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yzhbxiang
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月1日 at Cloud 5:48:09

Artist: Rainie Yang
Title: Happy Omen
Tags: Longing for YangWang XingFuYuZhao YangChengLin
BPM: 116
Filesize: 9903kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.86 stars, 178 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 610 notes)
  3. Normal (4.32 stars, 400 notes)
Download: Rainie Yang - Happy Omen
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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杨丞琳-幸福预兆
A lively and bright song from Rainie Yang. Hope you enjoy it~
Mod record:
SPOILER
Sorry for the high HR and OD, I have already revised it; (2011-09-24)
The small deviation in BPM has also been revised; (2011-09-24)
More circle added to the hard level; (2011-09-24)
Many changs in normal and hard level's boring slider; (2011-09-25)
The mp3's bit rate has already been reduced below 192kbps; (2011-09-25)
Sample volume is reduced to 65% now; (2011-09-25)
Sorry for my negligence in the the accuracy between the whole original song's rhythm and the new low bit rate mp3 file, the little 1ms deviation between them has already been removed. Thx to the reminding from banana~ (2011-09-26)
Add some flashing to hard level. (2011-09-26)
Rearrange some notes and add some new combo. (2011-09-28)
Adjustment to sample volumes (2011-10-02)
A small mistake in spinner length solved. (2011-10-02)
AR and OD of normal level change to 5 now. (2011-10-02)
A missing flashing added. (2011-10-09)
Delete two spinners, replace with few circles. (2011-10-09)
Lot of changes on easy level, thx to Priestess. (2011-10-10)
The beat sound effect changes a lot for the normal and hard diffs. (2011-10-11)
The beat sound effect changes a lot for the easy diff. (2011-10-12)
Some changes to insane diff, sounds better now. (2011-10-12)
Adopt some suggestions of MMCherry and be inspired by those suggestions to make some further changes. Thx~ (2011-10-19)
A little changes in easy diff. (2011-10-22)
A lot of changes to all of the diffs according to the suggestions from sherrie__fay. Timeline problem also fixed. Thx so much. (2011-10-24)
Slider velocity of EASY and Hard changed; Missed spinner skin components and score bar components have been added. (2011-10-26)
Redesign the layout of hard diff, especially the silders. (2011-11-01)
Adopt most of suggestions of manten, thx; Change shape for some silders. (2011-11-04)
Redesign EASY diff; Reset the position of some circles in NORMAL diff. (2011-11-07)
Add some missed whistle and finish effects. (2011-11-08)
Redesign story board. (2011-11-09)
Shutdowm the count down of hard diff; Add storyboard warning; Add missed soft normal, clap, whistle, finish .wav file, add some clap and finish effects; Reset the some sliders; Replace combo burst 1 with the other one and enlarge the size of combo bursts ; Improve the transparency of spinner circle and metre. (2011-11-11)
Add some jumps in hard diff. (2011-11-15)
Slight changes in some unsuitable triple-hit (2011-11-17)
Adopt some suggestions of Akemi_Homura and change the offset. Thx a lot (2011-11-18)
Slight changes in the pattern of some triple-hit (2011-11-23)
Offset change to 2646; Distance problem of NORMAL diff revised; Several other slight changes, thx to ertyukjh010 (2011-11-24)
EASY and NORMAL diff distance snap checked; Some changes to HARD diff (2011-11-27)
Adopt most suggestions of 12BARRY21(2011-11-27)
Adopt most suggestions of wcx19911123 (2011-11-28)
Adopt some suggestions of Miya (2011-12-13)
Adopt suggestions of [Te][Amo] (2011-12-17)
Flashing fixed to 50% in storyboard now, some other inaccuracy problem also fixed in original code. Thx a lot to the help and guide from sherrie__fay (2011-12-17)
Adopt most suggestions of stickmeister (2011-12-18)
Adopt most suggestions of A s g a r d (2011-12-20)
Adopt most suggestions of wmfchris (2011-12-25)
Adopt some suggestions of winber1 and Jayel (2012-1-19)
The layout of Normal diff has been totally remapped (2013-9-26)
YGOkid8's modding suggestion has been adopted, all found alignment problems in NORMAL+ diff and all curved sliders in EASY and NORMAL+ diff have been redesigned, remained curved sliders in HARD will be remaked soon in following days (2013-9-27)
All curved sliders in HARD diff redesigned, besides, some layout in HARD change slightly(2013-9-29)
slight changes in EASY and NORMAL diffs(2013-10-06)
slight changes in EASY and HARD from James2250's modding(2013-10-15)
Try to mod the EASY diff in a freestyle layout. NORMAL and HARD will be adopted similar measures in following days(2013-10-17)
1/3 layout of HARD diff changed(2013-10-18)
2/3 layout of HARD diff changed(2013-10-31)
layout redesign in HARD diff finished(2013-11-1)
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Future planning:
Hi, I'm back to deal with this map~ The map graveyard for two years because of my laziness, sorry for that :P
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Thanks to all of you~ :)
Farmer_old
you must change ur HR and OD. u could change ur HR and OD under 7. HR8 OD10 is not 4 hard.
gxytcgxytc
个人感觉:
BPM116刚好0.0 把那0.02去掉吧=w=
还有就是跟楼上的感觉一样。。normal ar 推荐5-7 CS:4
Ephoenix
HR是啥. 应该是AR吧 BPM比较低的话AR7貌似不错
Normal 跟HARD都是4星半
建议把Normal做得再简单点
当然Hard再难点也行,
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

Ephoenix wrote:

HR是啥. 应该是AR吧 BPM比较低的话AR7貌似不错
Normal 跟HARD都是4星半
建议把Normal做得再简单点
当然Hard再难点也行,

HR是血量速率吧,AR是接近圈的速率。恩,你说的我会修改,谢谢~
Unflagging
:) :) 令人身心愉悦的歌曲,很好听。SPIN 的图像做得很棒,漂亮不耀眼。 个人感觉Hard 连打的圈圈大部分分得有点开。 增加不少难度。 建议把一部分的圈圈间距缩短。 其他做得很精致。我很喜欢。 支持中文歌mapper! :) :)
snAugust
Nice map. Adament support for Expert Tie Qiu.
Adorn your map with various circle styles so that it can be more pleasing to deal with.
Heatherfield
nice to see a chinese song here
here's my mod:
General:
offset:19195 当前白线位置不对
以下mod截图都建立在原offset的基础上.
码率太高,现在的上限是192,转个低码率的mp3然后重新full submit下吧.
我不懂音效不过听起来感觉音量略大,建议调低.
总体感觉比较平淡,因为没什么spacing的变化.

以下均为从我这个玩家的角度来看的一些建议
feel free to ignore them
[Easy]
不懂怎么做easy..看起来还好
[Normal]
只是几个和hard一样的reverse slider感觉不是很好,其他都没什么.
HPD略高?
[Hard]
某些节奏打起来不连贯的感觉,特别是蛮多pattern是空一拍之后以四分拍的三连开始感觉略蛋疼.
比如这里00:22:302 (12,1) - 当然这只是个人喜好.如果是我的话我可能不会用这么多这样的梗,要么把空着的那一拍再塞点什么要么把下一段pattern改成slider开头.譬如这样

某些地方newcombo略少的感觉,看到编号接近20的note感觉怪怪的orz
一般的放new combo的手法就是对准长白线,特殊pattern视情况变色这样.
00:02:646 (1) - 这里开始的这段节奏应该是这样的

00:06:785 (1) - 再比如这里应该是这样

你的摆法按起来很违和啦,同样的节奏出现过很多遍,下面的就不一一指出,自创一点其实也可以,比如上面提到的第二段在这里00:06:914 (2) - 加一个note变成这样也蛮好

00:08:854 (10) - new combo
00:56:699 (10) - new combo 就举两个例子,其他不细说
02:39:633 (1) - maybe try rhythm like this

03:29:547 (1) - 这样的slider好无聊啦 试试这样的节奏



good luck on mapping ;)
sfwm
hard难度的三连击可以考虑缩减若干,一些直滑条可以用曲线代替,在节奏方面还算可以。Star~ :)
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang
Thx to Heatherfield~ I will try my best to revise the map following those suggestions~ :)
Banana

Heatherfield wrote:

码率太高,现在的上限是192,转个低码率的mp3然后重新full submit下吧.
7.48MB让爬土坡速度的校园网情何以堪...
感觉timing不大对(是不是转了码忘了full submition?)..
还有kudosu是给mod帖的,我的就别给了..
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

Banana wrote:

7.48MB让爬土坡速度的校园网情何以堪...
感觉timing不大对(是不是转了码忘了full submition?)..
还有kudosu是给mod帖的,我的就别给了..
额。。。full submit了啊。。。
真的啊。。。我刚打了一遍发现好像确实有点问题。。。
怎么替换之前的mp3文件啊。。。我是直接在songs文件夹里替换的。。。
是不是替换了之后还要重测BPM什么的啊。。。

不能随便给的嘛。。。
Breeze
please give kudosu to the modders who give you advice on improving your map
What
This is my little MOD
^^

[Easy]
01:47:643 (4) - NC
02:15:315 (5) - NC?
02:23:850 (4) - NC
03:13:764 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:24:108 (5) - 1 grib left
00:24:367 (6) - 2 grib left
00:57:729 (4,5,6) - 1 grib right
01:04:453 (7,8,9,10,11) - 1 grib down
01:22:039 (8) - NC
01:41:694 (7) - ^
02:23:849 (5) - ^
02:38:591 (8) - ^
03:06:005 (4) - Plz ctrl+h
03:13:505 (5) - NC
03:28:246 (8) - ^

[Hard]
00:05:491 (6) - NC?
00:11:957 (9) - ^
00:13:767 (6) - ^
00:31:095 (1) - 1 grib down
00:42:733 (12) - 1 grib down or 1 grib up and 4 right
00:43:767 (3) - 1 grib left
01:05:491 (8) - NC
01:22:043 (8) - ^
01:25:405 (9) - ^
02:06:009 (7) - 2 grib up
02:06:526 (9) - 2 grib left
02:22:043 (8) - NC
02:38:595 (8) - ^
03:28:250 (8) - ^
03:44:802 (6) - ^
03:46:742 (4,5) - 1 grib up


Good song ~ Good lick !
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

What wrote:

This is my little MOD
^^
Thx a lot~
Rue
Hey from #modreqs, a few suggestions here. (Woohoo, greet the new page)
  1. [General]:
    Damn it, I'm in love with that guitar intro, why don't you map it for all diffs? I just can't make myself press the skip button.
  2. [Easy]:
    01:26:177 (1) - end at 01:31:091. Also, I'd make it soft-finish, custom finish sounds pretty rough.
  3. [Normal]:
    1. What about setting both AR and OD to 5?
    2. 65% of volume is fine for chorus, but not for the rest of the song. I'd set the volume like this.
    3. 01:28:246 (1) - move the end to 01:31:091
  4. Last two points also go for [Hard].
Apart from that, everything else looks cool to me. Loved the song, good job :3
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

Route 99 wrote:

Hey from #modreqs, a few suggestions here. (Woohoo, greet the new page)
Thx for modding~ The guitar intro of EASY and NORMAL level may added in the future~
Priestess_old
modding start~

easy

00:31:091 (4) - delete and try other way and new combo
00:39:884 (5) - new combo
00:41:436 (6,7,8) - distance
00:46:350 (3) - ^
00:47:643 (5) - delete and try other way and new combo
00:57:212 (2,3,4) - distance
00:58:764 (5) - new combo
01:02:126 (1) - ^
01:05:488 (3) - delete and try other way
01:09:367 (3,4) - distance
01:13:764 (3) - new combo
01:14:539 (4,5) - distance
01:22:039 (3) - new combo
01:41:695 (3) - delte and try other way
01:57:988 (6) - new combo
02:04:195 (6) - ..... new combo
02:15:315 (5) - ^
02:22:040 (3) - ..... distance
03:19:971 (3) - new combo
03:28:247 (3) - ^

...
...

normal

so good, but plz use the 'distance snap' whole of map!
and plz make it easier i think it look like 'normal+ or hard'


hard

too many jump! >< but it's so cool :p
MMCherry
不擅长mod的人= = 都是个人感觉
hard:
00:08:853(1,2,3,4) 有点近
00:17:129(1,2,3,4) 有点近,而且这么近的时间两个一模一样的排列,有点单调
00:22:819(1)这种半拍短滑调+note,很怪
00:27:991(3)同上
00:33:940(9)来回滚动的滑调很奇怪,不跟节奏也不跟歌词,换成两根滑调怎么样?从00:33:940到00:34:457一根,00:34:716到00:35:233一根。
00:43:250(1)奇怪的半拍滑调,后面不列举了...
00:49:974(9,10) 删掉这两个,变成一个从9开始到00:50:491结束的滑调节奏好像会明了一点的感觉
01:14:802(6,7)这两个要不然是连成滑调要不然就把7删掉吧..
01:17:388(7)和前面的5、6滑调距离不成比例
01:50:492(9)奇怪的来回滑调,变成两根或者一根滑调 吧= =?
02:01:095(4)奇怪的来回滑调
02:02:388(6)这个6好超格子,可以考虑把5和4斜着,6摆4下面
02:17:388(7)摆到和之后的8、9一个水平
03:39:888(1.2,3,4)换个摆法= =? 比如梯形..

还有hard 三连排太多了,而且又是直线型一直摆,这样看着图不是很好看节奏也有点单调的感觉?
可以换成更多的摆法,或者用滑调代替。
而且有很多note都超格子了,没关系吗?

easy:
00:25:143(3) 和上面那根滑调的结尾对其
01:05:488(1,2,3,4)节奏和时间与摆放的比列不对,我打了几次都没找准怎么点,normal水平的人就更..
01:12:729(3)这个3明显太超格子了吧。。都到屏幕下面了
02:22:040(1,2,3,4)节奏和时间与摆放的比列不对,
03:29:281(2)离上面的滑调远一些..(还有来回好多,这个是吐槽
Anchor
小小的mod (只是給建議...)

[easy]
00:18:936 - 在這裡放點東西吧...
00:23:332 (2) - slider拉到00:24:367 會好一點(然後不用理那個空位.. 這樣就好)
00:56:953 (1,2) - 2和1要近一點
01:00:315 (3) - 3奇妙地向左了一點... 把它放好
01:06:005 (2,3,4) - 不建議放在easy中(但你堅持要放的話, 接近slider 1 一點)
還有其他3連, 我不一一提出了
01:47:643 (1,2,3) - 同一時間距, 不要在距離上分開
02:13:505 (1,2) - 1 2 近一點
02:22:040 (1,2) - 1 2 近一點
Kiai Time 好像放得早了一點...

很長的歌... 只mod 一下easy...
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

Anchor wrote:

小小的mod (只是給建議...)

[easy]
00:18:936 - 在這裡放點東西吧... 这样开头感觉更贴切easy diff
00:23:332 (2) - slider拉到00:24:367 會好一點(然後不用理那個空位.. 這樣就好) thx,but...
00:56:953 (1,2) - 2和1要近一點 ok
01:00:315 (3) - 3奇妙地向左了一點... 把它放好 4和5调整了之后会更好点
01:06:005 (2,3,4) - 不建議放在easy中(但你堅持要放的話, 接近slider 1 一點) ok
還有其他3連, 我不一一提出了
01:47:643 (1,2,3) - 同一時間距, 不要在距離上分開 ok
02:13:505 (1,2) - 1 2 近一點 ok
02:22:040 (1,2) - 1 2 近一點 ok
Kiai Time 好像放得早了一點... 没有啦。。就是希望在那个时间点开始的,而不是音量增大之后

很長的歌... 只mod 一下easy...


Thx :)
sherrie__fay
[General]
3个diff的offset必须一样的 kiai time也必须一样的D:
normal的kiai time长了一点。
滑条速度0.8真的大丈夫?打起来好难受。
还有按住alt键其实右上角可以调间距的:3
个人建议E和N两个diff调了滑条速度再砍了重做会好些 H反而不要太怕
[Easy]
……开DS了吗?
……就是界面右下角的那个?
[Normal]
01:23:332 (5,6,7) - 改成折返:>
02:39:884 (5,6,7) - ^
[Hard]
AR7 OD6就已经够用了。还会很好地压分。
00:52:948 (1,2) - 改成slider
01:23:336 (2,3,4) - ^
02:39:888 (2,3,4) - 节奏是和上面一样 但是相反地这个地方note的摆位很好读 所以感觉不用改 有人提再说吧
03:50:233 - 不加spinner吗
[skin]
要晓得有些玩家不用默认skin。所以如果你自定了皮肤 请成套使用。
spinner-background的默认大小是1023x692。PS裁一下就好
你需要配套的skin元件有:
一个spinner-approachcircle
一个scorebar-bg
一个scorebar-colour
[SB]
fine.

NO KDS PLZ
骗KDS不是我风格
等你改完我觉得这张图可以上架了 会有further mod。
不过那时 需要你自己来找我
而不是求人在贴吧帮你找mod:3
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

sherrie__fay wrote:

[General]
3个diff的offset必须一样的 kiai time也必须一样的D: ok
normal的kiai time长了一点。
滑条速度0.8真的大丈夫?打起来好难受。
还有按住alt键其实右上角可以调间距的:3
个人建议E和N两个diff调了滑条速度再砍了重做会好些 H反而不要太怕E, N的滑条到底是快了还是慢了呢?
[Easy]
……开DS了吗? ok
……就是界面右下角的那个?
[Normal]
01:23:332 (5,6,7) - 改成折返:> ok
02:39:884 (5,6,7) - ^ ok
[Hard]
AR7 OD6就已经够用了。还会很好地压分。ok
00:52:948 (1,2) - 改成slider ok
01:23:336 (2,3,4) - ^ 之前的节奏错了, 现已纠正
02:39:888 (2,3,4) - 节奏是和上面一样 但是相反地这个地方note的摆位很好读 所以感觉不用改 有人提再说吧
03:50:233 - 不加spinner吗 呵呵,还是觉得不加比较自然一点
[skin]
要晓得有些玩家不用默认skin。所以如果你自定了皮肤 请成套使用。
spinner-background的默认大小是1023x692。PS裁一下就好
你需要配套的skin元件有:Thx, 我会处理这个问题
一个spinner-approachcircle
一个scorebar-bg
一个scorebar-colour
[SB]
fine.

NO KDS PLZ
骗KDS不是我风格
等你改完我觉得这张图可以上架了 会有further mod。
不过那时 需要你自己来找我
而不是求人在贴吧帮你找mod:3
manten
ni hao :)
只稍微的Mod
因为个人的意见,不必变更
仅供参考.. :P

[Easy]

There are too many short sliders :o
hard to strike it

and I recommend arranging in rhythms of 1/1 :)


HP Drain → 3?
Overall → 2?


[Normal]

Approach Rate → 4?
Overall → 4?

00:57:733 (4,5,6) - take down
00:59:802 (4,5) - ↑
01:23:336 (5) - rhythm is not suited
01:39:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - down
01:55:922 (1,2) - ↑
02:02:388 (5,6) - ↑
02:15:836 (3,4) - ↑
02:19:716 (4,5,6,7) - ↑
02:29:802 (1,2,3) - ↑
02:31:871 (7) - ↑


[Hard]

02:04:716 (3) - slider end → 02:04:974
01:11:440 (4) - new combo
02:27:992 (4) - ↑
02:39:630 (1) - new combo deletion
02:39:888 (2) - new combo
03:17:647 (4) - ↑
03:32:130 (10) - add note


好的曲子&好的图
加油! :)
Amakawa Chinatsu
提一些个人建议~

Easy:

00:31:095 slider似乎有点短...而且是三个,有些拥挤。可以修改一下slider速度,让这里更美观一点
00:47:647 同上
00:54:888 slider end应该在 00:55:405
00:55:922 将这个slider的开端提前到 00:55:664
01:03:164 这两个slider连接起来节奏听起来很奇怪...可以考虑合并为一根滑条
01:11:440 和 00:54:888 一样
02:19:716 同上
02:27:992 同上,还有几处就不列举啦
总的来说,感觉slider的整体速度偏慢,而且一直是一个速度,缺乏变化

Normal:
和Easy一样slider速度缺乏变化,不过比Easy感觉好一点。
另外circle的排布上有些地方可以稍微拉开一点,不用太过于程式化。比如
00:22:819 向左移动两格
00:43:250 移动到2的左边
等等...
01:26:181 1和2向下一格,3向左一格,超出边线啦...
01:54:371 8,9,10向左
02:23:854 1和2向上一格
03:02:395 8向左
03:04:457 6和1向右,超出边线
03:16:354 1,2向下
03:18:423 7 向右
03:27:216 7 向上

Hard:
感觉还行,和Normal一样,某些地方可以拉开circle之间的距离

Star ^ ^
ZombieAA
Who is Rainy Young's big fan! Modding with full strength! Ahhhhhhhh~ Engines RUNNING! :D

EASY:
01:05:544 better chunk it
01:13:764 :oops:
01:41:695 maybe another way

Some slides maybe a little short.

NORMAL:
00:55:664 check the missed whistle
03:01:871 finishing audio effect missed

HARD
I like the level best.

The slider's kinda slow. Except for that everything's fine.

Good luck buddy! :)
2B-XiaoHei
很不专业的小MOD:

EASY~~
02:02:129 改成这样怎么样

02:40:405 节奏实际出现在02:40:276,但既然是1/2 divisor就没办法了,最好删掉这个circle
03:25:923 换个其他形状吧,这个如何


其他看起来都OK。

NORMAL~~
00:55:664 在hard里都用了波浪形的滑条,这里也可以改成那样的啊~
01:12:216 ^
02:12:216 ^
02:28:767 ^
还有其他两处一样~
01:40:405 向左移动一格

HARD~~
01:25:147 Finish音效
01:25:922 ^
02:41:698 ^
02:42:474 ^
03:30:319 ^
03:31:354 ^

HARD总体很不错

另外story board里的foreground和时间轴似乎不吻合哦,是不是有改动过offset导致对应不上了?建议重做一下吧~

加油吧,祝早日RANK!Star鼓励!
Breeze

General

  1. [Hard]开了countdow, 其他两个难度没开, 最好统一下这个, 要么都开, 要么都不开
  2. 开始部分SB还真闪, 用了这种效果的话要把这个勾选上, song setup - storyboading
  3. 03:02:388 - 感觉KIAI这里开始更好
  4. 试试用这个当做soft-hitclap, 感觉会比默认的好
    Download: soft-hitclap.rar
  5. 这个map很多地方combo太长, 一般不太会使用超过10的combo, 适当地加些new combo吧

Skin

  1. comboburst都太小了, 玩的时候会比较明显看得出来, 虽然不是什么大问题, 还是说下, 默认大小是388x767像素, 自己做的话只要不超过500x767都是允许的
  2. comboburst-1头部显示不完, 看着不是很舒服
  3. spinner-circle几乎不透明, 这样你spinner-background的图貌似没什么意义

Easy

  1. 01:02:649 (1) - 考虑加个finish音
  2. 01:19:200 (1) - ^
  3. 01:52:303 (1) - ^
  4. 02:19:201 (1) - ^
  5. 02:35:752 (1) - ^
  6. 03:25:408 (1) - ^

Normal

  1. 01:19:198 (3) - 考虑加finish
  2. 01:52:302 (1) - ^, 音量可以适当再大些
  3. 02:19:198 (3) - ^
  4. 02:35:750 (3) - ^
  5. 03:25:405 (3) - ^
  6. 03:29:543 (5,8) - 加clap

Hard

  1. 00:38:336 (12) - 这个slider略难懂
  2. 01:02:647 (3) - finish
  3. 01:16:871 (6,7) - 这两个slider完全被挡住了, 要么稍微上下移动, 或者换成朝下的? 不然可能不是那么好认出是slider
  4. 01:23:336 (1,2,3) - note (1,3) slider(2)的头, 加clap
  5. 01:46:354 (6) - 最好改下方向
  6. 01:51:785 (5,6) - clap
  7. 01:52:302 (1) - finish
  8. 01:54:888 (12) - 同00:38:336 (12), 不过应该也问题不大
  9. 02:19:198 (3) - finish
  10. 02:35:750 (3) - ^
  11. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - clap
  12. 03:25:405 (3) - finish
  13. 只有这个难度用的custom normal hitsound听着不是那么舒服, 也可能只是我个人感觉

总体还是不错, 熟悉map后可以尝试放一些jump和变化更多的排列, 现在的排列略显单调
star


Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. [Hard]开了countdow, 其他两个难度没开, 最好统一下这个, 要么都开, 要么都不开 都关掉了
  2. 开始部分SB还真闪, 用了这种效果的话要把这个勾选上, song setup - storyboading ok
  3. 03:02:388 - 感觉KIAI这里开始更好 ok
  4. 试试用这个当做soft-hitclap, 感觉会比默认的好 ok
  5. 这个map很多地方combo太长, 一般不太会使用超过10的combo, 适当地加些new combo吧 ok

Skin

  1. comboburst都太小了, 玩的时候会比较明显看得出来, 虽然不是什么大问题, 还是说下, 默认大小是388x767像素, 自己做的话只要不超过500x767都是允许的
  2. comboburst-1头部显示不完, 看着不是很舒服
  3. spinner-circle几乎不透明, 这样你spinner-background的图貌似没什么意义 这些我都会重新处理

Easy

  1. 01:02:649 (1) - 考虑加个finish音
  2. 01:19:200 (1) - ^
  3. 01:52:303 (1) - ^
  4. 02:19:201 (1) - ^
  5. 02:35:752 (1) - ^
  6. 03:25:408 (1) - ^ all done

Normal

  1. 01:19:198 (3) - 考虑加finish
  2. 01:52:302 (1) - ^, 音量可以适当再大些
  3. 02:19:198 (3) - ^
  4. 02:35:750 (3) - ^
  5. 03:25:405 (3) - ^
  6. 03:29:543 (5,8) - 加clapall done

Hard

  1. 00:38:336 (12) - 这个slider略难懂
  2. 01:02:647 (3) - finish done
  3. 01:16:871 (6,7) - 这两个slider完全被挡住了, 要么稍微上下移动, 或者换成朝下的? 不然可能不是那么好认出是sliderdone
  4. 01:23:336 (1,2,3) - note (1,3) slider(2)的头, 加clap ok
  5. 01:46:354 (6) - 最好改下方向 ok
  6. 01:51:785 (5,6) - clap ok
  7. 01:52:302 (1) - finish ok
  8. 01:54:888 (12) - 同00:38:336 (12), 不过应该也问题不大
  9. 02:19:198 (3) - finish done
  10. 02:35:750 (3) - ^ done
  11. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - clap done
  12. 03:25:405 (3) - finish done
  13. 只有这个难度用的custom normal hitsound听着不是那么舒服, 也可能只是我个人感觉

总体还是不错, 熟悉map后可以尝试放一些jump和变化更多的排列, 现在的排列略显单调 我会继续修改
star

Thx so much!
Sonic Fumes
From my POV i think you have too many sliders which are too short. Maybe put some sliders where the slider ball bounces back.
I like the squiggly sliders and the good rhythm :D
The flashing parts are OK too, are so are the customized images (e.g 30 combo).
Keep going and this map will be ranked!
riffy
tolya's small mod. i want to be usefull ><

Easy
00:32:905 (4) - should ends at 00:34:974
00:56:440 (2,4) - whistles here
01:10:147 (1) - should ends at 01:10:922
01:12:991 (2,4) - what about claps?
01:24:371 (2) - move to 01:24:629
01:38:854 (5) - clap?

Normal
00:58:767 (1,2,3) - Claps
02:27:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistle + finish + clap <3
03:32:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistles

Hard
00:53:336 (2,3) - Claps
00:53:595 (4,5) - Whistle + Clap
00:53:853 (6,7) - Whistle + finish + clap
01:38:854 (6) - Whistle
02:15:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - Claps

That's all. <3 Great map. Great song. Cute BG and storyboard.
Akemi_Homura
hi~ HomuHomu Modding~! c:

[Easy]

00:21:267(4) - 1 grid up 1 grid right~!
01:37:819(4) - 1 grid left~
01:49:457(4) - 1 grid down~!
02:23:336(2) - 1 grid up~!
02:26:698(1) - 1 grid left~~

[Normal]

01:24:371(1) - How about this?? xD

01:50:492(3) - How about this~?

02:01:095(4) - similar to 01:50:492

i think many reverse is difficult to biginner c;

[Hard]

00:02:388(x) - in my opinion, add note this point is better to play
02:10:405(3) - how about this~~? :D


Yeah~~!! Nice SB and Hit Sounds!!! :o
and lovely song~~! Star and Good luck to your map~!
I wish this map ranked~! ;)



takonodans
I not good at English...

[Easy][Normal]
I think uniform distance is better on the Distance Snap.

[Normal]
3:12:733 x296,y184

[Hard]
3:50:233-3:54:112 Spin add?

Since the first mod, that's it. I'm sorry... :(
WeisCrahe
hi~

[Easy]

AR,OD-1
Use only one spacing
SliderMultiplier is 「1.00000000596046」change to 「1」

[Normal]

00:50:232 (1) - Extend to 00:52:560
SliderMultiplier is 「0.800000005960464」change to 「0.8」

[Hard]

SliderMultiplier is 「1.60000000596046」change to 「1.6」
00:26:052 (3) - remove
00:36:138 (3) - ↑
00:36:138 (3) - ↑
03:50:233 add spiner end at 03:54:112

good luck!!
zwx11_old
咱是来顶你的
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

zwx11 wrote:

咱是来顶你的
:D thx
ertyukjh010
Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

綜合

Offset是2646吧,不然重拍都在紅線上;不知道對遊戲有沒有影響,不過用正確的比較好!

Normal

00:22:819 (1,2) - 這難度的距離,有些是剛好黏住,有些是剛剛分開;這樣會好怪異= =
00:31:612 (3,4) - 同樣是距離的問題,如下
我在右上角的位置,看到Prev是1.40x,Next是1.60x,相差挺遠的
如果是因為用Distance功能才不對位,試試改變grid Lv??
00:54:370 (3) - add Finish;另外這個位置開始放kiai time如何?
01:10:663 (3) - 換成Slider並在01:10:922結束?因為01:10:922是個重拍位子,與後面相差1/4拍也比較好打
01:24:370 (2) - 放在這裡,大家都會誤以為(1)是三來迴;還是放正常距離比較好
02:12:215 (4) - 有點突然的加速,不建議;主要是容易讓後面的(5)100hit

Hard

00:04:715 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 距離有點太開,要不要縮距?例如:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/186989
00:12:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:336 (1) - remove NC
03:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - 太遠太突然了
03:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - ^

GoodLuck :)
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

綜合

Offset是2646吧,不然重拍都在紅線上;不知道對遊戲有沒有影響,不過用正確的比較好!已经修改成2129,重拍在白线了
Normal

00:22:819 (1,2) - 這難度的距離,有些是剛好黏住,有些是剛剛分開;這樣會好怪異= =
00:31:612 (3,4) - 同樣是距離的問題,如下 位置问题都已矫正
我在右上角的位置,看到Prev是1.40x,Next是1.60x,相差挺遠的
如果是因為用Distance功能才不對位,試試改變grid Lv??
00:54:370 (3) - add Finish;另外這個位置開始放kiai time如何? Finish已加,至于kiai time...nah...
01:10:663 (3) - 換成Slider並在01:10:922結束?因為01:10:922是個重拍位子,與後面相差1/4拍也比較好打 ok,另两处也已修改
01:24:370 (2) - 放在這裡,大家都會誤以為(1)是三來迴;還是放正常距離比較好 ok
02:12:215 (4) - 有點突然的加速,不建議;主要是容易讓後面的(5)100hit nah...滑条速度增加了,但是由于弯曲,直线方向的长度并没有变啊

Hard

00:04:715 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 距離有點太開,要不要縮距?例如:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/186989
00:12:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ nah...
01:08:336 (1) - remove NC ok,另一处也已修改
03:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - 太遠太突然了
03:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - ^ nah...其实这里和00:17:129的四个距离是一样的,都是2.80X的距离差,可能由于前者是方形而这两处是直线,所以导致你觉得有些远
GoodLuck :)
Thx for modding :)
No_Gu
request from my queue

3:49 - 2 diffs

offset:2646

[hard]
狗眼被闪瞎了- -

00:27:474 (1) - 开头finish
00:46:353 (1) - 去NC
02:01:095 (3) - 推荐加个圈代替一个折返
02:32:905 (1) - 去NC
03:23:595 (1) - 去NC

圈太多。建议用slider代替一些

[normal]
00:35:750 (1) - finish
01:10:663 (3) - 结尾finish
02:27:215 (3) - ^
03:04:457 (6) - finish
03:16:870 (3) - 结尾finish
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

3:49 - 2 diffs

offset:2646 fixed

[hard]
狗眼被闪瞎了- - 我会改的稍微柔和点

00:27:474 (1) - 开头finish nah...
00:46:353 (1) - 去NC ok
02:01:095 (3) - 推荐加个圈代替一个折返 这种二次折返的一共才2个... 反而是一次半折返太多了...
02:32:905 (1) - 去NC ok
03:23:595 (1) - 去NC ok

圈太多。建议用slider代替一些 这个再看吧...

[normal]
00:35:750 (1) - finish nah...
01:10:663 (3) - 结尾finish nah...
02:27:215 (3) - ^ nah...
03:04:457 (6) - finish ok
03:16:870 (3) - 结尾finish nah...

Thx
-HaRuNa-
我第一次幫人mod
如果mod不好請見諒 :?


我不會mod easy.......所以抱歉!
可是看了一下大致上沒甚麼問題


Normal
00:25:146 (1) - 往右一小格
00:53:336 (1) ~ 00:54:371 (3) - 我覺得可以加kiai
02:09:887 (1) ~ 02:10:922 (3) - ^
02:59:543 (1) ~ 03:00:577 (3) - ^

Hard
02:41:181 (5,6,7) - 距離可以近一點

我還是新手 :(
mod不出甚麼問題
先這樣~~加油! :)
Stefan
Modding~

[Easy]:

00:48:163 = Remove the Slider and put a Cirlce.
01:23:335 - 01:25:404 = First Option: http://puu.sh/9mWH Second Option: http://puu.sh/9mWV I would perfer Option 2.
01:25:921 = Set circle.
01:27:473 - 01:31:094 = Spinner Length
01:48:163 = Remove the Slider and put a Cirlce.
02:01:094 = Remove the Reverse Arrows and then:
02:01:870 = Set circle.
02:40:404 = http://puu.sh/9mY9
02:42:473 = Set circle.
02:44:025 - 02:47:646 = Spinner Length
03:16:353 (1) = No Whistle
03:32:129 = Set circle
03:32:646 = ^
03:33:680 - 03:37:301 = Spinner Length

[Normal]:

General = IMO Normal has way too much beats. And you should make the Approach Rate -1.
00:26:697 = Coordinates: x:352 y:304 (And as notice, try to use Distance Snap at the whole Diff.)
00:33:939 - 00:35:232 = http://puu.sh/9n1v (Just an Idea)
00:36:783 (5) = Remove it. Why? The Diff is Normal. Some ppl may get annoyed.
00:43:766 (3) = Cut it to 00:44:025.
00:49:456 (1, 2, 3) = Reverse Selection.
01:15:318 - 01:17:904 = http://puu.sh/9n3E
01:27:473 (5, 6) = Remove and set at this time the Spinner until the current break.
01:45:318 - 01:46:870 = http://puu.sh/9n4J
01:48:680 (4, 5) = Coordinates: 4 = x: 440 y:224, 5 = x: 440 y: 288
01:53:335 = Same as 00:36:783.
02:01:094 (4) = http://puu.sh/9n5H
02:31:870 - 02:34:456 = Same Circle Positions as 01:15:318 - 01:17:904.
02:44:025 (5, 6) = Same as 01:27:473.
03:16:870 (3) = Remove it and set a Circle.
03:33:680 (5, 6) = Same as 01:27:473.

It is nicely made. They are too much sliders in my opinion. But it's not so bad. And I really perfer you to use Distance Snap. Hope I could help you. :)
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Modding~

[Easy]:

00:48:163 = Remove the Slider and put a Cirlce. I test that and find if a circle added, it becomes very hard for a beginner to play, so nah...
01:23:335 - 01:25:404 = First Option: http://puu.sh/9mWH Second Option: http://puu.sh/9mWV I would perfer Option 2. here two 4-reverse sliders are much easier to play than one 3 and one 5, so...
01:25:921 = Set circle.
01:27:473 - 01:31:094 = Spinner Length here follow the lyrics but not the drum sound :)
01:48:163 = Remove the Slider and put a Cirlce. lyrics :)
02:01:094 = Remove the Reverse Arrows and then: ok
02:01:870 = Set circle. ok
02:40:404 = http://puu.sh/9mY9 nah...
02:42:473 = Set circle.
02:44:025 - 02:47:646 = Spinner Length
03:16:353 (1) = No Whistle nah...
03:32:129 = Set circle
03:32:646 = ^
03:33:680 - 03:37:301 = Spinner Length

[Normal]:

General = IMO Normal has way too much beats. And you should make the Approach Rate -1. AR from EASY to HARD diff is 3,5,7 respectively, so I think it's ok :)
00:26:697 = Coordinates: x:352 y:304 (And as notice, try to use Distance Snap at the whole Diff.) ok
00:33:939 - 00:35:232 = http://puu.sh/9n1v (Just an Idea) this suggestion is good, and fixed
00:36:783 (5) = Remove it. Why? The Diff is Normal. Some ppl may get annoyed. nah...
00:43:766 (3) = Cut it to 00:44:025. nah... the lyrics here
00:49:456 (1, 2, 3) = Reverse Selection. ok
01:15:318 - 01:17:904 = http://puu.sh/9n3E I try to interpret the long tone of the lyrics here, so I design it like that
01:27:473 (5, 6) = Remove and set at this time the Spinner until the current break. here follow the lyrics
01:45:318 - 01:46:870 = http://puu.sh/9n4J nah...
01:48:680 (4, 5) = Coordinates: 4 = x: 440 y:224, 5 = x: 440 y: 288 ok
01:53:335 = Same as 00:36:783.
02:01:094 (4) = http://puu.sh/9n5H nah...
02:31:870 - 02:34:456 = Same Circle Positions as 01:15:318 - 01:17:904.
02:44:025 (5, 6) = Same as 01:27:473.
03:16:870 (3) = Remove it and set a Circle.
03:33:680 (5, 6) = Same as 01:27:473.

It is nicely made. They are too much sliders in my opinion. But it's not so bad. And I really perfer you to use Distance Snap. Hope I could help you. :) I will check distance snap :)
Thx :)
theMikeAG
Sorry for the wait!

~Easy~
02:01:095 (2,3) - Replace the note with another repeat?

~Hard~
00:06:914 (2) - Move this note 1/4 Later and pop it on top of (3).
00:15:060 (1,2) - Make a similar change here too.
00:23:336 (2) - This overlap is kind of bad and also...
00:24:888 (6) - The spacing with this note is messy, so maybe you could change your map to fix both problems like... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188574
00:33:681 (1,2) - Spacing on these notes seems awkward, fix?
01:11:440 (1) - Stack this under (1).
01:21:009 (7) - Stack this under (6).
02:06:009 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Make the spacing here more equal?
02:11:698 (2) - Stack this under (5).
02:39:888 (1) - This jump is WAY too big for this difficulty. Please fix this.
03:11:699 (1,2,3) - Uh... Stack these?

Well, you earned it. STAR.
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

theMikeAG wrote:

Sorry for the wait!

~Easy~
02:01:095 (2,3) - Replace the note with another repeat? ok

~Hard~
00:06:914 (2) - Move this note 1/4 Later and pop it on top of (3). ok
00:15:060 (1,2) - Make a similar change here too. ok
00:23:336 (2) - This overlap is kind of bad and also...
00:24:888 (6) - The spacing with this note is messy, so maybe you could change your map to fix both problems like... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188574 ok
00:33:681 (1,2) - Spacing on these notes seems awkward, fix? fixed
01:11:440 (1) - Stack this under (1). ok
01:21:009 (7) - Stack this under (6). nah...
02:06:009 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Make the spacing here more equal? ok
02:11:698 (2) - Stack this under (5). ok
02:39:888 (1) - This jump is WAY too big for this difficulty. Please fix this. fix to 2.9X now
03:11:699 (1,2,3) - Uh... Stack these? ok

Well, you earned it. STAR.
Thx :)
Dino99
Request from my queue~ :D

*Kiai time 結束的位置在01:31:094比較好?(改的話後面也改改吧~)

[Normal]

  1. 00:49:456 (1) - 不要whistle
  2. 00:49:715 - whistle
  3. 01:23:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量漸增還不錯吧!!~~
  4. 01:28:250 (1) - 拉到01:31:094?
  5. 01:35:749 - Finish
  6. 01:51:525 - Add a note
  7. 01:51:784 - ^
  8. 02:27:215 (3) - Finish
  9. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量漸增
  10. 02:44:802 (1) - 拉到02:48:163?
  11. 03:02:388 (5) - Finish
  12. 03:06:913 (6) - 排到藍線了><?移到紅白線?
  13. 03:16:870 (3) - Finish
  14. 03:29:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 漸增吧~!!
  15. 03:32:647 (2) - Finish
  16. 03:33:164 (3) - ^
  17. 03:33:681 (5) - ^
[Hard

  1. 00:06:525 - Add a note
  2. 00:08:594 - ^
  3. 00:14:801 - ^
  4. 00:16:870 - ^
  5. 00:52:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有點怪的節奏...
  6. 01:10:921 - Add a note with finish?
  7. 01:23:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音量漸增
  8. 01:24:371 (4) - NC
  9. 01:28:250 (1) - 拉到01:31:094?
  10. 01:35:750 (2) - Finish
  11. 01:43:120 - Add a note
  12. 01:46:870 (4) - 往上移10格?
  13. 02:10:535 (4,5) - 節奏怪怪的..
  14. 02:10:923 (5) - 把這個音的折返都刪了吧~ 這裡不適合3連音...
  15. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 漸增
  16. 02:44:802 (1) - 拉到02:48:163?
  17. 03:02:388 (6) - Finish
  18. 03:17:129 - Add a note with finish?
  19. 03:30:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - 奇怪的節奏..先刪掉~ 然後在03:30:835 & 03:31:094 & 03:31:353加note 音量漸增~
    真的要加5連音加這吧(或許連續3個?)03:31:611 03:32:387 03:33:163 - 我覺得這樣還不錯!!~ 你試試看吧@@"
    改的話轉盤從03:33:939
  20. 03:49:716 (1,2) - 重疊吧~
加油!!~ :D
Good Luck!!
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request from my queue~ :D

*Kiai time 結束的位置在01:31:094比較好?(改的話後面也改改吧~) kiai time我想就只加在03:02:387 和 03:37:301之间, 没有从01:31:094之前开始, 所以也就没有在01:31:094这里结束这么一说了哈 :)

[Normal]

  1. 00:49:456 (1) - 不要whistle fixed
  2. 00:49:715 - whistle nah...上面的那个是没发现的mistake, 这里还是不加whistle比较好
  3. 01:23:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量漸增還不錯吧!!~~ ok
  4. 01:28:250 (1) - 拉到01:31:094? 现在就在01:31:094啊...
  5. 01:35:749 - Finish ok
  6. 01:51:525 - Add a note nah...
  7. 01:51:784 - ^ nah...
  8. 02:27:215 (3) - Finish 加在slider tail上了, 另两处也已修改
  9. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量漸增 ok
  10. 02:44:802 (1) - 拉到02:48:163? 三处的spinner都是一样长的会比较好...
  11. 03:02:388 (5) - Finish ok
  12. 03:06:913 (6) - 排到藍線了><?移到紅白線? 木有啊...现在就在红线上啊...
  13. 03:16:870 (3) - Finish ok
  14. 03:29:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 漸增吧~!! ok
  15. 03:32:647 (2) - Finish nah...已经有whistle了
  16. 03:33:164 (3) - ^ nah...其实重音在03:33:034上而并不是这里所以加这里比较奇怪
  17. 03:33:681 (5) - ^ ok
[Hard

  1. 00:06:525 - Add a note ok
  2. 00:08:594 - ^ nah... 与下面四重拍之前空1/4拍感觉很好
  3. 00:14:801 - ^ ok
  4. 00:16:870 - ^ nah...
  5. 00:52:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有點怪的節奏... 架子鼓的声音啦...
  6. 01:10:921 - Add a note with finish? ok
  7. 01:23:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音量漸增 ok
  8. 01:24:371 (4) - NC ok
  9. 01:28:250 (1) - 拉到01:31:094? 已经在01:31:094了...
  10. 01:35:750 (2) - Finish ok
  11. 01:43:120 - Add a note nah...
  12. 01:46:870 (4) - 往上移10格? ok
  13. 02:10:535 (4,5) - 節奏怪怪的.. 放慢了听这里的乐器音确实是这样的无误
  14. 02:10:923 (5) - 把這個音的折返都刪了吧~ 這裡不適合3連音... ^
  15. 02:39:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 漸增 ok
  16. 02:44:802 (1) - 拉到02:48:163? nah...
  17. 03:02:388 (6) - Finish ok
  18. 03:17:129 - Add a note with finish? ok
  19. 03:30:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - 奇怪的節奏..先刪掉~ 然後在03:30:835 & 03:31:094 & 03:31:353加note 音量漸增~
    真的要加5連音加這吧(或許連續3個?)03:31:611 03:32:387 03:33:163 - 我覺得這樣還不錯!!~ 你試試看吧@@" fixed
    改的話轉盤從03:33:939 这个就算了...
  20. 03:49:716 (1,2) - 重疊吧~ 也好
加油!!~ :D
Good Luck!!
Thx :)
M A R I O
Here's your mod ^-^

[Easy]

01:23:335 Maybe make 2 slider with one reverse and one slider without any reverses (http://puu.sh/9qN5)
03:29:543 ^
01:26:180 I would put the spinner to 01:25:921
03:32:387 ^ but to 03:32:129

[Normal]

03:01:612 (3) Add a whistle/clap maybe?

Found nothing ^^

[Hard]

At the beginning i felt like: " WTF these Hitsounds xD!"

01:28:249 Maybe put spinner to 01:28:120?
01:46:870 Maybe put 4 to x:232 y:96?
03:50:232 I would love a loooong spinner here (from 3:50:232 to 3:56:439) ^^

I couldn't find much ^^
Star * and good luck ^^
Topic Starter
yzhbxiang

M A R I O wrote:

Here's your mod ^-^

[Easy]

01:23:335 Maybe make 2 slider with one reverse and one slider without any reverses (http://puu.sh/9qN5)
03:29:543 ^ nah... In NORMAL and HARD diff, the rhythm are all two 4-reverse sliders
01:26:180 I would put the spinner to 01:25:921 OK
03:32:387 ^ but to 03:32:129 OK

[Normal]

03:01:612 (3) Add a whistle/clap maybe? nah :)

Found nothing ^^

[Hard]

At the beginning i felt like: " WTF these Hitsounds xD!" XD

01:28:249 Maybe put spinner to 01:28:120? :P
01:46:870 Maybe put 4 to x:232 y:96? OK
03:50:232 I would love a loooong spinner here (from 3:50:232 to 3:56:439) ^^ I think two circles in final means "the end" :)

I couldn't find much ^^
Star * and good luck ^^
Thx :)
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
fine

[skin]
scorebar-colour-0? where are 1,2 and others..? maybe you should rename it to scorebar-colour imo

[Easy]
HD-1/2
OD-2
spacing is too low , it is hard to read the rhyme with such a tiny spacing..I suggest remap all
01:10:147 (1) - repeat 1 time more and add finish at end ?
03:01:094 (1,2) - repeat 1 time less in 1 , and delete 2 , then add slider from 03:01:870 to 03:02:387 , sound better

[Normal]
HD-1
OD-1/2
01:12:216 (4) - this shape is odd..
01:50:750 (4) - repeat 1 time less , and add note at 01:51:784 , sound better
01:52:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - stack some notes , or it is too hard to play..
02:12:216 (4) - same , and I ignore same sliders from now on

[Hard]
AR+1
I suggest to reduce spacing of streams , remap some pattern
00:04:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - redece spacing on this
00:05:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this
00:17:129 (1,2,3,4) - and this
this is a Hard diff , but some pattern is nearly become an Insane..
00:38:336 (5) - this shape is odd , I don't know why you do this , it doesn't fit the song at all
01:20:491 (6,7) - I think not to overlap is good
01:49:457 (8,9,1) - spacing here is confusing..
01:54:888 (5) - same
02:10:147 (2,3,4,5) - this is too confusing , I suggest to remap this , it is hard to know when the sliders end..
02:37:043 (6,7) - same
02:42:992 (2) - don't speed up , it is confusing..
03:09:630 (5,6,7) - ._.
03:30:965 - add note
03:31:223 - ^ , and don't for get to redece spacing on streams
03:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - too jump.. reduce spacing plz

that's all
good luck
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