I'm sorry for my poor English at first.
[General]
Warning(You must fix it):You should add Easy or Normal diff if you want your map ranked,or mark that the map is only for Approved.
See Ranking Criteria to learn why to do so.
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
-Each difficult should end up at same time.
Suggestion:-I can only see "????""!!!!" in the map introduction , like this:
image link(If you can't see image):http://v1.freep.cn/3tb_140713230356ea8j512293.jpg[Hyper]
Suggestion:- 00:40:922 (1) the spinner is too quick. at least 1 second.
- 00:48:122 (1,1) Double spinner is too close to each other,at least 1 Snap.
- 01:38:122&01:38:222 add a note.
- 02:54:322&02:54:422&02:54:922&02:55:022 add a note
My Opinion:- 00:01:622 (1,1) May too close for each other.delete 00:03:422 (1) to fix it.As you know,some people can't let the mouse in the center when roll the spinner,it's hard for them to finish it.
- 00:14:422 (1,1) ^
- 00:46:422 (5) replace it to two circle.
- 01:32:822 (1) I perfect this:
image link(If you can't see image):http://v1.freep.cn/3tb_1407132304448swm512293.jpg- 02:52:822 (1,2,3,4,5) You can add jump in there.
[Another]
Suggestion:-DR+1 OD+2 since it's Another difficult.
-00:29:022&00:29:422&00:30:222 add a note to suit for music.
-00:48:222 (1,1) You'd better not do it even thought it's Another diff.
-02:12:022&02:12:822&02:13:618 suit for music.
My Opinion:-AR+1 so that it's more comfortable.
-00:03:822 add a note,more comfortable for play.
-02:41:622 (10) I perfer this:
image link(If you can't see image):http://v2.freep.cn/3tb_140713230502wtjj512293.jpg-02:59:222 ~ 03:01:222 I perfer this:
image link(If you can't see image):http://v1.freep.cn/3tb_140713230512qi9g512293.jpg392,244,179222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,156,179422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,56,179622,1,10,0:0:0:0:
248,120,179822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,180022,1,4,0:1:0:0:
164,308,180222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,180422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,180622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,180822,5,4,0:1:0:0:
280,192,180922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,196,181022,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,236,181222,1,10,0:0:0:0:
I hope my mod can help you