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Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume

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Hinacle
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Hinacle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月20日 at 8:38:43

Artist: Yugi China
Title: Egaiteta Yume
Source: Dousei Lover Able
Tags: smee cRyo[iceeicee] merchat7 jih7491
BPM: 144
Filesize: 15916kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. 7491's Taiko (4.94 stars, 577 notes)
  2. cRyo's Hard (4.87 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Easy (1.21 stars, 90 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 336 notes)
  5. merchat7's Normal (4.01 stars, 146 notes)
Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume
Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My 15th Beatmap.
PC Game 『同棲ラブラブル』

Mapset:
[Easy]-Done. me
[merchat7's Normal]-Done. (Mapped by merchat7)
[cRyo]-Done. (Mapped by cRyo[iceeicee])
[Insane]-Done me.
[7491's Taiko]-Done.(Mapped by jih7491)
Last edited by Hinacle , edited 47 times in total.
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
†エロマッパー†
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hentai マッパー
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Wth! I just heard this song today and someone's already mapping it? XD

Lemme make Normal :P
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

merchat7 wrote:

Wth! I just heard this song today and someone's already mapping it? XD

Lemme make Normal :P
You can make normal diff?
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Yeah, should be finish tomorrow if you accept?
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

merchat7 wrote:

Yeah, should be finish tomorrow if you accept?
ok!!

I'm always wait= =+
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
[Insane]-3% me.
97% more fight !!!!
[Hard]-4% done
hurrry up ! wwww
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
ok

baka clap doublepost wwww

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

ok

baka clap doublepost wwww
wwwwwwwwwwww

Thank you~!!
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,785 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
So hentai :oops:
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Here's my diff 3.94 stars, 1.4 slider velocity, 289 total combo

Hope you like it, already added the tags into my diff, will star later.

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

merchat7 wrote:

Here's my diff 3.94 stars, 1.4 slider velocity, 289 total combo

Hope you like it, already added the tags into my diff, will star later.
Thank you GD~>w</
PeaChick
196 posts
Joined December 2009
PeaChick
IRC moded...
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
some changes ><

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

some changes ><
ok!!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue

yay star~ :)

[Easy]

  1. 00:27:904 (2,1,2) - hou about like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot123-6.jpg
  2. 00:32:904 (2) - move middle point to (96,344)?
  3. 01:33:737 (2) - you should move it to to (180,244)~
[merchat7's Normal]

  1. 01:02:695 (3) - endpoint move to (96,380)
  2. 01:20:403 (2) - how about this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot124-4.jpg
[cRyo]

  1. 00:15:403 (2) - stack it?
  2. 00:50:403 (4) - move 2nd point to (144,72), 3rd point to (128,32)
  3. 01:08:112 (3) - somehow I think deleting 3 and 5 is better... = =
  4. 01:38:737 (2) - stack it?
[Insane]

  1. 01:02:070 (1) - middle point 4 grids up, 2 grids left
  2. nice map
Good luck~
Starry_old
Starry_old
[Easy]

00:57:070 (2,3,4,5) - Make 2 align with 4 and 3 align with 5 perfectly. (Not big issue)

Wow, Nice map :D

[merchat7's Normal]

00:12:070 (3,4) - Remove 4 and make 3 reverse?

That's all I found for that.

[cRyo]

00:13:737 (1,2,3) - I think spinner will fit much better.
00:48:528 (3) - New combo
01:17:903 (3) - ^
01:52:070 (3) - Put this at the left of Note 2 to make Triangle pattern :3

[Insane]

01:52:070 (1) - Remove new combo?

WOW! Very good map!
I can't find any mistakes!
Good luck~
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle
>[CSGA]Ar3sgice,Starry

Thank you mod~!!
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
Thx mod ></

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
@[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Fixed all

@Starry
Sorry, if I do that it'll ruin the hitsound pattern.

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

[easy]
01:20:404 (1) - remove NC?
01:33:737 (2) - finish at the end

[normal]
00:07:695 (3) - 1 grid up
01:24:570 (1) - change the direction so that don't overlap last 4
01:32:070 (3) - clao at the repeat

[hard]
nothing

[insane]
00:25:404 (1) - finish
00:28:737 (1) - ^
01:38:320 (4) - whistle instead of clap
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
01:20:404 (1) - remove NC?
01:33:737 (2) - finish at the end

[normal]
00:07:695 (3) - 1 grid up
01:24:570 (1) - change the direction so that don't overlap last 4
01:32:070 (3) - clao at the repeat

[hard]
nothing

[insane]
00:25:404 (1) - finish
00:28:737 (1) - ^
01:38:320 (4) - whistle instead of clap
Thank you mod~!!
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
as your req from my queue

General

Errors

minor offest error: -8ms make it 396 ( remember that Video,-8,"op_1.flv"

Easy

fine

merchat7's Normal

00:05:404 (3) - move left a bit
00:07:695 (3) - 1 grid up
00:08:737 (2) - 2 grids right
hitsounds in this map doesn't play a critical role so I didn't point a lot of them out

cRyo

fine :?

Insane

fine, too

this can be treated as bubbled map imo, you can start to gather more mods and invite MAT
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Fixed some.

SPOILER
Why am I the only person getting nazi mod? :/

Download: Yugi China - Kaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu
PeaChick
196 posts
Joined December 2009
PeaChick
hmm...
hinacle's mod request (仮)

ah Insane : the spin.

end ~
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Mod - Request from modding queue.

I didn't find any errors etc., but try to make insane little harder... for score hunters, they can play cRyo difficulty, because Insane gives only little more score :o But nice map ;)
Jing
208 posts
Joined February 2010
Jing
I like this song~~ :3

This is my taiko diff :oops:

http://www.mediafire.com/?lfuunulxud3uk77

I hope you can see
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

jih7491 wrote:

I like this song~~ :3

This is my taiko diff :oops:

http://www.mediafire.com/?lfuunulxud3uk77

I hope you can see
ok~!!

add Taiko diff~>w</

Thank you~ :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
taiko mod as requested

[General]
[cRyo] - start kiai at white tick

[Taiko]
HP drain rate -1
00:03:529 - broken slider end, and also, when we play slider it gives 1/4 stream, so better not to use slider in soft section.
00:06:445 - since the next pattern is also k d k, try to use d d k here
00:28:320 - k k D
01:12:487 - the pitch of vocal stays at lower part so I prefer ddkdd / ddkkd
01:30:280 - the original kddkddk is pattern 3 in a group, which does not fit the current music (uses 1/4 as main beat), try kkddddk
01:49:154 - kdddk

excellent taiko diff here. star!
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
hinacle is kinda baka


21:20 <Melophobia> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42430
21:20 <Melophobia> : koresa
21:20 <Melophobia> : Title atteru?
21:21 <Hinacle> : ！？
21:21 <Melophobia> : egaiteta janai?w
21:21 <Hinacle> : 間違ってる・・・？
21:21 <Melophobia> : kasi kiitemita kanji
21:21 <Melophobia> : http://puu.sh/dN2I
21:21 <Melophobia> : u-nw
21:22 <Melophobia> : dotti nimo yomeru keredow
21:22 <Hinacle> : ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : 本当だｗｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : えがいてたですねｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : orz
21:22 <Melophobia> : ww
21:23 <Hinacle> : うわあああああああ
21:23 <Hinacle> : 本当だｗｗ
21:23 <Hinacle> : ありがとうございますｗ
21:23 <Hinacle> : kds for you~!!
21:23 <Melophobia> : kds plz
21:24 <Hinacle> : wwww
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

[General]
[cRyo] - start kiai at white tick

[Taiko]
HP drain rate -1
00:03:529 - broken slider end, and also, when we play slider it gives 1/4 stream, so better not to use slider in soft section.
00:06:445 - since the next pattern is also k d k, try to use d d k here
00:28:320 - k k D
01:12:487 - the pitch of vocal stays at lower part so I prefer ddkdd / ddkkd
01:30:280 - the original kddkddk is pattern 3 in a group, which does not fit the current music (uses 1/4 as main beat), try kkddddk
01:49:154 - kdddk

excellent taiko diff here. star!
Thank you mod~!!>w</

Melophobia wrote:

hinacle is kinda baka


21:20 <Melophobia> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42430
21:20 <Melophobia> : koresa
21:20 <Melophobia> : Title atteru?
21:21 <Hinacle> : ！？
21:21 <Melophobia> : egaiteta janai?w
21:21 <Hinacle> : 間違ってる・・・？
21:21 <Melophobia> : kasi kiitemita kanji
21:21 <Melophobia> : http://puu.sh/dN2I
21:21 <Melophobia> : u-nw
21:22 <Melophobia> : dotti nimo yomeru keredow
21:22 <Hinacle> : ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : 本当だｗｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : えがいてたですねｗｗ
21:22 <Hinacle> : orz
21:22 <Melophobia> : ww
21:23 <Hinacle> : うわあああああああ
21:23 <Hinacle> : 本当だｗｗ
21:23 <Hinacle> : ありがとうございますｗ
21:23 <Hinacle> : kds for you~!!
21:23 <Melophobia> : kds plz
21:24 <Hinacle> : wwww
教えてくれてありがとうございます！！
☆ありがとうー！！
Jing
208 posts
Joined February 2010
Jing
Updated MAP

link→ http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?vok0lo6ck443vk3

Hinacle ~~You've worked hard :?

Thx...Hinacle and wmfchris
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Hinacle, can you change my diff ar to 4?

Current ar feel a bit too fast for me.
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

merchat7 wrote:

Hinacle, can you change my diff ar to 4?

Current ar feel a bit too fast for me.
ok~></
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Nyuwon Sewu

Easy
00:02:070 (2) - It is just me or the spacing here is too large than others spacing?
01:42:070 (4) - New combo?
01:43:737 (1) - Remove new combo?


merchat7's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems slow

00:15:820 (1) - Forgot to put clap at head slider?
00:21:237 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:070 (2) - New combo?
00:23:737 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:32:070 (3) - Clap at repeating slider?


cRyo
00:14:570 (3) - Put finish here and use Soft (Custom 2) sampleset?
01:25:404 (5) - New combo?
01:26:445 (1) - Remove new combo?


7491's Taiko
* End the first kiai time at 01:38:737 to make it consistent on each diff

00:04:987 (17,18,19) - Kat-Don-Don?
00:08:737 (37) - Big Don here?
00:12:903 (53) - Why Kat here?
00:21:029 (31) - Remove Kat here?
00:39:154 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) - This rhythm are completely weird. Try make anoter pattern please
01:38:737 (1) - Big Don here?


Nice map here~
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Leorda wrote:

Nyuwon Sewu

Easy
00:02:070 (2) - It is just me or the spacing here is too large than others spacing?
01:42:070 (4) - New combo?
01:43:737 (1) - Remove new combo?


merchat7's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems slow

00:15:820 (1) - Forgot to put clap at head slider?
00:21:237 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:070 (2) - New combo?
00:23:737 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:32:070 (3) - Clap at repeating slider?


cRyo
00:14:570 (3) - Put finish here and use Soft (Custom 2) sampleset?
01:25:404 (5) - New combo?
01:26:445 (1) - Remove new combo?


7491's Taiko
* End the first kiai time at 01:38:737 to make it consistent on each diff

00:04:987 (17,18,19) - Kat-Don-Don?
00:08:737 (37) - Big Don here?
00:12:903 (53) - Why Kat here?
00:21:029 (31) - Remove Kat here?
00:39:154 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) - This rhythm are completely weird. Try make anoter pattern please
01:38:737 (1) - Big Don here?


Nice map here~
Thank you mod~>w<//
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
Hi ~ Request by kanpakyin .. (TAT

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Your BG is in JPG format but takes up 647KB. To reduce the file size, try this one instead ?
    SPOILER
  2. Not need to add "Hentai" to tags this time ??? xD
[Easy]
  1. 01:13:737 (2) - Remove whistle on reverse.
  2. Nice~
[merchat7's Normal]
  1. 00:24:570 (2) - Try to stack the tail to 00:23:112 (4)?
    273,315,24570,2,0,B|305:247|274:180,1,140,2|8
  2. 00:29:987 (2) - Why so many waypoint o o, perhaps try this ?
    406,313,29987,2,0,B|444:279|444:225|403:190,1,140,8|0
    SPOILER
  3. 00:32:487 (4) - I suggest this pattern, much more suitable to the vocal.
    SPOILER
    ATTACH[)VAFG}NYN7TN)MKLM@4DICT.jpg]
  4. 01:07:695 (1,2) - HUH? Looks bad personally... Think about this ?
    317,143,68737,2,0,B|287:103|223:103|195:143,1,140,4|8
    147,203,69362,1,0
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:779 (6) - Try ctrl+H, much better for me. But don't forget to replace and restack~ owo
  6. Hitsounding is pretty nice!
[cRyo]
  1. 00:51:028 (5) - Try some ways to mute this noisy slider. (I mean silent sliderslide hitsound doesn't work on this..)
  2. 01:15:403 (3) - ^
  3. Perfect as always! /w\
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:112 (2,3) - I suggest to exchange them, better gameplay.
  2. 00:40:612 (5) - New combo for your insistance.
  3. 00:42:487 (6) - ^
That's all ~ And I'd say this map is good enough so.....kpy will check this later ^^



Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

JoJo wrote:

Hi ~ Request by kanpakyin .. (TAT

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Your BG is in JPG format but takes up 647KB. To reduce the file size, try this one instead ?
    SPOILER
    [attachment=2:74f85]BG.jpg[/attachment:74f85]
  2. Not need to add "Hentai" to tags this time ??? xD
[Easy]
  1. 01:13:737 (2) - Remove whistle on reverse.
  2. Nice~
[merchat7's Normal]
  1. 00:24:570 (2) - Try to stack the tail to 00:23:112 (4)?
    273,315,24570,2,0,B|305:247|274:180,1,140,2|8
  2. 00:29:987 (2) - Why so many waypoint o o, perhaps try this ?
    406,313,29987,2,0,B|444:279|444:225|403:190,1,140,8|0
    SPOILER
    [attachment=1:74f85]0%YE82T650Q{0UQ}{1MZE9E.jpg[/attachment:74f85]
  3. 00:32:487 (4) - I suggest this pattern, much more suitable to the vocal.
    SPOILER
    [attachment=0:74f85])VAFG}NYN7TN)MKLM@4DICT.jpg[/attachment:74f85]
  4. 01:07:695 (1,2) - HUH? Looks bad personally... Think about this ?
    317,143,68737,2,0,B|287:103|223:103|195:143,1,140,4|8
    147,203,69362,1,0
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:779 (6) - Try ctrl+H, much better for me. But don't forget to replace and restack~ owo
  6. Hitsounding is pretty nice!
[cRyo]
  1. 00:51:028 (5) - Try some ways to mute this noisy slider. (I mean silent sliderslide hitsound doesn't work on this..)
  2. 01:15:403 (3) - ^
  3. Perfect as always! /w\
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:112 (2,3) - I suggest to exchange them, better gameplay.
  2. 00:40:612 (5) - New combo for your insistance.
  3. 00:42:487 (6) - ^
That's all ~ And I'd say this map is good enough so.....kpy will check this later ^^
Thank you mod~!!
and BG change!!
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]

Leorda wrote:

cRyo
00:14:570 (3) - Put finish here and use Soft (Custom 2) sampleset? i like the way it is
01:25:404 (5) - New combo? hmm, no...
01:26:445 (1) - Remove new combo? ^^^
Thx mod~ :)

JoJo wrote:

[cRyo]
  1. 00:51:028 (5) - Try some ways to mute this noisy slider. (I mean silent sliderslide hitsound doesn't work on this..) yeah, /me baka used the wrong section ..orz
  2. 01:15:403 (3) - ^ ^^^
  3. Perfect as always! /w\ (/ω＼)
Thank you ♥ JoJo ♥ ></

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
Jing
208 posts
Joined February 2010
Jing
http://www.mediafire.com/?6nfvqhe4insod4d

Taiko diff ...


7491's Taiko
* End the first kiai time at 01:38:737 to make it consistent on each diff

00:04:987 (17,18,19) - Kat-Don-Don?
00:08:737 (37) - Big Don here?
00:12:903 (53) - Why Kat here?
00:21:029 (31) - Remove Kat here?
00:39:154 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) - This rhythm are completely weird. Try make anoter pattern please
01:38:737 (1) - Big Don here?

Thx Leorda mod.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Leorda
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

merchat7's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems slow Felt that ar 5 was too fast for a slow/calm song like this, but guess I'll change it back to 5

00:15:820 (1) - Forgot to put clap at head slider? Fixed
00:21:237 (1) - Remove new combo? If the end of this slider were to be a note, I would put a new combo there, but since it isn't, I put it here.
00:22:070 (2) - New combo? ^ I prefer doing my new combo on sliders as well.
00:23:737 (1) - Remove new combo? Looks fie to me, feel like there should be a new combo here.
01:32:070 (3) - Clap at repeating slider? Intentional since there are no clap at 01:33:737 (5) & 01:35:404 (2) because they have no repeat there so just to keep consistency with them. But decide to put whistle.

JoJo
SPOILER

JoJo wrote:

[merchat7's Normal]
  1. 00:24:570 (2) - Try to stack the tail to 00:23:112 (4)? K, used your code.
    273,315,24570,2,0,B|305:247|274:180,1,140,2|8
  2. 00:29:987 (2) - Why so many waypoint o o, perhaps try this ? Hmmm, I prefer how it was before, made some adjustment to it through.
    406,313,29987,2,0,B|444:279|444:225|403:190,1,140,8|0
  3. 00:32:487 (4) - I suggest this pattern, much more suitable to the vocal. Don't really like two hit circles in a row here, and feel a bit disorientating to hit a note with clap then 1/2 later with nothing/whistle.
  4. 01:07:695 (1,2) - HUH? Looks bad personally... Think about this ? Thanks a lot for this, didn't know how to fix this/too lazy to fix :P Made some minor adjustment to (2) and fix spacing of (3).
    317,143,68737,2,0,B|287:103|223:103|195:143,1,140,4|8
    147,203,69362,1,0
  5. 01:14:779 (6) - Try ctrl+H, much better for me. But don't forget to replace and restack~ owo The whistle is different from before, so I intentional did this to represent it.
  6. Hitsounding is pretty nice! Ty

Ty for mods

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Sorry for huge delay.


[General]
  1. Timing:The timing is off.The bpm is correct but the offset seems wrong.So I have got a new ome for you: 399(-5)
  2. Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file. This is from the "Current Ranking Rules and Guidelines".So please the soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2 to 0-byte
[Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:03:737 (3) - I think the rhythm is kinda wired here because this slider is off the vocal.The vocal is obvious started from 00:03:529 - .So I would suggest you start the slider at 00:03:529 - and end it at 00:04:570 -
    2. 00:06:237 (2) - ^Similar with previous
    3. 01:30:404 (2) - I would move this 1/2 backward (01:30:195 - ) with a finish sound to fit the accent point!But you should adjust the spacing after fixing.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:32:904 (2) - Would you change the finish at the reverse of the slider to a soft whistle (C1)? The echo sound doesn't it that much.
    2. 01:19:154 (2) - I want to provide 2 suggestion here.You can choose either the first one or the second one.1.Add a hitclap here and remove the clap next one.2.Add a whistle on (5).
    3. 01:33:737 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?It sounds much better!
[merchat7's Normal]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:01:029 (1) - (Design)Would you make this slider more smooth?This is just my taste.Feel free to ignore it if you don't like it.
      Suggestion
    2. 00:25:403 (1) - This spinner was a bit long for newbie.They may feel boring about long spinner.So I would shorten this to 00:27:070 - with a whistle or finish sound if I were you.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:57:070 (4) - I would like to ask why reduce the volume here? D: It doesn't fit the music.Please increase the volume back to 60%
    2. 00:58:737 (1) - ^Same
    3. 01:01:654 (1) - Probably add a clap sound here to fit with your hitclap pattern.Also the drum sound has been started here again.
    4. 01:04:154 (5) - How about adding a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
    5. 01:28:112 (5) - Finish sound didn't fit the music that much.I prefer a whistle at the beginng of the slider.
[cRyo]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:32:070 (4,5,6) - The spacing between (4.5.6)- is inconsistent.I'm not sure that if you are did that deliberate.However it will cause a bad gameplay.Also I don't think the spacing between (4.5)- is called a jump.
    2. 01:15:404 (3,4,5) - ^Again.
    3. 01:21:862 (1,2,3) - Sorry but I don't think that a triplet here is suitable becuase there are no any drum sound to support this triplet.However a simple 1/2 should be fine.
    4. 01:38:320 (1,2) - I have seen this pattern before.So would you change to another pattern?It can get a new feeling to player and more fun :p
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:36:654 (4) - Please remove the whistle sound at thhe reverse of the slider!It didn't fit the music.
[Insane]
  1. Difficulty setting
    (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
    1. HP -1 to fit with the whole difficulty setting?
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:27:070 (1,1,1,1,1) - Sorry but I don't think spamming new combo ius needed here.I would remove 00:27:487 (1,1,1) - these new combo if I were you.
    2. 01:30:820 (6) - How about a new combo here to fit with the vocal?
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:57:070 (4) - I guess you forgot to add a whistle at the end of the slider to fit with the music.
    2. 00:58:737 (1) - Use a S1 whistle instead of this whistle?It sounds much better than this.
    3. 01:33:737 (4) - Again.I think you were missing a whistle at the begininng of the slider.
[7491's Taiko]
  1. Please rise the volume!The don/kat sounds is totally coverd by the instruments and vocal
  2. 00:11:029 (46) - How about remove this note?
  3. 00:15:404 (1) - How about change it to big don?Because of the accent point.
  4. 00:50:403 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - Why 4-plets here?I don't think it is really necessary because it didn't fit the music.I would rather change them to triplets or simple 1/2
  5. 00:53:112 (200,201,202) - I think ddk is much better.
  6. 01:00:403 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - ...Same as previous..Why you put a stream here?Seems it didn't fit the music very much.
  7. 01:42:279 (20,21,22) - ddk or kkk is much better.
Good luck!
Jing
208 posts
Joined February 2010
Jing
[7491's Taiko]
  1. Please rise the volume!The don/kat sounds is totally coverd by the instruments and vocal
  2. 00:11:029 (46) - How about remove this note?
  3. 00:15:404 (1) - How about change it to big don?Because of the accent point.
  4. 00:50:403 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - Why 4-plets here?I don't think it is really necessary because it didn't fit the music.I would rather change them to triplets or simple 1/2
  5. 00:53:112 (200,201,202) - I think ddk is much better.
  6. 01:00:403 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - ...Same as previous..Why you put a stream here?Seems it didn't fit the music very much.
  7. 01:42:279 (20,21,22) - ddk or kkk is much better.
Good luck![/quote]

Thx your mod :3

Correction complete.

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [7491's Taiko].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for huge delay.


[General]
  1. Timing:The timing is off.The bpm is correct but the offset seems wrong.So I have got a new ome for you: 399(-5)　ok~
  2. Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file. This is from the "Current Ranking Rules and Guidelines".So please the soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2 to 0-byte ok~
[Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:03:737 (3) - I think the rhythm is kinda wired here because this slider is off the vocal.The vocal is obvious started from 00:03:529 - .So I would suggest you start the slider at 00:03:529 - and end it at 00:04:570 -
    2. 00:06:237 (2) - ^Similar with previous
    3. 01:30:404 (2) - I would move this 1/2 backward (01:30:195 - ) with a finish sound to fit the accent point!But you should adjust the spacing after fixing.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:32:904 (2) - Would you change the finish at the reverse of the slider to a soft whistle (C1)? The echo sound doesn't it that much.
    2. 01:19:154 (2) - I want to provide 2 suggestion here.You can choose either the first one or the second one.1.Add a hitclap here and remove the clap next one.2.Add a whistle on (5).
    3. 01:33:737 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?It sounds much better!
[Insane]
  1. Difficulty setting
    (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
    1. HP -1 to fit with the whole difficulty setting?
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:27:070 (1,1,1,1,1) - Sorry but I don't think spamming new combo ius needed here.I would remove 00:27:487 (1,1,1) - these new combo if I were you.
    2. 01:30:820 (6) - How about a new combo here to fit with the vocal?
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:57:070 (4) - I guess you forgot to add a whistle at the end of the slider to fit with the music.
    2. 00:58:737 (1) - Use a S1 whistle instead of this whistle?It sounds much better than this.
    3. 01:33:737 (4) - Again.I think you were missing a whistle at the begininng of the slider.
Good luck!
Thank you mod~!!

ALL Fixed!!></
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
kanpakyin
SPOILER

kanpakyin wrote:

[merchat7's Normal]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:01:029 (1) - (Design)Would you make this slider more smooth?This is just my taste.Feel free to ignore it if you don't like it. Made better, can't seem to get my slider right in circle size 3.
    2. 00:25:403 (1) - This spinner was a bit long for newbie.They may feel boring about long spinner.So I would shorten this to 00:27:070 - with a whistle or finish sound if I were you. K, was a bit worried about too short spinner but notice if I shorten this, it'll be the same length as most of my other spinner in this diff, so I guess it's fine.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:57:070 (4) - I would like to ask why reduce the volume here? D: It doesn't fit the music.Please increase the volume back to 60% I don't agree, the custom hitsound here sound too loud for me and this part for me feel quite calm. Feel very weird to hear a sudden bass sound here, so I reduce to just make it compliment the bass sound in the background and not be overpowering to all other hitsound (the whistle doesn't sound that loud to me) in this section. Notice that 00:59:779 (3) sound a bit too loud so reduce to 30%.
    2. 00:58:737 (1) - ^Same ^
    3. 01:01:654 (1) - Probably add a clap sound here to fit with your hitclap pattern.Also the drum sound has been started here again. This note feel like lead-up to me, the music "restarts" for me when the finish is played so that's why no clap here. The custom clap also sound really loud and I think it'll not emphasize the finish as well.
    4. 01:04:154 (5) - How about adding a whistle at the beginning of the slider? I don't remember since I map this a long time ago, but I'm pretty sure I made sure not to put two hitsound on the same spot so would like to keep consistency with it and I don't really like how two hitsounds sound on the same place.
    5. 01:28:112 (5) - Finish sound didn't fit the music that much.I prefer a whistle at the beginng of the slider. I follow background sound for most of my hitsounds, and the sound in the background sounds more like the finish then the whistle.

Ty for mod, I'll leave timing change to Hinacle.

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Totally love this map * >.<

Only one personally thing


Insane

01:24:665 (2) The slider goes in the black part of the screen what looks a bit strange in my opinion

Feel free to ignore this useless advice :D

I love the map.

Go ranked and gl~

EDIT: Sorry, forgot to star.

So: Star * :D
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER
[cRyo]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:32:070 (4,5,6) - The spacing between (4.5.6)- is inconsistent.I'm not sure that if you are did that deliberate.However it will cause a bad gameplay.Also I don't think the spacing between (4.5)- is called a jump. moved little bit
    2. 01:15:404 (3,4,5) - ^Again. this time its fine for me ._.
    3. 01:21:862 (1,2,3) - Sorry but I don't think that a triplet here is suitable becuase there are no any drum sound to support this triplet.However a simple 1/2 should be fine. hmm, i think its ok ><
    4. 01:38:320 (1,2) - I have seen this pattern before.So would you change to another pattern?It can get a new feeling to player and more fun :p
    hmm, i never use ctrl+c ctrl+v in mapping, but sometimes some parts of the song have similar patterns its not because im lazy to make smth new, its just when i mapped it i thought that this pattern was the best to fit the music, i didnt realised that they are similar, well let it be similar then ._.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:36:654 (4) - Please remove the whistle sound at thhe reverse of the slider!It didn't fit the music. i think its ok wwww
Thank u for mod KPY~ ></

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Konei wrote:

Totally love this map * >.<

Only one personally thing


Insane

01:24:665 (2) The slider goes in the black part of the screen what looks a bit strange in my opinion

Feel free to ignore this useless advice :D

I love the map.

Go ranked and gl~

EDIT: Sorry, forgot to star.

So: Star * :D
Thank you for mod~><//
and Thnak you for star~!!
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
I will give the map another star for you getting it ranked :D

Just love it.

EDIT: Gave another star xD
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