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Topic Starter
Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月27日 at 21:18:37

Artist: Misaki Akeno (CV. Natsukawa Shiina) , China Moeka (CV. Amamiya Sora)
Title: Watashitachi Kinenbi
Source: ハイスクール・フリート
Tags: High School Fleet はいふり Hai-Furi haifuri kawaiwkyik sahuang
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6158kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.62 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Haifuri! (5.64 stars, 856 notes)
  3. Hard (3.29 stars, 501 notes)
  4. Insane (4.52 stars, 728 notes)
  5. sahuang's Normal (2.2 stars, 396 notes)
Download: Misaki Akeno (CV. Natsukawa Shiina) , China Moeka (CV. Amamiya Sora) - Watashitachi Kinenbi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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moeka
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_bT8MB2957M
metadata: https://www.aniplexplus.com/itemHTiYfrSA
Haifuri mean はいふり, that is the original anime title before airing
Nakano Itsuki
moeka
hyouri
rizia best girl
ac8129464363
nic insane

i approve of AR8
Karen
china moeka
lit120
May i join for gd? Lol u might know the answer already =w=
Little
akeno
_handholding
Are you taking GDs? if so can I do the normal? :3
Topic Starter
Rizia
i want do all diff myself, sorry
chainpullz
AR8.8 feels really nice. Wish more mappers used lower AR more often. =/
_Meep_
Got the exact same song, but the 30s ver. Can I copy yours? cause my 30s is unrankable due to it being rounded off to 30s,its only 28883ms long
KDS to u <3
Here's my ver.
http://puu.sh/pLd79/5cc0b9f1c5.osz
Kencho
[General]
  1. tags加上sahuang

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:530 - 無用的綠線 (no SV changes)
  2. 03:15:862 (2) - AiMod

[sahuang's Normal]
  1. 00:00:530 - 無用的綠線 (no SV changes)
  2. 01:27:363 - 01:27:529 - 這兩個音我是建議跟上的
  3. 01:29:529 - 01:29:696 - 這兩個也是

[Hard]
  1. 00:27:196 (3) - 00:28:363 (6) - NC
  2. 01:05:363 (2) - 改成彎滑條?
  3. 01:44:196 (3) - NC
  4. 01:51:029 (3) - ^
  5. 02:52:363 (4) - ^
  6. 03:01:863 (5) - ^
  7. 03:14:196 (4) - ^

[Insane]
  1. Nice diff

[Haifuri!]
  1. 00:51:196 - 這個位置是重音不太建議放滑條尾,所以你可以把00:50:863 (6) - 改成1/2滑條,然後00:51:196 - 加個圓圈疊在00:51:529 (1) - 上面,也可以是其他位置,隨你喜歡
  2. 01:16:363 (1) - Ctrl+H然後放去右邊flow好打點,像這樣
  3. 01:43:029 (4,1) - 不如試下這樣
  4. 02:29:863 (1) - 怎麼看也是覺得Ctrl+G會好打點,而且02:29:863 - 是重音,Ctrl+G之後也不會太遠
Topic Starter
Rizia

Kencho wrote:

[General]
  1. tags加上sahuang

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:530 - 無用的綠線 (no SV changes)
  2. 03:15:862 (2) - AiMod

[Hard]
  1. 00:27:196 (3) - 00:28:363 (6) - NC
  2. 01:05:363 (2) - 改成彎滑條?
  3. 01:44:196 (3) - NC
  4. 01:51:029 (3) - ^
  5. 02:52:363 (4) - ^
  6. 03:01:863 (5) - ^
  7. 03:14:196 (4) - ^ 改晒

[Insane]
  1. Nice diff

[Haifuri!]
  1. 00:51:196 - 這個位置是重音不太建議放滑條尾,所以你可以把00:50:863 (6) - 改成1/2滑條,然後00:51:196 - 加個圓圈疊在00:51:529 (1) - 上面,也可以是其他位置,隨你喜歡 嘛我喜歡滑條尾重音 sometime
  2. 01:16:363 (1) - Ctrl+H然後放去右邊flow好打點,像這樣
  3. 01:43:029 (4,1) - 不如試下這樣 呢個唔了 我覺得現有既擺法更加體現到
  4. 02:29:863 (1) - 怎麼看也是覺得Ctrl+G會好打點,而且02:29:863 - 是重音,Ctrl+G之後也不會太遠
Lifdrasir
heyo my lord

im still being newbie in modding so dont kill me pls.
[Haifuri!]
  1. 00:03:029 (1,2) - I suggest you same as here 00:00:363 (1,2,3) - *I understand players who have nice reading can do differenche the ritm 1/2 (00:02:863 (6,1) - ) from 1/1 (00:03:029 (1,2) - ) but looks a bit weird as I can see. also you can increase 00:03:529 (2) - distance from 00:03:029 (1) - instead.
  2. 00:12:363 (4) - in my opinion looks like a bit suddenly flow stop. I 'd suggest you stack it in 00:12:863 (2) - nail
  3. 00:15:029 (4) - same as previous, I think would be flow better stacking it in 00:15:529 (2) - head.
  4. 00:43:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hm... I'd suggest this pattern. imo the actually feels a bit un flowed. maybe is just what I feel. So let's
    00:43:196 (1) - 125, 202.
    00:43:363 (2) - 360, 272.
    00:43:530 (3) - 64, 264.
    00:43:696 (4) - 404, 264.
    00:43:863 (5) - 240, 16.
    00:44:030 (6) - (kick slider) 125, 202.
    00:44:279 (7) - 387, 202.
  5. 00:49:196 (3) - I suggest you convert it into a slidere with a repeat. fits better the lyrics
  6. 00:50:863 (6) - eh.. it better if you decrease that slider to 00:51:113 - and place circle/slider here 00:51:196 - for avoid un-clicked downbeat
  7. 01:18:363 (2,3,4,5) - flows weird. try changin sequence or position instead
  8. 01:36:196 (1) - why NC lol. I suggest remove it
  9. 01:43:863 (3) - try 248, 272. flows better imo
  10. 01:53:196 (3) - do u can convert it into a slider with repeat? it benefits the lyrics. also adding circle here 01:53:696 -
  11. 01:57:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - hm... I'd suggest this pattern. imo the actually feels nice, but it can be better. maybe is just what I feel. So let's
    01:58:363 (2) - 368, 92.
    01:58:863 (4,5) - ctrl + G
  12. 02:07:863 (1,2,3) - feels random placed. it flows but I suggest you turn it into a triangle or a square base. like this
    Pattern

    02:07:863 (1) - 288, 192.
    02:08:029 (2) - 192, 320.
    02:08:196 (3) - 352, 384.
  13. 02:16:196 (6) - try finishing in blue gap and placing circle.

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Mod Finish! :) Good luck
Side
Hi for the M4M :v

[Why am I modding anime again?]

Don't use AR8.8 for a diff as jumpy and saturated as this lol. I'd say 9.2 is better but AR9 is enough.
OD 8.5 would also be nice considering the higher difficulty but 8 is okay considering the spread. Unless you plan to raise the other diffs xd

00:01:529 (4,5,6,1) - I like the idea of mapping this to the hi hats but I kinda wish this was mapped as an anti jump instead. Something like this could be good because the effect in itself follows a 2/1 rhythm that plays the same note so that is properly represented by a pause. It can look better than that example also

00:03:529 (2,3,4,1) - same if you applied above

00:07:029 (1) - I know you wanna blanket 00:07:696 (3) - but as this is the jump from 00:06:696 (3) - to (1) is so much weaker than from 00:06:363 (2) - to 00:06:696 (3) - even though even musically there is more emphasis on 00:07:029 (1) - . One small suggestion to make this a bit more even is snap the slider end of 00:06:696 (3) - to 00:05:529 (3) - instead, then move all of 00:07:029 (1,2,3,4) - together so that 00:07:529 (2) - snaps under 00:06:696 (3) - so the jump now looks like [http://puu.sh/qugPb/ff33c494c5.jpg this] which is more reasonable since the spacing is more similar and it keeps the pattern the same.

00:10:363 (3) - Maybe do another wavy slider like 00:07:696 (3) - ? ...or maybe not lol. Would be nice to give it more shape imo cuz of the sound

00:21:863 (1,2) - This would be so much better as a slider tbh since the guitar at 00:21:863 - could be properly represented by a 1/1 slider without removing the drum beat at 00:22:196 - It also helps cuz the three note stack at 00:22:196 (2,3,4) - is pretty plain even if it kinda follows the chord strums.

00:45:529 - feels so weird to ignore this even if the previous part is anti jumps ;-; Would be nice to have a note here that is snapped to 00:46:863 (6) - slider head for example.

00:49:863 (1,2) - The thing you id with the sliders like 00:45:863 (3) - 00:47:196 (1) - 00:48:529 (1) - was much better than this because they represent the vocals pretty well but not this stack imo. I'd highly suggest changing this pattern to be similar to the other three.

00:50:863 (6) - Also would HIGHLY suggest changing this to a 3/4 slider and a note at 00:51:196 - it's way too strong to just leave it to a slider end. If you do change this, maybe make a 1/2 slider so that you can get the guitar note at 00:51:363 - as well.

01:01:196 (1,2) - Personally suggestion but I'd rather see the stream starting here imo. it's not bad as it is though :v

01:02:863 (5) - Also small suggestion but I'd move this to x:332 y:332 so that the jump to 01:03:029 (1) - is slightly more impactful. It would give it a similar feel in movement to 01:05:529 (5,1) - for example.

01:32:363 (1,2,3) - I'd highly suggest this change. This adds much needed emphasis on this finish and that sound in the music in other words makes the jump from 01:32:029 (3) - to (1) more impactful and the pattern stays pretty much the same :v

01:55:029 - I understand why you wanted to have the pause at 01:52:196 (6,1) - Since you had a similar part in the first stanza of 00:24:529 - 00:35:196 - but here I expected more movement such as 00:40:196 (8,1) - 00:42:529 (3,4,1) - etc. So personally those two stacks don't fit so well as opposed to movement. TBH I'd suggest a note at both 01:52:363 - and especially 01:55:029 - simply cuz killing the momentum doesn't quite make much sense since the guitar is still going quite noticeably. If you do apply this change (which I recommend) also change 01:55:196 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and note so the slider properly represents "kyo" and the note at 01:55:529 - actually represents the "a" of "watashi" or whatever she says

01:56:363 (1,2,3,1) - OH YEAH btw I like this a lot more than 00:44:363 (1,2,3,4) - this but I'd suggest consistency and changing one or the other to match.

02:16:196 (6) - I'd suggest a note on that white tick instead of ending the slider there but play wise it's okay so I guess that one's up to you.

02:24:529 (1,2) - spacing is way short especially coming out of that jump section. Even compared to the spacing in the previous part of this kiai it's pretty small. An easy fix would be ctrl+g 02:24:863 (2) - but then the jump to 02:25:196 (3) - is a bit weird so what you can try instead is this which plays pretty well also.

02:32:196 (5,1) - Personally I like the effect but I know most ppl won't for play or at least for aesthetics. I'd suggest this so it at least looks nicer and those kinda ppl won't complain xd

02:33:029 (2) - dat spacing LOL. At least stack over 02:33:196 (3) - that spacing is very short and the snap is pretty awkward already coming from an awkward snap at 02:32:196 (5,1) -

02:48:529 (1) - If you wanna do this pause, stack (or offstack) it over 02:48:029 (4) - Considering the buildup it's enough to make players wanna snap immediately instead of expecting the pause and AR8.8 doesn't help with that lol

02:50:863 (1,2) - 1.5x is a lot of SV change for this. Tbh I wouldn't even want this SV but if I had to I'd use 1.2x most. The sliders being much longer make 02:51:196 (1) - visibly less intuitive as 1/2 since it looks very similar to the 1/4 just before this.

03:13:196 (3) - This would be much better as a 1/2 slider and note in this shape to emphasize dat guitar at 03:13:363 - :v (it's okay though)

03:30:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - How to make the SR spike up by .3x xd


[Insane]

00:07:696 (3,4) - Don't really like this snap tbh but I don't see an easier alternative without changing the pattern so

00:42:363 (2) - Same for this. Snap to (2) is very sharp vs what's going on in the music even if it might look nice in editor cuz 00:41:863 (1,2,3) - oo triangle it doesn't play very well since the emphasis isn't expected musically .

01:01:863 (1,2,3,4,1) - Lots wrong with this. 01:01:863 (1) - Ends on a strong beat, 01:02:363 (2) - starts on a weak beat especially compared to 01:02:529 - and 01:02:196 - same issue for 01:02:696 (3) - and the jump from (3) to 01:02:863 (4) - emphasizes nothing. Finally the part where the jump would be expected 01:02:863 (4,1) - is a stack like lol. A very easy fix is to do this. This corrects rhythm emphasis and jump emphasis as well without moving any notes around. Screenshot should show where each note was moved also. Of course there are better patterns but that would mean redoing this so it's just a simple fix.

01:12:363 - A note here would be cool tbh even if its an insane

01:30:196 (3,4) - This is likely gonna be misread due to the spacing :/

01:59:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is SUPER boring...having all these repeats with the same pattern rotated. Better to change 01:59:196 (1) - 02:00:529 (1) - and 02:01:863 (1) - to 1/1 sliders to follow the vocals better like 01:57:863 (1) -


[Hard]

00:07:696 (3) - Would be nice as a 1/2 slider tbh mirrored of 00:08:029 (4) -

00:09:029 (2,3) - Personally also think 1/2 sliders like 00:06:363 (2,3) - would be better than this cuz if not this whole section at 00:08:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - is just a lot of 1/1 and that's kinda boring imo. Could look something like this tbh.

01:41:863 - I dont think this was supposed to be .7x spacing when compared to this section 00:29:863 - which is the same in the music so this whole section feels weak as a result. Use 1.0x for consistency.


[Normal]

Copy hitsounds

00:54:529 (2) - A 1/1 slider would be better here since there's nothing too important on 00:55:029 - and the 3/2 looks kinda off. If you do change this I'd also suggest changing 00:55:196 (3,4) - to 1/1 sliders.

01:41:863 (1) - It'd be better to start mapping again here. It makes more sense at 01:39:196 - because it's only the kick playing so it implies a pause but starting 01:41:863 - the music "picks up" again so currently it's pretty offputting to just leave it unmapped. If you do map this (which I highly suggest) I'd also map this section a bit more 01:44:529 - maybe like a 2/1 slider and note or something lol

No major issues. Nice normal!


[Easy]

OD2 would be better imo

01:36:529 (1) - Nice

No real issues.


Hope this helps. Good luck! :)
Kalibe
-m4m-

General*

- nothing here i guess.

[Easy]

- I would change AR to 2,5, because spread {2,5 - 4} looks more consistent, also will increase OD to 2 and HP to 1,5
- 03:15:862 (2) - AIbot said: it's unsnapped.
- 00:30:863 (2,3) - 03:22:195 (4,5) - Little spacing errors.
- 01:11:863 (5) - That slider touches a accuracy bar, try to avoid it? http://puu.sh/qvnMe/f6367b3f50.jpg
- 01:43:196 - I think you should start mapping from here, since 4 white beats after spinner are here, try this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/qvo2n/048e5760cd.jpg
- 01:04:529 (1,1) - Make blankets with next to their sliders?
- 03:27:529 (4) - How about this positioning? http://puu.sh/qvoxN/2af7770b7e.jpg

[sahuang's Normal]

- 00:00:530 - Useless greenline, please delete this =w= // Also no hitsounds, sad :(
- Tbh AR 4,5 would works better here, but it's up to you.
- 00:25:196 (3,4) - Ouch, fix blanket - just move 00:25:863 (4) - on 219/307
- 00:55:196 (3,4) - How about replacing those circles into 2/1 slider to follow vocal thing?
- 00:58:196 (5,6) - I think just changing (5) into 1/1 will be better option imo.
- 01:31:696 (2,3) - Structure looks a bit weird, cuz sliders aren't the same curved ;p;
- 01:45:696 (2,3) - Fix spacing~
- 02:07:196 (3,4) - like in 00:58:196 (5,6) -
- 02:10:196 (1,2) - same as 00:58:196 (5,6) - also remove nc from 02:10:196 (1) - since it's rather unnessesary.
- 03:44:529 (5,6) - How about this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/qvpQA/952f92eb54.jpg

[Hard]

- 01:35:696 (3,1,2) - I really prefer to delete that NC 01:36:196 (1) - and make spacing consistent on 01:35:696 (3,1) - since there isn't enough strong sounds to emphasis it like in 01:36:363 (2,1) - tho.
- 01:53:863 (1,3) - Nazi, but this is not well paralleled. xd
- 02:07:696 (2) - I would rather stack this circle on 02:07:863 (3) - because (2) have stronger beat than actual (3) imo.
- 02:15:529 (1) - Remove NC, cause u didn't nc it before 01:03:529 (4) -
- 02:24:029 (4) - Also here, before u mapped 1/1 in this place to emphasis vocal, why u didn't make it here too?
- 02:35:863 (3,4) - Change this into 2 1/2 sliders? To get better emphasis on last loud note 02:36:529 (5) -

[Insane]

- 00:44:363 (1) - I think this circle needs more spacing, cause he start that loud 1/1 snap rhythm..
- 00:58:529 (5,6) - vs 00:57:196 (5,6) - definitely same sounds and 1.0 x more spacing between those.. ;p; // I would decrease spacing in 00:58:529 (5,6) - though.
- 01:13:529 (4) - How about stacking this circle on 01:13:029 (2) - instead of slider? It makes better flow to 01:13:696 (1) -
- 02:32:029 (5) - Try move this circle around 380/178 ~ now spacing looks kinda big compared to music tone.
- cool diff, ar 8 with this diff is really played well :3

[Haifuri!!!!!!!!!!]

- 01:21:029 (2) - How about coordinates 260/216 ? So the transision between 01:21:029 (2,3) - is not that egdy to play.
- 02:32:196 (5,1) - That plays kinda weird for me.. Try rearrange it like this? http://puu.sh/qvBl1/d6053a3fe9.jpg
- 02:35:196 (1) - I'm curious a little, why this section is a lot of easier than before 01:23:196 (1) - I though spacing in jump part should gets up with time. But maybe it's just me =w=
- 02:53:029 (3,6) - Avoid this overlap, it's visible in-game and doesn't look good at all.
- also neat diff

Ok, that's all i guess. Hafuri !!!!!! have a star :3/

reo
Topic Starter
Rizia

Gandalfr wrote:

heyo my lord

im still being newbie in modding so dont kill me pls.
[Haifuri!]
  1. 00:03:029 (1,2) - I suggest you same as here 00:00:363 (1,2,3) - *I understand players who have nice reading can do differenche the ritm 1/2 (00:02:863 (6,1) - ) from 1/1 (00:03:029 (1,2) - ) but looks a bit weird as I can see. also you can increase 00:03:529 (2) - distance from 00:03:029 (1) - instead. changed to 1/4+1/1
  2. 00:12:363 (4) - in my opinion looks like a bit suddenly flow stop. I 'd suggest you stack it in 00:12:863 (2) - nail keep stack
  3. 00:15:029 (4) - same as previous, I think would be flow better stacking it in 00:15:529 (2) - head. ^
  4. 00:43:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hm... I'd suggest this pattern. imo the actually feels a bit un flowed. maybe is just what I feel. So let's i want my own jump style
    00:43:196 (1) - 125, 202.
    00:43:363 (2) - 360, 272.
    00:43:530 (3) - 64, 264.
    00:43:696 (4) - 404, 264.
    00:43:863 (5) - 240, 16.
    00:44:030 (6) - (kick slider) 125, 202.
    00:44:279 (7) - 387, 202.
  5. 00:49:196 (3) - I suggest you convert it into a slidere with a repeat. fits better the lyrics
  6. 00:50:863 (6) - eh.. it better if you decrease that slider to 00:51:113 - and place circle/slider here 00:51:196 - for avoid un-clicked downbeat seem good for me, also i like place slider tail on downbeat
  7. 01:18:363 (2,3,4,5) - flows weird. try changin sequence or position instead seem fine to me
  8. 01:36:196 (1) - why NC lol. I suggest remove it
  9. 01:43:863 (3) - try 248, 272. flows better imo
  10. 01:53:196 (3) - do u can convert it into a slider with repeat? it benefits the lyrics. also adding circle here 01:53:696 - beat01:52:196 - 01:52:529 - is strong, so i think empty on 01:52:363 - is great
  11. 01:57:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - hm... I'd suggest this pattern. imo the actually feels nice, but it can be better. maybe is just what I feel. So let's keep
    01:58:363 (2) - 368, 92.
    01:58:863 (4,5) - ctrl + G
  12. 02:07:863 (1,2,3) - feels random placed. it flows but I suggest you turn it into a triangle or a square base. like this some reason here i like this more

    Pattern

    02:07:863 (1) - 288, 192.
    02:08:029 (2) - 192, 320.
    02:08:196 (3) - 352, 384.
  13. 02:16:196 (6) - try finishing in blue gap and placing circle.

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Mod Finish! :) Good luck

Side wrote:

Hi for the M4M :v

[Why am I modding anime again?]

Don't use AR8.8 for a diff as jumpy and saturated as this lol. I'd say 9.2 is better but AR9 is enough.
OD 8.5 would also be nice considering the higher difficulty but 8 is okay considering the spread. Unless you plan to raise the other diffs xd

00:01:529 (4,5,6,1) - I like the idea of mapping this to the hi hats but I kinda wish this was mapped as an anti jump instead. Something like this could be good because the effect in itself follows a 2/1 rhythm that plays the same note so that is properly represented by a pause. It can look better than that example also weird on reading imo

00:03:529 (2,3,4,1) - same if you applied above

00:07:029 (1) - I know you wanna blanket 00:07:696 (3) - but as this is the jump from 00:06:696 (3) - to (1) is so much weaker than from 00:06:363 (2) - to 00:06:696 (3) - even though even musically there is more emphasis on 00:07:029 (1) - . One small suggestion to make this a bit more even is snap the slider end of 00:06:696 (3) - to 00:05:529 (3) - instead, then move all of 00:07:029 (1,2,3,4) - together so that 00:07:529 (2) - snaps under 00:06:696 (3) - so the jump now looks like [http://puu.sh/qugPb/ff33c494c5.jpg this] which is more reasonable since the spacing is more similar and it keeps the pattern the same. 00:07:029 (1,2,3) - is same pattern so i dont think it need to blanket with 00:06:696 (3) -

00:10:363 (3) - Maybe do another wavy slider like 00:07:696 (3) - ? ...or maybe not lol. Would be nice to give it more shape imo cuz of the sound straight slider work better imo

00:21:863 (1,2) - This would be so much better as a slider tbh since the guitar at 00:21:863 - could be properly represented by a 1/1 slider without removing the drum beat at 00:22:196 - It also helps cuz the three note stack at 00:22:196 (2,3,4) - is pretty plain even if it kinda follows the chord strums. i want 00:22:196 (2,3) - clickable cuz of drum

00:45:529 - feels so weird to ignore this even if the previous part is anti jumps ;-; Would be nice to have a note here that is snapped to 00:46:863 (6) - slider head for example. i dont think so, keep follow 00:44:363 (1,2,3,4) - only

00:49:863 (1,2) - The thing you id with the sliders like 00:45:863 (3) - 00:47:196 (1) - 00:48:529 (1) - was much better than this because they represent the vocals pretty well but not this stack imo. I'd highly suggest changing this pattern to be similar to the other three. if use same pattern/rhythm too much, it will make the map boring

00:50:863 (6) - Also would HIGHLY suggest changing this to a 3/4 slider and a note at 00:51:196 - it's way too strong to just leave it to a slider end. If you do change this, maybe make a 1/2 slider so that you can get the guitar note at 00:51:363 - as well. downbeat on slider end is also fun imo

01:01:196 (1,2) - Personally suggestion but I'd rather see the stream starting here imo. it's not bad as it is though :v 01:01:529 (1,2,3,4) - is more great to follow, so i choose that

01:02:863 (5) - Also small suggestion but I'd move this to x:332 y:332 so that the jump to 01:03:029 (1) - is slightly more impactful. It would give it a similar feel in movement to 01:05:529 (5,1) - for example.

01:32:363 (1,2,3) - I'd highly suggest this change. This adds much needed emphasis on this finish and that sound in the music in other words makes the jump from 01:32:029 (3) - to (1) more impactful and the pattern stays pretty much the same :v keep

01:55:029 - I understand why you wanted to have the pause at 01:52:196 (6,1) - Since you had a similar part in the first stanza of 00:24:529 - 00:35:196 - but here I expected more movement such as 00:40:196 (8,1) - 00:42:529 (3,4,1) - etc. So personally those two stacks don't fit so well as opposed to movement. TBH I'd suggest a note at both 01:52:363 - and especially 01:55:029 - simply cuz killing the momentum doesn't quite make much sense since the guitar is still going quite noticeably. If you do apply this change (which I recommend) also change 01:55:196 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and note so the slider properly represents "kyo" and the note at 01:55:529 - actually represents the "a" of "watashi" or whatever she says it's good to me

01:56:363 (1,2,3,1) - OH YEAH btw I like this a lot more than 00:44:363 (1,2,3,4) - this but I'd suggest consistency and changing one or the other to match. thx but i want the map overall difficulty is low to high

02:16:196 (6) - I'd suggest a note on that white tick instead of ending the slider there but play wise it's okay so I guess that one's up to you. [b]same[/b]

02:24:529 (1,2) - spacing is way short especially coming out of that jump section. Even compared to the spacing in the previous part of this kiai it's pretty small. An easy fix would be ctrl+g 02:24:863 (2) - but then the jump to 02:25:196 (3) - is a bit weird so what you can try instead is this which plays pretty well also.

02:32:196 (5,1) - Personally I like the effect but I know most ppl won't for play or at least for aesthetics. I'd suggest this so it at least looks nicer and those kinda ppl won't complain xd

02:33:029 (2) - dat spacing LOL. At least stack over 02:33:196 (3) - that spacing is very short and the snap is pretty awkward already coming from an awkward snap at 02:32:196 (5,1) -

02:48:529 (1) - If you wanna do this pause, stack (or offstack) it over 02:48:029 (4) - Considering the buildup it's enough to make players wanna snap immediately instead of expecting the pause and AR8.8 doesn't help with that lol it fine imo

02:50:863 (1,2) - 1.5x is a lot of SV change for this. Tbh I wouldn't even want this SV but if I had to I'd use 1.2x most. The sliders being much longer make 02:51:196 (1) - visibly less intuitive as 1/2 since it looks very similar to the 1/4 just before this. i use 1.5x because longer kickslider looks better

03:13:196 (3) - This would be much better as a 1/2 slider and note in this shape to emphasize dat guitar at 03:13:363 - :v (it's okay though)

03:30:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - How to make the SR spike up by .3x xd


[Insane]

00:07:696 (3,4) - Don't really like this snap tbh but I don't see an easier alternative without changing the pattern so keep

00:42:363 (2) - Same for this. Snap to (2) is very sharp vs what's going on in the music even if it might look nice in editor cuz 00:41:863 (1,2,3) - oo triangle it doesn't play very well since the emphasis isn't expected musically . same

01:01:863 (1,2,3,4,1) - Lots wrong with this. 01:01:863 (1) - Ends on a strong beat, 01:02:363 (2) - starts on a weak beat especially compared to 01:02:529 - and 01:02:196 - same issue for 01:02:696 (3) - and the jump from (3) to 01:02:863 (4) - emphasizes nothing. Finally the part where the jump would be expected 01:02:863 (4,1) - is a stack like lol. A very easy fix is to do this. This corrects rhythm emphasis and jump emphasis as well without moving any notes around. Screenshot should show where each note was moved also. Of course there are better patterns but that would mean redoing this so it's just a simple fix. in a AR8 insane, i dont want rhythm looks too complex

01:12:363 - A note here would be cool tbh even if its an insane

01:30:196 (3,4) - This is likely gonna be misread due to the spacing :/

01:59:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is SUPER boring...having all these repeats with the same pattern rotated. Better to change 01:59:196 (1) - 02:00:529 (1) - and 02:01:863 (1) - to 1/1 sliders to follow the vocals better like 01:57:863 (1) - i dont think so, clicking this is also fun imo


[Hard]

00:07:696 (3) - Would be nice as a 1/2 slider tbh mirrored of 00:08:029 (4) -

00:09:029 (2,3) - Personally also think 1/2 sliders like 00:06:363 (2,3) - would be better than this cuz if not this whole section at 00:08:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - is just a lot of 1/1 and that's kinda boring imo. Could look something like this tbh.

01:41:863 - I dont think this was supposed to be .7x spacing when compared to this section 00:29:863 - which is the same in the music so this whole section feels weak as a result. Use 1.0x for consistency.


[Easy]

OD2 would be better imo

01:36:529 (1) - Nice

No real issues.


Hope this helps. Good luck! :)

Kalibe wrote:

-m4m-

General*

- nothing here i guess.

[Easy]

- I would change AR to 2,5, because spread {2,5 - 4} looks more consistent, also will increase OD to 2 and HP to 1,5
- 03:15:862 (2) - AIbot said: it's unsnapped.
- 00:30:863 (2,3) - 03:22:195 (4,5) - Little spacing errors.
- 01:11:863 (5) - That slider touches a accuracy bar, try to avoid it? http://puu.sh/qvnMe/f6367b3f50.jpg not big error imo
- 01:43:196 - I think you should start mapping from here, since 4 white beats after spinner are here, try this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/qvo2n/048e5760cd.jpg
- 01:04:529 (1,1) - Make blankets with next to their sliders?
- 03:27:529 (4) - How about this positioning? http://puu.sh/qvoxN/2af7770b7e.jpg

[Hard]

- 01:35:696 (3,1,2) - I really prefer to delete that NC 01:36:196 (1) - and make spacing consistent on 01:35:696 (3,1) - since there isn't enough strong sounds to emphasis it like in 01:36:363 (2,1) - tho.
- 01:53:863 (1,3) - Nazi, but this is not well paralleled. xd
- 02:07:696 (2) - I would rather stack this circle on 02:07:863 (3) - because (2) have stronger beat than actual (3) imo.
- 02:15:529 (1) - Remove NC, cause u didn't nc it before 01:03:529 (4) -
- 02:24:029 (4) - Also here, before u mapped 1/1 in this place to emphasis vocal, why u didn't make it here too?
- 02:35:863 (3,4) - Change this into 2 1/2 sliders? To get better emphasis on last loud note 02:36:529 (5) -

[Insane]

- 00:44:363 (1) - I think this circle needs more spacing, cause he start that loud 1/1 snap rhythm..
- 00:58:529 (5,6) - vs 00:57:196 (5,6) - definitely same sounds and 1.0 x more spacing between those.. ;p; // I would decrease spacing in 00:58:529 (5,6) - though.
- 01:13:529 (4) - How about stacking this circle on 01:13:029 (2) - instead of slider? It makes better flow to 01:13:696 (1) -
- 02:32:029 (5) - Try move this circle around 380/178 ~ now spacing looks kinda big compared to music tone.
- cool diff, ar 8 with this diff is really played well :3

[Haifuri!!!!!!!!!!]

- 01:21:029 (2) - How about coordinates 260/216 ? So the transision between 01:21:029 (2,3) - is not that egdy to play.
- 02:32:196 (5,1) - That plays kinda weird for me.. Try rearrange it like this? http://puu.sh/qvBl1/d6053a3fe9.jpg
- 02:35:196 (1) - I'm curious a little, why this section is a lot of easier than before 01:23:196 (1) - I though spacing in jump part should gets up with time. But maybe it's just me =w= big 1212 too hard
- 02:53:029 (3,6) - Avoid this overlap, it's visible in-game and doesn't look good at all.
- also neat diff

Ok, that's all i guess. Hafuri !!!!!! have a star :3/

reo

thx >.<
Sotarks
Greetings Rizia,


General

  1. normal-hitwhistle.wav is unused, try to use it or rather remove it.

Easy

  1. 03:15:862 (2) - Oops, check AIMod this is wrongly snapped ! =w=
  2. 00:21:196 (4) - I know it's easy, but newbie will like to clic this downbeat, so I could suggest you to use 1/1 + circle, imo.
  3. 01:21:863 (2) - What are you following here, it's quit questionnable... I can suggest you this rythmn, could be an alternative to that, idk..
  4. 01:28:529 (2) - Why U don't use the same slider as, 01:27:363 (1) - you did here for consistency ?
    Really nice easy overall, I like the shapes you uses here.

sahuang's Normal

  1. 01:46:363 (3) - Ooops, check the Distance Snap here buddy, it's a bit too far from, 01:45:696 (2) - haha! =w=
  2. 02:50:029 (1) - Nooo, why you didn't map that part after the spinner, it will be so frustrated for newbies ! ><
  3. 03:37:863 (1) - Why not using a regular slider like 03:37:863 (1,2) - this one, the reverse doesn't fit here imo..
    Impressive normal!

Hard

  1. 00:03:029 (1) - Is the NC really necessary here ?
  2. 00:11:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why not use this rythmn it would be really cool emphasis here dude! I highly consider this.
  3. 00:23:529 (2,3) - Are those stacks intentional ?
  4. U decide to follow vocals but 00:25:863 (1,2) - between those there's no note.
  5. 01:08:529 (1,2) - Replace those by a 1/1 slider ?
  6. 01:20:529 (1,3) - Can you try ovoid this little overlap, just neatpicking. xD
  7. 01:21:696 (4) - Again, intentional stack or not? But i'll suggest you to stack it propelly like you did on all of them.
  8. 01:35:696 (1,1,1,1) - wowowow why this spam NC here, is that intentional... If yes, why??? :s
  9. 01:56:363 (1) - I guess you can remove the NC here.
  10. 01:59:863 (2) - 392|136 neatpicking
  11. 02:59:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow i love that!!
    Wow I really like this Hard! Gr8 job here m8

Insane

  1. 00:12:363 (3,1) - Consider Ctrl+G this rythmn, fits so well buddy! =D
  2. 00:23:363 (2,3) - Same here, try and Ctrl+G !
  3. 00:40:196 (6) - 373|238 hi i'm mr.neatpicking xd
  4. 00:44:363 (1) - I feel like this note needs more emphasis here... Why don't you not space it more ?
  5. 01:02:363 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rythmn to follow propelly vocals/rythmn xd
  6. 03:17:029 (3,4,5) - LO I almost missed on that ..
    Really cool Insane!

Haifuri! (wat does that even mean?)

  1. 00:12:363 (4,1) - Same as Insane, I really think this is a good idea to Ctrl+G this rythmn xD
  2. 00:26:446 (4) - I don't here any sound on this one here... Why u use 1/4 here?
  3. 00:31:779 (5) - ^ same here!
  4. 01:15:196 (1) - nazi stack!
  5. 02:48:363 (6,1) - U forgot a note between those 2!
    so gooooooooooooooooooooood

GL =w=
have a star*
Topic Starter
Rizia

Sotarks wrote:

Greetings Rizia,


General

  1. normal-hitwhistle.wav is unused, try to use it or rather remove it.

Easy

  1. 03:15:862 (2) - Oops, check AIMod this is wrongly snapped ! =w=
  2. 00:21:196 (4) - I know it's easy, but newbie will like to clic this downbeat, so I could suggest you to use 1/1 + circle, imo. i want keep the simple rhythm
  3. 01:21:863 (2) - What are you following here, it's quit questionnable... I can suggest you this rythmn, could be an alternative to that, idk..
  4. 01:28:529 (2) - Why U don't use the same slider as, 01:27:363 (1) - you did here for consistency ?
    Really nice easy overall, I like the shapes you uses here.

Hard

  1. 00:03:029 (1) - Is the NC really necessary here ?
  2. 00:11:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why not use this rythmn it would be really cool emphasis here dude! I highly consider this. i want keep rhythm
  3. 00:23:529 (2,3) - Are those stacks intentional ? auto stack will make 00:23:029 (1,2) - overlap
  4. U decide to follow vocals but 00:25:863 (1,2) - between those there's no note.
  5. 01:08:529 (1,2) - Replace those by a 1/1 slider ?
  6. 01:20:529 (1,3) - Can you try ovoid this little overlap, just neatpicking. xD
  7. 01:21:696 (4) - Again, intentional stack or not? But i'll suggest you to stack it propelly like you did on all of them. same
  8. 01:35:696 (1,1,1,1) - wowowow why this spam NC here, is that intentional... If yes, why??? :s
  9. 01:56:363 (1) - I guess you can remove the NC here.
  10. 01:59:863 (2) - 392|136 neatpicking ?
  11. 02:59:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow i love that!!
    Wow I really like this Hard! Gr8 job here m8

Insane

  1. 00:12:363 (3,1) - Consider Ctrl+G this rythmn, fits so well buddy! =D imo the part should be start at 00:12:529 -
  2. 00:23:363 (2,3) - Same here, try and Ctrl+G ! sound on 00:23:029 - 00:23:363 -
  3. 00:40:196 (6) - 373|238 hi i'm mr.neatpicking xd
  4. 00:44:363 (1) - I feel like this note needs more emphasis here... Why don't you not space it more ?
  5. 01:02:363 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rythmn to follow propelly vocals/rythmn xd
  6. 03:17:029 (3,4,5) - LO I almost missed on that ..
    Really cool Insane!

Haifuri! (wat does that even mean?)

  1. 00:12:363 (4,1) - Same as Insane, I really think this is a good idea to Ctrl+G this rythmn xD same as insane
  2. 00:26:446 (4) - I don't here any sound on this one here... Why u use 1/4 here? only overmap, because it feeling good
  3. 00:31:779 (5) - ^ same here!
  4. 01:15:196 (1) - nazi stack!
  5. 02:48:363 (6,1) - U forgot a note between those 2! good point but i still dont want to add
    so gooooooooooooooooooooood

GL =w=
have a star*

thx!
sahuang
Sorry for late, being busy lul

Kencho wrote:

[sahuang's Normal]
  1. 00:00:530 - 無用的綠線 (no SV changes) delete
  2. 01:27:363 - 01:27:529 - 這兩個音我是建議跟上的
  3. 01:29:529 - 01:29:696 - 這兩個也是
    并不想跟。。这边normal的kiai刚结束想留个稍微大点的gap,而且感觉还蛮好的

Side wrote:

Hi for the M4M :v

[Normal]
Copy hitsounds
will let rizia copy and i will check them
00:54:529 (2) - A 1/1 slider would be better here since there's nothing too important on 00:55:029 - and the 3/2 looks kinda off. If you do change this I'd also suggest changing 00:55:196 (3,4) - to 1/1 sliders.
yep,changed rhythm here
01:41:863 (1) - It'd be better to start mapping again here. It makes more sense at 01:39:196 - because it's only the kick playing so it implies a pause but starting 01:41:863 - the music "picks up" again so currently it's pretty offputting to just leave it unmapped. If you do map this (which I highly suggest) I'd also map this section a bit more 01:44:529 - maybe like a 2/1 slider and note or something lol
did sth
No major issues. Nice normal!

Kalibe wrote:

-m4m-

[sahuang's Normal]

- 00:00:530 - Useless greenline, please delete this =w= // Also no hitsounds, sad :(
- Tbh AR 4,5 would works better here, but it's up to you. k
- 00:25:196 (3,4) - Ouch, fix blanket - just move 00:25:863 (4) - on 219/307 it's fine
- 00:55:196 (3,4) - How about replacing those circles into 2/1 slider to follow vocal thing?no
- 00:58:196 (5,6) - I think just changing (5) into 1/1 will be better option imo. noo,emphasis vocal
- 01:31:696 (2,3) - Structure looks a bit weird, cuz sliders aren't the same curved ;p;
- 01:45:696 (2,3) - Fix spacing~ k
- 02:07:196 (3,4) - like in 00:58:196 (5,6) -k
- 02:10:196 (1,2) - same as 00:58:196 (5,6) - also remove nc from 02:10:196 (1) - since it's rather unnessesary.k
- 03:44:529 (5,6) - How about this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/qvpQA/952f92eb54.jpg

Ok, that's all i guess. Hafuri !!!!!! have a star :3/

reo


Sotarks wrote:

Greetings Rizia,


sahuang's Normal

  1. 01:46:363 (3) - Ooops, check the Distance Snap here buddy, it's a bit too far from, 01:45:696 (2) - haha! =w= ye
  2. 02:50:029 (1) - Nooo, why you didn't map that part after the spinner, it will be so frustrated for newbies ! >< wanna map calm part
  3. 03:37:863 (1) - Why not using a regular slider like 03:37:863 (1,2) - this one, the reverse doesn't fit here imo.. it;s fine imo
    Impressive normal!

GL =w=
have a star*
Thanks for mod guys

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41,223,218363,2,0,P|96:208|157:229,1,110
207,312,219029,2,0,P|259:325|311:310,1,110
381,223,219696,2,0,B|390:186|390:186|382:102,1,110
376,59,220196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,111,220529,6,0,L|286:181,2,55
243,68,221029,2,0,B|180:63|180:63|123:77,1,110
55,151,221696,2,0,P|56:208|54:266,1,110
38,313,222196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,313,222363,2,0,L|154:309,1,110
203,309,222863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,250,223196,5,0,0:0:0:0:
391,305,223529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,239,223863,2,0,L|477:174,1,55
438,145,224196,2,0,L|436:80,1,55
410,41,224529,2,0,P|382:38|355:42,1,55
243,163,225196,2,0,P|215:166|188:164,1,55

是这样的,我map的03:01:863 - 开始的你break了,我前面break的你map了,所以到时候音效我再自己把那段空的加上去还是怎么样?
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