1. AkaShitsuji (2.48 stars, 107 notes)
2. KuroShitsuji (4.86 stars, 203 notes)
3. ShiroShitsuji (4.19 stars, 148 notes)

1. Source: KuroShitsuji II
2. Title: Bird (TV Size) 注意大小写和空格
3. 第一张BG分辨率好低 可能的话换一下吧
4. 设置一个preview point, 而且所有难度的必须一样

1. 这个摆放问题没问题 只是几乎没有hitsound嘛..

1. 00:47:621 (5,6) - 移到00:47:400
2. 01:13:426 (1,2,3,4) - 3和4的间距很诡异
3. 依然缺少hitsound

1. 00:03:510 (3) - 换circle, 或者是延长到00:03:730
2. 00:12:332 (1,2,3,4) - 1和2的间距
3. 缺少hitsound 可以拿clap打打拍子 互动感是很重要的

Colin Hou wrote:

忘了说了 Tags里面的内容用空格隔开就可以 以及和Title Source重复的内容不必再写进去

no kds for this post.

mukuhiba wrote:

=V=歌很好听啊，黑执事米粒==

Haneii wrote:

LOVE THIS SONG SOO MUCH. 3 am in the morning and I searched kuroshituji beatmaps because I was bored. Loved it! <3
I'm a huge kuroshitsuji fan (currently trying to get my second kuroshitsuji map ranked- kuroshitsuji 2 op shiver). I'll def mod your map as soon as I get free time , but for now ~STAR~ good job

ChrnoSaber wrote:

As the song is very nice and I do see your improving on your beatmap. So I am going to star this map.

zyqzyq wrote:

ChrnoSaber wrote:

As the song is very nice and I do see your improving on your beatmap. So I am going to star this map.

吾辈说中文就行了。。
你签名果然很亮，应该弄个英文版的给狼狼看！
话说你是不是故意装得很专业？

lovhin456 wrote:

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Hi! You requested my mod and I'm here!
- I love KuroShitsuji ~ <3
- All the stuff I tell you here are suggestions~
- This color means I'm not sure about it myself ~
- I'll probably mod your song in 2 or 1 post/s since my mods maybe very long or short, it depends~
General;
- Is the quality of the mp3 low or is the song like that ?? If is low then please get a better one because this is a nice song and the hitsounds are a bit too loud for the song and I can't hear very well.
- The blue for the color of the notes is a bit too bright...make it a bit darker.

AkaShitsuji;
- Hidden notes in easy+ are okk I guess but don't use too much~
- 00:01:084 (1) >> end this at the white tick 00:01:525
- 00:01:996 (2) >> move this to 00:01:745
- 00:02:848 >> end at 00:03:289
- 00:03:730 >> move to 00:03:510
- 00:04:612 >> end at 00:05:054
- 00:05:495 >> move to 00:05:274
- 00:11:450 >> end at 00:12:332
- 00:12:332 >> move to 00:12:552
- 00:20:713 >> delete a repetition
- 00:23:801 >> silence the end of the spinner
- 01:01:957 (4)(1) >> spacing
- 01:17:616 >> end at 01:18:499
- 01:18:499 >> move to 01:18:719
- 00:21:145 >> end at 01:22:027
- 01:22:027 >> move to 01:22:248
- 01:25:777 >> silence the end of this spinner
- Add kiai time at 00:29:315 end it at 00:34:167 // Add other kiai time at 00:55:781 and end it at 01:09:456
* More on my next post ~ // Star~

Toonypie wrote:

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Time to mod, here we go!

AkaShitsuji

Suggestions

(00:01:075) [Red 1, Blue 1, Gray 1] <Was this on purpose?> Make these last one white tick. (By shortening their ending points)
[For me, this is easier and better sounding than what it is now.]

(00:01:075) [Red 2, Blue 2, Gray 2] <same^> Put these at the red ticks right after their respective sliders.

No complains for this diff though.

ShiroShitsuji

Suggestions

(00:13:215) [3] Make the slider repeat at (00:13:430), (00:13:660), and end at (00:13:885)

KuroShitsuji

Nothing wrong here.

Mod done!

Great map, stars for all!

zyqzyq wrote:

Thank you for your modding and star~~it really helps.
I've modified the map as you say..But there're some items I'm not very sure,It doesn't matter if keep original...
- 00:20:713 >> delete a repetition
- 01:01:957 (4)(1) >> spacing
Anyway,it is really appreciate!Thank you again~~

No problem~ also just to clear things up, the difficulties are shown as easy (AkaShitsuji), hard (ShiroShitsuji) and insane (KuroShitsuji) not like you want I guess, so you may need to fix this

Haneii wrote:

Said I would Mod...but guess what...couldn't find anything technically wrong with it (yay! )

One thing that bothered me was the quality of the mp3. Here's a better one:
[attachment=0:368d2]BIRD.mp3[/attachment:368d2]
You don't have to use it, its up to you

Another thing I noticed was there is no kiai time :’( - maybe you can have the first kiai time at 00:29:315-00:41:335 and the second one at 00:57:546-01:09:566. edit: I STRONGLY SUGGEST THE KIAI TIME....you have a wonderful skin (those butterflies...and I want to see them FLY! XD).....if you do consider kiai time i suggest to remove the lightning..I think it's a little too much, although this is just a suggestion.


Good luck

lovhin456 wrote:

No problem~ also just to clear things up, the difficulties are shown as easy (AkaShitsuji), hard (ShiroShitsuji) and insane (KuroShitsuji) not like you want I guess, so you may need to fix this

zyqzyq wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

No problem~ also just to clear things up, the difficulties are shown as easy (AkaShitsuji), hard (ShiroShitsuji) and insane (KuroShitsuji) not like you want I guess, so you may need to fix this

Actually,since first editing this map,I'm not sure about the diff...I mean when I finally realized it's too hard for easy diff or too easy for hard diff,it has been finished..Then I don't know how to fix it.
May I change the song information,or have to rework each map?

Well, I don't really know how to change the diff, maybe...less notes ?? I don't know but as long as you say something is something then I guess is okk ~ don't worry

lovhin456 wrote:

Well, I don't really know how to change the diff, maybe...less notes ?? I don't know but as long as you say something is something then I guess is okk ~ don't worry

Azure_Kyte wrote:

SPOILER

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Overall]
-Timing feels a little fast. I suggest changing BPM to 135.90 .
-Once you do this, resnap all notes (Timing > Resnap all Notes)
-Repeat these steps with all difficulties.

- I noticed that the notes trail off the timing near the end of the song doing this, so check around 01:04:65 to make sure notes aren't on blue ticks. If they are, just select from that section to the end and move it forward 1/4 beat

[AkaShitsuji]
Make the timing fixes before changing any of this

- Since this is the easiest difficulty, spacing should be consistent. Some of the notes are close together physically but are a long way away timing wise. Enable Distance Snap and go through the map correcting this, please.
00:08:810 (4) - I suggest shortening this by 1/2 a beat, then putting the note after it back 1/2 a beat
00:41:702 - This break really ruins the atmosphere, especially since this is a relatively short map. Please map over it.


[ShiroShitsuji]
Make the timing fixes before changing any of this

00:27:151 (2) - Timing is halved without any warning whatsoever, which makes it really hard to tell which is a slow slider and what isn't. Please either storyboard a warning, ask somebody to do it (I wouldn't mind) or remove the 0.5x timing section.
00:36:430 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this style, in future do this more
00:48:359 - please map over this break~

[KuroShitsuji]
Make the timing fixes before changing any of this

00:01:083 (1) - This 1/4 note slider doesn't fit. Extend it by 1/2 to make it work
00:02:850 (1) - This 1/4 note slider doesn't fit. Extend it by 1/2 to make it work

Make sure you warn people when a half speed slider or double speed slider is coming

00:42:143 - Please map this break~
00:58:258 (4) - Note here?


For a first map, this isn't too shabby. Keep up the good effort

• - Open all osu files and add "Sliderborder : 0,0,0" under "[Colours]"
  
  - ...忘記能說中文了, 嗯..我覺得有必要降低整體音效音量
  - 中間的break map掉的話會更好._. 歌也不是很長呢
  - 另外請檢查你所有綠線在更改BPM後有沒有失效或是位置放的不好, 比如說有些原本要在note後面的綠線, 變成在note前面之類的

• - 如Rin所提到spacing...
  - clap部份我也聽不懂你是想要在1,3拍下還是2,4...而且也斷斷續續的, 希望下次不會出現這個狀況._.

• - 0.5x陷阱我恨你啊......
  - slider可以試試關掉grid snap慢慢拉點, 如果你有耐性的話..
  像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18474
  

NatsumeRin wrote:

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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
.osb文件没用到，删，重传。
因为有hitcircle和hitcircleoverlay，你还需要一个approachcircle.png。可以从皮肤里扒一个。
section-pass和规定大小不符合
你的soft-hitclap2声太大了。修低一些吧
修改音量/音效用的绿线不要压在note上而是要提前一些放置，以防玩家打快造成音效混乱。


[Aka]
spacing建议彻底重新查一遍。尤其是前面的
00:07:927 (2,3) - 比如这里
00:11:459 (3,1) - 再比如。。。
00:17:640 (2,3,4,5) - 再比如。。
00:55:830 (1,2,3,4) - 这里做一个渐强效果吧，每个note升一次音量就可
01:17:684 (3) - sliderwhistle消掉。在slider上加音效的时候不要偷懒直接点slider加，这样会改变slider的滑动音，要单点每拍加，后面不再提

[Shiro]
00:01:083 (1,2) - 很多slider比如这个，都可以拉的更好看些，试着用四个点来画slider吧。
00:28:015 (1,2,3,4) - 这串过难了。
00:43:026 (3,4,5,6) - 同，以及这个的附近应该是少加了不少clap
00:59:362 (1,2) - ……
01:23:423 (1,1) - 这很糟糕。。真的。。按星数看这只是个Normal，这个就太过分了。

[Kuro]
00:10:355 (1,2,3) - 理解不能，而且之后的同样形状也都遵守了spacing.
00:38:170 (1) - 建议不要finish.
00:40:819 (2,3) - spacing
00:55:388 (3,1) - ^

Pokie wrote:

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General

• - Open all osu files and add "Sliderborder : 0,0,0" under "[Colours]"
  
  - ...忘記能說中文了, 嗯..我覺得有必要降低整體音效音量
  - 中間的break map掉的話會更好._. 歌也不是很長呢
  - 另外請檢查你所有綠線在更改BPM後有沒有失效或是位置放的不好, 比如說有些原本要在note後面的綠線, 變成在note前面之類的

AkaShitsuji

• - 如Rin所提到spacing...
  - clap部份我也聽不懂你是想要在1,3拍下還是2,4...而且也斷斷續續的, 希望下次不會出現這個狀況._.

00:18:523 (3,4) - 這兩個感覺有點違和, 最好換換時間點, 讓他跟上vocal或拍子
00:55:830 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個怎麼回事..把音量提高起來吧..
01:14:373 (2) - 應該是沒必要的finish..拿掉?


ShiroShitsuji

• - 0.5x陷阱我恨你啊......
  - slider可以試試關掉grid snap慢慢拉點, 如果你有耐性的話..
  像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18474
  

00:11:459 (4) - 這種建議spacing還是依照1.0速度的那樣...不然以第二簡單的難度來說, 會騙到不少人
00:13:225 (3) - 嗯..是不是少了1/2拍D:?
00:24:925 (5) - new combo
00:39:936 (6) - 開頭補clap
00:44:130 (4) ~ 00:47:441 (5) - 這段請補音效.-.
01:10:620 (4) - 突然就jump了;_;!?


KuroShitsuji
[list:91dfa]00:21:834 (1,2,3) - 把三個一起選取後把(2)移到中間
00:24:925 (1) - 間距
00:41:922 - 為什麼kuro的break比前兩個難度都還要長._.
00:55:830 (1) - 間距
01:17:022 (1) - 放到(7)正下方

Eddotan wrote:

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[Overall]
Tag: ¿?
volume of hitsound it seems to me loud

I didnt see any errors on this map, but following are suggestions, if you disagree, you can ignore it.

[AkaShitsuji]
00:29:340 - start kiai here
00:41:481 (b) - you can map some there, and you have a spinner opportunity
01:25:852 (1) - shorten this spinner to the red tick

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:29:340 - start kiai here
01:24:527 (1) - shorten this spinner to white tick (01:28:501)

[KuroShitsuji]
00:29:340 - start kiai here
01:25:852 (1) - shorten this spinner to red tick (01:28:721)


nice map *starred*

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Just a quick suggestion;
- Use 0.9x distance snap in AkaShitsuji
- 1.2x or 1.1x distance snap in ShiroShitsuji
- You have a scorebar-ki but you have to have a scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2 too.
- Make a scorebar-bg ??
- That's all ~

Selee wrote:

NR好像在mod, 咱就只给星了 =w=

NatsumeRin wrote:

有slider的各点也可以加，稍微高级些的技巧是可以用slider tick（即滑条上的白点）来加。
方法是用你的clap复制一个命名为soft-slidertick.wav，在到达这个点之前把音效换为C1，之后换为C2，这样在滑过这个点时，使用的是C1效果音，即slidertick.wav。
用一个本人的图作为参照好了（虽然用的不多）http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15737，Komari难度。
另外就是一般都是先用C1再用C2的。。。你这样蛮奇怪。。。

Kurai_ wrote:

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Hi~

[General]
spinner-background.png and spinner-metre.png must be 1024x768

[Akashitsuji]
00:43:468 (3) - Add clap at end

[Shiroshitsuji]
00:19:406 (5) - The reverse sound off, I think that'll better if you change this slider by a spinner
01:10:620 (4) - Spacing error, I know that's for the design but that's bad :<

[Kuroshitsuji]
00:26:691 (6) - Remove and extand 00:26:470 (5) by 1/4
00:55:388 (3) - Add clap at begin ? I add clap at the 1st and 3rd white line,while this note is locatd at the 4th one..also the background sound is very loud at this point,so..maybe it doesn't matter if kept original.
Star~

choche wrote:

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Hi! I'm going to start with the mod ok? ^^

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Good

[Akashitsuji]

No problems here

[ShiroShitsuji]

No problems too

[KuroShitsuji]

No problems too (T.T I couldn't mod this, is perfect, sorry)

*star*

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Get someone to check the offset, I think it might be a little off.
Make the breaks the same in all the difficulties? is this a rule?I mean I don't want to remove the section-pass skin..but if so ,I'll map over the second diff's break...
Make the second kiai last the whole chorus? OIC..it's a mistake.
Easy;

01:02:011 (4,1) - Spacing.

Normal;

00:14:329 (8,1) - Spacing.
00:19:406 (5) - This repeat doesn't fall on anything.