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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 15, 2017 at 3:38:07 PM

Artist: R3 Music Box
Title: Imagination
Source: ハイキュー!!
Tags: haikyuu haikyu opening season 1 music box SPYAIR
BPM: 103
Filesize: 4119kb
Play Time: 00:42
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R3 Music Box - Imagination

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Pending on April 13, 2017
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Image Qualified on May 15, 2017 by Benny-


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2017-04-13 11:38 Ascendance: kek
2017-04-13 11:38 Ascendance: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1265708 R3 Music Box - Imagination]
2017-04-13 11:38 Ascendance: 40 sec
2017-04-13 11:39 alienflybot: u suk
2017-04-13 11:39 Ascendance: :d
2017-04-13 11:39 alienflybot: teach me polynomials
2017-04-13 11:39 alienflybot: i have calculus exam next week
2017-04-13 11:39 Ascendance: (x+1)(x-1)
2017-04-13 11:39 alienflybot: fuk
2017-04-13 11:40 Ascendance: gey polynomials
2017-04-13 11:40 Ascendance: fuk maths
2017-04-13 11:40 alienflybot: u gey
2017-04-13 11:41 alienflybot: too hard
2017-04-13 11:41 Ascendance: yea
2017-04-13 11:41 alienflybot: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1265708 R3 Music Box - Imagination [Imagination]] <CatchTheBeat> +Hidden
2017-04-13 11:42 alienflybot: shitmap
2017-04-13 11:42 alienflybot: :(
2017-04-13 11:42 Ascendance: wao!111
2017-04-13 11:42 alienflybot: too many big fat jumps
2017-04-13 11:42 alienflybot: nub
2017-04-13 11:42 Ascendance: dt god
2017-04-13 11:42 Ascendance: ur nub
2017-04-13 11:42 Ascendance: its 103 bpm
2017-04-13 11:42 alienflybot: scorev2 god
2017-04-13 11:42 Ascendance: hard to make jumps
2017-04-13 11:43 alienflybot: it is not supposed to have jumps
2017-04-13 11:43 alienflybot: nub
2017-04-13 11:43 Ascendance: platter
2017-04-13 11:43 Ascendance: nub
2017-04-13 11:44 alienflybot: 00:05:328 (4,1) - really need that large ek distance?
2017-04-13 11:44 alienflybot: 00:12:318 (4,1) - 
2017-04-13 11:44 alienflybot: 00:23:386 (3,4,5,1) - this is so ugly
2017-04-13 11:44 alienflybot: with 4,5 stack
2017-04-13 11:44 alienflybot: change the pattern instead if you want to keep hdash
2017-04-13 11:45 alienflybot: 00:31:250 (1,2) - :d
2017-04-13 11:45 alienflybot: use distance like 00:39:697 (3,4) - instead for 31s
2017-04-13 11:46 Ascendance: ye
2017-04-13 11:46 Ascendance: i fix
2017-04-13 11:47 alienflybot: if you reduce distance at 00:19:309 (5,1) - move 00:19:600 (1,2,3,4) - whole thing to right a bit and slant 00:20:474 (2) - to the right 
2017-04-13 11:47 alienflybot: the tail
2017-04-13 11:47 alienflybot: 00:20:474 (2,3,4) - this can be hard
2017-04-13 11:47 alienflybot: seeing from a point of beginners
2017-04-13 11:48 Ascendance: i tilt 00:21:056 (3) -  a bit
2017-04-13 11:48 Ascendance: i tilt 00:20:474 (2) -  too
2017-04-13 11:48 Ascendance: now it's more lenient
2017-04-13 11:49 alienflybot: maybe reduce distance at 00:37:658 (4,5) - 
2017-04-13 11:49 alienflybot: so close to calling a dash here and this part is so dense with dashing
2017-04-13 11:49 Ascendance: what if i ctrl h 00:37:658 (4) - and move to 328
2017-04-13 11:50 alienflybot: ya
2017-04-13 11:50 Ascendance: wew
2017-04-13 11:50 alienflybot: 00:44:649 - add 1/16 hdash stream
2017-04-13 11:51 Ascendance: yes
2017-04-13 11:51 Ascendance: adds pp
2017-04-13 11:51 Ascendance: afb's salad
2017-04-13 11:51 alienflybot: maybe you consider adding some kiai splash
2017-04-13 11:51 alienflybot: so boring
2017-04-13 11:51 alienflybot: add 1 or 2
2017-04-13 11:51 Ascendance: fine :d
2017-04-13 11:51 alienflybot: maybe 00:01:250 - 
2017-04-13 11:52 Ascendance: ill just put them on finishers
2017-04-13 11:52 alienflybot: and 00:19:600 - lul
2017-04-13 11:52 alienflybot: a
2017-04-13 11:52 alienflybot: thats it
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22.18 Ascendance: music box
22.18 Benny-: mmmmhhhhh
22.19 Ascendance: save me
22.26 Benny-: how
22.26 Ascendance: 0 qualified maps
22.26 Benny-: same
22.27 Ascendance: i mod 4 icon
22.27 Benny-: idk how to mod
22.27 Ascendance: its nice and ez
22.27 Benny-: low diffs is what im worst at modding
22.28 Benny-: then mb will pop my bubble cause your salad sucks
22.28 Ascendance: k i teach you
22.28 Ascendance: my salads sucking is actualyl a meme now
22.28 Ascendance: cuz my salads are quite nice recently
22.28 Ascendance: i just hate mapping them
22.28 Benny-: :^(
22.28 Ascendance: have you still not given out an icon
22.28 Benny-: nope
22.28 Benny-: im a late bloomer
22.28 Ascendance: today we change that
22.30 Ascendance: ready
22.30 Benny-: teach me how to mod then
22.31 Ascendance: yea
22.31 Ascendance: it will just happen to be taught on my map :
22.31 Benny-: lmao
22.31 Benny-: okay :^)
22.32 *Ascendance is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1288130 R3 Music Box - Imagination]
22.32 Ascendance: plus the hitsounds suck so u can call me garbage
22.32 Benny-: hey im good at hitsounds
22.32 Ascendance: help me!
22.32 Benny-: sigh
22.32 Benny-: i hate not having supporter
22.33 Benny-: have I ever told you how much I hate music box arrangements
22.33 Benny-: wow that's a lot of hate in two lines
22.33 Ascendance: no
22.33 Ascendance: but now i know
22.33 Ascendance: to never map music box again
22.33 Benny-: yeah it's enough mb is mapping it
22.34 Ascendance: okay ill never do it again
22.34 Ascendance: prmoise
22.36 Benny-: wtf hitsounds
22.36 Ascendance: :)..
22.37 Benny-: why
22.37 Ascendance: i cant hitsoudn
22.37 Benny-: just
22.37 Benny-: eh
22.37 Ascendance: what do i do
22.38 Benny-: like when you choose to not map the downbeat
22.38 Benny-: I'd just put the fucking whistle on the slider head instead of hitsounding the droplet
22.38 Ascendance: yea there's more prominent stuff
22.38 Ascendance: okay
22.39 Benny-: also it conflicts with these notes 00:14:940 (1,2,3) -
22.39 Benny-: which triggers me
22.39 Benny-: cause not consistent
22.39 Ascendance: the notes or the hitsounds?
22.40 Benny-: hitsounds
22.40 Ascendance: oh
22.40 Ascendance: okay I'll redo the hitsounds
22.41 Benny-: but just curious though
22.41 Benny-: why do you put the timing points on the blue ticks
22.41 Benny-: like when hitsounding the droplet
22.42 Ascendance: so that the white tick in the middle gets the droplet sound
22.42 Ascendance: it's a different sampleset
22.42 Benny-: yeah i know
22.42 Benny-: but
22.42 Benny-: there are no other big droplets
22.42 Benny-: and
22.42 Benny-: eh
22.42 Benny-: yeah
22.42 Ascendance: 00:16:105 (2,3) -
22.42 Ascendance: big droplets:d
22.42 Benny-: YES
22.42 Benny-: I KNOW
22.42 Benny-: xD
22.42 Benny-: but
22.43 Benny-: from here00:01:251 -
22.43 Ascendance: I DONT KNOW HOW TO HITSOUND
22.43 Benny-: to here 00:14:940 -
22.43 Benny-: there is literally no ticks
22.43 Benny-: xD
22.43 Ascendance: okay so should I
22.43 Ascendance: remove the droplet whistles
22.43 Benny-: I think you should
22.44 Benny-: since in the map, you're emphasising the melody rather than the downbeat
22.44 Ascendance: okay
22.46 Ascendance: okay i fixed it
22.46 Ascendance: ready
22.47 Ascendance: update it!
22.48 Benny-: i hate this platter
22.48 Benny-: reeeeeeeeeeeeeee
22.48 Ascendance: T_T
22.48 Benny-: :(
22.48 Benny-: like
22.49 Ascendance: why :(
22.49 Benny-: the distancing
22.49 Benny-: triggers me
22.49 Ascendance: okay, then help me fix it!
22.49 Benny-: it's very inconsistent
22.50 Benny-: 00:09:406 (3,4,1) - example
22.50 Benny-: 4 isn't strong beat
22.50 Benny-: but has dash
22.50 Ascendance: yea its used for emphasis on 00:10:280 (1) - w
22.50 Benny-: and same dash distance as 4,1
22.50 Benny-: yeah
22.50 Ascendance: but i reduced it a bit
22.50 Benny-: but why not tilt the slider vertical
22.50 Ascendance: 00:09:988 (4) - x:256
22.50 Benny-: 00:09:406 (3) -
22.50 Benny-: this one
22.50 Ascendance: 00:10:280 (1) - x:480
22.50 Benny-: i mean
22.50 Ascendance: i hate vertical
22.51 Benny-: 00:01:251 (1,2) - this is vertical :(
22.51 Ascendance: yes
22.51 Ascendance: fuck vertical
22.51 Benny-: lmao
22.51 Ascendance: but it works tehre
22.51 Ascendance: wew
22.51 Ascendance: I fixed it though
22.51 Ascendance: it's not a dash anymore
22.51 Benny-: okay
22.51 Ascendance: or at least it's
22.51 Ascendance: decreased
22.52 Benny-: just
22.52 Benny-: ok
22.52 Benny-: listen to me
22.52 Benny-: when I say this
22.52 Ascendance: ok
22.52 Ascendance: im listening
22.53 Benny-: note down what distance is min for dash, go over all the distances. cause some distances are very hard walks like this 00:01:251 (1,2) - while others are just ioehgoeiwugh consistency please
22.54 Benny-: i don't like this at all :(
22.54 Ascendance: k gimme like 45 seconds
22.54 Ascendance: Im gonna make every distance aesthetic^tm
22.54 Benny-: 45 seconds
22.54 Benny-: lmao
22.55 Ascendance: alright
22.55 Ascendance: fixed it
22.55 Ascendance: try now
22.56 Benny-: 00:09:406 (3,4,1) - i still managed to walk this
22.56 Benny-: and it's still same distance
22.56 Benny-: kys
22.57 Ascendance: 00:09:406 (3,4) - is supposed to be a walk now
22.57 Ascendance: 00:09:988 (4,1) - is a dash
22.57 Benny-: but i walked it
22.57 Benny-: the whole thing
22.57 Benny-: first try
22.57 Ascendance: i dont want to push it any further cause then its against the wall
22.57 Benny-: reee
22.57 Ascendance: OK RDY
22.58 Ascendance: fuck me
22.58 Ascendance: updat eit
22.58 Ascendance: hopefully its better for you
22.59 Benny-: hell ye
23.00 Ascendance: :)
23.00 Benny-: i still don't like it though
23.00 Ascendance: :(
23.02 Ascendance: i worked ver hard on it uwu
23.02 Benny-: you did not
23.02 Benny-: have you seen my platters
23.02 Ascendance: no
23.02 Benny-: they are best
23.02 Ascendance: wao
23.02 Benny-: 00:28:047 (5) - i think this can be single notes, somewhat alike 00:23:386 (3,4) - this pattern for better emphasasis
23.02 Ascendance: im the worst T_T_TT_T
23.03 Benny-: yeah you truly are
23.03 Ascendance: oh true
23.03 Ascendance: fixed it
23.04 Ascendance: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/598797 beep beep
23.04 Benny-: aaaand my headset died
23.04 Ascendance: rippu
23.04 Benny-: let me charge it for like 10 min
23.04 Benny-: lol
23.05 Ascendance: okay~
23.05 Ascendance: I'll fix more stuff
23.05 Benny-: but yeah
23.05 Benny-: I'd still say 2,00 is too small distance for a dash
23.05 Benny-: at least 2,10-2,20
23.05 Ascendance: you got it
23.08 Ascendance: i fixed LITERALLY EVERYTHING
23.08 Benny-: did you really though
23.09 Ascendance: yes
23.09 Ascendance: i checked every distance
23.09 Ascendance: and increased/reduced things as necessary
23.09 Benny-: good boy
23.09 Benny-: I'll let my headset charge for a few more min
23.10 Benny-: just to make sure it lasts at least 2-3 hours :^)
23.10 Ascendance: okay!
23.10 Ascendance: :^)
23.11 Benny-: 4 more min
23.11 Benny-: ok
23.11 Ascendance: okay!
23.13 Benny-: 2017-04-13 11:50 alienflybot: 00:44:649 - add 1/16 hdash stream
23.13 Benny-: i agree to this
23.16 Ascendance: LOL
23.16 Benny-: okay yeah
23.16 Benny-: it looks a lot better
23.16 Benny-: 00:05:328 (4,1) - this is a bit long though
23.17 Benny-: 00:19:600 (1) - you might wanna add a whistle on sliderhead here as well
23.17 Ascendance: one sec have to test someone's map
23.17 Benny-: ok
23.17 Benny-: I'll just make a ton of suggestions ready meanwhile :^)
23.19 Ascendance: oh sure
23.24 Ascendance: helo
23.24 Ascendance: is there a lot fo suggestions
23.24 Benny-: no
23.25 Ascendance: hecking nice
23.25 Benny-: did you see the ones i linked previously though
23.25 Ascendance: yep
23.25 Benny-: ok
23.25 Ascendance: i reduced and added whistle
23.25 Benny-: then i only got one more
23.25 Ascendance: okay
23.26 Benny-: 00:00:958 (2,1) - this is conflicting with the rest of the rhythm usage in the rest of the map, like 00:19:600 (1) -
23.26 Benny-: you never once mapped the downbeat
23.26 Ascendance: yea its mostly because of the red line
23.26 Benny-: yeah
23.26 Benny-: figured
23.27 Ascendance: if i put a slider over it it fucks me up
23.27 Ascendance: hopefully it's okay as it is tho
23.27 Ascendance: if not i can try to mess around with it
23.27 Benny-: i think
23.27 Benny-: you have two timing points here 00:01:250 -
23.28 Benny-: 1 offset difference
23.28 Ascendance: yea i fixed it lol
23.28 Ascendance: i just deleted the green
23.28 Ascendance: since it used to have a purpose
23.28 Ascendance: but now it does not
23.30 Benny-: it think
23.30 Benny-: also
23.30 Benny-: the red line is off by 1 ms
23.30 Benny-: the second
23.30 Benny-: i mean
23.30 Ascendance: wha
23.30 Benny-: yeah
23.31 Ascendance: sounds okay to me
23.31 Benny-: yes
23.31 Benny-: it sounds okay
23.31 Benny-: it doesn't do anything
23.31 Ascendance: wew
23.31 Benny-: at all
23.31 Ascendance: yes it does
23.31 Ascendance: it's a metronome reset
23.31 Benny-: but if it's supposed to be snapped to the previous timing point
23.31 Ascendance: so things land on big white ticks
23.31 Benny-: then it's 1ms off
23.31 Benny-: I know
23.31 Benny-: but read what I wrote
23.31 Benny-: i meant the 1ms doesn't do anything
23.31 Ascendance: ok i fixed it then
23.31 Ascendance: lole
23.32 Ascendance: done
23.32 Benny-: 00:00:958 (2,1) - i still think it should be a slider for consistency tho :^(
23.32 Benny-: other than that it looks okay
23.32 Ascendance: red line T_T
23.33 Benny-: how does the red line affect the slider
23.33 Benny-: just curious
23.33 Benny-: when the bpm doesn't change
23.33 Ascendance: oh ur right
23.33 Benny-: wow
23.33 Benny-: am i good or am i good
23.33 Ascendance: this is why you're a bn :)
23.34 Benny-: yeah i guess :^)
23.34 Ascendance: I fixed it!
23.34 Ascendance: it is now a pretty slider
23.34 Benny-: also move the kiai flash
23.35 Benny-: if i didn't say so
23.35 Ascendance: yep did iut
23.35 Benny-: ok
23.35 Benny-: good
23.35 Benny-: lmao
23.35 Ascendance: after this I'll fix all the hitsounds
23.35 Ascendance: on the other 2 diffs
23.35 Ascendance: and the beginning slider
23.35 Benny-: yeah
23.35 Benny-: i'm just mentally preparing
23.36 Ascendance: :(
23.40 Ascendance: is it that badTT
23.41 Benny-: no but i hate salads
23.41 Benny-: and i hate cups
23.41 Ascendance: oh me too
23.41 Benny-: why do you think i rarely touch enh spreads
23.42 Benny-: i literally have no experience mapping them
23.42 Ascendance: also same
23.42 Ascendance: but i believe in you!
23.43 Benny-: I don't
23.43 Ascendance: :(
23.45 Benny-: :)
23.45 Ascendance: I fixed all the hitsounds in all diffs now
23.45 Ascendance: expert hitsounder!
23.45 Benny-: im not expert xDDDDDD
23.46 Ascendance: I am now
23.46 Benny-: no you still suck
23.46 Ascendance: true :(
23.53 Benny-: same thing about dashes in salad btw
23.53 Benny-: fix your dashes pls
23.53 Benny-: c o n s i s t e n c y
23.54 Ascendance: anything besides that
23.55 Benny-: 00:23:385 (3,4,5) - you can at least curve this
23.55 Benny-: please
23.55 Ascendance: yes
23.55 Benny-: absolutely no movement
23.55 Ascendance: I made every dash 2.16x
23.55 Ascendance: or higher
23.55 Ascendance: depending on intensity
23.55 Benny-: okay that seems good
23.56 Ascendance: updated
23.57 Benny-: ok guess how many times i pressed dash in this salad
23.57 Benny-: guess
23.57 Ascendance: 0
23.57 Benny-: actually 5
23.57 Benny-: xD
23.58 Ascendance: oh
23.58 Ascendance: is that good owob
23.58 Benny-: well
23.58 Ascendance: either way, I increased some more distances so there should be a few more
23.58 Benny-: i find it weird that 00:04:745 (3,1) - is lower distance than 00:02:415 (2,1) - cause it's higher pitched
23.59 Benny-: it's like small stuff like that
23.59 Benny-: 00:23:967 (5,1) - same intensity but this dash is waaay longer lmao
00.00 Ascendance: o whoops that was misplaced
00.00 Ascendance: i made some slight fixes owob
00.00 Ascendance: things should be more appropriate
00.02 Benny-: i pointed out this in platter too
00.02 Benny-: but
00.02 Benny-: 00:19:599 (1) - whistle where
00.03 Ascendance: oh sure
00.03 Ascendance: hitsound noob <-
00.04 Benny-: 00:39:987 - makes no sense to me to miss this beat
00.04 Benny-: or skip it
00.04 Ascendance: density mostly
00.05 Benny-: yeah
00.05 Benny-: but
00.05 Benny-: then i'd rework the rhythm cause
00.05 Benny-: that one is stronger
00.05 Ascendance: I think it should be fine to skip it, there's no real importance to it and i dont wanna make that many notes in a row
00.05 Benny-: than the previous
00.05 Ascendance: what if i delete 00:39:404 (4) -
00.05 Ascendance: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8030767
00.06 Benny-: yes
00.06 Benny-: that's what I was gonna suggest lol
00.06 Benny-: Other than that, I'm useless on salad
00.09 Ascendance: naisu
00.11 Benny-: actually
00.11 Benny-: i found something else that's inconsistent in platter :^)
00.12 Benny-: 00:24:259 (1,2,3) - and here 00:05:618 (1,2,3,4,1) -
00.13 Benny-: timeline
00.13 Benny-: obviously
00.13 Benny-: if you didn't notice
00.13 Ascendance: oh
00.14 Ascendance: I'll delete 00:06:492 (2) - but i wanna keep 00:06:783 (3,4) - for variety if that sok
00.15 Benny-: mmmmmmmmhhhhhhhh
00.15 Ascendance: just so the timeline isnt 100% similar to salad
00.15 Benny-: then u add 1/2 sliders here 00:25:424 (2) -
00.15 Benny-: baka
00.15 Benny-: still consistent
00.17 Benny-: im hungry
00.17 Benny-: and its getting late
00.17 Benny-: hurry
00.18 Ascendance: okok
00.18 Ascendance: i fixed it
00.18 Benny-: i cant find anything in cup i suck at patterns and stuff
00.19 Ascendance: oh naisu
00.19 Ascendance: cup is easy so should be no issue anyways
00.19 Ascendance: should i updato
00.19 Benny-: like literally the only thing i could point out is that strong beat here 00:35:037 (3) - is on slider end which i think is stupid :(
00.19 Benny-: but i suck
00.20 Ascendance: i was gonna make it a repeat slider but i thiiiink it should be okay
00.20 Benny-: oki
00.20 Ascendance: congrats on ur free kudosu
00.21 Benny-: thank u
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Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this.
General HS:
00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish.
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well.
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it.


Cup
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1).
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead.


Salad
Salad needs some polishing still.
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle.
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4).
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead.
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not.


Imagination
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2).
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps.
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Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this. I thought they were kind of a nice touch for the finishes T_T, if you really think so though, I have no problem with removing them.

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00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish. Yup
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well. Yeah
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency. In this case, I wanna keep the red tick whistles because of how unique these sounds are and the fact that it's the end of the map.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it. Yeah whoops


Cup
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1). I mostly just wanna have some variety here, but I have no problem changing it if you'd prefer structure consistency here.
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead. I made it a 1/2 repeat slider instead here, feels nice to me tbh


Salad
Salad needs some polishing still. kill me haha
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk. Yep, I increased it.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody. Yeah, agreed.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle. Okay!
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4). I changed a bit of the angling of the curve, but I'd really like to keep this. I love the way this plays as the direction change to 00:18:725 (5) - is really nice to me imo!
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement I disagree. Even though it's the same pitch, the lyrics in the actual song have the downbeat of IMAGINATION here, and I wanted to reflect that even though the lyrics don't exist here. Even without the lyrics, the map compliments the song here pretty well with a technical "downbeat".
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead. Agreed!
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not. Yeah I get what you're saying here, but I'm gonna leave this as it is. If this was a difficulty that wasn't EN or H, I'd probably make this 3/4 for the extended note, but since it's not, simplifying it to 1/2 is fine to me.


Imagination
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead. Took the alternative route and added a circle at 00:06:492 - for that noise instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2). ^^^
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps. Nice idea, fixed!


Thanks for the help!
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2017-05-11 17:16 celerih: I guess you want to go over the salad
2017-05-11 17:16 Ascendance: ya
2017-05-11 17:17 Ascendance: speedmod free kd
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: alright
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: ACTION is editing SPYAIR - I'M A BELIEVER [celerih's Salad]
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: I'm ready
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: NO
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: WRONG SALAD.
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: wut
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: ooooh
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: LOL
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: FUCK
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I thought you wanted to mod my salad on believer
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: before uypload
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: no
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: its probably fine
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I don't want to mod Harumacho
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: harumachi lmao
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I genuinely hate the song
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: no
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1288131 R3 Music Box - Imagination [Salad]]
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: GOD DAMNIT
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: u dont have 2 tho
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: i got som1 else to
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: but if u want kd then yea
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: if u want tio be useful you can find me combo colors
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: desu
2017-05-11 17:19 celerih: I can od imagination
2017-05-11 17:19 celerih: mod
2017-05-11 17:20 celerih: 00:08:822 (2) - why did you map this, it's so faint and you follow the main sounds only usually
2017-05-11 17:20 celerih: it just feels out of place here
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: consistency purposes
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: i actually just added it cuz AZ told me it was inconsistent
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: lol
2017-05-11 17:21 celerih: wait really
2017-05-11 17:21 celerih: consistency with what?
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: idk
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: OH WAIT
2017-05-11 17:22 celerih: I mean yea later on you follow the more fain sounds
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: nah it used to be a 1/2 slider
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: and he said that 00:09:114 - was overmap
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: so i reduced it to a single circle
2017-05-11 17:22 celerih: but for the intro you only followed the main sounds
2017-05-11 17:23 celerih: 00:32:415 (4) - Works better as a straight sliders
2017-05-11 17:23 Ascendance: i reduced the curve but i think the curve is k
2017-05-11 17:24 Ascendance: considering it used to be fully vertical before they told me to change
2017-05-11 17:24 celerih: that's pretty much it for the salad
2017-05-11 17:24 Ascendance: naisu.
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: do you want me to check the other diffs?
2017-05-11 17:25 Ascendance: if u want
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: nah, I need to go eat food before I leave for my class
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: btw get a less lazy diff name
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: for top diff
2017-05-11 17:25 Ascendance: lol
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: alright then
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: bye
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: I was glad to be sp booster
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: thanks desu
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: cya
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: now just upload my diff
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: ya
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: soon
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Salad needs some polishing still.
so here I am

Salad

00:00:958 - and 00:03:288 - both sticks to left side, you could try to make patterns a bit more various

00:23:385 (3,4,5) - inconsistent with other triplets, just put repetitive slider like on rest triplets for that sound

00:30:376 - note between would be nice (x:224)

00:39:405 - don't like this gap, also you might want try this pattering - http://puu.sh/vN4er/6749a6cf9e.jpg


Welp, the salad is fine :<
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Salad needs some polishing still.
so here I am

Salad

00:00:958 - and 00:03:288 - both sticks to left side, you could try to make patterns a bit more various Sure sure~

00:23:385 (3,4,5) - inconsistent with other triplets, just put repetitive slider like on rest triplets for that sound I think circles are fine here plus repeat sliders can't make the shape I wanted rip

00:30:376 - note between would be nice (x:224) Variance with top diff

00:39:405 - don't like this gap, also you might want try this pattering - http://puu.sh/vN4er/6749a6cf9e.jpg Kept the patterning but changed a little something so it's a bit neater.


Welp, the salad is fine :<


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00:26:008 (2) - I think this vertical slider breaks flow--and plays kinda strangely in this case. Tilt it in one direction and move it somewhere around x=176 or so.


Salad
00:33:580 (5,1) - Lower distancing--because the next combo is a walk, this may be walked as well, leading to a miss.


Imagination
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Absolute Zero wrote:
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Cup
00:26:008 (2) - I think this vertical slider breaks flow--and plays kinda strangely in this case. Tilt it in one direction and move it somewhere around x=176 or so. I made it horizontal and made it play like another repeat slider instead.


Salad
00:33:580 (5,1) - Lower distancing--because the next combo is a walk, this may be walked as well, leading to a miss. Yep, decreased slightly


Imagination
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Removed the kiai flashes, looks good to me now

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