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Marina And The Diamonds - Savages

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Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Topic Starter
Mao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 13. Juni 2015 at 00:45:28

Artist: Marina And The Diamonds
Title: Savages
Tags: -Bakari- FROOT Marina Lambrini Diamandis Μαρίνα Λαμπρινή Διαμαντή David Kosten Desperate-kun
BPM: 120
Filesize: 10346kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Tough (2,58 stars, 470 notes)
  2. Twin Average (1,54 stars, 256 notes)
  3. Wild (3,29 stars, 663 notes)
Download: Marina And The Diamonds - Savages
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#12 / Marina and her new album are great! Enjoy (:


Mapset Info:
Average (Normal) by Desperate-kun and me
Tough (Advanced) by me
Savage (Hard+) by me
Last edited by Mao , edited 8 times in total.
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Done, ready for mods! :3/
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Twin Average]
  1. 00:36:275 (1) - 00:40:275 (1) - 00:44:275 - I believe setting as a drum-Finish would suit the hitsound better. Though the curent soft-Finish usage is consistent, I think it's weakening the actually fitting hitsound at 00:32:275.
  2. 01:20:275 (1,2) - Just a little doubt if breaking the distance was inevitable.
  3. 03:02:275 (5) - Consider ending 1/2 earlier to fit the vocals better. Or to fit your original intention, which is ending the slider along with the drum sound at 03:03:275, rather consider giving a new combo on this slider to indicate the drum better.
  4. 04:06:525 (1) - Not sure about the meaning of the ending point of this spinner. Consider ending at 04:09:525 along with the vocal. Same suggestion for all difficulties.
[Tough]
  1. 01:08:275 (7) - Combo inconsistency. Remove NC. One of the reference 02:12:275 (1).
  2. 03:20:275 (1,2) - Personally the volume of these felt quite big. A volume up starting from 03:21:775 would rather suit. Same applies to [Savage].
[Savage]
  1. 01:08:775 (1,1) - 03:26:775 (1,1) - Personally I didn't thought that this pattern demands a NC. Also maybe it could be only me, but the combo settings of 01:09:275 (1,2,1) felt a little confusing. Rather starting the combo from 01:10:025 would be better readable in this kind of pattern.
  2. 03:54:150 - Consider adding something like drum-whistle here? It feels a little empty currently.
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
general

・i dont really understand how does your spread works as last diff contains invented triplets and several streams, while Tough diff has zero of this and just max 1/2. is this an ok thing?
・widescreen blabla in first 2 diffs


twin average

・03:40:275 (3,4,5) - 03:44:275 (3,4,5) - 03:48:275 (3,4,5) - 03:56:275 (3,4,5) - 04:00:275 (3,4,5) - 04:04:275 (3,4,5) - (p/4177276 http://puu.sh/hY5kp/f0c2730700.png ) maybe i dont understand something? your bpm is pretty low so i believe its fine though lol


tougherage

・nothing to complain about from my side, just 00:45:775 (4) - 's sharp side here which could be made a bit smoother by moving anchor point a bit down


savage

・01:06:775 (3,4,5,6) - wasnt that pleasant to drag cursor up and down that often here, i'd recommend smth like that instead
SPOILER
・01:37:275 (5,6) - such pattern appears only at once and was pretty unexpectable honestly. simple 1/1 slider would cover all existed beats and be played more calmly
SPOILER


good set, good luck
Snaggletooth
491 posts
Joined November 2012
Snaggletooth
MOD. \o3o/

[Twin Average]


  • "Cosmetical Issues":
  1. 03:56:275 (3,1) - No slider touchy \;A;/ Ich persönlich fänd einen curve-slider einfach schöner ~
    Overlaps und so.

[Tough]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 01:06:025 (5,1,2,3) - Nur ne kleine Anmerkung:

      Die hervorhebung von (1,2,3) hätte um einiges besser geklappt wenn (5) ein slider-end wäre.
      Dann hättest du auch einen eigenen Tap-Rhythmus für diesen speziellen Teil. But w/e ;A;
  2. Pattern Issues:
    1. 01:30:775 (2) - Meh, ich persönlich bin kein großer fan von dem cursor-movement bzw vom
      anblick. Ich hätte den circle auf x:228 y:52 gesetzt. Ich meine iwie dass ich so ein 'pattern' jetzt nicht
      so gewohnt bin von dir, sondern eher sowas wie das, was ich vorgeschlagen hatte. Ein fehler ist es so
      wies ist nicht, ich mein nur o3o 01:31:775 (4) - same
  3. Nazi:
    1. 02:07:275 (3,4) - plz align. o3o

Savages.. I got nothing.

Eat my stars!
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
(▰˘◡˘▰)

Twin Average


01:18:025 - I believe that, since you were following the vocal, adding a circle here would emphasize it and keep consistency with the blue tick slider. Just my opinion.

01:36:025 - Same as before, but here the beat is stronger and would be much better to add if you didn't add because of the vocal. It kinda "breaks" the song consistency imo. If you agree with me you should do that with the rest of the song and on Though diff.

01:46:275 (4) - Shouldn't the Finish be soft instead of drum? All the others are Soft, except this one.

03:02:275 (5) - Since you were always ending a slider on the red tick on this section, would be a nice idea to do the same here too. Sounds really inconsistent the way it's now :c

Though


Eh... not sure about the spreading here, you didn't use triplets at all but on Savage you even overmaped some beats. You can add some triplets on 00:48:025 (5,1) - 01:20:025 (4,1) - 02:24:025 (5,1) - and etc...


02:20:525 (2) - You probably forgot to add a whistle here. Be sure to check other diffs if you used that hitsound copier.

Savage


00:31:275 (1,2,3) - It's kinda inconsistent with other diffs but it's cool.

01:10:025 (2) - This is not completely offscreen, but since AIMod warns, would be better to fix it.

01:40:275 (1) - The beat is really strong here, would be a good idea to add a jump like you did with the rest.

03:21:775 (1,2,3,4,1) - Looks a bit weird to have spaced streams like these because there were other sections were the beats are strong but the streams aren't that spaced. Like this one 02:39:525 (4,5,6,7) - . Imo would be better to keep the DS consistent.

03:41:275 (1) - Probably you should remove this New Combo.

This is perfect <3

PM me if you need any icon. c:
Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
I will apply everything as soon as possible. I was quite busy this week, thanks guys! >_>
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Kyubey
Hello!
[General]
According to the album cover, artist should be «Marina And The Diamonds». Since she uses different capitalizing everywhere, it's not that necessary, but having it like that will look more consistent with the album.
[Savage]
03:03:400 (1) - there's no reason to make it different from other difficulties, starting 1/4 earlier doesn't change anything, so i recommend to place it on red tick for better consistency with other diffs
and better to make last spinner in the all difficulties consistent too

And that's all I guess. I decided to not repeat things that other modders said like «offscreen» slider in the Savage or excessive abundance of 1/4 rhythm in it, but in other things your mapset are pretty neat and pleasant to play, so I would icon it, but seems like you already have some BNs that are ready to do it.

No kudosu due to small contribution.
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
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Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Request from baka Mao-senpai in-game.

- General :
  1. Disable Widescreen Support, you don't have a SB.

- Twin Average :
  1. 00:48:275 (1) - I think you could curve it a little more to catch more the next circle.
  2. 01:11:275 (5) - If you want to follow correctly flow here, if would better if you CTRL+H it.
  3. 01:45:275 (3) - Why not curve it a little like this -> http://puu.sh/i6x8S/a4b1c84ac4.jpg , I think it could improve flow quite well instead of this straight slider who lead in a wrong movement.
  4. 02:25:025 (2) - I think place it at 256:300 would be more natural to play.
  5. 03:56:275 (3,1) - This overlap is really necessary ? You could just move a little 03:55:775 (2,3) - and change axe of 03:58:275 (1) - to avoid it.

- Tough :
  1. 01:08:275 - NC should be here and not at 01:08:775 - to be consistant with similar parts.
  2. 03:36:275 (1,2) - Maybe blanket them ?
  3. I agree about spread, this diff could benefit from some triplet to fit better the spread with Savage diff. You could place some at 01:20:150 - / 02:24:150 - / and similar for example.

- Savage :
  1. 01:55:275 (4,5) - / 03:17:275 (3,4) - / 03:48:275 (1,2,3) - / 03:49:275 (4,5,6) - Blanket can be improve.
  2. 03:20:150 (5) - I think it could play more naturaly if it was moved at 0:280.
  3. Some of these triplets across the diff are overmapped imo like 02:06:150 (1) - / 03:16:150 (5) - / 00:36:150 (7) - and similar. I think these on kiai are ok because they consolid these parts, but other are just too much imo.

Rest is sweet.
Mukyu~
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
yo

Savage:
00:35:275 (4,5) - think about unstacking them http://puu.sh/i8rEL/2d53da53be.jpg , this will give good momentum to 00:35:775 (6) and will stress lyrics part better

00:44:025 (7,1) - http://puu.sh/i8rNk/6f4a6dbc88.jpg increasing jump would be great solution to stress strong beat, especially after movement stop on 00:43:775 (6,7)

01:10:275 (1,2,3) - compare with 01:06:275 (1,2,3) , you should accent jump on 01:10:525 (2,3) and not on 01:10:275 (1,2) , because this is more logical to stress music\lyrics

01:19:775 (5,6,7,8,1) - imo, better to rotate this http://puu.sh/i8rx3/9443f288ef.jpg to stress music with 01:20:275 (1,2,3) triangle jump

01:24:275 (1,2) - illuminati xD kk, this 01:23:775 (7,1) - spacing is unconsistant with 01:21:775 (7,1) , music pretty much the same so you should use same emphasis

01:33:525 (6,7) - increase this jump a bit to ~1.9x to match 01:34:275 (1,2) , and 01:35:275 (4,5) - reverse them to make jump on 01:35:775 (6) , this will make whole pattern a bit more structured

02:56:025 (5) - http://puu.sh/i8sFj/3f26a55012.jpg

03:06:275 () - remove unnecessary bookmarks, this will save you 28 bytes jk D:

03:44:525 (2,3) - jump here to be constant with 03:38:525 (2,3) \\ 03:39:525 (5,6) \\ 03:40:525 (2,3) \\ etc \\
03:45:525 (5,6) - ^ or you just ctrl+g this sliders
^alright and you have this random jump - non jump to clap until the end, so do whatever you want with them

other diffs is fine, i hope
call me someday
Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Nyukai
Call me once you've got the bubble.
Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Buttercup
Hello Mao, Sorry for late

  • Twin Average
  1. 01:46:275 (4) - soft finish? like the other parts


    Tough
  2. 01:08:275 (7) - New combo here, then, remove in 01:08:775 -


    Savage
  3. 00:49:275 (3) - The flow seems bad, try to do it

  4. 01:10:025 (2) - Slider end is offscreen

  5. 01:37:275 (5,6) - This is overmap D: and an inconsistent rhythm change

  6. 02:03:275 (4) - Flow seems bad (too ;w;) try to do it

  7. 02:16:275 (1) - Again.... A ctrl + G fix the problem

  8. 03:43:525 (4,5) - The spacing is inconsistent (Ctrl + G?), look at 03:44:525 (2,3) - and 03:45:525 (5,6) - , same rhythm, different spacing in relation to 03:43:525 (4,5) -

Sorry for poor mod, I'm training 8-) #Nhawak4BN ok no

Good luck!
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Myxo
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Myxo

Sonnyc wrote:

[Twin Average]
  1. 00:36:275 (1) - 00:40:275 (1) - 00:44:275 - I believe setting as a drum-Finish would suit the hitsound better. Though the curent soft-Finish usage is consistent, I think it's weakening the actually fitting hitsound at 00:32:275. Fixed
  2. 03:02:275 (5) - Consider ending 1/2 earlier to fit the vocals better. Or to fit your original intention, which is ending the slider along with the drum sound at 03:03:275, rather consider giving a new combo on this slider to indicate the drum better. It sounds better ending at the white tick tbh, if it would end 1/2 earlier it would feel weird and kinda empty. And I personally dislike single-note combos a lot, so I won't NC this slider either.

Aka wrote:

twin average

・03:40:275 (3,4,5) - 03:44:275 (3,4,5) - 03:48:275 (3,4,5) - 03:56:275 (3,4,5) - 04:00:275 (3,4,5) - 04:04:275 (3,4,5) - (p/4177276 http://puu.sh/hY5kp/f0c2730700.png ) maybe i dont understand something? your bpm is pretty low so i believe its fine though lol The difficulty is fine as lowest diff as it hasn't got any complicated patterns, such as multiple kinds of stacks, or long chains of 1/2-objects. Also, yes, the BPM is pretty low.

Snaggletooth wrote:

[Twin Average]


  • "Cosmetical Issues":
  1. 03:56:275 (3,1) - No slider touchy \;A;/ Ich persönlich fänd einen curve-slider einfach schöner ~
    Overlaps und so. Hmm ich mag den Overlap D:

Kuron-kun wrote:

(▰˘◡˘▰)

Twin Average


01:18:025 - I believe that, since you were following the vocal, adding a circle here would emphasize it and keep consistency with the blue tick slider. Just my opinion. I want to avoid having long chains of 1/2 here, so I'd rather not add the circle. The idea is nice though.

01:46:275 (4) - Shouldn't the Finish be soft instead of drum? All the others are Soft, except this one. Fixed

03:02:275 (5) - Since you were always ending a slider on the red tick on this section, would be a nice idea to do the same here too. Sounds really inconsistent the way it's now :c Hmm I really don't have a problem with how this sounds D: It's a nice ending for this section imo

Nozhomi wrote:

- Twin Average :
  1. 01:11:275 (5) - If you want to follow correctly flow here, if would better if you CTRL+H it. I really don't see how that would improve the flow.. Currently the slider flows smoother with the previous object, that way it would be smoother with the following object.
  2. 01:45:275 (3) - Why not curve it a little like this -> http://puu.sh/i6x8S/a4b1c84ac4.jpg , I think it could improve flow quite well instead of this straight slider who lead in a wrong movement. Similar answer to above. The flow is fine here imo, it doesn't play bad to change direction a bit after a straight slider.
  3. 02:25:025 (2) - I think place it at 256:300 would be more natural to play. I prefer the more edgy pattern here, since I think it doesn't play bad and looks really nice. I will change it if someone else mentions this though
  4. 03:56:275 (3,1) - This overlap is really necessary ? You could just move a little 03:55:775 (2,3) - and change axe of 03:58:275 (1) - to avoid it. Yep, I really like the look of that overlap :3 And it's not confusing to play, so..

Nhawak wrote:

Twin Average
01:46:275 (4) - soft finish? like the other parts Fixed
Thanks a lot everyone!

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Savages
TitleUnicode:Savages
Artist:Marina and The Diamonds
ArtistUnicode:Marina and The Diamonds
Creator:Mao
Version:Twin Average
Source:
Tags:FROOT Marina Lambrini Diamandis Μαρίνα Λαμπρινή Διαμαντή David Kosten Desperate-kun
BeatmapID:664762
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20,265,245775,1,8,1:0:0:0:
99,326,246275,5,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,246525,12,0,249775,0:0:0:0:
Mao
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Updated with Desp's fixes, a SB made by Bakari and fixes on the highest difficulty already. Going to fix the rest and reply tomorrow (hopefully)
Lanturn
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Animated BG <3

Focusing more on the Average diff because me <3 lower diffs. Even though my favorite of the set is definitely the Hard lol

[Storyboard]
  1. You should fade out starting at 03:04:275 - to 03:06:275 - (100% fade) and then fade back in starting at 03:14:275 - to 03:22:275 - where the kiai starts.. Kind of gives an epic feel to it ;)

[Twin Average]
This diff almost suffers from the circular disease. It should be fine though. (Basically your map goes around in big circles and doesn't really swap direction for a long time. It does this a few times, but you end up swapping enough.)
  1. 01:20:275 (1,2) - DS (1.20 instead of 1.0)
  2. 00:49:025 (2) - 00:51:025 (5) - and every similar note afterwards. Almost feels like you could add a whistle here for an extra sound. You could pretty much apply it to the majority of the song in similar places, so I'll only mention it once. Consider for the other diffs as well if you don't have them (I'm too lazy to check)
  3. 01:01:775 - and 01:03:025 (5,6) - Because you skipped the first one, it almost feels like you are following vocals here. 01:03:025 (5) - would be a 3/2 slider in this case for vocal following. The drums feel really strange to hit when playing. No it's not a problem, but it just doesn't feel natural swapping to the drums like you did here. Another option is to simply delete (5) and move the (3) back 1/2 so it focuses on the drums instead of the vocals. http://puu.sh/idScu.jpg
  4. 01:14:025 - 01:17:025 (2) - and all similar spots are a little hard to hear. You might want to raise the volume a little. It's not a big deal if you think the effort isn't worth it though.
  5. 03:34:775 (2) - 3/4 instead? basically the same idea as 03:36:275 (4) - optional though.
  6. 03:55:775 (2) - 03:59:775 (2) - 04:03:775 (2) - I personally don't think the 1/2 slider is necessary. a simple circle would fit the melody better. The drums in the background don't play here anyways. it's just some fade-in vocals or something that really shouldn't matter in a Normal.
Tough is so perfect. Maybe check hitsound suggestions from the Twin mod.

[Wild]
Basically I still have my opinions from the first time you showed me this set. (A little bit heavy on the triplets in some places where it doesn't make sense, and that jump at the start) but you wanted to keep them as is. So I'll skip those.
  1. 02:12:525 (2,3) - damn that's a pretty big jump. are you sure? It's probably the biggest non-1/4 slider jump you have and it really doesn't feel like it should be a big jump.
It might also be possible the BPM is slightly off. I notice near the end of the song some notes are hitting a little off. I'm almost thinking around 120.007 / 120.008 BPM
Maybe double-check quickly?

No reason to keep this waiting for much longer. Let's push this forward.
Mao
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Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

[Savage]
  1. 01:08:775 (1,1) - 03:26:775 (1,1) - Personally I didn't thought that this pattern demands a NC. Also maybe it could be only me, but the combo settings of 01:09:275 (1,2,1) felt a little confusing. Rather starting the combo from 01:10:025 would be better readable in this kind of pattern. Split them into groups of two and also did this because of the follow circles :/

Aka

Aka wrote:

savage

・01:06:775 (3,4,5,6) - wasnt that pleasant to drag cursor up and down that often here, i'd recommend smth like that instead Hmm, I thought a lot about this one in particular but I really like the up and down movement as it plays pretty smooth for me
riffy
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Great idea, thank you!

code
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
 F,0,25,,0
 M,0,4281,,320,240
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Animation,Foreground,Centre,"r/a.png",320,240,27,62,LoopForever
 F,0,31275,32275,0,1
 F,0,184275,186275,1,0
 F,0,194275,,0
 F,0,200275,202275,0,1
 F,0,202275,246525,1
 F,0,246525,250275,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Mao
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Snaggletooth

Snaggletooth wrote:

[Tough]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 01:06:025 (5,1,2,3) - Nur ne kleine Anmerkung:

      Die hervorhebung von (1,2,3) hätte um einiges besser geklappt wenn (5) ein slider-end wäre.
      Dann hättest du auch einen eigenen Tap-Rhythmus für diesen speziellen Teil. But w/e ;A; Joa ich verstehe, was du meinst, aber ich bin hier mit der Betonung auf die Vocals gegangen.
  2. Pattern Issues:
    1. 01:30:775 (2) - Meh, ich persönlich bin kein großer fan von dem cursor-movement bzw vom
      anblick. Ich hätte den circle auf x:228 y:52 gesetzt. Ich meine iwie dass ich so ein 'pattern' jetzt nicht
      so gewohnt bin von dir, sondern eher sowas wie das, was ich vorgeschlagen hatte. Ein fehler ist es so
      wies ist nicht, ich mein nur o3o 01:31:775 (4) - same Well, ich schau mal, ob ich noch was mache, ich fands halt doof in einer Linie :/ Und man verlässt ja den Slider auch etwas eher, also kann mans smoother betrachten, als es eigentlich ist.
  3. Nazi:

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun wrote:

(▰˘◡˘▰)

Savage


03:21:775 (1,2,3,4,1) - Looks a bit weird to have spaced streams like these because there were other sections were the beats are strong but the streams aren't that spaced. Like this one 02:39:525 (4,5,6,7) - . Imo would be better to keep the DS consistent. It's so strong ;A;
[/notice]

Nozhomi

Nozhomi wrote:

- Twin Average :
  1. 02:25:025 (2) - I think place it at 256:300 would be more natural to play. zigzag should play fine as well

Sieg

Sieg wrote:

yo

Savage:

01:24:275 (1,2) - illuminati xD kk, this 01:23:775 (7,1) - spacing is unconsistant with 01:21:775 (7,1) , music pretty much the same so you should use same emphasis aaah, tried everything but got nothing working ;_;

Nhawak

Nhawak wrote:

Hello Mao, Sorry for late


Savage
[*] 00:49:275 (3) - The flow seems bad, try to do it Anti-flow, it's supposed to be not too smooth


[*] 02:03:275 (4) - Flow seems bad (too ;w;) try to do it ^


[*] 02:16:275 (1) - Again.... A ctrl + G fix the problem You can just go straigth through the slider into 1's head by not exactly following the path, making it smooth
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Lanturn

Lanturn wrote:

[Twin Average]
  1. 01:14:025 - 01:17:025 (2) - and all similar spots are a little hard to hear. You might want to raise the volume a little. It's not a big deal if you think the effort isn't worth it though. Desp
  2. 03:34:775 (2) - 3/4 instead? basically the same idea as 03:36:275 (4) - optional though. Staying consistent with the other Kiais
  3. 03:55:775 (2) - 03:59:775 (2) - 04:03:775 (2) - I personally don't think the 1/2 slider is necessary. a simple circle would fit the melody better. The drums in the background don't play here anyways. it's just some fade-in vocals or something that really shouldn't matter in a Normal. Desp
Tough is so perfect. Maybe check hitsound suggestions from the Twin mod.

[Wild]
Basically I still have my opinions from the first time you showed me this set. (A little bit heavy on the triplets in some places where it doesn't make sense, and that jump at the start) but you wanted to keep them as is. So I'll skip those.
  1. 02:12:525 (2,3) - damn that's a pretty big jump. are you sure? It's probably the biggest non-1/4 slider jump you have and it really doesn't feel like it should be a big jump. Well, I thought a lot here but didn't come up with a good solution yet :/

Thanks guys! Everything not mentioned here should be fixed hopefully I'm going to check Metadata and Timing again. Otherwise, updated! o/
Lanturn
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Metadata fun times~

Marina and The Diamonds is probably one of the most inconsistent artists ever. To be honest, I don't think it matters what way you label the artist field because of this. One thing I will mention though is that almost all the external links to soundcloud/twitter etc are all Marina and The Diamonds, minus a few. This is probably the one you want to use as it seems to be the most common throughout all of her websites.

However, if you want to take the album's route, then it is Marina And The Diamonds.

Marina and The Diamonds
Marina And The Diamonds
Marina and the Diamonds
Marina & the Diamonds
Marina & The Diamonds
MARINA AND THE DIAMONDS
etc.

I don't think there will be much of an issue on what you decide to use, as I guess they're almost all official.

As for the title. If you're looking for a non-capitalized source. I guess the official store has it:
http://usstore.marinaandthediamonds.com ... rd-cd.html
Official website and Publisher page uses all capitals in everything.

I don't think there will be much issues leaving it how it currently is, but here are your options I guess. Metadata is so fun :3
Mao
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Thanks! Waiting for my brother now. :/
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