NEM - Monochrome Dream Eater [Osu|Taiko] · forum

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2011-09-17T12:00:32+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 23, 2012 at 11:53:22 AM

Artist: NEM
Title: Monochrome Dream Eater
Tags: Yumekui Shirokuro Baku VOCALOID poisonedblood Kin Kagamine Len Jazz
BPM: 197
Filesize: 10186kb
Play Time: 03:28
Difficulties Available:

Lucid Dreaming (1.92 stars, 211 notes)
Poisonedblood's Nightmare (5 stars, 569 notes)
Sleep Disturbance (4.76 stars, 404 notes)
Sweet Dreams (3.9 stars, 310 notes)
TaiKin Oni (4.94 stars, 1162 notes)
Teru's Muzukashii (4.75 stars, 800 notes)

Download: NEM - Monochrome Dream Eater
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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NOT GONNA UPDATE THIS TILL POISONBLOOD COMES BACK ; o ;
My first beatmap! I am very unskilled at the moment, but hope to get better 'u'
Need hitsound help.

Easy: 100% Ready for modding
Normal: 100% Ready for modding
Hard: 100% Ready for modding
Insane:100% Ready for modding, thanks poisonedblood
Kin's Taiko Oni 100% Ready for modding, thanks Kin
Teru's Taiko Muzu 100% Ready for modding, thanks Teru21

Special thanks to poisonedblood and Kurai

Thank you for modding:

SPOILER

poisonedblood
wmfchris
Santa Claw
Kurai
Black_Cherry_Ita
winber1
eLtigreXXx
Xierra
Teru21
bomber34

Last edited by jabberwockey 2013-01-25T18:25:43+00:00, edited 139 times in total.

poisonedblood

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poisonedblood 2011-12-11T15:42:44+00:00

I would be glad to help you with your map, what do you need help with?
For the spacing, just go with what you think fits, if there's a problem it will be mentioned in mods later.
The only thing I don't think I can help you with is with the difficulty settings in Song Setup.
Also you don't need Kudosu to give it.

The tempo is a bit slow towards the end of the map when I checked.
You should change your BPM that are currently 98.4 and 98.45 (having 2 different one's is already an issue) to 98.5.
Change Source to NEM and add Vocaloid to Tags.
Would you like to add the video? I can get it for you if you want.

When you finish a diff I'm willing to mod it.
No Kudosu for this post please.

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2011-12-22T09:30:21+00:00

poisonedblood wrote:
I would be glad to help you with your map, what do you need help with?
For the spacing, just go with what you think fits, if there's a problem it will be mentioned in mods later.
The only thing I don't think I can help you with is with the difficulty settings in Song Setup.
Also you don't need Kudosu to give it.

The tempo is a bit slow towards the end of the map when I checked.
You should change your BPM that are currently 98.4 and 98.45 (having 2 different one's is already an issue) to 98.5.
Change Source to NEM and add Vocaloid to Tags.
Would you like to add the video? I can get it for you if you want.

When you finish a diff I'm willing to mod it.
No Kudosu for this post please.

Sorry for the very late reply! I had exams

I am having problems with the hard diff, I am contemplating whether I need a guest diff for that...because my Hard diff seems really terrible even to me, I have no idea where to go with it

Thank you very very much!
And here I thought no one would help lol

Yes, I have changed the tags, thank you!
Yes, getting the video would be most helpful! I am very grateful!I will change the tempos also
I will notify you when I have finished a diff!
Thanks so much for modding!

poisonedblood

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poisonedblood 2011-12-22T23:32:13+00:00

Here is the video

~~http://www.mediafire.com/?2o2o8vlcgce83od~~
I could make a guest diff if you want, it would probably be Hard or Insane.

Edit :

For the video you should put -160 Video Offset and full submit since it when I downloaded it, the video didn't show up.
Also open up the timing setup panel and do this for all your diffs:
Enter in the BPM 98.5
Pick somewhere in your map where you would want your preview point to be, and then click Timing at the very top and then click "Set Current Position as Preview Point".
(The next part is for your Sweet Dreams but remember this for when you'll make your other diffs too)
Instead of new "Timing Points", replace them with "Inherited Points".
To do this go to the point in time where you want to add it, select the First one with the original offset and click the green + button.
The lines in the time-line should now be green instead of red and the circles in the Timing Setup panel should be too. (Except for the first one)
Timing Points are for when the BPM changes, Inherited points are for things like changing the samples sounds, starting and ending the Kiai time, changing the volume, and changing the slider velocity. Remove the it if there is no difference between 2 consecutive Inherited Points.

Edit2:

A few more things, since the BPM changed you should probably click these 2 options in the top "Timing"
1. "Recalculate slider length" and 2. "Resnap all notes"
For the video did you click insert background, choose the video, then set the offset?
If it works fine on your computer, then I guess each time you update you should choose fullsubmit until it get's it right.
You should probably add 2 more colours so there's more then just 2 switching back and forth.
Although colours too similar to each other aren't that great either.
Also just so you know in case you didn't know you can change the grid level to place beats more specifically, and if you hold alt you can choose adjust the distance spacing so the beats are closer or further away from each other when "distance snap" is enabled.
Meaning in easier maps you could use one that's lower and a harder map higher, kind of like slider velocities.

Edit 3:

Make sure that the BPM, Tags, Source and Colours are constant in all beatmaps.
To make sure your colours are the same, you can open the ".osu" file with Notepad. You will see a section titled
[Colours] with
Combo1 : (#,#,#)
Combo2 : (#,#,#) etc...
You can copy and paste this into the other difficulties to make sure you have the same colours.
Make sure you only have 1 Timing point (The red line or circle instead of green), then resnap all notes and recalculate slider length (Those are in Timing at the very top of the screen) so everything are snapped on one of the ticks that appear in 1/6.
After if could of snapped circles and sliders 1/6 too early or 1/6 to late so double check to make sure. Spinner should be dealt with manually after if they don't start and end on a tick that appears in 1/6
I'm glad to see the video's working now

About slider velocity

To change the velocity within a song, create a inherited timing point and in the Timing panel where you would like it to change.
Then you will notice under timing a section titled "Difficulty" and under it "Slider velocity multiplier".
0.75x will make it slower and 1.5x will make it faster, this also affects the distance snapping.
You can also input your own multiplier (ex: 0.5, 0.8, 1.75, 2.0 ...etc) but it's better to stick with the defaults unless you want to create gradually increasing or decreasing slider speeds. I've seen some maps do it and are usually in the insanes.

I noticed in the song folder many copies of the same background picture, you should only have one.
One a side note I found one (the same) of a better size since backgrounds are supposed to be 800x600 or 1024x768
http://www.mediafire.com/?t5oy7timddz9kpt
You should full submit after the background change.

Last edited by poisonedblood 2011-12-29T19:28:13+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2011-12-23T08:43:15+00:00

poisonedblood wrote:
Here is the video
http://www.mediafire.com/?2o2o8vlcgce83od
I could make a guest diff if you want, it would probably be Hard or Insane.

Thanks for taking the time to do so!

Yes, I have seen your insane diff, they are awesome *A*
You could do whichever difficulty you want, but Insane is the only diff I can't mod on my own, since my skill level of osu! isn't that high yet (still practicing though lol)
Thank you for all the help!
( I don't want you to burden you with doing both Hard AND Insane diff, even though I'll look around the forums to see if anyone is willing to help me with the Hard diff, I'll try my best to do a decent Hard diffby myself)

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2011-12-24T15:18:41+00:00

EDIT 2
Whoops

Thanks for pointing that out! You have no idea what a huge help you are XD I feel like such a noob, knowing next to nothing and such and without you this map might have been graveyarded

Okay, this will sound redundant but how do you change slider velocities within a song? Does it have something to do with the inherited sections?
I just cant figure it out <__>;; ahahaha
my exams just ended today so updates to the map will go much faster now!

poisonedblood

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poisonedblood 2011-12-30T16:22:19+00:00

I made a skin, hope you like it.
Read the folder names for instructions, because sometimes I didn't know what would be best so I made 2 of the same (example the cursor).
I leave for you to choose the one you like the best.
http://www.mediafire.com/?fffigcc5o37c85a

Edit:
Well I had no idea what to do for the slider ball so I just took the new to full moon at 2:35 and just added the reverse so it loops back properly.
As for the file size it's understandable to be at the limit because you have both a video and a skin, but if you want I can probably compress the video a bit more but it'll probably remove 1~3 KB at max.
(Yup only removed about 2, if I compressed any more the quality would suffer a LOT)
If you want it it's here -> http://www.mediafire.com/?yf8d85qlozglxco
I kept the same name so you can just drag and replace without reinserting it as a background.

If you don't like it I could make a slider ball with just different colours, unless you want to do it yourself.
I like what you did for the hit# but there's a small problem, there's no hit100k that matches because mine's still there, and hit300g and hit300k are the same. They need to look different. In hit100, hit50 and section-fail there seems to be white lines on the edges of the graphics that should be removed (If you don't know what I mean just go look under design and click sprite library).
I like the touch you added to different elements, section-fail and section-pass look much different from each other now!
I'm glad you like the skip button

I like it a lot too~
I don't care much for comboburst-3 but I liked comboburst-1, they don't take much space but you have 2 it's good enough. Your call.
There's 2 things you left out though that you should of added is the 3 "scorebar-ki"'s and "Pause-Overlay" because you NEED to finish a "the set" of a group when making a skin. Well I can't complain about my cursors cause I guess they're kinda bad compared to other ones.

Just don't forget to delete those 2 extra background you're not using (ZuneArt and Folder).

Edit 2:
I found another problem this time concerning your slider tick. When it's on a white slider it becomes invisible, could you add a black outline to it or something?

Can you be more precise about the moon? I have a hard time knowing what you mean because it's an animation that puts the pictures one after the other. Does it look like one is missing, or not in the right order?
The only thing I think you could mean is when I watch it spinning in the sprite library is from when the moon goes from the last quarter to the new moon to the last quarter on the other side.
Maybe you could change the order to one of these and it might fix it? Although I don't think it should do a difference...
Just rename the order from sliderb0 to sliderb9.
If it's not better than I guess whatever you're talking about I guess that's how it's how I made it.

Last edited by poisonedblood 2012-01-02T14:24:09+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2012-01-01T07:59:25+00:00

SPOILER

Oh my gosh I love the skin! ;u; It's so freaking pimped out I don't even
ahhhh

Thank you!

I adjusted some parts of the skin though,(and added some elements, like the slider ticker png ) and removed two combo bursts since everything was going over file size limit XD. I hope you don't mind, so that it meshes better with the background and all.I still have all the copies of your skin elements so if you feel that an element doesn't go, you can just tell me and I'll change it
Also, is the sliderb supposed to render like that? All the elements seem to be there but the sliderb doesn't look completely rendered when doing a slider.(It looks incomplete...I don't know how to describe it)

(I love the skip button btw I just keep staring at it forever)

EDIT
I thought the sliderball you made (the moon) was really unique and cool! I just thought it wasn't showing up in the beatmap properly, I want to know how to fix that
and oops I forgot to add the cursor and other things

I like all the elements you made! It's just I haven't decided which ones I want just yet

I'll fix all the skin elements you mentioned

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-01-16T13:36:38+00:00

nice skinning...

[General]
the mp3 is at 320 kbps, you may need to compress it into 192 kbps to make it rankable.
- add preview time in [Easy].
- remove countdown in [Easy]
- try to end the kiai at 03:33:369, don't let it though to the end

remember to snap timing sections on the tick

since this is far from finished, I'm here just to talk about a few stuffs here:

- spacing -> spacing between two notes should be proportional to the time between two notes so that players can know that when to hit the notes, making the map readable and fun =S Jumping (significantly larger spacing) should only occur at the accents/climax.

- sounding: It may be too loud currently that covers the original song. For such song I prefer using more soft hitsounds, or at least make the normal hitsound softer.

maybe you can fix these two stuffs, find more mods after you fully complete this one, then find MATs again.

I like the skin quite a lot so it'll be good if you get this ranked one day :3

poisonedblood

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poisonedblood 2012-01-16T22:50:00+00:00

http://www.mediafire.com/?b6b6be6bft4fzb6

Here's the new mp3 at 192kbps~

poisonedblood

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poisonedblood 2012-01-18T02:54:18+00:00

Ok so here's my mod

Although I really should stop procrastinating on my work to do this... orz
Change things only if you want to although I strongly suggest these changes.
Don't forget to download and replace the mp3 file.
Since it's the same file, you don't have to worry about messing in the .osu to change stuff and about the offset changing.

Easy

Ok in easy I'm going to need to remod later after you make some changes because a few major changes need to be done.

General:
You must of played with your offset, make sure the timing points start on a tick.
You have 2 timing points to start your Kiai Time, make sure you have only one. Personally I would make Kiai Time start on 00:51:237.

[00:12:252] - [00:20:171] Maybe add some sliders in there somewhere?
[00:14:688] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:19:561] ^
[00:39:663] Maybe add a circle?
[00:32:353] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:36:617] Maybe add a New Combo? Perhaps remove the one on [00:35:399]?
[00:39:054] Start a New Combo here and add a circle on [00:39:663].
[00:41:490] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:46:364] ^
[00:48:800] ^
[00:50:627] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[00:51:237] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:52:150] - [00:53:369] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [00:52:759] instead?
[00:53:673] Either make a slider that ends on [00:53:978]
Or make a slider with a reverse arrow on [00:53:978] that ends on [00:54:282]. Make sure this starts a New Combo.

[00:56:110] Maybe start a New Combo?
[00:56:820] - [00:58:445] This part here is left empty, you should add something here.
[01:00:983] Maybe add a New Combo? Maybe make it a slider that ends on [01:01:287]?
[01:02:810] - [01:03:115] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:03:419] Start the slider here instead of on [01:03:115] Make sure this starts a New Combo.
[01:04:333] - [01:04:638] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:05:551] Either add a circle or start the slider here.
[01:06:770] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:07:988] or [01:08:292] Start the spinner here instead?
[01:10:120] or [01:10:424] or [01:10:729] End the spinner on one of these 3 spots.
[01:07:074], [01:07:379], [01:07:683] Add something on those spots, circles or sliders.
[01:25:348] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:26:567] Why not make it so the reverse arrow is here instead?
[01:27:785] Either add asomething here on on [01:27:480] and [01:28:089].
[01:29:612] Add a circle here? Perhaps on [01:29:917] too?
[01:30:221] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:30:221] - [01:31:135] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [01:30:526] and [01:30:831]?
[01:31:440] - [01:32:049] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [01:31:744]?
[01:32:353] Maybe add a circle? If not add another reverse arrow to the last slider.
I'm saying to change this part because if you compare it to Sweet Dreams you have to click more in the easy diff than in the normal.
I find this kind of weird.
Maybe just trade what you did in the normal to your easy and your easy to your normal if you're not please by my suggestion?

[01:32:658] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:35:094] ^
[01:35:094] - [01:35:704] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:39:054] In this slider, remove 1 reverse arrow and adjust the slider so the remainning reverse arrow falls on this time.
[01:39:866] - [01:44:739] Why not put something here? There is already a break shortly afterwards too.
[01:46:668] If you insist on keeping this in one big slider, at least make it finish here instead.
[01:47:277] - [01:49:105] Here you could mirror the previous slider so it matches. Just make sure they don't overlap each other.
[01:50:323] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:50:424] - [01:52:049] Maybe add something here? The break is right after the spinner too.

[01:56:110] You could extend your spinner to this point in time if you want.
If you think it's too long you could start it on [01:53:064] and add something instead.
[02:14:079] - [02:23:724] Please map this part.
[02:25:653] Maybe add a circle?
[02:26:262] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:27:582] - [03:03:927] Please map this part.
[03:06:465] You could literally copy and mirror what you did on [03:04:029], just make sure to add a New Combo here.
[03:07:785] until around [03:13:470] Please map this part.

Sweet Dreams

General :]
You must of played with your offset, make sure the timing points start on a tick.
Do 2 or 3% change in sound volume really make a difference? Delete the extra volume change timing sections.
Also you can't slow down half a slider.
I'm saying this because I see a timing section with only a change in slider velocity in the middle of a slider and am wondering if you knew.

[00:14:384] Maybe add a New Combo here?
[00:17:125] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [00:17:734]?
[00:22:607] Is this New Combo necessary?
[00:24:739] ^
[00:29:308] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:29:612] Maybe add a circle?
[00:50:627] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[00:51:237] Add a New Combo here instead of on [00:51:541].
[00:53:369] Add a New Combo here instead of on [00:53:673].
[00:58:546] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:03:419] ^
[01:05:551] ^
[01:27:480] Add a New Combo here instead of on [01:27:785]
[01:34:485] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[01:36:313] Is this New Combo necessary?
[01:37:531] Start the slider here instead of on [01:37:226]. You can a circle there if you want instead.
[01:41:287] - [01:42:303] This part here is left empty, you should add something here.
[01:42:404] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:44:536] Add a circle here, if you don't want only 4 beats in a row then delete the circle on [01:43:927].
I think it sounds better, but you be the judge.

[01:47:277] Start the slider here instead of on [01:46:973]
You can a circle there if you want instead, just make sure the slider is the one that starts the New Combo.
[01:49:409] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:59:765] Maybe make it a slider that end on [02:00:374].
[02:05:551] Maybe end the slider here and add a circle on [02:05:856]?
[02:06:770] Maybe end the slider here.
[02:07:074] Maybe add a circle or a slider with a rever arrow on [02:07:379] so it ends on [02:07:683]?
[02:07:988] Add a New Combo here instead of on [02:08:292].
[02:07:988] I'm not 100% sure about this but do you think it would sound better to have a reverse slider like on [01:34:485]
From here until about [02:08:902]?

[02:11:034] Maybe end the slider here and add a circle on [02:11:338]?
[02:15:298] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:16:516] Add a New Combo here if you wish to keep the one on [02:21:389], if not remove it.
[02:26:871] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:27:176]?
[02:28:699] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:28:394]?
Make sure the slider keeps the New Combo and not the circle if you change.

[02:29:308] or [02:30:526] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:29:917]?
You could even add the sliders at both spots if you remove the current one.

[02:32:963] Start the slider here instead of on [02:32:658] and add a circle there instead.
[02:39:054] Why not make it a slider like on [02:36:617]?
[02:42:100] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:39:968] - [02:40:272] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:41:186] - [02:41:490] ^
[02:44:536] Start the slider here instead of on [02:44:232] and add a circle there instead.
But make sure it matches the pattern you chose on [01:44:536], so maybe add a circle on [02:43:622].

[02:45:754] Start the slider here instead of on [02:45:450] and add a circle there instead.
[02:46:973] Start the New Combo here instead of on [02:46:668].
[02:47:886] Why not end the slider here and add a circle on [02:48:191]?
[02:48:800] Why not end the slider here and add a circle on [02:49:105]? Make sure the circle has the new combo and not the slider after it.
[02:50:627] - [02:50:932] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:51:846] - [02:53:369] I feel like this could be replaced with 2 sliders instead of these circles. Try it and see if it sounds better.
[02:53:673] Start the slider here instead of on [02:53:978] and add a circle on [02:54:587]. Make sure the slider keeps the New Combo.
[02:56:110] - [02:56:414] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:58:242] Maybe end the reverse slider here and add a slider from [02:58:546] to [02:58:851],
OR Add a reverse arrow so it ends on [02:58:851], OR add a circle on [02:58:851]. (In order from I think sounds best, still you choose)

[03:01:287] Maybe add a circle?
[03:03:724] Maybe add a circle? Maybe also add a circle on [03:03:115]? Just make sure it matches the pattern you chose on [01:44:536]
[03:06:465] Maybe make a slider that ends on [03:06:770], if not than add a circle on [03:06:770].
[03:07:074] Maybe add a circle?
[03:07:988] [03:08:292] Maybe make it a slider?
[03:08:597] Start the New Combo here instead of on [03:09:206].
[03:09:206] - [03:09:511] or [03:09:815] Maybe make it a slider?
[03:11:947] Why not extend the slider so it ends here?
[03:12:252] - [03:13:470] Maybe make something with 2 sliders instead of circles?
At least please add something on [03:12:252] and make it start the New Combo instead.

[03:21:084] - [03:33:267] Ok this is pure spinner spam.
Please do something else that can end with a long spinner or just remove everything so the map ends on [03:13:166] or [03:13:470]

Also this is what I had in mind for the sliderscorepoint.png to fix the problem,
but don't replace your with this one because I can't seem to be able to do a good job at this...

jabberwockey

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jabberwockey 2012-01-20T18:31:19+00:00

poisonedblood wrote:
Ok so here's my mod
Although I really should stop procrastinating on my work to do this... orz
Change things only if you want to although I strongly suggest these changes.
Don't forget to download and replace the mp3 file.
Since it's the same file, you don't have to worry about messing in the .osu to change stuff and about the offset changing.

Easy
Ok in easy I'm going to need to remod later after you make some changes because a few major changes need to be done.

General:
You must of played with your offset, make sure the timing points start on a tick.
You have 2 timing points to start your Kiai Time, make sure you have only one. Personally I would make Kiai Time start on 00:51:237.

[00:12:252] - [00:20:171] Maybe add some sliders in there somewhere?
[00:14:688] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:19:561] ^
[00:39:663] Maybe add a circle?
[00:32:353] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:36:617] Maybe add a New Combo? Perhaps remove the one on [00:35:399]?
[00:39:054] Start a New Combo here and add a circle on [00:39:663].
[00:41:490] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:46:364] ^
[00:48:800] ^
[00:50:627] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[00:51:237] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:52:150] - [00:53:369] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [00:52:759] instead?
[00:53:673] Either make a slider that ends on [00:53:978]
Or make a slider with a reverse arrow on [00:53:978] that ends on [00:54:282]. Make sure this starts a New Combo.

[00:56:110] Maybe start a New Combo?
[00:56:820] - [00:58:445] This part here is left empty, you should add something here.
[01:00:983] Maybe add a New Combo? Maybe make it a slider that ends on [01:01:287]?
[01:02:810] - [01:03:115] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:03:419] Start the slider here instead of on [01:03:115] Make sure this starts a New Combo.
[01:04:333] - [01:04:638] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:05:551] Either add a circle or start the slider here.
[01:06:770] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:07:988] or [01:08:292] Start the spinner here instead?
[01:10:120] or [01:10:424] or [01:10:729] End the spinner on one of these 3 spots.
[01:07:074], [01:07:379], [01:07:683] Add something on those spots, circles or sliders.
[01:25:348] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:26:567] Why not make it so the reverse arrow is here instead?
[01:27:785] Either add asomething here on on [01:27:480] and [01:28:089].
[01:29:612] Add a circle here? Perhaps on [01:29:917] too?
[01:30:221] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:30:221] - [01:31:135] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [01:30:526] and [01:30:831]?
[01:31:440] - [01:32:049] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow on [01:31:744]?
[01:32:353] Maybe add a circle? If not add another reverse arrow to the last slider.
I'm saying to change this part because if you compare it to Sweet Dreams you have to click more in the easy diff than in the normal.
I find this kind of weird.
Maybe just trade what you did in the normal to your easy and your easy to your normal if you're not please by my suggestion?

[01:32:658] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:35:094] ^
[01:35:094] - [01:35:704] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:39:054] In this slider, remove 1 reverse arrow and adjust the slider so the remainning reverse arrow falls on this time.
[01:39:866] - [01:44:739] Why not put something here? There is already a break shortly afterwards too.
[01:46:668] If you insist on keeping this in one big slider, at least make it finish here instead.
[01:47:277] - [01:49:105] Here you could mirror the previous slider so it matches. Just make sure they don't overlap each other.
[01:50:323] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:50:424] - [01:52:049] Maybe add something here? The break is right after the spinner too.

[01:56:110] You could extend your spinner to this point in time if you want.
If you think it's too long you could start it on [01:53:064] and add something instead.
[02:14:079] - [02:23:724] Please map this part.
[02:25:653] Maybe add a circle?
[02:26:262] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:27:582] - [03:03:927] Please map this part.
[03:06:465] You could literally copy and mirror what you did on [03:04:029], just make sure to add a New Combo here.
[03:07:785] until around [03:13:470] Please map this part.

Sweet Dreams
General :]
You must of played with your offset, make sure the timing points start on a tick.
Do 2 or 3% change in sound volume really make a difference? Delete the extra volume change timing sections.
Also you can't slow down half a slider.
I'm saying this because I see a timing section with only a change in slider velocity in the middle of a slider and am wondering if you knew.

[00:14:384] Maybe add a New Combo here?
[00:17:125] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [00:17:734]?
[00:22:607] Is this New Combo necessary?
[00:24:739] ^
[00:29:308] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:29:612] Maybe add a circle?
[00:50:627] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[00:51:237] Add a New Combo here instead of on [00:51:541].
[00:53:369] Add a New Combo here instead of on [00:53:673].
[00:58:546] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:03:419] ^
[01:05:551] ^
[01:27:480] Add a New Combo here instead of on [01:27:785]
[01:34:485] Start you reverse slider here, keep the end where it is. It sounds like it starts to early.
[01:36:313] Is this New Combo necessary?
[01:37:531] Start the slider here instead of on [01:37:226]. You can a circle there if you want instead.
[01:41:287] - [01:42:303] This part here is left empty, you should add something here.
[01:42:404] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:44:536] Add a circle here, if you don't want only 4 beats in a row then delete the circle on [01:43:927].
I think it sounds better, but you be the judge.

[01:47:277] Start the slider here instead of on [01:46:973]
You can a circle there if you want instead, just make sure the slider is the one that starts the New Combo.
[01:49:409] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:59:765] Maybe make it a slider that end on [02:00:374].
[02:05:551] Maybe end the slider here and add a circle on [02:05:856]?
[02:06:770] Maybe end the slider here.
[02:07:074] Maybe add a circle or a slider with a rever arrow on [02:07:379] so it ends on [02:07:683]?
[02:07:988] Add a New Combo here instead of on [02:08:292].
[02:07:988] I'm not 100% sure about this but do you think it would sound better to have a reverse slider like on [01:34:485]
From here until about [02:08:902]?

[02:11:034] Maybe end the slider here and add a circle on [02:11:338]?
[02:15:298] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:16:516] Add a New Combo here if you wish to keep the one on [02:21:389], if not remove it.
[02:26:871] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:27:176]?
[02:28:699] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:28:394]?
Make sure the slider keeps the New Combo and not the circle if you change.

[02:29:308] or [02:30:526] Don't you think it sound better if the slider started here instead of on [02:29:917]?
You could even add the sliders at both spots if you remove the current one.

[02:32:963] Start the slider here instead of on [02:32:658] and add a circle there instead.
[02:39:054] Why not make it a slider like on [02:36:617]?
[02:42:100] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:39:968] - [02:40:272] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:41:186] - [02:41:490] ^
[02:44:536] Start the slider here instead of on [02:44:232] and add a circle there instead.
But make sure it matches the pattern you chose on [01:44:536], so maybe add a circle on [02:43:622].

[02:45:754] Start the slider here instead of on [02:45:450] and add a circle there instead.
[02:46:973] Start the New Combo here instead of on [02:46:668].
[02:47:886] Why not end the slider here and add a circle on [02:48:191]?
[02:48:800] Why not end the slider here and add a circle on [02:49:105]? Make sure the circle has the new combo and not the slider after it.
[02:50:627] - [02:50:932] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:51:846] - [02:53:369] I feel like this could be replaced with 2 sliders instead of these circles. Try it and see if it sounds better.
[02:53:673] Start the slider here instead of on [02:53:978] and add a circle on [02:54:587]. Make sure the slider keeps the New Combo.
[02:56:110] - [02:56:414] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:58:242] Maybe end the reverse slider here and add a slider from [02:58:546] to [02:58:851],
OR Add a reverse arrow so it ends on [02:58:851], OR add a circle on [02:58:851]. (In order from I think sounds best, still you choose)

[03:01:287] Maybe add a circle?
[03:03:724] Maybe add a circle? Maybe also add a circle on [03:03:115]? Just make sure it matches the pattern you chose on [01:44:536]
[03:06:465] Maybe make a slider that ends on [03:06:770], if not than add a circle on [03:06:770].
[03:07:074] Maybe add a circle?
[03:07:988] [03:08:292] Maybe make it a slider?
[03:08:597] Start the New Combo here instead of on [03:09:206].
[03:09:206] - [03:09:511] or [03:09:815] Maybe make it a slider?
[03:11:947] Why not extend the slider so it ends here?
[03:12:252] - [03:13:470] Maybe make something with 2 sliders instead of circles?
At least please add something on [03:12:252] and make it start the New Combo instead.

[03:21:084] - [03:33:267] Ok this is pure spinner spam.
Please do something else that can end with a long spinner or just remove everything so the map ends on [03:13:166] or [03:13:470]

Also this is what I had in mind for the sliderscorepoint.png to fix the problem,
but don't replace your with this one because I can't seem to be able to do a good job at this...
[attachment=0:48cf1]sliderscorepoint.png[/attachment:48cf1]

Working on it! Thank you very much

Santa Claw

97 posts

Joined March 2011

Santa Claw 2012-01-22T17:33:51+00:00

my noob mod...

[General]
Skin - awesome.
BPM and offset - good.

[Easy]
I find TONS of spacing problems. Please re-space this with Distance Snap.
01:25:352 (9) - new combo
01:30:225 (13) - ^
01:35:098 (21) - ^

[Sweet Dreams]
00:50:327 (10) - shorten to 00:50:631
00:54:591 (4) - make it a repeating slider till 00:55:505 on red and white ticks.
01:03:423 (1) - make it till 01:04:033
01:08:296 (1) - shorten to 01:10:124
01:34:185 (7) - change the shape of the slider and shorten to 01:34:489
01:38:449 (2) - same as 00:54:591 (4)
01:41:190 (5,6) - I really hate it. change it. it's confusing.
01:52:154 (1) - it confuses the player also. shorten it to 01:53:982 and add hitcircle at 01:54:591. flows better with the music.
01:57:027 (1) - ugly slider much?
02:43:931 (11,1) - fix spacing
03:21:088 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO.

could be an awesoem map, good luck! :3

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-01-23T16:05:16+00:00

Santa Claw wrote:
my noob mod...

[General]
Skin - awesome.
BPM and offset - good.

[Easy]
I find TONS of spacing problems. Please re-space this with Distance Snap.
01:25:352 (9) - new combo
01:30:225 (13) - ^
01:35:098 (21) - ^

[Sweet Dreams]
00:50:327 (10) - shorten to 00:50:631
00:54:591 (4) - make it a repeating slider till 00:55:505 on red and white ticks.
01:03:423 (1) - make it till 01:04:033
01:08:296 (1) - shorten to 01:10:124
01:34:185 (7) - change the shape of the slider and shorten to 01:34:489
01:38:449 (2) - same as 00:54:591 (4)
01:41:190 (5,6) - I really hate it. change it. it's confusing.
01:52:154 (1) - it confuses the player also. shorten it to 01:53:982 and add hitcircle at 01:54:591. flows better with the music.
01:57:027 (1) - ugly slider much?
02:43:931 (11,1) - fix spacing
03:21:088 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO.

could be an awesoem map, good luck! :3

LOL Thank you very very much

I might ask what to do in that spinner spam place because I have been told earlier its a pretty dumb idea
- grabs for suggestions from everyone -
<__>

Santa Claw

97 posts

Joined March 2011

Santa Claw 2012-01-23T19:20:11+00:00

Shoily wrote:
Santa Claw wrote:
my noob mod...

[General]
Skin - awesome.
BPM and offset - good.

[Easy]
I find TONS of spacing problems. Please re-space this with Distance Snap.
01:25:352 (9) - new combo
01:30:225 (13) - ^
01:35:098 (21) - ^

[Sweet Dreams]
00:50:327 (10) - shorten to 00:50:631
00:54:591 (4) - make it a repeating slider till 00:55:505 on red and white ticks.
01:03:423 (1) - make it till 01:04:033
01:08:296 (1) - shorten to 01:10:124
01:34:185 (7) - change the shape of the slider and shorten to 01:34:489
01:38:449 (2) - same as 00:54:591 (4)
01:41:190 (5,6) - I really hate it. change it. it's confusing.
01:52:154 (1) - it confuses the player also. shorten it to 01:53:982 and add hitcircle at 01:54:591. flows better with the music.
01:57:027 (1) - ugly slider much?
02:43:931 (11,1) - fix spacing
03:21:088 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO.

could be an awesoem map, good luck! :3
LOL Thank you very very much
I might ask what to do in that spinner spam place because I have been told earlier its a pretty dumb idea
- grabs for suggestions from everyone -
<__>

Yeah, spinner spam is in bad at 99% of the cases...except for here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25557
But the spam wasn't so great like here xD
If it was an easier diff, I'd say give up on this part.
Some mappers like extending the mapped area of the song in every diff, so the harder the diff the longer you play, but this doesn't fit with every song.
I just saw you didn't have any ideas for that part of the map...

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-01-27T14:59:03+00:00

I think you must add a color from sliderborders.
Open diff => Open .osu in notepad => under this you copypaste the code.

SliderBorder: 230,193,68

no kd pls *runs*

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-01-27T16:45:56+00:00

Thanks very much

totally forgot about the sliderborder =u=;;

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-01-27T16:54:32+00:00

Alright I have modded most of the things you guys have written about, please see if the spinner spam issue has been fixed and other problems,and since a lot of mistakes have been pointed out and I was trying to fix mostly what I could I might have overlooked something ouo
So please point out all issues you guys can find!

poisonedblood

40 posts

Joined June 2010

poisonedblood 2012-01-31T00:52:53+00:00

Well I rechecked and found a few things to fix.
Don't change anything you don't want to, I'm sorry if I repeat something you didn't want to change

I'm too lazy to read my last mod.

Easy

General :
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example [02:47:281] and [02:47:586].

[00:50:631] - [00:50:936] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[00:53:0068] Maybe add a circle here, and keep the slider only from [00:53:677] - [00:54:286]?
[00:57:332] Is this New Combo necessary?
[01:00:987] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:03:423] Maybe start the slider here instead?
[01:07:992] I think the spinner would sound better if it started here.
You could add a slider from [01:07:383] - [01:07:687], but you don't have to.
I just think it would be empty before the spinner if you change it.

[01:25:352] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:30:225] ^
[01:32:662] ^
[01:35:098] ^
[01:47:281] ^
[02:27:789] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:34:185] or [02:34:794] Add a New Combo.
[02:39:667] Add a New Combo here, perhaps even remove the one on [02:37:230].
[02:42:104] Maybe start the slider with reverse arrows here? If you do please fill the emptiness it creates
[02:44:540] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:49:109] Maybe add something here? Like maybe a slider with [02:49:413]? If you do make it a New Combo.
If you don't please make [02:49:413] a New Combo.

[02:49:718] - [02:50:022] Maybe make it a slider? Or delete the circle on [02:50:022]?
[02:53:677] It sounds better if your slider starts here, and you might want to make it a New Combo.
[02:59:159] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:03:423] Please move here the circle that's on [03:03:322].
[03:10:733] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:11:342] It sounds better if you started you spinner here.

Sweet Dreams

General:
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example the entire segment here [00:48:804] - [00:50:936].
The Last Kiai Time that starts at about 3:33 isn't very necessary, I'd remove it if I we're you.

[00:44:540] Maybe remove this New Combo?
[00:50:631] Maybe just move this slider in the timeline so it starts here and remove 1 reverse arrow?
[01:07:992] Maybe add a circle?
[01:34:489] - [01:34:794] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[01:37:535] It sounds better if you start the slider here. You could keep a circle on [01:37:230].
[01:50:327] Maybe extend your slider so it ends here?
[01:51:850] Maybe add a circle here?
[01:54:286] I don't like the way the spinner and the circle at this time sound.
It would sound much better if the spinner ended here and you moved the circle to [01:54:591].

[01:57:027] A 12 combo starts getting long for a normal, so perhaps add a New Combo here?
[02:50:327] - [02:53:677] This part might be a bit overmapped. Especially in the 2nd combo.
You can keep things on all the spots you have your circles on, but could you replace a few with sliders?

[02:54:286] Maybe end your slider here? You can still keep something on [02:54:591].
[02:54:591] - [02:57:332] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[02:59:159] - [03:00:987] ^
[03:07:687] Remove this New Combo.
[03:08:601] Make this the start of the New Combo instead of [03:09:210].
[03:07:687] - [03:10:428] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[03:18:652] - [03:21:088] Could you add something here? Make sure it starts a New Combo.

[03:29:921] Your spinner currently start here and I don't really like how it sounds.
Here is where it would sound better to start it : [03:28:389] or [03:30:835].
If you chose the one that's later than yours, please add something to fill the void.

Well you wanted to see what I did up till now well here you go.
I'm not done yet, but the plus side is I only have the mapping left to do and I started a little.
I you can call it however you want, just keep my name in it and add my name to the tags.Download: Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily) [Insane].osu

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-01-31T16:25:27+00:00

poisonedblood wrote:
Well I rechecked and found a few things to fix.
Don't change anything you don't want to, I'm sorry if I repeat something you didn't want to change I'm too lazy to read my last mod.
Easy
General :
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example [02:47:281] and [02:47:586].

[00:50:631] - [00:50:936] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[00:53:0068] Maybe add a circle here, and keep the slider only from [00:53:677] - [00:54:286]?
[00:57:332] Is this New Combo necessary?
[01:00:987] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:03:423] Maybe start the slider here instead?
[01:07:992] I think the spinner would sound better if it started here.
You could add a slider from [01:07:383] - [01:07:687], but you don't have to.
I just think it would be empty before the spinner if you change it.

[01:25:352] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:30:225] ^
[01:32:662] ^
[01:35:098] ^
[01:47:281] ^
[02:27:789] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:34:185] or [02:34:794] Add a New Combo.
[02:39:667] Add a New Combo here, perhaps even remove the one on [02:37:230].
[02:42:104] Maybe start the slider with reverse arrows here? If you do please fill the emptiness it creates
[02:44:540] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:49:109] Maybe add something here? Like maybe a slider with [02:49:413]? If you do make it a New Combo.
If you don't please make [02:49:413] a New Combo.

[02:49:718] - [02:50:022] Maybe make it a slider? Or delete the circle on [02:50:022]?
[02:53:677] It sounds better if your slider starts here, and you might want to make it a New Combo.
[02:59:159] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:03:423] Please move here the circle that's on [03:03:322].
[03:10:733] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:11:342] It sounds better if you started you spinner here.
Sweet Dreams
General:
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example the entire segment here [00:48:804] - [00:50:936].
The Last Kiai Time that starts at about 3:33 isn't very necessary, I'd remove it if I we're you.

[00:44:540] Maybe remove this New Combo?
[00:50:631] Maybe just move this slider in the timeline so it starts here and remove 1 reverse arrow?
[01:07:992] Maybe add a circle?
[01:34:489] - [01:34:794] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[01:37:535] It sounds better if you start the slider here. You could keep a circle on [01:37:230].
[01:50:327] Maybe extend your slider so it ends here?
[01:51:850] Maybe add a circle here?
[01:54:286] I don't like the way the spinner and the circle at this time sound.
It would sound much better if the spinner ended here and you moved the circle to [01:54:591].

[01:57:027] A 12 combo starts getting long for a normal, so perhaps add a New Combo here?
[02:50:327] - [02:53:677] This part might be a bit overmapped. Especially in the 2nd combo.
You can keep things on all the spots you have your circles on, but could you replace a few with sliders?

[02:54:286] Maybe end your slider here? You can still keep something on [02:54:591].
[02:54:591] - [02:57:332] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[02:59:159] - [03:00:987] ^
[03:07:687] Remove this New Combo.
[03:08:601] Make this the start of the New Combo instead of [03:09:210].
[03:07:687] - [03:10:428] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[03:18:652] - [03:21:088] Could you add something here? Make sure it starts a New Combo.

[03:29:921] Your spinner currently start here and I don't really like how it sounds.
Here is where it would sound better to start it : [03:28:389] or [03:30:835].
If you chose the one that's later than yours, please add something to fill the void.
Well you wanted to see what I did up till now well here you go.
I'm not done yet, but the plus side is I only have the mapping left to do and I started a little.
I you can call it however you want, just keep my name in it and add my name to the tags.[attachment=0:13bbf]Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily) [Insane].osu[/attachment:13bbf]

Fixing everything, thanks for the mod!
The insane looks pretty awesome atm
15 million, woaah
Just submit it when you think it's ready for modding xD

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-02-04T17:11:18+00:00

okay, I'm not going to mod it, I will only give you the path you should follow for making a good map and improving this one (You need to work on it mostly by yourself if you want to improve a lot at mapping).
I have to say that this map is far from being perfect and contains a lot of bad things, I know it's harsh to hear that, but you have asked me to be your mentor fr improving right ? So don't hate me for this >w<

1st thing, the BPM isn't 98.5 but 197 (yes I know that 98.5 x 2 = 197 so it changes nothing to the map, but with 98.5 BPM the metronome isn't set in a good way). Doubling the BPM means that you need to divide the Slider velocity by 2 tpoo if you want to keep the same slider speed.
It means that you need to use 0.70 in "Lucid Dreaming" and "Sweet Dreams and 0.90x in "Sleep Disturbance". However such a low Slider velocity is a bad thing (even more in fast songs like this one) because it is in most of the cases very boring it plays very awkwardly.
That's why you should use at least :

1.20x slider velocity in "Lucid dreaming"
1.40x slider velocity in "Sweet Dreams"
1.60x slider velocity in "Sleep Disturbance"

Warning : This means that you will have to redo all your sliders !

Now here are some hints and advices you highly need to follow :

Always use the same spacing, if you have decided to use a value of 1,1x for the distance spacing, use this value always through the difficulty. If you always use a different spacing for all the different patterns, it will be really awkward and senseless.
Of course you can breaks this rule but only in specific cases, firstly for jumps and anti-jumps. I know you know what a jump is, howeve you should always keep in mind that you ought to use jumps only if it is justified by the music, not randomly ! Otherwise it will be awkward.
You can change the spacing if the music becomes slower or faster to keep a good flow. Always keep in mind that when you want to change the spacing you have to be sure that it fits !
Every notes should be visible while playing, it means that neither a circle nor a slider can be hidden by something during the game. (Don't forget that when you are in the editor you don't see some objects there are in the play mode such as hitbursts, spinner-texts, etc..).
It means that you can't do things like this :
SPOILER
In this case the circle is hidden by the track of the slider :

In this case it is unreadble because every notes overlap themselves thus the hitbursts hide the following notes :

In this case you can't see the beginning of (2) :

In this case the reverse arrow is hidden by the hitburst of the circle, so the player can't see it and will not know there are reverses :

Etc.
Keep in mind that you can listen the music smore slowly with the playback rate at the right-bottom of the editor :

With this feature you can listen the music more deeply, in that way you can hear the beats more easily !
Everything should be consistent. It means that if you have mapped a certain part in a certain way, you need to map the parts which are similar to this in the same way. This counts for everything (hitsounds, sliderspeed changes, etc.).

I guess I have pointed the major things here and that you can already works a lot with this (and I'm also lazy to continue to write .__.).
If there is something you haven't understood or if you have more questions, ask me in-game or via forum PM, I'll answer you gladly :3

Good luck ~

poisonedblood

40 posts

Joined June 2010

poisonedblood 2012-03-04T22:35:21+00:00

Here Shoily I'm done my diff~

(I wonder if it shows that I'm procrastinating on my school work orz)
Anyone modding this, I would like to hear your opinion on the slider tick rate. Should I keep it at 2 or change it to 1?
Also I'm not sure if my difficulty settings are ok, anyone modding this would you give me your opinion, although I'll only change this if I get many that say the same thing.

Also I have small mod for Lucid Dreaming :
[00:23:829] the 2 circle should be here instead.
[02:19:261] I don't like how the slider here starts in the middle of a syllable.
You could move the slider so it starts on [02:19:565] and ends on [02:19:870] and add a circle on [02:18:956],
or you could just keep circles on [02:18:956] and [02:19:565].

[03:11:342] The spinner should start here, make it shorter so it still ends on the same spot.

Don't forget to add my username to the tags of all your diffs.

EDIT : I noticed you're now done your normal so I decided to mod it too.
I think your slider tick rates are fine the way they are at 1.
Also when you update your maps, change my slider tick rate to 1, I came to the conclusion that it's better that way.

Mod

Lucid Dreaming
[03:28:393] Maybe start your spinner here instead? You don't have to change if you don't want to though.

Easy Dreaming
[02:11:647] Maybe start your spinner here instead? You don't have to change if you don't want to though.
[02:16:650] Maybe move the 3 circle here instead?
[02:17:129] Maybe move the 4 circle here instead?
[02:31:139] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:32:966] Maybe instead make the slider start here while replacing [02:32:662] with a circle?
[03:17:738], [03:18:347] Maybe add something here, but you don't have to.
If you do, either a slider with a reverse arrow or 2 circles should do.

[03:23:525] - [03:28:702] Everything here is unsnaped,
please snap them to the white tick that comes afterwards for everything here.

Download: Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily) [Poisonedblood's Nightmare].osu

Last edited by poisonedblood 2012-03-07T00:27:39+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-03-06T15:42:08+00:00

Yee thanks so much poison <3 ahaha sorry I kept you from your schoolwork ;w; - I am greatly indebted to you- alright so
Thanks or the mod, the changes were made, also on your diff I increased the circle size and approach rate by 1, hope you don't mind.

Thanks again

I need them hitsound and slider tick mods nao \:D/

EDIT
Thanks for the mod Poison =3= I think you need to get the new version of my map though, because my normal's name is Sweet Dreams XD;;
added all mods except for moving the 3 and 4 circles at [02:16:650]-[02:17:129], because for some reason, it really sounded odd D:

winber1

4,520 posts

Joined February 2010

winber1 2012-03-24T00:18:12+00:00

Poisonblood's

Please AR +1. AR 8 makes absolutely NO SENSE on this map

even AR 9 is a little hard to read. In all honestly even AR 10 could fit. But just use AR 9

For maps like these, you should also be a lot more neat with some stacks too, because stacks that aren't perfectly stacked will make things a lot harder to read some times. like even small stacks such as 00:58:145 (5) - should be stackked more correctly just to be neat.
Also, overlaps like 01:00:074 (1,4,2,5) - just looks weird

00:10:328 (3,4,5) - very hard to read http://puu.sh/m57u is better
00:11:545 (3,4,5) - ^
00:29:819 (4) - http://puu.sh/m59d do this
00:30:429 (6) - would work better if this was one note and 00:30:631 (7) - this slider started at 00:30:530 -
00:33:982 - would be better if you added some note like here http://puu.sh/m5a4
02:09:008 (7,4) - stack more perfectly.
02:11:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - now this part just doesn't make any sense at all. THis part does not use 1/6 tick

Really. this difficulty does have a lot of potential and in fact i had fun playing it, but there are a few places that just feel weird, especially 02:11:648. that part really was like wtf for me.

Sleep Disturbance

You should not use the red ticks (there are very few parts where the red ticks actually fit

for example..

00:09:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please do this http://puu.sh/m5f2
00:11:342 (6,7,8,9,10) - do something similar, the red ticks don't make sense.
00:23:373 (5) - needs to be on 1/3 tick (purple) not red tick!

...and etc..

Also, try to keep your combos a little shorter. Having a new combo every measure works well.

and you probably haven't finished the rest so yea

Sweet Dreams

00:24:438 - add note with new combo
00:26:570 (4,1) - don't add jumps like this
00:48:804 (5) - new combo
00:50:631 (6) - i know it's not hard to play, but you should not do this in even normal diffs.
01:08:296 (1) - end spinner at 01:10:733 -

01:34:489 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - the spacing is extremely messed up here. please don't do this.
02:02:205 (6,7) - no jumps plz
02:32:357 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:34:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Lucid Dreaming

Try to start the combos either when a there's a new phrase in the vocals or every beginning of the measure.
00:32:357 (1,2) - combos like these are useless so remove it
00:33:576 (1) - remove combo
00:34:185 (5) - new combo

and etc...

01:08:296 (1) - end spinner at 01:10:733 -

In general the map actually flows pretty well.
However, sometimes like 01:44:845 (1,2) - your notes are off from the music. this particular example is easy to fix and by adding a note at 01:46:063 - it should flow better

01:54:591 - you should map this
02:37:230 (1) - this note is under the slider. Generally you want to avoid this.

good luck~~

poisonedblood

40 posts

Joined June 2010

poisonedblood 2012-03-25T17:02:02+00:00

winber1 wrote:
Poisonblood's

Please AR +1. AR 8 makes absolutely NO SENSE on this map even AR 9 is a little hard to read. In all honestly even AR 10 could fit. But just use AR 9 Changed

For maps like these, you should also be a lot more neat with some stacks too, because stacks that aren't perfectly stacked will make things a lot harder to read some times. like even small stacks such as 00:58:145 (5) - should be stacked more correctly just to be neat. Changed what I managed to see. If you have more examples of places that still need to be fixed do not hesitate to say so.
Also, overlaps like 01:00:074 (1,4,2,5) - just looks weird Changed

00:10:328 (3,4,5) - very hard to read http://puu.sh/m57u is better Changed
00:11:545 (3,4,5) - ^ Changed
00:29:819 (4) - http://puu.sh/m59d do this OK
00:30:429 (6) - would work better if this was one note and 00:30:631 (7) - this slider started at 00:30:530 - Instead I started the slider a bit later on [00:30:733].
00:33:982 - would be better if you added some note like here http://puu.sh/m5a4 Changed but also added a circle too.
02:09:008 (7,4) - stack more perfectly. Changed
02:11:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - now this part just doesn't make any sense at all. This part does not use 1/6 tick Well if you think so I'll change them to sliders and sliders with reverse arrows instead. I'm following what I hear from the solo.

Download: Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily) [Poisonedblood's Nightmare].osu

Santa Claw

97 posts

Joined March 2011

Santa Claw 2012-04-01T19:17:32+00:00

Just pointing something out --
[Sleep Disturbance] (supposed to be hard?) is pretty much a normal with increased approach rate and HP drain rate, except for a few VERY confusing parts that does not go with the music (like Kurai said).
I, as a hard-insane player, can't complete that.
[poisonblood's Nightmare] is so freaking insane that I think no one besides the top 5 can complete.
I think you should fix [Disturbance] or make another diff in between.

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-04-02T15:36:24+00:00

Okay thanks for the mods everybody
exams kept me busy
I'll keep Sleep Disturbance in mind Santa
Thanks Santa,winber and poison XD
-goes off to fix shitton of stuff-

HeatKai

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined April 2010

HeatKai 2012-05-20T08:13:59+00:00

Kurai wrote:
you have asked me to be your mentor fr improving right ? So don't hate me for this >w<

KURAI IS A MENTOR?
SENSEI? D:
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-05-22T07:13:20+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
Kurai wrote:
you have asked me to be your mentor fr improving right ? So don't hate me for this >w<
KURAI IS A MENTOR?
SENSEI? D:
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

ROFL
Do you want to be called Sensei too HeatKai?
Or do you want to be called Mapping master?
~~Or Pokemon Master~~

HeatKai

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined April 2010

HeatKai 2012-05-23T16:24:05+00:00

Shoily wrote:
ROFL
Do you want to be called Sensei too HeatKai?
Or do you want to be called Mapping master?
~~Or Pokemon Master~~

inb4 I think Kurai and I wanted to be called as Pokemon Master LOL

Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2012-05-23T16:25:00+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
Shoily wrote:
ROFL
Do you want to be called Sensei too HeatKai?
Or do you want to be called Mapping master?
~~Or Pokemon Master~~
inb4 I think Kurai and I wanted to be called as Pokemon Master LOL

I AM a pokemon master baka !

xiceyx

95 posts

Joined June 2011

xiceyx 2012-06-15T13:11:08+00:00

Awesome map!!! Good timing , nice skin and everything! Great job

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-07-08T15:05:33+00:00

Kurai wrote:
I AM a pokemon master baka !

Okay you are both masters rofl

xiceyx wrote:
Awesome map!!! Good timing , nice skin and everything! Great job

Thanks so much for the great compliment ; v ;

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-09-28T11:49:08+00:00

Bump

Can I please get a mod

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2012-09-29T21:57:36+00:00

HI ^^ m4m Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

AIBat v3.0
Missing Skin Files
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

skin

Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
The map has skin with an image file missing, or there's unnecessary files in the song folder.

Missing skin files

When most people use skins, they always miss the fact that skins should not mix incorrectly with the skin a user might have set. This can be very confusing or look ugly. This can be fixed either by adding the missing skin files or forcing a certain skin.

If you wish to use a certain custom object in your beatmap, make sure to use the full set.

The current object sets are as follows:

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Slider:
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png
*Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

*Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

*Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

*Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

*Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

*Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

*Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

*Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

*Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

*Fruits:
fruit-apple.png
fruit-apple-overlay.png
fruit-grapes.png
fruit-grapes-overlay.png
fruit-orange.png
fruit-orange-overlay.png
fruit-pear.png
fruit-pear-overlay.png
fruit-drop.png

All the other skin elements are considered independent from each other.

Unnecessary files

Often when including skin, the mapper includes useless elements to the song folder, such as mod selection icons. The osz package must be as clean as possible, so any unnecessary file needs to be deleted before ranking, regardless of what it might be.

This might be fixed at submission later on, but for now, any file that is in the song folder will be uploaded and included in the .osz file.

Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Lucid Dreaming] : 46735
- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] : 51237
- [Sleep Disturbance] : 46735
- [Sweet Dreams] : 46735

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:382, ends on 01:51:815
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:237, ends on 02:53:734
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:311, ends on 03:11:131
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:195, ends on 03:33:435

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:12:256, ends on 00:22:002
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:240, ends on 01:10:733
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:098, ends on 01:54:489
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:54:591, ends on 02:14:083
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:34:794, ends on 02:54:185
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:54:286, ends on 03:13:779

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:574, ends on 01:52:774
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:449, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:527

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:136, ends on 01:52:089
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:519
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:471, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:357

[Lucid Dreaming]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:928 - snap to 00:21:951
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555
01:20:263 - snap to 01:20:276
01:34:382 - snap to 01:34:388
01:51:815 - snap to 01:51:799
02:24:237 - snap to 02:24:235
02:34:095 - snap to 02:34:083
02:34:237 - snap to 02:34:235
02:53:734 - snap to 02:53:728
02:54:311 - snap to 02:54:286
03:11:131 - snap to 03:11:139
03:33:435 - snap to 03:33:423
Spinner New Combo
03:14:083 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:12:256 (1) - Add a finish.
00:26:875 (1) - Add a finish on the start, remove the finish on repeat #1 (at 00:27:484).
00:30:530 (1) - Add a finish on the start, add a finish on the end.
01:54:591 (1) - Add a finish.

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare]
Spinner New Combo
01:44:135 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Sleep Disturbance]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:892 - snap to 00:21:900
00:31:604 - snap to 00:31:596
00:35:462 - snap to 00:35:454
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555
01:20:170 - snap to 01:20:174
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134
01:34:574 - snap to 01:34:591
01:52:774 - snap to 01:52:763
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:22:583 - snap to 02:22:560
02:32:231 - snap to 02:32:256
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:53:629 - snap to 02:53:626
02:54:449 - snap to 02:54:438
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:527 - snap to 03:33:525

[Sweet Dreams]

Snapping
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:843 - snap to 00:21:850
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555
01:20:032 - snap to 01:20:022
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134
01:35:320 - snap to 01:35:301
01:37:092 - snap to 01:37:078
01:52:089 - snap to 01:52:103
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:00:731 - snap to 02:00:733
02:13:602 - snap to 02:13:626
02:17:565 - snap to 02:17:586
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:299 - snap to 02:33:322
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:34:525 - snap to 02:34:540
02:53:519 - snap to 02:53:525
02:54:471 - snap to 02:54:489
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:357 - snap to 03:33:372
Spinner New Combo
01:54:591 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
I'll recheck
:3

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-09-30T07:10:18+00:00

eLtigreXXx wrote:
HI ^^ m4m Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

AIBat v3.0
Missing Skin Files
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

Inconsistency in combo colours: Fixed
SPOILER
- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

Inconsistency in PreviewTime: Fixed

SPOILER
- [Lucid Dreaming] : 46735
- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] : 51237
- [Sleep Disturbance] : 46735
- [Sweet Dreams] : 46735

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
SPOILER
- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:382, ends on 01:51:815
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:237, ends on 02:53:734
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:311, ends on 03:11:131
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:195, ends on 03:33:435

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] : With new ranking rules or so I've supposedly heard, GD's may have different kiai time...I'm not sure if I will fix this
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:12:256, ends on 00:22:002
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:240, ends on 01:10:733
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:098, ends on 01:54:489
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:54:591, ends on 02:14:083
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:34:794, ends on 02:54:185
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:54:286, ends on 03:13:779

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:574, ends on 01:52:774
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:449, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:527

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:136, ends on 01:52:089
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:519
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:471, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:357

[Lucid Dreaming]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Fixed
SPOILER
00:21:928 - snap to 00:21:951 Fixed
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768 Fixed
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555 Fixed
01:20:263 - snap to 01:20:276 Fixed
01:34:382 - snap to 01:34:388 Fixed
01:51:815 - snap to 01:51:799 Fixed
02:24:237 - snap to 02:24:235 Fixed
02:34:095 - snap to 02:34:083 Fixed
03:11:131 - snap to 03:11:139 Fixed
03:33:435 - snap to 03:33:423 Fixed

Spinner New Combo
03:14:083 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Done
00:12:256 (1) - Add a finish. Done
00:26:875 (1) - Add a finish on the start, remove the finish on repeat #1 (at 00:27:484). Done
00:30:530 (1) - Add a finish on the start, add a finish on the end. Done, not really too sure about how it sounds
01:54:591 (1) - Add a finish. Done

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare]
Spinner New Combo
01:44:135 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Sleep Disturbance]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:892 - snap to 00:21:900
00:31:604 - snap to 00:31:596
00:35:462 - snap to 00:35:454
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555
01:20:170 - snap to 01:20:174
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134
01:34:574 - snap to 01:34:591
01:52:774 - snap to 01:52:763
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:22:583 - snap to 02:22:560
02:32:231 - snap to 02:32:256
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:53:629 - snap to 02:53:626
02:54:449 - snap to 02:54:438
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:527 - snap to 03:33:525

[Sweet Dreams]

Snapping
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:843 - snap to 00:21:850 Fixed
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768 Fixed
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555 Fixed
01:20:032 - snap to 01:20:022 Fixed
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134 Fixed
01:35:320 - snap to 01:35:301 Fixed
01:37:092 - snap to 01:37:078 Fixed
01:52:089 - snap to 01:52:103 Fixed
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:00:731 - snap to 02:00:733
02:13:602 - snap to 02:13:626
02:17:565 - snap to 02:17:586
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:299 - snap to 02:33:322
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:34:525 - snap to 02:34:540
02:53:519 - snap to 02:53:525
02:54:471 - snap to 02:54:489
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:357 - snap to 03:33:372
Spinner New Combo
01:54:591 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
I'll recheck
:3

Brrr.... did the AIMod pick up all that? I'm fixing it slowly...thanks! > u <.

Last edited by jabberwockey 2012-10-04T19:18:02+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Xierra

569 posts

Joined July 2011

Xierra 2012-10-01T09:36:49+00:00

Ahh, Shoily, you're mapping one of Nem's songs?

There's a lot that you still need to learn though, I had times like these too, but I'll tell you through my experience

Here's a bit of quick mod:

General

First, I suggest you to do a nicer re-map especially on Hard (IMO). Change the beat divisor to 1/4, it'll be a bit easier. By such time I know you had learnt something, right?
I seem to think this song is kinda hard for the first timers. I've tried to map myself, but it seems there's a lot of use of 1/8 and 1/4 vocals and beats.

Please change the artist to "Nem" and the singer on tags. I know I hate this, but I had to follow the rules if you want this ranked.

Lucid Dreaming

00:51:241 (1) - Prevent using two repeats on Easy or Normal. Dividing into 2 sliders would be a better idea.
01:58:246 (1) - Somewhat really misleading part. Why not map like this one?
02:03:423 (4) - NC here

Sorry for only one diff (Since I'm just taking a quick look), but I'll be doing the others sometime later.
Honestly I really wanna see this map ranked, the skin itself looks great, really! Good luck!

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-03T13:00:01+00:00

Xierra wrote:
Ahh, Shoily, you're mapping one of Nem's songs?
There's a lot that you still need to learn though, I had times like these too, but I'll tell you through my experience

Hello Xierra! Thanks for your kindness to a newbie like me! It means a lot to me!
Yep! I love Nem, he and reruriri are my favorite producers

Here's a bit of quick mod:

General
First, I suggest you to do a nicer re-map especially on Hard (IMO). Change the beat divisor to 1/4, it'll be a bit easier. By such time I know you had learnt something, right? Change beat divisor on Hard or all diffs?
I seem to think this song is kinda hard for the first timers. I've tried to map myself, but it seems there's a lot of use of 1/8 and 1/4 vocals and beats. I realized much later on that I was stupid to chose a difficult song like this to map as my first one but I'll still try to do my best

Please change the artist to "Nem" and the singer on tags. I know I hate this, but I had to follow the rules if you want this ranked.
I actually already knew this rule for a long time, but I hate it so much I didn't want to change it unless someone pointed it out
But anyways, Fixed

Lucid Dreaming
00:51:241 (1) - Prevent using two repeats on Easy or Normal. Dividing into 2 sliders would be a better idea. Fixed!
01:58:246 (1) - Somewhat really misleading part. Why not map like this one? Sounds much much better, thanks!
02:03:423 (4) - NC here Done!
Sorry for only one diff (Since I'm just taking a quick look), but I'll be doing the others sometime later. Thanks for taking the time!
Honestly I really wanna see this map ranked, the skin itself looks great, really! Good luck! You too! All the best for yours as well > u <

Teru21

746 posts

Joined September 2011

Teru21 2012-10-04T18:15:20+00:00

Hiii xD didn't I say I love to check my friends map x3

Sooo..... there is so many things that need to be change.. xD

[General]
Use Grid lvl 4 please xD (Tiny). It'll make your map neater xD and please note that My mod is using grid lvl 4
hitsound suggestion xD http://puu.sh/1bmZa . copy paste again and rename it normal-hitwhistle. change the audio at the timing tab into C1 (All of it) xD

[Lucid Dreaming]
AR-1?
01:54:591 - kiai time should end here
Lucid as Easy right?
00:12:865 (2) - Spacing.. Should be at x:60 y:88
00:14:083 (2) - ^ x:276 y:88
00:14:692 (1) - ^ x:384 y:116
00:15:302 (2) - ^ x:420 y:220?
00:16:824 - add circle and add whistle? xD
00:18:956 (2) -

352,120,18956,2,0,B|416:136|424:220|336:236,1,160

00:20:175 (1) - alined it with 00:18:347 (1)
00:20:175 (1,2) - Spacing ><
00:20:784 (2,3,4) - avoid making this notes xD change them to Slider reverse? cause it would be hard for beginners xD
00:22:002 (1) - let me teach you how to make these sliders.. xD http://puu.sh/1blTf
00:26:875 (1) - ^
00:30:530 (1) - ^
00:25:657 (1,2,3) - delete and add 2/1 slider
00:34:489 (2) - shouldn't be here OAO;; suggest u to put it 00:33:880
00:40:276 (2,3,4) - Change into slider reverse
00:41:494 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bm4y
00:53:677 (1) - too curved.. loosen it a bit would be good xD
00:56:114 (1,1) - any reason why u put them like this? pattern or what? x3
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this flower pattern xD
01:01:596 (2,1) - ugly sliders.. >< fix them..
01:05:860 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bmbJ
01:25:961 (1) - aline it with (6)
01:28:398 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1bmd5
01:43:626 (1,2,3) - remove (2) to make it more easier
01:41:799 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmjA
01:43:626 (1,3,1) - (1,3) are overlapped with (1) it sure looks messy
01:50:022 (2) - should be at 01:50:631
02:02:814 - feell awkward here ><
and you can fix the other by yourself already xD

[Sweet Dreams]
00:11:342 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmt4
00:13:169 (7) - not symmetrical enough
00:25:352 (1) - remove and add slider from 00:25:048 till 00:25:352
00:31:748 (1) - curve this
00:32:966 (3) - ^
00:40:885 (7) - remove and move 00:39:971 (6) - to 00:40:276
00:50:631 (6) - this is so horrible.. add a soft hitsound here and reduce the volume till 30% . fix the other one too xD
00:53:677 (1,2,3,4) - fix this.. the flower pattern isn't symmetric
01:30:225 (1) - aww... don't be afraid to bent it, http://puu.sh/1bmN5
01:50:631 (6,7,8) - Overlapped ><
02:24:438 (2) - not symmetrical enough..
03:14:692 (2) - why don't you copy paste from (1) OAO

[Sleep Disturbance]
- there is still Ugly sliders (not symmetrical)
- the beat is strange.. so I can't really mod it.. sorry..

Poison's diff is perfect x3

I'll Mod the hitsound after you fix the mods xD

GL xD

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-04T19:19:07+00:00

Teru21 wrote:
Hiii xD didn't I say I love to check my friends map x3 <3333

Sooo..... there is so many things that need to be change.. xD *sigh* I know

[General]
Use Grid lvl 4 please xD (Tiny). It'll make your map neater xD and please note that My mod is using grid lvl 4 Okay
hitsound suggestion xD http://puu.sh/1bmZa . copy paste again and rename it normal-hitwhistle. change the audio at the timing tab into C1 (All of it) xD Sounds cool

[Lucid Dreaming]
AR-1? Not sure
01:54:591 - kiai time should end here Oopss
Lucid as Easy right? Yep
00:12:865 (2) - Spacing.. Should be at x:60 y:88 Done
00:14:083 (2) - ^ x:276 y:88 Done
00:14:692 (1) - ^ x:384 y:116 Done
00:15:302 (2) - ^ x:420 y:220? Done
00:16:824 - add circle and add whistle? xD Done
00:18:956 (2) -
352,120,18956,2,0,B|416:136|424:220|336:236,1,160
Thankies
00:20:175 (1) - alined it with 00:18:347 (1) Done
00:20:175 (1,2) - Spacing >< Don't understand what you mean here
00:20:784 (2,3,4) - avoid making this notes xD change them to Slider reverse? cause it would be hard for beginners xD Played it multiple times with beginners, I think it's easy enough
00:22:002 (1) - let me teach you how to make these sliders.. xD http://puu.sh/1blTf Fixed lolol
00:26:875 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:530 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:657 (1,2,3) - delete and add 2/1 slider
00:34:489 (2) - shouldn't be here OAO;; suggest u to put it 00:33:880 Done
00:40:276 (2,3,4) - Change into slider reverse If you say so
00:41:494 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bm4y Haha fixed
00:53:677 (1) - too curved.. loosen it a bit would be good xD Done
00:56:114 (1,1) - any reason why u put them like this? pattern or what? x3 not really but idk how else to place them
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this flower pattern xD Done
01:01:596 (2,1) - ugly sliders.. >< fix them.. Done
01:05:860 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bmbJ looks okay to me
01:25:961 (1) - aline it with (6) Done
01:28:398 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1bmd5 Done
01:43:626 (1,2,3) - remove (2) to make it more easier hmmm done
01:41:799 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmjA Done
01:43:626 (1,3,1) - (1,3) are overlapped with (1) it sure looks messy Fixed ( I think )
01:50:022 (2) - should be at 01:50:631 instead moved to 01:51:241
02:02:814 - feell awkward here >< I hope it's fixed
and you can fix the other by yourself already xD

[Sweet Dreams]
00:11:342 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmt4 Fixed
00:13:169 (7) - not symmetrical enough Well how am I supposed to fix it
00:25:352 (1) - remove and add slider from 00:25:048 till 00:25:352 Sounds a bit weird, instead I added a hitcircle at 00:25:048
00:31:748 (1) - curve this Done
00:32:966 (3) - ^ ^
00:40:885 (7) - remove and move 00:39:971 (6) - to 00:40:276 why T o T sounds odd to me, let's see if any other mods find it
00:50:631 (6) - this is so horrible.. add a soft hitsound here and reduce the volume till 30% . fix the other one too xD Soft Htsounds really weair hear, just reduced the volume.
00:53:677 (1,2,3,4) - fix this.. the flower pattern isn't symmetric hope it is now
01:30:225 (1) - aww... don't be afraid to bent it, http://puu.sh/1bmN5 Bent it cuz you said so but honestly I thought it was fine
01:50:631 (6,7,8) - Overlapped >< Fixed
02:24:438 (2) - not symmetrical enough.. sseems fine to me, I'll see for other mods
03:14:692 (2) - why don't you copy paste from (1) OAO oops...Done lol

[Sleep Disturbance]
- there is still Ugly sliders (not symmetrical) lol
- the beat is strange.. so I can't really mod it.. sorry.. what

Poison's diff is perfect x3 No diff is perfect imo, but I really hope poison comes online sometime soon

I'll Mod the hitsound after you fix the mods xD Fixed them all

GL xD Thank youuuu~ <3

Fixed everything! Thanks a lot Teru ; w ;[/quote]

Last edited by jabberwockey 2012-10-09T17:00:22+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2012-10-04T19:32:24+00:00

Hi from #modreqs

[General]
Nice Videoquality and finally someone who has no sound under his video xD
- Could you maybe use a huger picture as pause screen? It is really small D:

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare]
- super hard o.o especially ending of 3rd KIAI time. I wanna see someone FC this

00:26:571 (9) - I would prefer a better overlapping/or stacking with 00:26:875 (1) - slider end. looks a bit meh
Maybe this
00:30:429 (2) - X: 128 Y: 316?
00:31:648 (2) - stack under 00:31:343 (1) - sliderend
00:33:880 (4) - maybe a bit hard to see
00:46:367 (1) - one grid to the right
01:03:423 (1) - I think it would look better if the sliderbeginning was stacked somehow with 01:02:713 (5) - sliderend
01:46:368 (4,5) - mmmh not a nice overlap. looks kind of ugly
01:48:500 (3) - X: 156 Y: 180 01:48:804 (4) - X: 396 Y: 180
02:25:962 (5) - X:276 Y: 224 | 02:26:165 (6) - X: 436 Y: 204 | 02:26:266 (1) - X:428 Y: 124 | 02:26:875 (2) - X: 428 Y: 268
02:28:399 (5,6) - overlap with sliders D: try (5) X: 340 Y: 156 (6) X: 500 Y: 160
02:30:835 (5,6) - (5) overlaps again :/ X: 144 Y: 236 (6) X: 304 Y: 216

[Sleep Disturbance]

00:21:088 (1) - Looks kind of bad there, because of 00:20:175 (8) - Maybe put (1) on X: 68 Y: 208 | 00:21:393 (2) - X: 248 Y: 184 and 00:22:002 (3) - on X: 364 Y: 212
looks like this
00:25:149 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This stream has a to huge spacing D:
00:46:368 (1) - slider looks better if the 2nd slider anchor point is on: X: 136 Y: 120
00:47:586 (4) - ^ if you like that copy it and use ctrl + h
00:53:677 (1) - overlap is not so nice with previous slider... i have no suggestion how to fix it though :/
01:39:667 (11) - I would like to see this stacked under sliderbeginning of 01:38:449 (9) -
02:22:967 (1,2,3,4) - would reduce stream spacing to 0,8x
03:30:073 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these feel random D:

If you did previous mod you could call me back so I mod the easier diffs :>

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-07T16:33:22+00:00

bomber34 wrote:
Hi from #modreqs

[General]
Nice Videoquality and finally someone who has no sound under his video xD Haha Thank you very much
- Could you maybe use a huger picture as pause screen? It is really small D: Done! Thanks~

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare] POISON FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE COME ONLINE I WILL GIVE YOU COOKIES
- super hard o.o especially ending of 3rd KIAI time. I wanna see someone FC this Me as well waiting for poison to come online though, ore else I'll have to fix this myself against her wishes
00:26:571 (9) - I would prefer a better overlapping/or stacking with 00:26:875 (1) - slider end. looks a bit meh
Maybe this
00:30:429 (2) - X: 128 Y: 316?
00:31:648 (2) - stack under 00:31:343 (1) - sliderend
00:33:880 (4) - maybe a bit hard to see
00:46:367 (1) - one grid to the right
01:03:423 (1) - I think it would look better if the sliderbeginning was stacked somehow with 01:02:713 (5) - sliderend
01:46:368 (4,5) - mmmh not a nice overlap. looks kind of ugly
01:48:500 (3) - X: 156 Y: 180 01:48:804 (4) - X: 396 Y: 180
02:25:962 (5) - X:276 Y: 224 | 02:26:165 (6) - X: 436 Y: 204 | 02:26:266 (1) - X:428 Y: 124 | 02:26:875 (2) - X: 428 Y: 268
02:28:399 (5,6) - overlap with sliders D: try (5) X: 340 Y: 156 (6) X: 500 Y: 160
02:30:835 (5,6) - (5) overlaps again :/ X: 144 Y: 236 (6) X: 304 Y: 216
[Sleep Disturbance]
00:21:088 (1) - Looks kind of bad there, because of 00:20:175 (8) - Maybe put (1) on X: 68 Y: 208 | 00:21:393 (2) - X: 248 Y: 184 and 00:22:002 (3) - on X: 364 Y: 212 Done, it plays a lot better now but doesn't look the way you capped it
looks like this
00:25:149 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This stream has a to huge spacing D: Hopefully fixed
00:46:368 (1) - slider looks better if the 2nd slider anchor point is on: X: 136 Y: 120 Thank you!
00:47:586 (4) - ^ if you like that copy it and use ctrl + h Done
00:53:677 (1) - overlap is not so nice with previous slider... i have no suggestion how to fix it though :/ I hope I fixed it a little bit
01:39:667 (11) - I would like to see this stacked under sliderbeginning of 01:38:449 (9) - Done
02:22:967 (1,2,3,4) - would reduce stream spacing to 0,8x Done! Really helped
03:30:073 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these feel random D: I hope it's a little better now
[

If you did previous mod you could call me back so I mod the easier diffs :> Thank you soooo much!

Huge Huge thanks for the mod! I really really appreciate it!

Pink Agate

497 posts

Joined September 2011

Pink Agate 2012-10-12T07:24:35+00:00

shoot my star ,good luck

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-12T18:57:20+00:00

Pink Agate wrote:
shoot my star ,good luck

Thank you, you are so kind

Xierra

569 posts

Joined July 2011

Xierra 2012-10-13T16:23:02+00:00

Hey, Len ate one of my stars!

Oh well, I wanted to do that anyways

Oh, your map's getting better and better. Go Shoily!

jabberwockey

396 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-13T16:25:35+00:00

Xierra wrote:
Hey, Len ate one of my stars!
Oh well, I wanted to do that anyways

Oh, your map's getting better and better. Go Shoily!

Everyone's being so nice :' )
I am honored you should say that! Thank you so much for the star!

Kuroneko-sHerald

1,081 posts

Joined August 2008

Kuroneko-sHerald 2012-10-15T14:33:50+00:00

Sorry for late mod

[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb.
You should skin approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png.

[Lucid Dreaming]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ?

[Sweet Dreams]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ?
01:54:591 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.

SPOILER

02:02:205 (6,7) - Spacing. Since you did and anti-jump between 02:01:596 (5) - and 02:02:205 (6) -, it's better to fix the spacing between 02:02:205 (6) - and 02:03:728 (7) -, because Anti jump -> jump on normal=not good.
02:32:357 (4,5,6) - slow section 0.75x here?

That seems more accelerated compared to 02:31:748 (2,3) -, but they have the same rhythm. 1x velocity + spacing fix please.
03:28:398 (1) - remove clap

[Sleep Disturbance]
00:09:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that this is the correct rhythm:

SPOILER

move (2) to 00:09:972 -, shorten (5) so that it ends at 00:11:494 - and move (6,7,8) to 00:11:647 -
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ?

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare]
01:44:135 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.

SPOILER

02:09:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What?

jabberwockey

396 posts

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Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-16T10:01:37+00:00

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
Sorry for late mod

[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb. Fixed
You should skin approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png. Going to do this soon

[Lucid Dreaming]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed

[Sweet Dreams]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed
01:54:591 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.
SPOILER
02:02:205 (6,7) - Spacing. Since you did and anti-jump between 02:01:596 (5) - and 02:02:205 (6) -, it's better to fix the spacing between 02:02:205 (6) - and 02:03:728 (7) -, because Anti jump -> jump on normal=not good. I didn't notice that, sorry! Fixed
02:32:357 (4,5,6) - slow section 0.75x here? That seems more accelerated compared to 02:31:748 (2,3) -, but they have the same rhythm. 1x velocity + spacing fix please. Fixed
03:28:398 (1) - remove clap Done

[Sleep Disturbance]
00:09:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that this is the correct rhythm:
SPOILER
move (2) to 00:09:972 -, shorten (5) so that it ends at 00:11:494 - and move (6,7,8) to 00:11:647 -
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare] Leaving this to poison when shes back
01:44:135 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.
SPOILER
02:09:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What?

Thanks for the mod! Fixed Everything.

Last edited by jabberwockey 2012-10-19T17:36:44+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Kuroneko-sHerald

1,081 posts

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Kuroneko-sHerald 2012-10-17T17:33:04+00:00

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb.

You must remove this since it don't have the same Artist, it's unrankable.
Oh and don't know why but the No Video version has some error. When you try to download it says: This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Maybe it's because of osb?
Anyway, try to update the map again (without osb) and see if the error fixes.

jabberwockey

396 posts

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Topic Starter

jabberwockey 2012-10-18T10:34:48+00:00

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb.
You must remove this since it don't have the same Artist, it's unrankable.
Oh and don't know why but the No Video version has some error. When you try to download it says: This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Maybe it's because of osb?
Anyway, try to update the map again (without osb) and see if the error fixes.

Thanks for pointing this out! I will get to it as soon as possible.

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