1. Rose-Colored Glasses (5.92 stars, 1359 notes)

Nuolong wrote:

Mod

00:03:259 (1) - I think you should start this spinner at 00:02:015 (1) instead :3 because it is where I hear the sound start I think its ok here, I don't like having too much spinner anyways
00:10:099 (1) - Nitpick - make this slider a little neater, like more symmetrical Blanketed with the spinner, and I like having asymmetrical feel

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00:11:031 (4) - Make this slider neater - because right now it seems slanted and doesn't look that good imo ;w; This slider is good 00:14:140 (6) - but this current one is slanted Fix
00:11:497 (5) - I do not think this is needed, because there are no sounds in the music that exist for the blue tick here
00:14:140 (6,7) - Flow between these two are lacking, move 00:14:606 (7) - to x36,y44 or somewhere near
00:17:249 (6) - Not necessary to change, but is there a reason that this is dragged to end on the blue tick? Because I think the sound continues all the way to the next beat
00:16:782 (4,5,6) - Flow here is really nice :3
00:21:446 (5) - Same here, no beat is on the blue tick.
00:24:088 (6) - Fix this slider just a lil bit by making it curvier
00:27:197 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this whole stream needs to be changed; it's not needed. It seems way overmapped in this part~ I think that there was a stream that was supposed to be here, also Milan's map has it so i think its ok
00:40:720 (5) - I don't think this is a good slider shape -- it promotes good flow to the upcoming notes, but this part of the music seems dramatically smooth and calmer than the previous part, so I think it should consist of rounder sliders, or at least sliders that aren't as sharp, like these 00:37:767 (1) - Agreed
00:47:560 (3) - Incorrectly emphasized - sliders, most of the time, shouldn't end on white ticks, which this does.
00:49:891 (1,2) - Abstract flow, it doesn't seem to play out that well (IMO)
00:52:067 (5) - Might not be a big deal, but overlaps 00:52:378 (1) - just a lil.
00:53:777 (2) - Maybe it'd be more appropriate to stack this on top of 00:53:933 (1) -
01:05:435 (5) - Same as mentioned earlier. I just might have something against this certain slider. I just don't think it looks as nice as the other sliders you've been using, so I think you should change it :3 I kinda changed it.. i guess?
01:40:565 (4,5,6,7) - I do not hear anything in the music that calls for a need of this lil stream :3 The kiai has so much going on that I can't tell what to put anyways, so I mapped to what I felt was ok
01:50:513 (4,5,6,7) - Same as ^
01:52:067 (1) - Red anchor is not tied to any beat in the music at all, so it should be smooth
01:55:176 (3) - I'll stop pointing these sliders out from now~ it's up to you if you agree with me and think you can make 'em look better :3
01:58:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Pretty sure it's an overmap, song doesn't have anything that tells me a stream is necessary
02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same, stream is not needed at all ? there is a stream, its pretty faint but there is one to me
02:05:902 (5) - Same as mentioned earlier, blue tick has no note
02:14:762 (5,6) - Remove these two, the stream is supposed to end that 02:14:684 (4) - Used these for flow and similar sound
02:15:694 (3) - same
02:21:601 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - if anything a mini stream should start 02:22:223 (5) - here and here 02:22:689 (11) - . Rest of the notes are overmapping
02:25:176 (4) - Although hitsounds sorta fix this problem, I don't think these are necessary; circles would be fine.
02:27:818 (3,4) - overmapped I used these sliders since they share the same sound as 02:24:710 (2) -
02:30:072 (5) - this note is unnecessary. it should just be a triple! I initially mapped to the bells in the background
02:56:420 (9,10) - If you apply the same hitsound to these two, then if anything, these should be the ones stacked and not these pairs 02:55:953 (6,7,8,9) -
03:42:119 (3) - Drag to blue is unnecessary here, I think it'd be better to just end it on the white tick Her voice carries to the white tick, and I like the flow that it gives like this
03:47:404 (2) - Fix blanket, even if it is intended to look like this, I highly suggest you to change it (it looks really ugly ;w;) Fixed!
03:49:580 (2) - overlaps 03:48:959 (5) - Thank you, fixed.
03:57:352 (2) - Fix blanket I think i fixed... ?
03:59:529 (2) - make this slider more elegant, based on the anchors, etc. it looks like you made it in 10 sec (no offense!!) yep, it is ugly, I tried making it look like そ but I fixed it now
04:00:461 (4) - bad placement and overlapping with previous slider Blankets http://puu.sh/rScGf/827144f332.jpg
04:01:394 (5) - This follows absolutely nothing in the music o whoops, fixed
04:14:762 (4,5,6,7) - overmap, or if these do actually follow a really faint part of the music, I recommend you not do follow them as often. I think it ruins the song a bit and when you use it a lot the map feels super repetitive. If you get rid of these streams you can definitely add some spicy jumps or something like that. Since it is such a faint part of the music, it cannot be argued that the sound does exist, because I can't hear it; therefore I feel like it shouldn't be as emphasized as it is in the map ;w;
04:37:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmap (I'll stop pointing it out because I think you understand my point)
04:44:762 (1) - Stack this properly (nitpick) nice, fixed
04:45:539 (3) - Overlaps in a bad fashion, move a little bit Fixedd
04:45:928 (5) - similarly, this note is an overmap as the note doesn't exist in music I made this for playability and fun but I'll fix it proably because it is an overmap
04:53:466 (1) - holy ass this is beautiful, but I wish you made other sliders as nice as this (like with as much effort), you can maybe change some sliders to look better in this section 03:39:010 (1) -
04:59:917 (1) - end slider 05:04:814 (1) - instead

Ends on white tick.. ?

Good map as this didn't get any mods yet :3 Good luck~! Hope I helped.

-Vanilla wrote:

Nuolong wrote:

Ends on white tick.. ?

Good map as this didn't get any mods yet :3 Good luck~! Hope I helped.

My colors dont mean anything but if I didn't say anything assume it wasn't changed. Thanks for the mod! I understand it seems pretty overmapped but I promise you there is a reason those streams are there GL with your mapset!

Also star b/c double kd

Xelasto wrote:

Herro. M4M here.

Rose-Colored Glasses

00:13:518 (4) - This shape is not so good looking. I see what you were going for but the curve doesn't looks so hot. Perhaps make it straight like 3?
00:15:383 (1) - No NC (New combo) If a player is playing a song that's almost 6 stars, this pattern should be no trouble for them.
00:23:155 (3,4) - Too close. It kinda kills the flow.
00:25:332 (1) - No NC (as above)
00:25:953 (2,1) - Not parallel. Go to a tiny grid (G) and move 1 a bit to the left.
00:26:264 (1) - No NC
00:28:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since the last stream was a half circle, why not make this one as well?
00:29:684 (1) - No NC
00:37:767 (1) - Switch the NC to 00:37:456 (7)
00:38:389 (1) - Switch the NC to 00:38:700 (2)
00:49:580 (4) - I feel like this should be faster and be more of a complete circle.
00:47:093 (1) - Switch the NC to 00:47:404 (2)
00:47:871 (1) - No NC
00:50:513 (1) - No NC (You get the idea; I think there are a lot of really short combos that are unnecessary.)
00:56:109 (4) - I suggest rotating this by around -60 degrees to make a better box with 5
01:02:326 (1,2) - This isn't really big. I'm just bothered by the fact that the angle almost touches 1.
01:04:192 (1,2) - My gut tells me this isn't parallel. Continue on if you're sure it is.
01:09:788 (1) - I feel like the first "ripple" is too close to the beginning
01:11:031 (1,3) - Are these purposefully not stacked?
01:11:964 (7) - This blanket is uneven. Pull the middle point in a bit
01:20:358 (3,4) - The fact that these are stacked even though 4 is not immediately after 3 makes this really easy to mess up on on your first try.
01:22:534 (2,3) - ^
01:24:710 (1,2) - ^
01:34:347 (2) - Move this so it blankets 1?
01:34:658 (1,1) - Make these parallel?
01:41:497 (3,1) - These two ends are not stacked.
01:43:363 (6) - NC
01:50:824 (1) - This quick upwards jolt after the stream. Maybe make it look sorta like ")" so it flows into 2 better?
02:20:358 (2,1,2) - Although I know what you went for here, the two sliders look like they're just a crazily-off double blanket.
02:24:710 (2) - Why have this slider have a noise at the end but not the others?
02:33:103 (2,3,4) - The flow in this feels awkward. What about tilting it sideways?
02:34:658 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too many double notes. Feels really weird to play.
02:42:119 (14) - This slider has such a slight bend at the end it almost looks like the end is just displaced. I suggest you emphasis the bend a bit more.
02:41:964 (13) - NC
02:43:052 (1) - No NC
02:43:985 (4,1) - The blanket almost stabs 4 in the side. It bothers me ;-;
03:39:477 (2,3) - Stack?
03:46:472 (2,3) - The straight up and down motion of this pattern just doesn't feel as good as something like 00:25:021 (1,2,1,2)
03:47:404 (2) - Fix this blanket, please.
03:52:689 (3,4) - Why not make this mirror eachother?
04:01:083 (5) - This blanket swings out too wide.
04:32:171 (1,4) - Easy opportunity for a stack.
04:44:762 (1,2) - Blanket?
04:53:466 (1) - The hole at the top left should be shaped a bit more like a tear drop.

Overall, nice map. I definitely think that the biggest problem (which I stopped mentioning) is the imbalanced combo changes. Some combos are as long as 16 notes, but there are some as low as 2 or even 1. It makes the map too forgiving. However, other than that I think the flow was very nice. Great job!

Splaszor wrote:

M4M o/

Rose-Colored Glasses

00:26:264 (3) - Sounds a bit awkward, put end of slider at 00:26:420 instead?
02:50:513 (6) - ^ Put slider end at 02:50:668 maybe?
01:38:700 (2) - ^ Put slider end at 01:39:010 maybe?
04:02:948 (2) - ^ Put slider end at 04:03:259 maybe?

00:58:440 (2) - Mute slider end?
02:28:129 (1) - ^
02:29:062 (5) - ^
02:30:616 (3) - ^
02:31:860 (1) - ^
04:03:570 (3) - ^ uhhh whoops... good catch! D:

03:45:694 (1) - Move to x:148 y:152 fixed

02:41:187 (8) - NC
02:26:730 (2) - Says object end isn't snapped in AiMod idk why

Lama Poluna wrote:

Rose-Colored Glasses

• 
  - General -

1. Romanised title must be - ワールド・ランプシェード FIXED
2. This has in tags - Warrudo Ranpusheedo Added
3. I think bg should be taken from the video - I will find a new BG soon, thanks!this
   - Diff -
4. 00:03:259 (1) - Spiner must end in 00:09:942 - , otherwise very difficult to click on 00:10:099 (1) - . The player can always stop spinning
5. 00:10:565 (2) - x448 y168, very difficult to read.
6. 01:37:767 - In such part necessary to reduce the sound from 50-30~ Fixed!

alma199912 wrote:

Yo, m4m for your queue.

Rose-Colored Glasses

00:22:223 (8) - move the slider start to slider end of 00:22:534 (1).
01:29:062 (2,3,4) - create a stream here, don't stack. I find it to flow better when jumping to this stream 01:29:373 (1,2,3,4,1) i just unstacked
01:48:959 (1,2,3,4) - move the stream a bit to the left, like this. In this case, twisting it like you do after in here 01:58:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) and here
02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6), seems weird to me. used the first part of the stream to blanket, and i think the flow still is similar so I'll keep it
02:50:979 (8) - Add NC.
02:55:953 (6) - Add NC.
02:58:440 (7) - Add NC.
03:00:928 (7) - Add NC.Ill keep these consistent
03:39:477 (2,3) - Snap note (2) to slider end ok
03:45:694 (1,2) - ^ (this one idk, the editor lets me snap it so i'll just indicate it) doing it for consistency

And now, for some really minor aesthetic things, that could or could not be necessary (do what ever you want).
00:37:456 (7,1) - This blanket could be perfected
01:46:161 (6,8,1) - ^ fixed
00:39:010 (3) - Move slider closer to 00:38:700 (2) like in 00:36:212 (1,2). fixed
01:12:586 (2) - slider close to 01:12:275 (1) slider start

Oh, and have a star, for the good work

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

hi im modder xd

this one lol

wombo handstand

00:11:497 (5,6) - your varying distances in blankets throws off the aesthetic a bit, consider spacing these out at atleast 1/4... i personally like 00:12:586 (1,2) - this distance the best. which btw vvvv

00:12:586 (1,2) - fix your blanket lol wut

00:17:249 (6,1) - cluttered again, if you dont want to ruin the spacing of 00:18:492 (5) - and how it stacks both ends then you can just have it start in the middle of the slider track rather than the end circle

00:20:047 (1,3) - yeah this distance is nice

00:42:430 (1,2) - these are parallel but the way 00:42:741 (2) - is placed it doesn't look like it, place a bit further lower left RIGHT, IM RETARDED (POST MOD EDIT) ye

00:51:757 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - FXI UR KFCUIGN BLNKAET ya

00:57:508 (2,3,2,3) - anti flow, i suggest having them stack in the opposite direction

00:58:751 (1) - fix the starting end of this, as it is now 00:59:062 (2) - favors 00:58:440 (2) - better. this combo shouldn't be ctrl h ctrl j, this should be a bit more manual. ?

01:42:119 (1) - using combo colors this way is patently unrankable they fukd

01:44:606 (1) - colors

01:47:249 (3,1) - wtf that STACK tho ye

01:48:026 (1) - colors

01:49:269 (1) - colors

01:50:824 (1) - colors

01:53:622 (1) - colors brochgil aonec the combo colors i fix all

01:57:042 (2,3) - why not use this spacing at the start of the map? this looks much nicer than having the slider edges line up, and its a lot easier to do also

01:58:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - hi clockwise y change when flow is good into the hardest parts of the map

02:03:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - oo that was nice

02:04:503 (1,3) - BUT I DONT GET WHY IT HAS TO BE SO CLOSE :C makes lining stuff up easier and noobs that play it will be like "dam they paralel niga"

02:05:902 (5,6) - PLZ THIS INSTEAD LOLLL (also fix blanket h e h) wot blanket? it fix gooooood?>?

02:15:073 (1,2) - fix curvature of either is ok

02:28:440 (2) - oooh maybe instead of stack, place this down the same distance as 02:27:663 (2,4) - away from the slider end? it would make the whole section feel way more unified like that, this goes for all the stacks yessesesesesesesesssssssssss~!

03:47:404 (2,3) - niiiiiggaaa.... make mopre spaciged

04:49:657 (6,1) - unnatural flow

04:53:466 (1) - sex me daddey ye

Silynn wrote:

Hiya! M4M here from your queue

First thing's first, the BG. Filename of "sex" is actually not rankable (just kidding i don't know if this is true or not). Really though, your BG is hella squished. I made you a non-squished version from the source file and I think you should use it. Here ya go: http://puu.sh/rVkgq.jpg LUL

Next, this map is actually really really well structured. I think 95% of the issues in this map are sloppy blankets that feel really squished. I don't know if that's just my personal preference, but it stands out to me a lot when playing, and I would recommend doing a self-check on these. Hopefully I'll have more suggestions than just "fix blanket lol" though ;w;

Examples of squished blankets:

00:37:456 (7,1) -
Current: http://puu.sh/rVtiS.png
Suggested Fix: http://puu.sh/rVtll.png

00:58:440 (2,1,2) -
Current: http://puu.sh/rVtox.png
Suggested Fix: http://puu.sh/rVtC2.png

01:11:964 (7,1,2) -
Current: http://puu.sh/rVtFL.png
Suggested Fix: http://puu.sh/rVtMd.png

Agreed with these, ill go through to fix all of them

Anyways, there's a lot of these through the map and I don't really feel like pointing every single one out. But if you want me to feel free to message me in game and I can over IRC. If you think I'm crazy feel free to ignore

Alright, on to the real mod lol

mod

1. 00:11:497 (5) - Consider replacing this with a note. I'd place around 84,316. Also NC. If you keep the 1/4 slider, you should move it further up so the blanket doesn't feel so cramped. changed blanket spacing
2. 00:21:446 (5,6) - ^same thing ^
3. 00:27:586 (2,3) - these two notes aren't in the music, I'd make (1) a slider that ends where (4) is instead I hear some bg rustling in the music, i know its not enough to justify a full stream but it continues through the stream, so I'll keep it for now
4. 00:48:026 (4) - try moving this slider so it lines up with (3)? i like it, fixed
5. 01:23:466 (2) - don't know how much it matters to you but this slider is pretty easy to misread IMO. if you don't care then keep it! I used to do this pattern with the slider starts stacked, i think its ok how it is now
6. 01:41:342 (2,3) - line these up more, try moving (2) to 431,202 or so agreed
7. 01:47:093 (2,3,4) - this flow is a bit awkward. consider changing. something like this might feel better: http://puu.sh/rVBOq.png (3 is stack on the start of 1) I like your pattern, it does feel good but the whole map I tried rather completely linear flow or circular flow for any combo, so I'll keep it as is, i might change it later if someone else points it out
8. 01:48:959 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cool !! uhh i just noticed that these are the same combo color... wot
9. 01:51:446 (3) - could flow better if the start was lined up with 2 and the end is lined up with 4, hard to explain but try it out i guess? sorta feels off to the side for no real reason right now (i know it's supposed to be stacked on the stream) I agree with the flow but I'll keep it how it is just for distance snap consistency sake
10. 02:24:088 (1,2,3,4,1) - something about how this stream is placed bothers me but i can't figure out what it is so why am i even mentioning it.. lol
11. 02:56:575 (10) - maybe move to 264,109? I moved it, but instead I made the DS equivalent (1.18x)
12. 03:11:964 (4) - possibly move this further away, try 495,45 and see if you like it or not song is too calm to increase DS
13. 03:25:487 (6,1) - this jump is awkward
14. 03:57:042 (1) - I don't really think there's enough space inside of the slider to throw a note in the center, the overlapping looks bad. that's just my preference though agreed, I made the slider more open
15. 04:53:466 (1) - I would shift the end of the slider up slightly so it's not so close to itself ficksd

Anyways that's it. Sorry for the lame mod. Super solid map, it deserves to be ranked. Feel free call me back for a re-check if you get further with it and need a bit more feedback. Sent you a star /o/ TY :O

Kami-senpai wrote:

M4M from thine queue

Rose-Colored Glasses

00:19:580 (3) - Since this is such a big change, you should NC it
00:23:155 (3) - ctrl + g this because you want 4 to be going the opposite direction, flow wise, which is what the change in music direction (idk if im making sense) calls for
00:26:264 (3) - Why is this SV so slow? I don't really hear any part of the music that could account for that
00:30:772 (4,5,6) - These hitsounds are nice ^.^
00:37:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe evenly space these because there's no special emphasis that should make it uneven ficksdd
00:43:985 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should put one of those bell hitsounded triplets here I did something and I like the sound sooo ye fixed
00:48:026 (4) - Based off your hitsounds, this would make a lot more sense as two single note jumps instead of a slider
00:52:378 (1) - Tilt this a little to the left so that it doesn't overlap with 00:52:067 (5) - yay
00:59:839 (1) - There's a whistle hitsound for the middle portion of the slider that I'm not sure if you intended or not wo0w nice catch
01:17:249 (1,2,1,2) - I almost feel that this would be better as single note jumps, since the song is pretty emphasized here with the drum. Since the sounds are different (i.e. snare and kicks) make the first two notes in each combo have high distance and the third one lower, like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6426114 I can see why I should change the pattern but I think its ok anyways since the snare lands on the slider start
01:18:181 (1) - Normally when you do this the flow is alright, but this slider seems to be too high up and too curved upwards for a nice flow. If you were to rotate around -26 degrees that would make it much better
01:19:425 (3,4) - These should get NC and higher distance because of emphasized sound
01:20:824 (4,1) - Very hard to predict based on distance and timing. Either space them out more or add a note between them made distance higher
01:22:534 (2,3) - Same with this. Your other stacks are pretty inconsistent as well, sometimes, they are extended sliders and sometimes they have 1/2 space between them. Be more consistent with those for predictability
01:25:798 (2) - I'm not a big fan of ending sliders on the big white ticks because thats supposed to be a downbeat in the music. Maybe exchange this slider for two circles
01:27:663 (2,3,1,2) - If you're gonna use the same pattern, they should be mapped to the same sounds. Here the sounds are completely different, yet you use the same pattern, without even hitsounding them the same way.
01:33:725 (1) - NC off? No reason for NC ye
01:34:658 (1,2,1,2) - Idk, just everywhere you use this pattern, it just doesn't seem to fit the music because they're not the same sounds and they're not hitsounded the same way. If you hitsounded them the same, maybe it would work better it might be different in terms of sound each time but when you listen to the vocals it has emphasis on the start of the sliders, so I used the same pattern for consistency sake
01:38:700 (2) - There is clearly a note of the vocals at 1:39:010 that you just extended the slider over. Please don't do that. It makes me sad ;-; I did a bunch of different things for this part but I'll change it so it fits the white ticks
02:00:772 (5,6) - This style of stack is kinda hard to read, but if other people think its fine then its okay with me as well
02:13:985 (3) - NC
02:15:073 (1,2) - Maybe make it so the blanket looks more even, like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6426154 ok
02:19:425 (1,2,1,2) - The distances here are much higher than the ones where you did this previously Ill keep these just because you come out of a kiai doing this and i like increasing difficulty as song goes along (slightly)
02:21:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I didn't mention this earlier, but your streams seem to lacking a lot of potential hitsounds I hitsounded the streams to the bg music completely, I would add extra hitsounds, but id have to experiment, I think theyre ok right now
02:41:497 (12) - Yea definitely don't end this slider on the down beat. Put a single circle on the big white tick fixed
02:42:430 (3,4) - For the intensity of the music, this distance seems a bit high
02:50:513 (6) - NC oki
02:55:953 (6,7,8,9,10) - why is this so cramped??! ;-; it makes me cri. Spread them out plz oki
03:05:824 (11,1) - Hitsound these with clap too plz
03:25:953 (2) - Maybe move this more to the left so its not quite so overlapped
03:43:985 (1) - I feel that starting here, the SV should be slower because the music is kinda droned out, but you speed it up. Your call, but I think a slower SV would fit much much better
03:45:694 (1,2,1) - weird weird weird weird stack ;-; dun do dis.
03:46:316 (1) - NC off 03:46:472 (2) - NC on
03:48:959 (5) - NC on
03:56:264 (1) - NC off I messed with the NCs in this section
04:02:016 (1) - Lower volume starting here ye
04:11:031 (1,2) - Wow such small distance .-. spread it out more oops
04:23:155 (5,6,7) - This is a good example of fitting hitsound + pattern
04:29:684 (4) - I feel that if you ctrl +g this it would flow better
04:49:657 (6,1) - Normally your stream flow is nice, but this one is just super odd. Please place the slider more inline Quote from my other mod - the guitar is going owooowowwowwwowwwooo so i make slider go woowowowowowowoooo
04:53:311 (3,1) - Cool slider, bad flow from the note before it. I feel like this would be better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6426195

Overall, really nice map. Flow is generally on point, but I would suggest trying out different patterns to see which ones fit the music more. A general rule of thumb is, if the sound isn't the same, don't use the same pattern. You could twist this rule by making the hitsounds the same to trick the players into thinking its the same sound. Yea ill mess around with it, I do agree with you here, but I just tried to map towards whats intense in the pattern and whats not and it usually ended up as a circle slider circle slider, so I decided to use similar patterns

Also, please hitsound some more. In some places, especially streams, it is lacking and in others, it is just really weird, like it has no distinct pattern to them.

Great blankets, great slider aesthetic.

I look forward to seeing this baby ranked Same to you!