1. Ika Musume (5 stars, 827 notes)
2. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1185 notes)

kanpakyin wrote:

Timing:

1. Offset: 1,344ms BPM: 140.00

Your message is too short.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Ika Musume]
00:14:094 (1) - move it away from 00:12:915 (7) no fixed
01:06:058 (5,6,7) - unstack with (4) fixed
01:43:343 (4) - make it symmetrical fixed
01:44:201 (1) - ^ fixed
02:06:058 (x) - ^ no fixed
03:25:451 (2) - delete fixed
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nice!
though some small problems,especially the red one.
Good luck

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Ika Musume]
00:27:272 (2) - maybe do a jump is better for me<<fixed
00:28:022 (6) - ^<<fixed
00:45:701 (12,13,14) - unstack with (11)<<fixed
00:46:451 (2) - the timing should move to 00:46:665 <<fixed
01:28:986 (x) - add break time<<fixed
01:50:094 (x) - add a note?<<no
02:58:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part should use 1/3 beat, not 1/4 <<fixed
03:35:629 (8) - jump<<fixed
03:46:129 (1) - add break time<<fixed
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nice!
though some small problems,especially the red one.
Good luck

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.
2. Add "squid girl" in tags. It's the English name of this anime.
3. You need to add code "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" in your osu file since you have used custom skin.

1. 00:20:201 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.
2. 00:21:594 (x) - ^
3. 00:21:701 (1,2,3) - NO WAY. Tooooooo hard for most players even this is for app. There are too many similar patterns, consider shortening the DS when putting a stream. 1.6x is really horrible and not fit you mapset overall. Never map for the reason "I want to making it more difficult so I do this".
4. 00:24:058 (5,6,7,8) - The same as above. You have the right to ignore this but I strongly recommend you to use low DS here.
5. 00:46:772 (4,5) - WEIRD PATTERN. This is really confused and hard to read. I suggest to delete them and add a slider 00:46:772 - 00:47:094(Reverse) - 00:47:415. This may follow the vocal.
6. 01:48:486 (6,7) - Spacing issue. Don't tell me you did this on purpose.
7. 01:54:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Question. Why there is no notes on 01:55:451 ? At 1st play, most of players depends on the music/vocal more to play, and you put your own rhythm here which couldn't be reflected on the song. The result is, most of players missed here for weird pattern. And here is my suggestion (No, I'm sure 99% of the mappers will agree with me on this):
   
   And there is more something similar like this plz check them by yourself.
8. 02:59:201 (7,8) - What the hell.... Spacing issue since nothing could show that there is a jump here.
9. 03:32:844 (3) - Not stacked perfectly.
10. 03:37:129 (11) - ^

1. 00:35:629 (1) - Why don't you end this on white line ? Sounds better if you do this. And 00:37:344 (1) as well.
2. 00:36:272 (2,3,4) - Sounds bad since you have not placed them following the vocal. Try to move them to next blue line ? And 00:37:987 (2,3,4) As well.
3. 01:33:701 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.
4. 03:59:201 (4) - Not stacked perfectly.

JoJo wrote:

OK mod time !

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.<<gamu is OK,no -Gamu-
2. Add "squid girl" in tags. It's the English name of this anime.<<fixed
3. You need to add code "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" in your osu file since you have used custom skin.<<fixed

[Rika]

1. 00:20:201 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.<<fixed
2. 00:21:594 (x) - ^<<fixed
3. 00:21:701 (1,2,3) - NO WAY. Tooooooo hard for most players even this is for app. There are too many similar patterns, consider shortening the DS when putting a stream. 1.6x is really horrible and not fit you mapset overall. Never map for the reason "I want to making it more difficult so I do this".
4. 00:24:058 (5,6,7,8) - The same as above. You have the right to ignore this but I strongly recommend you to use low DS here.
5. 00:46:772 (4,5) - WEIRD PATTERN. This is really confused and hard to read. I suggest to delete them and add a slider 00:46:772 - 00:47:094(Reverse) - 00:47:415. This may follow the vocal.<<fixed
6. 01:48:486 (6,7) - Spacing issue. Don't tell me you did this on purpose.
7. 01:54:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Question. Why there is no notes on 01:55:451 ? At 1st play, most of players depends on the music/vocal more to play, and you put your own rhythm here which couldn't be reflected on the song. The result is, most of players missed here for weird pattern. And here is my suggestion (No, I'm sure 99% of the mappers will agree with me on this):
   [attachment=0:10112]for rika.jpg[/attachment:10112]
   And there is more something similar like this plz check them by yourself.
8. 02:59:201 (7,8) - What the hell.... Spacing issue since nothing could show that there is a jump here.
9. 03:32:844 (3) - Not stacked perfectly.<<fixed
10. 03:37:129 (11) - ^<<fixed

Need more mods at the moment I guess. @_@

JoJo wrote:

OK mod time !

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.Tags: gamu ○　（Tags this please see →　http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35628

[-Gamu-]

1. 00:35:629 (1) - Why don't you end this on white line ? Sounds better if you do this. And 00:37:344 (1) as well.oh..mistake fixed!
2. 00:36:272 (2,3,4) - Sounds bad since you have not placed them following the vocal. Try to move them to next blue line ? And 00:37:987 (2,3,4) As well. fixed!
3. 01:33:701 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it. fixed!
4. 03:59:201 (4) - Not stacked perfectly.fixed!

Need more mods at the moment I guess. @_@

Nymph wrote:

Hi just some spacing suggestions: I just list the places I feel werid to play. I think this map can still improve a bit, so don't want to nazi now..

00:22:986 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - these feel very very very weird during playing... with 1.6 spacing it is really uncomfortable to play with these spacing.
00:46:772 (3) - why the distance decrease here? I prefer it not. <<fixed
01:48:808 (7) - I suggest this spacing move nearer to 6<<fixed
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8) - still.
03:43:129 (4,5) - maybe move further? 0.6 spacing seems really crowd here.<<fixed

hmm, that is all issues I found recently. =A= good luck.

Nymph wrote:

Hi just some spacing suggestions: I just list the places I feel werid to play. I think this map can still improve a bit, so don't want to nazi now..

00:58:772 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest not to place these notes like this.... little uncomfortable to play with. ok. All tightly stacked
02:34:772 (4) - I suggest jump here. ok.fixed

hmm, that is all issues I found recently. =A= good luck.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Ika Musume]

00:05:629 (4) - Remove this slider, and add circles at 00:05:736 and 00:05:951? no fixed
00:07:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 like the song does instead? Probably should use a slider if you do. fixed
00:35:308 - Add note here? no fixed
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like before, map this with 1/3? fixed

But it's a good diff =w=/

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Ika Musume]
- AR 9 makes this a lot easier to read, but maybe it's too fast.<<AR8 is OK~

00:05:629 (4) - Remove this slider, and add circles at 00:05:736 and 00:05:951?
00:07:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 like the song does instead? Probably should use a slider if you do.

00:16:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - o ooo oo oo instead? Fits better. You'll need to add a circle of course.
00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ooo o oo o o oo instead? Just fits the song better.
00:23:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above ^
00:25:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - And again.
00:27:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You do it here, so why not those parts?

00:35:308 - Add note here?
00:49:986 (5) - Stack on (6)? Less confusing.
00:52:344 (8) - Stack on (7)?
00:52:986 (2) - Not stacked right. <<fixed
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like before, map this with 1/3?

01:54:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These parts again :3
Really, probably should go with music on those parts orz.

02:15:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oo oo, oo oo instead. Stack third note on fourth.
02:16:772 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8,9) - And now 1/3 <<fixed

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - Confusing
02:59:058 (6,7,8) - Confusing jump lol

But it's a good diff =w=/

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ykcarrot wrote:

[Ika Musume]

-Gamu-
00:01:344 ~ 00:08:201 - Too loud intro part. Reduce audio volume to around 60.
00:58:772 (1,2) - Add normal-whistle to every point except 00:59:415
01:11:629 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
01:11:629 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistles
02:47:094 - Use soft sample set.
03:28:772 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
04:03:058 (1) - Remove whistle