1. Advanced (1,99 stars, 415 notes)
2. Cheesecake's Easy (1,42 stars, 179 notes)
3. Normal (1,62 stars, 271 notes)
4. Sinfonia (2,76 stars, 474 notes)

Sinfonia - Me

Advanced - Me

Normal - Me

Easy - Cheesecake

1. 02:00:661 (4,5,6) - but distance snap cover it well, so I think it isn't an error after all
2. 02:37:237 (3,4,5) - distance snap seems to not cover this

1. 00:24:497 (1) - remove nc and place it here 00:25:319 (3) -
2. 00:25:935 (1) - remove nc and place it here 00:27:785 (4) -
3. 00:28:401 (1) - remove nc

Trynna wrote:

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trying to find some distance snap errors I found something

1. 02:00:661 (4,5,6) - but distance snap cover it well, so I think it isn't an error after all
2. 02:37:237 (3,4,5) - distance snap seems to not cover this

since the easy diff is cs 2.5 idk if is a great thing to keep it 3.7, nerf a bit to 3.5 seems nice, but nothing special

[Melody of Yearning]

Here I will just show up some nc stuff

1. 00:24:497 (1) - remove nc and place it here 00:25:319 (3) -
2. 00:25:935 (1) - remove nc and place it here 00:27:785 (4) -
3. 00:28:401 (1) - remove nc

Why I point these? Because of the constant instrumental rhythm of nc you was following before , in that part you just messed it up following the vocal only. I don't know if it's an unrankeable issue, because you are following the vocal, but that's a point to think about imo


I'm sorry for not be able to point more issues, your set looks so perfect to me so that was a bit hard lol
Really hope you can qualify it soon!

PotatoJA wrote:

[Cheesecake's Easy]
02:16:278 (4,5) - Looks better if blanket No real way to make that blanket without messing up the structure I use for this map, but I thought that part was strange anyway so I redid it

PotatoJA wrote:

Yo, waddup from #modreq

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02:00:661 (4,5,6) - I would try something like this https://i.imgsafe.org/fa33164411.png
02:37:237 (3,4,5) - ^ something like that

those would really mess up the patterns afterwards cause of ds and I see no problem with them being stacked that would justify the effort needed to change them into what you suggested

[Melody of Yearning]
03:37:442 (5,1) - stack changed stack leniency to 4, looked over all the other custom stacks I had and fixed them accordingly



Everything looks great from my perspective :O
probably the smallest mod u'll see here :p

1. 00:00:662 (1) - This wave sucks! http://puu.sh/pVzVu/78c495fe16.osu

1. 00:34:360 (4) - Not a fan of having this slider ending on a strong vocal
2. 01:11:757 (4) - This goes really close to offscreen and also goes ontop of the hit error bar if it's enabled, probably move this section up a bit
3. 02:23:470 (1,2) - It looks to me like you're trying to blanket the center of the spinner but it's a tiny bit off, try (334,137)
4. 03:41:757 (4,5,6,7,1) - This might be a bit much for Normal players
5. 03:47:100 (1) - Is... is this intentional? Feels really out of place lol

1. 02:18:846 (1,1) - Give this a 1/1 gap so that it's less stressful to move from the center of the spinner to the sliderhead
2. 02:53:881 (2,4) - I'm pretty sure that stacking sliderbodies like this so close together is unrankable

Cheesecake wrote:

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1. 00:34:360 (4) - Not a fan of having this slider ending on a strong vocal changed that part
2. 01:11:757 (4) - This goes really close to offscreen and also goes ontop of the hit error bar if it's enabled, probably move this section up a bit sure
3. 02:23:470 (1,2) - It looks to me like you're trying to blanket the center of the spinner but it's a tiny bit off, try (334,137) done
4. 03:41:757 (4,5,6,7,1) - This might be a bit much for Normal players nerfed
5. 03:47:100 (1) - Is... is this intentional? Feels really out of place lol yea I had that different before but then I was told recovery time after spinner for normal is 2/1 so I had it like this but now I made something better

[Melody of Yearning]

1. 02:18:846 (1,1) - Give this a 1/1 gap so that it's less stressful to move from the center of the spinner to the sliderhead changed
2. 02:53:881 (2,4) - I'm pretty sure that stacking sliderbodies like this so close together is unrankable I really hope not, I will ask for confirmation if this is true or not

Stjpa wrote:

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• 00:53:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - Imo too many circles, maybe use a 1/2 where (6) is because (7) isn't that audible in the music as the other sounds. changed
• 01:09:703 - From here on until kiai you only go anti-clockwise. That's almost 30 seconds fam. I honestly dont believe this is much of an issue, might think about doing something though
• 02:00:661 (4,5,6) - I can't tell if 3 stacks are fine or not in a Normal diff, but a bit movement never hurts I suppose. made a 1/2 repeat slider
• 03:13:812 (3) - I'd like to have the downbeat clickable because there's a strong vocal on it. Just use 3 1/1 circles here as you did already a few times. mapped this part the same as 00:40:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -


[Hard]
• 00:04:771 (5,6,1) - Something like this looks cleaner if you ask me. curved the slider a bit more
• 00:46:894 (4,5,6,1) - Why not just overmaps like before? This one looks really boring. made a back and forth similar to other parts in the map
• 01:51:004 (5,6) - I'm somewhat triggered that the drum sound is beneath a boring circle in combination with the stack after that. a little emphasis to the drum sound wouldn't be bad. changed
• 02:40:114 (4,5,6) - Maybe rather use circle + 1/2 slider than the current one? So that click sound has something unique or however I should describe that lol. I prefer how it is right now, quitly settling down the movement before the next downbeat makes me move again for this 'subtle' feel
• 02:53:881 (2,4) - I'm afraid that people will misread this one due the low AR. Wouldn't be a problem at all if you would have used the pattern in the map already, but since it isn't the case it doesn't really fit into the concept. changed

Stjpa wrote:

[Cheesecake's Easy]
• Don't you think that AR4 is too high considering that this is completely mapped on 1/1 on 146BPM with good readable patterns? :v
• 00:11:757 (2,3) - Would be cleaner if you move the white anchor down a little bit. Done
• 00:17:922 (4,5) - Somehow this little blanket triggers me. Maybe rotate (5) a little anti-clockwise? Made it a bit better
• 00:27:785 (1) - Considering that you always mapped to the vocals and usually ignored the drum sound it doesn't make sense that you suddenly want to map it here. Especially since it's just a normal bass sound and not anything special. You're right, changed
• 01:31:894 (1,2,3) - I suggest to shorten the 3/1 slider to 2/1 and use a 1/1 repeat on the downbeat. That way you still map that vocal thingy and overall it has more density which fits quite well as a spinner is coming up in combination with that spam of drum sounds in the music. Good idea
• 01:50:388 (2) - You can rearrange the red node to give the "hoshi" a little emphasis. In this part here I'm putting emphasis on the, uh, chimes? that you don't hear often in the song, to do that I made 01:49:155 (1,2,3) - all 2/1 sliders and had them in a symmetrical pattern, so I wouldn't want to do too much to change that, but I could do in future if needed

J1NX1337 wrote:

Did you know: Kala means fish in Finnish. Interesting!

[Cheesecake's Easy]

Pretty good Easy, structure looks good, and it plays generally well with maybe a couple exceptions. There are a lot of hitsound inconsistencies so I recommend you run a double-check on them. I'll point out what I can.
Also I think I would've personally ended 01:39:292 (1,4) - etc. on the half beats preceding the beats for a more clear rhythm but that's your choice.

1) I would personally use a lower OD and HP than the current AR. Maybe OD2.5 and HP2.5 or just 2 for both? Changed to 2

2) 00:21:620 (2) - This slider start seems to be missing one of those finish hitsounds since you used one at 00:16:689 (3) - In regards to all of these hitsound inconsistencies, I only really rushed through this once since I'd been mapping for about 4 hours straight, so I was never really 100% on them. I've now used a hitsound copier to copy the hitsounds from Melody of Yearning to this diff, hopefully it's better now

3) 00:22:853 (3,4,5) - Isn't this slider end and these circles also missing hitsounds compared to 00:17:922 (4,5) - ? ?_?
Although it would seem like the section at 00:10:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - uses a lot more hitsounds than the rest of the entire section, so maybe remove some from there or something. It's good to have them consistent.

4) 00:26:552 (3,1) - I find the flow between these two very misleading. Newbies might easily confuse the slider start on 00:27:785 (1) - to be on the slider end instead, and it definitely screwed me over when playing the map on FLHD. The low AR makes it even more likely to miss on it. I recommend using a pattern that flows better here. It actually flows pretty good! But I agree it could be confusing to newer players so I changed it

5) 00:30:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 3) basically. The hitsounding here differs from 00:10:525 (1,2,3,4) -

6) 01:15:867 (2,1) - I'd almost say the same about the flow between these. Maybe rotate (1) a bit so that it doesn't go straight back down again? It could be confusing for newbies otherwise. I think it's different here, since the sliderend is perpendicular to where the cursor will be approaching from the previous slider, whereas the path on the new slider is almost parallel.... ok I'll stop making things up but I do think this one is different!

7) 01:25:730 (2) - This slider start seems to be missing a finish like at 01:15:867 (2) -

8) 01:30:662 (2,1) - There's 1.21x spacing between these even though you normally use 1.40x, maybe make it consistent. Ah, earlier I scaled this slider down but I didn't consider that the slider will move when doing so. Nice catch

9) 01:56:552 (3) - I think this should be a soft sampleset finish instead of a drum because there's that clear snare hit in the song here.

10) 02:48:333 (1,2) - I think you have too many finishes here compared to 02:53:264 (1,2) -. Might wanna run a double check on hitsounds especially at this final segment. I also think 02:42:579 (2,2) - might've had a bit too many finishes compared to the rest of the map's finish hitsound density.

11) 02:54:497 (2) - This slider start could probably use a finish since 03:09:292 (4) - used one too

12) 03:32:716 (1) - This slider start could also use a soft finish instead of a drum finish.

J1NX1337 wrote:

Did you know: Kala means fish in Finnish.
[Melody of Yearning]

Nice map, I like the way you use pauses and your patterns are in general quite enjoyable to play. I would've done some of the overlaps in a different way probably but that's just me. Not much to point out here.

1) 00:30:251 (1) - This slider start could use a soft finish instead imo, I find it more fitting. A similar sound seems to play here where you also used a soft finish: 00:45:045 (1) -

2) 01:01:072 (4) - Isn't this slider start missing a finish like at 00:58:607 - etc.? Same for 01:03:538 (3) -

3) 01:55:319 (3) - You could curve this slider downwards like so, I think it looks nicer and sorta flows better: http://puu.sh/pWZbs/b3144cdb9f.jpg

4) 02:23:675 (2) - The red anchor point on this slider makes the curve look rather crude. Maybe do it like this: http://puu.sh/pWZ1D/296bfdc4cf.jpg

Not much I could point out on the hardest diff, so good job!
Good luck