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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 19, 2017 at 1:15:26 PM

Artist: Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen
Title: Junjou Emotional
Source: 異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
Tags: Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni. In a Different World with a Smartphone. ending tv size production reed gaia uchida maaya kouno marika fukuo yui uesaka sumire akasaki chinatsu yamashita nanami
BPM: 148
Filesize: 11245kb
Play Time: 01:27
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Download: Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen - Junjou Emotional
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#54 異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
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エルゼ、リンゼ、八重、ユミナ、スゥシィ、リーン

-- 純情エモーショナル --


also an end card provided by best waifu in the series :d
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hard - Gaia
video encoding - Shad0w1and
Last edited by Momochikun on , edited 21 times in total.
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artist from offical web video

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エルゼ (CV.内田真礼) & リンゼ (CV.福緒唯) should be correct i think w
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thanks !
also added video :3
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m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn,
mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323


normal
perfect


gaia's hard
00:20:064 (1) - this jump is too high imo
01:12:361 (2,3) - slider 3 should be ds'd in 1.3x instead of 1.4x to keep consistency with 01:02:632 (2,3) -
01:27:767 (6,7) - maybe use high ds?


insane
00:21:483 (1) - what about stack the tail with 00:21:077 (4) - ?
01:08:307 (1) - remove nc, no need

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3
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Hi ~
Well... it's a bit tough to mod map like yours. It's nearly perfect. I'll still point out some things that bother me.


Insane

00:16:415 (2) - Mb place this note here to make it look like some sort of blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8661869

00:20:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part looks a bit dirty.

This part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) and this part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) looks different visually, but rhythmically they are the same. Maybe make them both like 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

00:37:091 (5,6) and 00:38:713 (5,6) - ^ same. Tbh it's not even a serious problem, I'm just trying to find at least something :(

01:06:280 (5) - this slider bothers me a bit. Wave, curve or line would fit better

01:09:422 (4,5) - Mb just stack them ?

01:16:618 (1) - Also weird slider. There a lot various sliders in your Insane diff, I wonder if that variety is really needed since they don't represent anything special like wub's in technical maps.

Most of this are mine concerns about map's visuals, because everything else's fine.

I wanted to mod Gaia's Hard and Normal as well, but I can't find anything in them to mod, sry.
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M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms

Insane:
00:15:011 (1,2,3) - easy to missread the rhythm. Would be much more intuitive if the kicksliders moved in the direction of the long slider. I would also reduce the spacing slightly
00:29:403 (3,4,5) - could blanket with 00:28:998 (1) -
00:37:106 (5,6) - and 00:38:728 (5,6) - should have at least similar spacing
00:40:957 (1) - You could make the slider 1/2 and add a circle on the red tick. Emphasises the drum beat more than a sliderend and you map the piano on the white tick with it
01:13:390 (1,3) - i think this overlap doesn't look too good
01:19:268 (4,5,6,7,1) - a bit strange stream shape, not very fitting with anime song imo

Hard:
00:13:172 (8,1) - why is this stacked?
00:13:983 (3) - I would really like the red tick to be clickable

Normal:
00:33:037 (1,2,3,4) - you could continue the vocals focus and do the rhythm like this

That's all. gl
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mod (what is the anime)


general
check widescreen, video is enabled


hard

01:01:415 (7) - why is this spaced farther away from 01:01:010 (6) - instead of 01:02:023 (1) - . i would close the spacing between 6 and 7 for better downbeat emphasis on 01:02:023 (1) -

01:07:902 (6,1) - this might be confusing for players to read because of the perfect overlap

01:09:118 (2) - this is too curved for a proper blanket, loosen up the curve on this pls

01:16:618 (6,8) - these would player better if slider 6 was flipped around 15-20 degrees and 01:17:429 (8) - was ctrl h'd


insane
00:17:429 (2,3) - i would rotate each one by 180 degrees for it to look nicer

00:32:226 (3,4,5) - this should be the same as 00:30:604 (3,4) - (or the other way around) since they are both the same sound

00:47:429 (1,2) - if you flipped each one by 15 degrees, it would play much better

00:53:307 (3) - 180 degree flip?

00:59:692 (3,4) - this is the only double that isn't between sliders. i would make 4 a 1/2 slider, or make 00:59:388 (2) - a 1/2.

that's all i have for this map, it's pretty neat

good luck!
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m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn,
mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323


gaia's hard
00:20:064 (1) - this jump is too high imo seems fitting to me tho
01:12:361 (2,3) - slider 3 should be ds'd in 1.3x instead of 1.4x to keep consistency with 01:02:632 (2,3) -
01:27:767 (6,7) - maybe use high ds?

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3


hohol454
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M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms

Hard:
00:13:172 (8,1) - why is this stacked? uhh i might change this in the future, ill keep for now tho
00:13:983 (3) - I would really like the red tick to be clickable i kinda like it

That's all. gl


Einja
Einja wrote:
mod (what is the anime) isekai smartphone


hard

01:01:415 (7) - why is this spaced farther away from 01:01:010 (6) - instead of 01:02:023 (1) - . i would close the spacing between 6 and 7 for better downbeat emphasis on 01:02:023 (1) -

01:07:902 (6,1) - this might be confusing for players to read because of the perfect overlap the circle before is perrfectly stacked too, should be fine

01:09:118 (2) - this is too curved for a proper blanket, loosen up the curve on this pls

01:16:618 (6,8) - these would player better if slider 6 was flipped around 15-20 degrees and 01:17:429 (8) - was ctrl h'd i like this small flow break

good luck!


thx for mod! no reply are fixed
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Title:Junjou Emotional
TitleUnicode:純情エモーショナル
Artist:Elze (CV. Uchida Maaya) & Linze (CV. Fukuo Yui)
ArtistUnicode:エルゼ (CV.内田真礼) & リンゼ (CV.福緒唯)
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
Tags:Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni.  In a Different World with a Smartphone. ending tv size production reed  gaia
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M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms would get confirmation about this

Insane:
00:15:011 (1,2,3) - easy to missread the rhythm. Would be much more intuitive if the kicksliders moved in the direction of the long slider. I would also reduce the spacing slightly nah both worked fine
00:29:403 (3,4,5) - could blanket with 00:28:998 (1) - i dont intend blanket here
00:37:106 (5,6) - and 00:38:728 (5,6) - should have at least similar spacing
00:40:957 (1) - You could make the slider 1/2 and add a circle on the red tick. Emphasises the drum beat more than a sliderend and you map the piano on the white tick with it nope
01:13:390 (1,3) - i think this overlap doesn't look too good
01:19:268 (4,5,6,7,1) - a bit strange stream shape, not very fitting with anime song imo


Normal:
00:33:037 (1,2,3,4) - you could continue the vocals focus and do the rhythm like this

That's all. gl


Einja wrote:
mod (what is the anime)


general
check widescreen, video is enabled fixed



insane
00:17:429 (2,3) - i would rotate each one by 180 degrees for it to look nicer nah i like it this way

00:32:226 (3,4,5) - this should be the same as 00:30:604 (3,4) - (or the other way around) since they are both the same sound nope

00:47:429 (1,2) - if you flipped each one by 15 degrees, it would play much better yea tbh

00:53:307 (3) - 180 degree flip?

00:59:692 (3,4) - this is the only double that isn't between sliders. i would make 4 a 1/2 slider, or make 00:59:388 (2) - a 1/2. idk its fine imo,
i did doubled too 01:09:422 (4,5) - , fine with sliders


that's all i have for this map, it's pretty neat

good luck!


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m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn,
mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323



insane
00:21:483 (1) - what about stack the tail with 00:21:077 (4) - ? nope, for the sliderbody enough
01:08:307 (1) - remove nc, no need for kiai reset

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3


871 wrote:
Hi ~
Well... it's a bit tough to mod map like yours. It's nearly perfect. I'll still point out some things that bother me.


Insane

00:16:415 (2) - Mb place this note here to make it look like some sort of blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8661869 i dont intend blanket here tbh

00:20:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part looks a bit dirty.

This part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) and this part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) looks different visually, but rhythmically they are the same. Maybe make them both like 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

00:37:091 (5,6) and 00:38:713 (5,6) - ^ same. Tbh it's not even a serious problem, I'm just trying to find at least something :(

01:06:280 (5) - this slider bothers me a bit. Wave, curve or line would fit better

01:09:422 (4,5) - Mb just stack them ? nah

01:16:618 (1) - Also weird slider. There a lot various sliders in your Insane diff, I wonder if that variety is really needed since they don't represent anything special like wub's in technical maps.

Most of this are mine concerns about map's visuals, because everything else's fine.

I wanted to mod Gaia's Hard and Normal as well, but I can't find anything in them to mod, sry.


thanks for modding ~
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i got slapped 30 times to mars before i got this answer :'3
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no kd if no change, glglgl!!
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although the song is focused on linze as you can see the whole verse is sung by her, actually i wanted to use the Elze (CV. Uchida Maaya) only on the artist field. But since it's obligated to list all the artists so i'd prefer to use the character name instead of all the voice actresses name (which is way too long) just like the video and the official artist web, i'll add the rest of VA on the tags later

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insane
  • 00:52:902 (2,3) - spacing can cause some misreads imo, why not try a spacing a bit as 00:55:132 (3,1) - o: i wanted to make this one had less spacing because of the slowdown from (2)
  • so cool, so pro ty :DD


normal

no kd if no change, glglgl!!


probably gaia will change smth so i'd prefer to kd u xDDD

thanks !
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ill use frostings style xd


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  • not inserted video only Normal


Normal



Gaia's Hard

  • hp4 is slightly low for hard i guess. why dont you raise to 4.5 or 5?
  • 00:09:118 (7) - i feel it's weird shape a bit. i prefer to copy & paste 8's slider like the image below
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  • 01:19:861 (1) - why inserted NC here?


Insane

  • 00:22:902 - missing sumpleset:N?
  • 00:55:132 (3) - add NC? cuz sv changes greatly compared with before and after
  • 01:20:672 (1) - i prefer to extend the slider to 01:21:280 - like Gaia's diff since the slider is following background sound(dunno what is sound name ;w;) imo
  • 01:27:969 - add clap? it's a just my preference ><


sry for short mod ;w;
i guess literally neat mapset & song
Good Luck☆
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