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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on your mom's birthday.

Artist: Joey Montana
Title: Picky
Tags: reggaeton latin latino HappyRocket88
BPM: 93.24
Filesize: 22583kb
Play Time: 03:09
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~PickyPickyPickyPickyPicky~
~Se que por dentro la cantan~

Image Relaxing Girl - by HappyRocket88
Image Average Girl - by me
Image Picky Girl - by me

I took some skin from here~

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HappyRocket88 (but he can't bubble cuz he's on the mapset) :v
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I could make easy if you need o3o
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MkGuh wrote:
I could make easy if you need o3o

Oh.. someone else is making it already~
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20:29 ezek: Supah Tropah
20:30 MkGuh: lights aren't going to find me
20:30 *MkGuh is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/950150 Joey Montana - Picky [Picky Girl]]
20:31 ezek: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5021352 faya in da ho]
20:31 MkGuh: 00:24:722 (1) - dude space them more it makes me want to die like that ;3;
20:31 ezek: die? :o
20:32 MkGuh: 00:38:718 (3) - same here feels waird having it kinda glued to (2) as beat is very strong
20:34 MkGuh: 00:56:736 (4,5,6) - this pattern feels too much tight
20:34 MkGuh: it has a bad flow
20:34 MkGuh: and bad readability
20:34 MkGuh: as almsot all the times i played it i keep thinking that (6) is a note and not a slider
20:34 MkGuh: as slider body is completely covered etc
20:35 ezek: I'm looking at the issues~
20:37 MkGuh: 01:25:694 (4) - as they sound good in the start of a new beat where the sound is more emphasized, it feeels bad there
20:37 MkGuh: change it for a 1/2 and then add a note
20:38 MkGuh: it'll follow vocals much better
20:38 MkGuh: and will play better tho
20:43 MkGuh: 02:36:480 (1,4) - at this part the 3/4 sliders feels bad too
20:43 MkGuh: :l
20:43 MkGuh: i'd say for same reason you lost important beats with they and it haven't a reason
20:43 MkGuh: 01:56:583 (4) - like on this one
20:44 MkGuh: that's prob because the backgroun song
20:46 MkGuh: 02:29:402 (4) - minor but pls fix stack here the whole map is well stacked
20:46 MkGuh: 02:35:837 (8) - ^ kek
20:47 ezek: about the large sliders, I prefer to leave them like that as I want to have a variety on emphasis and sometimes focus more on the general rhythm rather than the vocals
20:48 ezek: the bad spacing and the tight pattern you pointed out have been fixed~
20:48 MkGuh: q
20:49 ezek: about the stacks, the editor doesn't let me do them perfect~
20:50 MkGuh: ?
20:50 MkGuh: how did you make others then
20:50 ezek: idk
20:50 ezek: O3O
20:51 *MkGuh is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/955895 Joey Montana - Picky [Average Girl]]
20:51 MkGuh: 00:32:927 (4) - better make stacking consistent :l
20:51 MkGuh: then unstack those
20:52 MkGuh: bye
20:53 ezek: I prefer to leave that stack there to not take to much space on the playfield since there is a pause between the following notes
20:53 ezek: as you can see~
20:54 MkGuh: pls
20:54 ezek: hm?
20:54 MkGuh: well tbh i guess your map doesnt have much problems
20:55 ezek: oh la la~
20:55 ezek: does that mean I'm getting better? :o
20:56 MkGuh: why there is pink and yellow on combo colours?
20:57 ezek: look at the video~
20:57 MkGuh: there are some people that dont play with video
20:57 MkGuh: and lol video is a video
20:57 MkGuh: XD
20:57 MkGuh: colours will be always changing
20:59 ezek: There are girls dancing with pink costumes and the yellow color resembles a little to skin color aaaand goes well along with pink~
21:10 MkGuh: e
21:11 ezek: ?
21:11 ezek: will that be all, sir Guh? :o
21:11 MkGuh: yes
21:11 MkGuh: i'm sleepy
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Updated~ Thanks Guh!
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ivander20 wrote:
increíble :D

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Cuando esto se rankee, osu! explotará XDD (pues no hay reggaeton)
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1) this dumb song is now stuck in my head

2) i cant sleep because my brain is just repeating "picky picky picky picky picky"

send help

I'll probably come back and mod this, but yea great mapset and ahhh this song ahhhhh

gave stars to appease the osu gods and cleanse this song from my brain
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hhahahahaha xD thanks Hobbes! <3
picky picky picky picky picky♫
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picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫picky picky picky picky picky♫

I took a bunch of Spanish classes in high school, and it's kinda surprising me how much of this song I can actually understand.

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Relaxing Girl

01:01:239 (1,2) - This blanket could use a touch up, I think move the last slider point of 2 one to the left

01:11:535 (1,2) - Is a stack like this appropriate in a map this easy? I wouldn't think so, but you probably know more about that I do.

01:15:396 (4,5,1) - This overlap is def too hard for this diff IMO.

01:21:510 (4) - - Also, the above and here are the only spots int he entire song with a hit circle on a red tick between two sliders. I'd remove them for consistency

01:47:572 (1,2) - I love these sliders!

02:24:252 (2,3) - This is awfully cramped, maybe shape the slider so the two sliders aren't that close to each other?


Average Girl

00:22:629 (5) - Perhaps have the reverse occur at 00:23:111 and then have a hit circle at 00:23:916?

00:24:559 (6) - remove this slider IMO, I don't like it because a) the start of the slider isn't mapped to anything, and b) it makes sense for the map to resume when the background music starts up again (since it stops at 00:23:916)

00:31:638 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 very slightly touch, I think you can shape 4 so they don't

01:07:674 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5383352 (suggestion for blanket)

01:47:572 (1) - move down one pixel to align perfectly with 01:46:285 (5) -

01:54:007 (2) - End of this slider isn't parallel with 01:52:720 (1) properly so the blanket looks off.

02:28:756 (1) - Purely visual; move the slider point here one pixel to the left to have a more symmetrical shape --> http://imgur.com/3fRUu85

02:49:348 (4) - NC here? The music changes quite a bit at this point.


Picky Girl

00:24:720 (1,2) - Unlike normal where the slider just felt straight up bad, here it's fine since you're actually mapping his vocals properly. That being said, still consider removing everything until 00:25:203 for the same reason as I said in the normal.

02:10:094 (4) - Kinda feel this should be the same shape as 02:11:381 (3). Right now you're having symmetry with 02:08:807 (2) right? I suppose this is very subjective and you don't really need to change it.

02:51:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So in this part you follow the same melody (see 02:49:348 (1,2,3,4) for an example), but here you map the vocals for 3 and 4. If you're going to do this, I think you shouldn't leave 02:53:531 unmapped.

Although, I do think it would be better to just follow the same melody you do in the other parts not specially map the vocals.

Good luck! Great mapset here, the Picky Girl diff is a ton of fun (been trynna FC it with DT but my acc is always garbage x_x)
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Hobbes2 wrote:
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I took a bunch of Spanish classes in high school, and it's kinda surprising me how much of this song I can actually understand. \:D/

NM from nowhere because why not ~ Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu! <3


Average Girl

00:22:629 (5) - Perhaps have the reverse occur at 00:23:111 and then have a hit circle at 00:23:916? Nah, decided to introduce that rhythm on the next combo~

00:24:559 (6) - remove this slider IMO, I don't like it because a) the start of the slider isn't mapped to anything, and b) it makes sense for the map to resume when the background music starts up again (since it stops at 00:23:916) aah.. ok xd

00:31:638 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 very slightly touch, I think you can shape 4 so they don't fixed~

01:07:674 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5383352 (suggestion for blanket) improved~

01:47:572 (1) - move down one pixel to align perfectly with 01:46:285 (5) - nice eye

01:54:007 (2) - End of this slider isn't parallel with 01:52:720 (1) properly so the blanket looks off. I prefer to keep it that way

02:28:756 (1) - Purely visual; move the slider point here one pixel to the left to have a more symmetrical shape --> http://imgur.com/3fRUu85 not much change, but ok

02:49:348 (4) - NC here? The music changes quite a bit at this point. I'm following a consistency throughout the whole song and that would break it, but since it is a big change in music, I may do it if I get another similar opinion


Picky Girl

00:24:720 (1,2) - Unlike normal where the slider just felt straight up bad, here it's fine since you're actually mapping his vocals properly. That being said, still consider removing everything until 00:25:203 for the same reason as I said in the normal. I prefer to keep those~

02:10:094 (4) - Kinda feel this should be the same shape as 02:11:381 (3). Right now you're having symmetry with 02:08:807 (2) right? I suppose this is very subjective and you don't really need to change it. changed since the mentioned slider is closer and looks better~

02:51:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So in this part you follow the same melody (see 02:49:348 (1,2,3,4) for an example), but here you map the vocals for 3 and 4. If you're going to do this, I think you shouldn't leave 02:53:531 unmapped. I personally dislike how it sounds when I map that beat ;w;

Although, I do think it would be better to just follow the same melody you do in the other parts not specially map the vocals. I like both : p

Good luck! Great mapset here, the Picky Girl diff is a ton of fun (been trynna FC it with DT but my acc is always garbage x_x) hehe


Thanks a lot!

Updated~ and waiting for ________________my friend~
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Hm, you could say I was being nitpicky picky picky picky picky♫

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