From Christmas Queue :3
There's many of this song in the queue, but this one still pick my interest with antimeta
[Easy]
00:16:596 - this actually still has vocal that you follow here, if it is too small for you, you also follow the smaller vocal one at 00:19:263 -
00:21:763 - try make it like:
http://puu.sh/t0q5l/a345e3388a.png , so it could form a consistant 1/1 jack (is it even jack xD?) that you did at 00:16:429 (16429|2,16763|2) - to correspond with vocal PR.
00:31:263 (31263|5,31429|3) - Switch column so it would follow the ascending vocal here, make it consistent similar with 00:28:596 (28596|3,28763|5) -
00:40:763 - I personally think that the pattern should be like :
http://puu.sh/t0nmQ/20d1590b61.png instead, because the spacing jack doesn't really fit considering the vocal melody is actually ascending higher there.
[Normal]
00:24:929 - 00:25:263 - 00:25:596 - seems awkward you suddenly didn't emphasize vocal and make it a 1/2 single stream here..
00:29:179 - the 1/4 doesn't get mapped, but 00:31:846 - get mapped? yeah i know normal supposed to cover it simple, but this still needs to be consistent, either the 1/4 get mapped or not.
00:49:346 - if you want to follow 1/4 thi should be mapped too.
00:54:429 - well this isn't either crash or vocal here, i would suggest delete to maintain the rythm the kiai try to follows.
01:00:096 - hmm i get it about the pattern variation, but this just like comes out of a blue, while 00:13:096 - 00:07:763 - , and etc still an ordinary ntoe.
01:05:513 (65513|2) - kinda agree with the modder before, the kick and melody occured at 01:05:429 - , the same as 01:04:929 (64929|6,65263|4) -
[Hard]
00:16:096 - not sure why you keep this as single, the clap is loud enough to be double.
00:16:596 - basically the same as easy diff, it's the same as 00:19:263 - , it has its own vocal and hithat there.
00:19:263 (19263|2,19429|2) - not sure what this jack follow, doesn't seem to follow vocal/kick instrument either.
00:23:096 (23096|4) - this should be at column 8 if you want to maintain triple jack consistency with 00:21:763 (21763|6,21929|6,22096|6) - , they are basically the same in terms of melody vocal here.
00:27:096 (27096|5) - try move this to column.3? 00:27:096 (27096|8,27096|5) - essentially a one hand with index and pinkie finger hitting on normal key layout, which is too especially especially with all the LN and double at previous pattern, combined with jack at 00:27:429 (27429|5,27596|5) -
00:51:929 (51929|5,52096|6) - try switch column to maintain jack consistency with 00:50:263 (50263|0,50596|0) - ?
01:04:763 (64763|6) - move to col.6 to maintain jack for vocal there?
01:08:096 - 01:08:263 - you can still layer these vocal with double i think.. like 01:06:596 -
[Insane]
00:20:846 - i hear a synth here, better add note here.
00:49:513 - i believe i hear synth here. normal also cover some of it.
00:51:929 - add one more note for kick here.
00:54:596 - better make this triple so you would be consistent with triple at 00:54:763 - 00:54:929 -
01:01:596 (61596|7,61763|6) - switch column to prevent unneeded jack at 01:01:429 (61429|7,61596|7) - ?
01:02:263 - delete one note to be consistent with 01:02:596 - ,etc.
01:05:429 - double stair here seems awkward since at other part you use single stair unless for crash/vocal.
01:15:929 - add note for crash here.
Good luck for the map.
i might miss some, but overall this is solid :3