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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年6月6日 at 下午 06:17:10

Artist: BABYMETAL
Title: Akatsuki
Tags: su-metal yuimetal moametal suzuka nakamoto yui mizuno moa kikuchi
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7779kb
Play Time: 05:20
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Download: BABYMETAL - Akatsuki
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//2016 LMS:SE2 RO16 Tiebreaker//


Thx modder :D


Thanks for the star <3
Nishizumi wow 6 stars Thx a lot <3
forelych 3 stars Thankssss!!!
Grimbow 2 stars :D
Skylish 2 stars :3
chika_chan 2 stars :P
Arrival 1 star :>
toara_fict 1 star ><
Labyr 1 star :3
iceOC 1 star :k
-[ ix Ishida xi ]- 1 star :O
404 AccNotFound 1 star >_>
Etsu 1 star >_<


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For anyone in case interested,here is the fossil version XD(before submitted) https://puu.sh/rCX6A.osz
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2016-11-10 18:16 iloveyou4ever: Hi,I want to do you usually testplay or mod taiko maps?
2016-11-10 18:17 Doyak: I can testplay, but mod uhh
2016-11-10 18:17 iloveyou4ever: I have a taiko map but i don't know if you're willing to test it :<
2016-11-10 18:17 Doyak: I would m4m
2016-11-10 18:17 Doyak: I am getting a testpaly right now
2016-11-10 18:17 iloveyou4ever: ehh just testplay is fine,it is not submitted yet
2016-11-10 18:17 Doyak: and I have something to look at after that
2016-11-10 18:17 Doyak: then I can testplay yours
2016-11-10 18:18 iloveyou4ever: ok Thx a lot :D maybe I just put the map link here and see if you like the song or not
2016-11-10 18:18 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/sdnxB.osz
2016-11-10 18:18 iloveyou4ever: 5.17* I think you can play this XDD
2016-11-10 18:19 Doyak: if that's not a troll then I should be able to xD
2016-11-10 18:19 iloveyou4ever: that's not troll xD,I think it's good(at least for me...)
2016-11-10 18:32 Doyak: Okay I start playing now
2016-11-10 18:33 iloveyou4ever: ok
2016-11-10 18:33 iloveyou4ever: I just afk for 5 min XD
2016-11-10 18:38 Doyak: stupid misses xD
2016-11-10 18:38 iloveyou4ever: yep you could FC this ofc xD
2016-11-10 18:40 iloveyou4ever: sadly you don't mod taiko...:3
2016-11-10 18:40 Doyak: 00:51:402 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - the drum is actually intense at 00:51:931 (182,183,184,185,186,187) -
2016-11-10 18:40 Doyak: so I think the density should be reversed
2016-11-10 18:41 Doyak: 01:01:725 - 01:01:814 - leaving these empty... hmm
2016-11-10 18:42 iloveyou4ever: change for 00:51 one :3
2016-11-10 18:42 iloveyou4ever: but there is no drum sound between 01:01:725 there...
2016-11-10 18:42 iloveyou4ever: I feel weird there also but idk how to deal with it
2016-11-10 18:42 Doyak: 01:09:402 (302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - I feel the song's intensity has been a bit calmed down, but uhh I don't see much difference
2016-11-10 18:43 Doyak: there is definitely drums at 01:01:725 - and 01:01:814 -
2016-11-10 18:43 Doyak: it's just a little smaller than 01:01:902 (260) - , but same kind
2016-11-10 18:43 iloveyou4ever: 01:01:814 -
2016-11-10 18:44 iloveyou4ever: I add a note here so it may play better
2016-11-10 18:45 iloveyou4ever: 01:09:402 -
2016-11-10 18:45 iloveyou4ever: I change to something like this
2016-11-10 18:45 iloveyou4ever: 01:09:402 -
2016-11-10 18:45 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/sdotE.jpg
2016-11-10 18:45 iloveyou4ever: sorry wrong link XD
2016-11-10 18:46 Doyak: hmm yeah I think simplying it would be cool
2016-11-10 18:46 Doyak: since the song is actually stronger on 01:12:931 - , but you only use 1/2s here so yeah
2016-11-10 18:46 Doyak: 01:16:461 (353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369) - I may suggest this http://puu.sh/sdox5/dec5efbcb6.jpg
2016-11-10 18:47 Doyak: since the drums are mostly gone after 01:17:167 -
2016-11-10 18:47 Doyak: and the piano sounds start there
2016-11-10 18:47 Doyak: which I think fits better with kats
2016-11-10 18:48 iloveyou4ever: nice suggestion and explanation!!!
2016-11-10 18:49 Doyak: 01:36:931 (519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527) - I would reduce some intensity here, since the drum gets more intense at 01:37:637 -
2016-11-10 18:49 Doyak: so that you can emphasize them better
2016-11-10 18:49 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:490 - and 01:13:019 - I add note here
2016-11-10 18:50 Doyak: 01:40:196 - fill this out?
2016-11-10 18:50 iloveyou4ever: yes I didn't realise I could emphasis themn better
2016-11-10 18:51 iloveyou4ever: emm I think leaving it blank is fine
2016-11-10 18:51 iloveyou4ever: highlighting 01:40:284 - and 01:40:461 - this
2016-11-10 18:51 Doyak: 01:42:931 - 01:43:019 - imo it's better to make these kats, so that that kind of drums are all represented as kats, including 01:41:872 - 01:41:961 -
2016-11-10 18:53 iloveyou4ever: ok I thought putting variation here but your yeah I would follow the drum sound here now
2016-11-10 18:54 Doyak: 01:50:431 - 01:50:519 - also feels better with kats, there's a cymbal sound and good with the drums and melodies
2016-11-10 18:54 Doyak: 01:54:225 - 01:54:314 - k's for same reason
2016-11-10 18:56 Doyak: 02:00:225 (731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742,743,744,745,746,747) - I think you need to emphasize the cymbals better here, like http://puu.sh/sdoPD/44a1cf2d96.jpg
2016-11-10 18:56 iloveyou4ever: 01:50:343 -
2016-11-10 18:56 iloveyou4ever: I change to ddkkk
2016-11-10 18:56 Doyak: random k's between them makes it less emphasizing imo
2016-11-10 18:57 iloveyou4ever: ok that sounds good also!! 02:00:225
2016-11-10 18:57 Doyak: 02:13:108 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - I think it's better to emphasize here more than 02:12:225 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - so that you can emphasize the transition to the next section
2016-11-10 18:58 Doyak: 02:17:167 (59,60,61,62,63) - 02:17:872 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - mind using same patterns here? Because the drums are kinda doing that
2016-11-10 18:59 Doyak: divided by 02:17:167 - 02:17:872 - cymbals
2016-11-10 18:59 iloveyou4ever: Ok!!
2016-11-10 19:00 Doyak: 02:22:725 (108) - imo better to disconnect
2016-11-10 19:00 iloveyou4ever: 02:17:167 -
2016-11-10 19:00 iloveyou4ever: and is it better to change to finisher?
2016-11-10 19:00 Doyak: oh that's good too
2016-11-10 19:00 Doyak: but maybe there are some other similar parts
2016-11-10 19:00 Doyak: you can try it on those if they exist
2016-11-10 19:01 iloveyou4ever: ok remove note at 02:22:725
2016-11-10 19:03 Doyak: 02:40:196 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275) - I guess you did this for variation, but the rhythm is a bit twisted for no reason I think?
2016-11-10 19:03 iloveyou4ever: map according to guitar pitch here
2016-11-10 19:03 Doyak: then why 02:40:637 - is d while 02:40:725 - is k?
2016-11-10 19:05 iloveyou4ever: I agree 02:17:167 - change to k
2016-11-10 19:05 iloveyou4ever: 02:40:637 -
2016-11-10 19:05 iloveyou4ever: my ctrl+c sucks...
2016-11-10 19:06 Doyak: sorry I can't give you good alternations
2016-11-10 19:06 Doyak: I'm not a good Taiko mapper xD
2016-11-10 19:06 iloveyou4ever: 02:40:725 - has same pitch as 02:40:637-,I will keep as k
2016-11-10 19:06 iloveyou4ever: your mod is very good tho
2016-11-10 19:07 iloveyou4ever: better than most of the taiko modder XD
2016-11-10 19:07 Doyak: xD
2016-11-10 19:07 Doyak: 02:47:784 - delete this? I think the stream is too long to represent nothing
2016-11-10 19:08 iloveyou4ever: ok,I don't wear headphone while mapping and my home is quite noisy ;;
2016-11-10 19:08 iloveyou4ever: so I may not hear some drum sounds clearly
2016-11-10 19:08 Doyak: oh it's hard to hear then really
2016-11-10 19:09 Doyak: I wear earphones in like 99.9% of the time playing osu so yeah
2016-11-10 19:09 iloveyou4ever: and I mix up quite some notes at the guitar+drum part here
2016-11-10 19:09 iloveyou4ever: ;w; that's great
2016-11-10 19:09 Doyak: hmm but the last guitar sound is 02:47:519 - here
2016-11-10 19:09 iloveyou4ever: modding quality will be better when wearing headphone I swear xD
2016-11-10 19:10 Doyak: and 02:47:784 - has only a very small drum
2016-11-10 19:10 iloveyou4ever: but here starts drum...
2016-11-10 19:10 iloveyou4ever: 02:47:608 -
2016-11-10 19:10 iloveyou4ever: I will leave here empty then
2016-11-10 19:10 Doyak: Well do as you want
2016-11-10 19:11 iloveyou4ever: and you inspire me how to do!!
2016-11-10 19:11 iloveyou4ever: awesome :D
2016-11-10 19:11 Doyak: 02:50:167 - how about d, so that you can emphasize 02:50:343 - 02:50:608 - 02:50:872 - better
2016-11-10 19:11 iloveyou4ever: oh yes I mapped this wrongly...
2016-11-10 19:12 Doyak: Oh wait
2016-11-10 19:12 Doyak: I hear some 1/6 guitars here
2016-11-10 19:13 Doyak: like 02:51:814 - 02:51:872 -
2016-11-10 19:14 iloveyou4ever: I map to drum here(but according to guitar pitch)
2016-11-10 19:14 iloveyou4ever: putting 1/6 here is too sudden and weird ;;
2016-11-10 19:14 Doyak: ah well then it's okay I guess
2016-11-10 19:15 Doyak: 03:15:402 (272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - hmm what's the meaning of this long stream?
2016-11-10 19:16 iloveyou4ever: guitar+drum here
2016-11-10 19:16 Doyak: then how about deleting 03:15:667 - this
2016-11-10 19:16 Doyak: and I think you can put really long stream 03:16:461 - here
2016-11-10 19:16 iloveyou4ever: nice idea!!
2016-11-10 19:17 Doyak: that's the most intense part of this section I think
2016-11-10 19:17 Doyak: also imo 03:19:284 - needs some disconnection
2016-11-10 19:17 Doyak: if that's not a full stream section
2016-11-10 19:20 iloveyou4ever: 03:16:461 -
2016-11-10 19:20 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/sdpN4.jpg
2016-11-10 19:21 iloveyou4ever: I change to something like this
2016-11-10 19:22 Doyak: omg I can't read it
2016-11-10 19:23 Doyak: use 1.4x sv speed please xD
2016-11-10 19:23 iloveyou4ever: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532886
2016-11-10 19:24 Doyak: I don't know how each of the notes would work but I hope it's okay
2016-11-10 19:24 iloveyou4ever: I think it's fine xD
2016-11-10 19:24 Doyak: 03:22:108 - from this part, how about focusing more on dons?
2016-11-10 19:25 Doyak: the drums dont have much of high-tone
2016-11-10 19:25 iloveyou4ever: 1/4 drum sound here onwards...
2016-11-10 19:25 Doyak: Yes I mean
2016-11-10 19:25 Doyak: too many kats
2016-11-10 19:25 Doyak: like there's no difference than other pats
2016-11-10 19:25 Doyak: but the drums here are mostly deep sounds
2016-11-10 19:26 iloveyou4ever: 03:22:461 -
2016-11-10 19:26 Doyak: Yeah except those 2/4th beat
2016-11-10 19:26 iloveyou4ever: ok I will focus on the secondth and fouth beat in each bars
2016-11-10 19:26 Doyak: everything else can be expressed as dons
2016-11-10 19:26 iloveyou4ever: maybe I will map k for 2/4th beat to emphasis the high tone drum sound
2016-11-10 19:26 iloveyou4ever: and other map as d
2016-11-10 19:27 Doyak: sounds good
2016-11-10 19:27 Doyak: 03:31:196 - add d?
2016-11-10 19:27 iloveyou4ever: sounds good too!!
2016-11-10 19:28 Doyak: 03:38:255 (479) - move to 03:38:608 - ?
2016-11-10 19:29 Doyak: 03:42:314 - imo should be k
2016-11-10 19:29 Doyak: 03:42:843 - also k
2016-11-10 19:30 iloveyou4ever: reject for 03:38:255 I think it's fine
2016-11-10 19:30 iloveyou4ever: 03:38:696 - 4 notes here can emphasis the long stream aonwards
2016-11-10 19:31 Doyak: from 03:41:872 - here, http://puu.sh/sdq8U/4f56c08037.jpg
2016-11-10 19:31 Doyak: or 03:42:931 - d too
2016-11-10 19:32 iloveyou4ever: nice change as your suggestion nice :D
2016-11-10 19:32 Doyak: 03:49:902 (585,586,587,588) - not much drums left here, just use 1/2s maybe?
2016-11-10 19:33 Doyak: I'd just do https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532910 this
2016-11-10 19:33 Doyak: shouldn't 03:59:167 - 03:59:696 - be ks?
2016-11-10 19:33 Doyak: 04:00:225 - as well
2016-11-10 19:33 iloveyou4ever: 03:50:078 - I think I will just remove this note only
2016-11-10 19:34 iloveyou4ever: the piano is important here
2016-11-10 19:34 Doyak: oh yeah if you meant piano then fill the 1/2s
2016-11-10 19:34 Doyak: 04:07:637 (658,659,660,661,662,663,664,665) - there's a drum pattern that has frequency of 1/1s
2016-11-10 19:35 iloveyou4ever: ok changed
2016-11-10 19:35 Doyak: so I think k d k d k ddk is better
2016-11-10 19:35 iloveyou4ever: nice point...
2016-11-10 19:35 Doyak: 04:09:049 - also k
2016-11-10 19:36 iloveyou4ever: ok
2016-11-10 19:36 Doyak: 04:12:137 - 04:12:225 - swap? 04:12:137 - has higher tone drum
2016-11-10 19:37 Doyak: 04:25:858 - uhh why manually edited break?
2016-11-10 19:37 iloveyou4ever: I think there are main drum sound for every beat in this part
2016-11-10 19:38 iloveyou4ever: and I didn't map to guitar here
2016-11-10 19:38 iloveyou4ever: well there are density notes and streams before XD
2016-11-10 19:39 iloveyou4ever: I think putting break here is good to let player have a rest
2016-11-10 19:39 Doyak: but the drum pattern is like 04:11:872 - 04:12:137 - 04:12:402 - 04:12:578 -
2016-11-10 19:39 Doyak: I mean
2016-11-10 19:39 Doyak: http://puu.sh/sdqqn/f4a231a1da.jpg manually edited
2016-11-10 19:39 Doyak: http://puu.sh/sdqqO/89730784ae.jpg automatic
2016-11-10 19:39 Doyak: look at the color xD
2016-11-10 19:40 iloveyou4ever: o.o is it fine..?
2016-11-10 19:40 Doyak: Well I don't see a time difference anyway
2016-11-10 19:40 Doyak: but you can remove it
2016-11-10 19:40 Doyak: by dragging the end point to the far right
2016-11-10 19:41 iloveyou4ever: ok I understand what you mean at 04:11:872
2016-11-10 19:41 iloveyou4ever: that's nice suggestion :3 and I change to ddkddkddkdkdkdkkd
2016-11-10 19:44 Doyak: 04:36:402 (42,43) - this snap is vague
2016-11-10 19:44 Doyak: seems like the drum is on like 04:36:343 - and 04:36:519 - or something
2016-11-10 19:45 Doyak: you can say 04:36:402 - has a vocal but 04:36:490 - is uhh
2016-11-10 19:45 iloveyou4ever: map to drum at 04:36:225 -
2016-11-10 19:46 iloveyou4ever: but for 04:36:402- I want to map as vocal here :<
2016-11-10 19:46 iloveyou4ever: since 04:36:402 - the high tone vocal is more sigificant in this part
2016-11-10 19:46 Doyak: Yes b ut
2016-11-10 19:46 Doyak: 04:36:490 - what about this note
2016-11-10 19:47 Doyak: I think the drum is still being 1/6 here
2016-11-10 19:47 iloveyou4ever: I can't hear clearly as the home is really noisy...
2016-11-10 19:47 Doyak: Well check it yourself when it gets quiet
2016-11-10 19:48 iloveyou4ever: ok...
2016-11-10 19:48 Doyak: 04:49:108 - better to be k?
2016-11-10 19:49 iloveyou4ever: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532957
2016-11-10 19:49 iloveyou4ever: what if I change like this?
2016-11-10 19:49 Doyak: I'm not really sure about that though, but maybe that works?
2016-11-10 19:49 iloveyou4ever: I changed some pattern here when you afk for about a minute here xD
2016-11-10 19:49 iloveyou4ever: I will ask for other modders' opinion
2016-11-10 19:50 Doyak: anyway from 04:48:931 - http://puu.sh/sdqLZ/46876f3c59.jpg
2016-11-10 19:50 Doyak: 04:52:461 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - 04:53:167 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - ok here's this thing again
2016-11-10 19:50 Doyak: same repeating drums
2016-11-10 19:52 Doyak: I guess the rest is fine
2016-11-10 19:52 iloveyou4ever: I will map according to the first kiai time in order to keep the consistency
2016-11-10 19:53 Doyak: Will you upload this map?
2016-11-10 19:54 iloveyou4ever: I will check for the remaining part
2016-11-10 19:54 iloveyou4ever: after I have free slot for my pending maps :D
2016-11-10 19:54 Doyak: I want some kudosu xD
2016-11-10 19:54 iloveyou4ever: you could save log to in order to take my kudos <3
2016-11-10 19:54 iloveyou4ever: Ok sure
2016-11-10 19:54 iloveyou4ever: very useful mod I'd say...
2016-11-10 19:55 iloveyou4ever: can you also bub taiko map xD?
2016-11-10 19:55 Doyak: I technically can
2016-11-10 19:55 Doyak: but I will get smashed by Loctav if I do so xD
2016-11-10 19:55 iloveyou4ever: ah yes ww I was just kidding xD
2016-11-10 19:57 iloveyou4ever: anyways thx for detail mod :D
2016-11-10 19:57 Doyak: So can I ask you for mod too? xD
2016-11-10 19:58 iloveyou4ever: emm I can only mod taiko map :<
2016-11-10 19:58 Doyak: of it's a Taiko map
2016-11-10 19:58 iloveyou4ever: ok sure then :D
2016-11-10 19:59 Doyak: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/904996 Nana Mizuki - No Limit]
2016-11-10 19:59 Doyak: I do have a ranked Taiko mapset too
2016-11-10 20:00 iloveyou4ever: oh bub pop o.o
2016-11-10 20:00 iloveyou4ever: you may apply for taiko BN too xD
2016-11-10 20:00 iloveyou4ever: as I think your modding quality is quite good
2016-11-10 20:00 Doyak: I thought of doing that but I abandoned it last round
2016-11-10 20:01 Doyak: since I really haven't modded much of Taiko maps yet...
2016-11-10 20:01 Doyak: maybe I'll try next round
2016-11-10 20:01 iloveyou4ever: good luck :3
2016-11-10 20:01 iloveyou4ever: but that would be too harsh...
2016-11-10 20:02 iloveyou4ever: and more players will ask you for mods then xD
2016-11-10 20:02 Doyak: That's alright, I already know how to reject requests xD
2016-11-10 20:03 iloveyou4ever: but I saw many modder will try to play the map first
2016-11-10 20:03 iloveyou4ever: and to decide whether to mod or not
2016-11-10 20:04 Doyak: hmm I don't really do that
2016-11-10 20:04 iloveyou4ever: then how would you decide to accept mod or not :o
2016-11-10 20:04 Doyak: I announce it on my userpage
2016-11-10 20:04 Doyak: whether I'll take requests or not
2016-11-10 20:05 Doyak: people should ask me when it's open
2016-11-10 20:05 Doyak: then it's accepted
2016-11-10 20:05 Doyak: testplays are usually open but I don't really mod it just by testplaying it
2016-11-10 20:06 Doyak: your map is a different case because it's a Taiko map and I won't icon it anyway
2016-11-10 20:06 iloveyou4ever: oic,that's also the way of taiko BN to do that
2016-11-10 20:06 iloveyou4ever: yep
2016-11-10 20:06 iloveyou4ever: if I ask you to testplay a std map,probably you wont mod it xDD
2016-11-10 20:07 Doyak: Usually I won't
2016-11-10 20:07 Doyak: actually I can mod it but only briefly
2016-11-10 20:07 Doyak: because a full check requires a lot of time
2016-11-10 20:07 iloveyou4ever: luckily I only map taiko...
2016-11-10 20:08 iloveyou4ever: and you also give a quite full check for my map ><
2016-11-10 20:08 Doyak: it's just that I wanted some Taiko modding experience xD
2016-11-10 20:09 iloveyou4ever: that's good :3
2016-11-10 20:09 Doyak: also I needed some m4ms before calling BNs back on that map
2016-11-10 20:10 iloveyou4ever: ok I will mod in Saturday
2016-11-10 20:10 iloveyou4ever: I promise a taiko BN to mod his map but I havent...
2016-11-10 20:10 iloveyou4ever: so I will clear all my mod on Sat :3
2016-11-10 20:11 Doyak: Sure, take your time
2016-11-10 20:11 iloveyou4ever: remember to save log xD
2016-11-10 20:11 iloveyou4ever: I will call you if I submit the map
2016-11-10 20:11 Doyak: I always auto save every logs
2016-11-10 20:11 iloveyou4ever: ok
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2016-11-05 19:07 iloveyou4ever: 安安,可以試譜嗎?
2016-11-05 19:07 iloveyou4ever: 5分鐘><
2016-11-05 19:07 Smallwu: ++
2016-11-05 19:08 Smallwu: 可以>w<
2016-11-05 19:08 iloveyou4ever: 謝><
2016-11-05 19:08 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/s7bqs.osz
2016-11-05 19:14 Smallwu: 最後結尾不適合放滑條 挺怪:3
2016-11-05 19:15 Smallwu: 還有就是最前面那邊
2016-11-05 19:15 Smallwu: voice拖長的時候 試試看換成長條
2016-11-05 19:15 iloveyou4ever: 但是我覺得放slider是唯一方法...
2016-11-05 19:16 iloveyou4ever: 我放一個藍大圓試試看
2016-11-05 19:16 Smallwu: 那樣感覺可行
2016-11-05 19:17 Smallwu: 另外就是像這種的 00:27:009 (67) - 換成slider 你覺得如何
2016-11-05 19:19 Smallwu: 最後 把bg的升降度改成-40 
2016-11-05 19:19 Smallwu: 讓太陽浮上來 
2016-11-05 19:19 Smallwu: 就這幾點問題~
2016-11-05 19:20 iloveyou4ever: 也可以
2016-11-05 19:20 iloveyou4ever: ok改成-40了
2016-11-05 19:20 Smallwu: 嗯 就大約這樣了<3
2016-11-05 19:20 iloveyou4ever: 謝謝mod~~
2016-11-05 19:20 iloveyou4ever: 我upload了你再貼文,給kudos
2016-11-05 19:21 Smallwu: OK>w<
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2016-11-05 13:56 iloveyou4ever: Hi Grimbow,may you spend 5 min to test my map if you're free?Thank you :D
2016-11-05 13:56 Grimbow: Oh, sure!
2016-11-05 13:56 Grimbow: I haven't played yet today so I can't promise I'll do too well though!
2016-11-05 13:56 iloveyou4ever: thx :D
2016-11-05 13:57 iloveyou4ever: wait for a second...
2016-11-05 13:57 Grimbow: sure \zo/
2016-11-05 13:57 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/s7jdL.osz
2016-11-05 13:57 iloveyou4ever: ok here is the map :D
2016-11-05 13:58 Grimbow: puush sometimes crashes my browser so give me a bit to see if I can fix it :c
2016-11-05 13:58 iloveyou4ever: ok...emm some people also have problems with puush
2016-11-05 13:59 Grimbow: would it be possible to upload it to osump or dropbox instead? It seems to have killed my browser haha
2016-11-05 14:00 iloveyou4ever: ok I will upload to osump
2016-11-05 14:02 Grimbow: Thank you kindly!
2016-11-05 14:03 iloveyou4ever: uploading¬¬
2016-11-05 14:04 iloveyou4ever: finally upload xD
2016-11-05 14:04 iloveyou4ever: Thanks for your patience
2016-11-05 14:04 iloveyou4ever: http://osump.net/mapsets/581de6ef2043b1c2355fd8bc
2016-11-05 14:05 Grimbow: Ayyyy \o/
2016-11-05 14:06 Grimbow: I haven't seen a map of this song before
2016-11-05 14:06 Grimbow: Nice
2016-11-05 14:11 iloveyou4ever: emm no one maps this even in std
2016-11-05 14:12 iloveyou4ever: hit too fast...?
2016-11-05 14:12 iloveyou4ever: early I mean
2016-11-05 14:12 Grimbow: Aaaaaa that's a really fun map :D
2016-11-05 14:12 iloveyou4ever: FC!!!!!
2016-11-05 14:12 iloveyou4ever: ur109 only...
2016-11-05 14:12 Grimbow: \o/
2016-11-05 14:12 iloveyou4ever: thx for playing :D
2016-11-05 14:13 Grimbow: I really like how you mapped it
2016-11-05 14:13 Grimbow: Only one thing I noticed
2016-11-05 14:13 Grimbow: 03:51:528 (592) -
2016-11-05 14:13 Grimbow: In the slowdown around here
2016-11-05 14:13 Grimbow: that note feels like it should be a k, to match the snare drum
2016-11-05 14:14 iloveyou4ever: nice suggestion!!
2016-11-05 14:14 iloveyou4ever: emm that becomes better a lot
2016-11-05 14:14 Grimbow: 03:56:646 (610) -
2016-11-05 14:14 Grimbow: This one also
2016-11-05 14:14 Grimbow: 03:58:587 (616,617) - you could also ctrl+g these notes, but that isn't needed
2016-11-05 14:14 Grimbow: Other than those small things, I really enjoyed the map!
2016-11-05 14:14 Grimbow: Are you going for rank?
2016-11-05 14:15 iloveyou4ever: I want to keep the original as k d d k d d ...
2016-11-05 14:15 iloveyou4ever: emm maybe
2016-11-05 14:15 iloveyou4ever: the consistency is quite good I think and there are variation
2016-11-05 14:15 Grimbow: If you do let me know when you upload it and I'll give it a couple stars c:
2016-11-05 14:15 Grimbow: 04:00:969 -
2016-11-05 14:15 iloveyou4ever: really?Thx a lot!!
2016-11-05 14:16 Grimbow: could add a note here since there is a drum hit here?
2016-11-05 14:16 iloveyou4ever: Ok good
2016-11-05 14:16 iloveyou4ever: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1078478 dj TAKA - True Blue]
2016-11-05 14:16 iloveyou4ever: This is also my map and it's bubbled yey
2016-11-05 14:17 Grimbow: :o Congrats on bubble! :D
2016-11-05 14:17 iloveyou4ever: and the fact is that the SR and bg of both songs are the same
2016-11-05 14:17 Grimbow: Haha, so they are
2016-11-05 14:17 Grimbow: Almost same length too
2016-11-05 14:17 iloveyou4ever: but I love the babymetal one more
2016-11-05 14:17 iloveyou4ever: 5:02 and 5:20 xdd
2016-11-05 14:17 iloveyou4ever: but 600 objects difference lol
2016-11-05 14:18 Grimbow: Yeah haha
2016-11-05 14:18 Grimbow: True Blue will have a lot of DT scores
2016-11-05 14:18 Grimbow: free pp for good players
2016-11-05 14:18 iloveyou4ever: And I am happy that you like my maps :D
2016-11-05 14:18 Grimbow: :D I'm happy that you showed me your maps!
2016-11-05 14:18 iloveyou4ever: I don't rank map in fact,I just want players to enjoy it
2016-11-05 14:19 iloveyou4ever: *I don't mind if my map can be ranked or not
2016-11-05 14:19 Grimbow: It's hard to not like your maps
2016-11-05 14:19 Grimbow: They are mapped very nice and flow well
2016-11-05 14:19 iloveyou4ever: that's really encourage me ><
2016-11-05 14:20 iloveyou4ever: I ask chromoxx to testplay but he need to play my map after a week
2016-11-05 14:20 Grimbow: Good, I look forward to trying your other maps! \o/
2016-11-05 14:20 Grimbow: Ah yes, he is a BN now so he will be very busy
2016-11-05 14:20 iloveyou4ever: I am quite sure babymetal one can be bubbled
2016-11-05 14:20 iloveyou4ever: he bubbed my true blue XD
2016-11-05 14:20 Grimbow: Oh, nice :D
2016-11-05 14:42 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/s7kRR.png
2016-11-05 14:42 iloveyou4ever: is that something good...?
2016-11-05 14:42 Grimbow: If I am understanding his weird english correctly
2016-11-05 14:43 iloveyou4ever: I hope my english can become better .-.
2016-11-05 14:43 Grimbow: he is saying it is very good, but it wouldn't be bubbled straight away
2016-11-05 14:43 Grimbow: probably because you need 12+sp on a map to get it bubbled anyway
2016-11-05 14:43 Grimbow: and things need at least a couple of mods
2016-11-05 14:43 iloveyou4ever: ofc he won't bubble...it still need more improvement
2016-11-05 14:43 Grimbow: But it's rare that he says something like that
2016-11-05 14:43 Grimbow: so it is a good thing!
2016-11-05 14:44 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/s7l0Q.png
2016-11-05 14:44 iloveyou4ever: ...can't upload
2016-11-05 14:44 Grimbow: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
2016-11-05 14:44 Grimbow: I hate that bug so much :(
2016-11-05 14:44 iloveyou4ever: and how to change the audio to 192kbps?
2016-11-05 14:44 Grimbow: do you have audacity?
2016-11-05 14:45 iloveyou4ever: yes
2016-11-05 14:46 Grimbow: Okay
2016-11-05 14:46 Grimbow: open the song in audacity
2016-11-05 14:47 Grimbow: and when you have it open, open the file menu and click on "export audio"
2016-11-05 14:47 iloveyou4ever: ok,then?
2016-11-05 14:48 Grimbow: a box should pop up
2016-11-05 14:48 Grimbow: in the bottom right there is a thing that says "options"
2016-11-05 14:48 Grimbow: click on that and change the quality to 192kbps
2016-11-05 14:51 iloveyou4ever: ok I've changed it thx so much :D
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Hey! NM from my queue.


General
  • d = don, k = kat, Caps for Finisher (standard stuff really)
  • Why are all of your maps so damn good?! :o
  • Apologies in advance for any unnecessary nitpicks.



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  • 00:18:587 (41) - Change to k, vocal pitch is very similar to that at 00:18:234 (40) and makes a good emphasis on the d at 00:18:940 (42).
  • 00:26:352 (61,62) - Ctrl+G, vocal pitch clearly declines so the latter note should be the don instead.
  • 00:29:528 (66) - Change to k, matches the higher vocal pitch at 00:29:176 (65).
  • 00:37:637 (88,89,90,91,92) - I would recommend a ddddk or even better, kdddk. The notes at 00:37:814 (89,90,91) are significantly lower than 00:38:343 (92) and so the last four notes should be dddk; the first note could work either way, I made two suggestions because a d would be more accurate but a k would be less boring, so it's up to you what you do with this note.
  • 00:41:167 (106) - Change to k, though I don't recommend it as strongly. The note matches that of 00:41:696 (110) and highlights the don triple in between.
  • 00:51:755 (179,180,181,182) - Change to kddk to emphasise the guitar on k; the ending of this pattern is fine.
  • 00:57:578 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - Invert the entire pattern so it becomes the ddkkkkd. Reason being is the noise of the whammy bar is higher pitch than anything else, the notes were placed well but the sounding feels backwards.
  • 01:11:696 (320) - Change to k, it's higher pitch than 01:11:343 (318) and that is a k. The sounds at the times I just showed are also the exact same sounds played later at 01:12:655 (328) and 01:13:108 (331), which are also both k (so change the note lmao).
  • 01:14:167 (337,338,339,340) - Ctrl+G, just sounds a lot better Imo.
  • 01:15:578 (347) - Same reason I mentioned for 01:11:696 (320), though this note is fine as is because it emphasises the 5-plets around it. Up to you, I've left a suggestion.
  • 01:34:108 (496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504) - Pattern is fine but I'm nitpicky when it comes to the amount of k in a pattern; I'd recommend changing it to kdkkddkdk, this way the start and end of the 9-plet are emphasised, as they are the highest pitched sections of the guitar.
  • 01:50:872 (645,646,647) - Change to either kdd or kkd; after the stream the guitar lowers in pitch, evident by the deep sound made at 01:51:049 (647).
  • 01:58:815 (716) - Change to k, guitar sound is rising, and differs greatly to 01:58:108 (710) which you've made hold the same pattern. Should you make this change, I'd then recommend changing 01:58:990 (717) to a d, but it's honestly fine either way.
  • 02:08:696 (797) - Change to k for nitpicky reasons, vocal is extremely similar to 02:08:343 (793) and is fairly overpowering the guitar (also I think I hear cymbals, which I would say are always k).
  • 02:13:108 (27,28,29,30) - Ctrl+G, pitch rises at 27 and drops back at 29; for this stream I'd also recommend changing 02:13:461 (31) to a k because of the high pitched noise that it lands on.
  • 02:30:843 (177,178,179,180) - Invert colours, same reason 00:51:755.
  • I'm actually really happy with these streams.
  • 03:30:755 (420,421) - Change to d, so that the pitch increase with the following two notes can be heard better. As a side recommendation, you could also change 03:31:637 (430) to a k.
  • 03:42:931 (538,539,540,541,542) - So you have kdddk but the pitch only increases from here, so I'd recommend replacing a few d for k here. I did some testing and kdkkk sounded pretty good (but that's probably just my inner farmer wanting to raise the SR).
  • 03:44:696 (546) - Change to k, it's higher pitch than strong notes that are similar to it like 551 and 557, so it should be at least a k if those two are. Alongside this, 547 should almost certainly be a d to compensate.
  • 04:14:343 (728) - Change to k, the climactic ending of that section of the song with a higher pitched noise.
  • 04:48:402 (146) - Change to k, this note is too high in comparison to be ignored.
  • 04:48:931 (152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - Invert the whole thing, the highest sounding section of what I just listed is where you have the dons, which you've surrounded with kats, I believe it should be the other way around.
  • 05:14:343 (365,366,367,368,369) - Change to kdddk, the highlighted guitar parts are on notes 365 and 369 so they should be k (unsure why you have the middle note as k tbh).


Fun map, best of luck getting it approved!
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Hey! NM from my queue.


General
  • d = don, k = kat, Caps for Finisher (standard stuff really)
  • Why are all of your maps so damn good?! :o Thx ><
  • Apologies in advance for any unnecessary nitpicks.



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  • 00:18:587 (41) - Change to k, vocal pitch is very similar to that at 00:18:234 (40) and makes a good emphasis on the d at 00:18:940 (42).
  • 00:26:352 (61,62) - Ctrl+G, vocal pitch clearly declines so the latter note should be the don instead.
  • 00:29:528 (66) - Change to k, matches the higher vocal pitch at 00:29:176 (65).
    all these three points changed
  • 00:37:637 (88,89,90,91,92) - I would recommend a ddddk or even better, kdddk. The notes at 00:37:814 (89,90,91) are significantly lower than 00:38:343 (92) and so the last four notes should be dddk; the first note could work either way, I made two suggestions because a d would be more accurate but a k would be less boring, so it's up to you what you do with this note.
    I actually want to be consistent for 00:42:931 - d kkd d k k d , so I put d k d d k k d as to consistent
  • 00:41:167 (106) - Change to k, though I don't recommend it as strongly. The note matches that of 00:41:696 (110) and highlights the don triple in between.
    Fixed :>
  • 00:51:755 (179,180,181,182) - Change to kddk to emphasise the guitar on k; the ending of this pattern is fine.
    Nice point!!
  • 00:57:578 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - Invert the entire pattern so it becomes the ddkkkkd. Reason being is the noise of the whammy bar is higher pitch than anything else, the notes were placed well but the sounding feels backwards.
    sounds good
  • 01:11:696 (320) - Change to k, it's higher pitch than 01:11:343 (318) and that is a k. The sounds at the times I just showed are also the exact same sounds played later at 01:12:655 (328) and 01:13:108 (331), which are also both k (so change the note lmao).
    Ok I temporarily change here,I hope I can't get more ideas about this parts as I feel confused while I was mapping this...
  • 01:14:167 (337,338,339,340) - Ctrl+G, just sounds a lot better Imo.
    emm I think keeping as original sounds better
  • 01:15:578 (347) - Same reason I mentioned for 01:11:696 (320), though this note is fine as is because it emphasises the 5-plets around it. Up to you, I've left a suggestion.
    I want to emphasis k at 01:15:755 - ,so unchanged :<
  • 01:34:108 (496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504) - Pattern is fine but I'm nitpicky when it comes to the amount of k in a pattern; I'd recommend changing it to kdkkddkdk, this way the start and end of the 9-plet are emphasised, as they are the highest pitched sections of the guitar.
    I changed to ddkdkdkkd instead
  • 01:50:872 (645,646,647) - Change to either kdd or kkd; after the stream the guitar lowers in pitch, evident by the deep sound made at 01:51:049 (647).
    nice point :>
  • 01:58:815 (716) - Change to k, guitar sound is rising, and differs greatly to 01:58:108 (710) which you've made hold the same pattern. Should you make this change, I'd then recommend changing 01:58:990 (717) to a d, but it's honestly fine either way.
    I want pattern to be consistency here as ddkkd k as the guitar sound is similar from these parts.
  • 02:08:696 (797) - Change to k for nitpicky reasons, vocal is extremely similar to 02:08:343 (793) and is fairly overpowering the guitar (also I think I hear cymbals, which I would say are always k).
    keep it becuz changing 02:08:696 - to k will lead to k k ddk afterwards which leads to inconsistency and I am actually mapping to drum sound here.
  • 02:13:108 (27,28,29,30) - Ctrl+G, pitch rises at 27 and drops back at 29; for this stream I'd also recommend changing 02:13:461 (31) to a k because of the high pitched noise that it lands on.
    Ok but it seems that it's more hard to play xDD
  • 02:30:843 (177,178,179,180) - Invert colours, same reason 00:51:755.
    change to kddkddkdk in order to let the starting note be k as to consistent here
  • I'm actually really happy with these streams. Me too xDD
  • 03:30:755 (420,421) - Change to d, so that the pitch increase with the following two notes can be heard better. As a side recommendation, you could also change 03:31:637 (430) to a k. Cchange the 03:30 one but remain unchange for the next one as I want to emphasis finisher on 03:31:814 -
  • 03:42:931 (538,539,540,541,542) - So you have kdddk but the pitch only increases from here, so I'd recommend replacing a few d for k here. I did some testing and kdkkk sounded pretty good (but that's probably just my inner farmer wanting to raise the SR).
    Nice point!!(not just changed for pp lmao)
  • 03:44:696 (546) - Change to k, it's higher pitch than strong notes that are similar to it like 551 and 557, so it should be at least a k if those two are. Alongside this, 547 should almost certainly be a d to compensate.
    Oh nice I didn't notice that
  • 04:14:343 (728) - Change to k, the climactic ending of that section of the song with a higher pitched noise.
    Ok
  • 04:48:402 (146) - Change to k, this note is too high in comparison to be ignored.
    Instead I delete 04:48:314 - this note as I want to emphasis drum tick at 04:48:490 -
  • 04:48:931 (152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - Invert the whole thing, the highest sounding section of what I just listed is where you have the dons, which you've surrounded with kats, I believe it should be the other way around.
    emm but I think changing to ddkkddd doesn't fit the hitsound when playing,and I honestly want to emphasis the vocal and 04:49:284 - these three notes(kkk)are to emphasis the finisher 04:49:549 -
  • 05:14:343 (365,366,367,368,369) - Change to kdddk, the highlighted guitar parts are on notes 365 and 369 so they should be k (unsure why you have the middle note as k tbh).
    I randomly placed note here xD,changed


Fun map, best of luck getting it approved!


Thank you for modding ><
Nice mod and help me a lot :3
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21:32 iloveyou4ever: Hi阿叔可唔可試譜?
21:33 Skylish: 叔你個死人頭
21:33 Skylish: test play= ok
21:33 Skylish: fking sad
21:33 iloveyou4ever: w so rude
21:33 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/rCX6A.osz
21:33 iloveyou4ever: 唔太難:O
21:33 Skylish: wtf 5.24* ?
21:34 Skylish: you put stream?
21:34 iloveyou4ever: no
21:34 Skylish: ayy let me try first
21:34 iloveyou4ever: ok
21:34 *Skylish is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/423871 BABYMETAL - Akatsuki [Inner Oni]] <Taiko>
21:39 Skylish: ok it contains the worst pattern ever hype
21:39 iloveyou4ever: stamina ;w;
21:40 Skylish: my right hand rip
21:40 iloveyou4ever: worst pattern o.o
21:40 Skylish: you dare put dk kd dkkd
21:40 Skylish: nice
21:40 iloveyou4ever: kdkdk?
21:40 Skylish: look at Kiai plz
21:40 Skylish: I missed all the Kiai part
21:40 Skylish: me can't ult.
21:40 Skylish: what an Oni map
21:40 iloveyou4ever: 02:06:527 -
21:40 iloveyou4ever: like this lol?
21:41 Skylish: no
21:41 Skylish: 02:14:998 -
21:41 Skylish: look onwards
21:41 iloveyou4ever: kd dk patterns?
21:41 Skylish: yes, please
21:42 Skylish: they are KILLING
21:42 Skylish: killing my nerve
21:42 Skylish: killing my fking old nerve
21:42 iloveyou4ever: that's the drum ;w;
21:42 Skylish: ikr, me dislike
21:42 Skylish: solely
21:42 iloveyou4ever: learn alt for kdkdk pattern w
21:42 Skylish: wwwwww
21:42 iloveyou4ever: 04:35:468 -
21:42 Skylish: talk is always easier than action
21:42 Skylish: holy
21:42 Skylish: hloy
21:42 iloveyou4ever: And idk how to deal with the 1/8 drum sound
21:43 Skylish: that's 1/6
21:43 Skylish: not 1/8
21:44 iloveyou4ever: oh rly o.o?
21:44 Skylish: listen at 25%
21:44 Skylish: and turn the beat to 1/6
21:45 iloveyou4ever: 04:35:468 -
21:45 iloveyou4ever: I hear 3 1/6 drum,am I correct?
21:45 iloveyou4ever: 04:35:939 -
21:45 iloveyou4ever: and 4 1/6 drum here
21:46 Skylish: um...
21:46 Skylish: https://puu.sh/rCXKq/37e2ed9071.png
21:46 Skylish: all 1/6 there
21:46 Skylish: 04:35:468 (37) -
21:47 iloveyou4ever: really?I hear sth different from you o.o
21:47 Skylish: 04:35:468 (37) -
21:47 Skylish: https://puu.sh/rCXOV/f919def598.png
21:47 Skylish: probably the drums hits go like this
21:47 Skylish: as the pic. shows
21:48 Skylish: there are very weak 1/6 base drum clicks
21:48 Skylish: very weak
21:48 iloveyou4ever: extremely weak ;w;
21:48 Skylish: and the overall pattern looks pretty nice with these 1/6 spams
21:48 *Skylish runs if you get blamed
21:48 iloveyou4ever: well go up to 5.6* lol
21:49 Skylish: and that really how the music works
21:49 Skylish: not me joking or blowing
21:49 iloveyou4ever: yes
21:49 iloveyou4ever: SR abuse pattern w
21:50 Skylish: patterns you change on your own la, just demonstrating the position of notes in 1/6 beats only
21:50 Skylish: It SHOULD NOT be the thing with 1/4 & 1/8
21:50 Skylish: since that's not correct timings
21:50 Skylish: when I do testplay at that moment, I notice that it is mis-snapped or something else
21:51 Skylish: oh, solely I am sensitive to rhythm
21:51 iloveyou4ever: timing wrong?
21:51 iloveyou4ever: pro ;w;
21:51 Skylish: no.... I mean the timing you put
21:51 Skylish: put those notes around that 1/6 session
21:51 Skylish: you put 1/4+1/8 b4
21:51 Skylish: they were wrong
21:51 iloveyou4ever: oic
21:51 Skylish: clarify a bit
21:51 Skylish: yay
21:52 iloveyou4ever: well I think kkkdddk dkddkddk is good imo
21:53 iloveyou4ever: not moe w
21:53 Skylish: back, I just tested the sys. wwww
21:54 Skylish: In terms of consistency, my pattern shown in the pic. may not be a wise choice because the drum kicks (k) are not following the consistencies well
21:54 Skylish: idk what you would like to follow
21:54 Skylish: I think following to the drums is the optimum way
21:55 iloveyou4ever: idk too...sad
21:55 Skylish: I heard some k ddk ddk k ddk patterns potential
21:56 Skylish: and some kddkkddkddk
21:56 Skylish: idk
21:56 Skylish: not really interested in Baby metal
21:56 iloveyou4ever: babymetal is love <3
21:56 iloveyou4ever: j die them
21:59 iloveyou4ever: thx for mod,scam kudos if I submit this map xd
22:00 Skylish: then me savelog


maybe give you a N1ce mod later if I have mood :D
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00:37:641 (88) - You should replace this by a k, it feels very weird with a d. If you do this maybe put a d instead of a k to this note 00:37:994 (90) - . As you want !

01:15:053 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - I would link thses two quintuplets to make one big stream. It would fit better imo

01:56:789 - Add a d here, so you have a quad and remain consistent with the previous part of the song.

01:51:936 (655) - The end of this stream doesn't fit well imo. Try this
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This would definetely make it better ! :)

01:56:789 - Same as before, add a d here ?

02:52:553 - 02:52:906 - Why don't you link the stream here ?

03:10:112 (230,231) - I would change both in k to follow the drum

03:29:083 - You have a triplet here a bit before but you don't put it again ? The music is the same

03:31:641 (429,430) - Ctrl+G, feels a bit odd the way it is

04:37:112 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - This stream should start with kats and then dons, not the contrary in my opinion. It sounds a bit weird like this.

04:48:230 (145) - k here ? Idk I think it sounds better but it's up to you :D

Really Nice map though :D Here is your star !
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Inner Oni

00:37:641 (88) - You should replace this by a k, it feels very weird with a d. If you do this maybe put a d instead of a k to this note 00:37:994 (90) - . As you want !
The guitar pitch is going up here,so I put d at 00:37:641- and put k at 00:37:994- to show the pitch change.
01:15:053 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - I would link thses two quintuplets to make one big stream. It would fit better imo
emm,I will think about it,temporarily accept
01:56:789 - Add a d here, so you have a quad and remain consistent with the previous part of the song.
Currently accepted,but there is no drum sound here...However due to consistency,I will still add d here
01:51:936 (655) - The end of this stream doesn't fit well imo. Try this
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This would definetely make it better ! :)
I think the hitsound(note) fits both of the vocal and the drum :l and it's consistent with the previous music part(stream)
01:56:789 - Same as before, add a d here ?
emm mentioned before?
02:52:553 - 02:52:906 - Why don't you link the stream here ?
02:52:906 - I add d here but not adding at 02:52:553- cuz that would be too long
03:10:112 (230,231) - I would change both in k to follow the drum
sounds good!!
03:29:083 - You have a triplet here a bit before but you don't put it again ? The music is the same
Ok changed
03:31:641 (429,430) - Ctrl+G, feels a bit odd the way it is
03:31:818 - Here is the high pitch,and I put K here to emphasis the loud and high pitch sound here,so I put 03:31:641 - d so I can emphasis the finisher K
04:37:112 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - This stream should start with kats and then dons, not the contrary in my opinion. It sounds a bit weird like this.
keeping the original one sounds better :l
04:48:230 (145) - k here ? Idk I think it sounds better but it's up to you :D
Nice point :D
Really Nice map though :D Here is your star !

Thx for modding :)
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He kidnapped me for testplay, tho I enjoyed it. Pasting the chatlog.

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18:03 Acrith: 02:25:171 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - This was first shocking moment
18:03 Acrith: which I somehow cleared xD
18:03 Acrith: tho nothing wrong about it
18:03 iloveyou4ever: XD here o.o
18:03 Acrith: 02:46:112 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 
18:03 Acrith: ffs
18:03 iloveyou4ever: 01:05:347 - here also but I think it'll be strange to put 1/6
18:04 Acrith: first one was ok
18:04 iloveyou4ever: guitars w
18:04 Acrith: this one I linked was my grave
18:04 Acrith: You used d2k3dk as the start
18:04 iloveyou4ever: yes
18:04 Acrith: which... shocked me, since I rarely see streams starting with it
18:04 Acrith: and I couldn't count my hands
18:05 iloveyou4ever: yes it's a bit tricky for first play
18:05 iloveyou4ever: I don't know if it's good to map guitar here
18:05 Acrith: It's okay in my opinion
18:05 Acrith: streams are solid, just some are shocking for sightread
18:05 Acrith: you're using same consistency for everything which is heavy +
18:06 Acrith: I want to find one moment yet
18:06 Acrith: 04:35:171 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - 
18:06 Acrith: First 2k2d(3kd) is fine
18:06 Acrith: then don
18:06 iloveyou4ever: yes I keep using something like d k ddk d kd dk in the map
18:06 Acrith: THEN this mess after
18:07 Acrith: I barely guessed what should I do.
18:07 Acrith: tho such pattern on end will be frustrating for many players
18:07 iloveyou4ever: emm...
18:07 iloveyou4ever: should I put 1/4 instead of 1/6?
18:08 Acrith: wait
18:08 Acrith: give me a second
18:08 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/sKKIg.jpg
18:08 iloveyou4ever: just something like this
18:08 iloveyou4ever: ok
18:09 Acrith:  I personally made it like (2k2d)kd2k2d2k
18:10 Acrith: so the whole pattern is 2k2d(3kd) d (2k2d)kd2k2d2k (1/6)
18:10 Acrith: it could be even kdddk on end
18:11 Acrith: but then it goes to second hand, which will be tricky
18:11 Acrith: for kddk players
18:11 iloveyou4ever: can you screen cap it?
18:12 Acrith: sure
18:12 Acrith: http://i.imgur.com/I5yJqJq.jpg
18:14 iloveyou4ever: emm it sounds strange o.o
18:14 Acrith:  hm.
18:14 iloveyou4ever: altho it plays better,but the hitsound doesn't fit the song
18:15 Acrith: eventually (2k2d)4k3dk
18:15 Acrith: which sounds better
18:16 iloveyou4ever: I think (2k2d)dkkkdddk is better
18:17 Acrith: but you don't use kkkdddk during entire map
18:17 Acrith: so here goes your flow
18:17 iloveyou4ever: 04:36:406 - the high pitch vocal starts here
18:17 Acrith: Maybe (3kd)dk2dk2dk
18:17 Acrith: ?
18:17 Acrith: (3kd)dkddkddk
18:19 iloveyou4ever: I think I would keep as (kkdd)dkkkdddk
18:20 Acrith: fine.
18:20 Acrith: soooooo... mostly that's it from the "tricky" parts
18:21 Acrith: Map has it own flow, it's pretty enjoyable
18:21 iloveyou4ever: not tricky at all...
18:21 Acrith: shh
18:21 Acrith: :P
18:21 iloveyou4ever: but challenging
18:21 iloveyou4ever: any more suggestion>
18:21 iloveyou4ever: ?
18:21 Acrith: Nope, all good.
18:21 iloveyou4ever: I think you can post to thread and earn kudos w
18:22 Acrith: Savelog then
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Inner Oni
01:10:641 - change don, the pitch is different than 01:09:583 - part
01:11:083 - kat, to matching sound with above
01:11:877 (323,324,325) - change d d k ? sems melody has going different next
01:23:436 - change kat ?
01:50:436 - delete instead ? stream should be continue, but you give it a break in 01:50:789 -
02:00:936 - change kat, theres has bit guitar sound
03:31:553 - change kat ?
04:00:759 - to 04:01:112 - make kkdkd ? or add kat here 04:00:847 -
04:05:700 - add note, sounds clear here
04:07:200 - delete , to emphasize 04:07:289 -
04:56:171 - change kat ?

well maybe just that
good luck ~
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Inner Oni
01:10:641 - change don, the pitch is different than 01:09:583 - part
01:11:083 - kat, to matching sound with above
01:11:877 (323,324,325) - change d d k ? sems melody has going different next
accepted :D nice points
01:23:436 - change kat ?
ok
01:50:436 - delete instead ? stream should be continue, but you give it a break in 01:50:789 -
there is obvious drum sound here,so don't delete
02:00:936 - change kat, theres has bit guitar sound
I want to emphasis the drum kick on 02:00:230 - and 02:00:759 -
03:31:553 - change kat ?
sounds good!
04:00:759 - to 04:01:112 - make kkdkd ? or add kat here 04:00:847 -
but I think the original is better...sorry no change
04:05:700 - add note, sounds clear here
nice point!!add k here
04:07:200 - delete , to emphasize 04:07:289 -
ok,and change the last note to finisher
04:56:171 - change kat ?
I want the pattern to be simple here,just kdddkdddkdddk...so no change :<
well maybe just that
good luck ~


Thanks for modding :)
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hi~

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Inner Oni


good luck!
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all fixed :D

Inner Oniemm I am considering to add notes too,I will consider your ideas and I need to find more modders about this part,so temporarily no change


good luck!


Thanks senpai ><
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sorry i'm late ._.

begginer mod


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d = don
k = kat
D and K = big note


Inner Oni

03:19:200 - add d?
03:24:936 (371) - k?
03:26:083 (382) - k?
03:29:171 (414) - k?
03:30:406 (425,426,427) - kkd?
03:32:171 (440,441) - kd or kk?
03:55:906 (622) - delete or 03:55:994 (623) - d?
04:14:083 (734,735) - kd?
04:32:171 (13) - D?
04:32:700 (14) - K?
04:33:230 (17) - K?
04:33:759 (20) - K?
05:20:347 (425) - d?

nice map:3 good luck!
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