For the introduction, every pattern go from left to right. I hesitated a lot before making this comment because it could be a great idea since it stricly follows the guitar appergios but in final i think it would be better to alternate with patterns going from right to left sometime.
00:30:024 (30024|2,30024|3) - I was really expected LN here
00:41:586 (41586|2,41986|2,42386|2,42786|2) - Okay this is not really an anchor but still i find it too bad to have the (2) colum occupied so much. I think you should move 00:42:386 (42386|3) to (2) and so the other notes accordingly
00:46:386 (46386|0) - I think it should be at 2, before and after for the same drum moment you always had this single not on the same row of the previous LN, for example :
00:37:986 (37986|1,39986|1)
00:42:386 (42386|3,43186|3)
00:55:186 (55186|3,55986|3)
00:52:786 (52786|1) - Would move it at (2) for the same reasons as above
01:00:786 (60786|3,60786|0) - Maybe just one titey tom is enough here especially if you set the volume at 70%
01:01:386 (61386|1) - Maybe remove it. It feels weird to have a jack chords but then a simple jack at 01:01:586 (61586|3,61786|3)
01:14:586 - What about addind an note here ? Its exactly between 2 musical phrases and could recall what you did at 00:58:386 (58386|0,58586|3)
(But okay that would mean adding same note at 01:27:386 too)
01:33:586 (93586|2) - Maybe move it to (0) to avoid the 4 jacks 01:32:786 (92786|2,93186|2,93586|2,93986|2)
01:46:386 (106386|2) - I think you should try to move it to (1) to still alternate with 01:45:186 (105186|3,105586|1,105986|3) like you did at 01:32:386 (92386|3,92786|1,93186|3,93586|1) for the same guitar event
02:15:186 (135186|2) - Would move it to (1). Most of the time you had those note on the same column of the previous LN (which is nice) except some exceptions where its better to have it somewhere else. But here it would be better to have it on (1) i think
From 02:18:786 to 02:42:386
I think you could make the LN placement more interesting. Why not changing the LN's column every time the guitar change its chords ? That would mean :
From 02:18:786 to 02:21:586 - All LNs are on a same column
From 02:21:986 to 02:24:786 - All LNs are on another column
From 02:25:186 to 02:27:986 - All LNs are on another column
etc
(basically change column every 4 LNs except around the end of this part where the guitar change its chords every 2 measures but i think you got it)
02:18:786 - Maybe add a finish here
02:44:386 - Im surprised there is no finished here o-o maybe you considered the one already in the song is enough
No more HS from that kiai ?03:07:986 (187986|2) - Maybe move it to (0) to have the jack with the previous chords like you used to did before during the kiai when you could
03:33:586 (213586|1) - Move it to (0) for the same reasons
From 04:26:786 to 04:51:986 - Oh well this time you change the LNs column according to the guitar chords, i guess i didnt have to explain that much before xD
04:39:186 (279186|1,279286|3) - CTRL+G those 2, the trills should always go to the same direction i think
04:42:386 (282386|0,282486|2) - Same remark, either CTRL+G or move 04:42:386 (282386|0) to (3)
05:36:769 (336769|3) - Move it to (2), it feels a bit weird to have this note on the same jacks as 05:37:169 (337169|3,337569|3) while the singing is clearly starting a new phrase.
06:41:069 (401069|0,401169|0) - Nop please, this mini-jacks are true evil :'( (and you didnt use one before so this is really not recommended here)
06:54:769 - I think the end is a bit long for nothing, maybe you can end the map here, just a bit after the volume start decreasing and when the bass & guitar end a melodic part
Clean diff overall, the mapping fits the song well and so is the hitsounding (at least at the beginning). Best of luck if you aim to get this ranked owo)b