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AZUMA HITOMI - Harinezumi (TV Size)

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Piscis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月18日 at 18:32:23

Artist: AZUMA HITOMI
Title: Harinezumi (TV Size)
Source: Fractale
Tags: yamakan clain phryne nessa hidari opening darknessangel
BPM: 128
Filesize: 9384kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. D.N.Angel's Hard (4.7 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Easy (1.71 stars, 69 notes)
  3. Hard (4.8 stars, 166 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 229 notes)
  5. Normal (3.74 stars, 106 notes)
Download: AZUMA HITOMI - Harinezumi (TV Size)
Download: AZUMA HITOMI - Harinezumi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st ranked map~!

フラクタル OP / 吾妻仁美 - ハリネズミ

[Easy] - Done
[Normal] - Done
[Hard] - Done
[D.N.Angel's Hard] by DarknessAngel - Done
[Insane] - Done
banbar
Modding
全体的に枠外にサークルがはみ出てる
これはInsane,HardはいいかもしれないけどNormal,Easyはあまり好まれないです
特に上にライフバーに重なっている場合

[Easy]

00:14:374 (1) - 2の始まりに位置を合わせたほうがいいかも
00:30:777 (2,3) - もう少し綺麗に配置

[Normal]

00:53:039 (2,3) -スライダーの被りは少なくしたほうがいい
01:01:241 (5,6,7) - 1ドット右へ
01:18:114 (7) - new comb.
01:21:394 (10,11,12) - spacing.

[Hard]

AR+1?
00:45:775 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 配置を綺麗に

[Insane]

00:20:701 (8) - 配置
00:33:472 (6,7) - ^
01:08:740 (3) - ^

全体的にいいと思いました
俺がアドバイスできることはほとんどないのでmoddingも意見程度に見てください


________________________
-My Pending Map-
Mizuki Nana - Jyunketsu Paradox (TV Size)
Yasunori Mitsuda - Frog's Theme
-Guest diff-
Hironobu Kageyama - Battle of Omega (Extreme)
Topic Starter
Piscis

banbar wrote:

全体的に枠外にサークルがはみ出てる
これはInsane,HardはいいかもしれないけどNormal,Easyはあまり好まれないです
特に上にライフバーに重なっている場合

[Easy]

00:14:374 (1) - 2の始まりに位置を合わせたほうがいいかも
00:30:777 (2,3) - もう少し綺麗に配置

[Normal]

00:53:039 (2,3) -スライダーの被りは少なくしたほうがいい
01:01:241 (5,6,7) - 1ドット右へ
01:18:114 (7) - new comb.
01:21:394 (10,11,12) - spacing.

[Hard]

AR+1?
00:45:775 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 配置を綺麗に

[Insane]

00:20:701 (8) - 配置
00:33:472 (6,7) - ^
01:08:740 (3) - ^
All fixed~ Thank you :D
What
Hi :D
This is my noob modding orz.


[Easy]
01:23:749 - i think this slider start point is 01:23:631.

[normal]
01:21:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - awkward.. i think 01:21:874 slider's end point 01:22:694 .01:23:163 note move 01:23:045. 01:23:749's slider start point is 01:23:631 end point is not change

[Hard]
good

[insane]
good
Topic Starter
Piscis

What wrote:

Hi :D
This is my noob modding orz.


[Easy]
01:23:749 - i think this slider start point is 01:23:631.

[normal]
01:21:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - awkward.. i think 01:21:874 slider's end point 01:22:694 .01:23:163 note move 01:23:045. 01:23:749's slider start point is 01:23:631 end point is not change

[Hard]
good

[insane]
good
All fixed~
Thanks Modding! :) :)
Aleks719
Hello from #modreqs

General
Your 1st note places at 00:14:374. You don't need in audio lead-in. Set audio lead-in 0 for all diffs.
Set slider tickrate 2 for Easy and Normal
Disable "letterboxes durung breaks" in Insane diff. You don't need in letterboxes since your map contains video.

Insane
00:20:935 (10) - remove clap
00:21:405 - add note, clap, nc here
00:43:436-00:49:999 [T] - soft sections very quiet. Increase volume please? 50-55% would be fine
00:51:874 - unsnapped kiai time
00:56:561 (1) - remove nc
00:58:670 (1) - ^
01:06:873 (2) - 3 timing sections...
1st green line : useless, remove
2nd : it's kiai section. Kiai must be snapped. replace section on the start of slider
3rd: fine... but, imo you can use 50% on the start of slider too.
01:21:874 - unsnapped kiai time, also...
last combo sounds bad. imo, there is 2nd bpm point: bpm 100 offset 81874
fix it for all diffs.
After that, i guess this combo will be sounds better, make like this:
remove finish from the end of spinner, add whistle or leave spinner without hitsounds

Hard
Unsnapped kiai and same thing about soft hitsounds(increase volume)
Same thing about last combo(wrong timing)

Normal
AR+1
00:53:280 (3) - imo,1/2 shorter + 00:54:217 - add note:
But maybe it's hard for Normal, not sure
00:54:920 (7) - remove slider
00:55:155 - add note +clap
01:18:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hum... claps on wrong places here
Unsnapped kiai and same thing about soft hitsounds(increase volume)
Same thing about last combo(wrong timing)

Easy
HP-1, AR+1, OD-1
00:35:000 (3) - remove clap from the start, from the end, add clap to the reverse.
00:50:000 (4) - 2 different speeds on 1 slider, fix it.
01:03:124 (1,2,3) - add 3 whistles to the start of sliders
01:06:874 (1) - 3 timing sections as in Insane
01:10:624 (1,2,3) - add 3 whistles to the start of sliders
01:15:312 (1) - add whistle to the reverse, to the end
01:16:717 (2) - ^
01:18:125 (1) - add whistle to the start
01:21:874 (1,2,3,1) - same thing about combo (wrong timing)
Recheck kiai and soft hitsounds too

That's all :)
Topic Starter
Piscis

Aleks719 wrote:

Hello from #modreqs

General
Your 1st note places at 00:14:374. You don't need in audio lead-in. Set audio lead-in 0 for all diffs.
Set slider tickrate 2 for Easy and Normal
Disable "letterboxes durung breaks" in Insane diff. You don't need in letterboxes since your map contains video.

Insane
00:20:935 (10) - remove clap
00:21:405 - add note, clap, nc here
00:43:436-00:49:999 [T] - soft sections very quiet. Increase volume please? 50-55% would be fine
00:51:874 - unsnapped kiai time
00:56:561 (1) - remove nc
00:58:670 (1) - ^
01:06:873 (2) - 3 timing sections...
1st green line : useless, remove
2nd : it's kiai section. Kiai must be snapped. replace section on the start of slider
3rd: fine... but, imo you can use 50% on the start of slider too.
01:21:874 - unsnapped kiai time, also...
last combo sounds bad. imo, there is 2nd bpm point: bpm 100 offset 81874
fix it for all diffs.
After that, i guess this combo will be sounds better, make like this:
remove finish from the end of spinner, add whistle or leave spinner without hitsounds

Hard
Unsnapped kiai and same thing about soft hitsounds(increase volume)
Same thing about last combo(wrong timing)

Normal
AR+1
00:53:280 (3) - imo,1/2 shorter + 00:54:217 - add note:
But maybe it's hard for Normal, not sure
00:54:920 (7) - remove slider
00:55:155 - add note +clap
01:18:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hum... claps on wrong places here
Unsnapped kiai and same thing about soft hitsounds(increase volume)
Same thing about last combo(wrong timing)

Easy
HP-1, AR+1, OD-1
00:35:000 (3) - remove clap from the start, from the end, add clap to the reverse.
00:50:000 (4) - 2 different speeds on 1 slider, fix it.
01:03:124 (1,2,3) - add 3 whistles to the start of sliders
01:06:874 (1) - 3 timing sections as in Insane
01:10:624 (1,2,3) - add 3 whistles to the start of sliders
01:15:312 (1) - add whistle to the reverse, to the end
01:16:717 (2) - ^
01:18:125 (1) - add whistle to the start
01:21:874 (1,2,3,1) - same thing about combo (wrong timing)
Recheck kiai and soft hitsounds too

That's all :)
All fixed~ :)
Thank you modding~ :!:
Aleks719
Fast recheck
I'm not sure in my 2nd bpm(it maybe 98 :S ), ask somebody if it possible

Insane
01:10:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -
Your rhythm :

I'm suggesting to make :

also:
01:21:874 (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:23:074 (3) - add whistle
01:23:674 (4) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]:
01:06:874 - i guess you wanted to make 2nd fountain here, so add timing point without kiai time here : 01:06:756. It disable your kiai and next timing point (01:06:874) will start with fountain.
01:24:574 - remove this timing point with 0.5x

Hard
01:01:952 (7) - try this, maybe will be better?
also:
01:21:874 (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:23:074 (3) - add whistle
01:23:674 (4) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674

[T]:
00:51:874 (1) - kiai time unsnapped as before :(
01:06:874 - i guess you wanted to make 2nd fountain here, so add timing point without kiai time here : 01:06:756. It disable your kiai and next timing point (01:06:874) will start with fountain.
01:24:574 - useless timing point

Normal
01:21:874 (1) - add whistle to the start
01:23:074 (2) - add whistle
01:23:674 (3) - add whistle to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]: Same as in another diffs

Easy
01:22:811 (2) - unsnapped slider, it must be at 01:22:774. This pattern is harder than in normal.
I suggest make this:
^ if you agree, then (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end, (2) - whistle to the end.
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]: Same as in another diffs

Good luck, pretty nice song, you have deserved a star :P
Topic Starter
Piscis

Aleks719 wrote:

Fast recheck
I'm not sure in my 2nd bpm(it maybe 98 :S ), ask somebody if it possible

Insane
01:10:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -
Your rhythm :

I'm suggesting to make :

also:
01:21:874 (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:23:074 (3) - add whistle
01:23:674 (4) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]:
01:06:874 - i guess you wanted to make 2nd fountain here, so add timing point without kiai time here : 01:06:756. It disable your kiai and next timing point (01:06:874) will start with fountain.
01:24:574 - remove this timing point with 0.5x

Hard
01:01:952 (7) - try this, maybe will be better?
also:
01:21:874 (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:23:074 (3) - add whistle
01:23:674 (4) - add whistles to the start, to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674

[T]:
00:51:874 (1) - kiai time unsnapped as before :(
01:06:874 - i guess you wanted to make 2nd fountain here, so add timing point without kiai time here : 01:06:756. It disable your kiai and next timing point (01:06:874) will start with fountain.
01:24:574 - useless timing point

Normal
01:21:874 (1) - add whistle to the start
01:23:074 (2) - add whistle
01:23:674 (3) - add whistle to the end
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]: Same as in another diffs

Easy
01:22:811 (2) - unsnapped slider, it must be at 01:22:774. This pattern is harder than in normal.
I suggest make this:
^ if you agree, then (1) - add whistles to the start, to the end, (2) - whistle to the end.
01:24:574 (1) - imo, end of this spinner must be at 01:26:674
[T]: Same as in another diffs

Good luck, pretty nice song, you have deserved a star :P
Thanks for star and modding :) :) All fixed~XD
Dino99
Hello :D

Easy

00:14:374 (1) - finish?

00:29:374 (1) - ^

00:44:374 (1) - ^

00:47:186 (1) - Remove NC

00:48:124 (3) - NC

00:51:875 (1) - finish?

00:59:374 (5) - NC

00:59:842 (1) - Remove NC

01:06:874 (1) - finish?

01:14:374 (5) - NC

01:15:312 (1) - Remove NC

Normal


From 1:18:124 to 1:21:405 like this?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156419

Hard

00:58:906 (6) - grid down 1

01:20:702 - (x) - Add a note?

Insane

01:21:720 - (x) - Add a note?

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

All finish hitsound like Easy~

Good :D

Sorry for my poor English~ :) :D

Good Luck!!
Topic Starter
Piscis

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hello :D

Easy

00:14:374 (1) - finish?

00:29:374 (1) - ^

00:44:374 (1) - ^

00:47:186 (1) - Remove NC

00:48:124 (3) - NC

00:51:875 (1) - finish?

00:59:374 (5) - NC

00:59:842 (1) - Remove NC

01:06:874 (1) - finish?

01:14:374 (5) - NC

01:15:312 (1) - Remove NC

Normal


From 1:18:124 to 1:21:405 like this?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156419

Hard

00:58:906 (6) - grid down 1

01:20:702 - (x) - Add a note?

Insane

01:21:720 - (x) - Add a note?

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

All finish hitsound like Easy~

Good :D

Sorry for my poor English~ :) :D

Good Luck!!
Thanks modding :) All fixed :!:
Sonico Makaron
Hello from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:25:624 (4) - remove whistle
00:26:092 (5) - remove shitle and finish add clap
00:34:061 (2) - remove finish?
00:54:687 (4) - ^
00:55:624 (1) - add finish?
00:56:561 (2) - ^?
00:57:499 (3) - ^?
00:58:436 (4) - remove finish
01:03:124 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
01:04:061 (2) - ^
01:04:999 (3) - ^
01:05:936 (4) - remove finish
01:07:811 (2) - ^
01:08:749 (3) - add finish?
01:09:686 (4) - remove finish
01:10:624 (1,2,3) - remove whistle,add finish?
01:13:436 (4) - remove finish
01:14:375 (1) - add finish
01:15:312 (2) - remove whistle, add finish
01:16:717 (3) - ^
01:18:125 (1) - remove whistle
01:19:999 (3) - 2 grid down

[Normal]
00:20:701 (4,5) - 1grid left
00:25:624 (2,3) - remove whistle
00:26:092 (4) - remove whistle and finish, add clap
00:35:467 (4,5) - remove whistle
00:53:280 (3) - remove clap end slider
00:54:217 (4) - add clap
00:55:623 (1) - add finish
00:56:560 (2) - ^
00:57:498 (3) - ^
00:58:436 (4) - remove whistle
00:58:905 (5) - remove whistle, add clap
00:59:373 (1) - add finish
01:02:654 (7) - remove finish
01:03:124 (1) - add finish
01:04:061 (2) - ^
01:04:999 (3) - ^
01:09:686 (6) - remove whistle
01:10:155 (7) - ^
01:10:624 (1) - add finish?
01:11:561 (2) - ^?
01:12:500 (3) - ^?
01:13:437 (4,5) - remove whistle
01:13:905 (6) - remove whistle and finish
01:14:375 (7) - add finish
01:17:420 (5) - remove whistle
01:17:655 (6) - remove whistle and finish, add clap
01:21:171 (6) - remove whistle
01:21:405 (7) - remove whistle and finish, add clap

[Hard]
00:25:624 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:858 (2) - ^
00:25:858 (2) - remove finish,whistle and add clap
00:30:312 (3) - 2 grid down
00:30:546 (4) - 2 grid right
00:47:656 (5) - remove clap
00:56:795 (4) - remove finish
00:59:374 (1) - ^
01:03:358 (1) - ^ and 2 grid up
01:03:827 (3) - 1 grid right
01:04:061 (4) - 3 grid up and 1 grid right
01:04:764 (1) - remove finish and 1 grid up
01:05:233 (3) - 1 grid up
01:06:405 (7) - remove finish, add clap
01:12:734 (3) - remove whistle
01:13:202 (4) - ^
01:13:671 (5) - ^
01:14:140 (6) - ^
01:16:250 (2) - add finish
01:17:656 (6) - remove finish, add clap
01:21:405 (11) - ^

Good song, good luck :3
Topic Starter
Piscis

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

Hello from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:25:624 (4) - remove whistle
00:26:092 (5) - remove shitle and finish add clap
00:34:061 (2) - remove finish?
00:54:687 (4) - ^
00:55:624 (1) - add finish?
00:56:561 (2) - ^?
00:57:499 (3) - ^?
00:58:436 (4) - remove finish
01:03:124 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
01:04:061 (2) - ^
01:04:999 (3) - ^
01:05:936 (4) - remove finish
01:07:811 (2) - ^
01:08:749 (3) - add finish?
01:09:686 (4) - remove finish
01:10:624 (1,2,3) - remove whistle,add finish?
01:13:436 (4) - remove finish
01:14:375 (1) - add finish
01:15:312 (2) - remove whistle, add finish
01:16:717 (3) - ^
01:18:125 (1) - remove whistle
01:19:999 (3) - 2 grid down

[Normal]
00:20:701 (4,5) - 1grid left
00:25:624 (2,3) - remove whistle
00:26:092 (4) - remove whistle and finish, add clap
00:35:467 (4,5) - remove whistle
00:53:280 (3) - remove clap end slider
00:54:217 (4) - add clap
00:55:623 (1) - add finish
00:56:560 (2) - ^
00:57:498 (3) - ^
00:58:436 (4) - remove whistle
00:58:905 (5) - remove whistle, add clap
00:59:373 (1) - add finish
01:02:654 (7) - remove finish
01:03:124 (1) - add finish
01:04:061 (2) - ^
01:04:999 (3) - ^
01:09:686 (6) - remove whistle
01:10:155 (7) - ^
01:10:624 (1) - add finish?
01:11:561 (2) - ^?
01:12:500 (3) - ^?
01:13:437 (4,5) - remove whistle
01:13:905 (6) - remove whistle and finish
01:14:375 (7) - add finish
01:17:420 (5) - remove whistle
01:17:655 (6) - remove whistle and finish, add clap
01:21:171 (6) - remove whistle
01:21:405 (7) - remove whistle and finish, add clap

[Hard]
00:25:624 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:858 (2) - ^
00:25:858 (2) - remove finish,whistle and add clap
00:30:312 (3) - 2 grid down
00:30:546 (4) - 2 grid right
00:47:656 (5) - remove clap
00:56:795 (4) - remove finish
00:59:374 (1) - ^
01:03:358 (1) - ^ and 2 grid up
01:03:827 (3) - 1 grid right
01:04:061 (4) - 3 grid up and 1 grid right
01:04:764 (1) - remove finish and 1 grid up
01:05:233 (3) - 1 grid up
01:06:405 (7) - remove finish, add clap
01:12:734 (3) - remove whistle
01:13:202 (4) - ^
01:13:671 (5) - ^
01:14:140 (6) - ^
01:16:250 (2) - add finish
01:17:656 (6) - remove finish, add clap
01:21:405 (11) - ^

Good song, good luck :3
Thank you modding! :idea:
terametis
mod初心者なので配置の気になったところだけmodします
気に入らなければスルーしてください!

[General]
GridLv3以下で作るときはスライダーの終点をなるべくサークルの真ん中に置くようにするとDSが崩れにくくなります。
崩れるといってもx-0.05~x0.05の範囲なので気にする場合には!

[Easy]
00:18:592 (1)~(3)   DS 適当に前後を手直ししてx1.2に揃えた方が良いと思います
00:33:592 (1)~(2)   同上
00:52:811 (2)      1grid右?
01:06:874 (1)      始点そのままで中点(304,48),終点(352,72)にするとスムーズになります
01:07:811 (2)      上の修正をする場合1grid下

[Hard]
00:23:514 (1)~(2)   最高難易度以外でスライダーのレールに重なる配置は注意されることが多いです
Topic Starter
Piscis

terametis wrote:

mod初心者なので配置の気になったところだけmodします
気に入らなければスルーしてください!

[General]
GridLv3以下で作るときはスライダーの終点をなるべくサークルの真ん中に置くようにするとDSが崩れにくくなります。
崩れるといってもx-0.05~x0.05の範囲なので気にする場合には!

[Easy]
00:18:592 (1)~(3)   DS 適当に前後を手直ししてx1.2に揃えた方が良いと思います
00:33:592 (1)~(2)   同上
00:52:811 (2)      1grid右?
01:06:874 (1)      始点そのままで中点(304,48),終点(352,72)にするとスムーズになります
01:07:811 (2)      上の修正をする場合1grid下

[Hard]
00:23:514 (1)~(2)   最高難易度以外でスライダーのレールに重なる配置は注意されることが多いです
ありがとうございます ;) 全てなおしました!
Priestess_old
start~..

*it's all my suggestion :3


- easy -

00:17:186 (3) - delete and add a circle at 00:17:655 -
00:18:124 (1) - delete
00:22:812 (2) - remove to other space
00:59:842 (2) - reduce all return arrow and add other one


- norma l-

00:23:280 (4) - reduce all return arrow
00:24:217 - add slider
00:29:374 (1) - reduce slider length for 00:29:842 - and add clab to the end
00:40:624 (1,2) - ^




- hard -

00:56:561 (3) - delete and add slider for 00:57:030 -
00:57:264 - add a circle

- insane -

00:20:115 (5) - delete slider and add 2 circle
00:33:124 (5,6,7) - delete and add 5 circle
00:47:890 (1) - delete and add a cirlce and a short slider
00:53:983 (8) - reduce returen arrow for 00:54:334 -
01:17:420 (5) - ^ for 01:17:889 -


Good luck~!!
Topic Starter
Piscis

Priestess wrote:

start~..

*it's all my suggestion :3


- easy - 

00:17:186 (3) - delete and add a circle at 00:17:655 - done
00:18:124 (1) - delete done
00:22:812 (2) - remove to other space done
00:59:842 (2) - reduce all return arrow and add other one done


- norma l-

00:23:280 (4) - reduce all return arrow done
00:24:217 - add slider done
00:29:374 (1) - reduce slider length for 00:29:842 - and add clab to the end done
00:40:624 (1,2) - ^ done




- hard -

00:56:561 (3) - delete and add slider for 00:57:030 - done
00:57:264 - add a circle done

- insane -

00:20:115 (5) - delete slider and add 2 circle done
00:33:124 (5,6,7) - delete and add 5 circle done
00:47:890 (1) - delete and add a cirlce and a short slider done
00:53:983 (8) - reduce returen arrow for 00:54:334 - Not
01:17:420 (5) - ^ for 01:17:889 - Not


Good luck~!!
Thanks modding~ ;)
eg91022a71w
参考程度にしてくれれば結構です。


-General-
slidertickのボリュームを少し絞ったほうがいいかも知れません。


-hard-
00:43:436 
直前のスライダーが同じ長さで、曲調も大きく変わっているわけではないので、対応が難しいです。
0.5にするなら、ここのスライダーをサークル2つにするなどしてワンクッションおいたほうがいいかも。

00:58:905
スライダーの終点は00:59:139でいいのでは

01:12:733~01:14:374
ここの連続スライダーの始点がメロディーの裏になっているのが気になります。
01:12:733にサークルを置くか、スライダーを一回返すかして合わせてみてはどうでしょう。


-insane-
00:51:874、00:52:842
ここだけリズムが跳ねているのは不自然だと思います。

01:03:358、01:03:857
ここもメロディーの裏になっていますね。
配置のデザイン的にいじるのは難しいかも知れませんが・・・。

01:08:280
ここでnew comboにしたほうがいいのでは。

01:10:624
ここでnew comboにしたほうがいいのでは。見た目にもわかりやすくなります。
Topic Starter
Piscis

eg91022a71w wrote:

参考程度にしてくれれば結構です。


-General-
slidertickのボリュームを少し絞ったほうがいいかも知れません。 -3dBさげました


-hard-
00:43:436 
直前のスライダーが同じ長さで、曲調も大きく変わっているわけではないので、対応が難しいです。
0.5にするなら、ここのスライダーをサークル2つにするなどしてワンクッションおいたほうがいいかも。 サークル3つ起きました

00:58:905
スライダーの終点は00:59:139でいいのでは 修正しました

01:12:733~01:14:374
ここの連続スライダーの始点がメロディーの裏になっているのが気になります。
01:12:733にサークルを置くか、スライダーを一回返すかして合わせてみてはどうでしょう。 このままで


-insane-
00:51:874、00:52:842
ここだけリズムが跳ねているのは不自然だと思います。 4つのサークルを2つにまとめて置きました

01:03:358、01:03:857
ここもメロディーの裏になっていますね。
配置のデザイン的にいじるのは難しいかも知れませんが・・・。 このままで

01:08:280
ここでnew comboにしたほうがいいのでは。 修正しました

01:10:624
ここでnew comboにしたほうがいいのでは。見た目にもわかりやすくなります。 修正しました
moddingありがとうございました! ;)
Shiro
こんいちは~
Request taken from #modreqs.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game. :)

General
  1. Timing is wrong. Try this:
    1. offset 06874 || BPM 128,000
    2. offset 81894 || BPM 098,000
    3. offset 83665 || BPM 088,000
Easy
  1. The spacing is really high for an Easy, you might want to reduce it a bit to make the diff a bit easier.
  2. 00:43:436 - I think you should avoid that kind of harsh slow down (or harsh speed ups as well) in an Easy or Normal diff. Slow downs are rather confusing because they're not always readable and change the spacing and slider speed, which will throw new players off. I see why you are using a slow down, but I'd recommend to use 0,7x or 0,8x, not 0,5x. Also, for the sake of consistency, move this section to 00:44:374 - so the slow down starts where it's supposed to start.
Normal
  1. This is a bit hard for a Normal, due to all the 1/2 there is, especially in pattern mixing circles and 1/2 sliders which are confusing. Try reducing the amount of 1/2 to make the difficulty easier.
  2. Same comment as in Easy regarding the slow down.
Hard
  1. I don't have much to say about this. I just think you should have tried to map more to the vocals than to the beat, because the diff currently is merely 1/2 all long, and it is not very appealing rhythm-wise.
  2. 00:36:874 (1) - When the approach circle for this beat appears, the video has blue on this part of the screen, which makes the approach circle invisible. You'll have to either colourhax this, either change this pattern's placement.
Insane
  • Pretty much the same comment as for Hard, except you added unfitting 1/4s in this one.
  1. 01:04:999 (7,1) - Extremely surprising jump, consider everything was regularly spaced before, and that nothing in the song really warrants a jump.
The map needs some work on the rhythms, I think. It's playable as is, but would much more enjoyable with new rhythms !
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