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Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama

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Naichatta
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Naichatta
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月23日 at 0:39:01

Artist: Suara
Title: Fuantei na Kamisama
Source: うたわれるもの 偽りの仮面
Tags: utawarerumono itsuwari no kamen opening alacat season 2 tv size
BPM: 156
Filesize: 14323kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Normal (2.1 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Easy (1.36 stars, 86 notes)
  3. Hard (3.42 stars, 249 notes)
  4. Insane (4.16 stars, 361 notes)
Download: Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama
Download: Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama (no video)
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うたわれるもの 偽りの仮面 OP
Normal - alacat

Nuedori
Last edited by Naichatta , edited 13 times in total.
alacat
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alacat
Normalできました :)

http://puu.sh/kR4fZ/6977bb9fc9.zip
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta

alacat wrote:

Normalできました :)

http://puu.sh/kR4fZ/6977bb9fc9.zip
ありがとうございます
タグも一緒に追加しました :)
Reol
998 posts
Joined September 2012
Reol
おはようございます！

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Letterbox during breaks ( not set in normal and easy )

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:202 (2) - これは 00:13:009 (1) - ここにStackしてもいいと思います！
  2. 00:24:548 (1) - NC?

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:548 (2) - これは曲線じゃなく直線にして、こういう感じはいかがでしょう :arrow: http://puu.sh/kT1AB/fc81a2fb79.png / http://puu.sh/kT1Ci/3c838c98bb.png
  2. 00:45:702 (2) - こんな簡単な形ががもっときれいだと思います！ http://puu.sh/kT1OU/cc90b78bef.png
  3. 01:15:317 (6) - NC?

はい、これ以外には特にありません！
Modが短いなので
頑張ってください！ :) :)
Sangzin
628 posts
Joined February 2013
Sangzin
PM request~

[General]

  • 00:13:202 - personally, this break time don't need to, even not fit.
    00:16:278 - ^


[Insane]

  • 00:18:778 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G?
    00:26:855 (5) - NC?
    00:29:932 (5) - ^
    00:33:009 (5) - ^
    00:45:702 (2) - looks ugly slider imo.
    00:56:086 (1,2) - one slider looks better imo.
    01:18:394 (5) - Simple slider?

[Hard]
  • Uncheck widescreen please.
    00:08:778 (2,3) - Increase distance
    00:13:009 (1,2) - stack?
    00:38:778 (4,5) - ^
    00:42:625 (2,3) - This overlap may confuse players imo.
    00:48:971 (3,4,5) - I don't think this big jumps are not good.
    01:08:394 (1) - little bit left to better read?
    01:15:894 (1) - It seems this NC is not here, but 01:16:086 (3) -[/list]

    Other diff is good. nothing to mod. Hope my mod will helpful. GL! :)
alacat
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3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Modしに参りました <(__)>

[General]
  1. Letter box / Widescreen Support全部はずしちゃってokです。
  2. Tagに"season 2 tv size" なんかどうでしょう？
[Easy]
  1. ~ 00:07:625 - ここまでのヒットサウンドが寂しいのでwhistleあたりを少々入れてみてはどうでしょう！
  2. 01:14:548 (1,1) - 少し見にくいので重ならないように配置したほうがいいと思います。
  3. 01:23:394 - 気合いタイムでここだけノートが無いというのは違和感がありました。
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:509 (3) - 多くの人が事故る未来が見えるので(3,4)の位置を入れ替えてみてはどうでしょう・・・
  2. 00:24:548 (3) - やや大きいジャンプと間隔が大きいスタックがあるのでここにnew comboあってもよさそうです。
  3. 00:26:086 (3) - 始点にwhistleなんてどうでしょう？ピアノの音もあるので
  4. 00:29:163 (3) - ＾
  5. 00:49:355 (5) - 少し難しくなってしまいますが複数の折り返しより、サークル＋サークル＋折り返し1回の音取りのほうがわかりやすくプレイしやすいと思います。00:48:586 (2) - ここと同じ様になっているので早めに話してしまう恐れもありますので。
  6. 01:03:009 (1) - new combo入らない気がします。
  7. 01:07:625 (3,1) - Hardなので(1)の数字が半分くらい見えるように配置して欲しいです。
  8. 01:23:586 - ここの音は欲しいです！！！
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:817 (5,8) - このあたりwhistleなんてどうでしょう？
  2. 00:03:778 (1,2) - ,00:06:855 (1,2) - ^ 同じ感じに・・・
  3. 01:26:855 (4) - 大きな音があるのに対し、前の(2,3)と同じ感じのスペーシングなのでもう少しジャンプを作ると音に合っていると思います。
kusano 先輩さすがです :)
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta
HalLoWeeN

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

おはようございます！

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Letterbox during breaks ( not set in normal and easy ) fixed.

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:202 (2) - これは 00:13:009 (1) - ここにStackしてもいいと思います！ しました。
  2. 00:24:548 (1) - NC? fixed.

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:548 (2) - これは曲線じゃなく直線にして、こういう感じはいかがでしょう :arrow: http://puu.sh/kT1AB/fc81a2fb79.png / http://puu.sh/kT1Ci/3c838c98bb.png
  2. 00:45:702 (2) - こんな簡単な形ががもっときれいだと思います！ http://puu.sh/kT1OU/cc90b78bef.png
  3. 01:15:317 (6) - NC? no changed ._.

はい、これ以外には特にありません！
Modが短いなので
頑張ってください！ :) :) ありがとうございます！

Sangzin

Sangzin wrote:

PM request~


General
00:13:202 - personally, this break time don't need to, even not fit.
00:16:278 - ^
no changed.




Insane
00:18:778 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G?
00:26:855 (5) - NC?
00:29:932 (5) - ^
00:33:009 (5) - ^
00:45:702 (2) - looks ugly slider imo.
00:56:086 (1,2) - one slider looks better imo.
01:18:394 (5) - Simple slider?
no changed.



Hard
Uncheck widescreen please. fixed.
00:08:778 (2,3) - Increase distance :?:
00:13:009 (1,2) - stack? fixed.
00:38:778 (4,5) - ^ :?:
00:42:625 (2,3) - This overlap may confuse players imo. I think it is ok
00:48:971 (3,4,5) - I don't think this big jumps are not good. ^
01:08:394 (1) - little bit left to better read?　fixed.
01:15:894 (1) - It seems this NC is not here, but 01:16:086 (3) - no changed

alacat

alacat wrote:

Modしに参りました <(__)>

[General]
  1. Letter box / Widescreen Support全部はずしちゃってokです。
  2. Tagに"season 2 tv size" なんかどうでしょう？OKです。
[Easy]
  1. ~ 00:07:625 - ここまでのヒットサウンドが寂しいのでwhistleあたりを少々入れてみてはどうでしょう！入れました。
  2. 01:14:548 (1,1) - 少し見にくいので重ならないように配置したほうがいいと思います。 とりあえずこのままで…他の人にも言われたら変えようかと思います。
  3. 01:23:394 - 気合いタイムでここだけノートが無いというのは違和感がありました。 変えました。
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:509 (3) - 多くの人が事故る未来が見えるので(3,4)の位置を入れ替えてみてはどうでしょう・・・ 変えました。
  2. 00:24:548 (3) - やや大きいジャンプと間隔が大きいスタックがあるのでここにnew comboあってもよさそうです。 fixed.
  3. 00:26:086 (3) - 始点にwhistleなんてどうでしょう？ピアノの音もあるので 追加しました。
  4. 00:29:163 (3) - ＾ ^
  5. 00:49:355 (5) - 少し難しくなってしまいますが複数の折り返しより、サークル＋サークル＋折り返し1回の音取りのほうがわかりやすくプレイしやすいと思います。
    00:48:586 (2) - ここと同じ様になっているので早めに話してしまう恐れもありますので。 fixed.
  6. 01:03:009 (1) - new combo入らない気がします。 fixed.
  7. 01:07:625 (3,1) - Hardなので(1)の数字が半分くらい見えるように配置して欲しいです。 fixed.
  8. 01:23:586 - ここの音は欲しいです！！！ ついうっかりジャンプを配置してしまいました…。
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:817 (5,8) - このあたりwhistleなんてどうでしょう？ fixed
  2. 00:03:778 (1,2) - ,00:06:855 (1,2) - ^ 同じ感じに・・・ ^
  3. 01:26:855 (4) - 大きな音があるのに対し、前の(2,3)と同じ感じのスペーシングなのでもう少しジャンプを作ると音に合っていると思います。 fixed.
kusano 先輩さすがです :) 良質なmodありがとうございます :)
Thank you modding~ :)
- [ Aho ] -
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- [ Aho ] -
顽张って↖(^ω^)↗
楽しみです
A335128
15 posts
Joined February 2011
A335128
Suaraさんの歌大好き！
Haruru
215 posts
Joined May 2010
Haruru

Easy

  1. 01:11:471 (3) - HPゲージにかぶってるので少し下げても良いかもしれません

Hard

  1. 00:42:625 (2,3) - ちょっと見にくいかも?
  2. 00:59:932 (4) - 3/4 スライダーを使っても良いかも？

Insane

  1. 01:01:086 (2,3,4) - 01:00:702 (1) からもう少し離して置くと見やすくなるかも

全然書くことがなかった・・・ 頑張ってください！ ☆~
Last edited by Haruru , edited 3 times in total.
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
support!
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta
>Haruru
Hard Insaneは保留でEasyちょっと直しました。
Modありがとうございます :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[General]
try this 16:9 bg

[Insane]
  1. 01:21:855 (10,1) - it will confused player, it look like a 1/4 spacing, 01:12:625 (6,1) - this kind of spacing will be better
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:432 - 00:07:817 - 00:08:202 - add whistle here, you did it on insane
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:12:240 (2,3,4) - if follow vocal, this rhythm will more fit this part
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:086 (1) - maybe add a whistle at the head
feel free to call me back if you need a recheck :)
alacat
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Joined May 2011
alacat
Thanks! :D

http://puu.sh/ltoQ5/2562e83dcc.zip
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta

Rizia wrote:

[General]
try this 16:9 bg

sorry no changed ;_;

[Insane]
  1. 01:21:855 (10,1) - it will confused player, it look like a 1/4 spacing, 01:12:625 (6,1) - this kind of spacing will be better
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:432 - 00:07:817 - 00:08:202 - add whistle here, you did it on insane
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:12:240 (2,3,4) - if follow vocal, this rhythm will more fit this part
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:086 (1) - maybe add a whistle at the head
feel free to call me back if you need a recheck :)
thanks you modding :)
updated~
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
bubbled
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta
Thank you so much!
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
Hello!
here are some issues that you should consider:

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:471 (4) - this reverse slider cant exist in lower difficulties, it's hard for new players to read, i'd suggest to change it into a long 2/1 slider or a 1/1 repeat slider.
  2. 00:24:548 (4) - ^
  3. 01:14:548 (1,1) - the stack is confusing as in a Easy, please avoid this.
  4. 01:14:548 (1) - is there any reason to set a NC here?
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:202 - follow this for consistency with 00:16:086 (1) - , just like you did in Easyrip just realized its alacat, that spinner was placed for following that long vocal i guess so why place 00:16:086 (1) - this after that o.o
  2. 00:19:163 (2) - NC for the new part?
  3. 01:25:317 (1) - how about using a 3/4 reverse slider instead for following the vocal,
other things are perfect, really don't want to touch more.

Let me qualify this :)
alacat
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Joined May 2011
alacat

Karen wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:202 - follow this for consistency with 00:16:086 (1) - , just like you did in Easyrip just realized its alacat, that spinner was placed for following that long vocal i guess so why place 00:16:086 (1) - this after that o.o :arrow: oh, ok! deleted that spinner and added 1/2 slider
  2. 00:19:163 (2) - NC for the new part? :arrow: sure!
  3. 01:25:317 (1) - how about using a 3/4 reverse slider instead for following the vocal, :arrow: prefer to take the background sound for normal difficulty at here
Thanks modding, Karen! ;)

http://puu.sh/luEOn/af2bbbc7f7.zip
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Naichatta

Karen wrote:

Hello!
here are some issues that you should consider:

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:471 (4) - this reverse slider cant exist in lower difficulties, it's hard for new players to read, i'd suggest to change it into a long 2/1 slider or a 1/1 repeat slider. fixed.
  2. 00:24:548 (4) - ^ fixed.
  3. 01:14:548 (1,1) - the stack is confusing as in a Easy, please avoid this. fixed.
  4. 01:14:548 (1) - is there any reason to set a NC here? fixed.
other things are perfect, really don't want to touch more.

Let me qualify this :)
updated~
Thank you modding :)
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