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Alex S. - My Little Pony Intro (Glitch Remix) [Approval]

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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 13, 2012 at 5:29:33 PM

Artist: Alex S.
Title: My Little Pony Intro (Glitch Remix)
Source: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Tags: jericho2442 mlp
BPM: 115.01
Filesize: 8365kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. TASTE THE RAINBOW! (5 stars, 1003 notes)
  2. TOUCH THE RAINBOW! (5 stars, 917 notes)
Download: Alex S. - My Little Pony Intro (Glitch Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Taste the rainbow?

6/28 applied all mods so far to this point.
7/1 Changed the title
7/2 removed the countdown
7/2 huhe thanks for rena's mod
7/2 sexy rena SB inspired me to really do something neat
7/5 added ouran's mod
7/6 added pimpg's mod
7/8 added rika's mod and fixed the SB thanks ziin
7/10 added sync's mod
7/13 tiny update 2 notes moved kurai's mod

adding another diff to the set to be fair to a new rule that was brought in to place without much notice it seems all maps now have to have at least 2 diffs to be uploaded for approval so let my mistakes serve as a notice to any other mappers that might have one diff approval maps out there better start making a 2nd map.
Ijah_old
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Aurele
Glitch Remix...

;Download.
DuskyFox
aww I tried to make this, but it got rejected D: Your's has a better shot though, so hopefully it gets at least approved :D
Topic Starter
ztrot
last approval map ever also last hard style map I ever do
Low
20% cooler.
Aoitenshi
OH SHIT

TASTE THE RAINBOW MOTHAF*KAS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_NNhedaC0o
Topic Starter
ztrot
Went ahead and finished the hitsounds mods would be nice if possible
TheVileOne
I made a difficulty. I hope you like it, or at least can tolerate it. It's Hard+.

http://puu.sh/zgyU
grumd
sorry
Low

grumd wrote:

I always thought TVO is a shitmapper. Let's look! *downloads the diff*

Edit: lol, this diffs proofes that again
Who are you to just come into a thread and say that someone's maps are shitty? Excuse me sir, but that's quite rude.
TheVileOne
Meh. Not constructive criticism really. My difficulties usually lack polish when I first make them and it takes a few mods to get them into a polished state. There's only so far I can go without player opinions since my own opinions get in the way. So please don't comment unless you're willing to mod my diff and make it better.

Thank you.


I really find it quite enjoyable to play.

Fixed a lot of strange areas, made some sliders less straight although I prefer a lot of straight sliders in this difficulties. I also filled in more parts with hitsounding. Increased AR to 8.

http://puu.sh/AWcS
Aurele
UHUHEUEHEUHEH. q.q

[TASTE THE RAINBOW~♫]
Unsnapped objects :
00:20:870 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:21:381 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:29:728 (10) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:37:945 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped timing points :
00:20:893
00:20:993
00:37:850
02:15:676

Really ztrot? D:

  1. 00:05:610 (6,7,8) - About these objects, the last circle sounds a bit weird, in my opinion. I'm suggesting you to delete these 3 circles and do a slider like this :
  2. 00:11:479 (1) - Add a new combo here? So it will start the kind of flower pattern you did and also, a 14 objects combo is a bit long.
  3. 00:49:302 - Remove the combo?
  4. 02:18:251 (5) - You have two possibility here, 1: Stack it with (2) or, 2: Move it to x:136 y:32, so it could be aligned with (4) & (6)
Shohei Ohtani
SWWWAAAAGGGGG

DIFF:
00:20:870 (1) - Not snapped slider end ;~;
00:20:893 - Resnap this green section~
00:20:993 - ^
00:37:850 - ^
01:52:427 - Add note here?
02:15:676 - Resnap this green section :>
02:21:381 (9) - Not snapped slider end ;~;
02:29:728 (10) - ^
02:37:945 (8) - ^
02:48:900 (9) - Remove this :>
03:39:113 (1) - Weird overlap ;~;
03:40:026 (3) - Probably change this too if you change (1) to fit patterns and whatnot
03:54:112 (2) - Probably make this into 2 sliders or something. I ignored the other ones because they were fitting but this one isn't ;~;

kawaii~
Low
Heyo, ztrot.

General

  1. Adding "mlp" to the tags would be a smart idea.
  2. The current BG you have, even though it is in the correct dimensions, has black letterboxing on the bottom of it. I would use another BG.
TASTE THE RAINBOW!

  1. 00:20:870 (1) - Unsnapped slider end. Take the end anchor of the slider and extend it to the next 1/4 tick.
  2. 00:05:219 (5,6,7,8) - While ingame, this pattern looks odd due to the stacking of the three notes after the slider. I suggest unstacking the notes in order to do something along the lines of this.
  3. 00:13:175 (3,4) - Small spacing error between these two objects.
  4. 00:21:000 - Unused timing section.
  5. 00:37:564 (11) - You shouldn't have a clap here, only a whistle. The music doesn't call for one.
  6. 01:00:649 (1) - Due to the reduced spacing of the previous stream, this note may be misconstrued as 1/2 after it rather than 1/4.
  7. 01:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - May I suggest spacing these sliders out farther so that they don't overlap?
  8. 01:43:689 (2) - The track of this slider is somewhat obstructed by hitbursts, making it difficult to tell that it's a slider rather than two circles.
  9. 01:45:515 (3,4) - Small spacing error.
  10. 01:52:427 (4) - This overlaps (2). Not very visually appealing to me.
  11. 01:55:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream's overlap with (4) due to stacking looks odd.
  12. 02:11:730 (3,4) - I'm going to be an overlap nazi here.
  13. 02:14:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - One word - astrosexy.
  14. 02:23:207 (9,10) - Overlap patrol.
  15. 02:37:945 (8) - This slider should begin one 1/4 tick later.
  16. 02:46:422 (3) - You should use a scrunched up slider for this part of the vocals in order to be consistent.
  17. 02:48:770 (8) - Drag the break after this circle to the next big white tick. It looks neat during gameplay.
  18. 04:12:502 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner. It sounds odd with a hitsound.
Good luck!
YodaSnipe
This map is fucking awesome. period.



Edit: Forgot to mention that BG is fucking beautiful.
Aurele
Mhm... can you disable the countdown?
Topic Starter
ztrot
sure! not a problem at all
Aurele
Awesome, it's better without it.
I tryed with the countdown and I got confused with the first note and the last countdown. ♫

edit: Ohlol :
Topic Starter
ztrot
[Rena's mod]
21:13 <Rena-chan> : IT'S ON
21:14 <ztrot> : alright
21:14 <Rena-chan> : Most of the issues I found are really minor, though
21:14 <Rena-chan> : 00:07:436 (6) - Like this imperfect blanket
21:15 <Rena-chan> : 00:29:869 (4) - And this, the curve is too... Flat ?
21:15 <Rena-chan> : I guess
21:16 <Rena-chan> : Those two didn't bother me as much while playing as this one did, though 00:47:998 (1) -
21:16 <ztrot> : what is wrong with that?
21:17 <Rena-chan> : It's both too sharp to blanket (5) properly and it's not symmetrical
21:19 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359403
21:19 <Rena-chan> : Oops, osu! crashed
21:19 <ztrot> : blanket wasn't my goal
21:19 <ztrot> : but the symmetrical issures should be fixed now
21:19 <Rena-chan> : Looked kinda like it was
21:20 <ztrot> : it is a perfect one now tho http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359405
21:20 <Rena-chan> : Yay <3
21:21 <Rena-chan> : 00:53:084 (6) - Did you intend for this to blanket (7) or follow (1)'s curve ?
21:21 <Rena-chan> : 'Cause it does neither of those things perfectly
21:23 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359409
21:23 <ztrot> : better?
21:23 <Rena-chan> : Much better
21:23 <Rena-chan> : You should copy it over here 00:55:171 (3) - it has the same issue
21:24 <ztrot> : got it
21:25 <Rena-chan> : 00:56:345 (1,2) - Either (1) isn't following (2)'s curve or it's the other way around, but the pattern looks
21:25 <Rena-chan> : like you intended for them to blanket each other
21:27 <ztrot> : it does
21:27 <ztrot> : but they have to be put apart for spacing
21:27 <Rena-chan> : Does not
21:27 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359414
21:27 <ztrot> : does too
21:27 <ztrot> : :P
21:28 <Rena-chan> : Only when (1) is put all the way up to (2), but at that spacing it needs a wider curve as well
21:28 <ztrot> : that makes my head hurt let me try
21:31 <ztrot> : 00:56:867 -
21:31 <ztrot> : fuuuck
21:31 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359418
21:32 <ztrot> : like that?
21:32 <Rena-chan> : Much better, but try moving the start and end a wee bit closer to (2)
21:38 <ztrot> : fuck
21:38 <ztrot> : i just made it worse
21:38 <Rena-chan> : D:
21:40 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359428 this will just have to do
21:40 <ztrot> : I am not using grid for for one slider
21:40 <ztrot> : grid 4
21:40 <Rena-chan> : Still better than before
21:40 <ztrot> : cool
21:40 <Rena-chan> : And you should just hold down Shift and disable grid entirely while fixing it instead >w<
21:41 <Rena-chan> : Anyhow, moving on to an ugly overlap --> 01:03:649 (2,3) -
21:42 <ztrot> : gone
21:42 <ztrot> : sauce
21:42 <Rena-chan> : Sauce ?
21:42 <ztrot> : idk
21:42 <ztrot> : i just like saying sauce
21:43 <Rena-chan> : Sirry
21:43 <Rena-chan> : 01:07:822 (4) - This is kind of ugly
21:43 <ztrot> : 01:11:996 (2,3) - got this too
21:43 <Rena-chan> : Yay
21:44 <Rena-chan> : I'm not really sure what your intention with the slider I linked is, but I suggest making it blanket (3), and
21:44 <Rena-chan> : moving the notes after it to be aligned horizontally with the end of the slider
21:45 <ztrot> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359432
21:46 <Rena-chan> : Better
21:47 <Rena-chan> : 01:16:169 (4) - Should give this the same treatment
21:50 <Rena-chan> : 01:46:036 (6,1) - Another ugly overlap D:
21:53 <ztrot> : gottem
21:54 <Rena-chan> : 01:58:166 (6) - Stack this on 01:57:383 (3) - ?
21:54 <Rena-chan> : Would look better
21:55 <ztrot> : okie
21:57 <Rena-chan> : 02:00:383 (4) - I suggest making this longer and a little less wide for to make the start and end not
21:57 <Rena-chan> : overlap
21:58 <ztrot> : I'm really picky about those I like it as it is really
21:58 <Rena-chan> : Alright then
21:58 <ztrot> : i'm open to almost anything else tho
21:59 <Rena-chan> : 02:11:599 (2) - This note overlapping (4) makes me a sad panda :C
22:00 <Rena-chan> : 02:14:077 - And do you have any specific reason note to put a note here ?
22:00 <ztrot> : not really sure what to do about that one
22:00 <ztrot> : lyrics
22:00 <ztrot> : at the 2nd part
22:01 <Rena-chan> : Feels like there should be a note there to me :C
22:02 <Rena-chan> : But do whatever. Moving on, 02:16:034 (4) - cosmetical issues again, this doesn't blanket (3) very well
22:03 <ztrot> : fixed the blanket
22:04 <ztrot> : and fixed this overlap before you go to it :P
22:04 <ztrot> : 02:22:946 (8,9,10) -
22:04 <Rena-chan> : I was just about to point that out
22:05 <Rena-chan> : 02:24:772 (5) - Move this to be on (10)'s end ?
22:09 <ztrot> : got it
22:10 <Rena-chan> : 03:11:985 (1,2,3) - Start/end overlaps make me saaaaaaaaaad
22:11 <Rena-chan> : 03:17:202 (3,4) - So do these two
22:14 <ztrot> : got them
22:16 <Rena-chan> : 03:19:680 (6) - Your intention with this is to make it start out not a blanket and then move into a blanket,
22:16 <Rena-chan> : right ?
22:18 <ztrot> : something like that
22:18 <ztrot> : kinda like a heart loop thing
22:18 <Rena-chan> : 'kay
22:19 <Rena-chan> : 03:24:506 (1,2) - Blankeeeeeeet D:
22:19 <Rena-chan> : (2) ruins it the most, (1) just isn't really entirely perfect
22:19 <ztrot> : fixed
22:20 <Rena-chan> : 03:28:679 (1,2) - Did you get these two along with the other sliders earlier, too ?
22:20 <ztrot> : yeah
22:21 <Rena-chan> : 03:32:331 (7) - Then here's another imperfect blanket
22:22 <Rena-chan> : 03:51:634 (1,2) - And the same thing as that same pattern earlier, just copy the improved one I guess
22:22 <Rena-chan> : If you didn't already
22:23 <ztrot> : did
22:23 <ztrot> : :p
22:24 <Rena-chan> : \o/(
22:25 <Rena-chan> : 04:00:242 (2) - I didn't notice how not symmetrical this is ingame, but I bet that some hardcore
22:25 <Rena-chan> : symmetryguy is going to point it out anyway
22:25 <Rena-chan> : I'd disregard grid snap and center it, but oh well
22:26 <ztrot> : yeah you are going to get a freaking kudo for this
22:26 <Rena-chan> : :( I don't want kudosu
22:26 <ztrot> : YESSSS
22:26 <Rena-chan> : 04:07:806 (9) - Hello again imperfect blanket, by the way
22:27 <ztrot> : you must
22:31 <ztrot> : anyways that is everything
22:31 <ztrot> : right
22:31 <Rena-chan> : Yeah

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