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Haru - Sky Park (Instrumental)

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tieff
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 августа 2009 г. at 4:39:22

Artist: Haru
Title: Sky Park (Instrumental)
BPM: 88
Filesize: 10770kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,69 stars, 435 notes)
  2. Relaxing (3,25 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Haru - Sky Park (Instrumental)
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Beatmap #15.
For the Viotex Project

Best map I ever created.
Shinxyn
~woo, more Viotex stuff
-looks at it when your not finished-
.... 10mb.. hmm, yea cut the mp3 (the end just repeats anyways)
and while your at it, lower the volume for the custom soft-hitfinish.wav (its kinda loud and lowering overall hitsounds would weaken the rest of map)

Relaxing-
01:25:90 (2) - I clearly saw this during play, but I have doubts you're allowed to do this even if its very clear
02:37:49 (6) - ^ (for this one though, you could probably get away with it if you add new combo somewhere)
03:04:08 (2) - ^
03:17:72 (2) - ^
03:53:09 (5) - was this a mistake? O_O
Nazi-
01:04:08 (2) - this sounds waaaay too rushed and fast (probably cuz of the louder hitsound)
01:53:18 (5) - ^
03:25:90 (2,3) - this sounds way too fast, too... not to mention kinda odd
03:27:27 - 03:32:72 - no breaks? oh well.... I don't mind actually, but it might get pointed out again.


Hard-
00:41:93 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - this sounds too odd, and doesn't really follow from what you had before (the double beats instead of a triplet)
Nazi-
00:51:81 (1,2) - horizontal flip >_<
02:28:97 (6,7,8,1) - right a tick (mirror the 1,2)

Then comes the incomplete parts~
Hmmm, the map's sound is kinda...boring since it follows the same pace, then again, I don't blame you, this song is highly repeatative... but please try to spice things up more, like you did for 01:46:36 (1) to 01:54:20 (4)

The Kiai effect is weak, I say just remove it altogether, doesn't fit this song at all

Good luck with rest of map~
Ryuukun
[Relaxing]
03:27:23 - add break
03:32:76 - ^

[Hard]
No Problems

Suggestion:
Can you make a diff for the Piano parts?
That would be nice :D
blissfulyoshi
Relaxing:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
01:46:36 (1,2) - it felt a little weird switching between single repeats to double repeats

Nazi mod:
00:35:45 (1) - align with white 2?
01:09:20 (3) - align with 2 or slope the beginning a little more
02:22:83 (4) - align with 1
02:25:56 (4) - ^
03:21:81 (1) - place on top of the white 3

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:42:27 (10) - new combo to show change in timing intervals

Nazi mod:
01:24:54 (1) - align with blue 4?
02:22:49 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2?
03:03:40 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1?

Nice map. Star.
Hikato
[Relaxing]
02:28:63 (5) - Remove this? D:
[v[03:25:90 (2) - Repeat+1]v]
[^[03:26:76 (3) - Remove this]^]
[^[03:26:93 (x) - Add a single]^]

03:53:09 (5) - Doesn't feel right being the only part that is like this.
*Note: ^ and v = together don't do one without the others.

[Hard]
00:36:73 (3) - Why a slider?
00:41:93 (7) - Finish
01:23:09 (3) - Why a slider?
02:36:73 (3) - ^
02:28:63 (5) - Remove this?
03:17:64 (6) - Why a slider?

Kiai doesn't fit. Would be better if you just removed it.


Nice map anyways.
Dartmir
star
Shinxyn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mrtn
offset feels slightly early to me. I think adding about 4 ms will make it slightly better...

[relaxing]
03:27:27 - add a break here
03:32:73 - ^

[hard]
no problems

starred
Gabi
i didn't mod it cause im to tired right now. but from what i can see its pretty good. nice hitsounds.

star
ztrot
only skimmed threw sorrt but I got something to do.
relaxing:
00:58:63 (3) - align this with 00:57:27 (1)
00:59:99 (1) - align with 00:58:63 (3)
01:08:18 (1) - try to align this with 01:07:49 (4)
Overall: a long map that can most likely be cut back.
but it ok I will hopefully get back to this later
gotta go.
Star

BTW
Hard seemed fine.
Topic Starter
tieff

ztrot wrote:

only skimmed threw sorrt but I got something to do.
relaxing:
00:58:63 (3) - align this with 00:57:27 (1) Sorry, but no.
00:59:99 (1) - align with 00:58:63 (3) ^
01:08:18 (1) - try to align this with 01:07:49 (4) ^
Overall: a long map that can most likely be cut back.
but it ok I will hopefully get back to this later
gotta go.
Star

BTW
Hard seemed fine.
ty <3
kioukiou
star :)
Starrodkirby86
[Relaxing]:
03:31:70 (1) - Breaks here? S:

Do you think this Preview Point works, or should you get another one?

[Relaxing] is a bit long, but that's all right. There's nothing against those things.

EDIT: Bubbled! Your mapping has improved considerably!
mrtn
ranked
Sleep Powder
[Beatmap Comments]

[Hard]
The rhythm was a bit repetitive.
The rhythm was also a bit hard to follow for some parts due to spacing. (maybe cuz I haven't played in a few days...idk)
Overall it was a decent beatmap.
It could have been a bit better if you made the patterns a bit more dynamic though.
Topic Starter
tieff
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
CrimsonAzn
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