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Flower
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月10日 at 8:33:16

Artist: Nakaya Sayaka
Title: HAPPINESSCHARGE PRECURE! WOW! (TV Size)
Source: ハピネスチャージプリキュア!
Tags: Happiness Charge Pretty Cure opening
BPM: 175
Filesize: 10451kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.16 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Hard (2.92 stars, 207 notes)
  3. Insane (4.12 stars, 320 notes)
  4. Normal (1.86 stars, 116 notes)
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很不幸的是,热爱这个动画的人大多数都把时间花在另一个9键的下落式游戏上了,所以应该neutral热爆挖鼻
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ts8zs
Nakaya Sayaka - HappinessCharge PreCure! WOW! (Flower)

配合头像观看
-5ms?无所谓啦
[Insane]
00:04:197 (4,5) - swap
00:30:254 (2,5) - 228,48
>00:30:425 (3) - 256,192
00:58:368 (2,3) - swap
01:05:739 - jin'jin'jin'jin 大叔心
01:24:254 (1) - end at 01:26:139 - ?
[Hard]
00:31:797 (5,1) - 5 blanket 1
[Normal]
01:24:254 (1) - end at 01:26:139 - ?
[Easy]
01:19:968 (2) - 看起来有点呆 歪一点吧
Topic Starter
Flower

ts8zs wrote:

Nakaya Sayaka - HappinessCharge PreCure! WOW! (Flower)

配合头像观看
-5ms?无所谓啦
[Insane]
00:04:197 (4,5) - swap
00:30:254 (2,5) - 228,48
>00:30:425 (3) - 256,192
00:58:368 (2,3) - swap
01:05:739 - jin'jin'jin'jin 大叔心
01:24:254 (1) - end at 01:26:139 - ? 改了
[Hard]
00:31:797 (5,1) - 5 blanket 1
[Normal]
01:24:254 (1) - end at 01:26:139 - ? 改了
[Easy]
01:19:968 (2) - 看起来有点呆 歪一点吧
其他没改的我就不写理由了,等有空了传上来

Thanks for modding~!
yf_bmp


[General]
MP3音量可以放大些 太轻了

[Insane]

有些1/1的距离感觉可以再大些 这样打起来会更有感觉, 比如 00:14:311 (1,2,3) - 00:17:054 (1,2,3) - 00:23:739 (4,1) - 00:25:282 (12,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:36:597 (3,1) - 00:37:282 (3,1) -

00:05:397 (8) - 这里不应该是1/3 而是3/4

00:07:968 (6,9) - 感觉这里的1/2距离跳的不够 会跟没跳感觉差不多. 而且现在这样的距离微妙的不同会觉得排的比较乱

00:10:539 (7,8) - flow不好 8的滑条可以改个形状 不一定要包围 或者说是8换个位置

00:35:397 (4,1) - 这里最好能和00:34:025 (4,1) - 统一一下 要么都跳要么都不跳

00:36:768 - 尝试下overmap? 这里开始放两个1/4叠在00:36:939 (1) - 上 如果不想改的话强烈建议在"hai"这个歌词的时候距离可以做大

00:37:454 - ^, 叠在00:37:625 (1) - 上

00:37:968 (2,3) - 这两个可以都做跳 vocal重音

00:40:368 (7) - nc

01:04:368 (5) - 移到296,96, 滑条头和前面两个圈会更美观些

01:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里物件的间距感觉突然缩小了 不知道是刻意的还是没考虑到和前面统一

01:09:168 - 这里开始有1/4的鼓点 如果跟的话比较适合引入kiai

01:16:025 (1,3) - 这里叠的不太好 半叠不叠的, 3可以向上点头和1,2尾形成正三角, 要么和01:17:225 (5,1) - 这个一样的叠法

[Hard]
..........这圈的大小和ar再结合这滑条速度感觉跟开了ez一样
建议至少ar7 建议ar7.5 (因为有1/2跳

00:05:397 (7) - 3/4

没啥好说

[Normal]
00:29:740 (3,4,1) - 高速移动1/2 太难了

00:40:711 (3,4,1) - ^

01:26:997 (1) - 换成一个圈+一个折返的滑条会更适合新人

01:28:368 (3) - ^

[Easy]
滑条上的tick建议配上鼓点 尤其是kiai
红线起的滑条可以试试tickrate2 或者把鼓声放到sliderslide.wav上

00:14:654 -这里的音我认为不应该漏, 00:19:797 (1) - 像这个做的就不错

00:17:397 - ^

00:22:882 - ^

美丽 Good Luck~
Foreverends
here we gooooooooooooo~~~

MP3音量會不會有點太輕D:??

Insane
00:05:397 (8) - 00:10:025 (6) - 好slider,不blanket?
01:24:254 (1) - maybe拉到01:24:311 - 才停?

Hard
00:05:054 (6) - ctrl g?
00:11:397 (1) - 彎一下做個blanket吧 \:D/

hummmm我很好奇自己能幫到些甚麼...;w;
btw good luck~ :D
sammy711
[General]
Mp3的事上面都说了...
[Insane]
00:08:311 (9) - 别的diff都没有加sliderwhistle,而且在这里很吵所以应该remove
00:20:997 (5) - 按照前面的NC下法,这里也应该是一个长白线1个NC,所以这个应该NC
01:28:711 (4) - 这个音乐比01:28:368 (2) - 音调高一点。所以不用往返跳会好一些吧..
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981821
[Hard]
BPM175 AR6.. OD5 这个排版至少也要AR6.5 OD5.5吧....
00:42:597 (3) - 按照音效系统,00:42:597 - 这个时间点上的whistle去掉
[Normal]
00:12:255 (2) - 这里应该是normal音效
00:19:798 (1) - 滑条尾normal音效
[Easy]
00:19:797 (1) - 滑条尾normal音效
00:32:139 (2) - 这个滑条头的normal很奇怪啊,鼓点在前面的那个白线上,而00:28:025 (1) - 这个本该加normal的却没加,怀疑加错了
01:09:168 (1) - 滑条尾drum finish
01:26:139 - 别的diff的转盘都是到这里终止,这里也应该前移到红线

玛德 BAT的图太好了...摸不出什么东西
Topic Starter
Flower
Long time no read xD. Fixed some. Thanks!
Chloe
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14:49 *Flower is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/364629 Nakaya Sayaka - HappinessCharge PreCure! WOW! [Insane]]
14:49 Flower: 好啊
14:50 Flower: xxn
15:00 Flower: 。
15:00 Chloe: .
15:00 Chloe: wangle
15:01 Flower: qing xiexie ni
15:01 Chloe: a
15:01 Chloe: ?
15:02 Flower: coushu
15:02 Flower: haoa
15:02 Chloe: 00:14:493 (3) -
15:02 Chloe: hard
15:02 Flower: 随便帮我看一眼ENH有没有unrank把,I莫
15:02 Chloe: 这个其实放在4那里比较好玩
15:02 Chloe: 。
15:02 Chloe: 好
15:03 Flower: 不是后面一致么,歌词重叠
15:03 Flower: 所以我决定保持原状
15:03 Chloe: hao
15:03 Chloe: 其实是因为
15:04 Chloe: 00:14:322 (2,3,4,1) -
15:04 Chloe: 这4个如果是22堆叠的话就不会有违和感
15:04 Chloe: 如果要3个 那就是1+2+1比较好
15:04 Chloe: 和节奏无关
15:04 Flower: 。
15:05 Chloe: 这是排列FLOW问题 不过如果你觉得这样比较好那也没什么 反正送分hard
15:05 Flower: 还是算热
15:05 Flower: hao
15:06 Chloe: 00:03:522 (4) -
15:06 Chloe: 右上一点?
15:06 Chloe: 我觉得打起来不够爽
15:06 Chloe: 400 164
15:06 Flower: 你书的事那个难度
15:07 Chloe: insane
15:07 Flower: 其实我是想保持00:03:008 (2,3,4,5) - 间距一致,flow什么的倒不是很在乎
15:08 Chloe: 00:07:636 (9) -
15:08 Chloe: 没blanket好
15:08 Chloe: 00:05:922 (2) -
15:09 Chloe: 这边要不OVERMAP个3连堆在00:06:094 (3) - 吧
15:09 Flower: 嘛,blanket好了
15:09 Chloe: 我感觉怪怪的 间距好小
15:10 Flower: 不觉得这样鸡立鹤群吗,在现代map中
15:10 Chloe: 00:07:122 (5,6,7,8,9) -
15:10 Flower: ,
15:10 Chloe: 还有00:07:122 (5,6,7,8) - 类似这种我觉得滑条+尾3连打起来比较舒服
15:11 Chloe: 现在这样的间距
15:11 Chloe: 感觉打起来
15:11 Chloe: 莫名卡收
15:11 Chloe: 手*
15:11 Chloe: 这个3连
15:11 Flower: dui 就是卡玩DT的人
15:11 Chloe: 你可以试试
15:11 Chloe: 难玩啊
15:11 Flower: 我没觉得卡a
15:12 Chloe: 00:08:836 (3,4) -
15:12 Chloe: 这2个是不是变成滑条比较好
15:12 Flower: ???
15:12 Chloe: ai
15:12 Chloe: 00:10:464
15:13 Chloe: 我比较推荐这边3连满上
15:13 Chloe: 长喜经常这样搞 我觉得比较爽
15:13 Chloe: 不过估计你还是不喜欢
15:13 Chloe:
15:13 Flower: 你说滴对
15:13 Chloe: 00:12:094 (4,5,6,1) -
15:13 Chloe: 等距偏移吧
15:13 Chloe: 我觉得这样太丑
15:14 Chloe: 而且这种送分图就算空拍等距偏移也不会难度
15:14 Chloe: 00:12:951 (1,2) -
15:14 Chloe: 滑条加速
15:14 Flower: 啥叫灯具便宜
15:16 Chloe: 就是不管节拍数相差多少都用相同间距
15:16 Chloe: http://puu.sh/h0WJz/fad50852a9.jpg
15:17 Flower: 你的也不善
15:17 Chloe: 00:19:808 (3) -
15:17 Chloe: blankt没好
15:18 Flower: ???本来就没打算blank
15:18 Chloe: 00:21:179 (7) -
15:19 Chloe: 为什么要用屁股带过鼓点
15:19 Chloe: 这个是不是地鼓
15:19 Chloe: 不是应该用圈吗
15:19 Flower: 因为跟歌词啊
15:20 Chloe: 跟你妈vocal啊
15:20 Chloe: 赶紧删了跟鼓
15:20 Chloe: 你显然跟鼓啊
15:20 Chloe: 00:20:322 (5) -
15:20 Chloe: 00:19:808 (3,4,5) -
15:20 Chloe: 不然这边就该是圈+滑条+滑条了
15:21 Chloe: 你会这样下节奏显然是跟鼓
15:21 Chloe: 00:24:007 (5,6,7,9,10,11) -
15:21 Flower: nishuodeyouyidingdaoli
15:21 Chloe: 这几个note的底音我觉得用drum比较合适
15:22 Flower: 都改了
15:24 Chloe: 00:26:151 (2,4,6) -
15:24 Chloe: 这边我觉得也是用durm whistle比较合适
15:24 Chloe: 然后第六个note
15:24 Chloe: 和第五个应该可以加点别的
15:24 Chloe: 考虑一下
15:24 Flower: 我反对
15:25 Flower: 。
15:27 Chloe: 00:32:151 (7) -
15:27 Chloe: 这个whistle跟什么
15:27 Chloe: 00:31:465 (5,6) - 我觉得在5的屁股和6的头加比较好
15:27 Chloe: 7和8也是
15:27 Chloe: 现在好像是乱加流
15:28 Flower: 就是乱加
15:28 Chloe: 00:35:922 (3,3) -
15:28 Flower: 反正rankJiuxingle
15:28 Chloe: 我感觉3连吧
15:29 Flower: ???
15:29 Chloe: ai
15:29 Chloe: 你怎么变成vocal狗了
15:30 Flower: 我做这图是给小女孩玩的,不是给给玩的
15:30 Chloe: 00:41:065 (3,4,5,6,1) -
15:30 Chloe: 这里
15:30 Flower: 虽然小女孩一般不玩这游戏
15:30 Chloe: http://puu.sh/h0Xch/5e77eabdcf.jpg
15:30 Chloe: 我建议这样
15:30 Chloe: 前后一致啊
15:30 Chloe: 你之前都是这样下的 突然来了一组滑条spam
15:31 Chloe: 01:04:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你不是要DS吗 做成三角整齐多了
15:32 Chloe: http://puu.sh/h0XfW/d500d71e67.jpg
15:32 Flower: 因为要改变节奏了啊
15:32 Chloe: 可是这还没改 gai ge pi
15:32 Chloe: 01:11:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟后面那组间距太小了 往下拉一点
15:33 Chloe: 美丽
smallboat
  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Metadata check : Seems have bit error at the space in title,also can changed (?不過好多種寫法,乾脆去問阿拉毛比較準確)
    http://miracleallstars.weebly.com/happiness-charge.html
    http://vgmdb.net/album/44532
    http://prettycure.wikia.com/wiki/Happin ... nd_Charge!!
    http://www.pretty-cure.info/?page=precu ... schange_cd
  2. Diff spread gap have a bit big (H->I) : Try to add a bit stars for H diff (2.9~3.0)
  3. 看來又是我破電腦,mp3顯示256kb? (不過音量有點兒小)
  4. soft-hitfinish2 雖然delay有在範圍內,但還是建議縮減一些空白。
  5. Finish的音效和整體表達音量有點小,聽不太出來,建議也是能加點音量 (20~30%)
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:350 (1) - The spinner end should spaced 4 beats in Easy diff,also can change rhythm (Remove spinner to change this rhythm) :
  2. 00:42:436 (3) - The medium should be set finish hitsound insted of whitle?
  3. 01:10:207 (1,1) - Same as 00:27:350 (1) :
  4. 01:23:579 (1,1) - 同上,看能不能把後面節奏去掉,用一個轉盤拉到底。
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:322 (1,3) - Remove one slider and add a note here,cuz almost seldom see two reverse slider in Normal diff I think :
[Hard] AR+1和OD+1吧,有點低。
  1. 00:23:922 (6) - Also the 1/4 reverse slider feel so a lot ,make 2 reverse slider here (And spinner head move a bit)? (最近看到qua圖的hard沒看過用這麼長的)
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:208 (1,2) - Suggest use ctrl+g change rhythm to follow vocal which I think play better
  2. 01:10:551 (1) - 怎麼感覺這個音有點off了,timing好像不太準?
[Other]
  1. If it achieved 12+SP ,call me back to recheck.
Topic Starter
Flower

smallboat wrote:

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Metadata check : Seems have bit error at the space in title,also can changed (?不過好多種寫法,乾脆去問阿拉毛比較準確) 不是已经有官方标题了吗lol
    http://miracleallstars.weebly.com/happiness-charge.html
    http://vgmdb.net/album/44532
    http://prettycure.wikia.com/wiki/Happin ... nd_Charge!!
    http://www.pretty-cure.info/?page=precu ... schange_cd
  2. Diff spread gap have a bit big (H->I) : Try to add a bit stars for H diff (2.9~3.0) changed CS in it, and changed ar according to it. now it should be less sparse
  3. 看來又是我破電腦,mp3顯示256kb? (不過音量有點兒小) 现在是143kb了,而且我觉得音量也足够了,用AE强制调成-0.1db了
  4. soft-hitfinish2 雖然delay有在範圍內,但還是建議縮減一些空白。这个应该没啥问题,用了许多年了也没人书画
  5. Finish的音效和整體表達音量有點小,聽不太出來,建議也是能加點音量 (20~30%) 其实就是相当于第二个swhistle一样在用了233
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:350 (1) - The spinner end should spaced 4 beats in Easy diff,also can change rhythm (Remove spinner to change this rhythm) :
    fixed
  2. 00:42:436 (3) - The medium should be set finish hitsound insted of whitle? i think finish is too strong, so keep
  3. 01:10:207 (1,1) - Same as 00:27:350 (1) : changed with aslight different pattern. same as below
  4. 01:23:579 (1,1) - 同上,看能不能把後面節奏去掉,用一個轉盤拉到底。
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:322 (1,3) - Remove one slider and add a note here,cuz almost seldom see two reverse slider in Normal diff I think : changed with a slight different pattern
[Hard] AR+1和OD+1吧,有點低。[/color]
  1. 00:23:922 (6) - Also the 1/4 reverse slider feel so a lot ,make 2 reverse slider here (And spinner head move a bit)? (最近看到qua圖的hard沒看過用這麼長的)
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:208 (1,2) - Suggest use ctrl+g change rhythm to follow vocal which I think play better k
  2. 01:10:551 (1) - 怎麼感覺這個音有點off了,timing好像不太準? ???听背景音啊,本来cure lovely的声音就不在节拍上
[Other]
  1. If it achieved 12+SP ,call me back to recheck.
yes, thank you~!
IamKwaN
Reference: http://www.toei-anim.co.jp/tv/happiness ... s/cd06.php
Unicode Title: ハピネスチャージプリキュア!WOW!(TVサイズ)
Romanised Title: HAPPINESSCHARGE PRECURE! WOW! (TV Size)
Unicode Artist: 仲谷明香
Romanised Artist: Nakaya Sayaka
Source: ハピネスチャージプリキュア!

I am not sure about the romanisation of the title as we have all caps in the source as shown above.
Please ask Japanese pros for opinions C:
Topic Starter
Flower
Updated.
alacat
As request from Flower and smallboat.

The metadata is fine to me :3 well, Please remove "HappinessCharge" from Tags. It doesn't work since you have already used it on the title.
Topic Starter
Flower
Woohoo, changed :3
smallboat
Okay,confirm metadata is fine by alacat (Thanks!),really good mapset.

Bubbled !
Tari
[Insane]

  1. 00:29:922 (4,5) - I found strange, vocals and strong beats are placed like this in music, for better emphasis I think its better to stack them. because vocals and strong beat are equally as strong here.
  2. 00:31:465 (5) - New combo? it fits with your pattern better.
  3. 00:44:494 (5) - Same, new combo its inconsistent with 00:33:522 (1) -
  4. 00:45:865 (5) - ^

[Hard]

  1. 00:12:950 (3) - New combo? the stacking might be confusing for some.
[Normal]

  1. 01:27:179 (1) - Finish to the start, I forgot about this+ add it to other diffs too.
Short mod, great map!

Call me back.
Topic Starter
Flower

Tari wrote:

[Insane]

  1. 00:29:922 (4,5) - I found strange, vocals and strong beats are placed like this in music, for better emphasis I think its better to stack them. because vocals and strong beat are equally as strong here. makes sense. besides there are 1/4 in music so I added 1/4
  2. 00:31:465 (5) - New combo? it fits with your pattern better. yes. fixed below also
  3. 00:44:494 (5) - Same, new combo its inconsistent with 00:33:522 (1) -
  4. 00:45:865 (5) - ^

[Hard]

  1. 00:12:950 (3) - New combo? the stacking might be confusing for some. I think it's as or more confusing because of the sudden colour change, imo
[Normal]

  1. 01:27:179 (1) - Finish to the start, I forgot about this+ add it to other diffs too. I think it doesn't fit
Short mod, great map!

Call me back.
Thanks, updated~
Tari
Kawaii Overload!

Qualified!
Topic Starter
Flower
Thank you Tari :D

Enjoy!
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