - Remove New Combo
- 00:48:122 (5,6) - Move 1 grid to the left, keeping overlap of circle 6 over 5.
- 00:57:352 (4) - fix that slider, something like this
- 01:23:698 (6) - ^ this
- 01:33:121 (5) - Move 1 grid to the left and 1 up (lvl3)
- 01:46:583 (4) - Move 1 Grid Down and 1 to left (lvl3)
- 01:54:275 (1,2,3) - Organize this pattern, like the image.
- 01:58:121 (3) - move 1 grid to te right (lvl3)
nothing more noticeable...

perhaps some minor grid positioning not fixed though. i forgot some when i write this.

Star and Good Luck!!~~ ^^

Garven wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
Just my opinion here, but it felt as if there were waaay too many spinners. lol
Also would have been nice to have a short break or two. 01:10:045 - to 01:14:275 - would have been a good spot no.
Jumps might be a bit difficult for the spread, but for the map itself they're fine.
Otherwise, this is nice~

LKs wrote:

CHAS's Hard

[00:12:160] no clap
[00:12:352] clap
[00:12:929] whistle
[00:13:314] whistle
[00:13:506] no clap
[00:14:083] whistle
[00:14:275] no clap
[00:14:660] clap
[00:15:045] whistle
[00:15:429] clap

j35u5891221 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]

SPOILER

- Difficulty name must be corrected. Could be "CHAS' Hard"
- 01:27:929 (3) - move 2 grids up (lvl3).
- 01:28:121 (4) - move 1 grid Left and then 2 Down (lvl3).
- 01:30:237 (3) - Make this slider curve. Fix it.
- 01:35:814 (8) - Move 2 grids down (lvl3) and 2 to the left (lvl3).
- 02:36:968 (6) - Rotate 45 degrees anticlockwise, but keep the same place (overlapped with circle 5).

frost-b-spec wrote:

hi~
nicemap~

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,coveradded. what's "cover"?

[Normal]
0:16:006(6) - spacing
2:08:698(2) - use distance snap x0.0 and off grid snap
all fixed.
+star

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for long delay...
Here my mod:
-----------------------------------------
Blue=Suggestion only
ReD=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in bold

[General]
Use offset should be 426?You decide to change or not(Please re-snap after you change it)
(Please read my mod first and change the offset at last)[/color]

[Easy]
00:11:198(2)-Too noise..Remove whistle
00:16:198(1)-Remove new combo ...IMO.It is too unly of this slider..
00:23:506(3)-Same as 00:11:198
00:28:506(x)-add a spinner until 00:30:045
00:40:237(1)-Remove new combo
00:40:622(2.3)-It is too difficult of easy..Maybe remove (3)?
00:41:006(x)-stop at 00:43:112?
01:06:583(3.4)-It is difficult to read for newbie
01:23:891(4)-Too noise..Remove whistle
01:23:891(4)-stop at 01:26:391
02:03:506(1)-Remove new combo
02:03:891(x)-weird break
02:31:006(4)-The spinner is too close of (4)
I just want to say...The arrangement is too chaos
(maybe because of some bugs in editor) the distance snap in Easy is ruined. now fixed and should look better.

[Normal]
Maybe you can add more hitsound?like whistle?
00:09:275(1)-Remove new combo
00:21:968(1)-^
00:31:198(1)-Make this slider more beautiful?
00:32:737(1)-^
00:34:275(1)-^
01:23:314(4.5.6)-uneven spacing
01:29:275(1)-remove clap
02:05:045(1~5)Horizontally with 02:03:506~02:04:660
Same as easy arrangement is too chose...I just suggest you play more Osu to have look to the another rank map
it is ok though (i think) but tried to make it a bit tidier.

kanpakyin wrote:

CKAS' Hard
01:17:352(2)-make it symmetrically with (1)
01:38:891(6)-New combo

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ohai

[Easy]
00:26:968 (3,5) - Add whistles
00:28:506 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:54:275 (1) - Add finish
00:55:814 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier and add a finish at the beginning
01:08:122 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:36:198 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:55:814 (3) - Add finish
02:03:506 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier this one looks weird for me...
others are fixed.

[Normal]
01:23:698 (5) - Reduce it by 1/1
01:29:275 (1) - Finish
all fixed.

Pretty nice map, I wish see it ranked soon
Star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
01:39:468 (7) - New combo
01:48:891 (7,8) - Better if you don't stack these notes
02:30:045 (8) - New combo
02:36:775 (5) - Add new combo

Vass_Bass wrote:

CHAS' Hard
good

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove letterbox (Storyboarding), it's already on your BG what? SB?

Easy
Circle size 1 (large)
01:34:660 (1) - add finish?
02:12:352 (5) - new combo
02:28:891 (3,4) - spacing how can i missed out this...
all fixed.
Normal
00:16:006 (6) - add whistle in the end point of the slider
00:17:352 (7) - remove whistle, add finish
00:18:698 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:37:160 (4) - add finish
all fixed.
CHAS' Hard
good

Star

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : +10 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

02:02:352 (4) - Unrankable slider,fix it.
i forgot i can not use short sliders...now fixed.

[Normal]

Looks good.


[CHAS' Hard]

Fine.


Star for now.