1. Easy (1.05 stars, 58 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 127 notes)
3. Linc's Normal+ (4.26 stars, 132 notes)
4. Yu-Izanagi-12's Insane (4.9 stars, 174 notes)

Eremes 111 wrote:

okay, here is my mod shojimeguro c:
[General]
BPM is 190 i think.
Offset is 470
Add Persona 4 the Golden to the Source
Add tags. but i don't know what is it lol
Delete the fifth combo color. i think it's useless :/
Disable Countdown
Resnap All of your notes and sliders after BPM and Offset change :/
Set the Preview Point at 00:45:154 -

[Easy]
- Use Grid Size: Medium and fix your sliders
- Set your kiai at 00:45:943 - and then kiai fountain at 00:56:048 - and then end your kiai at 01:06:154 -

Edit2: You can ask me anytime, you know

Loli Cjj wrote:

Quick mod

=General=
Needs Normal for diff consistency.

=Easy=
1. 00:05:641 (1,3) - Unsnapped
2. 00:15:627 (1,5) - This either.
3. 00:24:154 (1) - Neater please, bad shape for easy diff.
4. 00:26:562 (2,3,4,5) - - Unsnapped
5. 00:29:996 (6) - Unrankable slider I believe. Fix.
7. 00:33:233 (1,2,4) - Unsnapped.
8. 00:35:838 - 00:43:970 - Map these part. This map has a short length, don't make this shorter.
9. 00:46:614 (1,2,3) - Unsnapped
10. 00:50:877 (2,1) - Unsnapped
11. 00:52:614 (1,2) - Unsnapped
12. 01:03:233 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - Unsnapped
13. 01:06:154 - Useless uninherited timing, i guess.

=Hard=
1. 00:07:891 (1) - Change this, might be hard to catch, or even unrankable.
2. 00:19:733 (7) - Use distance snap and replace this.
3. 00:22:101 (6,7) - You can do slider art later, focus on pattern first.
4. 00:25:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Trolling spacing.
5. 00:32:522 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing.
6. 00:35:838 - 00:43:970 - Map these part. This map has a short length, don't make this shorter.
7. 00:47:758 (7) - - Move to 00:47:837
8. 00:50:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should be something like this... http://puu.sh/EjPx
9. 01:01:653 (5) - Move to 01:01:732
10. 01:13:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to white tick

Make normal first, then I'll remod this.
I'm up for hitsound help so pm forum if you need it.

[Pisces] wrote:

hi!
i have advice for you!

Linc's Normal+
00:13:415 (2) - i haven't see that note. - That's not a note, that's a slider, what's wrong with that?
00:30:784 ~ 00:31:415 - note here - Sorry, that is a little break for our newcomer, but I can't insert break because it's too short. So, no...
01:04:573 (2) - clap - Sorry, I prefer finish in there, because it is the ending...No again sorry...
01:05:521,01:06:152,01:06:784,01:07:415 - delete inherited point. No need. - When you do some fast spin, this needed. So, no again. Sorry...
01:08:679 - volume up(65%) - 65% too high. I set it 40%

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good luck!

[Pisces] wrote:

hi!
i have advice for you!

Easy

00:19:259 (5) - back here(00:19:101) - fixed
00:23:680 (1) - back here(00:21:470) - fixed
00:26:522 (2) - back here(00:26:364)- - false
00:27:943 (x) - add one - false
00:34:891 ~ 00:42:785 - more note in here(Break is so long...) - it was easy doesn't matter
00:47:206 (2) - set it accurately(this note move white bar) - fixed
00:50:838 (2) - same that ^ - nothing wrong
01:00:470 (1) ~ 01:02:048 (6) - this is normal or hard rather than easy - not really it was slow
01:03:312 (1) ~ 01:05:838 (10) - same! adjust or renote. - false
01:13:101 - set accurately(set it back in white bar)- fixed

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good luck!

Matoryoshika wrote:

Okay, since I have nothing to do....

[General Etc] - Nah... Not my bussiness. :3

[Linc's Normal]

1. HpDrain +1/+2 OD +1 - Surely
2. 00:08:679 (2) - Move the NC to here? - OK
3. 00:23:205 (5) - Are little hard to predict since it covered by (2) - For newcomer, yes, so OK
4. 00:24:784 (5) - Move up a little? maybe, it almost get out from the screen - When play it doesn't... but OK
5. 00:27:310 (4) - May add whistle here - Yes, I may, why not? I know what you mean.
6. 00:30:784 ~ 00:31:415 - If it possible please fill this instead let it blank - Aw no break? shame of it, add some notes then...(because 2 people ask note for it)
7. 00:56:047 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It would be better if you stack it IMO - Not what I want, my stack already go to limit XD and it moved automatically, change stack leniency also
8. 01:04:573 (2) - overlap, err (2) is covered by reverse arrow so it would be hard to predict it - Sure

Well, that's all overall you still need more practice then I'm sure you're gonna be a good mapper someday - What about meeeee?

nb: Anyway, I don't like the way you ask for mod to me in-game, at least please use manners in languange, never do that okay? - Sorry for that, I'm the one who recommended you... /me run

Loli Cjj wrote:

NO KD
srsly - Why not?

> Kiai start 00:45:943 ends 01:06:153 on all diff. Make it constant on all diff, except taiko (if you have any) - I already ask him for it, because I'm too lazy for this /me run

=Linc's Normal+=
4.08 star rating. o_o - Too low? Most likely I like the map which have 4,5 star in normal diff
Some of 1/4 isn't necessary. Seriously, trim them down. - I don't use 1/4... I wonder where is it...
Most of these overlap are hard to read because it's hidden with the hitxxx.png. Prevent using overlap on normal, even with +. - OK, this is my weakness
1. 00:04:258 (1) - It's too fast, and after this there's a note a beat after this, that honestly, too fast. Delete. - OK
2. 00:11:205 (2) - Use Distance Snap and fix this. - I truly use all notes distance snap, why this is not??
3. 00:18:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Highly recommend to remake this pattern. Create a neater one, or find another variation like stacking triplet. - OK this is hard to think about because before I made this I made many triplet
4. 00:22:258 (3,4,5) - Create a triangle shape, but don't make any overlap. - OK
5. 00:25:731 (1,2,3,4) - Create a neat trapezium http://puu.sh/HkgM - You have a nice skin in there
6. 00:28:258 (1) - Spacing alert. - Again? What happen to my distance snap
7. 00:44:994 (1) - Again, it's too fast and there's a note a beat after this. You can change it to slider if you want. Even it's normal+, you should think about those who playing. - OK
8. 00:52:573 (1) - Move to create a triangle pattern so it will looks neater http://puu.sh/HkhQ - OK
9. 01:11:521 (2) - It's completely hidden because it was under a slider. I'm afraid this is unrankable. - Hold slider is what I want in there OK
10. 01:15:468 (4) - You may want to add one more kick back so it'll fit with when the music stops. - OK
11. It says normal+ but why it has very low settings on Difficulty? Increase them, but CS should be 3 so it'll be more playable. (High bpm, if you ask) - Because the creator ask to made it lower , I don't like CS 4> (Not adobe, I use Adobe CS4), so i keep the CS.

Great diff but need more hardwork, especially at those pattern and overlap. - Both are my weakness in mapping Many people ask to change it

Loli Cjj wrote:

NO KD
srsly

> It would be much, much better if you map with distance snap. Otherwise chaotic spacing may happen.
> This post will teach you on how to make a sexy sliders. Seriously, read it. p/534833
> Delete the .osb on your file, then full submit.
> Kiai start 00:45:943 ends 01:06:153 on all diff. Make it constant on all diff, except taiko (if you have any)

=Easy=
1. Highly recommended use Beat Snap Divisor 1/2. Easy diff shouldn't have a hard stuffs. Consider check every note and make them snapped.

unsnapped notes that sounds ugly

1. 00:05:641 (1) -
2. 00:06:825 (3) -
3. 00:09:746 (2) -
4. 00:10:417 (1) - (Spinner ends unsnapped)
5. 00:15:588 (1) -
6. 00:18:667 (4) -
7. 00:28:535 (4) -
8. 00:33:233 (1) -
9. 00:33:746 (2) -
10. 00:34:614 (4) -
11. 00:46:614 (1) -
12. 00:47:127 (2) -
13. 00:51:588 (1) -
14. 00:57:943 (4) -
15. 01:03:233 (1) -
16. 01:03:588 (2) -
17. 01:03:904 (3) -

2. 00:09:746 (2) - Using small grid, fix this stack.
3. 00:10:417 (1) - It would be better to change it to pattern. This part doesn't fit with it. It's up
4. 00:15:627 - Start from here you can create a pattern with timing such like this > http://puu.sh/HjLw
5. 00:24:470 (1) - Create an arch. Way better than this overlap sliders.
6. 0024:470 - Start from here make a nice pattern with a constant timing. I prefer to put notes every 2 beat. You can make a variation but please use Distance Snap.
7. 00:35:838 to 00:43:970 - I believe I've remind you something about this. Please map this part. This beatmap has a short duration. Don't be lazy and map it. If you think it's boring to make an easy map, please think every time you play easy diff when you're new.
8. 00:44:048 (1) - Spinner would be better if starts 00:43:417
9. 00:46:575 - Start from here, you may want to put notes every 2 beat. This beat sounds perfect. Seriously. http://puu.sh/HjVl
10. 01:00:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's quite hard for an easy. Use slider!
11. 01:03:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again, use slider as variation.
12. 01:06:312 (1) - Spinner start 01:06:469 , ends 01:10:575 . Continue with nice pattern of course.
13. Unused uninherited timing - 01:06:154
14. Trim down Difficulty Settings. 3 is maximum.

This is what I've done with your diff because I'm quite bored atm. You may want to try some of these pattern. Neat, isn't it? http://puu.sh/Hk1J

=Linc's Normal+=
4.08 star rating. o_o
Some of 1/4 isn't necessary. Seriously, trim them down.
Most of these overlap are hard to read because it's hidden with the hitxxx.png. Prevent using overlap on normal, even with +.
1. 00:04:258 (1) - It's too fast, and after this there's a note a beat after this, that honestly, too fast. Delete.
2. 00:11:205 (2) - Use Distance Snap and fix this.
3. 00:18:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Highly recommend to remake this pattern. Create a neater one, or find another variation like stacking triplet.
4. 00:22:258 (3,4,5) - Create a triangle shape, but don't make any overlap.
5. 00:25:731 (1,2,3,4) - Create a neat trapezium http://puu.sh/HkgM
6. 00:28:258 (1) - Spacing alert.
7. 00:44:994 (1) - Again, it's too fast and there's a note a beat after this. You can change it to slider if you want. Even it's normal+, you should think about those who playing.
8. 00:52:573 (1) - Move to create a triangle pattern so it will looks neater http://puu.sh/HkhQ
9. 01:11:521 (2) - It's completely hidden because it was under a slider. I'm afraid this is unrankable.
10. 01:15:468 (4) - You may want to add one more kick back so it'll fit with when the music stops.
11. It says normal+ but why it has very low settings on Difficulty? Increase them, but CS should be 3 so it'll be more playable. (High bpm, if you ask)

Great diff but need more hardwork, especially at those pattern and overlap.

=Hard=
1. 00:05:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can create star pattern here, use create polygon circle.
2. 00:07:733 (1) - Do something nicer rather than abstract art. I create one because I'm bored but this overlap is nice and symmetric. Plus, it's sexy Bl http://puu.sh/Hkne
3. 00:10:575 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can create star pattern here.
4. 00:13:733 (11) - Create a neater slider, and make it ends 00:14:364
5. 00:22:259 (6) - So ugly.
6. 00:28:259 (1) - This too.
7. 00:33:312 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing.
8. 00:35:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seriously fix this, using distance snap, add more notes. Make this better. This beat is good enough. http://puu.sh/Hkre
9. 00:38:759 (8,9) - Never force to make a slider art if it's not the time. Otherwise you won't make a good map. Learn to put slider art at the perfect time.
10. 00:47:837 (7) - Remake. Do something better.
11. 00:50:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Troll spacing. Seriously, use Distance Snap.
12. 00:52:890 (10) - Delete, create pattern with beat like this. http://puu.sh/HktV
13. 00:56:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remake the placing, create a neater pattern, don't forget to use DS.
14. 00:58:416 (8) - Make this symmetric, please. http://puu.sh/HkwB
15. 01:00:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use Distance snap and fix this.
16. 01:03:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, fix this. You can separate this to 2 squares connected with a slider like this http://puu.sh/HkxX
17. 01:06:232 (1) - Slider start 01:06:153
18. HP 5, CS 4, AR 5, OD 5. It's still a hard diff.

Trully needs more attention, but this is good so far. Good luck.

JT123 wrote:

[easy]

00:05:641 (1) - note not snapped
00:06:825 (3) - ^
00:09:746 (2) - ^
00:15:627 (1) - ^
00:18:667 (4) - ^
00:33:233 (1) - ^
00:33:746 (2) - ^
00:34:614 (4) - ^
00:51:588 (1) - ^
00:57:904 (4) - ^

nti aq mod lagi kalo km da perbaiki snap na

[insane]

aq pikir terlalu aneh
coba pikir ulang deh

JT123 wrote:

[easy]

00:05:641 (1) - note not snapped
00:06:825 (3) - ^
00:09:746 (2) - ^
00:15:627 (1) - ^
00:18:667 (4) - ^
00:33:233 (1) - ^
00:33:746 (2) - ^
00:34:614 (4) - ^
00:51:588 (1) - ^
00:57:904 (4) - ^

nti aq mod lagi kalo km da perbaiki snap na

[insane]

aq pikir terlalu aneh
coba pikir ulang deh

sacrifuce wrote:

JT123 wrote:

[easy]

00:05:641 (1) - note not snapped
00:06:825 (3) - ^
00:09:746 (2) - ^
00:15:627 (1) - ^
00:18:667 (4) - ^
00:33:233 (1) - ^
00:33:746 (2) - ^
00:34:614 (4) - ^
00:51:588 (1) - ^
00:57:904 (4) - ^

nti aq mod lagi kalo km da perbaiki snap na

[insane]

aq pikir terlalu aneh
coba pikir ulang deh

For some reason agree..

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

your lookin for any more guest diffs, i have a good insane diff

Also a mod
a few of the beats are off key so here's where they are
[Hard]
00:07:733 end slider at 00:09:785
00:13:733 end slider at 00:14:522
00:15:391 move to 00:15:312
00:22:180 move to 00:22:259
00:31:654 move to 00:31:733
00:37:259 extend slider so that it ends at 00:38:680 to replace the note there
00:41:048 remove slider and at a note
00:41:522 add note
00:41:680 add note
00:42:391 start spinner at 00:42:154 and end it at 00:45:312 with a finish
00:51:232 move to 00:51:311 with finish
00:51:548 move to 00:51:627
00:51:706 move to 00:51:785
01:06:153 end at 01:10:416 with finish

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Here's my insane diff hope you like it

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Shihoko Hirata - Time To Make History.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Time To Make History
Artist:Shihoko Hirata
Creator:shojimeguro
Version:Yu-Izanagi-12's Insane
Source:Persona 4 Golden
Tags:

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"wall01_800x600.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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1733,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
2680,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
4259,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
5522,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
45312,-100,4,1,0,85,0,1
68680,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0


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Combo3 : 0,128,255
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340,332,57312,2,0,B|224:332|224:172,1,200
224,148,58101,1,0
256,192,58417,12,4,59838
72,176,60470,6,0,B|104:232|176:200,2,100
148,108,61417,1,8
248,108,61733,2,0,B|360:64|432:156,1,200
432,252,62680,1,8
356,184,62996,1,4
292,260,63312,6,0,B|280:316|196:316,2,100,0|0|0
200,220,64259,2,0,B|200:96|328:96,1,200
372,184,65206,1,0
428,268,65522,1,0
256,192,65838,12,4,68364
80,84,68680,6,0,B|120:136,1,50
160,132,68996,2,0,B|200:184,1,50,2|0
240,176,69312,2,0,B|280:228,1,50
320,212,69627,2,0,B|360:264,1,50,2|0
380,292,69943,2,0,B|344:368|240:348,2,150,0|2|0
384,244,71048,5,0
332,244,71206,1,0
280,244,71364,1,0
228,244,71522,1,2
252,200,71680,1,0
304,200,71838,1,0
356,200,71996,1,0
328,160,72154,1,2
276,160,72312,1,0
300,116,72470,2,0,B|300:60,1,50
248,64,72785,5,2
200,68,72943,2,0,B|200:132|132:132,1,100
88,136,73417,1,2
88,188,73575,2,0,B|88:260,1,50
140,240,73891,1,0
188,240,74048,2,0,B|188:304,1,50,2|0
240,292,74364,1,0
292,292,74522,2,0,B|292:228,1,50,0|2
344,240,74838,1,0
396,240,74996,2,0,B|396:328|492:328,2,150,0|2|4

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

don't kudos this but i found something, change the offset to 438 and be sure to adjust the timing points

chaotic_iak wrote:

So I managed to get off my insane laziness (and partially business in the current weeks).

Unrankable stuffs, definite problems, personal distastes, comments including good stuffs.

[Easy]
Certainly many problems. Here are all that I get before I gave up:
00:05:648 (1) - Should be at 00:05:490.
00:07:227 (4) - Hard to approximate by Easy players?
00:09:753 (2) - ^
00:12:280 (6) - ^
00:13:385 (7,8) - Gap too short (158ms, should be say 250ms for Easy).
00:21:438 (1,1) - Gap too short (632ms, should be say 1000ms for Easy).
00:28:859 (7,8) - Inconsistent spacing (1.34x).
00:29:964 (1) - Slider overlapping with itself stupidly.
00:33:201 (1) - Unsnapped beat (okay on 1/4 beat, but still inappropriate for Easy anyway).
Blah too depressed to do further. I suggest you totally remap this; this is barely below Hard and unrankable too. Use 1/1 beat snap divisor, use Distance Snapping, leave at least a measure after a spinner, don't do stupid self-overlapping spinners like the noted above. Sorry if I call that slider stupid, but I hate sliders so...non-artistic like that.

[Linc's Normal+]
00:07:731 (6) - Slider path is hidden.
00:10:258 (5) - After noting the previous slider, I expect this to have a slider too, but it doesn't.

[Hard]
As bad as Easy. Okay, you can relax your requirements for Hard, but it doesn't mean that you have something like 00:26:648 (4,5,6,7,8) (inconsistent spacing, from 0.86x to 1.71x) and 00:50:364 (1,2,3) (<). Also I think CS should be 4, but that's personal opinion. I suggest a remap too, or a heavy repositioning of stuffs.

[Yu-Izanagi-12's Insane]
Add lead in about 2s.
Nothing technical, but I have quite some distastes (CS doesn't seem right with 5, 00:26:569 (1) - Shouldn't be spinner). But that's personal; shouldn't affect your map.

Okay this is bad news. Your map is far from being finished. I suggest you review your map again. But then again, it's in graveyard, but you requested me to mod this. Well yeah, good luck.