1. Collab (5 stars, 249 notes)
2. Easy (2,19 stars, 78 notes)
3. Hard (4,84 stars, 171 notes)
4. Hinsvar's WILL (5 stars, 284 notes)
5. Normal (3,38 stars, 97 notes)

BIG THANKS <3

Kuria for BG and allow me to use his skin
- t e n n y a - for muzukashii diff (not in mapset) Taiko muzukashii by tennya
Hinsvar for Will's diff and insane collab diff
kg2161012 for oni diff~ (not in mapset) Taiko Oni by kg2161012
all modder ^_^
Andrea for bubble >//< but i popped it because change video etc orz
Gabe for bubble back >///<
Melophobia and NoHitter for checking this map
And Garven for rank

______VOSE wrote:

Kiai can't longer than 1/3 of the song
snap the timings with currect line

Normal+
Too big change space between note to note

Hard
00:04:150(1) maybe will be better draw this slider to next white line(00:04:561)
00:06:616(1) ^
00:08:671(2) ^
00:10:315(4) ^

00:20:589(1) ctrl+G?

-Kirito wrote:

Hi~

SPOILER

[syaoran insane]
why snap 1/6?? -> 1/4 fix
Offset 863 change - The difficulty is all the same.i(why 1,610?) fix

-Snapping
Error object 302 is released. Fix
01:13:733 (1) - 01:18:534 - spinner end? fix

RANKED Hope!!!

vladhusen wrote:

new modder ._.
i will mod it based on my experience when playing standard in the past XD

GENERAL

The title should be "KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size)" ?
Change the "syaoran insane" guest diff name to "syaoran's Insane" perhaps???


HARD

SPOILER

00:01:890 (2,4) - Strange i think ._.
00:11:547 (1,2,3) - The rhytm unfit i think
00:11:547 (1,2,3) - Remove the Finish hitsound?
00:18:945 (5,6,7) - The rhytm unfit i think
00:23:054 (7) - The hitsound, remove or change it maybe?
01:09:801 (4,5) - Strange rhytm i think?

frans_niko wrote:

hai

Insane by syaoran19
00:15:657 - slidder not snapping Fix

+ IRC mod

1. 00:02:095 (6) ugly slider. use this:
   

   312,104,2095,2,0,B|385:114|401:179,1,125

   ( http://puu.sh/1lv8W )
2. 00:18:739 add note
3. 00:48:534 (1) you definitely use more slider points for those sliders (pm me if you don't know what to do with the code)
   

   192,184,48534,6,0,B|112:224|144:360|264:336,1,224.999993133545,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   ( http://puu.sh/1lvcG )
4. there are some more sliders, which need some more sliderpoints. You just need to look for long sliders with sharp curves and only 3 sliderpoints

1. 00:02:506 try this: http://puu.sh/1lvgx
2. 00:08:465 put (2) to this point and add a circle at 00:09:082
3. 00:21:205 try this: http://puu.sh/1lvi2
4. 00:31:273 (6) cut the slider to 00:31:890 and add circle at 00:32:095

1. 00:02:506 put the slider (4) to this point and add a circle at 00:03:328
2. 01:04:150 ugly slider make it more like this: http://puu.sh/1lvku
   

   376,216,64150,2,8,B|352:300|228:328|152:256,1,260,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   (also you can pm me if you don't know what to do with the code)
3. 01:08:260 (1) cut it to 01:08:876 and add circle at 01:09:082
4. 01:11:136 (7) omg

1. 00:03:739 add note
2. 00:09:082 add note
3. 00:16:479 try this: http://puu.sh/1lvmW
4. 00:44:013 (3) replace it pls it's hard to read it: http://puu.sh/1lvnm
5. 00:53:465 this spinner is too hard for an easy diff. better map this part normal. Also the time after the spinner is too short for Easy . I think the first note could be at 00:55:109

1. Song folder - syaoran bg.png - png has a slightly big filesize. and nazi. size 1024×767. so i recommend that you change the size and jpg. http://puu.sh/1mWRB
2. Preview Point - Only syaoran's Insane diff is different. ( Insane:41721. others diff:41547. ) 41547 is most suitable than 41721. so plz change to 41547 for shaoran's Insane diff.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - This does not have unity. I suggest that you align all diff from .osu Notepad.
4. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - too fast for the beginning of the note. I recommend that you add +2000ms
5. Song Setup - Difficulty name - 「syaoran's insane] ⇒ change to 「syaoran's Insane」

• I show an important point here. and sorry, I do not point out the same point. please improve the repeating point by yourself

1. 00:02:506 (2) - http://puu.sh/1mXbA I cannot recommend that I make such a overlap in Easy. and also not good-looking == I recommend that you separate it and put it.
2. 00:02:506 (2,3) - You are using a certain rhythm. but difference in sudden spacing. This is confused for a beginner. This is to be able to say to the whole in easy, I recommend that you use DS with constant.
3. 00:04:150 (1) - http://puu.sh/1mXnU reason same as 00:02:506 (2). but This is not particularly good in easy. 00:02:506 (2,3) - It is at the position covered in hitburst of this
4. 00:07:027 (4) - stack after the slider. I cannot recommend the use about this either in easy.
5. 00:09:493 (3,4) - simple rhythm of sudden. This does not fit the flow of the previous note rhythm. 00:09:904 (x) - You should put a sound here even at least.
6. 00:12:369~00:41:958 - The volume difference is too large. 60⇒100% and during this time, the quiet part exists. so please adjust the volume. ( In general, 100% is not used very much)
7. 00:13:602 (3,1) - sudden jumps. This is the same as others, too. The sudden jump is difficult for a beginner
8. 00:16:890 (4) - add NC(New Combo). Turning point of the rhythm
9. 00:25:520 (1,1) - Timing after the spinner is too fast in easy. ( and This thinks that it is the tolerance level, but Spinner is a little short ) so This level of support is difficult in the easy. I recommend a change of the rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/1mY2D ( 00:20:589~
10. 00:30:863 (2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1mY8i
11. 00:33:328 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/1mYae do not match a vocal a little. 00:34:150. 00:34:561. i think you should put a sound here
12. 00:43:602 (x) - add note. You should put the sound here. There is not the meaning to reduce here and becomes hard to take rhythm. Place to reduce the rhythm is there are many other.
13. 00:48:945 (2) - Repeat part is hidden in a 00:48:123 (1) hitburst. this is unrankable. You must put the repeat part not to hide
14. 00:53:465 (1,1) - same as 00:25:520 (1,1). for ex: http://puu.sh/1mYlb or spinner change to slider/circle.
15. 01:09:904 (2,3,4,1) - Rhythm here does not match. for ex: http://puu.sh/1mYsM
    
    distance snap（DS) has many problems, so probably you do not use this o.o;
    Please try to improve them using the DS

• same Easy. I show an important point here. and sorry, I do not point out the same point. please improve the repeating point by yourself
  
  DS is the same as the easy diff. Please try to improve them using the DS. However, normal does not necessarily have to make constant. ( but care must be taken: it is not suitable for normal when there are many jumps )

1. 00:00:863~00:41:958 - The volume is too large. I recommend adjustments as easy.
2. 00:02:095 (2) - stack after the slider. I cannot recommend this in normal either
3. 00:09:493 (1,2) - Rhythm is constant. but spacing is different. this may mistake this for 1/2 rhythm.
4. 00:11:547 (3) - add NC. rhythm change point.]
5. 00:11:547 (3,4) - This rhythm does not match a little. Better fit of simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n2Pf
6. 00:23:876 (5) - add NC
7. 00:34:972 (1) - too long slider. No problem If it matches it very much. but I do not think this is the best rhythm try like 00:33:328 (1,2). http://puu.sh/1n2SN
8. 00:48:922 (2,3,4) - unsnapped. Please put it on the line.
9. 00:53:465 (1) - Too short spinner. This is not suitable for normal. Please change it to something or If you want to use the spinner, try like this: http://puu.sh/1n2Ww
10. 00:54:698 (1) - unsnapped slider end.
11. 01:10:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should stop how to put these patterns for normal. do not be too much overlap/stack

• This diff is the same, too. Please utilize DS. The use of this is to improve the flow and it looks. but, this is harddiff. You should put a jump moderately

1. 00:09:082 (3,4) - 00:08:465 (2,3) - As for these two, rhythm is different. but DS is about the same. Such how to use confuses a player.
2. 00:09:493 (4) - add NC
3. 00:09:493 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n380 ( 00:07:849 (1,2,3) - Because you match here with a vocal, I suggest the rhythm that fitted a vocal in the same way )
4. 00:39:698 (x) - 00:39:287 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - when you put note in succession here, 00:39:698 - I feel that you should put note here. Because it has a consecutive sound there, I think there is very empty if you do not put a note.
5. 00:51:410 (9) - add NC and 00:52:232 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:53:465 (4) - add NC
7. 00:53:465 (4,5,6,7,8) - It confuses some this rhythm. (00:53:773 (7,8) - Rhythm of here in particular ) rhythm that I suggest for ex: http://puu.sh/1n3fx
8. 01:06:616 (7) - add NC

1. 00:03:945 (7) - add NC and 00:04:150 (1) - remove NC. This makes an appearance better
2. 00:05:178 (5) - move rhythm to 00:05:280. This matches a vocal more imo
3. 00:12:369 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n3mA I think fit than a your simple rhythm
4. 00:14:760(green line) - soft sound of a sudden. 00:14:013 - It is from here in a turning point of the melody. so i suggest 00:14:013 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and 00:14:116 - add green line. ( sampleset: softsound )
5. 00:14:630 (2) - unsnapped slider end. end 00:15:041.
6. 00:15:657 (5,1) - During this time, do not fit the rhythm of a little. for ex: http://puu.sh/1n3rM
7. 00:18:945 (7) - add NC or 00:19:972 (8) - add NC
8. 00:21:438(green line) - This volume change does not have meanings. I recommend that you remove this. or if you want to change the volume, 00:20:589 is better. but is not recommended for use in 100%
9. 00:24:623(green line) - also normalsound of a sudden. 00:24:184 - It is here in a turning point of the melody.
10. 00:41:267(green line) - ^ 00:41:547 - It is here in a turning point of the melody. and Volume is slightly smaller. 80% is better imo.
11. 00:49:356 (3,4) - 00:48:534 (1,2) - I recommend about the same spacing here. The placement that this may get a wrong rhythm
12. 01:08:260~ I thought that you should not put the whistle from here.
13. 01:12:705(green line) - slider speed change of a sudden. 01:13:191 - As for the turning point of the slider speed change point, here is better
14. 01:14:349~ Move the position of the green line.
    
    Gap of the green line == Just do not change when you change this offset? Anyway, plz adjust it

kosiga wrote:

[syaoran's insane]

1. 00:03:945 (7) - add NC and 00:04:150 (1) - remove NC. This makes an appearance better fix
2. 00:05:178 (5) - move rhythm to 00:05:280. This matches a vocal more imo fix
3. 00:12:369 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n3mA I think fit than a your simple rhythm D: I thought change or not rhythm
4. 00:14:760(green line) - soft sound of a sudden. 00:14:013 - It is from here in a turning point of the melody. so i suggest 00:14:013 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and 00:14:116 - add green line. ( sampleset: softsound ) fix
5. 00:14:630 (2) - unsnapped slider end. end 00:15:041. fix
6. 00:15:657 (5,1) - During this time, do not fit the rhythm of a little. for ex: http://puu.sh/1n3rM fix
7. 00:18:945 (7) - add NC or 00:19:972 (8) - add NC fix
8. 00:21:438(green line) - This volume change does not have meanings. I recommend that you remove this. or if you want to change the volume, 00:20:589 is better. but is not recommended for use in 100% ok me remove this
9. 00:24:623(green line) - also normalsound of a sudden. 00:24:184 - It is here in a turning point of the melody. fix
10. 00:41:267(green line) - ^ 00:41:547 - It is here in a turning point of the melody. and Volume is slightly smaller. 80% is better imo. fix
11. 00:49:356 (3,4) - 00:48:534 (1,2) - I recommend about the same spacing here. The placement that this may get a wrong rhythm fix
12. 01:08:260~ I thought that you should not put the whistle from here. I did not go here but the sound of the whistle song there whistle in this area
13. 01:12:705(green line) - slider speed change of a sudden. 01:13:191 - As for the turning point of the slider speed change point, here is better fix
14. 01:14:349~ Move the position of the green line. I do not know the purpose of these words is

kosiga wrote:

Hi - M i K u -

request from syaoran19 :3

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song folder - syaoran bg.png - png has a slightly big filesize. and nazi. size 1024×767. so i recommend that you change the size and jpg. http://puu.sh/1mWRB
2. Preview Point - Only syaoran's Insane diff is different. ( Insane:41721. others diff:41547. ) 41547 is most suitable than 41721. so plz change to 41547 for shaoran's Insane diff.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - This does not have unity. I suggest that you align all diff from .osu Notepad.
4. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - too fast for the beginning of the note. I recommend that you add +2000ms
5. Song Setup - Difficulty name - 「syaoran's insane] ⇒ change to 「syaoran's Insane」

[Easy]

• I show an important point here. and sorry, I do not point out the same point. please improve the repeating point by yourself

1. 00:02:506 (2) - http://puu.sh/1mXbA I cannot recommend that I make such a overlap in Easy. and also not good-looking == I recommend that you separate it and put it.
2. 00:02:506 (2,3) - You are using a certain rhythm. but difference in sudden spacing. This is confused for a beginner. This is to be able to say to the whole in easy, I recommend that you use DS with constant.
3. 00:04:150 (1) - http://puu.sh/1mXnU reason same as 00:02:506 (2). but This is not particularly good in easy. 00:02:506 (2,3) - It is at the position covered in hitburst of this
4. 00:07:027 (4) - stack after the slider. I cannot recommend the use about this either in easy.
5. 00:09:493 (3,4) - simple rhythm of sudden. This does not fit the flow of the previous note rhythm. 00:09:904 (x) - You should put a sound here even at least.
6. 00:12:369~00:41:958 - The volume difference is too large. 60⇒100% and during this time, the quiet part exists. so please adjust the volume. ( In general, 100% is not used very much)
7. 00:13:602 (3,1) - sudden jumps. This is the same as others, too. The sudden jump is difficult for a beginner
8. 00:16:890 (4) - add NC(New Combo). Turning point of the rhythm
9. 00:25:520 (1,1) - Timing after the spinner is too fast in easy. ( and This thinks that it is the tolerance level, but Spinner is a little short ) so This level of support is difficult in the easy. I recommend a change of the rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/1mY2D ( 00:20:589~
10. 00:30:863 (2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1mY8i
11. 00:33:328 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/1mYae do not match a vocal a little. 00:34:150. 00:34:561. i think you should put a sound here
12. 00:43:602 (x) - add note. You should put the sound here. There is not the meaning to reduce here and becomes hard to take rhythm. Place to reduce the rhythm is there are many other.
13. 00:48:945 (2) - Repeat part is hidden in a 00:48:123 (1) hitburst. this is unrankable. You must put the repeat part not to hide
14. 00:53:465 (1,1) - same as 00:25:520 (1,1). for ex: http://puu.sh/1mYlb or spinner change to slider/circle.
15. 01:09:904 (2,3,4,1) - Rhythm here does not match. for ex: http://puu.sh/1mYsM
    
    distance snap（DS) has many problems, so probably you do not use this o.o;
    Please try to improve them using the DS

[Normal]

• same Easy. I show an important point here. and sorry, I do not point out the same point. please improve the repeating point by yourself
  
  DS is the same as the easy diff. Please try to improve them using the DS. However, normal does not necessarily have to make constant. ( but care must be taken: it is not suitable for normal when there are many jumps )

1. 00:00:863~00:41:958 - The volume is too large. I recommend adjustments as easy.
2. 00:02:095 (2) - stack after the slider. I cannot recommend this in normal either
3. 00:09:493 (1,2) - Rhythm is constant. but spacing is different. this may mistake this for 1/2 rhythm.
4. 00:11:547 (3) - add NC. rhythm change point.]
5. 00:11:547 (3,4) - This rhythm does not match a little. Better fit of simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n2Pf
6. 00:23:876 (5) - add NC
7. 00:34:972 (1) - too long slider. No problem If it matches it very much. but I do not think this is the best rhythm try like 00:33:328 (1,2). http://puu.sh/1n2SN
8. 00:48:922 (2,3,4) - unsnapped. Please put it on the line.
9. 00:53:465 (1) - Too short spinner. This is not suitable for normal. Please change it to something or If you want to use the spinner, try like this: http://puu.sh/1n2Ww
10. 00:54:698 (1) - unsnapped slider end.
11. 01:10:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should stop how to put these patterns for normal. do not be too much overlap/stack

[Hard]

• This diff is the same, too. Please utilize DS. The use of this is to improve the flow and it looks. but, this is harddiff. You should put a jump moderately

1. 00:09:082 (3,4) - 00:08:465 (2,3) - As for these two, rhythm is different. but DS is about the same. Such how to use confuses a player.
2. 00:09:493 (4) - add NC
3. 00:09:493 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1n380 ( 00:07:849 (1,2,3) - Because you match here with a vocal, I suggest the rhythm that fitted a vocal in the same way )
4. 00:39:698 (x) - 00:39:287 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - when you put note in succession here, 00:39:698 - I feel that you should put note here. Because it has a consecutive sound there, I think there is very empty if you do not put a note.
5. 00:51:410 (9) - add NC and 00:52:232 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:53:465 (4) - add NC
7. 00:53:465 (4,5,6,7,8) - It confuses some this rhythm. (00:53:773 (7,8) - Rhythm of here in particular ) rhythm that I suggest for ex: http://puu.sh/1n3fx
8. 01:06:616 (7) - add NC

I hope that you grow up

Good luck~

1. The Normal diff doesn't have any lead-in, while other diffs have 2000ms of them. You know what to do, I guess.
2. Why does Easy have 0.6 Stack Leniency? It's not like it'll be a big trouble, but maybe set it to 0.7 (7) so it will be consistent with other diffs?

1. ...I think I detect an inconsistency in spacing. The beginning used 0.9x, and then suddenly it went to 1.0x, and more, and more... I really recommend you to remap this diff, make the spacing consistent, and use sliders that actually look appealing... If you don't want to, though, just make sure the spacing is consistent throughout the entire diff.
2. 00:00:863 (1) - Hmm... I think this slider needs some reworking. How about this?
   

   272,296,863,2,0,B|176:360|48:256|104:152,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:03:739 (3,1) - The way (3) touches (1)'s path is... weird. And...
4. 00:04:150 (1,2,3) - ...stacks can confuse new players (those who are supposed to play Easy diffs) (the stack is not perfect, by the way...), so I think you must this spot to clear these two problems. Oh, and don't forget to put finishes at 00:04:150 and 00:07:438 later after the remap, because they really fit with the song itself.
5. 00:07:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The spacing here is blatantly inconsistent...
6. 00:08:260 (2) - Just use a simple-looking slider like this.
7. 00:10:315 (5,1) - What, 1.34x? No, no, no... This kind of spacing inconsistency is just not tolerable.
8. 00:10:726 (1) - Add finish on the slider's head (the one with number). I guess I don't need to say the reason... Oh, and the end doesn't stack perfectly with 00:12:369 (2)'s end, making this look really awkward. (2) is really weird-looking anyway, so here's something for you.
   

   389,56,12369,2,0,B|341:136|213:160|213:160,1,200,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 00:12:369 (2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistency in spacing...
   
   ...I'll stop modding Easy here. There are too many problems that can only be fixed by remapping the bad parts AND making it look and play better. Yeah, I think you should remap this diff. Keep in mind to make the spacing consistent, avoid overlaps/touching between objects, and make sure sliders look good. Oh, and since this is an Easy diff, it's highly NOT recommended to make stacks.
   
   Now let me move to Normal.

• 
  ...Okay, I also don't know where to begin the mod from. Still the same problems from the Easy diff. You know, extremely inconsistent spacing, those sliders, overlaps and touches... Too bad, I think you have to remap this too *sigh* Just do the same thing like Easy, although stacks are allowed. Oh, and no jumps, okay?
  
  Hard, I guess.

1. Hmm, I don't know why, but I think this map has a really, really weird flow overall. There's just something really wrong with this diff. Try to play it by yourself, I guess.
2. 00:03:123 (8) - Move this to (189,213) (Yeah, don't use grid snap for this) so the end will perfectly stack below 00:02:712 (7)'s end, then...
3. 00:03:534 (9,10) - ...stack these circles perfectly below (8), also. Should look far better now, I guess...
4. 00:04:150 (1) - Finish to follow the song, please.
5. 00:05:383 (3) - This looks too forced, IMO. What about if you replace this with 00:04:561 (2) (copy-paste ofc), rotate this by 180 degrees, and then place this at (416,72)? For this to actually work, though, you'll need to arrange 00:05:999 (4,5,6,7,8), but I think it won't be a big hassle.
6. 00:06:616 (6,7) - Try to avoid (6)'s path from touching (7)?
7. 00:07:232 (7,1) - ^
8. 00:09:082 (3,1,2,3) - ...The inconsistency of spacing here is really confusing. A simple rearrangement should do.
9. 00:10:315 (3,4) - ...The spacing change here actually fits well with the song, but I think you should NC (4) to emphasize that change.
10. 00:11:547 (1) - This looks weird... Make something like this, maybe?
    

    200,112,11547,6,0,B|160:72|88:88|56:128,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

11. 00:12:369 (3,4) - I'm sure enough the rhythm is supposed to be like this (Yes, (3)'s repeat is on the blue tick and that's correct).
12. 00:14:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not perfectly stacked again, eh... (In case you don't know how to make a perfect stack, just place your cursor below a slider's head/tail; the object (a circle or the beginning of a slider) will be stacked below it.)
13. 00:33:328 (1) - Add finish on the repeat?
14. 00:34:972 (3) - Make this a 1/1 slider that repeats once (read: Start at the current position, end at 00:35:383, and then add a repeat), then add finish on the repeat. Trust me, it's better than what you have now.
15. 00:37:027 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider?
16. 00:37:849 (5) - Add finish?
17. 00:39:493 (11,12) - Wait, what? Just make the spacing consistent; this is seriously confusing, you know?
18. 00:39:287 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - ...It would be better to remove all these circles and make a 1/4 repeating slider that starts from 00:39:287 and ends at 00:40:212 (Just make a slider that starts at 00:39:287, end it at 00:39:390, and then drag the slider on the timeline to make sure it ends at 00:40:212). Look out for the spacing between 00:39:287 (9,10) after doing this, btw.
19. 00:48:123 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:39:493 (11,12) about the spacing.

1. 00:04:972 (5,6,7,8) - Why is the spacing so weird here... Just make it consistent and don't force a triplet, please.
2. 00:05:794 (1,2) - No, I seriously don't recommend a 1/4 jump like this. It plays really, really bad. Again, just make the spacing consistent here.
3. 00:06:616 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why don't you stack the double-notes? It looks weird for them to be spread like that, IMO...
4. 00:11:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:04:972 (5,6,7,8); the spacing change is really unreadable...
5. 00:13:294 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - What about this?
   

   296,88,13294,1,0,0:0:0
   344,88,13397,1,0,0:0:0
   392,104,13499,1,0,0:0:0
   432,128,13602,1,0,0:0:0
   448,176,13705,1,0,0:0:0
   456,224,13808,1,0,0:0:0
   440,272,13910,1,0,0:0:0
   416,312,14013,6,0,B|376:368|304:352,2,125,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

6. 00:24:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:11:034 (1,2,3,4,5).
7. 00:37:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...This is still kinda hard to read. Maybe make the spacing wider?
8. 00:45:349 (2) - Remove this and then stack 00:45:246 (1) above 00:45:452 (3)? I think there's no need of that (2) circle since it doesn't really follow anything...
9. 00:46:171 (5) - ^ (Similar case.)

1. Fine

1. 00:09:082 - finish
2. 00:10:726 (1) - overlapped with 00:09:493 (3) -
3. 00:16:890 (1) - don't change distance if you're not a experienced mapper, you don't have to make same distance for different rhythm. also this note doesn't make sense at all, i'd just add a note at 00:17:301 -
4. 00:22:232 (2) - 5~6 grid down, make better movement and avoid overlapping

1. I'd set AudioLeadIn: 1500 - don't make plaers wait too long
2. Instead of using S1005 you should try N45-55% sounds better, imo
3. That clap hitsound is annoying and doesn't fits here :V try something like custom kick-hitsound (people use it a lot in some nightcore/trance/techno tracks) or try soft whistle?

1. Not sure if it's because of bad samplesets or because of too loud volume - your hitsounds are unfitting, imo. Try to look for custom hitsounds or something like this.
2. This is your first map and it's ok to have random (and sometimes ugly, imo) sliders. But what if you'll try to be more reasonable? for example 00:29:630 (1) - here you can try something like this
3. I really think that using slider velocity changes at [Easy] is not acceptable (at least here, where it's possible to avoid it)! Slider changes are stressful for beginners.
4. Some of your sliders are overlapped. a bit. Not so big problem but I think that if you will try to avoid it - you'll get thee way better designed map
5. 00:10:726 (5) - did you forget new combo here? It feels wrong without NC here
6. 00:11:547 - don't you think that it's a bit weird to have start of vocals in the middle of slider?
7. 00:31:684 - missed beats like this one are confusing. They doesn't make map easier - they make rhythm hard to understand :<
8. 00:34:972 (3) - it's quite clear that this slider should ends at 00:36:205 - to follow vocals.
9. 00:48:945 (2) - just saying that this slider feels random herebecause 00:49:767 - is start of another part of vocals >.</
10. 00:55:109 (1,2) - sounds unfiting to me - try to replace it with this?
11. 01:02:917 - something that i call "black hole" because beat here is missed. So.. Put circle here to fix it :V
12. 01:13:602 (1) - silince end of the spinner (put s - 5% volume section before spinners end)

1. AR3 on Easy and AR4 on Normal? Don't you think that it's a bit unbalanced? Try AR5 here!
2. Your 1/1 notes are placed too far from each other. I think it's because slider velocity or distance Spacing is too big :V
3. 01:04:150 (5) - it's quite clear that 01:04:561 - there's start of new sllider. So.. replace this long-unfitting slider with one circle and 1/1 slider
4. And guess what? I don't like this slowdown \:D/ I think you can map this soong good enough without breaking flow/rhythm with slowdowns.
   
   It's not so bad. I like it. But the main problem for me is ugly (in my opinion) ugly shapes of sliders/patterns and atc. But rhythm here is good!

• 
  00:15:657 (5) - since this slider is too long it ends too late. Vocals has already start and it sounds unfitting at 00:16:890 - should be an object with new combo - not end of this slider.
  
  Explain why? I can't see any reasons to use more than one or maximum two. :/

1. 00:13:910 (4,1) - nazi- even with new combo - spacing here is hard to understant. Why don't you just follow same DS as you have in stream? why x0.1 lower? :O
2. 00:14:424 (2,3) - try to avoid overmap/overdose/overwhatever - convert it into 1/1 slider to give us some rest and folow vocals :O
3. 00:16:479 (3,1) - NC swap to make jumps funnier and to follow vocals here? ;V I think it looks good
4. 00:20:178 - you're trying to give us a good flow. but don't forget about consistent rhythm! missed circle here :<
5. 00:21:410 (1) - can't understand meaning of some new combos. for example here. It's Extra - you can jump wherever you want without any NC/Signs. It'll be a bit more interesting to play

-Bakari- wrote:

'ello~ m4m with Hinsvar :3 link for Hinsvar hello. OMG thanks Hinsvar >w<

since I hate TV Sizes and random-anime-songs this post is going to be short

[General]

1. I'd set AudioLeadIn: 1500 - don't make plaers wait too longokay
2. Instead of using S1005 you should try N45-55% sounds better, imofix
3. That clap hitsound is annoying and doesn't fits here :V try something like custom kick-hitsound (people use it a lot in some nightcore/trance/techno tracks) or try soft whistle?fix

fix all my diff :3
[Easy]

1. Not sure if it's because of bad samplesets or because of too loud volume - your hitsounds are unfitting, imo. Try to look for custom hitsounds or something like this.
2. This is your first map and it's ok to have random (and sometimes ugly, imo) sliders. But what if you'll try to be more reasonable? for example 00:29:630 (1) - here you can try something like this
3. I really think that using slider velocity changes at [Easy] is not acceptable (at least here, where it's possible to avoid it)! Slider changes are stressful for beginners.
4. Some of your sliders are overlapped. a bit. Not so big problem but I think that if you will try to avoid it - you'll get thee way better designed map
5. 00:10:726 (5) - did you forget new combo here? It feels wrong without NC here
6. 00:11:547 - don't you think that it's a bit weird to have start of vocals in the middle of slider?
7. 00:31:684 - missed beats like this one are confusing. They doesn't make map easier - they make rhythm hard to understand :<
8. 00:34:972 (3) - it's quite clear that this slider should ends at 00:36:205 - to follow vocals.
9. 00:48:945 (2) - just saying that this slider feels random herebecause 00:49:767 - is start of another part of vocals >.</
10. 00:55:109 (1,2) - sounds unfiting to me - try to replace it with this?
11. 01:02:917 - something that i call "black hole" because beat here is missed. So.. Put circle here to fix it :V
12. 01:13:602 (1) - silince end of the spinner (put s - 5% volume section before spinners end)

[Normal]

1. AR3 on Easy and AR4 on Normal? Don't you think that it's a bit unbalanced? Try AR5 here!
2. Your 1/1 notes are placed too far from each other. I think it's because slider velocity or distance Spacing is too big :V
3. 01:04:150 (5) - it's quite clear that 01:04:561 - there's start of new sllider. So.. replace this long-unfitting slider with one circle and 1/1 slider
4. And guess what? I don't like this slowdown \:D/ I think you can map this soong good enough without breaking flow/rhythm with slowdowns.
   
   It's not so bad. I like it. But the main problem for me is ugly (in my opinion) ugly shapes of sliders/patterns and atc. But rhythm here is good!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

good rhythm! Just make some patterns neater in your diffs and you'll get awesome map :3 thanks :3

I AM GANTENG o3o ganteng lol :v

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL]
u are so pro. <3 \:D/

1. 00:13:910 (4,1) - nazi- even with new combo - spacing here is hard to understant. Why don't you just follow same DS as you have in stream? why x0.1 lower? :O It's because the slider's velocity is changed starting from 00:14:013 (1), so the calculation for the spacing is... different.
2. 00:14:424 (2,3) - try to avoid overmap/overdose/overwhatever - convert it into 1/1 slider to give us some rest and folow vocals :O I don't really see anything wrong here, and I'm sure enough I've been following the vocal well here...
3. 00:16:479 (3,1) - NC swap to make jumps funnier and to follow vocals here? ;V I think it looks good Only added an NC on 00:16:479 (1); a swap isn't necessary, IMO.
4. 00:20:178 - you're trying to give us a good flow. but don't forget about consistent rhythm! missed circle here :< This is intentional; no worries.
5. 00:21:410 (1) - can't understand meaning of some new combos. for example here. It's Extra - you can jump wherever you want without any NC/Signs. It'll be a bit more interesting to play It's used to denote a new pattern. Can't really be helped, I guess... Also, this is still around Insane+, so yeah...

-Bakari- wrote:

I AM GANTENG o3o

- M i K u - wrote:

OMG thanks Hinsvar >w<

eLtigreXXx wrote:

HI ^^ mod Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1500
- [Hinsvar's WILL] : 2000
- [Normal] : 1500
- [syaoran's Insane] : 1500

Ah damn; that problem's from my side. Fixed.

[Hinsvar's WILL]
01:13:628 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:13:628 - snap to 01:13:602

These two things are intentional. The spinner starts 1/16 beats after 01:13:602 (5), and thus the green timing point is there.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

HI ^^ mod Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1500
- [Hinsvar's WILL] : 2000 hinsvar fix this :3
- [Normal] : 1500
- [syaoran's Insane] : 1500

[Normal]
00:55:520 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. sorry but i not changed this

:3 thank 4 modding >w<

yanlu wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL]

- in this diff..I think it has put too many nc in diff I don't think so. Some NCs are there to denote a new pattern.
00:00:863 (1) - remove NC Nope; we're on a new stanza. It feels really weird, seriously...
00:03:534 (1) - remove nc ^
00:04:561 (1) - ^ This is used to emphasize the start of a new pattern.
00:15:041 (1) - ^ ^
00:21:410 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:260 (1) - ^ ^
00:31:273 (1,2,3,4,1) - make it like this :3? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/499090 Nope; I'm okay with what I have now.
00:32:917 (2,3,4) - put other way, no overlap (5)>< Uh... I don't really think it needs to be. It's good as is.
00:46:068 (4,1) - don't overlap.. This one's intentional and I like it very much (:
00:52:438 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:53:465 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like you put it that way :<... I do, though; I think it fits with the atmosphere of the song.
00:58:397 (1,2,3,1,2) - strange.. I can't see anything wrong with this.
01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - unsnap D; What? They're snapped to the 1/4 ticks.

cirno- wrote:

Hinsvar's Will
This is pretty good. ikr
00:52:438 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Consider making a star pattern out of this ^_^ Nope; see my reply to yanlu's mod.

M4M

1. Raise volume 10% higher maybe?

1. CS3 still works properly imo
2. 00:14:013 - 00:19:767 - Soft sampleset should be better here. Those normal-hitwhistles are a bit annoying here ><
3. 00:20:589 (1) - Curve shape will works better, trust me
4. 00:27:164 (1) - Not symmetrical
5. 00:28:808 (2) - Spacing
6. 00:36:616 - Add note here and move the spinner to 00:37:027 -
7. 00:41:547 (1) - Don't... please, this is a bit dangerous on Easy. Just add circle on 00:41:958 -
8. 00:44:013 (4) - Remove finish?
9. 00:50:589 (5) - Not symmetrical.
10. 01:06:205 (3,4) - Merge into one slider?

1. 00:00:863 (1,2) - Blanket plz.
2. 00:02:506 (3) - Not symmetrical >< just use 3 points here and blanket 00:02:095 (2) -
3. 00:04:150 (1) - Not symmetrical either.
4. 00:30:863 (2) - Same here.
5. 00:42:369 (2) - e_e
6. 00:42:369 (2) - how about http://puu.sh/1wgZo?
7. 00:48:123 (1) - e__e
8. 01:11:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels hard on Normal, try simpler pattern please

1. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section! This is unrankable.
2. 00:26:753 (1) - Add finish on end?
3. 00:33:328 (1) - Try simpler curve here
4. 01:10:315 (1) - Curve plz ><

1. 00:01:337 - hi. AR -1 plz.
2. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section ! whyyyy
3. 00:07:849 (2,3) - Unstack plz.
4. 00:10:109 (3,4,5) - Misleading bro. Players might think that there's no (3) and suddenly hit (4) since they think it was placed like that.
5. 00:14:835 (3,1) - Unstack plz.
6. 00:16:479 (1,2) - i think it'll be better if http://puu.sh/1whbf
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - will be better if like http://puu.sh/1whe8 (streams)
8. 00:28:808 (7,8) - Unstack plzzz
9. 00:40:417 (1,2) - Remove these plz, feels unecessary
10. 01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a 1/8 kickstream here, hitsound is up to you

inverness wrote:

[Hinsw3w3w3w /o/]

1. 00:01:337 - hi. AR -1 plz. Nope; the map's pace is too fast for AR8.
2. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section ! whyyyy This is to follow the vocal. I'm sure enough it's rankable.
3. 00:07:849 (2,3) - Unstack plz. This plays really well, IMO. I think there's no need to change it.
4. 00:10:109 (3,4,5) - Misleading bro. Players might think that there's no (3) and suddenly hit (4) since they think it was placed like that. They won't. Don't worry.
5. 00:14:835 (3,1) - Unstack plz. Why?
6. 00:16:479 (1,2) - i think it'll be better if http://puu.sh/1whbf I'm okay with what I have now.
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - will be better if like http://puu.sh/1whe8 (streams) Did something similar.
8. 00:28:808 (7,8) - Unstack plzzz I don't see any reason to do that.
9. 00:40:417 (1,2) - Remove these plz, feels unecessary I'm sure enough they're necessary here.
10. 01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a 1/8 kickstream here, hitsound is up to you idk... I think using a short stream works better here.

inverness wrote:

M4M

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]

1. Raise volume 10% higher maybe? i think it's okay now with this volume

[Easy]

1. CS3 still works properly imo hmm okay
2. 00:14:013 - 00:19:767 - Soft sampleset should be better here. Those normal-hitwhistles are a bit annoying here >< fix
3. 00:20:589 (1) - Curve shape will works better, trust me okay
4. 00:27:164 (1) - Not symmetrical changed
5. 00:28:808 (2) - Spacing hueee gw gk teliti pas buat QwQ
6. 00:36:616 - Add note here and move the spinner to 00:37:027 - okay
7. 00:41:547 (1) - Don't... please, this is a bit dangerous on Easy. Just add circle on 00:41:958 - wokeh2
8. 00:44:013 (4) - Remove finish? fix
9. 00:50:589 (5) - Not symmetrical. fix
10. 01:06:205 (3,4) - Merge into one slider?

Well that's all. thanks

[Normal]

1. 00:00:863 (1,2) - Blanket plz.
2. 00:02:506 (3) - Not symmetrical >< just use 3 points here and blanket 00:02:095 (2) - hmm i not follow this but i changed because i got other idea, thanks
3. 00:04:150 (1) - Not symmetrical either. changed
4. 00:30:863 (2) - Same here. okay copas di 00:27:575 -
5. 00:42:369 (2) - e_e QwQ
6. 00:42:369 (2) - how about http://puu.sh/1wgZo? long slider, no QwQ . kyk nya salah tempat deh ness o3o mgkn maksudmu wkt yg 00:46:479 - ini <_<
7. 00:48:123 (1) - e__e >___>
8. 01:11:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels hard on Normal, try simpler pattern please okay

.w.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section! This is unrankable. | i agree with hinsvar's quote, it's just follow the vocal
2. 00:26:753 (1) - Add finish on end? hmm.. okay
3. 00:33:328 (1) - Try simpler curve here changed a little
4. 01:10:315 (1) - Curve plz >< okay

.w.)b

That's all Xinely. Good luck~ thank you so much for modding inverness >w<

1. The background of the map looks like too calm.. it gives like a relaxing feel. I think it doesn't fit with such a "energetic" and kinda fast song like this one. I suggest you to search for another background.
2. The combo colours you choosed are too dull and look bad with the background o.o well if you're going to change that ^ then try to find some better colours for your possible next bg. I'll not make u a pallette of colours to suggest you because you might change the bg :3
3. The timing sounds off specially in the kiai. Try to ask some pro timer to check it.
4. AIBat found some problems. Try to fix them asap.

1. 00:02:506 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. Try rotating this a tad like this to make the pattern look better:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:027 (3,4,1,2) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff imo. I think it would be better if you add a repeat to 00:05:794 (2). Perhaps leaving a empty space between 00:05:794 (2,1) is a good idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:945 (3) - I highly suggest you to remove the clap of this slider. Sounds too out of place imo. Also, this slider shape looks a bit bad :< could you do something better with it? Here's a idea for you of what would be good to do:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:589 (1) - ^ Same here, this curve looks bad :< please do better curves! with the new slider tool you just need to have 1 sliderpoint to make perfect shapes, so I suggset you to remove this slilder and re-do it more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:876 (1) - This clap at the end of this slider sounds too off. You don't use claps constantly so don't place few of them randomly like this. It doesn't sound nor feel right imo.
6. 00:27:164 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish at the start.
7. 00:29:630 (1) - Wrong spacing. o.o also, try imrpoving this shape more! The shape itself looks too.. random and out of place. I would rather remove it and add a curved slider instead to make it look fine with the rest of the map. Also, here's missing a hitfinish at the end!
8. 00:31:684 (3,4,5,1) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff. Try adding long sliders in easy diffs. Patterns like this one should be done in a Normal diff, not in a Easy one. I'll stop mentioning this problem, but please consider simplifying parts like this one with long sliders. The kiai is way too hard and has lots of consecutive notes so please consider remapping a bit parts like this one :< take this as an example!
9. 00:37:027 (1) - It is much better to end this spinner at 00:40:315. It at least follows something.. It ends just when the song gets like "more calm" before the kiai.
10. 00:54:698 (1) - You should remove this note, you didn't leave time for beginners to recorver their hands from spinning. Also, try to place the note after the spinner close to the spinners centre so it is more easy to click.
11. 01:08:260 (1) - Missing finish :< it would fit perfectly with the music.
12. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this green line to soft. The normal hitsound of the spinner sounds soooooo unfitting and loud lol~
    
    Well this is like a short, ehh.. resumed mod about this diff >< it really needs more mods! and a remap of some mentioned parts in the mod is very recommended :< (sorry Miku) because this plays completely like a Normal diff. Leaving this aside, this is a very good work compared to your other beatmap. You've improved a lot!

• 
  *This diff has lots of unsnapped sliders. Please fix them:
  
  SPOILER

  00:37:438 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:38:260 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:43:602 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:44:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:48:123 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:082 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:493 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:04:150 (1) - Veeery nazi~ move this sliders some grids to x:160 y:168 (where 00:02:095 (2) was). Stacking like this makes the map look more clean~ also, this curve looks a bit bad too, please improve it with the new sliders tool.
2. 00:09:493 (3) - Instead of placing this slider like this, I would rather recommend you to try this pattern out. I think it plays and looks much better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:726 (4) - Here's missing a hitfinish
4. 00:11:547 (1) - This sliders sounds odd with the repeat at a red tick. I suggest you to make it longer, to avoid that red tick. Make it larger till the repeat is at the white tick (00:12:369). Well if you do this you'll obviously have to add a note at 00:13:602 to fill up that space!
5. 00:14:013 - I recommend you to change the sample set of this green line to soft since this part is very calm and normal hitsounds sound too noisy. If you do this, consider adding another green line tochange the samples back to normal at 00:23:876.
6. 00:14:013 (1) - Too weird and unfitting slidershape. Consider making a blanket with it like this (changing the shape to a simple curved one):
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:16:479 (3) - This hitfinish is very.. unfitting. There's not a high/loud/emphasized sound so it doesn't make sense. It would be better if you remove it.
8. 00:21:410 (2) - This slider placement looks odd. I suggest you to move it a tad to the right. If possible to x:240 y:200 to make a blanket with the previous slider.
9. 00:23:876 (1) - Missing hitfinish here too
10. 00:31:685 (3) - Ctrl+J this slider and then rotate it a bit to make this pattern more like this. I think it looks and plays better:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:33:328 (1) - Another weird and unfitting slidershape. please consider what I've recommended u to do with this kind of sliders
12. 00:37:849 (2) - Uhmm this note doesn't make much sense imo. I think it would be better just to keep doing patterns like your previous ones by making 00:37:438 (1) end where (2) is and then delete (2). Same thing applies to 00:38:260 (2,3).
13. 00:41:547 (1) - Again.. no time for hand recovery. I recommend u to remove this slider and then add a circle at 00:41:958.
14. 00:48:123 (1) - Why is this slider end unsnapped? fix it~
15. 00:49:767 (4) - Missing finish at the end of this slider.
16. 00:51:821 (3) - ^
17. 00:53:465 (1) - ^
18. 00:55:520 (1) - No time for hand recovery again.. You should remove this slider to leave some time for it and then add a note at 00:55:931-. If you will keep this slider, add nc to it since this note follows a spinner.
19. 01:00:041 (6) - Missing finish
20. 01:04:972 (1) - ^
21. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this greenline to soft. Same stuff mentioned in your easy diff.
    
    Needs more work too. Try to consider what I told you about this diff too. It's very important imo.

1. 00:03:534 (5,6) - This flows badly, how about placing notes in a more intuitive way?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:04:561 (2) - More lazy slidershapes! please improve those in this difficulty too
3. 00:05:383 (3) - ^
4. 00:11:136 (1) - Another note placed in a non intuitive way.. please try to place it in a similar way mentioned about 00:03:534. Also, I suggest you to remove this nc and add it to the next slider to follow the vocals with it.
5. 00:16:068 (6,7) - These hitfinishes don't make sense since theres not a loud sound so would be better if you remove them.
   
   I'm sorry but I feel too lazy.. I mean, this difficulty has the exact same problems as your Easy and Normal. Lazy slidershapes, some messy patterns, unintuitive placement of notes.. Could you take a good look at what I've pointed above about your other 2 difficulties? I don't want to write walls of text about the same thing over and over again.. that's why. Just, try to consider everything I wrote about your other two diffs and if you agree, apply that to this diff too since it has the exactly same problems, okay? :3

• 
  *Why is this difficulty called like this? The editor doesn't even recognize the "/" symbol lol

1. 00:03:123 (4,5,6) - This spacing is too odd. I suggest you to place these notes with distance snap. Is that a.. small jump between them? it just plays and looks too odd, really :<
2. 00:10:931 (7) - I highly dislike this slider because it feels awkward to click because it's placed at a red tick. Since this isn't really necessary, I suggest you to replace it with notes or something else.
3. 00:11:342 (8) - Is this note not stacked properly in purpose? I would rather stack it correctly to the slider end to make your patterns look more clean.
4. 00:13:191 (8) - This slider has some extra repeats than it should have. I recommend you to remove some repeats, leaving just 3, and then add a note at 00:13:808.
5. 00:14:013 (1) - Here a loud sound in the song can be heard, so a hitfinish would fit perfectly.
6. 00:16:479 (3) - I would rather remove this whistle since you're following that silly sound of the instrumental with whistles, and here that sound cannot be heard.
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - This part feels very weird without a note at 00:20:178. Perhaps add a repeat to (2) to keep following the instrumental?
8. 00:27:986 (3,5) - This a very minor detail: these notes hitburst get overlapped with the hp bar. Consider moving them a tad down to avoid this.
9. 00:31:376 (3) - This clap sounds odd o.o why is it here? it doesn't seem to be even following something.. I think it sounds better if you remove it away
10. 00:34:356 (4) - If you were following the vocals in this pattern, keep following them, don't start following the instrumental like this all of a sudden :< I suggest you to shorten this slider to 00:34:458 and then add a note at 00:34:253.
11. 00:35:589 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:37:027 (1) - This spinner feels.. ehrm I don't know how to explain it. It skips a completely mappable part ._. I suggset you to map this part or add a note here and then move the spinner forward to 00:37:232.
13. 00:41:547 (3) - Another random and unfitting clap :< Consider what I've said about a similar case mentioned above.
14. 00:42:164 - Add a note here to keep following the music constantly like any Insane?
15. 00:52:130 (2) - Stack properly too :3?
16. 00:55:109 (1) - Missing hitfinish
17. 01:03:945 (6) - This pattern sounds too.. overcharged with claps. Consider removing this clap to make it sound less.. like this
18. 01:08:876 (4) - Missing hitfinish at the end
19. 01:13:602 (1) - Same thing about 00:37:027 (I suggset you to add a note here and then move the spinner forward to the next red tick).
    
    Nice job, interesting hitsounding, and rhythm. I like it. You just need to polish a bit more your difficulty to make it better!

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  *How about writting "WILL" without caps.. like "Will"?

1. 00:00:863 (1) - Unnecessary nc imo. Since the song starts here I don't see it so necessary.
2. 00:04:561 (1) - ^ o.o this combo is part of the same verse of the vocals so.. I suggest you to remove this combo too.
3. 01:09:801 (8) - This circle is kinda overmapping this part. I think this part sounds better if you remove it.
4. 01:13:628 (1) - This spiner stars way too soon after 01:13:602 (5). There's no need to do this. I suggest you to move it to the next red tick OR if you really want to keep it close, then use the blue tick.
5. 01:18:945 - Consider decreasing the volume of this section a bit. The soft hit of the spinner sounds kinda loud.
   
   No problems with this difficulty. I love it awesome job! I don't understand most of your short combos of 2, that's the only thing I disliked. I don't like very much short combos in Insane difficulties.