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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 23, 2017 at 11:19:03 AM

Artist: Tatsuya Yano
Title: Yatte Miyou!
Source: ソフィーのアトリエ ~不思議な本の錬金術士~
Tags: Atelier Sophie ~The Alchemist of the Mysterious Book~ Sofii no Atorie ~Fushigina hon no Renkinjutsushi~ Shiro-neechan
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3648kb
Play Time: 01:38
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Download: Tatsuya Yano - Yatte Miyou!
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Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

MX
00:01:647 Missing a note
00:13:219 (13219|0) This LN should be longer since 00:09:790 (9790|2) Is mapped on the same sound
00:19:933 (19933|0,19981|1,20028|2,20076|3,20076|0) I think this is only a stream with 2 single notes and a double at the end, would delete 00:20:028 (20028|2) and make the pattern to 00:19:933 (19933|1,20004|2,20076|0,20076|3)
00:31:219 Missing a note
00:38:076 ^^
00:39:790 ^^


Good map, couldn't find many mistakes. Good luck!!!
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LordTimeWaste wrote:
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Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

MX
00:01:647 Missing a note
00:13:219 (13219|0) This LN should be longer since 00:09:790 (9790|2) Is mapped on the same sound :arrow: Ok but repattern some notes.
00:19:933 (19933|0,19981|1,20028|2,20076|3,20076|0) I think this is only a stream with 2 single notes and a double at the end, would delete 00:20:028 (20028|2) and make the pattern to 00:19:933 (19933|1,20004|2,20076|0,20076|3) :arrow: I know but 1/6 streams seems readable the sounds.
00:31:219 Missing a note
00:38:076 ^^
00:39:790 ^^


Good map, couldn't find many mistakes. Good luck!!!


Thanks for Mod :)
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hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS?
  • You can reduce the weight of the Background changing his format from .PNG to .JPG
Video: PASS
  • Not needed.
BPM & Offset: MISS?
  • I'm not an expert on this... but 210 BPM (105x2) isn't a bit much? For me was 140 BPM... Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7647602 (Now the map uses mostly 1/6 snaps. The highlighted roll is 1/12 snap, like the others.)
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS
  • Let's recheck some things...
    • NM: OD=8 -> OD=7 | HP=8 -> HP=7.5
    • HD: OD=8 -> OD=7.5 | HP=8 -> HP=7.5
Hitsound: MISS
  • I saw some hitsounds in the map folder... So... use them xD
Hitsound Volume: PASS
  • 40% looks good.
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  • Let's recheck/complete some things... Links, btw: http://social.gust.co.jp/sophie/music/ and http://vgmdb.net/album/53594
    • Title: Is "Let's Try It!" (the "t" and "i" are uppercase: "T" and "I")
    • Artist: ...I think is incorrect. The composer/arranger is the artist of the song in this case. Replace the "Atelier(...)" for "Tatsuya Yano".
    • Source: Correct.
    • Tags: Now, you can place: "Atelier Sophie ~The Alchemist of the Mysterious Book~" for the game title (Source in english).
    • Tags2: "sofii no atorie ~fushigina hon no renkinjutsushi~" -> "Sophie no Atelier ~Fushigi na Hon no Renkinjutsushi~" (I don't think that romaji tag is good enough. With the tag above added is enough for me tbh. If there are enough space add this then xD)
    • Tags3: "series jrpg rpg" (I don't know, if you search the game for yourself will be clear what type it is, plus this doesn't have any relation with the music.)
    • Tags4: Finally, add: "やってみよう!" (also for the title of the song... and that's all!)
Widescreen Support: PASS
Preview Point: PASS?
AiMod Things: PASS


Mod!

NM
00:13:647 (13647|1) - I rather move this note to |2| fits more that way.

00:38:076 (38076|3,38362|0) - Ctrl+H... there many Longnotes on |2| and |3|.

00:41:504 (41504|2) - Move to |0| fits more.

00:44:362 (44362|1) - Move to |3|, many notes in the same column.

00:48:219 (48219|1,48362|3,48362|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648938

00:51:362 (51362|2,51362|3,52219|3,52219|2,53076|3,53076|2) - Why these are chords? For me that whistle is only one note. Also there many Longnotes on |0| and |1|, rearrange better...

00:55:076 (55076|3,55219|1,55219|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648945

01:14:076 (74076|2) - Move to |0| fits more.

01:19:647 (79647|0,79647|3,80076|3,80076|0,80504|3,80504|0,80933|1,81362|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648955



HD
00:07:219 to 00:17:504 - I can see that you are mapping whistles and kicks with chords... I rather use chords for the whistles only (rare, because usually the whistles are really quiet, in this case not). Up to you.

00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|0,17719|0,17719|3,17933|2,17933|1,18147|1,18147|2,18362|3,18362|0,18576|0,18576|3,18790|1,18790|2,19004|2,19004|1,19219|0,19219|2,19219|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649026

00:27:076 (27076|0,27219|2,27362|0,27362|1,27504|2,27647|0,27790|1,27790|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649042

00:29:504 - This clap? ("tack" sound) is intended to be empty? (without any notes?)

00:31:076 - ^

00:34:219 (34219|0) - Move to |1| and 00:34:504 (34504|1) to |2|.

00:36:362 - "tack" sound again... Skipping from now on.

00:55:076 (55076|3) - to |2| and 00:55:219 (55219|2) - to |3|

01:04:647 (64647|1,65076|1,65504|1,65933|1,66362|1,66790|1) - Isn't very repetitive? Spread the notes better.

01:08:504 (68504|3,68933|3,69362|3,69790|3,70219|3) - ^Same.

01:27:790 (87790|0,87790|2,87933|1,88076|2,88219|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649084

01:37:647 (97647|1,97647|2) - Move to |0| and |3|

01:37:933 (97933|0,97933|3) - Move to |1| and |2|



MX


Third time, true xD!

Good Luck :) !
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hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3


General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS?
  • You can reduce the weight of the Background changing his format from .PNG to .JPG :arrow: It's not the case if the bg is png or jpg.
Video: PASS
  • Not needed.
BPM & Offset: MISS?
  • I'm not an expert on this... but 210 BPM (105x2) isn't a bit much? For me was 140 BPM... Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7647602 (Now the map uses mostly 1/6 snaps. The highlighted roll is 1/12 snap, like the others.) :arrow: I don't think that's too much for bpm and if you put it in 140 it's snapped.
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS
  • Let's recheck some things...
    • NM: OD=8 -> OD=7 | HP=8 -> HP=7.5
    • HD: OD=8 -> OD=7.5 | HP=8 -> HP=7.5
Hitsound: MISS
  • I saw some hitsounds in the map folder... So... use them xD :arrow: oh the soft-hitfinish...okie
Hitsound Volume: PASS
  • 40% looks good.
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  • Let's recheck/complete some things... Links, btw: http://social.gust.co.jp/sophie/music/ and http://vgmdb.net/album/53594
    • Title: Is "Let's Try It!" (the "t" and "i" are uppercase: "T" and "I")
    • Artist: ...I think is incorrect. The composer/arranger is the artist of the song in this case. Replace the "Atelier(...)" for "Tatsuya Yano".
    • Source: Correct.
    • Tags: Now, you can place: "Atelier Sophie ~The Alchemist of the Mysterious Book~" for the game title (Source in english).
    • Tags2: "sofii no atorie ~fushigina hon no renkinjutsushi~" -> "Sophie no Atelier ~Fushigi na Hon no Renkinjutsushi~" (I don't think that romaji tag is good enough. With the tag above added is enough for me tbh. If there are enough space add this then xD) :arrow: Actually no need to change because that's the same tags even it there's capitalize or not.
    • Tags3: "series jrpg rpg" (I don't know, if you search the game for yourself will be clear what type it is, plus this doesn't have any relation with the music.) :arrow: Well it's related because the music is exist in the game XD
    • Tags4: Finally, add: "やってみよう!" (also for the title of the song... and that's all!) :arrow: No need to add it on tags because it's in the title.
Widescreen Support: PASS
Preview Point: PASS?
AiMod Things: PASS


Mod!

NM
00:13:647 (13647|1) - I rather move this note to |2| fits more that way.

00:38:076 (38076|3,38362|0) - Ctrl+H... there many Longnotes on |2| and |3|.

00:41:504 (41504|2) - Move to |0| fits more.

00:44:362 (44362|1) - Move to |3|, many notes in the same column.

00:48:219 (48219|1,48362|3,48362|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648938 :arrow: I don't intention to use shield in this diff

00:51:362 (51362|2,51362|3,52219|3,52219|2,53076|3,53076|2) - Why these are chords? For me that whistle is only one note. Also there many Longnotes on |0| and |1|, rearrange better... :arrow: Re-arranged some notes

00:55:076 (55076|3,55219|1,55219|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648945 :arrow: Re-arranged a bit.

01:14:076 (74076|2) - Move to |0| fits more. :arrow: remain this note to prevent 1/4 collision note here 01:14:362 -

01:19:647 (79647|0,79647|3,80076|3,80076|0,80504|3,80504|0,80933|1,81362|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7648955 :arrow: I'll remain this pattern.



HD
00:07:219 to 00:17:504 - I can see that you are mapping whistles and kicks with chords... I rather use chords for the whistles only (rare, because usually the whistles are really quiet, in this case not). Up to you. :arrow: Let me think about this...I'll remain the notes but i can consider this if some modders can also notice this one.

00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|0,17719|0,17719|3,17933|2,17933|1,18147|1,18147|2,18362|3,18362|0,18576|0,18576|3,18790|1,18790|2,19004|2,19004|1,19219|0,19219|2,19219|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649026 :arrow: I'll remain the chordjacks pattern.

00:27:076 (27076|0,27219|2,27362|0,27362|1,27504|2,27647|0,27790|1,27790|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649042 :arrow: I'll remain the kind of pattern.

00:29:504 - This clap? ("tack" sound) is intended to be empty? (without any notes?) :arrow: oh that's not intentional...nice catch

00:31:076 - ^

00:34:219 (34219|0) - Move to |1| and 00:34:504 (34504|1) to |2|.

00:36:362 - "tack" sound again... Skipping from now on.

00:55:076 (55076|3) - to |2| and 00:55:219 (55219|2) - to |3|

01:04:647 (64647|1,65076|1,65504|1,65933|1,66362|1,66790|1) - Isn't very repetitive? Spread the notes better.

01:08:504 (68504|3,68933|3,69362|3,69790|3,70219|3) - ^Same.

01:27:790 (87790|0,87790|2,87933|1,88076|2,88219|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649084

01:37:647 (97647|1,97647|2) - Move to |0| and |3|

01:37:933 (97933|0,97933|3) - Move to |1| and |2|



MX
00:17:933 - Add one note more on |3|

00:20:362 (20362|1,20504|2,20504|3) - Again that "tack" sound... I rather map those sounds like 1/2 jacks: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649158

00:26:933 (26933|3,26933|1,27076|2,27219|0,27362|2,27362|3,27504|3,27647|3,27790|0,27790|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649167 :arrow: Re-pattern a bit.

Those "tack" sounds still appearing here, skipping...

00:28:219 (28219|1,28219|0) - Isn't a triple note? You map with three notes here... :arrow: double notes seems fine to me.

00:40:647 (40647|0,40647|1,40790|2,40790|0,40933|2,40933|1,41076|1,41076|2,41076|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7649190 :arrow: I'll remain this kind of pattern.

00:41:362 (41362|0,41362|3) - Move to |1| and |2| instead. :arrow: It's much confortable to use jacks in columns |0| and |3|

01:18:219 (78219|0,78219|3) - ^

01:19:076 (79076|3,79076|0) - ^ :arrow: It's much confortable to use jacks in columns |0| and |3|

01:27:790 - Add one note more on |1| :arrow: One note seems fine for finish sound.


Third time, true xD!

Good Luck :) !


Thanks for great mod specially in metadata...I'll mod your map ASAP! :)
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1|2|3|4

Come on 1080p BGs where are you?

Hitsound your map. You've got a good hitnormal going but you could do so much more


MX
00:00:790 (790|3,933|0) - I know you've chosen to not map it, but the soft pipe would be nice to include at key points like this. Just an extra note on the middle blue tick would suffice.
00:05:552 (5552|2,5600|1,5719|1) - Objectively ghost notes. An LN would be more fitting
00:14:076 (14076|0,14076|2,14076|3) - According to your mapping scheme, shouldn't this be a double?
00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|1,17504|0,17719|0,17719|3,17933|3,17933|0,17933|2,18147|1,18147|0,18362|0,18362|2,18362|3,18576|3,18576|0,18790|3,18790|1) - There's potential here to map for pitch relevancy
00:29:076 (29076|1,29933|2) - Triples seem a bit heavy for this softer section and it diminishes the effect that triples like 00:34:219 (34219|2,34219|3,34219|0) - have even though they belong
00:56:504 (56504|1,56504|2) - You'll replace should-be LNs with 1/6 streams but you wont put a 1/4 stream instead of this one?

Really great map. I don't like the beginning of the kiai at all but that could just be because I'm terrible at LNs
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1|2|3|4

Come on 1080p BGs where are you? :arrow: Sadly i can't because my pc can't support 1080p. It's 720p tbh.

Hitsound your map. You've got a good hitnormal going but you could do so much more :arrow: Let me think about this :)


MX
00:00:790 (790|3,933|0) - I know you've chosen to not map it, but the soft pipe would be nice to include at key points like this. Just an extra note on the middle blue tick would suffice.
00:05:552 (5552|2,5600|1,5719|1) - Objectively ghost notes. An LN would be more fitting :arrow: Re-aaranged some notes.
00:14:076 (14076|0,14076|2,14076|3) - According to your mapping scheme, shouldn't this be a double? :arrow: It should be triple. Instead of remove one note, change the one note into LN
00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|1,17504|0,17719|0,17719|3,17933|3,17933|0,17933|2,18147|1,18147|0,18362|0,18362|2,18362|3,18576|3,18576|0,18790|3,18790|1) - There's potential here to map for pitch relevancy :arrow: I know but i'll stick with this kind of pattern.
00:29:076 (29076|1,29933|2) - Triples seem a bit heavy for this softer section and it diminishes the effect that triples like 00:34:219 (34219|2,34219|3,34219|0) - have even though they belong :arrow: I don't think that's heavy for softer section.
00:56:504 (56504|1,56504|2) - You'll replace should-be LNs with 1/6 streams but you wont put a 1/4 stream instead of this one? :arrow: much better to use 1/6 streams.

Really great map. I don't like the beginning of the kiai at all but that could just be because I'm terrible at LNs
Take my stars!


Thanks for mod and stars :)
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Wow atelier, i played it too. I'm not quite good at it. Bookmarked as mod
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00:06:219 (6219|2) - change as LN?
01:37:933 (97933|1) - delete? 2 notes are pretty fair for that sound. i mean that place has similiar sound like this 01:37:647 -

Call me if this mod doesn't help you. I'll exchange as a star. 8-)
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Wow atelier, i played it too. I'm not quite good at it. Bookmarked as mod


yay! :)
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Mod for MX HD and NM
13:13 CrumpetFiddler: hi
13:14 Shiro-neechan: hi
13:14 CrumpetFiddler: im sure you dont know me, im not that popular
13:14 CrumpetFiddler: i saw your post, you need a song modded?
13:15 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:16 CrumpetFiddler: i Can help you out with that, id prefer to do it in chat (here) tho, not thru posting directly to forums
13:16 Shiro-neechan: oh irc
13:16 Shiro-neechan: sure
13:16 CrumpetFiddler: np the map?
13:16 Shiro-neechan: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/588635 here]
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: aaa my supporters gone
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: lemme renew that first
13:17 Shiro-neechan: aaa
13:17 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: aaa
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: what diff is it your most concerned with?
13:18 Shiro-neechan: MX but you can also check NM and HD
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: (What one should i focus most on)
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: ok lemme just try playing it quickl
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: u
13:19 Shiro-neechan: it's LN map tbh
13:20 CrumpetFiddler: ln maps can still be ranked provided they are done properly
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: most of my problems with the maps arnt the lns
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: altho some do concern me
13:21 Shiro-neechan: hmm
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: ill focus on mx rn
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: ill check HD after
13:21 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: 00:02:576 (2576|1) -
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: that note doesnt looks snapped in
13:22 CrumpetFiddler: or is this mapped on 1/12?
13:22 CrumpetFiddler: also that note doesnt really have a sound behind it, so id doesnt even need to be there alltogether
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: i have to say, watch out when your doing these
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: 00:02:504 (2504|0,2576|1,2647|2) -
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: Alot of them only has 2 sounds behind thmef
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: them*
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: having 3 notes feels weird to play
13:24 Shiro-neechan: it's snapped but i decide to put it on 1/6
13:24 CrumpetFiddler: okay, thats fine then
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: even tho im pointing out all things i can find wrong with this
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: gotta praise this
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: 00:05:504 (5504|2,5504|3,5647|0,5790|3,5790|2,5933|1,6076|0,6076|3,6219|2) -
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: so good
13:26 Shiro-neechan: aaaa thanks
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 1|2|3|4
13:26 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 00:06:790 (6790|0,6790|3,6790|1) - i would say change this
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 00:06:790 (6790|0,6790|3,6790|1) -
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: oops
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: to maybe 1|3|4
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: so its different from the one just below
13:27 Shiro-neechan: ok but i have to move this 00:06:647 (6647|2,6647|3) - to 1|2 to prevent chord jack
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: these here dont make much sense
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: 00:09:219 (9219|3,9266|2,9314|1) -
13:27 Shiro-neechan: hmm
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: that be fine
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: the one i hld earlier
13:28 CrumpetFiddler: theres no beats behind what you mapped there
13:28 CrumpetFiddler: id say just keep one note there
13:29 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think this should end in a quad, you end another in a quad, but thats justified as it has a sound behind it
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: 00:09:790 (9790|2,10219|1,10219|0,10219|3) -
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: 00:16:076 (16076|0,16123|1,16171|2) - youve done this again, id say do the same thing as before
13:30 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:30 CrumpetFiddler: 00:16:647 (16647|3,17076|1,17076|0,17076|2) - quad again
13:31 Shiro-neechan: that's not the case because it started LN not quad
13:31 Shiro-neechan: LN>triple
13:31 CrumpetFiddler: as in it ends in a quad
13:31 CrumpetFiddler: it doesnt have the sound that it should, i'd just suggest removing one of the notes at the end
13:32 CrumpetFiddler: 00:17:504 (17504|1,17504|3,17504|0) - i can see what youve done here, and what im going to suggest is entirely subjective i think the parts fine. but you could just use doubles and remove triples all together
13:32 CrumpetFiddler: thats literally just preference tho, so you can choos what you want to do with that
13:33 Shiro-neechan: i'll remain that part because of the hitsound
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: thats fine
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: im not sure about this
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: v
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: 00:19:933 (19933|0,19981|1,20028|2) -
13:34 Shiro-neechan: i'm sure that it's not snapped
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: id say move this to |2|
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:20:362 (20362|2) -
13:34 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: these sections you seem to have nailed
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:24:647 (24647|3,24647|0,24790|2,24790|3,24790|1,24933|0,25076|2,25076|3,25219|1,25219|3,25219|0) -
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: nothing wrong with any of those it looks like
13:35 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:35 Shiro-neechan: for consistency play
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: again here, im not sure
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: 00:26:219 (26219|3,26266|2,26314|1,26362|0) -
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: it sounds ok, but it feels super off to play
13:36 Shiro-neechan: see
13:36 Shiro-neechan: i guess i have to change it
13:36 CrumpetFiddler: im trying to see how i can fix it to give you an idea
13:36 Shiro-neechan: ikr :)
13:37 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667605
13:37 CrumpetFiddler: that feels better, but id say fiddle around with that until your happy with it
13:38 Shiro-neechan: oh nice
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: a probelm i had when playing your song, theres alot of jacks
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:27:504 (27504|2) - move to |1|
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:27:647 (27647|3) - move to |3|
13:39 CrumpetFiddler: removes jacks from that section entirely
13:39 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:39 CrumpetFiddler: theres not enough beat to justify a triple 00:29:076 (29076|2,29076|0,29076|1) -
13:40 CrumpetFiddler: id say consider making that a single note, or a double
13:40 CrumpetFiddler: either would be ok
13:41 Shiro-neechan: ok but i'll go for double note
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: thatd still be okay
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: no beat at the end of this ln
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: 00:31:504 (31504|2) -
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: probs delete that note
13:41 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: there is a beat at the start of this ln and you didnt place a note there, and theres a triple with little sound behind it, id say make the start of the ln a double and put a single note where the triple is
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:32:362 (32362|0,32504|3,32504|1,32504|2) -
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:32:790 (32790|1) - you could justify putting a not midway into this ln as there is a sound
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: note*
13:43 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: i myself am not a massive fan of lns songs, but i can still say that the way youve done the first ln, is albeit good
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: just odd to hit
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: id say re-arrange them to make them more finger friendly
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: and probably remove the note youve got placed in there
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: 00:33:219 (33219|2,33362|1,33362|0,33504|3,33647|1) -
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: id say maybe
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667646
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: something like that
13:45 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:45 Shiro-neechan: oh nice
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: feels alot smoother to play
13:46 CrumpetFiddler: id say after this ln place a note, and put doubles where the triples are, be sure to avoid jacks 00:35:504 (35504|3) -
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: 00:39:790 (39790|3) -
13:47 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: something like this maybe
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667656
13:48 CrumpetFiddler: remove one of the notes at the end of this ln 00:41:933 (41933|2,42219|3,42219|0) -
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: not sure how i feel about this triple
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: 00:42:790 (42790|2,42790|0,42790|1) -
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: id say make it a double
13:49 Shiro-neechan: why remove one note? i think it's not the case
13:49 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: its ok if you think some of these changes you shouldnt implement
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: these are all opinion based ^u^
13:50 Shiro-neechan: uwu
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: id say you could add a note midway on this ln
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: 00:43:933 (43933|3) -
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: there is a beat there
13:50 Shiro-neechan: no check it 25% playback
13:50 Shiro-neechan: playback rate
13:51 CrumpetFiddler: theres a tiny *ding* sound
13:51 CrumpetFiddler: im always on 25%
13:51 Shiro-neechan: you mean here 00:43:933 (43933|3) -
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: yeah
13:52 Shiro-neechan: oh god
13:52 Shiro-neechan: i din't notice
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: XD
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: thats my job :)
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: 00:44:933 (44933|0,45362|2,45362|1,45362|3) - again the triples, id say make another double
13:52 Shiro-neechan: aaa
13:52 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:45:790 (45790|3,46219|0,46219|2,46219|1) - same as before
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:47:076 (47076|2,47076|3,47076|0) -
13:53 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:48:362 (48362|0,48362|3,48362|1) - you could make this a quad
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: you made it a quad near the start of the song, for consistancy you should make this a quad too
13:54 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:54 CrumpetFiddler: make a double 00:49:647 (49647|1,49647|2,49647|0) -
13:54 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:54 CrumpetFiddler: 00:49:219 (49219|0,49219|1) - "this is before the other one" you could make the start of this ln a double
13:55 CrumpetFiddler: probs put another note beside this 00:49:933 (49933|2) -
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:52:219 (52219|0,52219|1,52219|2) - make doubles
13:56 Shiro-neechan: 00:49:219 (49219|0,49219|1) - i'll stick to 1LN to prevent double shield
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: make the start of the ln a double, and the double a single v
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: v
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:52:504 (52504|3,52647|1,52647|2) -
13:57 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:57 CrumpetFiddler: oh one ln, just another note beside it
13:57 Shiro-neechan: oh okay
13:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:53:076 (53076|1,53076|3,53076|2) - make doubles
13:59 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:59 CrumpetFiddler: so this part is ok 00:53:362 (53362|2,53362|0,53504|2,53504|0,53647|0,53647|2,53790|0,53790|2,53933|1,53933|0,54076|1,54076|0,54219|0,54219|1,54362|1,54362|0) -
13:59 CrumpetFiddler: but im my opinion the first beat is the most heard one
14:00 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:00 CrumpetFiddler: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667712
14:00 CrumpetFiddler: i would suggest revisiting that pattern, but this emphasises the louder beats of the song
14:01 Shiro-neechan: i'll stick to chord pattern to emphasize the tack hitsound
14:01 CrumpetFiddler: thats all good
14:01 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think thats wrong
14:02 Shiro-neechan: yeah
14:02 CrumpetFiddler: id say make these single notes
14:02 CrumpetFiddler: 00:55:647 (55647|3,55647|0,55933|3,55933|1,56076|0,56076|2) -
14:03 Shiro-neechan: actually that's single note in NM and HD
14:03 Shiro-neechan: but i think it's not the case in MX
14:03 CrumpetFiddler: i think it should be, they arnt loud enough to be considered doubles and it felt a lil weird
14:03 Shiro-neechan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667720
14:05 CrumpetFiddler: 00:56:504 (56504|0,56552|1,56600|2,56647|3,56695|0,56742|1,56790|2,56838|3) - trying to find a cleaner way to do this
14:05 CrumpetFiddler: i believe after that it should end in a quad but to do that youll need to play around with this section, ill try to give you a rough idea
14:05 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: i think its slightly out of beat
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667732
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: this is okay. but i suggest going back and changing it till your happy with it
14:07 Shiro-neechan: yeah i'll consider this
14:08 CrumpetFiddler: normally id say this is bad 00:57:790 (57790|0,57790|3) -
14:08 CrumpetFiddler: but because its the chorus i think you can get away with it
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: 01:00:790 (60790|2) - you can probs put another note besides this
14:10 Shiro-neechan: okie
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: ill say this because its a big offender
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: in the chorus
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: there are alot of jacks
14:10 Shiro-neechan: yeah
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: to fix this youd need to rework it ~ remove Lns make doubles singles
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: im not telling you to do this
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: just making you aware of them
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: put a note besides this ln 01:02:076 (62076|2) -
14:11 Shiro-neechan: nah i think shield can also exist in ranked maps
14:11 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: im not too positive i think some songs have gotten away with a bit
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: heart of witch did i think
14:12 Shiro-neechan: oh
14:12 Shiro-neechan: but that's quadjacks XD
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: another *ding* sound thats not got notes with it
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: 01:03:219 (63219|2,63219|0) -
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: i just dont like heart of witch XD
14:13 Shiro-neechan: lol
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: id say remove the doubles, 01:04:647 (64647|1,64647|2) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: theres no sound there
14:13 Shiro-neechan: oh okay
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: add a note on the start of the lns 01:05:076 (65076|0,65076|2) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: again, no sound here 01:06:362 (66362|1,66362|3) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: 01:07:076 (67076|0,67076|2) -
14:13 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: again there
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: 01:08:076 (68076|2,68076|0) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:08:790 (68790|1,68790|3) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:09:219 (69219|3,69219|1) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:09:790 (69790|1,69790|3) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: probs delete one of these 01:10:504 (70504|2,70504|0) -
14:15 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: sorry im back
14:17 Shiro-neechan: ayy
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: 01:10:933 (70933|3,70933|1) -
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: remove one
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: 01:10:933 (70933|3,70933|1) - remove these
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: remove one
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: 01:11:933 (71933|3,71933|1) -
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: remove both 01:12:219 (72219|1,72219|3) -
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: the next ln, should be fine how it is
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: theres no / little beat 01:14:504 (74504|2,74504|0,74504|3) -
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: theres no beat entirely here 01:14:647 (74647|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:15:076 (75076|2) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: not much beat
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:14:933 (74933|3,74933|0,74933|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 01:15:504 (75504|0) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:15:933 (75933|3) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:362 (76362|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:647 (76647|1,76647|3,76647|0) - remove triples for maybe a single
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: posssibly a double
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:790 (76790|2) - no beat
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:17:219 (77219|0) -
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:18:362 (78362|0,78362|2,78362|3) - make doubles
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:19:504 (79504|2) - no beat
14:21 Shiro-neechan: why you focus on beat that it's not the case in that section
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: im not sure tbh
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: i should of just said the section :/
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: oh eait
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: gimme a sec
14:22 Shiro-neechan: i'm using hitsound tbh
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: ok i fucked up
14:23 Shiro-neechan: lol
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: those notes that are single, keep them in, i see how the hitsound has them fit in
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: i still think the triples should be doubles though
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: besides the end part (01:17:790 (77790|0,77790|3,77933|0,77933|3,77933|1) - )
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: i feel like youve done this ln backwards, the beat starts slow and gets higher 01:20:933 (80933|3,81076|2,81219|1,81362|0) -
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: change to this
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667792
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: and reverse this section like how i did the other one
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: 01:22:647 (82647|0,82790|1,82933|2,83076|3) -
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: youll need to move the notes inbetween to make it work aswell
14:26 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:27 CrumpetFiddler: 01:23:504 (83504|2,83647|2,83790|2) - id say move the middle note to avoid jacks
14:28 CrumpetFiddler: 01:24:362 (84362|1,84504|2,84647|0,84790|3) - im not to sure about this
14:28 CrumpetFiddler: it might be because i cant ln tho
14:29 Shiro-neechan: i just do that for the change of variations
14:29 CrumpetFiddler: this section here further on, youve fixed the lns XD 01:27:790 (87790|0,87933|1,88076|2,88219|3,89504|3,89647|2,89790|1,89933|0) -
14:29 Shiro-neechan: uwu
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: id say watch the shields at the end, but with the beat of the music that cant really be helped imo
14:30 Shiro-neechan: lol yeah
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i can really see for MX
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: would you like me to do HD?
14:31 Shiro-neechan: yay! why not if you still want to check mod
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: tbh i got nothing better to do
14:31 Shiro-neechan: btw
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: ill play the song first
14:31 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: yes?
14:32 CrumpetFiddler: did you want to ask something?
14:32 Shiro-neechan: use reference to clarify it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667825
14:32 Shiro-neechan: i assume you know how to use it
14:32 CrumpetFiddler: uuh
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: not really
14:33 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: i dont see this diff having as much wrong as the insane one tbh
14:33 Shiro-neechan: file>open difficulty> for reference
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: i had a lil sift thru the editor and it seemed okay
14:33 *CrumpetFiddler is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1246143 Tatsuya Yano - Let's Try It! [HD]] <osu!mania> |4K|
14:33 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: wow
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: i have very little issue with this diff
14:35 Shiro-neechan: uwu
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: there were a few small things at the start
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: but the last half is outta the question
14:36 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: this part
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: 00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|0,17719|3,17719|0,17933|1,17933|2,18147|2,18147|1,18362|3,18362|0,18576|0,18576|3,18790|2,18790|1,19004|1,19004|2) -
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i think that needs to be changed
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: it just feels super boring to play
14:37 Shiro-neechan: oh
14:37 Shiro-neechan: okay
14:38 CrumpetFiddler: im looking thru
14:38 CrumpetFiddler: i cant find anything wrong
14:39 Shiro-neechan: yay!
14:39 CrumpetFiddler: yeah no thats the only problem i have with that
14:39 CrumpetFiddler: thats one solid diff
14:40 CrumpetFiddler: ill do NM aswell seeings that didnt take long at all
14:40 Shiro-neechan: hmm ok
14:41 CrumpetFiddler: theres a lil bit i can see
14:41 CrumpetFiddler: not much more than HD
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: put a note here somewhere
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:00:790 (790|2) -
14:42 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: here to
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:362 (3362|2) -
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: just one more thing i think
14:44 Shiro-neechan: okie\
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: 2*
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: 01:19:647 (79647|3,79647|0,80076|3,80076|0,80504|3,80504|0) -
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: very boring pattern, might want to make it 3 types of doubles, 1|2, 2|3. 3|4
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: something like that maybe
14:45 Shiro-neechan: hmm okay
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: this parts questionable i think it might be a bit to hard for people starting out, but its your call
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: v
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: 01:22:219 (82219|1,82504|2) -
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: on the other hand it makes the song flow better
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: so yeah thats up to you
14:46 Shiro-neechan: it's not
14:46 Shiro-neechan: well you can hear the sound tbh
14:46 CrumpetFiddler: yeah, its vital to the song
14:46 CrumpetFiddler: i just dont know how good newcomers are to lns
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: besides that tho
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i can find
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: Whats the thread for this beatmap?
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: ill upload it there
14:47 Shiro-neechan: okay if you're done, you can post it ( i expect that you know how to do it)
14:47 Shiro-neechan: oh wait
14:48 Shiro-neechan: t/571999
14:48 CrumpetFiddler: i can do that XD
14:48 Shiro-neechan: XD


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13:13 CrumpetFiddler: hi
13:14 Shiro-neechan: hi
13:14 CrumpetFiddler: im sure you dont know me, im not that popular
13:14 CrumpetFiddler: i saw your post, you need a song modded?
13:15 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:16 CrumpetFiddler: i Can help you out with that, id prefer to do it in chat (here) tho, not thru posting directly to forums
13:16 Shiro-neechan: oh irc
13:16 Shiro-neechan: sure
13:16 CrumpetFiddler: np the map?
13:16 Shiro-neechan: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/588635 here]
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: aaa my supporters gone
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: lemme renew that first
13:17 Shiro-neechan: aaa
13:17 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:17 CrumpetFiddler: aaa
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: what diff is it your most concerned with?
13:18 Shiro-neechan: MX but you can also check NM and HD
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: (What one should i focus most on)
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: ok lemme just try playing it quickl
13:18 CrumpetFiddler: u
13:19 Shiro-neechan: it's LN map tbh
13:20 CrumpetFiddler: ln maps can still be ranked provided they are done properly
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: most of my problems with the maps arnt the lns
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: altho some do concern me
13:21 Shiro-neechan: hmm
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: ill focus on mx rn
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: ill check HD after
13:21 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: 00:02:576 (2576|1) -
13:21 CrumpetFiddler: that note doesnt looks snapped in
13:22 CrumpetFiddler: or is this mapped on 1/12?
13:22 CrumpetFiddler: also that note doesnt really have a sound behind it, so id doesnt even need to be there alltogether
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: i have to say, watch out when your doing these
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: 00:02:504 (2504|0,2576|1,2647|2) -
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: Alot of them only has 2 sounds behind thmef
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: them*
13:23 CrumpetFiddler: having 3 notes feels weird to play
13:24 Shiro-neechan: it's snapped but i decide to put it on 1/6
13:24 CrumpetFiddler: okay, thats fine then
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: even tho im pointing out all things i can find wrong with this
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: gotta praise this
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: 00:05:504 (5504|2,5504|3,5647|0,5790|3,5790|2,5933|1,6076|0,6076|3,6219|2) -
13:25 CrumpetFiddler: so good
13:26 Shiro-neechan: aaaa thanks
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 1|2|3|4
13:26 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 00:06:790 (6790|0,6790|3,6790|1) - i would say change this
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: 00:06:790 (6790|0,6790|3,6790|1) -
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: oops
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: to maybe 1|3|4
13:26 CrumpetFiddler: so its different from the one just below
13:27 Shiro-neechan: ok but i have to move this 00:06:647 (6647|2,6647|3) - to 1|2 to prevent chord jack
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: these here dont make much sense
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: 00:09:219 (9219|3,9266|2,9314|1) -
13:27 Shiro-neechan: hmm
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: that be fine
13:27 CrumpetFiddler: the one i hld earlier
13:28 CrumpetFiddler: theres no beats behind what you mapped there
13:28 CrumpetFiddler: id say just keep one note there
13:29 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think this should end in a quad, you end another in a quad, but thats justified as it has a sound behind it
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: 00:09:790 (9790|2,10219|1,10219|0,10219|3) -
13:29 CrumpetFiddler: 00:16:076 (16076|0,16123|1,16171|2) - youve done this again, id say do the same thing as before
13:30 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:30 CrumpetFiddler: 00:16:647 (16647|3,17076|1,17076|0,17076|2) - quad again
13:31 Shiro-neechan: that's not the case because it started LN not quad
13:31 Shiro-neechan: LN>triple
13:31 CrumpetFiddler: as in it ends in a quad
13:31 CrumpetFiddler: it doesnt have the sound that it should, i'd just suggest removing one of the notes at the end
13:32 CrumpetFiddler: 00:17:504 (17504|1,17504|3,17504|0) - i can see what youve done here, and what im going to suggest is entirely subjective i think the parts fine. but you could just use doubles and remove triples all together
13:32 CrumpetFiddler: thats literally just preference tho, so you can choos what you want to do with that
13:33 Shiro-neechan: i'll remain that part because of the hitsound
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: thats fine
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: im not sure about this
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: v
13:33 CrumpetFiddler: 00:19:933 (19933|0,19981|1,20028|2) -
13:34 Shiro-neechan: i'm sure that it's not snapped
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: id say move this to |2|
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:20:362 (20362|2) -
13:34 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: these sections you seem to have nailed
13:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:24:647 (24647|3,24647|0,24790|2,24790|3,24790|1,24933|0,25076|2,25076|3,25219|1,25219|3,25219|0) -
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: nothing wrong with any of those it looks like
13:35 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:35 Shiro-neechan: for consistency play
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: again here, im not sure
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: 00:26:219 (26219|3,26266|2,26314|1,26362|0) -
13:35 CrumpetFiddler: it sounds ok, but it feels super off to play
13:36 Shiro-neechan: see
13:36 Shiro-neechan: i guess i have to change it
13:36 CrumpetFiddler: im trying to see how i can fix it to give you an idea
13:36 Shiro-neechan: ikr :)
13:37 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667605
13:37 CrumpetFiddler: that feels better, but id say fiddle around with that until your happy with it
13:38 Shiro-neechan: oh nice
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: a probelm i had when playing your song, theres alot of jacks
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:27:504 (27504|2) - move to |1|
13:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:27:647 (27647|3) - move to |3|
13:39 CrumpetFiddler: removes jacks from that section entirely
13:39 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:39 CrumpetFiddler: theres not enough beat to justify a triple 00:29:076 (29076|2,29076|0,29076|1) -
13:40 CrumpetFiddler: id say consider making that a single note, or a double
13:40 CrumpetFiddler: either would be ok
13:41 Shiro-neechan: ok but i'll go for double note
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: thatd still be okay
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: no beat at the end of this ln
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: 00:31:504 (31504|2) -
13:41 CrumpetFiddler: probs delete that note
13:41 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: there is a beat at the start of this ln and you didnt place a note there, and theres a triple with little sound behind it, id say make the start of the ln a double and put a single note where the triple is
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:32:362 (32362|0,32504|3,32504|1,32504|2) -
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:32:790 (32790|1) - you could justify putting a not midway into this ln as there is a sound
13:42 CrumpetFiddler: note*
13:43 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: i myself am not a massive fan of lns songs, but i can still say that the way youve done the first ln, is albeit good
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: just odd to hit
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: id say re-arrange them to make them more finger friendly
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: and probably remove the note youve got placed in there
13:43 CrumpetFiddler: 00:33:219 (33219|2,33362|1,33362|0,33504|3,33647|1) -
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: id say maybe
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667646
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: something like that
13:45 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:45 Shiro-neechan: oh nice
13:45 CrumpetFiddler: feels alot smoother to play
13:46 CrumpetFiddler: id say after this ln place a note, and put doubles where the triples are, be sure to avoid jacks 00:35:504 (35504|3) -
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: 00:39:790 (39790|3) -
13:47 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: something like this maybe
13:47 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667656
13:48 CrumpetFiddler: remove one of the notes at the end of this ln 00:41:933 (41933|2,42219|3,42219|0) -
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: not sure how i feel about this triple
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: 00:42:790 (42790|2,42790|0,42790|1) -
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: id say make it a double
13:49 Shiro-neechan: why remove one note? i think it's not the case
13:49 Shiro-neechan: okie
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: its ok if you think some of these changes you shouldnt implement
13:49 CrumpetFiddler: these are all opinion based ^u^
13:50 Shiro-neechan: uwu
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: id say you could add a note midway on this ln
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: 00:43:933 (43933|3) -
13:50 CrumpetFiddler: there is a beat there
13:50 Shiro-neechan: no check it 25% playback
13:50 Shiro-neechan: playback rate
13:51 CrumpetFiddler: theres a tiny *ding* sound
13:51 CrumpetFiddler: im always on 25%
13:51 Shiro-neechan: you mean here 00:43:933 (43933|3) -
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: yeah
13:52 Shiro-neechan: oh god
13:52 Shiro-neechan: i din't notice
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: XD
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: thats my job :)
13:52 CrumpetFiddler: 00:44:933 (44933|0,45362|2,45362|1,45362|3) - again the triples, id say make another double
13:52 Shiro-neechan: aaa
13:52 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:45:790 (45790|3,46219|0,46219|2,46219|1) - same as before
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:47:076 (47076|2,47076|3,47076|0) -
13:53 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:48:362 (48362|0,48362|3,48362|1) - you could make this a quad
13:53 CrumpetFiddler: you made it a quad near the start of the song, for consistancy you should make this a quad too
13:54 Shiro-neechan: yeah
13:54 CrumpetFiddler: make a double 00:49:647 (49647|1,49647|2,49647|0) -
13:54 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:54 CrumpetFiddler: 00:49:219 (49219|0,49219|1) - "this is before the other one" you could make the start of this ln a double
13:55 CrumpetFiddler: probs put another note beside this 00:49:933 (49933|2) -
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:52:219 (52219|0,52219|1,52219|2) - make doubles
13:56 Shiro-neechan: 00:49:219 (49219|0,49219|1) - i'll stick to 1LN to prevent double shield
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: make the start of the ln a double, and the double a single v
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: v
13:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:52:504 (52504|3,52647|1,52647|2) -
13:57 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:57 CrumpetFiddler: oh one ln, just another note beside it
13:57 Shiro-neechan: oh okay
13:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:53:076 (53076|1,53076|3,53076|2) - make doubles
13:59 Shiro-neechan: ok
13:59 CrumpetFiddler: so this part is ok 00:53:362 (53362|2,53362|0,53504|2,53504|0,53647|0,53647|2,53790|0,53790|2,53933|1,53933|0,54076|1,54076|0,54219|0,54219|1,54362|1,54362|0) -
13:59 CrumpetFiddler: but im my opinion the first beat is the most heard one
14:00 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:00 CrumpetFiddler: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667712
14:00 CrumpetFiddler: i would suggest revisiting that pattern, but this emphasises the louder beats of the song
14:01 Shiro-neechan: i'll stick to chord pattern to emphasize the tack hitsound
14:01 CrumpetFiddler: thats all good
14:01 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think thats wrong
14:02 Shiro-neechan: yeah
14:02 CrumpetFiddler: id say make these single notes
14:02 CrumpetFiddler: 00:55:647 (55647|3,55647|0,55933|3,55933|1,56076|0,56076|2) -
14:03 Shiro-neechan: actually that's single note in NM and HD
14:03 Shiro-neechan: but i think it's not the case in MX
14:03 CrumpetFiddler: i think it should be, they arnt loud enough to be considered doubles and it felt a lil weird
14:03 Shiro-neechan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667720
14:05 CrumpetFiddler: 00:56:504 (56504|0,56552|1,56600|2,56647|3,56695|0,56742|1,56790|2,56838|3) - trying to find a cleaner way to do this
14:05 CrumpetFiddler: i believe after that it should end in a quad but to do that youll need to play around with this section, ill try to give you a rough idea
14:05 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: i think its slightly out of beat
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667732
14:07 CrumpetFiddler: this is okay. but i suggest going back and changing it till your happy with it
14:07 Shiro-neechan: yeah i'll consider this
14:08 CrumpetFiddler: normally id say this is bad 00:57:790 (57790|0,57790|3) -
14:08 CrumpetFiddler: but because its the chorus i think you can get away with it
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: 01:00:790 (60790|2) - you can probs put another note besides this
14:10 Shiro-neechan: okie
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: ill say this because its a big offender
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: in the chorus
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: there are alot of jacks
14:10 Shiro-neechan: yeah
14:10 CrumpetFiddler: to fix this youd need to rework it ~ remove Lns make doubles singles
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: im not telling you to do this
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: just making you aware of them
14:11 CrumpetFiddler: put a note besides this ln 01:02:076 (62076|2) -
14:11 Shiro-neechan: nah i think shield can also exist in ranked maps
14:11 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: im not too positive i think some songs have gotten away with a bit
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: heart of witch did i think
14:12 Shiro-neechan: oh
14:12 Shiro-neechan: but that's quadjacks XD
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: another *ding* sound thats not got notes with it
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: 01:03:219 (63219|2,63219|0) -
14:12 CrumpetFiddler: i just dont like heart of witch XD
14:13 Shiro-neechan: lol
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: id say remove the doubles, 01:04:647 (64647|1,64647|2) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: theres no sound there
14:13 Shiro-neechan: oh okay
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: add a note on the start of the lns 01:05:076 (65076|0,65076|2) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: again, no sound here 01:06:362 (66362|1,66362|3) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: 01:07:076 (67076|0,67076|2) -
14:13 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: again there
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: 01:08:076 (68076|2,68076|0) -
14:13 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:08:790 (68790|1,68790|3) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:09:219 (69219|3,69219|1) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: 01:09:790 (69790|1,69790|3) -
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:14 CrumpetFiddler: probs delete one of these 01:10:504 (70504|2,70504|0) -
14:15 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: sorry im back
14:17 Shiro-neechan: ayy
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: 01:10:933 (70933|3,70933|1) -
14:17 CrumpetFiddler: remove one
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: 01:10:933 (70933|3,70933|1) - remove these
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: remove one
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: 01:11:933 (71933|3,71933|1) -
14:18 CrumpetFiddler: remove both 01:12:219 (72219|1,72219|3) -
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: the next ln, should be fine how it is
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: theres no / little beat 01:14:504 (74504|2,74504|0,74504|3) -
14:19 CrumpetFiddler: theres no beat entirely here 01:14:647 (74647|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:15:076 (75076|2) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: not much beat
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:14:933 (74933|3,74933|0,74933|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 01:15:504 (75504|0) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:15:933 (75933|3) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:362 (76362|1) -
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:20 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:647 (76647|1,76647|3,76647|0) - remove triples for maybe a single
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: posssibly a double
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:16:790 (76790|2) - no beat
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:17:219 (77219|0) -
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: ^
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:18:362 (78362|0,78362|2,78362|3) - make doubles
14:21 CrumpetFiddler: 01:19:504 (79504|2) - no beat
14:21 Shiro-neechan: why you focus on beat that it's not the case in that section
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: im not sure tbh
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: i should of just said the section :/
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: oh eait
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: gimme a sec
14:22 Shiro-neechan: i'm using hitsound tbh
14:22 CrumpetFiddler: ok i fucked up
14:23 Shiro-neechan: lol
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: those notes that are single, keep them in, i see how the hitsound has them fit in
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: i still think the triples should be doubles though
14:23 CrumpetFiddler: besides the end part (01:17:790 (77790|0,77790|3,77933|0,77933|3,77933|1) - )
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: i feel like youve done this ln backwards, the beat starts slow and gets higher 01:20:933 (80933|3,81076|2,81219|1,81362|0) -
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: change to this
14:24 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667792
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: and reverse this section like how i did the other one
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: 01:22:647 (82647|0,82790|1,82933|2,83076|3) -
14:25 CrumpetFiddler: youll need to move the notes inbetween to make it work aswell
14:26 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:27 CrumpetFiddler: 01:23:504 (83504|2,83647|2,83790|2) - id say move the middle note to avoid jacks
14:28 CrumpetFiddler: 01:24:362 (84362|1,84504|2,84647|0,84790|3) - im not to sure about this
14:28 CrumpetFiddler: it might be because i cant ln tho
14:29 Shiro-neechan: i just do that for the change of variations
14:29 CrumpetFiddler: this section here further on, youve fixed the lns XD 01:27:790 (87790|0,87933|1,88076|2,88219|3,89504|3,89647|2,89790|1,89933|0) -
14:29 Shiro-neechan: uwu
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: id say watch the shields at the end, but with the beat of the music that cant really be helped imo
14:30 Shiro-neechan: lol yeah
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i can really see for MX
14:30 CrumpetFiddler: would you like me to do HD?
14:31 Shiro-neechan: yay! why not if you still want to check mod
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: tbh i got nothing better to do
14:31 Shiro-neechan: btw
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: ill play the song first
14:31 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:31 CrumpetFiddler: yes?
14:32 CrumpetFiddler: did you want to ask something?
14:32 Shiro-neechan: use reference to clarify it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7667825
14:32 Shiro-neechan: i assume you know how to use it
14:32 CrumpetFiddler: uuh
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: not really
14:33 Shiro-neechan: ok
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: i dont see this diff having as much wrong as the insane one tbh
14:33 Shiro-neechan: file>open difficulty> for reference
14:33 CrumpetFiddler: i had a lil sift thru the editor and it seemed okay
14:33 *CrumpetFiddler is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1246143 Tatsuya Yano - Let's Try It! [HD]] <osu!mania> |4K|
14:33 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: wow
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: i have very little issue with this diff
14:35 Shiro-neechan: uwu
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: there were a few small things at the start
14:35 CrumpetFiddler: but the last half is outta the question
14:36 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: this part
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: 00:17:504 (17504|3,17504|0,17719|3,17719|0,17933|1,17933|2,18147|2,18147|1,18362|3,18362|0,18576|0,18576|3,18790|2,18790|1,19004|1,19004|2) -
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i think that needs to be changed
14:37 CrumpetFiddler: it just feels super boring to play
14:37 Shiro-neechan: oh
14:37 Shiro-neechan: okay
14:38 CrumpetFiddler: im looking thru
14:38 CrumpetFiddler: i cant find anything wrong
14:39 Shiro-neechan: yay!
14:39 CrumpetFiddler: yeah no thats the only problem i have with that
14:39 CrumpetFiddler: thats one solid diff
14:40 CrumpetFiddler: ill do NM aswell seeings that didnt take long at all
14:40 Shiro-neechan: hmm ok
14:41 CrumpetFiddler: theres a lil bit i can see
14:41 CrumpetFiddler: not much more than HD
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: put a note here somewhere
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:00:790 (790|2) -
14:42 Shiro-neechan: hmm
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: here to
14:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:362 (3362|2) -
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: just one more thing i think
14:44 Shiro-neechan: okie\
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: 2*
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: 01:19:647 (79647|3,79647|0,80076|3,80076|0,80504|3,80504|0) -
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: very boring pattern, might want to make it 3 types of doubles, 1|2, 2|3. 3|4
14:44 CrumpetFiddler: something like that maybe
14:45 Shiro-neechan: hmm okay
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: this parts questionable i think it might be a bit to hard for people starting out, but its your call
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: v
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: 01:22:219 (82219|1,82504|2) -
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: on the other hand it makes the song flow better
14:45 CrumpetFiddler: so yeah thats up to you
14:46 Shiro-neechan: it's not
14:46 Shiro-neechan: well you can hear the sound tbh
14:46 CrumpetFiddler: yeah, its vital to the song
14:46 CrumpetFiddler: i just dont know how good newcomers are to lns
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: besides that tho
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: thats all i can find
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: Whats the thread for this beatmap?
14:47 CrumpetFiddler: ill upload it there
14:47 Shiro-neechan: okay if you're done, you can post it ( i expect that you know how to do it)
14:47 Shiro-neechan: oh wait
14:48 Shiro-neechan: t/571999
14:48 CrumpetFiddler: i can do that XD
14:48 Shiro-neechan: XD


Good luck goin for ranked bud


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MX
00:09:290 (9290|1) - This note isn't necessary.
01:03:219 (63219|2) - This LN should started at 1:03:290
01:08:933 (68933|2) - This LN should started at 1:08:969

HD
01:06:647 (66647|2) - This should be a LN

Wow good map. I almost thought i couldnt find any mistake 8-)
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Hi, I'm from the noobest modding q ever
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MX
00:09:290 (9290|1) - This note isn't necessary. :arrow: It's necessary. Well you can hear it in 25% playback rate. Instead of removing it, changed the pattern so that it can be readable.
01:03:219 (63219|2) - This LN should started at 1:03:290
01:08:933 (68933|2) - This LN should started at 1:08:969 :arrow: It's snapped if you put it. You can hear it in 25%playback rate.

HD
01:06:647 (66647|2) - This should be a LN :arrow: I know but i'll stick to note.

Wow good map. I almost thought i couldnt find any mistake 8-)
GL for ranking


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Hii hii. . . mod as requested

i'll just do a quick mod coz you make me cry when you request to my queue

MX
00:06:219 - why did u suddenly stop map the LN here?
00:09:790 (9790|0,9790|1,10076|3,10219|3,10219|0,10219|2) - ctrl+j (ofc rearrange the notes below to avoid conflict)
00:13:790 (13790|0) - no sound here
00:28:933 (28933|3) - make this LN
00:30:647 (30647|1) - ^(gonna stop pointing this out, up to u now if you will apply)
00:50:933 - add note
00:56:933 - why triple only now?
01:03:362 - 01:27:504 - 01:27:647 - add note


Well then that's all. . . . .
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kakain lang sandali lolol


m4m

feel free to reject hue

|1|2|3|4|

ill skip nm ok na sya sakin hehe

Hard
00:01:790 (1790|1) - move to |3| and this one to |1| feels more comfy
00:20:076 - NM has ln sa part na to so y not sa hd din hehe
00:33:647 (33647|0) - extend ln up to 00:34:362 -
00:36:219 (36219|2) - ^ 00:36:647 -
00:37:076 (37076|2) - ^ 00:37:504 -
00:37:647 (37647|2,37933|3,38076|2) - swap col
00:38:076 (38076|0,38504|0) - move nalang yung normal note sa |3| if not intended
00:40:147 - deserves a note imo
00:41:362 - same^
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00:43:933 (43933|2) - extend 00:44:362 -
00:46:219 - should be doubles? double kasi sa nm or maybe remove one nalang sa nm dif
00:46:933 (46933|3) - extend 00:47:362 -
00:48:790 (48790|3,49504|3) - ^
01:03:362 - missing note :D
01:26:076 - add maybe
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01:26:362 (86362|3) - move here 01:26:504 -
01:26:790 (86790|3) - move din 01:26:933 -
01:27:219 (87219|1) - move din 01:27:290 - tapos add dito 01:27:362 -
01:27:933 (87933|3,88076|1) - move one col to the left
01:32:933 (92933|3,92933|2) - should be 3 notes?
01:33:647 - would add here and here 01:33:719 -




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