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Star Mind - Japanese Boy

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Randomosity_old
11 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Randomosity_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 08, 2009 at 5:12:12 PM

Artist: Star Mind
Title: Japanese Boy
Tags: Trance Techno
BPM: 150
Filesize: 8175kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Nexy (4.9 stars, 335 notes)
  2. Randomosity (4.8 stars, 308 notes)
  3. Shinxyn (3.15 stars, 209 notes)
Download: Star Mind - Japanese Boy
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First map evar by me, Randomosity. Probably FAR from done.
Collabarative with Nexy and Shinxyn.

Any criticism welcomed! :D

Btw, Nexy likes mudkips.

+Made some distance changes, changed Hard to Randomosity.
+Implemented Nexy's mods to [Randomosity].
+Realligned and changed hitsounds.
+Implemented Metroid's mods to [Randomosity] and Nexy applied mods to [Nexy]
+Implemented Starrodkirby86's mods to [Randomosity] and [Nexy]
+Changed offset toStarrod's recommended 378.
+Respaced more. [Randomosity]
+Added [Shinxyn] difficulty. (Normal)
Last edited by Randomosity_old , edited 4 times in total.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
I used grid level 3.

Randomosity:
00:08:22 (1) - Move closer to 9.
00:22:82 (1,2,3) - Stack the ends nicely.
00:25:02 (5) - Remove?
00:25:42 (1) - ^
00:38:02 (7) - Stack this on the end of (6) slider?
01:01:02 (6) - Restack.
01:02:02 (1) - Stack on (7)'s starting point.
01:16:42 (4) - Move right to red tick and add a note here.
01:28:02 (7) - Stack nicely on the slider.
01:37:22 (4) - Look at the distance between 1,2, and 3. This is too close to 3.
01:40:22 (4) - ^
01:40:62 (5) - Nudge up to align horizontally with 4.
01:59:62 (1) - Align this properly so its perfectly diagonal to the previous slider.
02:02:42 (3) - Tilt the end of this up a bit and stack (5) on it nicely. Look at 1 and 2. Keep your patterns consistent.
02:37:22 (8) - Extend by 1/2.
02:45:42 (3) - Make this into a repeating slider.
02:46:02 (4) - Move 2 ticks to the right onto the white tick.
02:46:82 (5) - Remove.

You need to seriously do what I told you about distance snap. Either use 1.0 or 0.8 but not both, unless you have some kind of pattern going which you don't.
You also need to go back and fix your jumps and some patterns. All your jumps are random. This would be an even better difficulty if you were consistent with your patterns/jumps, but it's all random.

The hitsounds are not good. Right now, places are either too quiet or just full of hitsounds. Keep a balance throughout the map. Listen to the beat and w/e you hear in your head to make it sound good. Experiment with them, you're not going to get them right all that fast. But seriously listen to the histounds you have, you can do a lot better.

:D
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
I think your timing is off...

Randomosity - Please enforce spacing even between combos.
00:09:02 (3) - It's a little too close to the 2 slider by about 1 or 1/2 a level 3 grid unit.
00:52:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - No spacing whatsoever here...
01:06:02 (5,6,7) - Sudden jump in the middle of a spaced combo isn't a good thing.
01:34:62 (1) - This spinner is below the 2k suggested area. Only in semi rare cases is a 2k- bonus spinner on auto allowed.
02:04:82 (1) - Sudden out of combo jump that doesn't feel intuitive.
02:46:42 (4) - Out of spacing.
02:47:22 (1) - Same as ^.

Nexy
02:25:62 (10) - Add a finish at the end of this slider.
02:36:82 (8,9,10) - I'm not a big fan of jumps within a spaced combo.

You need to make a easy mod of some kind to keep the map balanced..
Randomosity_old
11 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Randomosity_old

Metroid wrote:

You need to make a easy mod of some kind to keep the map balanced..
I think Shin ( the other person who's working on this map) is making a Normal. So I hope that balances the map out. If not, I'll try to create my own easy difficulty.

Thanks for the modifications.
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
My mind is so totally out there...

[Randomosity]:
00:33:02 (5) - Extend by a repeat?
00:54:02 (7,8) - Looks sloppy as it doesn't follow the trapezoid layout.
00:54:42 (9) - Hm...new combo for the jump? Optional, but I don't know.
01:06:02 (5) - New combo?
01:34:62 (1) - Illegal Spinners. Valid spinners get 2000 bonus on Auto.
01:40:62 (5) - This slider is all strange...Maybe it should be extended (Not by repeats)
02:05:82 (2,3,4) - Move this group so (2) starts where (3) did. Readjust spacing if needed.
02:28:62 (8) - Start spinner at endpoint of this slider (Making this now a circle).
02:47:22 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable rhythm.

[Nexy]:
00:21:22 (9) - Extend by 1 repeat.
01:21:42 (*) - Add a beat here or make the last slider repeat.
01:51:62 (5) - (Optional) Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
01:58:62 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - All beats be whistles?
02:00:22 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above.
02:05:02 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above.
02:06:62 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same as above.

Randomosity speaks for its name in hitsounds. The hitsounds seem very random. You should have some sort of rhythm or groove going with it. It'll make it sound less monstrous, haha. Just joking there of course.

I'm unsure about the timing. Try...378 Offset. See if that works for you.

When an easier difficulty is added, I'll give a star~
Randomosity_old
11 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Randomosity_old

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

I'm unsure about the timing. Try...378 Offset. See if that works for you.
A great help! Thanks. Shin is working on a Normal for this map. I shall try to fiddle with my hitsounds this weekend.
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
An easier diff.... though some parts might not be best suited as easy, its better than having the map completely boring~!
If you were to not use our names as diffs, this would be... closer to normal diff.
why do I (highest rank of the three) have to make easiest map... oh well!


Download: Star Mind - Japanese Boy (Randomosity) [Shinxyn].osu
Randomosity_old
11 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Randomosity_old

Shinxyn wrote:

why do I (highest rank of the three) have to make easiest map... oh well!
Because we love you.
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