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nomico - Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
richardfeder
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月3日 at 21:10:46

Artist: nomico
Title: Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi
Source: 星空へ架かる橋
Tags: feng simple_star eroge
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5552kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.15 - 7Key (2.44 stars, 698 notes)
  2. Lv.28 - 7Key (4.17 stars, 1301 notes)
  3. S.Star's Lv.21 - 7Key (3.52 stars, 1200 notes)
  4. S.Star's Lv.7 - 7Key (1.64 stars, 412 notes)
Download: nomico - Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Koumoto madoka <3
Lv.15 and Lv.28 by me
Lv.7 and Lv.21 by Simple_Star
坑爹变速过街喊打
Spy
shionelove
Hi~from M4M
here's my mod
column 1234567

mod
[General]
00:26:398 (26398|2) - to 00:34:868 (34868|2) - delete Kiai Time?
add eroge tag
change Title "Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi"like this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/157296
change diff name Normal Hard S.Star's Hard Insane.
Hard diff like Normal is better than Normal diff like Hard

[Normal]
Normal?I fell it's Hard(I know diff in DJMAX or o2jam is based on absolute standard)
00:07:365 (7365|5) - move to 00:07:515 (7515|5) -
00:28:339 (28339|3,28515|3) - change LN start00:28:339 (28339|3) -
01:34:603 (94603|6) - mistake?
01:39:456 (99456|1) - add like 332 rhythm
02:02:986 (122986|0,123045|1,123103|3,123162|4,123221|5,123280|6) - delete

[Insane]
In BPM 100 area,IMO(I don't want to break your style),using 1/6,1/8...is not recommended.
The reason is this area is silent area and easy area.
00:28:339 (28339|2,28515|2) - same as Normal
00:40:515 (40515|1,40692|5) - change like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741532
There're some same points
00:45:986 (45986|3) - delete
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741537 what kind of sounds are there...
02:02:986 (122986|0,123045|1,123103|3,123162|4,123221|5,123280|6) - delete
Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
richardfeder

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from M4M
here's my mod
column 1234567

mod
[General]
00:26:398 (26398|2) - to 00:34:868 (34868|2) - delete Kiai Time?remain I think this kiai is fine with the song
add eroge tagsure \:D/
change Title "Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi"like this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/157296fixed
change diff name Normal Hard S.Star's Hard Insane.
Hard diff like Normal is better than Normal diff like Hardlol for the time being no

[Normal]
Normal?I fell it's Hard(I know diff in DJMAX or o2jam is based on absolute standard)yes, maybe it's time to move forward and establish a higher absolute standard in osu!mania? /me run
00:07:365 (7365|5) - move to 00:07:515 (7515|5) - fixed!
00:28:339 (28339|3,28515|3) - change LN start00:28:339 (28339|3) - x too hard and not very handy. I would like to use normal note instead
01:34:603 (94603|6) - mistake?yes! fixed thanks
01:39:456 (99456|1) - add like 332 rhythmx unnecessary imo
02:02:986 (122986|0,123045|1,123103|3,123162|4,123221|5,123280|6) - delete sure

[Insane]
In BPM 100 area,IMO(I don't want to break your style),using 1/6,1/8...is not recommended.
The reason is this area is silent area and easy area.Yes you are right but I think intro part is already very empty and clear to read now ww
00:28:339 (28339|2,28515|2) - same as Normalx
00:40:515 (40515|1,40692|5) - change like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741532
There're some same pointssorry my style >,<
00:45:986 (45986|3) - delete 00:45:456 (45456|1,45633|3,45809|5,45986|3) - they are the bell like sound
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741537 what kind of sounds are there...same as above
02:02:986 (122986|0,123045|1,123103|3,123162|4,123221|5,123280|6) - deleteremain
Good luck~ :)
Many thanks hutunohito san!

Edit: change to Lv system instead lol
Spy
Hello,mod by request :)

[General]
沒問題

[S.Star's Lv.7]
話說就你這diff開頭沒做,會不會有點特別之類的,算了,隨便你吧
00:27:456 (27456|4,28868|5,30280|6) - 補強一下吧,多加一個Note
00:33:103 (33103|4) - ↑
02:02:221 (122221|2,122221|0) - 我覺得弄成normal notes然後拍個2下就好了。。

[Lv.15]
00:16:815 (16815|5) - 這個音是不是長音阿 ?
00:20:715 (20715|2) - 這個應該是沒音吧,應該是00:20:415 (20415|5)拉長到00:21:015
01:11:927 (71927|5,72103|4,72280|4,72456|3,72633|3,72809|2,72986|2,73162|1,73339|1,73515|0,73692|2,73868|1) - 你不覺得這種Pattern很詩嗎 ?

[S.Star's Lv.21]
00:03:515 (3515|2,3615|0) - 肯定是我耳包了 ?
02:02:986 - 這裡漏一個
02:03:045 - 這裡應該也漏了

[Lv.28]
摸不出東西真是對不起了

Just these,hope these are helpful,and give a star here :)
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request :)

[General]
沒問題

[Lv.15]
00:16:815 (16815|5) - 這個音是不是長音阿 ?yes 低等级不想拉太长 尤其减速段
00:20:715 (20715|2) - 這個應該是沒音吧,應該是00:20:415 (20415|5)拉長到00:21:015有的!
01:11:927 (71927|5,72103|4,72280|4,72456|3,72633|3,72809|2,72986|2,73162|1,73339|1,73515|0,73692|2,73868|1) - 你不覺得這種Pattern很詩嗎 ?hhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Lv.28]
摸不出東西真是對不起了不够诗啊 要不要试着做7k啊hhhhh

Just these,hope these are helpful,and give a star here :)
感谢~~~~
Akasha-

nomico - Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi [Osu!Mania Mod]

Mod Requested by richardfeder


[BPMs]
SPOILER
  • First, It seems the first BPM (100) has wrong offset!
    This is my suggestion:
  1. BPM: 100 (YUP)
    Offset: -1206

    After that, I think there is a multi-BPMs (I not really sure about this but seem it okay)

  2. BPM1: 98
    Offset: 22394

  3. BPM2: 93
    Offset: 24006

  4. BPM3: 90
    Offset: 24651

[Generals]
SPOILER
  1. BPM: Checked
  2. Offset: Checked
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. Preview Time: Okay
    I Love this song ♥

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[S.Star's Lv.7]
  • SPOILER
    1. 00:33:986 (33986|2,33986|5) - how about move to 5 and 7 column?
    2. 01:07:162 - add a note at 4?
    3. 01:59:397 - strong beat, add at lease 1 or 2 notes
    4. 02:01:868 (121868|6) - Move this to 6 and add a note at 7 at 02:02:045 -
      Great!
    [Lv.15]
    • SPOILER
      1. 00:28:515 (28515|3) - This LN should begin at 00:28:339 -
      2. 01:06:897 (66897|5,66897|1) - move to 01:06:868 - (1/3 beat)
      3. 01:15:809 - add a note at 4
      4. 01:36:986 (96986|4) - move to 4
      5. 01:42:633 (102633|6) - move to 5
        Nice patterns~ I liked
      [S.Star's Lv.21]
      • SPOILER
        1. 00:26:398 - suggest add 1 more note
        2. 01:17:221 - ^
          Great ♥
        [Lv.28]
        • SPOILER
          1. 00:28:515 - this LN should begin at 00:28:339 -
          2. 00:54:986 (54986|3) - move to 3?
          3. 01:06:897 (66897|5,66897|1) - should move to 01:06:868 - (1/3 beat)
          4. 01:17:045 - add 2 notes in here?
          5. 01:59:397 - add 2 more note
          6. 02:03:280 (123280|2) - add a note in 3?
            Nice~
          [Comment]
          I can't mod 00:00:990 - 00:26:398 - because of BPMs
          I will check it late~
          Nice map, good job richardfeder and Simple_Star >w<
          Go rank please, I very like this map and the song~
          Will shoot star~

EDITED: Stacked note in S.Star's Lv.21
01:17:045 (77045|4) -
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[BPMs]
SPOILER
  • First, It seems the first BPM (100) has wrong offset!
    This is my suggestion:
  1. BPM: 100 (YUP)
    Offset: -1206

    After that, I think there is a multi-BPMs (I not really sure about this but seem it okay)

  2. BPM1: 98
    Offset: 22394

  3. BPM2: 93
    Offset: 24006

  4. BPM3: 90
    Offset: 24651
remain for now. the current bpm looks pretty good for me actually and we also have a few ranked version which are using the bpm I am using now >,<
[Generals]
SPOILER
  1. BPM: Checked
  2. Offset: Checked
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. Preview Time: Okay
    I Love this song ♥me too ♥

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[Lv.15]
  • SPOILER
    1. 00:28:515 (28515|3) - This LN should begin at 00:28:339 - nope the violin actually don't preform like that
    2. 01:06:897 (66897|5,66897|1) - move to 01:06:868 - (1/3 beat)x 1/4
    3. 01:15:809 - add a note at 4sure
    4. 01:36:986 (96986|4) - move to 4OK
    5. 01:42:633 (102633|6) - move to 5 OK
      Nice patterns~ I liked lol xD
    [Lv.28]
    • SPOILER
      1. 00:28:515 - this LN should begin at 00:28:339 -x ^
      2. 00:54:986 (54986|3) - move to 3?no
      3. 01:06:897 (66897|5,66897|1) - should move to 01:06:868 - (1/3 beat)x ^
      4. 01:17:045 - add 2 notes in here?x no ;w; it's in sv change lol
      5. 01:59:397 - add 2 more notex too much lol
      6. 02:03:280 (123280|2) - add a note in 3?x unnecessary imo
        Nice~
      [Comment]
      I can't mod 00:00:990 - 00:26:398 - because of BPMs
      I will check it late~
      Nice map, good job richardfeder and Simple_Star >w<
      Go rank please, I very like this map and the song~
      Will shoot star~
Thank you for your star!
Thank you for your mod KK-san!
Arzenvald
nah, you already got many useful mod before me.. =w=

from team mod queue~
i hope i able to point out some error, without changing the 'fun factor' inside your beatmap.. :">


[Lv.28]
hmm..
01:15:456 (75456|5,75456|1) - make a longnote instead, so it's following both drum and violin (?)
01:17:927 (77927|4) - did you hear something here? i can't hear a clear sound there... remove?
01:27:986 (87986|5,88162|1) - better to following pitch (i kinda confused on that part lol), so ctrl + h
01:45:809 (105809|5,105809|6,106162|6,106339|3,106515|0,106515|1) - http://puu.sh/9QMII.jpg

[S.Star lv.21]
feels like lv.22? i mean, a bit harder.. =w= or it just me...

00:34:868 (34868|1) - crash? i thought you put 4 notes at once.. hmm.. add 1 note.. :3
00:49:162 (49162|0) - remove? i tot it's not that loud on that part..
01:13:956 (73956|2) - move it to 01:13:868 instead.. :I
01:22:515 (82515|2,82868|3) - crash, right? add 1 more notes..? other parts too, some crash part with only 3 notes... hmm.. or it just me?
check aimod lol, something stacked at 01:17:045 (77045|4,77045|4,77045|2) -

[S.Star Lv.7]
01:21:103 (81103|1) - add on 7?
01:50:045 (110045|5,110221|4,110397|1,110574|2,110750|3) - better to follow pitch relevancy

[lv.15]
00:53:839 add on 3
00:53:927 (53927|2,54015|4,54103|2,54192|4) - ctrl+h

ok, i found it has inconsistent ending each diff.. idk, perhaps you want to make them stop at same point, like on lv.7 with longnote at the ending.. is that ok at all? o_o?

ok, that's it, i hope you found it helpful.. :D good luck
Topic Starter
richardfeder

ajeemaniz wrote:

nah, you already got many useful mod before me.. =w=

from team mod queue~
i hope i able to point out some error, without changing the 'fun factor' inside your beatmap.. :">thank you :3


[Lv.28]
hmm..
01:15:456 (75456|5,75456|1) - make a longnote instead, so it's following both drum and violin (?) x prefer normal notes
01:17:927 (77927|4) - did you hear something here? i can't hear a clear sound there... remove?I think hithat is there...?
01:27:986 (87986|5,88162|1) - better to following pitch (i kinda confused on that part lol), so ctrl + hbut if I do that then I also have to switch 01:27:633 (87633|0,87809|6) - which may break the pitch
01:45:809 (105809|5,105809|6,106162|6,106339|3,106515|0,106515|1) - http://puu.sh/9QMII.jpgyeah sure also change something else to make it eaiser

[lv.15]
00:53:839 add on 3x no sound there?
00:53:927 (53927|2,54015|4,54103|2,54192|4) - ctrl+hOK ctrl+h everything xD

ok, i found it has inconsistent ending each diff.. idk, perhaps you want to make them stop at same point, like on lv.7 with longnote at the ending.. is that ok at all? o_o?yeah little difference lel I will consult with simple_star to talk about that

ok, that's it, i hope you found it helpful.. :D good luck
Thank you!
Bruce
Thanks Spy KK and ajee~Fixed Some
Lirai
~ Hi From My Queue ~

~ Below are my suggestion feel free to ignore it ~



Waa richard and simple_star >///<
Sugoi... Sugoi... <3

Experienced Mapper, i think my mod wont much help T.T

~ Click Me Senpai ~
I'm so nervous >///<

[General]

Sprinkle Star in here 01:28:515 makes Kiai Toggled less than 15 sec T.T

[S.Star's Lv.7]

00:26:398 - Strong Beat Add Note on 6
00:55:339 - Normal Note seems fine than LN
00:57:103 (57103|4) - I think you should delete it and add note to 4, to represent cymbal sound
01:32:750 (92750|1) - May end here 01:33:103
01:36:633 - Missing Beat, add note to 5
02:03:103 (123103|5) - Do we need this LN ?

S.S is experienced mapper, i think my mod wont help ;w;

[Lv.15]

00:11:115 (11115|3) - I think we dont need this, delete
00:13:215 (13215|1) - Place it on white line below
00:27:103 (27103|4,27368|2,27633|0) - Some ppl might hate it, delete
00:27:456 (27456|5) - Move to 5
00:27:633 - Add note to 2
00:28:515 (28515|3) - Do we need this LN ?
00:29:927 (29927|3,30192|5,30456|2) - Yeah, i never see tha one before, delete
00:30:280 (30280|1) - Move to 3
00:32:750 (32750|2,33015|3,33280|4) - Same trouble just like before
00:34:162 (34162|2) - uhh delete ?
01:07:162 - Low Pitch, make it to 3 and 5
01:07:692 - I think the Stair not suits here delete this 01:07:780 (67780|2,67868|3) and add note to 3 here 01:07:956
01:20:397 - You follow the Vocal ?
01:26:045 - Cymbal, add note to 7
01:27:721 (87721|2) - Delete
01:30:809 (90809|2,90986|6) - May not use that LN imo if you do this 01:31:162 (91162|4) must start from here 01:31:339 end 01:32:750
01:51:456 - Normal Stair More suits than those LN stair

I like richard LN :3

[S.Star's Lv.21]

00:34:162 (34162|2) - If following the drum, Delete
01:14:574 (74574|4) - no snare heard on my headset, delete
01:21:633 (81633|4) - ^ Here too
01:36:809 (96809|1) - ^
01:58:692 (118692|2) - ^

Cant find anything else sorry T.T

[Lv.28]

actually i cant handle this diff but i will try as hard as i can >.<"

00:09:652 (9652|6) - delete this one
00:38:221 (38221|4) - i dont think we need this LN
01:17:045 - miss note here, add to 3 maybe ?
01:55:074 (115074|2) - Delete ?
01:55:692 - Add to 3 ?

srry nothing much i can do T.T

Maybe i have done something wrong with the code srry x(

I think My Mod won't much Help, Just like the other, you guys are very experienced at mapping, But it will help me too if You tell me what have you change on my Mod, it could be very usefull for me to be better at modding

Well Good Luck Richard n S.S ~
Bruce

DE-CADE wrote:

~ Hi From My Queue ~

~ Below are my suggestion feel free to ignore it ~



Waa richard and simple_star >///<
Sugoi... Sugoi... <3

Experienced Mapper, i think my mod wont much help T.T

I'm so nervous >///<

[General]

Sprinkle Star in here 01:28:515 makes Kiai Toggled less than 15 sec T.T

[S.Star's Lv.7]

00:26:398 - Strong Beat Add Note on 6
00:55:339 - Normal Note seems fine than LN X
00:57:103 (57103|4) - I think you should delete it and add note to 4, to represent cymbal sound
01:32:750 (92750|1) - May end here 01:33:103
01:36:633 - Missing Beat, add note to 5
02:03:103 (123103|5) - Do we need this LN ? X

S.S is experienced mapper, i think my mod wont help ;w;

[S.Star's Lv.21]

00:34:162 (34162|2) - If following the drum, Delete
01:14:574 (74574|4) - no snare heard on my headset, delete wait further mod
01:21:633 (81633|4) - ^ Here too wait further mod
01:36:809 (96809|1) - ^ wait further mod
01:58:692 (118692|2) - ^ wait further mod

Cant find anything else sorry T.T
Others All Fixed Thanks Moe DE-CADE~
Topic Starter
richardfeder

DE-CADE wrote:

~ Hi From My Queue ~

~ Below are my suggestion feel free to ignore it ~



Waa richard and simple_star >///<
Sugoi... Sugoi... <3

Experienced Mapper, i think my mod wont much help T.T
wwwwww
~ Click Me Senpai ~
I'm so nervous >///< lolol >///<

[General]

Sprinkle Star in here 01:28:515 makes Kiai Toggled less than 15 sec T.T
yeah but I would like to remain this one

[Lv.15]

00:11:115 (11115|3) - I think we dont need this, delete nope sound is quite obvious there
00:13:215 (13215|1) - Place it on white line below not following vocal xD
00:27:103 (27103|4,27368|2,27633|0) - Some ppl might hate it, deleteI like it lol jk violin quite clear there no reason to delete
00:27:456 (27456|5) - Move to 5current position is more handy
00:27:633 - Add note to 2nope I am not mapping hithat sound so no
00:28:515 (28515|3) - Do we need this LN ?yes violin
00:29:927 (29927|3,30192|5,30456|2) - Yeah, i never see tha one before, delete? violin also
LN hater detected? /me run
00:30:280 (30280|1) - Move to 3same as above
00:32:750 (32750|2,33015|3,33280|4) - Same trouble just like beforestill violin ><
00:34:162 (34162|2) - uhh delete ?nope
01:07:162 - Low Pitch, make it to 3 and 5nope mapping drums here vocal indeed has pitch but drums, no
01:07:692 - I think the Stair not suits here delete this 01:07:780 (67780|2,67868|3) and add note to 3 here 01:07:956x nope violin! ;w;
01:20:397 - You follow the Vocal ?instrument I think that's obvious ;w;
01:26:045 - Cymbal, add note to 7nope. one note for cymbal only here
01:27:721 (87721|2) - Deleteagain violin
01:30:809 (90809|2,90986|6) - May not use that LN imo if you do this 01:31:162 (91162|4) must start from here 01:31:339 end 01:32:750nope I think you miss hear that
01:51:456 - Normal Stair More suits than those LN stairI prefer LN :3

I like richard LN :3 lololol

[Lv.28]

actually i cant handle this diff but i will try as hard as i can >.<"

00:09:652 (9652|6) - delete this onex feel like three notes
00:38:221 (38221|4) - i dont think we need this LNviolin
01:17:045 - miss note here, add to 3 maybe ?intentionally leave here empty so that I can make sv change here >///<
01:55:074 (115074|2) - Delete ?no sound is obvious
01:55:692 - Add to 3 ?sure!

srry nothing much i can do T.T don't say sorry lol

Maybe i have done something wrong with the code srry x(

I think My Mod won't much Help, Just like the other, you guys are very experienced at mapping, But it will help me too if You tell me what have you change on my Mod, it could be very usefull for me to be better at modding
sure
Well Good Luck Richard n S.S ~
Thank you! I think our style isn't exactly the same but anyway thank you for modding my chart >///< update
asd123iii
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[S.Star's Lv.7]
00:58:692 (58692|3) - remove
01:00:103 (60103|4) - ^
01:01:515 (61515|5) - ^
01:43:868 (103868|2) - ^
01:43:868 (103868|2) - add a note

[Lv.15]
00:10:815 - add a note
00:11:715 - ^
00:18:015 - ^
00:39:809 (39809|4,39897|2,39986|4) - 改成7-5-3

後面兩張就... :roll:
Topic Starter
richardfeder
OK 753已改 至于前面的add我觉得不是很有必要
感谢!
[AyanoTatemaya]
Helo richardfeder~! Here's my mod as requested! :)

Col: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[S.Star's Lv.7]
00:45:633 (45633|4,45809|6) - (optional) ctrl+j
00:52:162 (52162|2,52339|4,52515|1,52692|3,52868|5) - move 1 space to the right
00:54:986 - http://puu.sh/anjkK/b810dcc6d9.jpg
00:58:515 (58515|5) - move to 5
00:59:927 (59927|4,60103|4) - move 1 space to the right
01:07:692 (67692|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:24:809 (84809|2,84809|1) - move 1 space to the left
01:34:692 (94692|4) - move to 4
01:41:221 (101221|5) - move to 7

[Lv.15]
00:27:809 (27809|4) - move to 4
00:28:339 (28339|3) - move to 2
00:32:750 - http://puu.sh/anjZ4/d7bee1d7d0.jpg
00:53:927 - http://puu.sh/ank5Q/81c42dcea2.jpg
01:04:515 - http://puu.sh/ankbL/0805ccc70f.jpg
01:09:456 (69456|6) - move to 2
01:39:986 (99986|1) - suggest to move to 3, then move 01:40:339 (100339|5) to 5
01:41:397 (101397|5) - move to 3

[S.Star's Lv.21]
00:45:633 (45633|4) - move to 4
01:32:927 (92927|5) - move to 5

[Lv.28]
00:45:809 (45809|1) - remove

Good luck~!
Bruce

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

Helo richardfeder~! Here's my mod as requested! :)

Col: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[S.Star's Lv.7]
00:45:633 (45633|4,45809|6) - (optional) ctrl+j
00:52:162 (52162|2,52339|4,52515|1,52692|3,52868|5) - move 1 space to the right
00:54:986 - http://puu.sh/anjkK/b810dcc6d9.jpg
00:58:515 (58515|5) - move to 5
00:59:927 (59927|4,60103|4) - move 1 space to the right
01:07:692 (67692|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:24:809 (84809|2,84809|1) - move 1 space to the left
01:34:692 (94692|4) - move to 4
01:41:221 (101221|5) - move to 7 Fixed Some

[S.Star's Lv.21]
00:45:633 (45633|4) - move to 4 Yes
01:32:927 (92927|5) - move to 5 Yes

Good luck~!
Thanks for mod~
Topic Starter
richardfeder

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

Helo richardfeder~! Here's my mod as requested! :) thank you~

Col: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Lv.15]
00:27:809 (27809|4) - move to 4sure
00:28:339 (28339|3) - move to 2no 00:28:339 (28339|3,28515|3) - violin
00:32:750 - http://puu.sh/anjZ4/d7bee1d7d0.jpgnope
00:53:927 - http://puu.sh/ank5Q/81c42dcea2.jpgx looks not so good for me x.x
01:04:515 - http://puu.sh/ankbL/0805ccc70f.jpgsure also change the pattern a little bit
01:09:456 (69456|6) - move to 2no
01:39:986 (99986|1) - suggest to move to 3, then move 01:40:339 (100339|5) to 5sure
01:41:397 (101397|5) - move to 3x

[Lv.28]
00:45:809 (45809|1) - removex ?

Good luck~!
Also updated simple_star's diffs. Thank you!
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: It should be exactly 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
_ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[S.Star's Lv.7]
SPOILER
00:34:868 - add note. strong sound with that explosion-like sound.

00:42:986 (42986|2) - move to 5 for balance and mirror of 00:41:574 (41574|0,41574|2)

00:50:927 - add note. Same sound as 00:50:045 (50045|4,50045|0) -

00:54:633 (54633|2) - remove to avoid 3-noted note for this kind of sound since you made most similar sounds 2-noted like 00:57:456 (57456|2,57456|6)

01:00:103 (60103|4) - move to 6. not same instrument as previous note.

01:06:868 (66868|4) - snap to 1/4 line?

01:07:162 - add note for that consistent drum sound.

01:09:633 (69633|5) - move to 5

01:12:280 (72280|4,72456|2,72633|0,72809|2) - move 1 column to right since different pitch.

01:16:868 - add note for that clap. its very consistent and it feels empty without notes on it.

01:23:927 (83927|0) - remove. same as 01:24:633 (84633|3) -

01:25:162 - add note for consistent drum sound.

01:49:868 - add note to 3. same as 01:48:986 (108986|1,109162|1) - which are guitar strums

02:00:280 (120280|4,120456|2,120633|0) - move 1 column to right. different pitch than previous melody.

02:00:809 - add note since strong sound.

[LV.15]
SPOILER
01:01:692 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996956
• These triplet trills fits more to those drums rather than having stairs.
• More comfortable to play.

01:06:897 (66897|1,66897|5) - move to 3 and 5. For tom pitch is lower here.

01:09:809 (69809|2) - remove. Does not have strong sound like 01:09:986 (69986|1,69986|6,69986|4) -

01:21:456 (81456|3) - move to 3 different pitch than 01:21:103 (81103|3) -

01:36:633 (96633|6) - move to 3 for balance.

01:38:309 (98309|4,98397|5) - ctrl j

01:56:397 and 01:56:574 - suggesting to add note. Like 01:53:574 (113574|1,113574|3) -

[S.Star's LV.21]
SPOILER
00:30:103 (30103|4) - move to 6 to avoid stacking of notes and for comfortability.

00:51:986 (51986|5) - ^ to 5

00:54:103 (54103|2,54280|1) - move 1 column to right for comfortability.

00:57:103 (57103|6) - move to 6

01:13:692 - add note.

01:14:750 - suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996912
• Since the 1/2 and 1/1 4th column notes is too awkward to play (Thumb press). An alternative hand would fit in this part and its drum triplet.
• Comfortable and fun to play pattern.

01:38:221 (98221|0) - move to 3 to avoid stacking at 1st column and to have better/fun press.

01:52:868 - add note. consistent hithat.

01:55:692 - ^

02:03:192 (123192|2,123192|6,123280|4,123339|0,123339|2) - move to 02:03:170 1/16th. Fits more. Listen at 25% playback rate.

[LV.28]
SPOILER
00:05:677 - 1/16th line. add note. Piano sound.

00:15:015 - add note for the hithat sound.

00:17:715 - ^

00:20:115 - add LN until 00:20:415 for that low-pitch bass sound.

00:38:662 - add note. just liek 00:38:397 (38397|3,38397|1)

00:53:927 - Suggestion: add LN for that flute-like sound until 00:54:280

00:54:280 - ^ until 00:54:633

00:59:486 (59486|3) - move to 6 for comfortability and for note spread. (since 4th column is pressed before)

01:01:339 (61339|4) - remove. not strong as 01:01:162 (61162|1,61162|3,61162|6) -

01:01:515 - add note to 4. strong beatsound.

01:05:927 - Suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996841
• Balanced pattern in both hands
• added a note at 01:06:015 since its a drum sound like others in that part too.
• Comfortable to hit for drums rather than stairs pattern.


01:11:750 to 01:14:397 - I do not quite agree in this part since there are no really strong long sound in this part and it feels a random LN pattern to me. I highly suggest to renovate this part.

01:17:045 - add note. drum sound.

01:25:868 - add note. hithat-like sound

01:25:956 - ^

01:26:221 - ^

01:26:309 - ^ and a drum sound also.

01:56:397 (116397|3,116574|3) - move to 6 for comfortability.

02:02:993 - This end piano part seems off. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996777
• 1/16th snap divisor
• Listened on it 25% and checked trice.
• Seems exactly on chime-like sound.

Cool diff~

[Overall]
Cool song choice~ also cool 7K Mapset :) Good luck~!
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