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Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai

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iYiyo
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Topic Starter
iYiyo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 22 de enero de 2017 at 1:51:26

Artist: Hata Motohiro
Title: Toumei Datta Sekai
Source: NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags: shippuden shippuuden opening pkhg mugiwarasekai hazu- irohas
BPM: 168
Filesize: 8310kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bijuu (5,08 stars, 369 notes)
  2. Easy (1,33 stars, 79 notes)
  3. Hazu's Normal (2 stars, 158 notes)
  4. Irohas' Hard (3,14 stars, 250 notes)
  5. pkhg's Insane (4,23 stars, 333 notes)
Download: Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai
Download: Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3

Easy by iYiyo | Normal by Hazu- | Hard by Irohas | Insane by pkhg | Bijuu by iYiyo

Nominated by Sonnyc & Mafumafu

Background source
Thanks missa1912 for providing me the video!
Last edited by iYiyo , edited 98 times in total.
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
http://puu.sh/sgoYG/aa8010c157.mp3
Last edited by pkhg , edited 1 time in total.
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
iYiyo

pkhg wrote:

algun dia este post tendra 2 kudosus
believe it
I'll give you all my kudos if u find a better mp3
Algún día este mapa estará ranked.
believe it

edit: dirty kds farmer xd
Ela
111 posts
Joined November 2012
Ela

pkhg wrote:

algun dia este post tendra 2 kudosus
believe it
so, this guy was the one from the legend......


iYiyo wrote:

dirty kds farmer xd
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-
hi
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TitleUnicode:透明だった世界
Artist:Motohiro Hata
ArtistUnicode:秦基博
Creator:iYiyo
Version:Hazu's Normal
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
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iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
iYiyo
o: so fast Hazu xD updated ~

@mugi & pkhg for a good gap between diffs I guess a 3*~ and 4*~ would be cool
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
iYiyo
added pkhg's diff + more hitsounds files. Tell me if you want to copy mine or his or make ur own.

Gonna update metadata + tags after adding mugi's diff. Then should come the mods

edit: Metadata updated so redl

[hazu]
Quizás podrías aumentar un poco el sr para que llegue a 2.05 o parecido? Enrealidad no es problema para el gap pero se vería más bonito si es una 2* que una 1* ya que pasa de 1.99 a 3.14 xDD no pasa nada sino
00:55:285 (1,2,3) - Esta parte como que se siente un poco rara comparada con las otras partes, como que los círculos solos no quedan muy bien imo, por qué no mejor dejar el ritmo parecido a 00:56:714 (4,5,6) - o algo similar?
Aaa y faltarían los hitsounds, dime si quieres que copie los mios o los del pkhg

[pkhg]
00:23:499 - & 00:23:857 - clap?
01:00:910 - esa green line no hace nada aparte de cortar la sección kiai xd
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-

iYiyo wrote:

added pkhg's diff + more hitsounds files. Tell me if you want to copy mine or his or make ur own.

Gonna update metadata + tags after adding mugi's diff. Then should come the mods

edit: Metadata updated so redl

[hazu]
Quizás podrías aumentar un poco el sr para que llegue a 2.05 o parecido? Enrealidad no es problema para el gap pero se vería más bonito si es una 2* que una 1* ya que pasa de 1.99 a 3.14 xDD no pasa nada sino Yo también estaba pensando en eso, por mientras lo aumenté a 2* pero seguiré intentando aumentar el sr xd
00:55:285 (1,2,3) - Esta parte como que se siente un poco rara comparada con las otras partes, como que los círculos solos no quedan muy bien imo, por qué no mejor dejar el ritmo parecido a 00:56:714 (4,5,6) - o algo similar? okay.
Aaa y faltarían los hitsounds, dime si quieres que copie los mios o los del pkhg Copia cualquiera de los dos.
Poi
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Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
it's 10 SP now. PlaceHolder 8-)
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
iYiyo

Kocari wrote:

it's 10 SP now. PlaceHolder 8-)
Lol didn't expect that xdd

<3
Blobbability
126 posts
Joined November 2015
Blobbability
Bijuu:

00:35:285 - 00:35:642 : The slider before was going clockwise, then your jumps switch to counter clockwise, which is disrupting the flow.
00:37:249 - 00:37:428 : The spacing between these two circles is too much. You're putting too much emphasis on a note that doesn't need much in the song.
00:38:142 - 00:39:214 : The spacing between the notes of the first combo and that of the second combo don't match the song because the emphasis on the beats are the same.

00:42:249 : Change the direction of the slider. I was expecting the next note to be above the slider, but the circle appeared beneath. It's disrupting the flow.
00:43:321 : The seventh circle in this combo could be better placed. Either decrease the spacing so that it matches the spacing between circles 5 and 6, or put the seventh circle to the left side of circle 6. That way the notes there will be more uniform (and will be following a distinct pattern) and it will flow better.
00:53:499 - 00:55:196: Do not change the direction of the flow of notes in the middle of a combo. It's weird. Your first slider went clockwise, but then the rest of your combo went in the opposite direction.
01:10:642 : You might want to push this circle a little more to the left so that the jumps look more uniform.
01:11:357 : This jump from 1st slider to 2nd slider is really awkward. Move the 2nd slider upwards a little bit so that you don't have to jump to the slider so much in a weird way.
01:23:857: From the last 2 notes of the previous combo, I'm jumping a freaking 90 degrees!!! Idrc where you put that last note, just don't put it there.


I want this ranked. It's good.
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[Easy]
00:02:428 (2,3) - looks weird for flow
00:12:428 (4) - NC

[Bijuu]
00:14:928 (1,1) - looks bad overlap
01:20:999 (1,2) - flow was awkward, you broke star patterns strange.

GL
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

iYiyo wrote:

[pkhg]
00:23:499 - & 00:23:857 - clap? ups
01:00:910 - esa green line no hace nada aparte de cortar la sección kiai xd exacto
a
osu file format v14

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Title:Toumei Datta Sekai
TitleUnicode:透明だった世界
Artist:Hata Motohiro
ArtistUnicode:秦 基博
Creator:iYiyo
Version:pkhg's Insane
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuden shippuuden opening pkhg mugiwarasekai hazu-
BeatmapID:1154822
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iYiyo
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iYiyo

srijanfromsd wrote:

Bijuu:

00:35:285 - 00:35:642 : The slider before was going clockwise, then your jumps switch to counter clockwise, which is disrupting the flow. 00:35:464 (2,3) - ctrl+g 'ed
00:37:249 - 00:37:428 : The spacing between these two circles is too much. You're putting too much emphasis on a note that doesn't need much in the song.fixed
00:38:142 - 00:39:214 : The spacing between the notes of the first combo and that of the second combo don't match the song because the emphasis on the beats are the same. giving the proper nc for both parts gives structure to the map so it actually can support the music so players don't get confused on ds changes

00:42:249 : Change the direction of the slider. I was expecting the next note to be above the slider, but the circle appeared beneath. It's disrupting the flow.fixed
00:43:321 : The seventh circle in this combo could be better placed. Either decrease the spacing so that it matches the spacing between circles 5 and 6, or put the seventh circle to the left side of circle 6. That way the notes there will be more uniform (and will be following a distinct pattern) and it will flow better.I like th pattern that it currently has, it's all symetric and has good structure imo
00:53:499 - 00:55:196: Do not change the direction of the flow of notes in the middle of a combo. It's weird. Your first slider went clockwise, but then the rest of your combo went in the opposite direction.I don't find it weird, to me it has a smooth flow and plays fine for me so no change
01:10:642 : You might want to push this circle a little more to the left so that the jumps look more uniform. prefer to keep structure by stacking notes, right now plays fine imo
01:11:357 : This jump from 1st slider to 2nd slider is really awkward. Move the 2nd slider upwards a little bit so that you don't have to jump to the slider so much in a weird way. if you mean 01:10:821 (1,2) - there's no distance to be considered as a jump imo, it's not awkward so no change
01:23:857: From the last 2 notes of the previous combo, I'm jumping a freaking 90 degrees!!! Idrc where you put that last note, just don't put it there. it's actually less than 90° so it plays fine + also i wanted to give some emphasis since it's the very last note

I want this ranked. It's good.
Thanks!!

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Easy]
00:02:428 (2,3) - looks weird for flow
00:12:428 (4) - NC

[Bijuu]
00:14:928 (1,1) - looks bad overlap
01:20:999 (1,2) - flow was awkward, you broke star patterns strange.

GL
Well I just changed the NC on easy but the rest you don't give an argument in order to change it, like looks weird, bad overlap etc. Anyway thanks for the mod!
Winnie
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Hello from Modding Queue


[Bijuu]
00:11:713 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern. Consisting of what I've seen throughout previous maps I think you can adjust this a little better. The patterns previously feels more natural, but the jump from (7) ----> (1) feels kinda unstable
01:04:392 (3) - Ctrl+G feels a lot better here imo

Welp I think it looks good to go imo
iYiyo
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Kocari wrote:

Hello from Modding Queue


[Bijuu]
00:11:713 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern. Consisting of what I've seen throughout previous maps I think you can adjust this a little better. The patterns previously feels more natural, but the jump from (7) ----> (1) feels kinda unstable yup, that part was like meh planned to rearrange it, so i did xd ty for pointing out~
01:04:392 (3) - Ctrl+G feels a lot better here imo idk but i feel like if i ctrl+g (3) then 01:03:857 (1,2,3) - this flow would feel a bit weird imo. idk but i don't really like that transition tbh

Welp I think it looks good to go imo oh mai gosh
Thanks Kocari! :)
Fanteer
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Fanteer
Easy

00:10:999 (2,1) - For New players will be hard read this moment

00:12:428 (1) - pause ?

00:51:714 (3) - maybe crtl+J for beautiful a pattern


Normal

00:10:999 (4,1) - overlap


Mugiwara's Hard
01:05:285 (1,2,3,4,1) - very like a 00:53:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - lol


Insane

00:20:999 (1,3) - fix overlap

00:43:142 (4,1) - ^

01:00:285 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - and 00:40:285 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Pls make different patterns


Bijuu

00:55:821 (3,6) - hmm maybe fix overlap

Nice map :) GL
BounceBabe
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🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

insane

00:05:107 (1,2) - reverse nc, 00:05:285 - new bar

00:08:142 (1,2) - positions are a bit clustered compared to the rest of your arrangements

00:30:821 (5,1,2,3,4) - vocals are rather monotone so the spacing should be too imo instead of varying between bigger and then smaller for 1-4 to match vocals

00:40:464 (5,6,7) - drums are gradually getting louder dont think this small triplet arrangement is really necessary, kinda breaks the transition to the rest of the stream a bit. you could make them have gradual increasing spacing instead to match that volume increase http://puu.sh/sRWcN/0922da2323.jpg same 01:00:464 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:11:892 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -

00:47:428 (3,4) - think this would work better if unstacked, rather blocking the flow like this same 00:58:857 (3,4) -

00:54:571 (3,4) - try http://puu.sh/sRWgO/eb31e9e5c1.jpg will make transition better

01:00:285 (3) - not quite sure if this circle fits so well as clickalbe elements. reversing 00:59:928 (2) - instead would make nicer transition and suit instruments more imo

01:07:249 (3,4) - flow is slightly too harsh here. try not to corner the 4 so much. try http://puu.sh/sRWqQ/ab21a95a95.jpg http://puu.sh/sRWrm/65211f1d7d.jpg

bijuu

try using 1 specific combo colour for all your speed up SV changes like 00:34:928 (1) - 00:14:928 (1) - since you have no slider ticks its hard to recognise the speed up. use the specific combo colour as indicator.

00:02:072 (4) - standing off from the rest of the pattern all by itself 00:01:000 (1,2,3) - . try arranging them so they are in the same playarea http://puu.sh/sRWwV/74c1c710fa.jpg

00:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - playing the same star pattern in the same position two times is a little bland. move the second half star pattern elsewhere for more gameplay variation.

00:17:607 (4) - you missed important instruments here, add a triple instead of following vocals to cover them. its the hardest diff after all.

00:24:928 (5,6) - flow is rather bad here due to the 1/2 slider shape going left. try moving 6 to the left to compliment that . http://puu.sh/sRWOB/e71e7b3435.jpg would work good also for vocal emphasis , can always use smaller spacing too ofc

00:29:035 (4,1) - flow is poor and the triple sound is not mapped either that is really important http://puu.sh/sRWUw/aff32cef00.jpg

00:30:464 (4,5,6) - rotate them slightly more vertical so its like 45° to make a better transition with the next circle

00:31:982 - 00:33:232 - important sound here imo should be mapped

00:38:499 (3,1) - 00:35:642 (3,1) - stacking 1 onto 3 would make flow better imo, rather blocky atm and the spacing is messed up like that too since the jumps are equal to this DS PLUS 00:41:357 (3,1) - you did it here and it suits nicely

00:42:249 (1,2) - flow is poor again due to the sliders direction and shape. something like this would be better http://puu.sh/sRX9E/ab68e725bf.jpg

01:00:999 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/sRXd8/dc47486cf3.jpg

01:10:821 (1,2) - ^

about hitsounds, i noticed that they were not the same on both diffs. should be the same rhythm for hitsounds tho

00:51:714 (3,4) - claps on insane, 00:50:285 - 00:50:464 - no claps bijuu

00:49:928 - normal clap insane, 00:49:928 - drum clap bijuu

01:12:785 (2) - normal clap insane, 01:12:785 (2) - drum clap bijuu

for bijuu, follow the same pattern for the rest of the song from insane, you didnt place the normal claps on 00:35:642 (3,3) - for example, instead you used drum claps

as for this part 00:15:285 - drum claps on every white tick

accentuate the triple drums i mentioned earlier with drum whistle 00:16:178 (4) - 00:16:535 (5) - 00:17:428 - 00:18:857 (3) - 00:19:035 (4,6) - etc
Mir
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Mir
From my queue.~

[General]
  1. Seems fine.

Bijuu
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:892 (2) - This stack feels forced and the flow into 00:07:071 (3) - is much wider compared to most other places. To make the flow more comfortable you could stack 00:06:892 (2,3) - together.
  2. 00:10:285 (4,5) - The sound on this sliderend is really strong and feels clickable. If you make this slider two circles and space out 00:10:821 - you can give it some good emphasis. I know it would ruin the pattern but I feel like it's kind of wasting this beat.
  3. 00:15:642 (2,4) - Make these and 00:16:714 (1,3) - parallel.
  4. 00:32:785 (2,5,4) - This placement isn't really consistent, you could make them higher and higher like this: https://puu.sh/sSAZd/2c8bc1389a.png or stack them.
  5. 00:46:714 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
Mainly aesthetic, the map is pretty good.

pkhg's Insane
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:000 - 00:10:999 - These entire 10 seconds I have no idea what you're mapping to. Could you please explain this section's rhythm a bit better?
    1. 00:01:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Seems like the background weeow weeow but then 00:02:785 (2) - appears and breaks consistency.
    2. 00:05:107 - This sound appears sometimes on slider ends and slider heads and circles. It's really inconsistent.
    3. 00:06:714 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This section I have absolutely no idea what's being followed.
  2. 00:11:714 (1,3,1) - Space these evenly?
  3. 00:15:285 (1) - Definitely ends on the blue tick here. You can use the same rhythm you used at 00:15:999 (3,4).
  4. 00:20:107 (3,4) - Swapping these in rhythm would be more intuitive I find since the vocal is more powerful than drums on 00:20:107 - a 1/2 slider would fit better there.
  5. 00:24:929 (4,5,1) - This rhythm could be improved imo since the vocals are very strong here. 00:24:929 (4,5) - Could be a slider and 00:25:285 (1) - could be two circles.
  6. 00:35:285 (1) - 00:38:142 (1,2) - these rhythms are inconsistent for the same sound. I find the second way to be more representative of the sound.
The rest is fine.

Mugiwara's Hard
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:857 (3) - Putting a strong vocal on this slider end pains me. This whole rhythm really pains me. Try this: https://puu.sh/sSCfd/24b3100af1.png since you get the red tick on a reverse instead which would give it more feeling. And with the way you mapped this, that's about the best way I can come up with.
  2. 00:19:571 (1) - This also pains me, skipping this vocal note completely. It's really noticeable. I recommend this rhythm so you can get that note https://puu.sh/sSCiM/1cbcfb23a7.png and the "waSUre" part too.
  3. 00:20:999 (1) - Random node in the middle of this slider. Knowing this exists in this universe triggers me to no end - I might even get nightmares about this.
  4. 00:35:285 (1) - Remove whistle? Seems random.
  5. 00:55:999 (3,4) - Make these the same slider?
  6. 00:56:714 (1) - This also skips a noticeable vocal note. This rhythm might work better: https://puu.sh/sSCHq/e4400f5772.png
  7. 01:16:535 (1) - Another random whistle?
  8. 01:19:571 (1) - This rhythm is inconsistent with 01:16:535 (1) and 01:22:249 (1) - even though they're the same sound.
Also you're worse than Logic Agent with his slightly curved sliders. (this is a joke there's nothing wrong with that xD)

Hazu's Normal
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:214 - Add clap since it's inconsistent with everywhere else.
  2. 01:19:928 - ^
The rest is fine.

Easy
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:785 - Add clap? Seems inconsistent.
  2. 00:28:142 (2) - ^
  3. 01:14:214 - ^
  4. 01:19:928 - ^
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas

Mir wrote:

From my queue.~

[General]
  1. Seems fine.

Mugiwara's Hard
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:857 (3) - Putting a strong vocal on this slider end pains me. This whole rhythm really pains me. Try this: https://puu.sh/sSCfd/24b3100af1.png since you get the red tick on a reverse instead which would give it more feeling. And with the way you mapped this, that's about the best way I can come up with. both suits, but keep sry
  2. 00:19:571 (1) - This also pains me, skipping this vocal note completely. It's really noticeable. I recommend this rhythm so you can get that note https://puu.sh/sSCiM/1cbcfb23a7.png and the "waSUre" part too. it doesn't feel good too me these 3 sliders, so keep
  3. 00:20:999 (1) - Random node in the middle of this slider. Knowing this exists in this universe triggers me to no end - I might even get nightmares about this. ok
  4. 00:35:285 (1) - Remove whistle? Seems random. no
  5. 00:55:999 (3,4) - Make these the same slider? no
  6. 00:56:714 (1) - This also skips a noticeable vocal note. This rhythm might work better: https://puu.sh/sSCHq/e4400f5772.png both works
  7. 01:16:535 (1) - Another random whistle? no
  8. 01:19:571 (1) - This rhythm is inconsistent with 01:16:535 (1) and 01:22:249 (1) - even though they're the same sound. lol but it's clearly not the same
Also you're worse than Logic Agent with his slightly curved sliders. (this is a joke there's nothing wrong with that xD) lol

Good luck!~
thanks!

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305,339,48678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,154,53857,6,0,P|248:145|205:141,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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442,311,54571,2,0,P|416:245|448:180,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
495,118,55107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
406,48,55285,6,0,P|332:51|257:56,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
187,25,55821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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318,366,57249,2,0,P|353:374|392:367,1,70,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,323,57607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,256,57785,2,0,P|403:218|405:186,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,58142,6,0,P|290:182|296:256,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
263,333,58678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
183,304,58857,2,0,P|142:308|110:314,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,275,59214,1,8,0:1:0:0:
120,152,59392,6,0,P|170:113|254:133,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,100,59928,2,0,P|319:139|316:185,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,232,60285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,291,60464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,291,60553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,291,60642,2,8,P|281:287|253:285,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
253,324,60999,6,0,P|175:318|113:313,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
41,268,61535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
90,199,61714,2,0,P|87:158|84:125,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,58,62071,1,8,0:1:0:0:
111,18,62249,1,2,0:0:0:0:
173,110,62428,6,0,B|242:125|242:74|318:94,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
377,43,62964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,91,63142,2,0,P|435:128|433:164,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,192,63499,2,0,P|364:229|366:265,1,70,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,367,63857,6,0,P|270:326|194:339,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
121,365,64392,2,0,P|119:321|111:281,1,70,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,241,64749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
94,169,64928,2,0,P|126:154|165:151,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,241,65285,6,0,P|252:246|218:254,1,70,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,141,65642,2,0,P|334:145|368:153,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,230,65999,2,0,P|402:190|431:93,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
502,68,66535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,29,66714,6,0,P|336:31|304:34,1,70,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,85,67071,1,8,0:1:0:0:
171,22,67249,2,0,P|195:83|176:155,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,232,67785,1,8,0:1:0:0:
83,232,68142,6,0,P|79:196|83:159,1,70,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,84,68499,1,8,0:1:0:0:
177,152,68678,2,0,P|246:148|316:143,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,50,69214,2,0,P|329:47|294:45,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,152,69571,6,0,P|182:216|187:294,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
247,350,70107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,312,70285,2,0,P|357:303|395:304,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,358,70642,1,8,0:1:0:0:
512,260,70821,6,0,B|522:220|522:220|514:172|506:115,1,140,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,59,71357,2,0,P|422:47|381:48,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,96,71714,2,8,P|311:131|309:150,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
284,163,72071,2,8,P|289:197|292:216,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
285,239,72428,6,0,B|216:254|216:203|140:223,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
78,175,72964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,240,73142,2,0,P|21:279|30:319,1,70,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,363,73499,2,0,P|124:357|162:355,1,70,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,312,73857,6,0,P|321:313|356:317,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,230,74214,2,0,P|416:231|381:235,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,152,74571,2,0,P|308:153|343:157,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,123,74928,1,8,0:1:0:0:
361,58,75107,1,10,0:0:0:0:
268,152,75285,6,0,B|193:168|193:120|121:147,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
62,95,75820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
6,158,75999,2,0,P|-2:193|-1:230,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,296,76356,1,8,0:1:0:0:
148,238,76535,6,0,P|193:241|293:247,1,140,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,143,77070,2,0,P|319:144|274:147,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,80,77428,2,0,P|205:81|250:84,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,145,77785,1,8,0:1:0:0:
278,227,77963,1,10,0:0:0:0:
330,312,78142,6,0,P|294:268|205:268,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
143,307,78678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,258,78857,2,0,P|79:216|84:177,1,70,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,160,79214,2,0,P|158:116|155:79,1,70,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,25,79571,6,0,P|275:29|310:31,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,114,79928,2,0,P|333:112|368:108,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,193,80285,2,0,P|414:185|448:175,1,70,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,105,80642,1,8,0:1:0:0:
422,62,80821,1,10,0:0:0:0:
380,193,80999,6,8,B|333:187|333:187|297:196|297:196|242:189,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:1:0:0:
169,146,81535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
105,201,81714,2,0,P|99:239|107:277,1,70,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,330,82071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,269,82249,6,0,P|346:272|418:277,1,140,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,312,82785,2,0,P|495:273|484:239,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,196,83142,2,0,P|418:151|421:113,1,70,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,146,83499,2,0,P|325:101|320:59,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,119,83857,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,83946,12,2,88678,0:0:0:0:
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