1. Controllable (5 stars, 553 notes)
2. Harmony (4.95 stars, 430 notes)
3. Puppet (2.99 stars, 198 notes)
4. Uncontrollable (5 stars, 666 notes)

Thite wrote:

完成させましょう

wring wrote:

May I make Insane diff?

manten wrote:

kitai age :3

Thite wrote:

Puppet
00:34:284 (1) - 少し違和感を感じるのでこういう風にしてみては？ それとは違うけど少し変えた

SPOILER

00:36:684 (1) - ^ ^
00:39:084 (1) - ^ ^
01:09:084 (2) - スペーシングが気になります fixed
01:19:884 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:084 (4) - ^ ^
01:33:684 (4) - 01:33:984 - このスライダーここで終わりでいいと思います no
01:35:334 (1) - スペーシング気になります fixed
01:45:984 (3) - 1gridひだり fixed

Harmony
00:13:284 (3) - (1)のスライダーと少しかぶっててあんまり見栄えよくないかなぁ fixed
00:28:134 (6) - 1gridした fixed
00:47:184 (3) - こういうふうにしてみては？ 変えた~

SPOILER

01:03:384 (1) - 他の難易度みたいにfinishじゃなくてclapにしてみては？ fixed
01:25:584 (3) - 00:47:184 (3) ここで言ったみたいな感じにかえてみては？ fixed
01:35:184 (3) - ^ ^
01:38:784 (3) - 微妙に01:39:084 (1) - これに触れているのでずらしてみては fixed
03:01:434 (1,2,3) - プレイする側的にはこのノート3つ消してスピン伸ばしてほしいですno

Controllable
ぐっどふぉーみー＾o＾ ^o^
Uncontrollable
00:17:184 (9) - リターン減らしてノート追加してみては no
00:17:784 (2,3) - スペーシング気になります fixed
00:39:834 (6,7) - 1gridうえ fixed
01:40:434 (1,2,3,4) - きれいなひしがたにしない？ ok
02:22:734 (5) -

SPOILER

no
03:01:434 (1,2,3) - はーどとおなじ no

ぐっどらっく

Black → Suggestion.　　　　提案

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.　　　変えて欲しい

Red → Please change the absolute.　　　　絶対変えてください

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

request from my queue

Black → Suggestion.　　　　提案

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.　　　変えて欲しい

Red → Please change the absolute.　　　　絶対変えてください

[General]

●BG　800*600か　まぁ　大丈夫です！　nice BG　このミク可愛い
●カウントダウンにチェックはいってるので外してくださーい　了解
●線とかに緑線おいてると思うんですが、なんか線から外れておいてるのがあるんですが、気になるだけなのでいいです 一番上のdiffの使いまわしてるからだね1/8にするとあう

[Puppet]

●01:18:759 (T) - 不要な緑線　(意味ない） ok
●01:43:884 (T) - ^ kiai timeを切るため必要
●02:28:284 (T) - ^ kiai timeをはじめるため必要
●02:49:884 (T) - ^ kiai timeを切るため必要
●01:11:484 (3) - 始点 にclapをつけて　01:11:259 (T)のvolumeを80%にする　理由：00:33:084 (3) - 同じリズムだから ok
●01:29:484 (1) - これを01:27:684 (2) に重ねたい。　するには　→　01:28:884 (4) - これを x:80 y:376にすれば出来ると思います。ok
●02:23:484 (T) - ここにvolume80%の S:C1を追加したい。　理由：だんだん音量が上がる感じを見せるため ok

[Harmonyl]

●00:05:334 (5) - x:172 y:44 に移動。　ずれている fixed
●00:27:684 (4) - これを00:26:634 (4)に重ねたい。　00:27:384 (3) - をx:104 y:232に移動すればできる。 ok
●01:22:284 (1) - x:252 y:132に移動。no
●02:23:484 (T) - ここにvolume80%の S:C1を追加したい。　理由：だんだん音量が上がる感じを見せるため ok
●03:01:434 (1,2,3) - ③連打もいいんですが　ここはHardというのもありますので　リピートスライダーに変更はどう でしょう ok

[Uncontrollable]

●02:23:484 (T) - ここにvolume80%の S:C1を追加したい。　理由：だんだん音量が上がる感じを見せるため ok
●今回もはやいｗｗ　難しいdiffなんで加速はしますｗｗｗ

流石です。　リンちゃんなう！　待ってます 俺リンちゃんなう！作る予定は無いぞ？

あとで★を投げときます

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
The combo colors are inconsistent. here it is. the right represents Controllable and the left is Harmony. Since you're using the same BG, the combo colors need to be the same for 1 mapset. you can fix this on the osu notepad. fixed

Puppet:
a found that some lines are unsnapped. if you want to make this ranked, re-snap these lines unless you have a valid reason why it's unsnapped. shifted on 1/4 line

00:31:584 - add a circle or repeat to follow the drums? Adding note can't do. because over star rate3.0
00:48:684 (1) - make this slider a lot smoother. i don't like the look of this slider. i suggest that you make this slider like this. IMO this 1 is a a lot smoother than the last one. ok
00:49:884 (3) - ^ ok
01:32:184 - add a circle to follow the drums? Adding note can't do. because over star rate3.0
01:32:784 - ^ ^
01:36:984 - ^ ^

Harmony:
here as well. re-snap the green lines. shifted on 1/4 line

00:07:284 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this looks boring because it's at the same spot and it's just hitting at 1 spot. to make it fun, replace these circle for 2 1/2 sliders. ok
00:09:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ok
01:25:134 (2) - move this up a bit because i don't like the overlapping on (4). IMO it gets in the way during gameplay. fixed
02:16:584 - is there a reason why a break is here? anyways add a spinner and end it till 02:18:384 to follow that long pause in the instrumental. I see

Uncontrollable:
I saw an un-snapped green line.
00:17:184 (9) - move this somewhere else. part of the slider's end isn't showing. moved
02:16:584 - same as Harmony. I see

This is the best I can do. Star and GL

-Gamu- wrote:

[Controllable]

●HPかOD　１あげてみてはどうでしょう・・　Insaneなので どっちもあげました
●02:58:584 (T) - 不要な緑線　（意味ない） oops

Byakugan249 wrote:

Controllable:
I think AR9 plays nicely. The AR is a bit too slow IMO ok
00:26:484 (3) - Move this below the end of the previous slider. i don't like the overlapping here. ok
00:28:434 (4) - same as above but you can decide.^
00:53:559 - add a spinner and end it till 00:55:884 to follow the scream.ok

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ rui ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit. ok

[Uncontrollable]

1. 00:17:934 (3,4) - Make more better like this. ok
   
   

   400,36,18384,2,0,B|403:64|372:104|316:112|284:76,1,149.999995529652,0|8

2. 00:41:184 (5) - Change 1/4 sound much better. nope
3. 02:43:134 (2) - Flip this slider like this,flow much better. ok
   
4. 03:01:434 (1,2,3) - Very noisy here, try decrease the volume. down 30% volume

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Good luck ~

LKs wrote:

hmm
shouldn't it be extreme