hiiii ~ sorry for delay :V here as you requested (๑╹ω╹๑)/
[General]
omg omg so much work for me right now @@
personally i don't like the hitsound that you used they are to
strong for this map :/
[Easy]
maybe circle size -1
why do you use 1/2 if in some parts you mapped as 1/4 ? owo
01:19:680 (5) - this slider should end at 01:20:640
01:21:120 (1,2,3,4) - don't do so much stalk (it's a easy) :V try to move 01:22:080 (2,3,4) in other way like :
and: 01:24:480 (1,2,3,4) like this:
01:45:131 (3,4) - same here try to remove this staik :V
01:48:960 (3,4) - ^
01:51:360 better to end this spinner here : 01:54:720
02:10:560 - remove new combo
02:18:720 - 02:19:200 - i dont think here is kiai time needed in other diff too
02:42:720 (3,4) - try to don't stalk this
02:46:560 (3,4) - ^
02:48:960 - better to finish this spinner here : 02:52:320
03:12:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part seems a perrfect pentagon but is not o3o ta ta ta tam try to do it with polygon circles creator: just remove last cicle and put a slider it will be look better and cleaner :3
03:48:000 (3,4) - try to not stalk this too
03:51:855 (3,4) - ^
03:54:240 - i think it will be nicer when you finish slider here : 03:58:080 + finish
04:17:417 - try to not stalk it
04:21:257 - ^
04:24:137 - better to end with spin at : 04:27:497 + finish
04:27:497 - 04:27:977 i think here is no nedded kiai in other diff too
[Normal]
circle size -1
00:44:880 (2,3,4,5,6) - @@ what is this ? it's not a hard diff is so confusing
00:48:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - thats so different for what comes later in all map :V
01:03:360 (6) - new combo
01:19:680 (5) - should end at 01:20:640
01:33:120 (2) and 01:34:080 (3) - should be more closer
01:47:040 (x) - add a circle
01:54:720 - end slider here
02:18:720 (1,2,3,4) - so confusing the 02:19:680 (4) is not to semple to see @@
i missed it too @@02:20:160 (1,2,3,4) - here too ^
02:37:920 (x) - add a circle
03:05:760 (4) - new combo
03:11:760 (1,2,3) - ehmm i think is to much for a normal
03:49:920 (x) - add a circle
03:58:080 - end spinner here ; remove this circle ; + finish
04:19:337 (x) - circle here
04:23:177 (4,5,6) - hmm i dunno try to change it :V
04:27:497 - end spinner here ; remove circle : + add finish
[Hard]
short check sorry so long map ;W;
when i have time i come for a recheck o3o
ar +2 o +3 (actually is to slow for a hard D: ) od +1
01:10:320 (5) - new combo
01:19:680 (3,4) - that sounds so bad :C
01:28:080 (x) - circle here + finish sounds better
01:43:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try to give a form to this circles , a star or squares something
01:47:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - here too ^
01:52:080 - star spinner here
from : 02:18:720 to 02:21:240 is to much confusing @@
03:31:200 (x) - add a circle
04:27:497 - end spinner here ; remove circle : + add finish
waaah >u< good luck ~
