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Raujika - Grim

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月22日 at 21:53:03

Artist: Raujika
Title: Grim
Tags: spboxer3 lks vivicat beren -baby strawberry-
BPM: 96
Filesize: 5594kb
Play Time: 03:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.27 stars, 132 notes)
  2. Hardy (4.84 stars, 442 notes)
  3. JauiPlKsp3 (5 stars, 599 notes)
  4. viviBeren (4.09 stars, 238 notes)
Download: Raujika - Grim
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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22nd map.
It's like a winter star melody.
And I'm getting really addicted to it.

Freestyle diff names inside.
Special thanks to sp3, lks, vivicat, beren and little strawberry.
This one would not be completed without you. Seriously.
Last edited by JauiPlaY , edited 13 times in total.
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ Mod from the queue~

基本上就用中文说了 英文不是很能说明白
少一个Hard 不然有跳难度之嫌

[Easy]
没啥问题
00:47:905 (2,3,4,5) 以及同类梗 - 梗不是很好听……或许一般的normal-whistle-normal-whistle就可以了？
01:40:405 (1) - 音量80%

[220B]
没甚问题
02:27:905 (2) - 再往右下放一点
02:46:030 (2) - 擦边？略像burai slider

[Hardly]
我打错diff名了……
然后一看哇小草莓
总之先不管吐槽 这难度比普遍意义上的Hard鬼畜很多 建议再做一个简单些的 或者减少这个的难度
以下基本为减少难度提供的意见 如果认为【啊 你叒就不要怪我做的难蛤蛤蛤】的话可以无视
01:03:530 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 难打
01:10:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:11:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这是什么 姬坝么 你要是不放低难度的话就做成跟上面那个一样然后Ctrl+R
01:12:905 (1) - 这跳难打
01:16:967 (3,4) - 交换过来也不丑 这不用刻意加难度
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1,1) - Rule不知道你现在这梗可不可以 反正每个稍微向下偏移一些可能会好看些
01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - 同样的问题
01:34:311 (3,4,5) - 难打
01:57:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 放在Hard难度偏难了
01:58:530 (5) - 加whistle
02:02:905 (1,2,3,4) - 干脆四个全部stack好些
02:04:155 (1) - 不好读
02:08:530 (5) - 好鬼畜
02:16:498 (6) - 加whistle，NC
02:16:655 (1) - 去NC
02:18:842 (4) - 滑条尾加whistle
02:19:780 (3) - 加whistle
02:52:905 (1) - 去NC
02:53:217 (2) - NC
03:02:905 (1,2) - ^

[3p]
花舞难度 这图初见D 没能力mod 还是空着好了
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
hi there~~m4m

[General]
  1. 试了下效果，于是建议从Normal往上都用SliderTickRate 2
  2. 还有你这diff名真是奇葩……
[I can pass]
  1. 02:10:405 (1,2,3,4,1) - 音量上做一个梯度出来？
  2. 02:20:405 (1) - 这里到break的一段可以考虑把whistle加上～
  3. 02:57:905 (2,3,4,5) - 2|4 whistle更好听一些
  4. 03:02:905 (2,3,4,5) - ^
[220B]
  1. 00:57:905 (1,2) - 只是提一下，如果是normal的话不建议这么放，hard的话就无视好了……这命名我实在无法分辨…………
  2. 01:04:155 (1) - 去掉NC？
  3. 01:59:155 (2) - 去掉头clap？
  4. 02:09:155 (3) - 这儿音乐上有明显的三个音，而且最后一个音是向下的，所以用长slider的话，考虑加个红描点在中间来配合音乐做一点变化？
  5. 02:49:780 (4) - ctrl+r一下似乎比较有感觉～
  6. 03:16:967 - 这里考虑加个note？
  7. 03:21:967 - 建议加note，高音被空掉了不舒服……
[Hardy]
  1. 01:13:842 (1) - 有点看不清的slider
  2. 01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - ……………………………………how many sliders here
  3. 01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - ……………………………………………………………………
  4. 01:56:655 (1,2,3,4) - anti-stream的间距建议再做小一些，否则会confusing
  5. 02:44:623 (7,8,9) - 这种stack严重破坏flow
  6. 03:19:155 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以考虑anti-stream，保持现有大的间距不变的情况下把4个note平均放开，比如这样

    或者左右交替的稍微拉开一些弧度也行
  7. 03:22:905 (1) - ctrl+r一下？
[JauiPlKsp3]
  1. 00:48:061 (2,3) - 考虑交换位置？然后00:48:686 (6,7) - 这俩也是，感觉打起来舒服
  2. 01:14:467 (10) - 向下弯感觉更舒服
  3. 01:24:780 (1) - 有没有可能ctrl+r一下？
  4. 01:29:467 (5,6) - 这两个分别ctrl+r？打着更舒服
  5. 02:00:405 (1) - 感觉上这个应该在这里会比较好～～能跟上flow：坐标456:68，形状上和后面的(2)对称过来
  6. 02:03:217 (2) - ctrl+r下试试？类似LC常用的那种反向slider flow
  7. 02:07:905 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里4个一组的分组比这样3、5的分组要舒服，做成2组四方跳吧：
    把02:08:373 (1) - 放到88:180，然后02:08:529 (2,3,4,5) - 整体改成逆时针的方向（3和5位置互换），最后把NC放到02:08:529 (2) -
  8. 03:17:905 (1) - 这里ctrl+r下打起来会比较舒服，03:18:530 (3) - 同
吐槽完毕给星闪人～
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Scorpiour wrote:

[Hardy]
  1. 01:13:842 (1) - 有点看不清的slider 改掉~
  2. 01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - ……………………………………how many sliders here 。。。。
  3. 01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - ……………………………………………………………………
  4. 01:56:655 (1,2,3,4) - anti-stream的间距建议再做小一些，否则会confusing 嗯减小了一点，但是不多。。
  5. 02:44:623 (7,8,9) - 这种stack严重破坏flow 是吧！我开始时候做的晃晃晃那种拉条，然后被改掉了。。。然后我现在又换了。。。
  6. 03:19:155 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以考虑anti-stream，保持现有大的间距不变的情况下把4个note平均放开，比如这样

    或者左右交替的稍微拉开一些弧度也行 嗯不错
  7. 03:22:905 (1) - ctrl+r一下？没有，我复制粘贴过去的
谢谢mod~

Flower wrote:

[Hardly]
我打错diff名了……
然后一看哇小草莓 我一看哇原来是❀的mod
总之先不管吐槽 这难度比普遍意义上的Hard鬼畜很多 建议再做一个简单些的 或者减少这个的难度 果然是太难了OJZ
以下基本为减少难度提供的意见 如果认为【啊 你叒就不要怪我做的难蛤蛤蛤】的话可以无视 没没没，建议什么的都要看的
01:03:530 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 难打
01:10:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:11:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这是什么 姬坝么 你要是不放低难度的话就做成跟上面那个一样然后Ctrl+R
01:12:905 (1) - 这跳难打
01:16:967 (3,4) - 交换过来也不丑 这不用刻意加难度
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1,1) - Rule不知道你现在这梗可不可以 反正每个稍微向下偏移一些可能会好看些
01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - 同样的问题
01:34:311 (3,4,5) - 难打
01:57:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 放在Hard难度偏难了
01:58:530 (5) - 加whistle 我记得我加了啊怎么没有了。。。
02:02:905 (1,2,3,4) - 干脆四个全部stack好些 我觉得不如这样好诶
02:04:155 (1) - 不好读
02:08:530 (5) - 好鬼畜
02:16:498 (6) - 加whistle，NC 感觉不大好。。。
02:16:655 (1) - 去NC
02:18:842 (4) - 滑条尾加whistle 不好听诶。。。
02:19:780 (3) - 加whistle 也不太好的感觉。。。
02:52:905 (1) - 去NC
02:53:217 (2) - NC
03:02:905 (1,2) - ^ 这个nc的我也要再看看，因为我之前的想法和你一样，但是后面觉得别扭，我再看看吧。。。
难度方面的我要再斟酌斟酌，的确是有点难了，但是我还不知道怎么改。。。然后就是音效什么的我还要再看，反正现在的感觉不大好。
谢谢mod~

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Regou
1,916 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
反正我都好久沒Mod圖也就mod一下吧~w~...
From CLANNED modding queue

[I can pass]
I can pass too
00:45:405 (1) - 感覺這個略醜啊,不改下嘛
不會mod ;__;...

[220B]
感覺Normal最好還是用CS3, 簡單難度note的密度都比較低所以用CS4並不好看
考慮下HP+1?
00:50:717 (2,3) - 個人不喜歡這樣放...(2)換成note?
00:55:717 (2,3) - 同上
01:04:155 (1) - 去掉NC
01:26:655 (1) - ^
01:27:905 (3) - NC
01:36:655 (1) - 同上,去NC,然後在01:37:905 (3)再加NC
01:55:405 (1,2) - 不好看啊;__;...
02:41:655 (3) - 感覺應該可以再拉圓滑一點,那樣比較好看...
02:46:030 (2) - 當心被XAT挑._.(不過個人覺得沒問題)

[Hardy]
00:47:592 (6) - Ctrl+H?
01:19:155 (6,7) - 老是覺得怪怪的,...算了,還好
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - 好梗
01:29:155 (2,3) - 這種大跳放在Hard diff不太合適, 改下spacing吧
01:39:155 (1) - 第一次玩的時候不太看得到軌道...
01:55:873 (4,5) - 1 grid left
01:56:655 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing弄小一點會更容易辨認到這個Anti-jump
02:07:123 (5,6,7,8) - Ctrl+R,比較容易看到排位>__>
02:10:405 (1) - Finish?
02:11:030 (1) - ^
02:11:655 (2) - ^
02:12:280 (2) - ^
03:22:905 (1,2) - Slider路軌重疊了...?
03:29:155 (1,1,1,1,1) - 好像不太合節奏啊...?
老實說挺喜歡這個diff的,加油~~

[JauiPlksp3]
神難度名
00:42:436 (1,2) - 這兩個Ctrl+R好像比較符合節奏...?
01:29:467 (5,6) - 這兩個分別Ctrl+R比較好打
02:59:623 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing大一點...
03:24:155 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 聲量弄漸大啊,就這樣下太... o.o

加油!! :D
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~m4m
[JauiPlKsp3]
  1. 02:00:405 (1) - 感觉上这个应该在这里会比较好～～能跟上flow：坐标456:68，形状上和后面的(2)对称过来 看了 但这样会破坏02:00:405 (1,2,3) - 的组合 我把02:00:092 (1,2) - 颠倒了一下貌似flow好点
  2. 02:03:217 (2) - ctrl+r下试试？类似LC常用的那种反向slider flow 感觉区别不大 但改了
  3. 02:07:905 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里4个一组的分组比这样3、5的分组要舒服，做成2组四方跳吧：改了 虽然这么改我打着感觉有点怪
    把02:08:373 (1) - 放到88:180，然后02:08:529 (2,3,4,5) - 整体改成逆时针的方向（3和5位置互换），最后把NC放到02:08:529 (2) -
  4. 03:17:905 (1) - 这里ctrl+r下打起来会比较舒服，03:18:530 (3) - 同
吐槽完毕给星闪人～

regou: 鬼畜
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Regou wrote:

[Hardy]
00:47:592 (6) - Ctrl+H? 不了吧。。。我觉得还好啊。。。
01:19:155 (6,7) - 老是覺得怪怪的,...算了,還好 >~ <
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - 好梗 嘿嘿
01:29:155 (2,3) - 這種大跳放在Hard diff不太合適, 改下spacing吧 的确有点太跳。。。换了换
01:39:155 (1) - 第一次玩的時候不太看得到軌道... 这个我不知道改不改或者该怎么改。。。先放着咯
01:55:873 (4,5) - 1 grid left 那样就歪了诶OJZ
01:56:655 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing弄小一點會更容易辨認到這個Anti-jump 好吧管他DS。。。又改小了点
02:07:123 (5,6,7,8) - Ctrl+R,比較容易看到排位>__> 这个的确是，但是我觉得吧不改的话玩起来更有意思。。。先保留吧，再看看后面的modder怎么说
02:10:405 (1) - Finish?
02:11:030 (1) - ^
02:11:655 (2) - ^
02:12:280 (2) - ^太吵了感觉。。。音乐很轻的
03:22:905 (1,2) - Slider路軌重疊了...? 这个不可以吗？我还真不知道。。我问问在改咯
03:29:155 (1,1,1,1,1) - 好像不太合節奏啊...? 我觉得还好吧，最后这样放主要是比较好玩 :D
老實說挺喜歡這個diff的,加油~~
谢谢~


加油!! :D
谢谢mod~！ :D

下载咯
Steph De Chine
93 posts
Joined June 2012
Steph De Chine
好吧……我忽然发现自己不是很会Mod了……那就随便给点小意见吧……
I can pass
00:42:905 (2,3) - I can pass还让note被压住?新手会有意见的
01:22:905 (2,3) - 同上
02:52:905 (2,3) - 同上
03:12:905 (2,3) - 同上

220B
01:52:592 (4) - 去掉折返箭头
01:57:592 (3) - 去掉折返箭头
02:02:592 (4) - 去掉折返箭头
02:07:592 (4) - 去掉折返箭头
02:57:592 (4) - 缩短一半
03:02:592 (4) - 缩短一半

原谅我……本周比较忙，就只能先Mod成这样了……
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings
[General]
Combocolours跟BG顏色太像``瞎眼``看不清``求對比向Combocolours
這些奇葩的難度名到底是怎麼來的0.0?(220B)
難度跨度有點大啊1星直接跳到4星``然後hard又突然難那麼多
[I can pass]
I can fc
00:42:905 (2,3) - E用stack 差評
01:22:905 (2,3) - ^
02:52:905 (2,3) - ^
03:12:905 (2,3) - ^
[220B]
00:42:905 (1) - 來點弧線?osu.ppy.sh/ss/430951
00:53:530 (3) - ^http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430952
00:53:530 (3,1,2) - 1後面的拉上一點?讓3的尾巴跟1 2成一直線
02:01:967 (3,4) - 4歪了點第二個點大概在x272 y160
03:06:655 (3) - 往左一格
03:09:155 (3) - 既然拉成直線了就前面的對上0.0右1上1
[Hardly]
爲什麽我感覺這GD比給我的GD還好
於是很多地方的clap都沒有放``音量太大的話可以調低點(clap有點太大聲了``建議用軟件減大概1~2分貝?)
00:41:030 (1) -
00:42:280 (4) -
00:43:530 - 大概是類似這些位置``我就不找了
00:47:592 (6) - 沒弄平``斜了
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - 於是這樣放沒問題?
01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:39:155 (1) - 前面0.5這裡突然加速1.5相當於普通的1.0突然變成2.0``太突兀了``容易miss
01:51:655 (7,1) - stack
01:54:155 (7) - 如果改了上面的這裡也一起改
02:27:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這形狀不好看``暫時想不到別的形狀(打
[JauiPlksp3]
原來首尾相連成3P就是說的這裡
01:07:905 (1,2,3,4) - 2可以跟01:06:967 (3) - 這裡stack``然後如果改的話4個都要重新排一排
02:30:405 (1) - 這坨東西下面能不能小一點``我放的靠上一點就拖斷slider了``起碼讓圈圈包住中間啊http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430988

泥馬全是神麻婆陣容讓我怎麼mod
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-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Lan wings wrote:

[Hardly]
爲什麽我感覺這GD比給我的GD還好 没有啦，风格不一样~我觉得我给你那个GD才叫漂亮啊OJZ
於是很多地方的clap都沒有放``音量太大的話可以調低點(clap有點太大聲了``建議用軟件減大概1~2分貝?) clap？我好像都没有用clap诶。。。
00:41:030 (1) -
00:42:280 (4) -
00:43:530 - 大概是類似這些位置``我就不找了 恩我在看
00:47:592 (6) - 沒弄平``斜了 fixed~!
01:25:405 (1,1,1,1) - 於是這樣放沒問題? 我也不知道，我觉得挺好的。。slider开始结尾也都能看到。。。
01:35:405 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:39:155 (1) - 前面0.5這裡突然加速1.5相當於普通的1.0突然變成2.0``太突兀了``容易miss 改掉了
01:51:655 (7,1) - stack 嗯
01:54:155 (7) - 如果改了上面的這裡也一起改 好
02:27:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這形狀不好看``暫時想不到別的形狀(打 我觉得还好。。。如果有新的好看的的形状的话我会改
谢谢mod~！
更新咯
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
mod4mod time

I can pass
01:36:655 (2,3,4,1) - about this placing ? (2,3,5)http://puu.sh/14Nd6 and next one stack on (3)
02:10:405 - volume 20~30% down ?
02:30:405 (5) - add whistle
02:50:405 (1) - I think it's too near the spinner end

220B
00:49:780 (4) - nazi 1grid right (same y line as (3)end)
00:51:655 (4) - bit down and you can make more goog bracket
00:56:655 (4,5) - like this ? http://puu.sh/14Ns9
01:16:655 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/14Nvz (3)stack on 01:15:092 (4)
02:05:405 (1) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/14NyH

Hardy
01:04:780 (6,1) - I think need more spacing http://puu.sh/14NFd
01:10:092 (1) - remove NC
01:10:405 (3) - NC
01:51:030 (5) - 1 grid left and fix spacing
01:53:530 (5) - ^
01:59:155 (1) - Flow is bad. like this ? http://puu.sh/14NLp
02:44:155 (4,5,6,7,8) - use same spacing is good

JauiPlKsp3
00:42:280 (1,2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/14NVX
01:10:092 (4,5,1) - make a jump
01:30:561 (2) - ctr+R?
02:14:936 (2,4) - ^
03:27:436 (1,2) - ^

That's all
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Laurier wrote:

Hardy
01:04:780 (6,1) - I think need more spacing http://puu.sh/14NFd ok fixed~!
01:10:092 (1) - remove NC
01:10:405 (3) - NC all fixed!~
01:51:030 (5) - 1 grid left and fix spacing
01:53:530 (5) - ^ fixed all
01:59:155 (1) - Flow is bad. like this ? http://puu.sh/14NLp true, the flow is bad, but i don't really like the way you offered... so changed into something else
02:44:155 (4,5,6,7,8) - use same spacing is good oops :P
thanks for modding~!
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x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
Hi,there._.
来骗kds的>_>,大部分只是建议

不考虑bpmx2么

JauiPlKsp3
00:49:780 (4,5) - 换个位置
02:07:280 (3) - 换成1slider+1cirle

Hardy
那些slider的遮挡真的没问题么0.0

其它都好
实在没什么好挑的233，star个
Deni
Deni

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General

You should explain what kind of difficulty "220B, Hardy, I can pass, JauiPlKsp3" is in your first post or just make them into regular ones. (Easy,Hard...)

I can pass (Easy)

00:44:155 (3) - I think stacks are too difficult for beginner because they can't see the circle. Change it maybe..
01:04:155 (4) - Remove Clap and then add on 3rd reverse arrow so that it fits to the rest.
01:09:155 (4) - ^
01:14:155 (5) - ^
01:20:405 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! (AiMod)
01:24:155 (3) - Same as 00:44:155 (3)
01:54:155 (4) - Remove Clap and then add on 3rd reverse arrow so that it fits to the rest.
02:24:155 (4) - ^
02:29:155 (4) - Remove Clap on reverse arrow.
02:50:405 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! (AiMod)
02:54:155 (3) - Same as 00:44:155 (3)
03:14:155 (3) - ^
03:24:155 (4) - Make the hitsond the same like 03:19:155 (5) -

220B (Normal, I guess)

Good difficulty but you might work a bit on your slider..

01:51:030 (3) - Make this slider more symmetrical
02:27:905 (2,3) - Mhh only straight lines? Maybe add a curve or make it more interesting.
02:59:155 (3) - ^
03:11:030 (2) - ^

That's all I found in your mapset. Contact me ingame or PM me if you have any questions.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[I can pass]
01:04:155 (4) - 低难度还是建议不要用多次折返

[220B]
00:39:780 (2) - 最好不要多次折返
01:02:905 (1) - miss a NC?
02:26:655 (3) - 不对称，可以调整一下：


[Hardy]
00:44:155 (4,1) - nazi - 没stack好
00:54:780 (5,1) - ^
01:08:842 (1,2) - 以为是和01:06:342 (3,4)一样的节奏
01:10:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉有点歪，用多边形功能？
02:49:155 (1,2) - nazi - 包围02:50:405 (1)不是包得很好
02:57:748 (8,1,2,3,4) - 稍微拉开点距离避免重叠？
03:07:748 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:29:467 (1,1,1) - 可以不用每个都NC

[JauiPlKsp3]
96acc都会死，考虑减HP
00:47:436 (1) - 去NC
00:48:530 (5) - 如果不减HP，这里最好加NC
01:05:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段建议缩小间距，因为音乐比前面弱，排列却比前面难
01:10:092 (4) - 和前面的距离比较容易误判为1/4
01:22:592 (3) - 又有stack又是half-backing，所以加NC？
01:39:155 (1,2,3,4) - 用和01:37:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6)类似的节奏和梗？现在这样感觉略单调。（特别是01:39:780 (3)这里没有跳感觉不好）或者把这两组梗交换一下位置？
02:23:217 (3) - 同01:22:592 (3)
02:25:717 (3) - ^
02:30:405 (1) - 建议ctrl+h一下
03:12:436 (1) - 去掉NC
03:22:436 (1) - ^
03:27:436 (1) - ^

That's all I can find. GL~
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

x847606653 wrote:

Hardy
那些slider的遮挡真的没问题么0.0 我也说不好啊。。。我觉得没什么问题。。。
谢谢mod！~

popner wrote:

[Hardy]
00:44:155 (4,1) - nazi - 没stack好 fixed
00:54:780 (5,1) - ^ fixed！
01:08:842 (1,2) - 以为是和01:06:342 (3,4)一样的节奏 这个怎么说呢，我觉得还好其实。。。
01:10:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉有点歪，用多边形功能？ 的确，5歪了
02:49:155 (1,2) - nazi - 包围02:50:405 (1)不是包得很好 嗯改掉了
02:57:748 (8,1,2,3,4) - 稍微拉开点距离避免重叠？ 还好啦这个
03:07:748 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:29:467 (1,1,1) - 可以不用每个都NC 好看~
谢谢mod~！

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giO-
giO-
Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149


General

The .mp3 file is 4.17min and all maps on mapset finish on 03:30:405 - , so i suggest to cut .mp3.
Anyway i did it for you if you will follow this suggestion. Here the cut mp3 http://puu.sh/15Fu6


220B

00:39:780 (2) - delete 2 repeats and add beat here 00:40:405 - , sound better to me instead of the slider repeats
00:50:717 (2,3) - maybe unstack? i think the pattern looks better if you do it
00:55:717 (2,3) - maybe same here as above ^
00:59:780 (3) - you forgot the clap here
01:21:030 (3) - clap? it sound nice
01:22:280 - also here, you should add clap
01:23:530 (2) - here too ^
01:28:842 (3) - remove 2 repeats and add beat here 01:29:467 - ?
01:31:030 (3) - clap here
01:32:280 - ^
01:33:530 (2) - ^
01:38:842 (3) - as i said on previous suggestion "remove 2 repeats and add beat here 01:39:467 - ?"
02:42:592 (4) - move this on x:368 y:152
02:52:280 - clap?
02:53:217 (1) - this slider sound a bit weird, maybe you should remove repeat and add beat on 02:53:842 - , that's sound better to me, if you do it just add clap on the end of slider here 02:53:530 -
02:54:780 (4) - clap
02:55:717 (1) - ^
02:57:280 (3) - ^
02:58:530 - ^
03:01:030 - ^
03:02:280 - ^
03:03:530 (2) - ^
03:06:030 - ^
03:07:280 - ^
03:08:530 - ^
03:26:967 - beat here?


Hardy

01:30:405 (1) - remove new combo and add on 01:30:717 (2) - ?
02:00:248 (3) - move this on x:284 y:196 , it seems almost overlapped to the previous slider on 01:59:780 (2) -
02:02:748 (6) - move on x:92 y:160
02:06:030 (2) - remove 1 repeat and add beat here 02:06:498 -


Good luck! ;)
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

giO- wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149



Hardy

01:30:405 (1) - remove new combo and add on 01:30:717 (2) - ? don't wanna change it...
02:00:248 (3) - move this on x:284 y:196 , it seems almost overlapped to the previous slider on 01:59:780 (2) - i don't think that would matter... keep it for now...
02:02:748 (6) - move on x:92 y:160 its straight now...
02:06:030 (2) - remove 1 repeat and add beat here 02:06:498 - hmmm...nope...


Good luck! ;)
thanks for modding~!

可能改了一点点吧。。。
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thanks for modding everyone! Some issues have been fixed.
Updated!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there


[General]
* Your diff name makes people confuse which one is hard or insane diff. You should change it into difficulty name (e.g. "Easy", "Normal")


[I can pass]
01:20:405 (1) - The sliderpath is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners can't see the path clearly
02:30:405 (1) - Why you need a new combo here?
02:50:405 (1) - Same issue as 01:20:405 (1)


[220B]
03:12:905 (1) - I think this slider needs more wavy


[Hardy]
* AR -1? Your current approach rate are bit fast
* More than three unique slider speeds shouldn't be used

02:02:280 (5) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's useless


That's all I got, good luck
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