20:01 Kinshara: yeah
20:01 Kinshara: ew
20:01 Kinshara: anyway
20:01 Gaia: it was another song that was 4:58 then
20:01 Kinshara: 00:07:196 (1,2) -
20:01 Gaia: lol
20:01 Kinshara: try not to have 3/2 gaps
20:01 Kinshara: D:
20:01 Kinshara: weird to play for noobs
20:01 Gaia: no choiceeee
20:02 Gaia: there are other 3/2s out there lol
20:02 Gaia: idk
20:02 Kinshara: yeah
20:02 Kinshara: other easies have it
20:02 Kinshara: but it's not really ideal
20:02 Kinshara: can i give a suggestion?
20:03 Kinshara: 00:07:196 (1) - you could cut this down to a 2/1 slider
20:03 Kinshara: 00:08:668 - and start a 3/2 reverse slider here?
20:03 Kinshara: up to u
20:03 Gaia: but theres nothing on 00:07:932
20:03 Kinshara: with easies
20:04 Kinshara: you're not really looking for
20:04 Kinshara: something
20:04 Kinshara: that goes exactly with the music
20:04 Kinshara: easies are learning tools
20:04 Gaia: lol
20:04 Kinshara: obviously
20:04 Kinshara: like
20:04 Kinshara: if that can also happen
20:04 Kinshara: it would be great
20:04 Kinshara: but i don't think
20:04 Kinshara: you'll lose much by cutting it down to 2/1
20:05 Kinshara: just a suggesiton lol
20:05 Gaia: lol ok
20:05 Kinshara: 00:07:932 - since her "wo" kind cuts over there
20:06 Kinshara: 00:27:809 -
20:06 Kinshara: this slider will trip up players
20:06 Kinshara: i think you can just start it at
20:06 Kinshara: the white tick?
20:07 Kinshara: since that's the stronger beat imo
20:07 Gaia: maybe like this
20:07 Gaia: 3/1 then 3/2 reverse
20:07 Gaia: http://puu.sh/iz9nQ/2e03043b78.jpg
20:08 Kinshara: works
20:08 Kinshara: lol
20:08 Gaia: lol
20:08 Gaia: bae im so proud of my sliderart
20:08 Gaia: in normal
20:08 Kinshara: 00:35:171 (2,3) -
20:08 Kinshara: you nigger
20:08 Kinshara: no
20:08 Kinshara: just no
20:09 Kinshara: this will probably get your map dq'd
20:09 Gaia: what
20:09 Gaia: how
20:09 Kinshara: 1/2 gap
20:09 Kinshara: is unacceptable in most easies
20:09 Gaia: wat
20:09 Gaia: how
20:09 Kinshara: idk
20:09 Kinshara: not enough time
20:09 Gaia: since when was that a thing
20:10 Kinshara: since forever
20:10 Kinshara: i mean
20:10 Kinshara: i think
20:10 Kinshara: now it's stricter
20:10 Kinshara: due to the harsher dq standards
20:10 Gaia: oh
20:10 Gaia: ..
20:10 Kinshara: but before people would do it and get by with it
20:10 Kinshara: and anyway
20:10 Kinshara: it's better to play it safe
20:10 Gaia: lmao
20:10 Kinshara: in e/n
20:10 Gaia: i think i have 3 1/2 gaps
20:10 Kinshara: because you can easily get your map dq'd for them
20:10 Kinshara: yeah
20:10 Kinshara: you should change those lol
20:11 Gaia: hm
20:11 Gaia: ok then
20:11 Gaia: lel
20:11 Kinshara: 00:41:797 (2) - nazi fix blanket lol
20:11 Kinshara: 00:42:901 (3) - 1/2 reverse sliders are fine in easy btw
20:12 Gaia: lolol ok
20:12 Kinshara: 00:42:901 (3) - again i would change rhythm here
20:12 Kinshara: hmm
20:12 Gaia: mm yeah
20:12 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/iz9Eh/579944bf8a.jpg
20:12 Gaia: suggestion plz
20:12 Kinshara: something like this
20:12 Kinshara: also it's nice to start a slider with a finish c:
20:13 Gaia: rip snare?
20:13 Kinshara: 00:44:926 -
20:13 Kinshara: you did here too
20:13 Kinshara: i don't think it's important LOL
20:13 Kinshara: finish > snare imo
20:14 Kinshara: plus snare isn't that strong there? D:
20:14 Gaia: lol
20:14 Gaia: i thought it was pretty strong
20:14 Gaia: oh well
20:14 Gaia: I TRUST U BAE
20:15 Kinshara: 00:47:687 (2) - uhm
20:15 Kinshara: hmm
20:15 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/iz9OY/0c64926604.jpg
20:15 Kinshara: try this?
20:17 Gaia: nice
20:17 Kinshara: 00:57:441 (4) - not sure about this D:
20:18 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/iz9Z4/2e68d4d4b1.jpg try this?
20:18 Gaia: D:
20:18 Kinshara: 00:56:337 - that rhythm starts here btw
20:19 Gaia: wow bae
20:19 Gaia: so smart
20:20 Kinshara: 01:21:551 (1,2) - yea fix this lol
20:21 Gaia: lol
20:22 Gaia: ok that one..
20:22 Kinshara: need help?
20:22 Gaia: 2/1 gap?
20:22 Gaia: http://puu.sh/izad3/13739ff566.jpg
20:22 Kinshara: 01:28:729 - http://puu.sh/izadp/b90cfd8828.jpg use this rhythm here btw if
20:22 Kinshara: you'd like
20:23 Kinshara: yea 2/1 is fine
20:24 Gaia: gg
20:24 Gaia: all the 3/2s
20:24 Kinshara: 01:40:508 - do the same here
20:25 Gaia: what about 01:30:386 (1,2) -
20:25 Kinshara: woop
20:25 Kinshara: missed that huh
20:25 Kinshara: let's see
20:26 Gaia: lol
20:26 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/izaqx/1512d38599.jpg?
20:27 Kinshara: 01:31:306 - you could add a circle here too o/
20:28 Kinshara: that's it
20:28 Kinshara: other than that
20:28 Kinshara: nice easy :3
20:28 Gaia: wew
20:28 Gaia: yay
20:28 *Kinshara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723889 yanaginagi - Neoage Dreamers [Normal]]
20:28 Gaia: bae <3
20:28 Kinshara: 00:01:307 (1) -
20:28 Kinshara: you could open this slider up a bit o:
20:29 Kinshara: i think it'll look nicer
20:29 Kinshara: btw look over your blankets in easy lol
20:29 Kinshara: some were off
20:29 Gaia: open up
20:29 Gaia: lol ok
20:30 Kinshara: 00:27:717 (2) -
20:30 Kinshara: how about starting this slider on the downbeat as well?
20:31 Kinshara: 00:30:570 (5,6) -
20:31 Gaia: but the drums start on blue tick
20:31 Kinshara: how about changing this into a 1/1 slider and a circle combo
20:32 Gaia: hmm
20:32 Gaia: whats the difference lol
20:32 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/izaIB/d9130ba947.jpg
20:32 Kinshara: well
20:32 Kinshara: i mean
20:32 Kinshara: i think
20:32 Kinshara: it'll be easier to play
20:32 Kinshara: ?
20:32 Kinshara: up to you though
20:34 Kinshara: 00:33:515 (4,5) - uh
20:34 Kinshara: two 1/2 circles in a row
20:34 Kinshara: are difficult to play
20:34 Gaia: oh
20:34 Kinshara: 00:33:699 (5,6) - you could turn these into a slider
20:34 Gaia: aa
20:34 Gaia: lol
20:35 Kinshara: 00:36:460 (4,5) - you could do the same 1/1 slider + circle rhythm here if you like
20:36 Gaia: ok changing sliderss
20:37 Kinshara: 00:17:503 (4,5) - try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/izaYF/312a4ad49d.jpg
20:37 Kinshara: 00:27:717 (2) - also yeah the drums start on the blue tick, but it might be confusing to new players
20:37 Gaia: thats a pretty calm part tho
20:38 Kinshara: because it's in between a 1/1 slider and 3/2 slider
20:38 Kinshara: so it's kinda weird
20:38 Gaia: ehh
20:38 Kinshara: uhm yeah
20:38 Kinshara: idk i find 1/2 reverse sliders are easier to play
20:38 Gaia: well technically it shouldnt matter
20:38 Kinshara: than a single 1/2 slider lol
20:38 Gaia: cuz there was a big gap before it
20:38 Kinshara: i suppose you're right
20:39 Gaia: wew
20:39 Kinshara: 00:45:478 (6,7) -
20:39 Kinshara: i think
20:39 Kinshara: either a 1/1 slider or 1/2 reverse
20:40 Kinshara: would be much better fit
20:40 Kinshara: this is unnecessarily difficult .^.
20:40 Gaia: lol
20:40 Kinshara: i think the normal
20:40 Kinshara: is kinda weird
20:41 Kinshara: since you switch between following vocals
20:41 Kinshara: and following drums D:
20:41 Kinshara: 00:47:502 - like here you ignore vocals
20:41 Kinshara: 00:48:607 -
20:41 Kinshara: here you choose vocals
20:42 Kinshara: 00:48:423 - over this
20:42 Kinshara: .-.
20:42 Kinshara: or maybe i'm wrong? LOL
20:42 Gaia: it mostly follows instruments lol
20:42 Kinshara: 00:50:263 (3,4) - change to slider + circle combo?
20:43 Gaia: 00:48:607 (6,1,2,3) - slider train
20:43 Gaia: so to avoid thaaat
20:43 Kinshara: 00:57:073 (5,6) - same here? LOL
20:43 Kinshara: oh
20:43 Kinshara: true
20:44 Kinshara: 01:09:772 (1,2) - change to 1/2 reverse slider?
20:44 Kinshara: i think if you think of 1/2 sliders in easy/ normal as 1/4 sliders in hard/ insane
20:45 Kinshara: it's easier to understand what's easy and what's harder
20:45 Gaia: =w=
20:45 Gaia: lol
20:45 Gaia: i guess
20:46 Kinshara: 01:31:490 (3,4) - might wanna fix these double 1/2 circles lol
20:46 Kinshara: that's basically a triplet for noobs lol
20:47 Kinshara: slider end + 2 circles
20:47 Gaia: =3=
20:47 Kinshara: if you know what i mean xD
20:47 Gaia: gg
20:47 Gaia: lol
20:47 Kinshara: 01:37:380 (3,4) - here too
20:47 Kinshara: yea basically
20:47 Kinshara: everywhere in the kiai
20:48 Gaia: lololol
20:48 Kinshara: 01:30:938 (2,3,4) - you could fix this by making 4-5 a slider
20:48 Kinshara: 01:37:380 (3,4,5) - not sure how you'd wanna fix this
20:48 Gaia: well
20:49 Kinshara: knowing you, i guess you'd like to avoid the slider train?
20:49 Gaia: its not like they're unrankable
20:49 Gaia: i can keep some of it
20:49 Gaia: :>
20:49 Kinshara: i suppose
20:49 Kinshara: but
20:49 Kinshara: ot
20:49 Kinshara: *it's generally harder to play
20:49 Kinshara: and noobs will rate you 1
20:49 Kinshara: if you care about rating LOL
20:49 Gaia: lol
20:49 Gaia: nah idc
20:50 Gaia: they will rate 10 for nagi
20:50 Gaia: B)
20:50 Kinshara: lol
20:50 Gaia: if they know it's nagi
20:50 Gaia: lol
20:50 Gaia: the artist has to be changed
20:50 Gaia: but nobody would know it's nagi
20:50 Gaia: so im keeping this until icon
20:51 Kinshara: what's the difference?
20:51 Kinshara: this isn't yanaginagi?
20:51 Kinshara: o.o
20:51 Gaia: nah
20:51 Gaia: there's a circle
20:51 Kinshara: oh
20:51 Gaia: like FELT
20:51 Gaia: but
20:51 Gaia: project-ALCA-
20:51 Kinshara: ohhh
20:51 Kinshara: but uhm
20:51 Kinshara: you can keep yanaginagi tho
20:51 Kinshara: since yanaginagi is famous
20:51 Gaia: wa
20:51 Gaia: LOL
20:52 Kinshara: in ranking criteria
20:52 Kinshara: it says
20:52 Gaia: metadata tho
20:52 Kinshara: use circle name
20:52 Kinshara: if singer
20:52 Kinshara: or artist
20:52 Kinshara: isn't well known
20:52 Kinshara: but i guess it would be safer to go with the circle lol
20:52 Gaia: wait what
20:52 Gaia: lol
20:53 Kinshara: hmm
20:53 Gaia: http://puu.sh/izbQw/121e9f73f8.png
20:53 Gaia: but nagi isnt composer
20:53 Kinshara: leoh
20:53 Kinshara: i confused
20:53 Kinshara: composer with singer lol
20:53 Kinshara: nvm
20:53 Gaia: lol
20:54 *Kinshara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723717 yanaginagi - Neoage Dreamers [Hard]]
20:54 Kinshara: 00:28:178 (3,4) -
20:54 Kinshara: combine into slider?
20:54 Kinshara: doubles might trip players up
20:55 Gaia: if its a slider its still a double lol
20:55 Kinshara: yeah
20:55 Kinshara: but
20:55 Kinshara: i mean
20:55 Kinshara: double circles
20:55 Gaia: gg
20:56 Kinshara: 00:37:932 (2,3,4) - manually stack these
20:56 Kinshara: ?
20:56 Gaia: oh are they rip
20:57 Kinshara: yeah
20:57 Gaia: wait it looks fine to me
20:58 Kinshara: when you testplay
20:58 Gaia: oh well
20:58 Gaia: lmao
20:58 Kinshara: the
20:58 Kinshara: circles get autostacked
20:58 Kinshara: so
20:58 Kinshara: distance is ruined
20:58 Kinshara: not a big deal
20:58 Gaia: gg
20:58 Gaia: lol
20:58 Gaia: fixedaanyways
20:59 Kinshara: 01:25:416 (5) -
20:59 Kinshara: extend into 1/2 slider?
21:01 Gaia: not following vocals
21:01 Kinshara: 00:06:828 (3,1) -
21:01 Kinshara: i don't think you need to put a jump here
21:01 Kinshara: since it's relatively calm :<
21:02 Gaia: lol ok
21:03 Kinshara: 00:34:435 (1) - fix blanket HUEHUEHEUEHEGSJKDLG
21:04 Gaia: hnnnn
21:04 Kinshara: 00:31:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - since these are pretty similar sounds
21:04 Kinshara: 00:31:122 (6,7,1) -
21:04 Kinshara: might be good idea
21:04 Kinshara: to change this slider into
21:04 Kinshara: triplet slider as well
21:04 Kinshara: would be nice for consistency c:
21:04 Kinshara: plus nice effect
21:05 Gaia: lol
21:05 Gaia: its already a triplet tho
21:05 Gaia: kinda
21:05 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/izcsS/4523a3fe78.jpg plus like this?
21:05 Kinshara: true
21:05 Kinshara: but meh
21:05 Kinshara: just a nazi thing
21:05 Gaia: lmao
21:05 Kinshara: this hard is really nice lol
21:05 Gaia: lel ok
21:05 Gaia: :D:D:D:D
21:06 Gaia: not even pk's hard (TM)
21:06 Kinshara: yeah lol
21:07 Gaia: gg
21:11 *Kinshara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/722494 yanaginagi - Neoage Dreamers [Insane]]
21:11 Kinshara: 00:05:540 (2) -
21:11 Kinshara: since this is a calm part
21:11 Kinshara: might be better off going with a triplet imo
21:11 Kinshara: i know it's a little tap intensive
21:11 Kinshara: but easier to read
21:11 Kinshara: 00:10:141 (1) - yeah again calm part, so bring it closer?
21:11 Gaia: hmm maybe
21:12 Kinshara: btw
21:12 Kinshara: tone down the spacing
21:12 Kinshara: in the calm part LOL
21:12 Gaia: yeh
21:12 Kinshara: your asymmetry was dq'd
21:12 Kinshara: because of spacing in the calm part wasn't it?
21:12 Kinshara: 00:16:951 (3) - like
21:12 Kinshara: waow
21:12 Kinshara: pls
21:13 Gaia: lmao
21:13 Gaia: yeah
21:13 Gaia: woah wtf
21:15 Kinshara: btw
21:15 Kinshara: i think ar 9
21:15 Kinshara: is a bit too much
21:15 Kinshara: try 8.5-8.7
21:16 Gaia: lol its 163 bpm
21:16 Kinshara: yea
21:16 Kinshara: 163
21:16 Kinshara: is pretty slow
21:16 Gaia: no
21:16 Gaia: slow is like
21:16 Gaia: 13-
21:16 Gaia: 130
21:16 Kinshara: yeah
21:16 Kinshara: but
21:16 Kinshara: for 163
21:16 Kinshara: ar 9
21:16 Kinshara: is overkill
21:16 Gaia: not really
21:16 Kinshara: you can get opinions from others on this
21:16 Kinshara: but
21:16 Kinshara: tbh
21:17 Kinshara: 8.7 would be better
21:17 Gaia: 8.7 would make me not be able to fc this
21:17 Gaia: :>
21:17 Gaia: i dont plan on changing ar tbh
21:17 Kinshara: 01:20:631 (3) -
21:17 Kinshara: ctrl+G
21:17 Kinshara: for better flow
21:19 Gaia: emphasis on vocal?
21:20 Kinshara: sure
21:21 Kinshara: 01:13:821 (5) -
21:21 Kinshara: you could move this circle
21:21 Kinshara: away for emphasis on clap
21:21 Kinshara: 01:14:558 (2) - weird
21:21 Kinshara: cuz there's more distance on the next slider
21:21 Gaia: how lol
21:21 Kinshara: than between this circle and the previous slider
21:22 Kinshara: should be more distance with the previous slider for emphasis on clap lol
21:22 Gaia: should i pull a kibbleru then
21:22 Kinshara: loooooool
21:22 Gaia: 01:14:558 (2) - stack this on head of (1)
21:22 Gaia: gg
21:22 Gaia: rip dt
21:22 Gaia: i mean hd
21:22 Kinshara: yeah
21:22 Kinshara: i think
21:22 Kinshara: stack would work nicely
21:22 Kinshara: with the music
21:22 Kinshara: stack it on 3
21:23 Kinshara: not under 1
21:23 Kinshara: because stacking under 1 would effectively ruin emphasis
21:23 Gaia: i mean
21:23 Gaia: head of 1
21:24 Kinshara: oh
21:24 Gaia: kibb does that
21:24 Gaia: lmao
21:24 Kinshara: does he?
21:24 Kinshara: uhm
21:24 Gaia: yea
21:24 Kinshara: sure
21:24 Gaia: it made me miss
21:24 Kinshara: i don't see a problem with it
21:24 Gaia: when i was hddting koi yuki
21:24 Gaia: and other stuff
21:24 Kinshara: LOL
21:24 Kinshara: oh
21:24 Kinshara: yeah hd players
21:24 Gaia: so much rage
21:25 Gaia: gg
21:26 Kinshara: uhm
21:26 Kinshara: 00:07:748 (2) -
21:26 Kinshara: aesthetically
21:26 Kinshara: this slider looks weird
21:28 Gaia: lmao
21:29 Kinshara: 02:05:723 (1) -
21:29 Kinshara: could make this a 1/2 slider
21:30 Kinshara: also
21:30 Kinshara: little picky
21:30 Kinshara: 02:05:723 (1) - how about ending the spinners here
21:31 Gaia: wehree
21:31 Gaia: where
21:31 Gaia: also i kinda like that gap
21:31 Gaia: for break
21:31 Kinshara: woops
21:31 Kinshara: 02:23:024 -
21:31 Kinshara: here i mean
21:32 Gaia: lol idk
21:32 Gaia: it sounds late to me
21:32 Kinshara: hmm
21:32 Kinshara: i suppose
21:32 Kinshara: i liked it
21:32 Kinshara: cuz that's where the guitar kind of
21:32 Kinshara: ends
21:33 Gaia: lol
21:33 Kinshara: sort of ehh
21:33 Gaia: yeah
21:33 Kinshara: i don't know how to explain lol
21:33 Gaia: lmao
21:34 Kinshara: ok
21:34 Kinshara: everything else seems fine
21:34 Kinshara: nice insane o/
21:34 Gaia: ok
21:34 Gaia: o//
21:34 Gaia: no kd?
21:34 Gaia: jk
21:34 Gaia: lmao
21:34 Kinshara: hmm
21:34 Kinshara: oh
21:34 Kinshara: good idea

00:16:030 (1,2) - Blanket is a liiiiitle off.
00:58:361 (2,3) - Make these two identical? (They're not completely parallel!)
01:18:607 (1,2) - Maybe make these parallel? They're only slightly off anyway so I think it would look better if you did!

01:56:889 (1,2,3) - Honestly having these three at slightly different angles doesn't look good to me. Consider changing this?
02:12:349 (2,3,4) - ^

00:37:932 (2,3,4) - Stack completely.
00:41:797 (1) - I think it would be better if you moved this out from under the slider. (Like during the next part 00:47:687 (1) which plays better in my opinion.)
01:07:932 (3,1) - Blanket is a tiny bit off here.
02:14:557 (1,2,1,2) - This part may be a little hard to read. The overlap doesn't look very nice.

00:49:159 (1,2) - I don't know about this. Generally I think it's best not to put the slider tail completely underneath another slider (in case of a repeat).