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Jay Chou - Qing Hua Ci

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liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月7日 at 23:19:39

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Qing Hua Ci
Tags: 我很忙 on the run 周杰伦 blue and white porcelain
BPM: 108
Filesize: 7079kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.65 stars, 372 notes)
  2. Normal (1.91 stars, 305 notes)
Download: Jay Chou - Qing Hua Ci
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天青色等烟雨，而我在等你
CLICK HERE for instrumental version. Just for fun.
Thanks for modding
1Aryan
Regraz
KaedekaShizuru
z1085684963
AIR
ZZHBOY
lsahi
Estellia-
23konG
Wing My Way
ZZHBOY
Flask
Last edited by liangv587 , edited 20 times in total.
1Aryan
15 posts
Joined March 2014
1Aryan
[HARD]
03:33:414 (5,6,1) - try to move 6, hard to read overlapping 6 and such big slider.
00:53:136 (5,6) - i suggest moving 5 or 6 one grid down or up (same reason as ^^)
[NORMAL]
00:24:525 (4,1,2) - bad placing, move them(suggest moving 1 a little up and a lot to the left so it will look like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2459897 )
I suggest making the distance snap 1,1x or 1,0 so It will be more comfortable to read but not easier.
00:43:136 (2,3) - this overlapping is really bad, move notes from themselves
00:48:414 (3,1,2,3) - I felt odd playing this, to experienced players its piece of cake but to a normal skill lvl player its not because it will teach them taking a wrong view on distance between notes and they do not learn anything. 1) Place it with distance snapper OR(harder version 4 players) 2) do clear ''JUMP" between 3 and 1,2,3 (snap 1,2,3) .
Remember not to do REAL jump but just a little one, maybe little bigger than now. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2459921
Hope it will help, would appreciate modding my map if possible :)
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

1Aryan wrote:

[HARD]
03:33:414 (5,6,1) - try to move 6, hard to read overlapping 6 and such big slider.
00:53:136 (5,6) - i suggest moving 5 or 6 one grid down or up (same reason as ^^)don't mind the stacks while stack leniency is more than 0. they will be separated a little in play mode
[NORMAL]
00:24:525 (4,1,2) - bad placing, move them(suggest moving 1 a little up and a lot to the left so it will look like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2459897 )
I suggest making the distance snap 1,1x or 1,0 so It will be more comfortable to read but not easier.
00:43:136 (2,3) - this overlapping is really bad, move notes from themselves
00:48:414 (3,1,2,3) - I felt odd playing this, to experienced players its piece of cake but to a normal skill lvl player its not because it will teach them taking a wrong view on distance between notes and they do not learn anything. 1) Place it with distance snapper OR(harder version 4 players) 2) do clear ''JUMP" between 3 and 1,2,3 (snap 1,2,3) .
Remember not to do REAL jump but just a little one, maybe little bigger than now. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2459921
Hope it will help, would appreciate modding my map if possible :)
thank you for your attention, i will do the normal by your suggestions.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
I'm here to add a sp xD

[Hard]

00:29:247 (1,2) - 这个真没必要3/8吧。。。 还有 01:58:136 (1,2,3) -

00:33:692 (1,2) - 建议有一个小跳，而不是 00:33:970 (2,3) -

01:09:247 (1,2) - 同上

00:52:581 (4) - 3/4听着怪怪的

01:02:303 (4,1,2) - 间距统一一下吧

01:22:581 (1,3) - blanket

加油！
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
support!!!
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
乃又来拯救华语乐坛了
M4M

[General]
current position at 00:58:136(proposal noly)and add a KIAI time here to 01:31:470
second KIAI time begin from 02:27:025 to 03:00:359
don't be too concerned the AImod's notification
英文好累Orz
前奏也是可以map的哦
副歌的音效我个人不太喜欢（口味问题
三段副歌音效音量都-5%

[Hard]
难度名可以脑洞一下 比如 Porcelain
感觉没必要那么多3/4slider 对DT不友好
00:29:247 (1,2,3) - 同热瓜子 摆三个单点circle就好了觉得 01:58:136 (1,2,3)同
01:03:970 (5,6,7) - 一条直线真的不好看
02:57:859 (5) - CTRL+G
03:21:747 (5,6,7,1) - 这个梗与03:08:136 (4,5,6,7,1)重复 无新意 建议换一种摆法 毕竟是同一段副歌里
别的热瓜子都说过了
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Regraz wrote:

I'm here to add a sp xD

[Hard]

00:29:247 (1,2) - 这个真没必要3/8吧。。。 还有 01:58:136 (1,2,3) -

00:33:692 (1,2) - 建议有一个小跳，而不是 00:33:970 (2,3) -

01:09:247 (1,2) - 同上

00:52:581 (4) - 3/4听着怪怪的

01:02:303 (4,1,2) - 间距统一一下吧

01:22:581 (1,3) - blanket ok

加油！
谢摸~

Crystal wrote:

support!!!
感谢支持 :o

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

乃又来拯救华语乐坛了
M4M

[General]
current position at 00:58:136(proposal noly)and add a KIAI time here to 01:31:470
second KIAI time begin from 02:27:025 to 03:00:359
don't be too concerned the AImod's notification那样就太泛滥了
英文好累Orz
前奏也是可以map的哦
副歌的音效我个人不太喜欢（口味问题
三段副歌音效音量都-5% kiai减了

[Hard]
难度名可以脑洞一下 比如 Porcelain 我可是中立善良
感觉没必要那么多3/4slider 对DT不友好 没问题的吧，一般人谁去dt
00:29:247 (1,2,3) - 同热瓜子 摆三个单点circle就好了觉得 01:58:136 (1,2,3)同
01:03:970 (5,6,7) - 一条直线真的不好看
02:57:859 (5) - CTRL+G
03:21:747 (5,6,7,1) - 这个梗与03:08:136 (4,5,6,7,1)重复 无新意 建议换一种摆法 毕竟是同一段副歌里
别的热瓜子都说过了
谢摸~
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
啊
先给kd后给mod干不干
马上来，一会edit掉

唉 不干了
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
[Hard]
00:33:970 (2) - ctrl+g
01:02:303 (4) - 和后面123的间距保持一样
01:27:859 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:45:358 (2) - 这个滑条其实反过来凹陷感觉更符合音乐
02:02:025 (4) - blanket
02:05:359 (2) - 间距没看懂，建议x260y100
02:30:081 (2) - 这么响一定是1/8，要相信自己
02:49:803 (3,7) - 请往上挪一点
03:03:692 (4) - 这里开始的clap可以换一个更震撼人心的

good luck :)
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
wwwwwwwwwwww

[Normal]
  1. 00:41:470 (3,2) - 2红点后面可以打个弯，像3那样对称又美观，类似的这里02:12:025 (2) -
  2. 01:01:192 (2,3,1,2,3) - 可以微调下，原来的并不太5
    SPOILER
  3. 01:13:414 (5,1) - 合一个条，这样，你就得到一个平行的香蕉
  4. 01:28:970 (5) - 去掉折返换长条呗
  5. 01:56:470 (2) - 可以顺便远程围一下3
    SPOILER
  6. 02:01:470 (3,4) - 这两根白线连一个长条，人声和00:32:581 - 00:50:359 - 这些位置不太一样，连起来的话更有手感
  7. 后略
[Hard]
  1. 00:40:636 (2) - del，和这部分类似位置比的话会觉得多个音，类似的02:09:525 (2) -
  2. 00:52:581 (4) - 1/2够用了
  3. 01:07:303 (2,3,4,5) - 23,54分别调次序，类似的01:25:081 (2,3,4,5) - ，01:28:136 (3,4) - 02:36:192 (2,3,4,5) -
  4. 02:07:581 (1) - 不太美观
  5. 02:13:692 (1,3) - 柔和些
  6. 02:45:359 (3) - 不太顺
  7. 03:07:025 (1,2) - 调位置
  8. 03:26:747 (7) - 这句歌词不错，可以有更好的表达。。。
  9. 03:34:247 (1) - 我跟你书，棒！加加加
你赔我的2kd
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

z1085684963 wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:970 (2) - ctrl+g
01:02:303 (4) - 和后面123的间距保持一样
01:27:859 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:45:358 (2) - 这个滑条其实反过来凹陷感觉更符合音乐 ok
02:02:025 (4) - blanket
02:05:359 (2) - 间距没看懂，建议x260y100
02:30:081 (2) - 这么响一定是1/8，要相信自己这里是1/4
02:49:803 (3,7) - 请往上挪一点
03:03:692 (4) - 这里开始的clap可以换一个更震撼人心的

good luck :)
其他没改，谢摸

AIR wrote:

wwwwwwwwwwww

[Normal]
  1. 00:41:470 (3,2) - 2红点后面可以打个弯，像3那样对称又美观，类似的这里02:12:025 (2) - ok
  2. 01:01:192 (2,3,1,2,3) - 可以微调下，原来的并不太5调了之后会擦边还是不动了
    SPOILER
  3. 01:13:414 (5,1) - 合一个条，这样，你就得到一个平行的香蕉没改
  4. 01:28:970 (5) - 去掉折返换长条呗没改
  5. 01:56:470 (2) - 可以顺便远程围一下3这样flow破坏了
    SPOILER
  6. 02:01:470 (3,4) - 这两根白线连一个长条，人声和00:32:581 - 00:50:359 - 这些位置不太一样，连起来的话更有手感ok
  7. 后略
[Hard]
  1. 00:40:636 (2) - del，和这部分类似位置比的话会觉得多个音，类似的02:09:525 (2) - 仔细想了下，改和不改都可以，但是其他地方节奏都紧密，这里就不放松了
  2. 00:52:581 (4) - 1/2够用了没改
  3. 01:07:303 (2,3,4,5) - 23,54分别调次序，类似的01:25:081 (2,3,4,5) - ，01:28:136 (3,4) - 02:36:192 (2,3,4,5) - ok
  4. 02:07:581 (1) - 不太美观ok
  5. 02:13:692 (1,3) - 柔和些ok
  6. 02:45:359 (3) - 不太顺ok
  7. 03:07:025 (1,2) - 调位置
  8. 03:26:747 (7) - 这句歌词不错，可以有更好的表达。。。
  9. 03:34:247 (1) - 我跟你书，棒！加加加
你赔我的2kd
人哥的锅。谢mod

Kagamine Ren wrote:

啊
先给kd后给mod干不干
马上来，一会edit掉

唉 不干了
一圈打包，赔我的2kd
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
irc
2015-03-05 13:22 liangv587: 来个摸怎样、
2015-03-05 13:22 ZZHBOY: shatu a 
2015-03-05 13:22 ZZHBOY: wo yihui sshanke
2015-03-05 13:23 liangv587: 青花瓷
2015-03-05 13:23 liangv587: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/578495 Jay Chou - Qing Hua Ci [Hard]]
2015-03-05 13:23 liangv587: 2 diff
2015-03-05 13:23 liangv587: 安全刷分图
2015-03-05 13:24 ZZHBOY: 再找一个长一点的mod然后弄到12sp
2015-03-05 13:25 liangv587: 可以
2015-03-05 13:25 ZZHBOY: 你加sb了?
2015-03-05 13:26 liangv587: 没
2015-03-05 13:26 liangv587: 加了sb音效
2015-03-05 13:26 liangv587: 打开osu文件可以看到
2015-03-05 13:29 liangv587: 刚有人射了个星
2015-03-05 13:29 liangv587: 瞬间12sp了
2015-03-05 13:29 ZZHBOY: f4里那个瞎眼警告去掉
2015-03-05 13:29 ZZHBOY: 你这才55mod啊
2015-03-05 13:29 ZZHBOY: 5mod
2015-03-05 13:29 ZZHBOY: 还都是水摸
2015-03-05 13:29 liangv587: air那个我改了些啊
2015-03-05 13:30 liangv587: 第三个勾上吗
2015-03-05 13:30 liangv587: 妈蛋好一点的modder都上狗了
2015-03-05 13:31 ZZHBOY: 第三个去掉
2015-03-05 13:32 liangv587: 本来就没勾
2015-03-05 13:32 ZZHBOY: 那我这里怎么显示勾了
2015-03-05 13:33 ZZHBOY: 似乎主歌部分有点滥用3/4滑条 还有一些1/8间隔的我有点不喜欢
2015-03-05 13:33 liangv587: 那怎么
2015-03-05 13:33 liangv587: 不改不给泡？
2015-03-05 13:33 ZZHBOY: 不是不改不给泡
2015-03-05 13:34 ZZHBOY: 是不改可能会被dq
2015-03-05 13:34 ZZHBOY: 我给你说说原因
2015-03-05 13:34 liangv587: 唔好像是
2015-03-05 13:34 ZZHBOY: 你看你副歌部分基本都是清爽地1/2节奏
2015-03-05 13:34 ZZHBOY: 主歌部分反而很把节奏弄乱了造成diff内的unto不统一
2015-03-05 13:35 ZZHBOY: unto是键盘吃食打出来的
2015-03-05 13:35 liangv587: unto是什么
2015-03-05 13:35 ZZHBOY: 手误打错了啊
2015-03-05 13:35 ZZHBOY: 另外关于最后一个滑条
2015-03-05 13:36 liangv587: 已经不适合现在的生存环境了吗
2015-03-05 13:36 ZZHBOY: 啥不适合?
2015-03-05 13:36 liangv587: 最后那个话题
2015-03-05 13:36 ZZHBOY: 不是
2015-03-05 13:36 ZZHBOY: 我的意思是
2015-03-05 13:37 ZZHBOY: 头尾移开点就安全了
2015-03-05 13:37 liangv587: 好办
2015-03-05 13:37 ZZHBOY: 你看我的伞 整个滑条没有任何overlap
2015-03-05 13:38 liangv587: 前面1/8 3/4那些也好办
2015-03-05 13:38 ZZHBOY: 那你改了 我就没事了
2015-03-05 13:38 ZZHBOY: 另外我建议再找一个看着长的mod
2015-03-05 13:38 liangv587: 恩，我刚找了奥土木
2015-03-05 13:39 liangv587: 不知道什么时候会来
2015-03-05 13:39 ZZHBOY: 那是水
2015-03-05 13:39 ZZHBOY: 没听过
2015-03-05 13:39 liangv587: 秋天的英文
2015-03-05 13:40 ZZHBOY: 总之我要说的就三点 除了上面两点还有就是sb音效
2015-03-05 13:40 liangv587: autumn
2015-03-05 13:40 ZZHBOY: 我刚刚看他在线 现在好像瞎了
2015-03-05 13:40 ZZHBOY: 下了
2015-03-05 13:40 ZZHBOY: 为啥你要用sb音效
2015-03-05 13:41 liangv587: 有的地方有声音有点地方没感觉不爽
2015-03-05 13:41 ZZHBOY: 唔 反正我认为能被dq的就这三点
2015-03-05 13:41 ZZHBOY: 前两点你既然愿意改那你先改着 sb音效我我一会去问问人
2015-03-05 13:42 liangv587: 恩
2015-03-05 13:42 ZZHBOY: 然后你愿意再找个mod吗
2015-03-05 13:44 ZZHBOY: 这样吧 找两个
2015-03-05 13:44 ZZHBOY: 改完了喊我
2015-03-05 13:44 liangv587: 恩

still need some work, find a couple of mods, fix them then call me back. Good luck!
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
挺好的了。
[Normal]
01:04:247 (5,1) – Blanket a little off.

01:24:247 (3,1) - ^

01:25:359 (3) – There’s a background sound in the head, considering adding a hitsound?

01:29:803 (1) – Add whistle on the tail

02:00:081 (5,1) – An obvious blanket issue.

03:26:470 (5,1) – Blanket a little off

[Hard]
01:03:692 (4,5,6,7,1) – Personally the flow here seems not that smooth, especially the right angles.

02:01:470 (3,4) – The DS is a little low. Consider raising it to 1.2x

02:47:859 (2) – Adjusting 2’s direction: http://puu.sh/goo5u/55b1a520d3.jpg

03:34:247 (1) – pro

Nice, good luck!
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Regraz wrote:

挺好的了。
[Normal]
01:04:247 (5,1) – Blanket a little off.ok

01:24:247 (3,1) - ^ok

01:25:359 (3) – There’s a background sound in the head, considering adding a hitsound?加了drum sampleset，同hard

01:29:803 (1) – Add whistle on the tail加了nf

02:00:081 (5,1) – An obvious blanket issue.ok

03:26:470 (5,1) – Blanket a little off ok

[Hard]
01:03:692 (4,5,6,7,1) – Personally the flow here seems not that smooth, especially the right angles. 向上走了

02:01:470 (3,4) – The DS is a little low. Consider raising it to 1.2x 换了个方向

02:47:859 (2) – Adjusting 2’s direction: http://puu.sh/goo5u/55b1a520d3.jpg 影响不大，正多边形
03:34:247 (1) – pro :D

Nice, good luck!
thanks for modding
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
这个纸张波，点就点呗。

[General]
打的时候感觉会有些不好抓acc，也许是歌曲本身的问题？

[Hard]
00:43:970 (4,5) -
like this？

01:16:470 (3) - 弯曲程度在大一点，搞得和①顺滑一点试试

02:02:025 (4) - ->192 260

[other words]
叁捌肆拯救华语乐坛计划火热进行中
呐呐呐要不要做成AR6~6.5啊DTHR方便点，对就跟那纸张波的小屁股一样
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

lsahi wrote:

这个纸张波，点就点呗。喂喂，别当真了

[General]
打的时候感觉会有些不好抓acc，也许是歌曲本身的问题？我能分分钟ss呢

[Hard]
00:43:970 (4,5) -
like this？这样4的位置变丑了

01:16:470 (3) - 弯曲程度在大一点，搞得和①顺滑一点试试ok

02:02:025 (4) - ->192 260前后位置平衡了一下

[other words]
叁捌肆拯救华语乐坛计划火热进行中really？
呐呐呐要不要做成AR6~6.5啊DTHR方便点，对就跟那纸张波的小屁股一样dt毁歌，hr毁图，难道还要我助纣为虐
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587
不要管绿线啦，不然就毁了
19:11 liangv587: sorry to interrupt you, but can i ask a question
19:11 Desperate-kun: sure
19:11 *liangv587 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/578495 Jay Chou - Qing Hua Ci [Hard]]
19:11 liangv587: will the greenlines be the reason for disqualify
19:12 liangv587: 00:22:859 -
19:12 Desperate-kun: what's wrong with them?
19:12 liangv587: or are they unless
19:12 Desperate-kun: they work very well with the song
19:12 Desperate-kun: they are good
19:14 liangv587: one bn said unnecessary
19:14 Desperate-kun: no i like it ^^
19:15 Desperate-kun: you can keep it if you want
19:15 liangv587: 01:42:789 -
19:15 liangv587: how about this part
19:15 Desperate-kun: fine
19:16 liangv587: ok, i will debate with him
19:16 Desperate-kun: 03:34:247 (1) - :*
19:16 liangv587: thank you
19:16 Desperate-kun: hehe okay
19:16 Desperate-kun: np
19:17 liangv587: Seven angle flower
19:17 Desperate-kun: yeah it's nice
19:18 liangv587: I'm glad you like
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
LOL English mod time :3

[Normal]
00:23:414 (2,3) - Blanket can be better
00:30:636 (3,4,5,1) - suggest polygon shape
00:36:470 (2,3) - Blanket can be better
00:37:859 (1,2) - ^
00:49:525 (2,3) - ^
00:59:803 (5,1) - ^
01:04:247 (5,1) - ^
01:04:803 (1,2,3) - Having a more circular flow would be better
01:20:914 (3,4,5,1) - ^
01:23:970 (2,3) - Blanket can be better

You can copy over the copied parts after you fixed them :P

03:06:192 (3,1) - Blanket can be better
03:07:581 (3,4,5) - Having a more circular flow would be better
03:13:692 (1,2) - Blanket can be better
03:17:303 (3,4,1,2,3) - Can go for a polygon shape
03:20:359 (1,2) - Blanket can be better
03:26:747 (1,2) - ^
03:28:414 (4,1) - ^
03:29:803 (3,4) - ^
03:30:914 (5,1) - ^

Nice Normal! Very basic structures and overall flowy and looks very smooth to play~

[Hard]
00:33:692 (1,2) - Blanket can be better
00:35:081 (4,1) - ^
00:37:581 (4,5) - ^
00:37:581 (4,5,1) - Why not try having 1 blanket 4 so 5 can lead to 1 better?
00:58:414 (2,3) - Blanket can be better
01:00:359 (1,2) - ^
01:01:747 (3,4) - Notes seem too close to each other, shift 4 away?
01:08:414 (5,6,1) - You can make the degree of blanket the same, shift 5 away from 6 more so the blanket distance is similar
01:09:247 (1,4) - Slider bodies can blanket better
01:21:470 (4,5,6,7) - Can use a polygon shape
01:28:692 (4,5) - Blanket maybe?
01:53:136 (4,2) - Blanket can be better
02:02:581 (1,2) - ^
02:02:859 (2,4) - ^
02:11:470 (1,3) - ^
02:18:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can try for a pentagon (polygon) here
02:37:581 (5,1) - Blanket can be better
02:38:136 (1,3) - Why not stack?
02:40:914 (3,4,5,6) - Blanket can be better
02:50:636 (5,1,3) - ^
03:06:747 (4,3) - ^
03:08:414 (5,1) - ^
03:16:747 (4,5,6) - ^
03:18:970 (3,3) - ^
03:31:470 (1,3,4) - ^

Nice slider here: 03:34:247 (1) - ~ I basically could only find blanket related flaws, its perfect and good for rank!

Nice mapset overall~ I liked it :3
Konge
238 posts
Joined November 2012
Konge
水
乃又来拯救华语乐坛了
[General]
  1. Hard才2.6星,OD7有点高..(AR=OD orz)
  2. Normal好像也有点高..总之建议减0.5到1
  3. 完全找不到槽点嘛,向宝烟同志学习
  4. 美丽
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:247 (1,2,3) - 原地单点就行了嘛,简单粗暴
  2. 00:37:025 (3,4) - 合成一个滑条
  3. 00:40:636 (2) - 删掉
  4. 00:52:025 (3,4,5) - 感觉这overlap有点不好看
  5. 00:53:414 (6) - Finish不应该在这吧,我的建议是放到后面转盘的尾巴上(红线Finish 不懂啊)
  6. 02:22:303 (6,1) - ^
  7. 02:57:859 (5,1) - ^
  8. 在00:56:470 - 和00:57:025 - 加两个Note(你不是说有声音的地方空着不爽吗orz)
  9. 01:50:359 - ^
  10. 02:25:359 - 02:25:914 - ^
  11. 01:47:303 (1) - finish
  12. kiai到03:33:692 - 结束
  13. 03:34:247 (1) - 加一次折返
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:414 (4,1) - 跟Hard一样,Finish的位置(我果然不懂神麻婆的想法orz)
  2. 02:22:303 (4,1) - ^
  3. 02:57:859 (2,1) - ^
  4. kiai同Hard
  5. 转盘延长到03:49:247 -
美丽,求rank
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587
Estellia- LOL English mod time :3

Estellia- wrote:

LOL English mod time :3

[Normal]
00:23:414 (2,3) - Blanket can be betterok
00:30:636 (3,4,5,1) - suggest polygon shapeyes, they are, but not regular polygon
00:36:470 (2,3) - Blanket can be betterok
00:37:859 (1,2) - ^ok
00:49:525 (2,3) - ^ok
00:59:803 (5,1) - ^ok
01:04:247 (5,1) - ^ok
01:04:803 (1,2,3) - Having a more circular flow would be bettermore circular
01:20:914 (3,4,5,1) - ^symmetric
01:23:970 (2,3) - Blanket can be betternot blanket

You can copy over the copied parts after you fixed them :P

03:06:192 (3,1) - Blanket can be betterok
03:07:581 (3,4,5) - Having a more circular flow would be betterno need
03:13:692 (1,2) - Blanket can be betterok
03:17:303 (3,4,1,2,3) - Can go for a polygon shapeok
03:20:359 (1,2) - Blanket can be betterok
03:26:747 (1,2) - ^ok
03:28:414 (4,1) - ^ok
03:29:803 (3,4) - ^ok
03:30:914 (5,1) - ^ok

Nice Normal! Very basic structures and overall flowy and looks very smooth to play~

[Hard]
00:33:692 (1,2) - Blanket can be betterok
00:35:081 (4,1) - ^ok
00:37:581 (4,5) - ^ok
00:37:581 (4,5,1) - Why not try having 1 blanket 4 so 5 can lead to 1 better?there's no space
00:58:414 (2,3) - Blanket can be betterok
01:00:359 (1,2) - ^ok
01:01:747 (3,4) - Notes seem too close to each other, shift 4 away?no need
01:08:414 (5,6,1) - You can make the degree of blanket the same, shift 5 away from 6 more so the blanket distance is similarno
01:09:247 (1,4) - Slider bodies can blanket betterok
01:21:470 (4,5,6,7) - Can use a polygon shapeno
01:28:692 (4,5) - Blanket maybe?no
01:53:136 (4,2) - Blanket can be betterok
02:02:581 (1,2) - ^ok
02:02:859 (2,4) - ^ok
02:11:470 (1,3) - ^ok
02:18:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can try for a pentagon (polygon) hereno
02:37:581 (5,1) - Blanket can be better
02:38:136 (1,3) - Why not stack?diffrent from before
02:40:914 (3,4,5,6) - Blanket can be betterok
02:50:636 (5,1,3) - ^ok
03:06:747 (4,3) - ^ok
03:08:414 (5,1) - ^ok
03:16:747 (4,5,6) - ^ok
03:18:970 (3,3) - ^ok
03:31:470 (1,3,4) - ^ok

Nice slider here: 03:34:247 (1) - ~ I basically could only find blanket related flaws, its perfect and good for rank! :D

Nice mapset overall~ I liked it :3
thanks for modding

23konG 乃又来拯救华语乐坛了

23konG wrote:

水
乃又来拯救华语乐坛了
[General]
  1. Hard才2.6星,OD7有点高..(AR=OD orz)
  2. Normal好像也有点高..总之建议减0.5到1set不动，这个od真心不难
  3. 完全找不到槽点嘛,向宝烟同志学习宝烟的哲学
  4. 美丽
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:247 (1,2,3) - 原地单点就行了嘛,简单粗暴
  2. 00:37:025 (3,4) - 合成一个滑条
  3. 00:40:636 (2) - 删掉这里歌词是“釉色渲染嗯”
  4. 00:52:025 (3,4,5) - 感觉这overlap有点不好看
  5. 00:53:414 (6) - Finish不应该在这吧,我的建议是放到后面转盘的尾巴上(红线Finish 不懂啊)
  6. 02:22:303 (6,1) - ^
  7. 02:57:859 (5,1) - ^
  8. 在00:56:470 - 和00:57:025 - 加两个Note(你不是说有声音的地方空着不爽吗orz)
  9. 01:50:359 - ^
  10. 02:25:359 - 02:25:914 - ^
  11. 01:47:303 (1) - finish这个可以有
  12. kiai到03:33:692 - 结束凑成8的倍数比较好
  13. 03:34:247 (1) - 加一次折返
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:414 (4,1) - 跟Hard一样,Finish的位置(我果然不懂神麻婆的想法orz)
  2. 02:22:303 (4,1) - ^
  3. 02:57:859 (2,1) - ^
  4. kiai同Hard
  5. 转盘延长到03:49:247 - 这样简直反人类好吗
美丽,求rank
嚯嚯谢摸
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