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Sound Horizon - Yoiyami no Uta

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P A N
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P A N
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 มีนาคม 2559 at 23:45:58

Artist: Sound Horizon
Title: Yoiyami no Uta
Tags: fur Für Elise Ludwig van Beethoven Eine Kleine Nacht Musik Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart Ode to Joy Ludwig van Beethoven Fantasie Impromptu Frédéric François Chopin Pictures at an Exhibition Promenade Modest Mussorgsky 7th Story Märchen Marchen mercury2004
BPM: 182
Filesize: 20134kb
Play Time: 10:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Retribution (5.99 stars, 2245 notes)
Download: Sound Horizon - Yoiyami no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Storyboard by mercury2004

please play with SB and combo color once !

redownload if you download before 03/14/2016

: Monstrata & smallboat : HappyRocket88
Last edited by P A N , edited 42 times in total.
Natsu
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Joined September 2012
Natsu
just waiting my comment?
P A N
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Natsu wrote:

just waiting my diff of T.M.Revolution - FLAGS?
Euny
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Joined January 2014
Euny

P A N wrote:

Natsu wrote:

just waiting my diff of T.M.Revolution - FLAGS?

OOPS. okay wait fren;;;
Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Nowaie
(∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆ﾟ. * ･ ｡ﾟ Your map has been modded by teh worst modder

Nazi aimod
03:15:689 (2) - Object end is offscreen
08:11:239 - "Two timing points exist at the same time"
More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this. Made a list of the less necessary kiai times

Firetrucking Kiai
From 01:29:206 - to 01:40:085 - This part feels like an introduction and may be unnecessary
From 02:43:052 - To 02:53:601 - Less necessary Kiai
From 03:04:151 - To 03:12:063 - ^
From 04:07:447 - To 04:15:360 - ^
From 05:30:524 - To 05:51:623 - ^
From 08:33:821 - To 08:43:052 - ^
This should calm down aimod

Other stuff
02:11:403 (1) - Maybe curve this slider slightly
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
oh well, I just added kiai at my favorite part but nvm, remove some of it.

most thing that aimod said is quiet fine except that two timing point so fix only that.

curve is fine :>

thanks!
Gaia
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Joined May 2013
Gaia

P A N wrote:

just waiting my diff of KOTOKO - BLAZE?
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Gaia wrote:

P A N wrote:

just waiting Gaia to be BN again
Touhou
201 posts
Joined January 2014
Touhou
Hi, Testplayed and suggested some changes.
Changes
http://puu.sh/mcDZO/208bfb3a08.osu
Chatlog
17:21 Touhou: hi, want a translation of that song for the german parts?
17:21 Touhou: maybe for a future storyboard :p
17:21 P A N: what song
17:22 *Touhou is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/861889 Sound Horizon - Yoiyami no Uta [Fucking Guitarist]]
17:23 P A N: umm I will ask you when I need it :3
17:23 Touhou: damn this part 06:53:601 (1) - 
17:23 P A N: thanks :D
17:23 Touhou: not something i will be fcing lol
17:24 P A N: LOL
17:24 Touhou: other than that easy and nice, gj
17:25 P A N: ty :>
17:25 Touhou: that spinner
17:25 Touhou: are you sure?
17:30 P A N: will see
17:30 Touhou: fuck
17:31 P A N: calm
17:34 Touhou: sightread + never heard song
17:34 P A N: well played
17:34 P A N: :D
17:34 Touhou: the 2 stream parts
17:34 Touhou: will get me though
17:34 Touhou: fun map
17:35 P A N: thanks XD
17:35 Touhou: this might be a reason to get better at streams, haha
17:35 P A N: and ty for testplay as well
17:35 Touhou: np
17:35 P A N: ahahaha
17:35 Touhou: the ode to joy part is a bit lacking though
17:35 Touhou: sec, looking for the part
17:35 Touhou: 06:28:217 (1) - 
17:36 Touhou: 06:30:360 -  circle maybe?
17:36 Touhou: 06:31:678 - same
17:36 P A N: umm I only follow vocal there
17:37 P A N: and I love that jump
17:37 P A N: >_>
17:37 Touhou: 06:33:491 - make it longer and let it end here? 06:34:068 -
17:38 Touhou: the vocals deserve more credit imo :/
17:38 Touhou: 06:34:151 - onwards 
17:38 P A N: ummm
17:38 P A N: it's kinda hard to do that ahahaha
17:38 Touhou: when i played, i could barely hear the instruments
17:39 Touhou: and i think a lot of people know how ode to joy sounds
17:39 Touhou: they expect to click the vocals
17:39 P A N: will think about it
17:40 P A N: yea will do something
17:40 P A N: on vocal
17:40 P A N: let's count this as a mod
17:40 P A N: :D
17:40 Touhou: hang on
17:41 Touhou: i can give you correct sliders for the syllables
17:41 Touhou: i'll save in a seperate .osu and puush it
17:42 P A N: yea you can try
17:43 Touhou: holy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4229268
17:43 Touhou: good job on that one
17:44 P A N: hm
17:44 P A N: well ctrl+a and play the music is a bit funny
18:05 Touhou: that part
18:05 Touhou: can be really fun actually :D
18:06 P A N: >_>
18:15 Touhou: k almost done
18:18 Touhou: http://puu.sh/mcDZO/208bfb3a08.osu
18:19 Touhou: i focused on the objects, not the placements
18:19 Touhou: but it's testplayable
18:19 Touhou: if you want to :p
18:20 P A N: put this list to forum please
18:20 P A N: i want to give kds to get +sp
18:20 Touhou: I don't need kds
18:20 Touhou: but ok
18:20 P A N: I need sp
18:20 P A N: XD
- Frontier -
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- Frontier -
Why not Yoiyami Hanabi
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

- Frontier - wrote:

Why not Yoiyami Hanabi
what is that
KASUM1
336 posts
Joined December 2013
KASUM1
rank pls

my 300th post :D
Qiyana
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Joined April 2014
Qiyana
Can't mod right now, to remind me, post here!
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/385988/start=90
Kalibe
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Joined October 2013
Kalibe
wow
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Kalibe wrote:

wow
wow
CrimsonClaw
187 posts
Joined September 2012
CrimsonClaw
best map 2016
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Tachibana Kanade
randomly testplay and my advice:
03:15:689 (2,3) - a little weird set?
03:44:371 (3,4) - feel inconsistent with the song's sound
05:09:096 (1) - I'm not sure about this slider. i test and feel like maybe change the slider to 3 single notes feels better while playing.
nice map !
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

randomly testplay and my advice:
03:15:689 (2,3) - a little weird set? yea I planned to fix it.
03:44:371 (3,4) - feel inconsistent with the song's sound nice catch
05:09:096 (1) - I'm not sure about this slider. i test and feel like maybe change the slider to 3 single notes feels better while playing. sounds double here imo, let's keep this first
nice map !
thanks for mod and testplay :D
cute avatar btw, she's my favorite
Gero
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Joined March 2012
Gero
We did a short IRC mod, best of luck with this project.

Log
2016-01-06 15:01 P A N: hi Gero
2016-01-06 15:01 P A N: can I ask you for a bubble? >_>
2016-01-06 15:01 Gero: P A N
2016-01-06 15:02 P A N: so you can have more time to map your diff ^_<
2016-01-06 15:03 Gero: which song is it?
2016-01-06 15:04 P A N: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/861889 Sound Horizon - Yoiyami no Uta [Revenge]]
2016-01-06 15:05 P A N: 1 diff 8 mins, hope that's ok
2016-01-06 15:07 P A N: uh it has deathstream
2016-01-06 15:17 Gero: welll
2016-01-06 15:18 P A N: ;_;
2016-01-06 15:18 Gero: I can mod it but I doubt that this deserve a bubble, I think it needs more work before calling a BN right now tho
2016-01-06 15:18 P A N: that snap? lol
2016-01-06 15:18 P A N: the solo part
2016-01-06 15:19 P A N: well I tried to map it save
2016-01-06 15:19 P A N: follow only 1/2 and 1/4
2016-01-06 15:19 P A N: a bit 1/3
2016-01-06 15:19 Gero: maybe it's just me
2016-01-06 15:20 P A N: yyyea? o.o
2016-01-06 15:20 Gero: yeah
2016-01-06 15:21 Gero: 06:54:920 - some beats seems off
2016-01-06 15:21 Gero: also the 1/3 part or whatever which is it looks like quite weird to play and the patterns doesn't helps at all so yeah I'd like to suggest you redo some parts of this
2016-01-06 15:22 P A N: ah i got it
2016-01-06 15:22 P A N: overmapped
2016-01-06 15:23 Gero: kinda 
2016-01-06 15:23 Gero: yeah
2016-01-06 15:23 P A N: some blue tick
2016-01-06 15:23 P A N: yea
2016-01-06 15:23 Gero: so yeah I think you could get more mods, take it in mind
2016-01-06 15:24 Gero: ;~;
2016-01-06 15:25 P A N: yea I will try after fix that stream
2016-01-06 15:25 P A N: but i think 1/3 is fine
2016-01-06 15:25 Gero: up to you~
2016-01-06 15:25 Gero: rest is good enough
2016-01-06 15:26 P A N: alright thanks
2016-01-06 15:29 P A N: post if you want
2016-01-06 15:30 Gero: okay, will do~
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
m4m

General
I'm not sure if it's right to add tags regarding some parts in this song such as "hatsune miku" being used in the very end or "Fantasy Impromptu" in the middle to the end, I don't think it hurts to add them

Revenge
offset could be 73362 (-20) if I'm not mistaken, it feels the whole song could be applied with this offset
I will focus on hitsounds mainly, the playability in this map overall is great except the length of the song which made me choke at the end xdxdxdxdxd
01:27:867 (1) - finish only without clap
01:34:296 (1) - ^
01:36:933 (1) - ^
01:49:955 (1,2,3,4) - could add additional claps to fill the emotion here, seems very fitting with the song when it's moving to the another verse
01:53:252 (2) - remove whistle
01:59:515 (1) - add whistle
02:15:010 (6) - remove whistle
02:35:120 (1) - whistle to fit along with 02:40:394 (1) -
02:42:208 (3,4) - whistle
03:58:197 (1) - only clap at end
05:40:065 (2) - clap instead of whistle
05:40:230 (1) - remove whistle at end
07:37:757 (3) - only clap at start
08:16:658 (1) - clap at start
08:48:142 (4,5) - could add notes here for triple
08:50:779 (4,5) - ^

GL P A N :)
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