12:32 Kawayi Rika: : hi 248
12:32 Byakugan249: : orz 248...
12:32 Byakugan249: : Rika what's up?
12:32 Kawayi Rika: : opps 249 ;w;
12:32  *Byakugan249 pets Rika
12:32 Byakugan249: : dw about it :3
12:32  *Kawayi Rika is listening to (Mizuki Nana - Innocent Starter (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58390]
12:32 Kawayi Rika: : i finish this
12:32 Kawayi Rika: : can test play?
12:32 Byakugan249: : oh you want me to test--sure i'll do it
12:33 Kawayi Rika: : thanks
12:33 Byakugan249: : can you wait a bit...the dl is taking a bit longer than i expected
12:34 Kawayi Rika: : ok
12:37 Byakugan249: : nice nice...but i have some suggestions 
12:38 Byakugan249: : 00:02:623 (1) - this spinner for example. the whistle is too loud here. i suggest decreasing it to 20% to match the music
12:43 Kawayi Rika: : not loud to me ;w;
12:44 Byakugan249: : oh...well it might annoy other players IMO. are you sure it's ok?
12:44 Kawayi Rika: : ok
12:45 Byakugan249: : 00:21:487 - add a circle here. the vocals speed up by 1/4 here
12:46 Kawayi Rika: : sound better ~ but this is hard diff ;w; so i keep this
12:46 Byakugan249: : alright then 
12:47 Byakugan249: : 00:27:964 (5) - ctrl+R for a smooth transition from (3,4)? i think doing this would keep the flow going during gameplay IMO
12:53 Kawayi Rika: : i guess that's fine ;w;
12:53 Byakugan249: : hmm alright
12:53 Byakugan249: : 00:37:055 (5,6,7) - the whistles here bothered me. do you mind telling me what my match?
12:54 Kawayi Rika: : i'm not sure this point whistle
12:55 Byakugan249: : because i'm thinking that a whistle should be at the beginning of (5) and at (7). the whistle at (6) sounds like it doesn't belong there IMO
12:55 Byakugan249: : it'll act as a mini clash in the cymbals since it plays along with the drums
12:57 Kawayi Rika: : which?
12:58 Byakugan249: : the whistles should be at the beginning of (5) and at (7). [http://puu.sh/111n2 here]
12:58 Kawayi Rika: : 00:37:737 - 
12:58 Kawayi Rika: : 00:37:737 - 
12:58 Kawayi Rika: : 00:38:646 - 
12:58 Byakugan249: : ohh 
12:59 Byakugan249: : 00:37:055 - 
12:59 Byakugan249: : 00:38:873 -
12:59 Byakugan249: : that's where the drums are
12:59 Byakugan249: : i mean the thump in the drums
13:00 Kawayi Rika: : 00:37:964 - 
13:00 Kawayi Rika: : add here?
13:00 Kawayi Rika: : 00:38:873 - 
13:00 Kawayi Rika: : i guess no need here
13:00 Byakugan249: : no that sounds unfitting IMO
13:01 Byakugan249: : 00:50:692 (3) - move this up by 1/2. that's where the bass changes in the song. 
13:02 Byakugan249: : wait...looks like you're following the cymbals here
13:02 Kawayi Rika: : it's fine imo..really
13:03 Kawayi Rika: : try listen 25%
13:03 Byakugan249: : 00:53:192 (5,6) - maybe add claps to match the drums?
13:04 Kawayi Rika: : nope..
13:04 Kawayi Rika: : noisy
13:04 Byakugan249: : ahh alright
13:04 Byakugan249: : 00:58:192 - how about a circle here to match the drums?
13:06 Kawayi Rika: : same as 00:21:487
13:06 Kawayi Rika: : ;w;
13:06 Byakugan249: : ahh right it's a hard diff
13:06 Kawayi Rika: : yep 
13:06 Byakugan249: : everytime i see "Rika" on your mapsets, i think of them as insane diffs ><
13:06 Kawayi Rika: : orz
13:07 Kawayi Rika: : you should see Creator's Words
13:07 Kawayi Rika: : ><
13:07 Byakugan249: : yea ik...i look at that and then i forget D:
13:07 Kawayi Rika: : ><
13:08 Kawayi Rika: : it's fine :D
13:09 Byakugan249: : 01:00:010 (2) - hmm...a clap at the end to match the drums?
13:16 Kawayi Rika: : no fit..
13:17 Byakugan249: : even when the volume decreases?
13:17 Byakugan249: : try 50%
13:17 Kawayi Rika: : I just don't like clap here ;w;
13:17 Byakugan249: : ahh i see
13:17 Byakugan249: : 01:01:146 (1) - ok NC here. this is where the lyrics change in the song
13:18 Kawayi Rika: : ok ~added
13:18 Byakugan249: : 01:08:419 (1) - alright, remove the NC here. it's still following the hold from the 1/1 slider
13:19 Byakugan249: : (3) should be a NC because of new lyrics
13:19 Kawayi Rika: : fixed
13:19 Kawayi Rika: : you're right
13:19 Byakugan249: : 01:23:646 (4) - same as above, but this is up to you
13:20 Kawayi Rika: : 01:23:646 - 
13:20 Kawayi Rika: : added
13:20 Byakugan249: : i guess that's it D:
13:21 Byakugan249: : pretty nice diff you got here :3
13:21 Kawayi Rika: : yep ~ thanks ><
13:21 Kawayi Rika: : you can post log
13:21 Kawayi Rika: : i kd ><
13:21 Byakugan249: : yay~ :D

Melophobia wrote:

quick mod~

[Easy]
00:00:692 (1) - a bit nazi, but this slider is not perfectly symmetrical. try this code! thanks code <3

156,256,692,2,0,B|188:340|324:340|356:256,1,252,0|2

00:17:510 (1) - considering this diff is the easiest one in this mapset, this note is too soon after a spinner. consider removing it>< if people remind this again i'll fix :3
00:22:510 (1,1,3) - bad overlapping imo, maybe you can try something like this 00:32:055 (1,3) - i guess here? ~ but perfect will be make confusion.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420679
not only it'll be much easier to read. looks alot better i think o.o 00:42:055 - i add nc to here.
00:45:237 (3,4) - how about this rhythm? it'll fit music better~ i guess my rhythm is fine ;w;
http://puu.sh/11ooE
01:22:964 (5) - this combo is kinda long, add newcombo here and remove from 01:24:328 (1) - fixed
01:28:646 - i think you need to add finish here if possible>< not stuff here.
01:39:442 (1) - this is kinda confusing for beginners imo, because it appears pretty suddenly. so make it start at 01:39:555 - instead, please>< it's a long spinner so i guess fine :3

[Normal]
00:37:396 (4) - there shouldnt be bluetick sliders in Normal diff imo slider imo ;w;
this is kinda hard and breaks your hitsound pattern. please start it on whitetick
00:41:146 (3,4,5) - hmm. maybe make perfect triangle like this? fixed
http://puu.sh/11ozt
00:42:510 (8) - in normal diff the number of combo should not go over 10. so add newcombo here
00:44:328 (1) - if you follow above, remove newcombo here
00:45:464 - maybe add a note here..? simpile here.
01:28:419 (4) - shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow vocal/cymbal better? dont forget to add a finish at the end if you change this please hmm,just make simple rhythm here,same as above.
01:32:510 (5,6,7) - really really too hard compared with the rest pattern >< change (5,6) into a slider at least hmm,will think this ;w;

[Rika]
00:20:237 (4,5) - i prefer something like this for better playing i just make Symmetry here.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420685
00:58:192 - i'd add a note here to follow bass in the music >_< it's hard diff so i keep ;w;
01:13:760 - clap sounds nice imo yep fixed.
01:30:805 - i'd add a note here too(and make triplet maybe) because i can hear the drum sound here sound no fit here.

good job ><b

Kanon wrote:

Long time no mod so sry for the poor mod ><

Rika
01:12:737 add note? already?
01:14:555 (1) - delete NC nope
01:14:782 (2) - add NC
01:15:237 (1) - delete NC
01:30:464 (2) - add finish? same with 01:27:964 (5,1) - sound bad to me ;w;
01:30:692 add note? nope
01:36:828 (5) - unstack is better imo

Normal
00:22:737 (2) - move it to 00:22:964 and add whistle sounds better imo i lollowing vocal to here.
00:37:055 (3,4) - use a slider instead? already?
01:23:192 (7) - move it to 01:23:419 sounds better imo nope
01:32:510 (5) - delete 5 and move 4 to 01:32:055 sounds better imo sound bed to me ;w;
01:35:919 (4) - move to 01:36:146 better imo

Easy
00:13:873 (4) - delete and add a note at 00:14:101 it's fine imo :3

Saten wrote:

hau


[Rika]
00:05:919 (4,5,1) - NC on (4) instead? looks better if the combo start on the beginning of a stream stacking. i guess fine ?
00:45:464 (4,5) - use 1,5x spacing on (4) and 1,8x on (5) ^
01:03:419 (4) - it's pretty far down, I suggest you move 01:02:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - a few grids up just following DS.
01:14:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part could a bit tricky, would look somewhat easier with a NC on 01:14:896 (3) i guess not a big problem.
01:25:692 (5) - make this slider more pretty? I know it the same as the others but at this angle it looks a bit weird looks fine to me ;w;

[Normal]
00:09:782 (5) - 1 grid right i guess it's fine :3
00:43:419 (9,10,1) - NC on (9) instead fixed by other.
01:10:919 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead new vocal on 01:11:601 (1) .

[Easy]
00:55:692 (3) - 1 grid right fixed
00:56:601 (1) - 2 grids down ^
00:57:964 (2) - 1 grid left ^
01:26:828 (2) - 1 grid down ^
nazi sry lol


Good luck~~♪

Star Stream wrote:

Requested via irc

[General]

1. Ok.. ._.

[Easy]

1. 00:20:692 (2) - 4그리드 정도 왼쪽으로 옮기는게 더 보기 좋을듯 대칭
2. 00:32:055 (1,3) - 조금씩 겹치는것보단 완전 포개어버리는게? 보기 어려워 그럼
3. 00:35:237 (4) - 여기부터 콤보 시작하면 대칭 좀 더 완벽하게 보일듯 보컬이 00:36:146 - 여기서 시작해서
4. 01:25:237 (2,1,2,3) - 2번 슬라이더 서클 2개로 하고 1,2,3번 서클 슬라로 처리하면 좀 더 쉬울듯 이것도 쉬운데

[Normal]

1. 00:11:601 (1) - 일부러 완벽하게 대칭 안시킨건지.. 지금은 됐을지..
2. 00:31:146 (7,8) - 슬라처리하는게 더 자연스러울듯 괜찮은데?
3. 00:41:146 (3,8) - 뉴콤보? ㄴㄴ
4. 00:54:782 (2) - 일부러 완벽하게 대칭 안시킨건지.. 지금은 됐을지..
5. 01:11:373 (7) - 콤보 리듬 깨긴 해도 여기부터 콤보 시작하는게 더 보기 좋을듯.. ㄴㄴ
6. 01:22:510 (5) - 뉴콤 ㅇㅇ

[Rika]

1. 00:14:782 (1) - 슬라 00:15:237 - 까지 (애로우 없이 하는게 듣기엔 더 좋을듯) 난 괜찮은데
2. 00:21:601 (7) - 뉴콤 필요 없을꺼 같은데
3. 00:27:964 (5) - 여기 칠때 커서 이동하는게 어색함.. 슬라 왼쪽에서 오른쪽으로 가게 하는게 좋을듯 이것도 ㄱㅊ
4. 00:31:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+r 하는게 더 치기 편할듯 ^
5. 00:34:101 (5) - 뉴콤 ㅇㅇ
6. 00:40:237 (3,4) - 방향 바꾸지 말고 00:39:328 (1,2) - 처럼 하는게 더 보기/치기 좋을듯.. 점프가 없어서 너무 밋밋함.. 그건 점프도 아닌데
7. 00:44:555 (2) - ^ ctrl+r

전부 제안임당

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]

1. Lead-in略长，建议1000ms足以 我觉的1500 可以:D

[Easy]

1. 00:19:328 (1,2,3) - 这两个slider我倾向于增加一点弧度来让它们看起来更柔和一些～～毕竟你这个图是以弧线为主的，在kiai之前没有必要弄的太直来直去=v= 一直弧也没意思吧=v=
   

   381,292,19328,6,0,B|256:308|130:292,1,252,2|2
   108,192,20692,1,0
   130,91,21146,2,0,B|256:76|381:91,1,252,2|2

2. 00:59:782 (1) - 尾clap

[Normal]

1. CS-1建议，另外强烈建议AR-1　 这样好玩
2. 00:15:237 (1) - 这里结束的位置用50%音量的finish+whistle感觉比现在的好听，00:17:510 (1) - 再换回80%音量即可 跟其他难度一样就好了
3. 00:22:737 (2) - 考虑来个whistle？ ok
4. 00:38:873 (6) - 同样试试加个50%音量的finish?
5. 00:41:146 (3,4,5) - 建议用一个reverse slider来做这里的节奏，缺少前后参考的连续三个note感觉有些难了。 我觉的不难;w;
6. 00:43:419 (9) - 这一整组combo长度都到10了，中间最好加个NC比如这里 在前面改了
7. 00:46:146 (5) - 下一组NC放到这里开始？ 这里还好
8. 01:00:237 (2) - 头clap
9. 01:10:237 (4,5) - 建议用一个slider来控制难度 不难;w;

[Rika]

1. 00:17:055 - 其实从这里开始到kiai有大量vocal的单/双二连节奏你都没有做，只是觉得不跟一下有点浪费的感觉～比如说把00:19:782 (3) - 提前到前面蓝线开始什么的…… 哦就是不想用复杂的节奏而已啦 =v=
2. 00:39:782 (2,3) - 这两个分别ctrl+r会打起来更舒服 不想跳这里 我一般hard里不跳
3. 01:00:010 (2) - 尾clap 不喜欢
4. 01:36:828 (5) - 这种stack相当破坏flow，建议放到92:52，然后尾巴方向改一下 改了下
   

that's all~~ good luck with rank :>

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright now i'm ready~

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:09:833 (3,4) - the whistle should be at (4). adding a whistle at the end of (3) breaks the consistency in the whistles. i just following Instrumental here ><
00:24:379 (3) - perhaps you can move this between (2) for a blanket since the red (3) is being blanketed? i guess this is fine imo.
00:54:833 (2,3) - do this instead. it should follow the vocals and the drums at the end of (3)(mainly the vocals) accurately. sorry,i don't think so ;w;
01:39:493 (1) - move this up by 1/4. it might surprise beginners during gameplay. again ~ long spinner it's fine ><

[Normal]
00:01:652 (2) - Ctrl+J for a smooth transition from the 1st note? i feel that by doing this, the flow would look smoother during gameplay IMO. yep,nice idea fixed ~
00:22:788 (2) - remove the whistle here. it breaks the consistency in the whistles during gameplay. yep, fixed ~
00:37:447 (4) - since you have a whistle at the beginning, how about adding it at the end to emphasize the vocals? sound no fit ;w;

[Rika]
maybe OD7 to reduce the harshness of hitting the notes? OD7 is too easy for this diff.
00:09:379 (5) - this slider is my biggest concern because it might surprise other players with the direction it's taking. i suggest that you do Ctrl+R so that the flow will continue to the next note. i just make small jump here.
01:16:652 (4) - Ctrl+R because it'll be consistent with the next (4,5) since a jump is there. looks fine imo,because end point following DS.

and that's it. wow i didn't expect my mod to be this short . i guess because the map flows smooth and the transition is there. catch me in-game for a re-check.