kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for huge delay.


[General]

1. Timing:The timing is off.The bpm is correct but the offset seems wrong.So I have got a new ome for you: 399(-5)　ok~
2. Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file. This is from the "Current Ranking Rules and Guidelines".So please the soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2 to 0-byte ok~

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:03:737 (3) - I think the rhythm is kinda wired here because this slider is off the vocal.The vocal is obvious started from 00:03:529 - .So I would suggest you start the slider at 00:03:529 - and end it at 00:04:570 -
   2. 00:06:237 (2) - ^Similar with previous
   3. 01:30:404 (2) - I would move this 1/2 backward (01:30:195 - ) with a finish sound to fit the accent point!But you should adjust the spacing after fixing.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:32:904 (2) - Would you change the finish at the reverse of the slider to a soft whistle (C1)? The echo sound doesn't it that much.
   2. 01:19:154 (2) - I want to provide 2 suggestion here.You can choose either the first one or the second one.1.Add a hitclap here and remove the clap next one.2.Add a whistle on (5).
   3. 01:33:737 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?It sounds much better!

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP -1 to fit with the whole difficulty setting?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:27:070 (1,1,1,1,1) - Sorry but I don't think spamming new combo ius needed here.I would remove 00:27:487 (1,1,1) - these new combo if I were you.
   2. 01:30:820 (6) - How about a new combo here to fit with the vocal?
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:57:070 (4) - I guess you forgot to add a whistle at the end of the slider to fit with the music.
   2. 00:58:737 (1) - Use a S1 whistle instead of this whistle?It sounds much better than this.
   3. 01:33:737 (4) - Again.I think you were missing a whistle at the begininng of the slider.

Good luck!

Thank you mod~!!

ALL Fixed!!></

kanpakyin

Ty for mod, I'll leave timing change to Hinacle.

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu

Totally love this map * >.<

Only one personally thing


Insane

01:24:665 (2) The slider goes in the black part of the screen what looks a bit strange in my opinion

Feel free to ignore this useless advice

I love the map.

Go ranked and gl~

EDIT: Sorry, forgot to star.

So: Star *

Thank u for mod KPY~ ></

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu

Konei wrote:

Totally love this map * >.<

Only one personally thing


Insane

01:24:665 (2) The slider goes in the black part of the screen what looks a bit strange in my opinion

Feel free to ignore this useless advice

I love the map.

Go ranked and gl~

EDIT: Sorry, forgot to star.

So: Star *

Thank you for mod~><//
and Thnak you for star~!!

I will give the map another star for you getting it ranked

Just love it.

EDIT: Gave another star xD

Konei wrote:

I will give the map another star for you getting it ranked

Just love it.

EDIT: Gave another star xD

really Thank you~XD

I will get ranked!!

Hinacle wrote:

Konei wrote:

I will give the map another star for you getting it ranked

Just love it.

EDIT: Gave another star xD

really Thank you~XD

I will get ranked!!

Yep, I'm sure

To the taiko diff:

On the bg is written: Kaiteta Yume

Isnt the name of the song "egaiteta yume"?

Konei wrote:

To the taiko diff:

On the bg is written: Kaiteta Yume

Isnt the name of the song "egaiteta yume"?

oh...I tell him to repair it later

[General]
The jump from Normal and Easy is kind of broad; however, I will not hold it against you.

[Insane]
00:39:982 (4,1) - Even though this part plays well, it'd play even better if you shortened (4) to make it a 1/2-beat slider, deleted 00:40:607 (1), and added a 1-beat slider (and a new combo) at 00:40:399 (1). It represents the vocal line better this way. Timeline Reference

01:25:190 (3) - Kind of like before, you're ending a slider where a beat should start. Here's what I would do: remove this slider, replace it with a hit circle, and add a 1-beat slider at 01:25:399 (1). Timeline Reference

[cRyo]
00:18:315 (5) - This is a cool pattern you have going, but there is a better way to map the melody. Make (5) into a 1/2-beat slider that does not repeat and add a 1-beat slider at 00:18:732. Also, add a new combo there. Timeline Reference

00:34:149 (4) - This felt kind of odd when playing. Again, to follow the melody more effectively, remove (4), replace it with a hit circle, and add a 1-beat slider at 00:34:357 (5). Alternatively, you can make 00:34:357 (5) into a 1/2-beat slider and a hit circle at 00:34:774 (6). Do as you wish.

00:36:649 (4) - Again, I'd rather see this slider made into a 1/2-beat slider to follow the lyrics better. If you do that, add another 1/2-beat slider at 00:37:065 (5) and a hit circle at 00:37:482 (6). Timeline Reference

00:45:398 (6) - Remove this repeat and add another 1-beat slider at 00:46:024.

[merchat7's Normal]
00:27:482 (1) - Definitely would not place this so far away from the center. Considering the difficulty, ending a slider so closely to a beat is iffy in the first place.

01:44:565 (1) - Remove the combo here and add it at 01:45:399 (2) instead. It makes more sense because (2) is on a downbeat.

01:46:649 (1) - The beat placement is backwards here. Replace this slider with a hit circle and move 01:47:482 (4) back to the downbeat (while you're at it, add a new combo). Also, add a hit circle at 01:48:315 (5).

[Easy]
Looking really good!

Call me back for a recheck after you've made the changes. Great mapset.

Sync wrote:

[cRyo]
00:18:315 (5) - This is a cool pattern you have going, but there is a better way to map the melody. Make (5) into a 1/2-beat slider that does not repeat and add a 1-beat slider at 00:18:732. Also, add a new combo there. Timeline Reference yeah its little bit better (i did the same in last part), but i want to keep mine, just because im afraid of another slap from kanpakyin for *Copying pattern* i want to make some difference \:D/

00:34:149 (4) - This felt kind of odd when playing. Again, to follow the melody more effectively, remove (4), replace it with a hit circle, and add a 1-beat slider at 00:34:357 (5). Alternatively, you can make 00:34:357 (5) into a 1/2-beat slider and a hit circle at 00:34:774 (6). Do as you wish. decided to replace last 2 notes with slider

00:36:649 (4) - Again, I'd rather see this slider made into a 1/2-beat slider to follow the lyrics better. If you do that, add another 1/2-beat slider at 00:37:065 (5) and a hit circle at 00:37:482 (6). Timeline Reference i think its fine o.o

00:45:398 (6) - Remove this repeat and add another 1-beat slider at 00:46:024. this also fine for me ><

.

Thx for mod

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu

Sync wrote:

[merchat7's Normal]
00:27:482 (1) - Definitely would not place this so far away from the center. Considering the difficulty, ending a slider so closely to a beat is iffy in the first place. I'm confuse about this because I've have mods on some of my other beatmaps saying you shouldn't put notes in center because it's covered by spinner-osu / hit burst and etc. Looking at this part, I can't see a way to put this closer to the center without major readjusting. Song isn't very fast so 1 white tick should be a good enough recovery time for a Normal. Regarding spinner ending too close to slider(I assume by slider you mean spinner), I personally do not agree as due to the slower approach rate in easier diffs, you can see the next object while spinning and I think it's better to end the spinner where you want it to for more spin time and nicer hitsounding rather than removing the spinner or shortening / extending it in a way you don't want to.

01:44:565 (1) - Remove the combo here and add it at 01:45:399 (2) instead. It makes more sense because (2) is on a downbeat. I don't follow down beat for this diff, Listen to end of 01:44:565 (1), I think the new combo should start here because of it. Also consistent with 00:21:232 (1) -

01:46:649 (1) - The beat placement is backwards here. Replace this slider with a hit circle and move 01:47:482 (4) back to the downbeat (while you're at it, add a new combo). Also, add a hit circle at 01:48:315 (5). Done

Download: Yugi China - Egaiteta Yume (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [merchat7's Normal].osu

Sync wrote:

[General]
The jump from Normal and Easy is kind of broad; however, I will not hold it against you.

[Insane]
00:39:982 (4,1) - Even though this part plays well, it'd play even better if you shortened (4) to make it a 1/2-beat slider, deleted 00:40:607 (1), and added a 1-beat slider (and a new combo) at 00:40:399 (1). It represents the vocal line better this way. Timeline Reference

01:25:190 (3) - Kind of like before, you're ending a slider where a beat should start. Here's what I would do: remove this slider, replace it with a hit circle, and add a 1-beat slider at 01:25:399 (1). Timeline Reference

Call me back for a recheck after you've made the changes. Great mapset.

Thank you mod~!!
All fixed!!

Waiting for the Taiko BG><//

Hello~~

New Taiko bg

sorry~~I'm so late

jih7491 wrote:

Hello~~

New Taiko bg

sorry~~I'm so late

Thank you~></

and update done!!

Bubbled!

Sync wrote:

Bubbled!

Thank you bubbled~>3<//

Hey. According to the new rule, you need to remove (Short Ver.) from the title of the song. Don't give me kudosu for this!

Jacob is right, since there's no short. ver in official tittle, you have to remove the (Short Ver.) from the tittle. I popping the bubble due to this. http://vgmdb.net/album/31369. I will rebubble this again if you fix this or prove there's a official short ver. out there.

Miya wrote:

Jacob is right, since there's no short. ver in official tittle, you have to remove the (Short Ver.) from the tittle. I popping the bubble due to this. http://vgmdb.net/album/31369. I will rebubble this again if you fix this or prove there's a official short ver. out there.

The new rule is ridiculous for now, you guys polish the rule before pop bubble.
According to Miya's link, we must add Full version to the title if it has fully length?

ykcarrot wrote:

Miya wrote:

Jacob is right, since there's no short. ver in official tittle, you have to remove the (Short Ver.) from the tittle. I popping the bubble due to this. http://vgmdb.net/album/31369. I will rebubble this again if you fix this or prove there's a official short ver. out there.

The new rule is ridiculous for now, you guys polish the rule before pop bubble.
According to Miya's link, we must add Full version to the title if it has fully length?

No, you can't add anything unless the official name write that . Please read this > t/89198

Little mod before re-bubble.

merchat7's Normal

1. 00:13:732 (1) - Is it a bug? Why i can't change this into default soft finish at this end of spinner. Finish2 really not fit here.

cRyo< please change this to cRyo's Hard for better consistencies.

1. 00:25:399 (7) - Change the whistle into finish please or add finish here, since i can clearly hear a cymbal sound at this spot.
2. 01:05:398 (1) - ^

Easy and Insane are do in irc >.<


:3

@Hinacle
Can you resnap the end of this spinner 00:13:732 (1) - , that's why s:c2 finish is playing and not default finish.

All fixed thx for mod~
http://puu.sh/FenG

Miya wrote:

Little mod before re-bubble.

merchat7's Normal

1. 00:13:732 (1) - Is it a bug? Why i can't change this into default soft finish at this end of spinner. Finish2 really not fit here.

cRyo< please change this to cRyo's Hard for better consistencies.

1. 00:25:399 (7) - Change the whistle into finish please or add finish here, since i can clearly hear a cymbal sound at this spot.
2. 01:05:398 (1) - ^

Easy and Insane are do in irc >.<

log

20:15 <Hinacle> : = =+
20:15 <Hinacle> : fixed~></
20:16 <Miya> : okay >.<
20:16 <Miya> : let me check it again later
20:16 <Miya> : i think there's thing that we can improve
20:17 <Hinacle> : ok...
20:18 <Hinacle> : thank you~
20:18 <Miya> : yup >.< well i will call you later
20:18 <Hinacle> : I wait~>.<
20:30 <Miya> : Hinacle?
20:30 <Miya> : still there?
20:30 <Hinacle> : yeah
20:30 <Miya> : on easy
20:30 <Miya> : 00:25:399 (1) - can you make this slider more symetrical?
20:31 <Miya> : i can give you the code if you want
20:31 <Hinacle> : okay I will try this
20:31 <Hinacle> : !?
20:31 <Miya> : ah no need
20:32 <Miya> : move the 2nd point to 176,288
20:32 <Hinacle> : plz code
20:32 <Miya> : no just follow my instruction
20:32 <Miya> : move the end point to 256,68
20:32 <Miya> : that's all
20:33 <Hinacle> : Beautiful XD
20:33 <Miya> : :3
20:33 <Miya> : 01:03:732 (3) - put a finish here since i can clearly hear the cymbal sound from the music
20:35 <Hinacle> : yeah,good sound
20:35 <Hinacle> : fixed
20:35 <Hinacle> :
20:35 <Miya> : 01:48:732 (3) - here too at slider start >.<
20:36 <Miya> : also, i would love to add whistle here 01:47:065 (2) - at slider start to make your whistle pattern consistant.
20:37 <Hinacle> : nice suggestion /./
20:37 <Miya> : ok, that's all for Easy
20:38 <Miya> : now i will move to insane :3
20:38 <Hinacle> : ok= =+
20:39 <Miya> : 00:25:399 (1) - hmm, same as normal, i think you can add a finish here at slider start
20:40 <Miya> : 01:03:732 (3) - same as above >.<
20:40 <Miya> : 01:05:398 (1) - ^
20:41 <Hinacle> : Miya pro hitsound master
20:41 <Miya> : >.<
20:42 <Miya> : 01:05:398 (1) - ^
20:44 <Miya> : 01:43:732 (3) - hmm, how about a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
21:14 <Miya> : Hinacle?
21:14 <Miya> : still there?
21:21 <Miya> : oh, ok i assume you have fix those mod, i'll post this on the forum >.<

:3

all fixed!!
Thank you!!

Yup, i think everything is fine now. Rebubbled. Good luck for ranking :3

や

[Easy]

1. 01:23:732 (2,3,4,5,1) - I recommend not to use five straight circles. This diff seems quite easy overall, so only here looks too hard for the newbie player.

[Normal]

1. 01:50:190 (1) - Please avoid using a kick slider. It's strict with timing and makes playing here difficult for normal-player. I suggest to replace it with 1/2-beat-length slider(no repeat).

余談だけどInsaneの
01:24:774 (2,3) -
こういう使い方ひなくるさんにしては珍しいよね

Suzully wrote:

や

[Easy]

1. 01:23:732 (2,3,4,5,1) - I recommend not to use five straight circles. This diff seems quite easy overall, so only here looks too hard for the newbie player.

[Normal]

1. 01:50:190 (1) - Please avoid using a kick slider. It's strict with timing and makes playing here difficult for normal-player. I suggest to replace it with 1/2-beat-length slider(no repeat).

余談だけどInsaneの
01:24:774 (2,3) -
こういう使い方ひなくるさんにしては珍しいよね

All Fixed!!

珍しいかなｗｗ
そろそろいろんな配置試さないとね！

modありがとうございます！

ちょっと音が気になった

[Easy]
00:25:399 - 音的にデフォのfinishの方が合うと思います　Insaneもデフォだし
00:55:399 - ^

[Insane]
01:27:482 (2) - このclapの鳴り方が美しくないから削除するか音量下げて欲しい(願望)
01:27:690 (3) - 始点finish, それと01:27:274 - のfinish消しても良いと思います

gogogogogo

Melophobia wrote:

ちょっと音が気になった

[Easy]
00:25:399 - 音的にデフォのfinishの方が合うと思います　Insaneもデフォだし
00:55:399 - ^

[Insane]
01:27:482 (2) - このclapの鳴り方が美しくないから削除するか音量下げて欲しい(願望)
01:27:690 (3) - 始点finish, それと01:27:274 - のfinish消しても良いと思います

gogogogogo

全部直しました！
modありがとうございます！

@Hinacle
I agree with that change, but please place like this http://puu.sh/JWUJ

488,248,110190,6,0,B|412:248,1,70,2|2
264,248,110815,2,0,B|184:248|140:300,2,140,2|2|2

Sorry for delay, I check guest diff by when the beatmap is last updated.

merchat7 wrote:

@Hinacle
I agree with that change, but please place like this http://puu.sh/JWUJ

488,248,110190,6,0,B|412:248,1,70,2|2
264,248,110815,2,0,B|184:248|140:300,2,140,2|2|2

Sorry for delay, I check guest diff by when the beatmap is last updated.

Fixed!!
thank you!!

Ranked!

Suzully wrote:

Ranked!

Rankedありがとうございます！！

china

Gratz Hinacle-chan >w</

omedeto~

Yay Hinacle you're back to ranking . i really miss your maps and i really enjoy your mapping style. congratz on the rank

omedeto

Rankedｷﾀ━━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━━!!!!

おめでとうです

おめでとう！！

おめでと～！

おめぽよ～

Thank you~>w<//

ありがとう！！

Hinacle's map ♥
Good job >w<

Finally, grats Hinacle!

Gratz!!!!!! /

gratz!~

Been waiting for this getting ranked

Thank you>3</