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AJIekceu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 августа 2015 г. at 18:54:15

Artist: nato
Title: Yog-Sothoth
Source: Pump It Up 2015 Prime
Tags: piu Andamiro dance arcade artcore
BPM: 200
Filesize: 23517kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1,47 stars, 398 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (3,56 stars, 1133 notes)
  3. MX - 4Key (4,58 stars, 1532 notes)
  4. NM - 4Key (2,22 stars, 680 notes)
Download: nato - Yog-Sothoth
Download: nato - Yog-Sothoth (no video)
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Mod's Progress
EZ - 15/7
NM - 15/7
HD - 19/7
MX - 16/7
Special Thanks to
[Shana Lesus] for mod, video, star, .wav HitSounds and final BN Check ^3^
Kiviman for star :3
DarkSider2442 for mod and 5 stars *o*
[GraveChaos] for mod
RuberusuScarlet for mod and BN Check ~
Pharos21 for mod
HOST for mod
DrawdeX for mod
Anima_Alumi-47 for mod
MEGAtive for mod
schwarzvgrune for mod
Harbyter for MXmod
KawaEE for mod
rhalp10 for mod
Rivals_7 for mod
Raediaufar for mod
Verniy_Chan for mod
Kruzon for mod
Frim4503 for mod
AnatOWJIya for 2 stars :3
Mapset's Progress
EZ - 100% (HS 100%)
NM - 100% (HS 100%)
HD - 100% (HS 100%)
MX - 100% (HS 100%)
by RuberusuScarlet
by [Shana Lesus]
by Quality Assurance Team
by RuberusuScarlet
by [Shana Lesus]
DarkSider2442
Всё как обычно, |1|2|3|4| :D
В 4к я далеко не так хорошо разбираюсь, как в 7к, так что много исправлений не жди, да и диффы сделаны очень хорошо
EZ
00:22:498 (22498|0) - холд начинается отсюда 00:22:648 - , в других диффах у тебя всё правильно стоит, а если это тот звук, о котором я думаю, то начало здесь 00:22:611 -
01:10:198 (70198|2) - на 2 колонку
01:10:498 (70498|1) - на 3 колонку
01:48:298 (108298|1) - на 1 колонку
01:24:898 - так же, как и тут 00:22:498 (22498|0) -
NM
00:11:098 (11098|2) - на 4 колонку
00:25:498 - добавь ноту на 4 колонку
00:25:648 (25648|2) - на 2 колонку
00:55:348 - ноту не забыл?
HD
00:06:748 (6748|2) - на 1 колонку
01:24:898 (84898|3) - холд заканчивается здесь 01:25:048 -
MX
01:14:023 - ты уж как нибудь избавься от дабла, от тут не нужен
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Всё как обычно, |1|2|3|4| :D Внезапномод, хороош :D
В 4к я далеко не так хорошо разбираюсь, как в 7к, так что много исправлений не жди, да и диффы сделаны очень хорошо
EZ
00:22:498 (22498|0) - холд начинается отсюда 00:22:648 - , в других диффах у тебя всё правильно стоит, а если это тот звук, о котором я думаю, то начало здесь 00:22:611 -
01:10:198 (70198|2) - на 2 колонку
01:10:498 (70498|1) - на 3 колонку
01:48:298 (108298|1) - на 1 колонку
01:24:898 - так же, как и тут 00:22:498 (22498|0) -
NM
00:11:098 (11098|2) - на 4 колонку
00:25:498 - добавь ноту на 4 колонку
00:25:648 (25648|3) - на 2 колонку
00:55:348 - ноту не забыл? Типа нормал, вот и подумал...
HD
00:06:748 (6748|2) - на 1 колонку
01:24:898 (84898|3) - холд заканчивается здесь 01:25:048 - Магия 1/3 :x
MX
01:14:023 - ты уж как нибудь избавься от дабла, от тут не нужен
Спасибо \о/
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Recommended BG image size: 1366 x 768
Uncheck: Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard)
AiMOD (EZ):
Life Drain rate is suggested to be at least 7 or higher
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
|1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
HPDR = 7
00:08:098 (8098|3) - Remove not necessary because of pattern same with 00:17:698

00:27:748 (27748|3,28948|0) - Ctrl + G for pattern and consistency

01:17:998 (77998|0,78298|2) - ^

01:31:723 (91723|3,92323|0,92548|3) - Ctrl + H ^

[NM]
00:00:148 (148|2) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

01:39:298 (99298|0,99298|3,99448|2,99598|1,99748|0) - I suggest notes like this starting here make this single noted instead because it's a piano not a long pitch piano sound. It's for pattern too.

[HD]
00:00:148 (148|1) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

00:08:248 (8248|1) - Move to |1| for hand balance

01:14:398 (74398|0,74473|2,74548|1,74623|3) - I don't think of this. Better make this SNs instead

01:24:298 (84298|0,84373|1) - Make this SNs. If you listen closely there's a stop it's not a continous long pitch

[MX]
00:00:148 (148|3) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

00:04:498 Starting here. I suggest to put 2 SNs in the beginning of every long notes BUT! has an impact like this one. It's because it's your pattern too and the start and end of every long notes have the same beats/rhythm (Drumbeat - Hithat | Impact)

00:11:698 (11698|1,11848|0,11998|0) - Move to |3| - |2| - |1| because of pattern

00:36:448 Add note to |3| - |4| Drumbeat impact & hit-hat and for pattern the same as the long notes with the same start or ending impact

My MOD suk ye can just not give me kudosu for this
Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~ Hi :3
[4K MOD]

Recommended BG image size: 1366 x 768
Uncheck: Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard)
AiMOD (EZ):
Life Drain rate is suggested to be at least 7 or higher
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
|1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
HPDR = 7
00:08:098 (8098|3) - Remove not necessary because of pattern same with 00:17:698

00:27:748 (27748|3,28948|0) - Ctrl + G for pattern and consistency Wow, nice

01:17:998 (77998|0,78298|2) - ^

01:31:723 (91723|3,92323|0,92548|3) - Ctrl + H ^

[NM]
00:00:148 (148|2) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

01:39:298 (99298|0,99298|3,99448|2,99598|1,99748|0) - I suggest notes like this starting here make this single noted instead because it's a piano not a long pitch piano sound. It's for pattern too.

[HD]
00:00:148 (148|1) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

00:08:248 (8248|1) - Move to |1| for hand balance

01:14:398 (74398|0,74473|2,74548|1,74623|3) - I don't think of this. Better make this SNs instead

01:24:298 (84298|0,84373|1) - Make this SNs. If you listen closely there's a stop it's not a continous long pitch

[MX]
00:00:148 (148|3) - Start it here 00:00:898 The pitch starts here

00:04:498 Starting here. I suggest to put 2 SNs in the beginning of every long notes BUT! has an impact like this one. It's because it's your pattern too and the start and end of every long notes have the same beats/rhythm (Drumbeat - Hithat | Impact) Hm.. Now I don't add anything, but if other modders will saying about this, I will add notes

00:11:698 (11698|1,11848|0,11998|0) - Move to |3| - |2| - |1| because of pattern

00:36:448 Add note to |3| - |4| Drumbeat impact & hit-hat and for pattern the same as the long notes with the same start or ending impact

My MOD suk ye can just not give me kudosu for this
Nice map!~ Thanks x)
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Thank you very much! ^^
RuberusuScarlet
hi ~

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[MX]
00:16:048 - add 4 ?

01:13:498 (73498|3,73798|1) - delete

01:28:198 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2534889

01:34:123 (94123|1) - delete
01:34:423 (94423|1) - ^

01:50:773 - add 4
01:52:273 - ^4

01:52:348 (112348|3) - move to 3

[HD]
00:04:948 - add 1 or 3

01:38:923 - delete one note
01:39:148 - ^

[NM]
01:30:523 (90523|2) - move to 01:30:448 - hitsound Clap
01:31:723 (91723|0) - ^01:31:648 - ^
01:44:698 (104698|3,104848|0,104998|1,105148|2,105298|3,105448|2,105598|1,105748|0,105898|1,106048|2,106198|3,106348|2,106498|0,106648|3,106798|1,106948|0,107098|3,107248|1,107398|0,107548|2) -
change note (hard)
good luck
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[MX]
00:16:048 - add 4 ?

01:13:498 (73498|3,73798|1) - delete

01:28:198 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2534889

01:34:123 (94123|1) - delete
01:34:423 (94423|1) - ^

01:50:773 - add 4
01:52:273 - ^4

01:52:348 (112348|3) - move to 3

[HD]
00:04:948 - add 1 or 3 Why? There are low sound

01:38:923 - delete one note
01:39:148 - ^

[NM]
01:30:523 (90523|2) - move to 01:30:448 - hitsound Clap
01:31:723 (91723|0) - ^01:31:648 - ^
01:44:698 [/color](104698|3,104848|0,104998|1,105148|2,105298|3,105448|2,105598|1,105748|0,105898|1,106048|2,106198|3,106348|2,106498|0,106648|3,106798|1,106948|0,107098|3,107248|1,107398|0,107548|2) -
change note (hard)
good luck

Thank you :)
Aste-
Hi Hi

Sorry for the delay (i'm Running out of POWER yesterday)

Generals are fine so let's skip it

The MOD
Column 1.2.3.4

EZ
01:38:098 (98098|3) - LN end at 01:38:923 (98923|1) -

01:55:198 (115198|0,115198|3) - start on the whiteline above

00:21:148 (21148|1) - Move to 1

00:21:898 (21898|1,22648|0) - the space are kinda annoying you know. upper LN start on the white line below

00:31:648 (31648|0,32098|1) - lower note on the 2, upper note on the 1

00:34:498 (34498|0) - move to 3

00:39:298 (39298|0) - move to 4

00:45:298 (45298|0,45898|3) - end on the white line below

01:15:298 (75298|0) - end at 01:15:898 (75898|1) -
01:16:498 (76498|3) - ^
01:17:698 (77698|1) - ^
01:18:898 (78898|2,80098|1) - ^
for the rest line like this. do it like this . i nknow you following the synth.. but dont do it on EZ.. it's too hard

NM
Widescreen Support.. Uncheck please

The chart are Fine ^.^

HD
Same Problem with NM ( Widescreen)

00:11:548 (11548|2) - Move to 4

the rest seend Fine ^.^

Nice HS ^.^

GL ^.^ hope get ranked soon ^.^

ps.. Sorry if i didn't help much ^.^
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Pharos21 wrote:

Hi Hi

Sorry for the delay (i'm Running out of POWER yesterday)

Generals are fine so let's skip it

The MOD
Column 1.2.3.4

EZ
01:38:098 (98098|3) - LN end at 01:38:923 (98923|1) -

01:55:198 (115198|0,115198|3) - start on the whiteline above

00:21:148 (21148|1) - Move to 1

00:21:898 (21898|1,22648|0) - the space are kinda annoying you know. upper LN start on the white line below

00:31:648 (31648|0,32098|1) - lower note on the 2, upper note on the 1

00:34:498 (34498|0) - move to 3

00:39:298 (39298|0) - move to 4

00:45:298 (45298|0,45898|3) - end on the white line below

01:15:298 (75298|0) - end at 01:15:898 (75898|1) -
01:16:498 (76498|3) - ^
01:17:698 (77698|1) - ^
01:18:898 (78898|2,80098|1) - ^
for the rest line like this. do it like this . i nknow you following the synth.. but dont do it on EZ.. it's too hard

NM
Widescreen Support.. Uncheck please

The chart are Fine ^.^

HD
Same Problem with NM ( Widescreen)

00:11:548 (11548|2) - Move to 4

the rest seend Fine ^.^

Nice HS ^.^

GL ^.^ hope get ranked soon ^.^

ps.. Sorry if i didn't help much ^.^
Thank you! ^^
HOST_old
hi AJIIII mod from queue.


column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


[]
[EZ]

00:12:898 - add 1 for cymbal sound

00:22:798 - add LN 4, end 00:23:548

00:36:898 - add 4 for cymbal sound

00:45:898 (45898|3) - start 00:46:198, end 00:46:498


[]
[NM]

00:04:498 - add 4

00:25:498 (25498|3) - remove


[]
[MX]

00:11:398 (11398|2) - move 4
00:11:548 (11548|1) - move 3

00:48:448 (48448|0) - move 2
00:48:523 (48523|1) - move 3
00:48:673 (48673|2) - move 2

01:42:448 (102448|2) - move 1


[]

thx for ur request.

good luck~
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

HOST wrote:

hi AJIIII mod from queue.


column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


[]
[EZ]

00:12:898 - add 1 for cymbal sound

00:22:798 - add LN 4, end 00:23:548

00:36:898 - add 4 for cymbal sound

00:45:898 (45898|3) - start 00:46:198, end 00:46:498


[]
[NM]

00:04:498 - add 4

00:25:498 (25498|3) - remove


[]
[MX]

00:11:398 (11398|2) - move 4
00:11:548 (11548|1) - move 3

00:48:448 (48448|0) - move 2
00:48:523 (48523|1) - move 3
00:48:673 (48673|2) - move 2

01:42:448 (102448|2) - move 1


[]

thx for ur request.

good luck~
Thanks ;)
DrawdeX

Hello! :)
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|
Everything modded
[EZ]
HD -1 ; OD -1
• 00:07:498 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:08:698 - ^
• 00:09:898 - ^
• 00:11:098 - ^
• 00:14:698 - ^
• 00:15:898 - ^
• 00:17:098 - ^
• 00:18:298 - ^
• 00:19:498 - ^
• 00:20:698 - ^
• 00:36:898 (36898|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:46:498 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 00:56:098 - ^
• 01:05:698 - ^
• 01:15:298 - ^
• 01:21:298 - ^
• 01:29:698 - ^
• 01:39:298 - ^
• 01:44:098 - ^
• 01:45:298 - ^
• 01:46:498 - ^
• 01:55:198 (115198|3,115198|0) - Decrease LN to 01:57:298 - ending sound stops here

[NM]
HD -1
• 00:03:298 (3298|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:03:898 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:06:898 (6898|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:09:298 (9298|0) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:12:298 (12298|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:15:298 (15298|0) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:16:498 (16498|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:17:698 (17698|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 00:18:298 (18298|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:18:898 (18898|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:21:298 (21298|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:25:648 (25648|2) - Move to 4, trying to avoid jacks
• 00:27:298 (27298|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:35:698 (35698|1) - Move to 3 or 4, ^
• 00:56:098 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:03:898 (63898|2,64048|1) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance
• 01:17:698 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 01:18:898 (78898|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:54:898 (114898|2,114898|1) - optional Make this LN and stop at 01:55:123 - sound stops here

[HD]
HD -1
• 00:08:698 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:09:748 (9748|3) - Move to 2, trying to avoid jacks
• 00:12:298 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:13:498 - ^
• 00:14:698 - ^
• 00:15:898 - ^
• 00:17:098 - ^
• 00:19:498 - ^
• 00:46:498 - ^, for the cymbal sound
• 01:08:848 (68848|2) - Move to 4, trying to avoid jacks

[MX]
• 00:46:048 (46048|2,46086|1,46123|2,46161|1) - optional Make these stairs, for hand balance on jacks
• 01:14:398 (74398|0,74436|2,74473|0,74511|2,74548|1,74586|3,74623|1,74661|3) - optional Make these stairs, for hand balance on jacks

I don't think this diff is rankable IMO lel

Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

DrawdeX wrote:


Hello! :)
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|
Everything modded
[EZ]
HD -1 ; OD -1
• 00:07:498 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:08:698 - ^
• 00:09:898 - ^
• 00:11:098 - ^
• 00:14:698 - ^
• 00:15:898 - ^
• 00:17:098 - ^
• 00:18:298 - ^
• 00:19:498 - ^
• 00:20:698 - ^
• 00:36:898 (36898|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:46:498 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 00:56:098 - ^
• 01:05:698 - ^
• 01:15:298 - ^
• 01:21:298 - ^
• 01:29:698 - ^
• 01:39:298 - ^
• 01:44:098 - ^
• 01:45:298 - ^
• 01:46:498 - ^
• 01:55:198 (115198|3,115198|0) - Decrease LN to 01:57:298 - ending sound stops here

[NM]
HD -1
• 00:03:298 (3298|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:03:898 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:06:898 (6898|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:09:298 (9298|0) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:12:298 (12298|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:15:298 (15298|0) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:16:498 (16498|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:17:698 (17698|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 00:18:298 (18298|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:18:898 (18898|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:21:298 (21298|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:25:648 (25648|2) - Move to 4, trying to avoid jacks
• 00:27:298 (27298|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:35:698 (35698|1) - Move to 3 or 4, ^
• 00:56:098 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:03:898 (63898|2,64048|1) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance
• 01:17:698 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 01:18:898 (78898|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:54:898 (114898|2,114898|1) - optional Make this LN and stop at 01:55:123 - sound stops here

[HD]
HD -1
• 00:08:698 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:09:748 (9748|3) - Move to 2, trying to avoid jacks
• 00:12:298 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:13:498 - ^
• 00:14:698 - ^
• 00:15:898 - ^
• 00:17:098 - ^
• 00:19:498 - ^
• 00:46:498 - ^, for the cymbal sound
• 01:08:848 (68848|2) - Move to 4, trying to avoid jacks

[MX]
• 00:46:048 (46048|2,46086|1,46123|2,46161|1) - optional Make these stairs, for hand balance on jacks
• 01:14:398 (74398|0,74436|2,74473|0,74511|2,74548|1,74586|3,74623|1,74661|3) - optional Make these stairs, for hand balance on jacks

I don't think this diff is rankable IMO lel

Good luck~! :)
MX isn't rankable? Let's check it in the future ;DD


Thank you very much! ^.^
Acarin_FWYKRin
Hi! From Queue~

Key 1|2|3|4

EZ
01:03:298 add (3)
01:03:898 add (1)
01:05:098 add (3)
NM
No Change
HD
01:54:898 LN (3)
MX
01:05:398 delete

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi! From Queue~

Key 1|2|3|4

EZ
01:03:298 add (3)
01:03:898 add (1)
01:05:098 add (3)
NM
No Change
HD
01:54:898 LN (3)
MX
01:05:398 delete

Good Luck!
Thank you! ^^
MEGAtive

Hi
Mod here per requested in my modding queue

[EZ]
Mod
00:26:998 - The LN ends here
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here.

[NM]
Mod
00:45:898 - Make this into LN, ends it at 00:46:198
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here.

[HD]
Mod
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here.

[MX]
Mod
00:12:898 - Add a note. Sounds strong.
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here.

Yay, Yog-Sothoth in osu! :D
GL with your map~
schwarzvgrune
hi, from grun's mania queue

ill focus on instrument agreement and some balancing it's already a good map so not a lot i can do

NM

SPOILER
00:23:548 - add a note, you're following the melody after this, and the melody starts from here, not 2/4 from here
01:05:698 - make this into LN instead
01:25:798 - 01:25:948 - same reason as the 1st one.
01:29:923 (89923|0,90148|1,90148|3,90448|2,90748|0,90898|1,90898|3,91123|2,91348|3,91348|1,91648|0,91948|1,92098|3,92098|2) -
you're mixing the piano sound and the beat, which one are you actually following? if piano, add one here
01:30:298 - 01:31:498 -

if the beat, then change it to something like this
http://puu.sh/fJgu5/59361e94b1.jpg

01:32:398 - 01:38:698 -
this part is confusing, you're using LN for piano fast streaming sound and the short note? what are they following? the beat? short notes here are totally inconsistent and very random. i don't understand this part.
and if you're following the piano fast streaming sound,
you ought to have LN for every 4/4 until the end of the phase 01:32:398 - 01:38:698 -


this is all for now, if you think the issue above is not an issue (which in itself would not be an issue, because we have a different mapping style), then we don't agree on some basic things. (that i strictly follow agreement between notes and which instrument / beat / sound to follow on each phase)

but overall its very good<3 good luck
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi
Mod here per requested in my modding queue

[EZ]
Mod
00:26:998 - The LN ends here
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here. | I'm following for another sound, starting here 01:55:198 - . This sound is more sonorous

[NM]
Mod
00:45:898 - Make this into LN, ends it at 00:46:198
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here. | Like in EZ

[HD]
Mod
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here. | You know :D

[MX]
Mod
00:12:898 - Add a note. Sounds strong.
01:54:898 (115123|1,115123|2) - The LN starts here.

Yay, Yog-Sothoth in osu! :D Yay ^^
GL with your map~
Thank you! ^^
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

schwarzvgrune wrote:

hi, from grun's mania queue

ill focus on instrument agreement and some balancing it's already a good map so not a lot i can do

NM

SPOILER
00:23:548 - add a note, you're following the melody after this, and the melody starts from here, not 2/4 from here | ofk
01:05:698 - make this into LN instead
01:25:798 - 01:25:948 - same reason as the 1st one.
01:29:923 (89923|0,90148|1,90148|3,90448|2,90748|0,90898|1,90898|3,91123|2,91348|3,91348|1,91648|0,91948|1,92098|3,92098|2) -
you're mixing the piano sound and the beat, which one are you actually following? if piano, add one here
01:30:298 - 01:31:498 -

if the beat, then change it to something like this
http://puu.sh/fJgu5/59361e94b1.jpg

01:32:398 - 01:38:698 -
this part is confusing, you're using LN for piano fast streaming sound and the short note? what are they following? the beat? short notes here are totally inconsistent and very random. i don't understand this part.
and if you're following the piano fast streaming sound,
you ought to have LN for every 4/4 until the end of the phase 01:32:398 - 01:38:698 - | Yeah, short note following beats, LNs - piano. Hmm. I don't know what I can do there, I don't change there anything now


this is all for now, if you think the issue above is not an issue (which in itself would not be an issue, because we have a different mapping style), then we don't agree on some basic things. (that i strictly follow agreement between notes and which instrument / beat / sound to follow on each phase)

but overall its very good<3 good luck
Thank you very much :3
Harbyter
hello ,mod req via queue

[MOD]

With this mod i will focus on pattern consistency and some missing snap

Column -1-2-3-4-

[MX]

00:00:898 (898|3) - suggest to remove this LN, better intro lol otherside the sound in the bg doesn-t start from there

00:03:298 - add a note for the additional cymbal here

00:11:548 - did you forgot a note here ,

00:12:898 - add a note for the additional cymbal

00:13:048 (13048|0) - suggest to move in col 1

00:22:498 (22498|0) - suggest to turn in a simple note

00:23:398 (23398|3) - this too

00:29:548 (29548|2) - move col 4 for better pitch revelancy

00:39:073 (39073|2) - delete,no sound ,what you can hear is coming from 00:38:998 -

00:39:373 (39373|3) - this too

00:41:173 (41173|3) - missplace ,move here 00:41:248 -

00:42:373 (42373|1) - remove

00:45:298 - add a note 2 here

00:46:498 - add a note here

00:51:223 - remove one note

00:52:648 (52648|3) - remove

01:05:698 - add a note

01:16:198 - add a note here

01:28:198 - add

01:29:398 - add

01:30:373 - add 4

01:30:598 - add 1

now i will mean with those 1/6 every note that i linked should be two notes in 1/6 divisor for the piano

01:30:823 (90823|2) - in 1/6 here

01:33:073 (93073|1) - 1/6

01:33:673 (93673|1) - another piano 1/6

01:34:873 (94873|3) - 1/6

01:37:423 (97423|0,97573|1) - 1/6

01:38:173 (98173|2,98323|3) - 1/6

01:38:623 (98623|1) - 1/6

01:43:948 - add a note

01:44:473 (104473|1) - 1/6

01:44:923 - missing note

01:45:373 - snap should be 1/6 ,suggest to turn in simple notes these 01:45:298 (105298|2,105373|3) -

01:47:023 (107023|1,107173|3) - 1/6

01:49:423 (109423|2,109573|2) - other 1/6 etc. etc. lol

01:52:123 - delete one note here

01:54:148 - 1/8 till here 01:54:373 -

01:55:123 - one LN is enought :)


that's all hope i'll be helpfull
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