1. Easy (1.43 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (2.83 stars, 213 notes)
3. Insane (3.81 stars, 309 notes)
4. Normal (1.79 stars, 144 notes)

z1085684963 wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:709 (7,8) - 我都是直接复制的 没看懂
00:06:846 (7) - nc √
00:13:513 (1) - 拿上来和3blanket吧 故意的
00:24:101 (4) - ^ ^
01:11:356 (7,1) - 这种挺丑的能不能摆的好看点 我挺喜欢啊orz
01:22:140 (5) - 其实可以摆到滑条尾的 感觉不好看

不行了，good luck

Narcissu wrote:

AudioLeadIn: 0 → 2000 …… 在osu文件裏面改動，作用是提供2秒額外的前置時間避免玩家沒有準備好就直接開始

音量建議40-60-80 ，同時消音sliderslider

建議對換combo 2 和 combo 1 ，藍色接淡藍色有點那個

offest ： -604 …… 關照那些offest “前面有note好討厭呀”的人……另外我知道你一定是連mp3都偷no dap的 …… 連 preview 都一樣
All fix
[Insane]

才3.8星就不要AR這麼高了吧，no dap 3.9 星才 AR8 我觉得这样挺好

00:29:003 - 這並不是clap，另外對於高難度來說，音效只有clap有點單薄……可以考慮多做點什麼比如no dap 用的drum finish 和平時出現的whistle

01:13:218 (3) - 建議去掉，另外顏色有點長……可能你會說都有音沒有overmap …… 然而這是混搭鼓點和片鋼琴導致的奇葩節奏 √

01:26:258 - 加個圈放01:26:454 (2) - 上面？No

[Hard]

00:21:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段變奏是應該作難的，折返長滑帶過實在不妥 我觉得挺好orz

00:29:101 (5,1) - 可以稍微和前面的分開點方便讀圖√

00:38:022 - 只建議在完全沒有音的地方堆疊1/1，更何況00:38:414 - 這裡有1/4鼓點 我觉得挺好orz

00:40:767 - 同上，明明其他地方為了完整映射鼓點下了很多1/4折返，為什麼關鍵的時候卻放棄1/2的鼓點…… √

00:44:297 - 加個圈或者拉遠00:44:395 (3) - √

00:55:865 (1,2,3) - 跟人聲的話01:00:963 - 也加上吧……雖然我感覺你是隨便下的節奏 还是不加了orz一下午2diff
這個歌我摸了三次了LOL 儘量參考no dap的版本吧，good luck ><

SLMmix wrote:

Hi, From your m4m!

I'm very new to mapping/modding but I hope my modding would help. :3
All of these are just my suggestion, so I don't mind if you ignore it.



Easy

- 00:09:983 (1) or 00:10:375 (1) - Maybe remove NC? √
- 00:09:983 (1,1) - I'm not sure stacking is allowed at Easy diff. (I might be wrong)I think it is ok
- 00:15:865 (3,4) - ^ Same
- 01:01:748 - Unnecessary timing point √
- 01:04:885 (4) - NC and remove NC 01:05:669 (1) here NO
- 01:06:454 (1) - maybe NC?NO



Normal
Consider using higher DS since lots of notes are overlapping.

- 00:50:179 (6,7) - Separate these? Could be confusing to new player. √
- 00:57:434 (5) - NC and remove NC 00:59:003 (1) here. √
- 01:00:571 (3) - maybe NC? (+ I expected this to be louder) √
- 01:01:748 - Same with Easy (timing point) √
- 01:02:728 (2,3) - How about separating these? For consistency with 01:03:709 (4,5,6) NO
- 01:24:101 (1) - NC ? √




Hard

- 00:08:611 (4) - How about using two single-taps instead of a slider?
- 00:09:983 (1,1) - Separate a bit?
- 00:22:728 (4) - NC and remove NC 00:22:924 (1) here? Looks better to me. Or just separating seems ok.
- 00:28:807 (4) - move closer to 00:29:101 (5)
- 00:33:709 (4) - Remove NC √
- 00:34:199 (5) - Maybe NC √
- 00:34:199 (2,3,4) - Increase hitsound volume a bit? I couldn't understand why repeat sliders were used at only 00:34:493 (6,7) before I playbacked it with 25% speed.
- 00:36:846 (4) - NC and 00:37:042 (1) remove NC
- 00:38:218 (3,1) - Same with 00:09:983 (1,1)

This is just a suggestion. Please ignore this if you don't like.

- 00:40:572 (2,3,4,5) - How about this?

This is just a suggestion. Please ignore this if you don't like.

- 00:44:689 (4,1) & 00:46:062 (4,1) & 00:52:336 (3,1) and 01:05:081 (5,1) - Separate a bit or use same combo.
- 00:46:062 (4) - NC?
- 00:54:101 (4,5,1) and 01:09:787 (5,6,1) - Same with 00:22:728 (4)
- 01:01:748 - Unnecessary timing point
- 01:08:316 (5) - NC and 01:08:414 (1) - remove NC
- 01:17:434 (3) - NC and 01:17:826 (1) - remove NC
- 01:17:435 ~ 01:19:003
How about this?

- 01:20:571 (4,5,1) - Same with 00:28:807 (4,5,1)




Insane
Overall,

Please set these guys ( 7,8,1 stacks ) same combo or separate a bit. (same as said in hard)

- 00:06:454 (3) - NC
- 00:06:846 (1) - Remove NC ?
- 00:41:356 (4) - Move to right a bit for a better flow with 00:40:964 (3) It and00:40:571 (2) - Blanket
- 01:22:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - These were a bit confusing to play. maybe change the pattern?



That's all! I hope this could help!
And good luck with your map!

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hi from your M4M queue

Hard
00:00:179 (1,2,3) - I found this particularly hard to read.
00:25:866 (5) - I think you should delete this note for better flow.

Insane
00:00:179 (1) - This stream doesnt seem to match the music for me
00:03:316 (3) - The positioning of this stream sort of ruined the flow. I'm probably being picky but the rest of the streams on the map are fine.
01:05:277 (1,4) - I would have these the same shape as the vocals are the same pitch, also with the same lyrics.
01:17:826 (1,4) - ^

Normal
01:27:043 (1) - Should this spinner end at 01:28:611? thats only if you were following the vocals
01:28:611 - I think it would be good to put an extra timing point here just the put the volume down to about 10% so the end of the slider is as quiet as possible. Fix


I hope this mod was helpful. GL

Heloo~ M4M here~
These are just suggestions, if you don't want to change it, feel free to do so.

GENERAL

EASY

NORMAL

HARD

HARD

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi
from M4M My Modding Queues


red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

1. All diff uncheck.Wide & LetterBox √
   
   SPOILER

   

Easy

1. 00:04:103 (1,2,2) - too much rhythm ignored..You can try √
   
   SPOILER

   [img]rhythm%20http://puu.sh/hkhRC/e4bb55cfb7.jpg[/img]
2. 00:13:121 (1) - I think that it does not match
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:865 (3,4) - Stack in Easy is bad√
4. 00:19:787 (1) - try
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   it is too monotonous ignores the rhythm
   You need to think

Normal

1. 00:03:121 - Remove Clap √
2. 00:08:611 - 00:09:003 - add whistle √
3. 00:10:376 - Finish √
4. 00:22:337 - ^ √
5. 00:39:983 (3) - Difficult rhythm.00:39:984 (3,4) - Remove Note.00:40:180 - add 1/1slider
6. 00:49:395 (4,5,6,4,5) - Should be unified rhythm

Hard

1. 00:17:238 (2) - Move to 336/144 √
2. 00:08:611 (4) - same as Normal √
3. 00:22:337 - 00:22:925 - Missing Finish √
4. 00:31:944 (3) - move to 276/360 √
5. 00:34:199 (1) - Difficult, it is recommended that you change the circle I think now easier
6. 01:01:748 (1) - Remove NC.For the next interval √
7. 01:24:101 - Finish √
8. 01:24:690 - add Note 384/324 √
   
   
   whistle point

   01:02:925 -
   01:03:709 -
   01:05:278 -
   01:06:062 -
   01:06:650 -
   01:07:631 -
   01:08:415 -
   01:09:003 -
   01:09:984 -
   01:10:768 -
   01:11:552 -
   01:12:141 -
   01:13:513 -
   01:13:905 -
   01:14:297 -
   01:15:474 -
   01:16:258 -
   01:17:043 -
   01:17:827 -
   01:18:611 -
   01:19:199 -
   01:20:180 -
   01:20:964 -
   01:21:748 -
   01:22:337 -
   01:22:729 -
   01:23:121 -
   01:23:513 -
   01:25:670 -
   nice Hard

Insane

1. 00:00:964 (1,2,3,4) - Reverse flow is not good.from 00:00:179 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2. 00:03:121 (2) - why are these jumps so huge compared to everything else? seems out of place to me√
3. 00:03:905 (8) - try form
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:31:945 (4) - Tilt slightly √
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:591 (5) - Drum Clap 00:34:689 (6) - Drum Finish √
6. 00:34:984 (8,9) - ^ √
7. 00:41:258 - Drum Clap √
8. 00:54:297 - Finish √
9. 01:03:709 (1,2,3) - Try flow √
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:05:277 (1,4) - I want to unify the shape to fit the lyrics√
11. 01:05:670 (2,3) - 01:05:866 (3,4) - This difference in distance is what?
12. 01:07:238 (2,3,4) - Bad flow.Please do not Keep for appearance
13. 01:15:277 (2) - Same as 00:03:120 (2) -
14. 01:16:258 (1,2,3) - could make the distance between these three more even, will look better
15. 01:24:101 - Finish√
    
    You are breaking the flow for the appearance

Please add because overall whistle is insufficient Thank you for your guidance
gl

1. 我觉得应该把日文名放到source里
2. 音效声音略小,建议提升至少10%(soft组没存在感)
3. 我觉得drum组更适合这首歌
4. 截图有点大,加载慢的话可以直接管我要

1. 00:14:885 (5) - x72 y296
2. 00:31:356 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034475
3. 00:22:532 (3) - x339 y0
4. 00:34:199 (1,2,3,4) - 比较坑(Hard还是别放4分滑条了)
5. 00:40:572 (2,3) - 这个遮挡不好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034478
   00:50:571 (3,1) - ^http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034480
6. 00:44:297 (3) - 加折返
7. 00:41:258 (4) - 直接用折返
8. 00:56:650 (2) - 放到00:57:434 (1) - 头上
9. 01:02:728 (2) - 间距不一样orz
10. 01:04:297 (2,3) - 做三连http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034485
11. 01:24:101 (1) - x445 y101
12. 01:27:434 (1) - 在01:28:611 - 结束(所有难度)

1. AR太高了,建议8.3~8.5
2. OD8 shenmegui
3. 00:00:964 (1,3) - 这啥stack
4. 00:08:611 (6,1) - 叠
5. 01:05:669 (2,3,4) - 和01:04:885 (6,7,1) - 一样比较好(歌词完全一样)
6. 01:18:218 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:19:003 (5) - 拉远一点别跟前面叠上

1. 这排列也太贪吃蛇了吧……
2. 我不太会摸低难度,总之就是尽量别让物件有一丁点遮挡

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heloo~ M4M here~
These are just suggestions, if you don't want to change it, feel free to do so.

GENERAL

1. Your Offset should be 964.
2. Add Saekano in tags
   
3. Uncheck Widescreen support and Letterbox in Breaks
   ~Open Songsetup then design tab~
4. Preview point should be 01:00:572
5. This is just a suggestion: Change to this Colors. All fix
   

   Red - 159, Green - 64, Blue - 255
   Red - 255, Green - 128, Blue - 192
   Red - 18, Green - 124, Blue - 255
   Red - 242, Green - 40, Blue - 71
   Red - 223, Green - 244, Blue - 102
   ~It's the colors of every girl~

EASY

1. Change your HP drain Rate to 2 and Circle Size to 2.5
2. Avoid Stacking in Easy - 00:15:866(3,4) √
3. 00:05:670 - Change it like this: IMAGE
4. 00:09:984 - Fix Distance Spacing(Don't overlap it with the previous slider) and No Stacking.√
5. 00:16:650 - Make this a Slight S curve
6. 00:19:788 - Move this a little bit down for better flow
7. 00:29:592 - Remove the second point then move the third point to the middle(the part with smale white circle)
8. 00:38:611 - Curve more the second point
9. 00:46:454 - Fix the S-curve of this slider and don't overlap it with the next slider
10. 01:02:141 - Move the red point in the middle and Move it farther, don't overlap it with the last slider.
11. ^(If you changed above then..) Copy 01:02:141 and paste in 01:03:709 then Ctrl + J, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + G

NORMAL

1. Change HP Drain Rate to 5, Approach Rate to 4, Overall Diff to 5
2. 00:00:180(1,2) - Change this to 1 reverse slider and a circle
3. 00:03:121 - In my opinion, this part feels wrong. Change it to a circle then a slider ending white tick and remove the clap on the start of slider
4. 01:04:297(5,6) - Stack these. For it to be the same with the previous~
5. 01:06:650 - Remove Circle ~ Doesnt fit w/ music imo
6. 01:13:121 - This part feels wrong~ (remove the reverse slider)
7. ^ 01:13:513 - Move here the 2 1/2 sliders of 01:13:905 and put a circle

HARD

1. Change your HP Drain Rate to 6
2. 00:00:866 - You should seperate it into two reverse sliders having 3 reverse (fits in the music)
3. 00:30:670 - Add Circle
4. 00:38:415 - Add Circle

HARD

1. Change HP Drain Rate to 7, Approach Rate to 8.2(because the music is not too fast), Overall DIff to 7
2. 00:01:748 - Fix overlap with 1
3. 00:18:807 - Fix overlap with 4√
4. 00:47:239 - Fix overlap with 5√
5. 01:22:141 - Move a bit to the left ~ Fix straight√

Well, Good Luck~!

23konG wrote:

M4M
[General]

1. 我觉得应该把日文名放到source里 咦?orz
2. 音效声音略小,建议提升至少10%(soft组没存在感) 感觉现在够了
3. 我觉得drum组更适合这首歌
4. 截图有点大,加载慢的话可以直接管我要

[Hard]

1. 00:14:885 (5) - x72 y296 看不出必要
2. 00:31:356 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034475
3. 00:22:532 (3) - x339 y0
4. 00:34:199 (1,2,3,4) - 比较坑(Hard还是别放4分滑条了)
5. 00:40:572 (2,3) - 这个遮挡不好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034478
   00:50:571 (3,1) - ^http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034480
6. 00:44:297 (3) - 加折返 没音啊
7. 00:41:258 (4) - 直接用折返 现在的符合节奏
8. 00:56:650 (2) - 放到00:57:434 (1) - 头上
9. 01:02:728 (2) - 间距不一样orz √
10. 01:04:297 (2,3) - 做三连http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034485
11. 01:24:101 (1) - x445 y101
12. 01:27:434 (1) - 在01:28:611 - 结束(所有难度)√

[Insane]

1. AR太高了,建议8.3~8.5
2. OD8 shenmegui OD=PP 虽然我拿不了
3. 00:00:964 (1,3) - 这啥stack 新人stack
4. 00:08:611 (6,1) - 叠
5. 01:05:669 (2,3,4) - 和01:04:885 (6,7,1) - 一样比较好(歌词完全一样)
6. 01:18:218 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:19:003 (5) - 拉远一点别跟前面叠上

[Normal]

1. 这排列也太贪吃蛇了吧…… ORZ
2. 我不太会摸低难度,总之就是尽量别让物件有一丁点遮挡

ctpsky wrote:

水摸
[Insane]
00:13:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我的 现在的好看

img

00:27:042 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 摆成缺一个角的六边形 现在的好看

img

不过这个3我不知道怎么办
00:59:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 感觉排列有点丑 摆成这个形状？ 7哪去了

img

这个形状套进去应该比较好看吧
01:04:885 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - 我的意见是 好乱...

img

01:17:434 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 意见同上
01:10:375 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是摆正点好看 这强迫症...

img

至于那个2的blanket就看你的了
01:21:748 (3,5) - 5反正3那个位置 3嘛 464,136试试 不好看

Hard摸不出来
水平不足就这么多

Kagamine Ren wrote:

好图
edit掉了，你知道就好，btw 不要去queue里找跟你一样新的人M4M，并没有什么意义，同样是M4M，争取去找摸图厉害的人（kd>100 bn最好