1. Hard (3,46 stars, 489 notes)
2. Insane (4,67 stars, 809 notes)
3. Normal (1,99 stars, 300 notes)

by Nozhomi
by Nozhomi & Bakari
by Nozhomi

HB24 wrote:

[Insane]
-00:02:954 (3) - more like this Why not.

SPOILER

-00:06:454 (6) - instead of this maybe like this? Done ...

and stack 7 on 1 But not stacking 7 on 1, it flows terrible and makes an anti jump.
-same here 00:11:788 (7) - Fixed, but with 2 separate sliders instead of one with a repeat.
-00:49:121 (8) - u like those huh? personally i feel like they are boring :/ Fixed.
-02:35:142 (1) - wot, Dangerous placing for a spinner This is fine, the spinner lasts longer, so, more points.
-03:11:288 (1) - u may put it on red tick same for the previous one No, but instead, i stacked it to the next hitcircle.
-03:56:475 (1) - ^ As i said to with the previous spinner, i made it like that to get more chance of clearing it with more points.
-Personally i dont like the idea of SV changing in the last kiai, first cuz there s no reason to it and it became really hard for an insane, second the DS of streams is higher ofc cuz of SV changing and for me those are dangerous for an Insane Maybe i'll remap just the final kiai, who knows.

Reclaimer wrote:

Hello from my queue!

General

1. This song deserves an extra diff I don't think so, because the insane is hard enough, and it's not a very high bpm, so.. honestly, i'm good with diffs.
2. Great mapset Thanks

Normal

1. 00:52:454 (4) - NC? Yep, i forgot this one. ^^
2. I feel like this diff is too easy, and there's a really big gap between this diff and hard maybe see if you can make it a bit harder? I've seen that with a BN already, and he said this is fine. > http://puu.sh/koIfG.jpg

Hard

1. 00:36:454 (1) - bit of a weird looking slider, idk maybe thats just me lol That's you
2. 00:38:788 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would be better I would say yes, but there's not something loud enough to place a note there. However i'll see for future opinions if needed.

Insane

1. 00:53:788 (5) - NC No, and same for all the NC below, i NC every 2 big white ticks out of kiai time, and into kiai time, i NC every 1 big white tick because this is a slighty harder part.
2. 01:04:454 (6) - NC
3. 01:20:454 (5) - NC
4. 01:23:121 (5) - NC
5. 01:40:121 (4,5,6,1) - This flows weird, the player would have to make a very sharp turn which could mess some people up Fixed > http://puu.sh/l4I0b.jpg
6. 01:42:788 (6,7,8,1) - ^ Moved a bit 01:42:788 (6) - to fix this flow
7. 01:58:538 (7) - Maybe a NC here? the drums kind of reset so I think a NC would be good here Not in a middle of a stream, and this circle does not lands on a big white tick or the music doesn't have a real tone change here.
8. 02:13:621 (6) - NC Not needed here.
9. 02:16:288 (7) - NC ^
10. 02:52:121 (3,4,1) - probably shouldn't make such a sharp turn all of the sudden, do something like this to keep the flow consistent That is fine like that, i'll keep it.
11. 03:18:288 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - These triples don't flow well imo they're hard to play properly One of them is intentionnal, but i'll see later if quoted once or twice again.
12. 03:55:788 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would just put some sliders here, no one is gona expect a 1/3 rhythm and mess up The first sliders gives you enough time to understand this is 1/3, also, i spaced more the notes to show this is 1/3.

Done!

Sorry about the mod being small, I couldn't find many issues lol, hope it helps, good luck!

1. Unused hitsound: normal-hitfinish4.wav
2. Unused image: nekomi's sb\bgblur2.png
3. when storyboard turn gray its really hard to see the combo color 6, specially the approach circle
4. Combo color 3 and 4 are a pain to see in kiai times, specially the yellow one

1. OD 8 its better, OD - 1 respect to AR its always a better choise
2. 00:01:121 (1) - slider is inaudible don't use 5% volume click'able objects need feedback. apply to most of your 5% places, also silencing slider ticks with this is not a nice thing to do tbh
3. 00:34:788 (1) - whistle instead of finish is better, there isn't a cymbal in the music, also this sluider work better as 1/2 according to the song melody, if you don't want to have empty places then follow this suggestion:
   
4. 00:36:788 - 00:43:121 -doesn't make sense that u ignore the main melody sounds to map to less important ones, (this happen in alot more places around this diff, so taking another look at song rhythm and improving, doesnt hurt)
5. 00:57:121 (7) - in my opinion this slider is too confuse and doesn't provide a clear patch to follow, probably around 80% of players wioll break/have problems/get 100 at this slider, just use a normal shape or improve the current one.
6. 01:18:788 (6) - ^ etc
7. 01:27:121 (1,2) - Spacing its too short after the speed up in the slider and can cause missreading ex: read as 1/4
8. 01:48:788 (2,3,4,5) - you can still follo the piano? in the song your current rhythm just don't interpret the song properly tbh
9. 01:49:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - all this kiai make me sad, since you can follow the nice melody in the song, instead of the current one that is missleading at some places, tbh I'll suggest to remap this section with a better rhythm
10. 02:09:788 (1) - I think gray combo colors shouldn't be used at this section, since still feels a bit fast and strong
11. 02:52:454 the extended break doesn't make much sense tbh
12. 03:11:142 (1) - just snap it to 1/4, tbh idk what are you trying to do with the current snap maybe just an error right??
13. 03:39:788 (3,4,5,6,7) - just follow the main beats in the music, stream sound a bit overmaped tbh
14. 03:45:121 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

1. OD and HP +1
2. 00:24:788 - similar as the insane diff, you shouldn't ignore beats like this, tbh are the main beats at this section and need click'able actions
3. 00:26:121 ^
4. 00:28:288 ^etc
5. rhythm at the first kiai need more work, actually its a bit weird and doesn't follow at main instrument, feels bit random, I suggest you to follow the main beats in the melody, will be alot better than your current one
6. 01:05:788 - extended break isn't the same as the insane diff
7. 01:48:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same as the insane diff, this kiai section need to be more close to the music than it actually is.
8. 02:09:788 (1) - same as the insane diff
9. 02:31:788 - extend the break until 02:31:788
10. 02:50:121 (2) - double reapeat 1/2 sliders are hard to play and notice, since you don't know how many repeats it have, 1/4 sliders are different of course, so maybe just use a single repeat in those, a repeat + circle pattern will work really nice
11. 03:09:788 (1,2) - this looks not nice tbh, try to improve the shape + blanket
12. 03:13:204 maybe clean the not needed green line?

1. HP 4 OD 4 AR 5
2. not much to say but the 1/1 spam make this look more like an easy than a normal diff, also I think you already notice the huge gap betwwen normal and hard diff, I'd suggest making a real normal diff (add more 1/2 to this one) and mapping an easy diff

Natsu wrote:

Hi

General:

1. Unused hitsound: normal-hitfinish4.wav Deleted.
2. Unused image: nekomi's sb\bgblur2.png Deleted.
3. when storyboard turn gray its really hard to see the combo color 6, specially the approach circle Don't think so. gonna wait more feedback.
4. Combo color 3 and 4 are a pain to see in kiai times, specially the yellow one ^

Insane:

1. OD 8 its better, OD - 1 respect to AR its always a better choise I don't see anything wrong with OD 7,5. OD8 is for extras, and this is not an extra but an Insane.
2. 00:01:121 (1) - slider is inaudible don't use 5% volume click'able objects need feedback. apply to most of your 5% places, also silencing slider ticks with this is not a nice thing to do tbh Fixed.
3. 00:34:788 (1) - whistle instead of finish is better, there isn't a cymbal in the music, also this sluider work better as 1/2 according to the song melody, if you don't want to have empty places then follow this suggestion:
   Fixed i guess.
4. 00:36:788 - 00:43:121 -doesn't make sense that u ignore the main melody sounds to map to less important ones, (this happen in alot more places around this diff, so taking another look at song rhythm and improving, doesnt hurt) I don't see what you mean here. Even i checked it twice, i see nothing wrong about "ignoring rhytm" i just follow the drums here. Nothing will be changed here.
5. 00:57:121 (7) - in my opinion this slider is too confuse and doesn't provide a clear patch to follow, probably around 80% of players wioll break/have problems/get 100 at this slider, just use a normal shape or improve the current one. lolwat... noone will break or 100 this slider, as can clearly hear from 00:57:454 - a noise and i adapted the slider end to it, that's all.
6. 01:18:788 (6) - ^ etc Same noise, same slider style.
7. 01:27:121 (1,2) - Spacing its too short after the speed up in the slider and can cause missreading ex: read as 1/4 Fixed.
8. 01:48:788 (2,3,4,5) - you can still follo the piano? in the song your current rhythm just don't interpret the song properly tbhIt does, even i remapped already once this part to arange it.
9. 01:49:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - all this kiai make me sad, since you can follow the nice melody in the song, instead of the current one that is missleading at some places, tbh I'll suggest to remap this section with a better rhythm Wat.. This is good enough, no need to remap.
10. 02:09:788 (1) - I think gray combo colors shouldn't be used at this section, since still feels a bit fast and strong Grey color fits the heavy eletcric guitar you heard on this part of the song, also it fits the SB.
11. 02:52:454 the extended break doesn't make much sense tbh The SB has a white to black fadeout here, and recuding the brzak to normal will just made a weird enlighting. Also, i moved back that break to have the "section-pass/fai.wav" exactly on a big white tick. Wich sound just in time the middle of the break.
12. 03:11:142 (1) - just snap it to 1/4, tbh idk what are you trying to do with the current snap maybe just an error right?? Moved back to 1/8 (this is enough)
13. 03:39:788 (3,4,5,6,7) - just follow the main beats in the music, stream sound a bit overmaped tbh For "just a bit" i'm not changing it, also this isn't a full stream, there's a repeat slider into it.
14. 03:45:121 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^

Hard:

1. OD and HP +1 +0.5
2. 00:24:788 - similar as the insane diff, you shouldn't ignore beats like this, tbh are the main beats at this section and need click'able actions I don't forget that i'm in a hard diff, and not in a insane. Also the slider tick can handle a piano note.
3. 00:26:121 ^ ^
4. 00:28:288 ^etc Okay for this one because this is empty. Fixed.
5. rhythm at the first kiai need more work, actually its a bit weird and doesn't follow at main instrument, feels bit random, I suggest you to follow the main beats in the melody, will be alot better than your current one ...
6. 01:05:788 - extended break isn't the same as the insane diff Fixed.
7. 01:48:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same as the insane diff, this kiai section need to be more close to the music than it actually is. Wtf.. oh yeah, i still don't forget I'm in a hard diff and i wanted to make an easier rhytm to avoid going on an Insane instead of Hard. ><
8. 02:09:788 (1) - same as the insane diff Same answer as Insane diff.
9. 02:31:788 - extend the break until 02:31:788 No because i cannot do that on the same tick at the break end. So i did like the Insane.
10. 02:50:121 (2) - double reapeat 1/2 sliders are hard to play and notice, since you don't know how many repeats it have, 1/4 sliders are different of course, so maybe just use a single repeat in those, a repeat + circle pattern will work really nice I wanted to hit all kicks on this part, so i guess i'll leave it like that, it's not a harsh pattern tbh.
11. 03:09:788 (1,2) - this looks not nice tbh, try to improve the shape + blanket Kind of fixed, it was fine enough, but i edited it a bit.
12. 03:13:204 maybe clean the not needed green line? Fixed.

Normal:

1. HP 4 OD 4 AR 5 Fixed
2. not much to say but the 1/1 spam make this look more like an easy than a normal diff, also I think you already notice the huge gap betwwen normal and hard diff, I'd suggest making a real normal diff (add more 1/2 to this one) and mapping an easy diff > As i said to the previous mod, http://puu.sh/koIfG.jpg a BN (Fort) told me this is fine like that and rankable.

Anyways GL with this nice song

Nekomi wrote:

Natsu wrote:

Hi


Insane:

1. OD 8 its better, OD - 1 respect to AR its always a better choise I don't see anything wrong with OD 7,5. OD8 is for extras, and this is not an extra but an Insane. idk what maps are you looking, OD8 is a common usage on insane diffs, having less that 8 in an AR9 diff is not nice tbh
2. 00:36:788 - 00:43:121 -doesn't make sense that u ignore the main melody sounds to map to less important ones, (this happen in alot more places around this diff, so taking another look at song rhythm and improving, doesnt hurt) I don't see what you mean here. Even i checked it twice, i see nothing wrong about "ignoring rhytm" i just follow the drums here. Nothing will be changed here. problem is that you do a mix of everything, you need to follow something specificic if not sounds random
3. 00:57:121 (7) - in my opinion this slider is too confuse and doesn't provide a clear patch to follow, probably around 80% of players wioll break/have problems/get 100 at this slider, just use a normal shape or improve the current one. lolwat... noone will break or 100 this slider, as can clearly hear from 00:57:454 - a noise and i adapted the slider end to it, that's all. alot of people will break cause the red point spams at the slider shape its hidden and in fact you are manipulating the slider velocity in a non intended way, I'd say is unrankable imo
4. 01:18:788 (6) - ^ etc Same noise, same slider style. ^
5. 01:49:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - all this kiai make me sad, since you can follow the nice melody in the song, instead of the current one that is missleading at some places, tbh I'll suggest to remap this section with a better rhythm Wat.. This is good enough, no need to remap. gppd enought? mean explaining better, because i just see a mess of mixing piano and drums and ignoring piano and so, try to be more consistent in what are you following

Hard:

1. OD and HP +1 +0.5 still OD will be to low compared to AR
2. 00:24:788 - similar as the insane diff, you shouldn't ignore beats like this, tbh are the main beats at this section and need click'able actions I don't forget that i'm in a hard diff, and not in a insane. Also the slider tick can handle a piano note. if you can't manage to follow the song properly in a hard diff then you doing something wrong, I suggest rechecking again
3. rhythm at the first kiai need more work, actually its a bit weird and doesn't follow at main instrument, feels bit random, I suggest you to follow the main beats in the melody, will be alot better than your current one ... ...
4. 01:48:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same as the insane diff, this kiai section need to be more close to the music than it actually is. Wtf.. oh yeah, i still don't forget I'm in a hard diff and i wanted to make an easier rhytm to avoid going on an Insane instead of Hard. >< then be consistent and follow drums and don't mix things because sound weird and doesn't play nice, alsois a hard diff you should be able to use different game elements to follow the music properly, if not then you are doing something wrong

Normal:

1. HP 4 OD 4 AR 5 Fixed
2. not much to say but the 1/1 spam make this look more like an easy than a normal diff, also I think you already notice the huge gap betwwen normal and hard diff, I'd suggest making a real normal diff (add more 1/2 to this one) and mapping an easy diff > As i said to the previous mod, http://puu.sh/koIfG.jpg a BN (Fort) told me this is fine like that and rankable.

he is not BN, and judging spread by numbers is not ok, your hard has a huge object density and your normal is1/1 spam, obviously not ok.

Natsu wrote:

Hi


Insane:

1. OD 8 its better, OD - 1 respect to AR its always a better choise I don't see anything wrong with OD 7,5. OD8 is for extras, and this is not an extra but an Insane. idk what maps are you looking, OD8 is a common usage on insane diffs, having less that 8 in an AR9 diff is not nice tbh This stays as it is now.
2. 00:36:788 - 00:43:121 -doesn't make sense that u ignore the main melody sounds to map to less important ones, (this happen in alot more places around this diff, so taking another look at song rhythm and improving, doesnt hurt) I don't see what you mean here. Even i checked it twice, i see nothing wrong about "ignoring rhytm" i just follow the drums here. Nothing will be changed here. problem is that you do a mix of everything, you need to follow something specificic if not sounds random This stays as it is now.
3. 00:57:121 (7) - in my opinion this slider is too confuse and doesn't provide a clear patch to follow, probably around 80% of players wioll break/have problems/get 100 at this slider, just use a normal shape or improve the current one. lolwat... noone will break or 100 this slider, as can clearly hear from 00:57:454 - a noise and i adapted the slider end to it, that's all. alot of people will break cause the red point spams at the slider shape its hidden and in fact you are manipulating the slider velocity in a non intended way, I'd say is unrankable imo You should see ranked maps wich have this kind of sliders, it's barely the same as mines, it doesn't kill the velocity so i keep it !
4. 01:18:788 (6) - ^ etc Same noise, same slider style. ^ ^ I'm not chaging it since somes recent ranked maps have theses sliders too.
5. 01:49:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - all this kiai make me sad, since you can follow the nice melody in the song, instead of the current one that is missleading at some places, tbh I'll suggest to remap this section with a better rhythm Wat.. This is good enough, no need to remap. gppd enought? mean explaining better, because i just see a mess of mixing piano and drums and ignoring piano and so, try to be more consistent in what are you following

This stays as it is now. Following both drums/piano is acceptable no matter what.

Hard:

1. OD and HP +1 +0.5 still OD will be to low compared to AR This stays as it is now.
2. 00:24:788 - similar as the insane diff, you shouldn't ignore beats like this, tbh are the main beats at this section and need click'able actions I don't forget that i'm in a hard diff, and not in a insane. Also the slider tick can handle a piano note. if you can't manage to follow the song properly in a hard diff then you doing something wrong, I suggest rechecking again Done, and this will stays as it is.
3. rhythm at the first kiai need more work, actually its a bit weird and doesn't follow at main instrument, feels bit random, I suggest you to follow the main beats in the melody, will be alot better than your current one ... ... ... No!
4. 01:48:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same as the insane diff, this kiai section need to be more close to the music than it actually is. Wtf.. oh yeah, i still don't forget I'm in a hard diff and i wanted to make an easier rhytm to avoid going on an Insane instead of Hard. >< then be consistent and follow drums and don't mix things because sound weird and doesn't play nice, alsois a hard diff you should be able to use different game elements to follow the music properly, if not then you are doing something wrong

This stays as it is now, i did right, that's all!

Normal:

1. HP 4 OD 4 AR 5 Fixed
2. not much to say but the 1/1 spam make this look more like an easy than a normal diff, also I think you already notice the huge gap betwwen normal and hard diff, I'd suggest making a real normal diff (add more 1/2 to this one) and mapping an easy diff > As i said to the previous mod, http://puu.sh/koIfG.jpg a BN (Fort) told me this is fine like that and rankable.

he is not BN, and judging spread by numbers is not ok, your hard has a huge object density and your normal is1/1 spam, obviously not ok. See other recent ranked maps wich have this problem and unrank them then ?

franchement il y a pas grand chose à vraiment retoucher sur la map en général. Good luck modders. :3

Aldwych wrote:

franchement il y a pas grand chose à vraiment retoucher sur la map en général. Good luck modders. :3

Ouais alors...

[General]

Yes i'll double approve what Natsu said, gap between hard and normal is too huge. Normal full 1/1 -> Hard full 1/2 + 1/4 with jumps? Difference with insane? Harder jumps and SV? Yes but no. Hard doesn't have jumps, i mapped it to be simple and clearable without making people freaking out. Also, Normal diff has been increased and the gap is now filled.

Your combo colours are too lightened, make then darkened a bit, on kiai time it destroying eyes. That's your point of view, not mine.

Why this font for your text. That doesn't really fit BG and maybe the sond too. I tried to have someone to this, but noone answered to my graphic requests, so i did myself the way i can, simplicity.

[Normal]

00:37:454 : Unconsistent flow with what you've done so far, the previous slider makes not intuitive with the movement. If you want to make this the easiest difficulty, then you have to help the new players. Can't do much about it, but i tried.

00:55:621 : Keep it simple. Something like this is better :

Yes (1) is a blanket for (3). Guess i've tried to fix, but can't make a perfect blanket because of the spacing of 1, on the whole map.

01:00:454 : Why not a simple slider? Maybe..

01:24:454 : Illogic placement, you did a blanket for (2), do the same here? Tried to..

01:29:121 : Why this slider at this position? Make a proper blanket or move it straight to the right. The flow will be nicer and smoother with the second choice :< That's fine like this. I can't do much on Normal, because of the fact i need to stay simple.

02:18:454 : Weird rythm use 3/2 reverse slider instead in order to make consistent with previous rythm. Kind of fixed.

02:23:788 : Not an accurate place for this type of slider, you should change in to c - s (1/1) - c. Not changing it, but i can change it's form to a better shape.

02:41:788 : Felt like an old pattern, move it more on the left and make a nice curve. This parts follow the 1/1 kicks you heard until vocals (1/1 sliders just after) Not changing it.

02:45:788 : You never used pair reverse slider, so why here? 2 Sliders is preferable. Kind of fixed..

03:06:121 : Ctrl-h and rotate a bit in order to make a better flow. Kind of fixed.. Slighty..

03:25:788 : Why not a simple path to follow? I mean we have to go right then left, and finish with right. :/ Not changing this for this kind of purposes (left, right, left, right, every maps does this, pls...)

03:45:121 : Some of you stacks got an offset, some not. Why? Can't see what you mean, since the offset is at the start of the map... so i tried something else.

[Hard]

00:41:788 : Weird flow imo, the pattern can be improve, how about something like :
Kinda moved the pattern, also.. I'm too lazy to make jumps (anyways this hard doesn't have jumps, wich is a good exemple)
I'm too lazy to change the slider. Like highlighting what you want to quote in a mod huh ? (exemple: 00:41:788 ->>> 00:41:788 (1) - ) Is it that hard ?

02:09:788 : Why this part is so intence while the BG and CC are gray? That doesn't make sense. The heavy electric guitar here makes everything a lot better in term of music, so i decided to make it like that. Not everythig on the map can be slow/grey)

03:56:475 : Why 1/16 spacing? That doesn't make different with 1/4 space. And you won't instantly spinning too. Reduced to 1/8

To busy to check insane. I still have a lot of work to do. ...

-Tochi wrote:

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  General

1. Artist: 無力P
2. Romanised Artist: MuryokuP
3. Title: Kageokuri (Feat. Gumi) Not a need since i already have the name on tags

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  Insane

1. 00:01:788 (1) - This slider is kinda weird with so many anchor points, but you can keep it since it might just be your style. I think it is fine as it is
2. 00:17:121 (7) - Same as above. This is the only slider that is like this which can be a bit too random. When you play it, there's a typical sound on the music, that's why.
3. 00:26:288 (3,4) - This just shouldn't start here according to the music, the strongest start point is here 00:26:454 (4) - that's why it should start here like: http://puu.sh/m94S4/88b6f5e154.png Moved 00:26:621 (5) - instead, and left the previous note like it is, because it's a strong note, i agree, so it deserve to have a jump
4. 01:02:788 (6) - Those red anchor points are unnecessary, since there's no signs in the music that it should be a wiggle wiggle lol. Use your ears.
5. 01:03:621 (3) - Maybe stack it on 01:03:454 (2) - ? Not a need
6. 01:18:788 (6) - Same as 01:02:788 (6) - Same as 01:02:788 (6) -, use your ears, also the slider plays fine, why should i remove it's style ? I did it for the weird sound that comes up with.
7. 01:25:788 (3) - It looks better like this: http://puu.sh/m9572/0271c07f6e.png imo. It gets the more curve movement like this. This plays fine to me, imo.
8. 01:33:288 (4) - Move the middle anchor point a bit to the left, and maybe move it closer to 01:33:121 (3) - like: http://puu.sh/m95dg/4abbf72d05.png for a more satisfying spacing. Kinda arranged with my way.
9. 01:38:954 (6,1) - Why is the spacing here smaller than here? 01:38:788 (5,6) - Fix'd.
10. 01:58:621 (7) - NC? Not needed, this stream is not too long.
11. 02:10:954 (7) - NC like you did here 02:18:954 (1) - Not needed here.
    02:13:621 (6) - Same as above ^ (again) Same as above ^
12. 02:16:288 (7) - Same. Still Same.
13. 02:29:621 (1) - I'm not sure if this is rankable, unrankable if it changes the sliders speed like this. I have been warned twice, then i already fixed, now it stays like that
14. 03:41:121 (4) - Move it a bit more down maybe? Why not..

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  Hard

1. 03:07:121 (3,4) - Remove the reverses and add a circle that stacks on 03:08:121 (5) - like: http://puu.sh/m966j/9b0c353ed1.png It fits the song more. I'm not fan of stacking into hard because of some players that can be confused in DT/NC, so i did this : http://puu.sh/m99nf.jpg (Wich is way better, imo.)

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  Feedback

  
  Nice map, good luck