This is a BSS beatmap submission. Click here to view full beatmap information.
User avatar
Beatmap Nominator
4,286 posts
Offline
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 06 de marzo de 2014 at 05:36:57 p.m.

Artist: Claudia Bramnfsette
Title: Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size)
Source: Card Captor Sakura
Tags: Gumi Catch You Catch Me Clow Cards クロウカード Kurō Kādo Megumi Hinata 日向 めぐみ CCS SCC Magical Girl Cardcaptors Shoujo Shojo Opening カードキャプターさくら Kādokyaputā Sakura Sakura Cardcaptors Sakura Cazadora de Cartas Cardcaptor Sakura Sakura Card Captor CLAMP Latino [Yue]
BPM: 128
Filesize: 16942kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

Download: Claudia Bramnfsette - Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size)
Download: Claudia Bramnfsette - Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas Para Siempre

Mapset:
Image Facil By Gero Done!
Image Medio By Gero Done!
Image Dificil By Gero Done!
Image Experto By Gero Done!
Image Rain By Yue Done!
Last edited by Gero on , edited 14 times in total.
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
2,242 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Mod requested in-game~

General
  • Podrías cambiar el nombre de la diff Locura a Experto, suena mejor a mi juicio.

Locura

Dificil
  • 00:14:444 (1,2) - siento que este jump es muy grande y que deberías reducirlo un poco.

Medio

tengo sueño ;__; zZZz sigo luego
User avatar
Beatmap Nominator
4,286 posts
Offline
Cloudchaser wrote:
Mod requested in-game~

General
  • Podrías cambiar el nombre de la diff Locura a Experto, suena mejor a mi juicio. Tienes toda la razon, Listo

Locura
  • 00:41:163 (1,2,3,4) - Podrías mover un poco estas notas para hacer un mini-jump aprovechando que hay un downbeat. mmm prefiero mantenerlo de esta manera
  • 01:13:741 (3,4,1,2) - (sugerencia) Mueve estas notas de esta manera: http://i.imgur.com/bgwGNe9.png No soy muy afanada de hacer patters en solo una dirección. a mi en lo personal me gusta como esta

Dificil
  • 00:14:444 (1,2) - siento que este jump es muy grande y que deberías reducirlo un poco. un poco de dificultad no hace daño, prefiero dejarlo

Medio

tengo sueño ;__; zZZz sigo luego


Gracias Cloud
Updated~
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,594 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Gerillo o3o

IRC mod
2014-01-27 15:00 [Yue]: IRC mod Gerin?
2014-01-27 15:00 [Yue]: no hay muchas cosas
2014-01-27 15:00 Gero: claro
2014-01-27 15:00 Gero: espera probare un mapa del tigre
2014-01-27 15:00 [Yue]: oka
2014-01-27 15:01 [Yue]: yo estaré viendo que decirte o3o
2014-01-27 15:01 Gero: oki >w<
2014-01-27 15:06 Gero: listo estoy desocupado o3o
2014-01-27 15:06 [Yue]: oka
2014-01-27 15:07 [Yue]: 00:07:179 (4,5) -
2014-01-27 15:08 [Yue]: creo que alguna de esos 2 sliders deberías tener un NC
2014-01-27 15:08 [Yue]: pero no estoy seguro en cual x_x
2014-01-27 15:08 Gero: que diff?
2014-01-27 15:08 [Yue]: me parece que sería en (5)
2014-01-27 15:08 [Yue]: en la fácil
2014-01-27 15:09 Gero: no lo puse porque se veria muy random el NC ahi cuando solo es un slider
2014-01-27 15:09 Gero: prefiero mantenerlo asi
2014-01-27 15:09 [Yue]: pero es un combo muy larguito ;ww;
2014-01-27 15:09 [Yue]: bueno vale
2014-01-27 15:10 Gero: de hecho lo iva a poner pero prefiero dejarlo asi, ademas luego molestan cuando solo hay un NC solo
2014-01-27 15:10 [Yue]: 00:02:726 -
2014-01-27 15:10 [Yue]: 00:09:991 -
2014-01-27 15:10 [Yue]: tal vez bajar un poco el volumen? :c
2014-01-27 15:11 [Yue]: 60% (?
2014-01-27 15:11 Gero: nah , me gusta asi ;w; orz
2014-01-27 15:11 [Yue]: 00:34:601 (2) - add finish
2014-01-27 15:11 [Yue]: al comienzo D:?
2014-01-27 15:11 Gero: done
2014-01-27 15:12 [Yue]: 00:57:101 (3) -
2014-01-27 15:12 [Yue]: creo que no es muy de tu estilo hacer un slider así o.o
2014-01-27 15:12 [Yue]: pero supongo que lo haces porque hace juego con 01:00:851 (1) - (?
2014-01-27 15:12 [Yue]: de todas maneras, se ve un poco inusual es tus diff asdfg sólo eso D:
2014-01-27 15:13 Gero: hue
2014-01-27 15:13 Gero: el primero que se da cuenta xD
2014-01-27 15:13 Gero: si siempre pongo sliders rectos D:
2014-01-27 15:13 [Yue]: o.o
2014-01-27 15:13 [Yue]: ese es
2014-01-27 15:13 [Yue]: recto de costado
2014-01-27 15:13 Gero: si los pongo
2014-01-27 15:13 Gero: o3o
2014-01-27 15:14 [Yue]: bueno, igual sólo era un comentario ;w;
2014-01-27 15:14 [Yue]: en la Medio
2014-01-27 15:14 [Yue]: 00:38:819 (4) -
2014-01-27 15:14 [Yue]: hacerla curvita a este slider? ;c
2014-01-27 15:14 Gero: el punto era dejarlo recto ;w;
2014-01-27 15:15 [Yue]: aquí hay simetria 00:40:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2014-01-27 15:15 Gero: como cres (? para nada
2014-01-27 15:15 [Yue]: y yo esperaba que aquí 00:42:101 (1,2) -
2014-01-27 15:15 [Yue]: también lo hubiera :c
2014-01-27 15:15 Gero: crees*
2014-01-27 15:15 [Yue]: dejame terminar de escribir po ;___;
2014-01-27 15:15 [Yue]: no te burles ewe
2014-01-27 15:16 Gero: esta bueno ;w;
2014-01-27 15:16 Gero: de hecho estaba pensando en hacer lo mismo para lo siguiente
2014-01-27 15:17 Gero: pero luego pense que serian muchas notas en tan poco tiempo
2014-01-27 15:17 [Yue]: o.o
2014-01-27 15:17 Gero: asi que mejor coloque sliders
2014-01-27 15:17 [Yue]: sabia desición
2014-01-27 15:17 Gero: 00:42:101 (1,2) - de esto
2014-01-27 15:17 [Yue]: sliders ftw
2014-01-27 15:17 [Yue]: esta perfecto para mí lo que hiciste :3
2014-01-27 15:18 Gero: ahahaha baka
2014-01-27 15:18 Gero: tenia ganas de ponerlo como dices pero meh :c luego molestan con que es muy dificil
2014-01-27 15:18 Gero: el inicio del mapa como me costo mapear orz
2014-01-27 15:18 Gero: en la normal
2014-01-27 15:18 [Yue]: espera espera
2014-01-27 15:18 [Yue]: yo no te digo que le pongas circles a esa parte de los sliders
2014-01-27 15:19 Gero: entonces?
2014-01-27 15:19 Gero: o:
2014-01-27 15:19 [Yue]: sólo quiero que los sliders también tengan su simetría o.o
2014-01-27 15:19 Gero: de hecho la tienen D:
2014-01-27 15:19 Gero: 00:42:101 (1,2,1) - estan haciendo simetria
2014-01-27 15:19 [Yue]: O.O
2014-01-27 15:20 [Yue]: bueno, en escencia creo que lo tienen pero
2014-01-27 15:20 [Yue]: me refería a algo así:
2014-01-27 15:20 [Yue]: 00:55:226 (1,2) -
2014-01-27 15:20 [Yue]: algo parecido, no igual pero en sí, esa sería la idea que yo tuve
2014-01-27 15:20 Gero: lo iva a hacer asi pero luego cuando quise ponerle bien el spacing
2014-01-27 15:20 Gero: se veia feo
2014-01-27 15:21 [Yue]: vale o3o
2014-01-27 15:21 [Yue]: la difícil la mapeaste en 1/8? o.o
2014-01-27 15:21 Gero: en 1/8?
2014-01-27 15:21 Gero: ah si algunos sliders
2014-01-27 15:21 [Yue]: prah
2014-01-27 15:22 [Yue]: también hay en tick azules
2014-01-27 15:22 [Yue]: *-*
2014-01-27 15:22 Gero: si pero no abuse de lo dificil
2014-01-27 15:22 Gero: para que la hard fuera perfecta
2014-01-27 15:23 [Yue]: 00:25:226 (1) -
2014-01-27 15:23 [Yue]: parece que no escaja bien con 00:25:929 (2) -
2014-01-27 15:23 [Yue]: en el centro de su slider o.o
2014-01-27 15:24 [Yue]: creo que el último punto de (1)
2014-01-27 15:24 [Yue]: debe estar en x:68 y:288
2014-01-27 15:25 Gero: lo arregle un poco
2014-01-27 15:25 [Yue]: nazi: 00:53:819 (2) - la primera línea con el punto rojo está chueca :x
2014-01-27 15:25 [Yue]: orz
2014-01-27 15:26 [Yue]: me siento tan inútil xd
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: que observador
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: done
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: gracias
2014-01-27 15:26 [Yue]: 01:08:819 (1,2) -
2014-01-27 15:26 [Yue]: pero aún no termino u___u
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: no digas eso, cualquier mod es util
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: sabia que dijeras eso xD
2014-01-27 15:26 Gero: ya rompi un poco el spacing para que quede bien
2014-01-27 15:27 [Yue]: oki
2014-01-27 15:27 [Yue]: en la Experto
2014-01-27 15:27 [Yue]: creo que este salto es un poco largo para comenzar 00:10:694 (3,4) -
2014-01-27 15:27 [Yue]: debería ser un poquito más ligero imo
2014-01-27 15:28 Gero: creo que si lo exagere mucho pero me gusta que sea dificil porque fluye bien con el cambio de musica imo
2014-01-27 15:29 [Yue]: okay o3o
2014-01-27 15:29 [Yue]: 00:40:226 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2014-01-27 15:29 [Yue]: aquí todo lo contrario, quisiera ver unos saltitos un poquito más dificiles
2014-01-27 15:29 Gero: orz a mi me gustaba asi
2014-01-27 15:29 Gero: :<
2014-01-27 15:29 [Yue]: u.u
2014-01-27 15:30 [Yue]: sólo aumenta el spacing (??????
2014-01-27 15:30 Gero: como a cuanto lo aumento?
2014-01-27 15:30 [Yue]: mmm
2014-01-27 15:31 [Yue]: espera, en cuando está ahora? o.o
2014-01-27 15:31 Gero: 0.8
2014-01-27 15:31 [Yue]: LOL
2014-01-27 15:31 [Yue]: 1.1 u 1.2 creo estaría bien
2014-01-27 15:31 [Yue]: no sé que opinas tú
2014-01-27 15:32 Gero: my god D:
2014-01-27 15:32 [Yue]: tampoco es que se alejen como 5 metros el uno del otro a____________a
2014-01-27 15:32 Gero: deja pruebo haber si me gusta, si no creo que preferiria mantenerlo asi
2014-01-27 15:33 [Yue]: y el la Rain
2014-01-27 15:33 [Yue]: porfavor muevele este circle 01:14:444 (7) -
2014-01-27 15:33 [Yue]: a x:356
2014-01-27 15:33 [Yue]: el valor de "y" no importa
2014-01-27 15:34 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1286497
2014-01-27 15:34 Gero: te parece?
2014-01-27 15:34 [Yue]: seee
2014-01-27 15:34 [Yue]: perfecto :3
2014-01-27 15:35 Gero: Fixed
2014-01-27 15:35 [Yue]: bueno, recuerda lo que te dije de la Rain D:
2014-01-27 15:35 Gero: 01:14:444 (7) - este?
2014-01-27 15:35 [Yue]: sip
2014-01-27 15:36 Gero: lo movi a x:356 Y:192
2014-01-27 15:36 Gero: esta bien?
2014-01-27 15:36 [Yue]: sip
2014-01-27 15:36 Gero: okay listo
2014-01-27 15:36 [Yue]: yay


Lo rankearemos juntos T^T
Estrellitas :33
User avatar
Beatmap Nominator
4,286 posts
Offline
Gracias por el mod Yue >w<

Updated~
User avatar
Beatmap Nominator
8,097 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
HI~ In game request owo/

General:
  • Uncheck widescreen support you don't have sb
  • About diff names I know the spanish one make sense but just for spanish people, maybe you should change them to english ones (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)


Experto:


Dificil:
  • HP + 1 (6) for better spread, also to balance the diff settings
  • OD + 2 (6) same as above
  • 00:06:476 (2) - The music here is clearly 1/2, the extended slider doesnt fit the music at this point, if you want to keep it atleast 00:06:476 (2,3) - stack this properly.
  • 00:06:944 (3,4,5) - I feel we have a rhythm problem here, if you listen to the music, the strong beats are at: 00:07:179 -, 00:07:647 -, 00:07:882- this beats should have a click able action (slider head or circle). Maybe do you want to use a better rhythm here maybe like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:09:288 (2) - the 1/8 repeat is maybe so much difficult for a hard diff, in my opinion is better if you add a beat in 00:09:522 only
  • 00:16:788 (2) - same as above, I can't agree with the 1/8 repeat on this diff, just a circle in 00:17:022 will work alot better
  • 00:28:976 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the song in my opinion, the vocals at 00:29:679 -, 00:29:913 -, should be mapped as a circles, being consistent with the one at 00:30:147 (2) - like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:30:851 (4) - missing NC following your pattern
  • 00:32:022 (5) - remove the clap it doesn't sound good
  • 00:32:257 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here is wrong, 00:32:726 this should be the start of slider is a new vocal you can listen ¨Que¨, the same is happening to 00:33:663 , also the music is strong there maybe change the rhythm like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:47:726 starting the kiai in the tail of a slider doesn't represent the music well, 00:47:726 this is the start of the chorus you should start it with all the empathize like a slider head or a circle, but in my opinion never a tail.
  • 01:04:366 (1,2) - same as insane about the kiai flashes, they are not rankables.
  • 01:14:210 (1) - same as Insane


Medio:
  • 00:05:304 (2,1) - Fix the distance
  • 00:08:116 (1) - same as Insane, maybe add some hitsounds will be really cool, maybe finish or claps?
  • 00:11:163 (2,3) - really nazi but this blanket can be better, use the approach circle to improve it.
  • 00:12:569 (3) - Should be a NC following your pattern
  • 00:22:882 (3,4) - you have a rhythm problem here, the sound at 00:23:351 should be a slider head or a circle maybe like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:26:632 (3,4) - Fix the distance
  • 00:31:788 (3,1) - same as above
  • 00:40:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try another pattern? the circles are ok, they fit the music nice, but the way you make the shape is not suitable for a normal diff.
  • 00:44:210 (1) - same as hard diff, starting the kiai on sliders tail or spinner end is not ok, it doesn't fit the song, try this instead:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:52:882 (3) - you have a rhythm problem here, starting sliders on weak beats and ending on strong beats, doesn't follow the song well, try:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 01:04:366 (1,2) - same as hard
  • 01:12:335 (2,3) - a slider will follow the song better, (2) have more importance in the music than one, that's why
  • 01:13:976 (5) - remove this circle is not following nothing there, remember to fix the spacing if you do.



Easy:


GL nice song <3
User avatar
Beatmap Nominator
4,286 posts
Offline
Natsu wrote:
HI~ In game request owo/

General:
  • Uncheck widescreen support you don't have sb Fixed
  • About diff names I know the spanish one make sense but just for spanish people, maybe you should change them to english ones (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane) I'm not sure about this :/


Experto:


Dificil:
  • HP + 1 (6) for better spread, also to balance the diff settings
  • OD + 2 (6) same as above
  • 00:06:476 (2) - The music here is clearly 1/2, the extended slider doesnt fit the music at this point, if you want to keep it atleast 00:06:476 (2,3) - stack this properly.
  • 00:06:944 (3,4,5) - I feel we have a rhythm problem here, if you listen to the music, the strong beats are at: 00:07:179 -, 00:07:647 -, 00:07:882- this beats should have a click able action (slider head or circle). Maybe do you want to use a better rhythm here maybe like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:09:288 (2) - the 1/8 repeat is maybe so much difficult for a hard diff, in my opinion is better if you add a beat in 00:09:522 only
  • 00:16:788 (2) - same as above, I can't agree with the 1/8 repeat on this diff, just a circle in 00:17:022 will work alot better
  • 00:28:976 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the song in my opinion, the vocals at 00:29:679 -, 00:29:913 -, should be mapped as a circles, being consistent with the one at 00:30:147 (2) - like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:30:851 (4) - missing NC following your pattern
  • 00:32:022 (5) - remove the clap it doesn't sound good
  • 00:32:257 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here is wrong, 00:32:726 this should be the start of slider is a new vocal you can listen ¨Que¨, the same is happening to 00:33:663 , also the music is strong there maybe change the rhythm like:
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:47:726 starting the kiai in the tail of a slider doesn't represent the music well, 00:47:726 this is the start of the chorus you should start it with all the empathize like a slider head or a circle, but in my opinion never a tail.
  • 01:04:366 (1,2) - same as insane about the kiai flashes, they are not rankables.
  • 01:14:210 (1) - same as Insane


Medio:
  • 00:05:304 (2,1) - Fix the distance Fixed
  • 00:08:116 (1) - same as Insane, maybe add some hitsounds will be really cool, maybe finish or claps? Fixed
  • 00:11:163 (2,3) - really nazi but this blanket can be better, use the approach circle to improve it. Fixed
  • 00:12:569 (3) - Should be a NC following your pattern Fixed
  • 00:22:882 (3,4) - you have a rhythm problem here, the sound at 00:23:351 should be a slider head or a circle maybe like: mmmm I'm not sure, need more opinions about this.
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:26:632 (3,4) - Fix the distance Fixed
  • 00:31:788 (3,1) - same as above ^
  • 00:40:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try another pattern? the circles are ok, they fit the music nice, but the way you make the shape is not suitable for a normal diff. imo is reable I saw a similar pattern in other difficulty ranked
  • 00:44:210 (1) - same as hard diff, starting the kiai on sliders tail or spinner end is not ok, it doesn't fit the song, try this instead: I always do this and have never been problems, I prefer to keep it at this way for now, if someone else mentioned this, I'll change it
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 00:52:882 (3) - you have a rhythm problem here, starting sliders on weak beats and ending on strong beats, doesn't follow the song well, try: ^
    collapsed text
    Image
  • 01:04:366 (1,2) - same as hard Fixed
  • 01:12:335 (2,3) - a slider will follow the song better, (2) have more importance in the music than one, that's why Fixed
  • 01:13:976 (5) - remove this circle is not following nothing there, remember to fix the spacing if you do. listen carefully the track baka



Easy:
  • 00:17:022 (4,1) - - fix the distance I broke the spacing just a little, for symmetry, no changes
  • 00:44:210 (1) - same to normal and hard nah is fine
  • 01:02:257 (2) - maybe delete this circle, is the first time you use this pattern is too difficult for a easy diff. not really this is not very difficult because this follow the voice
  • 01:04:366 same as other diffs Fixed


GL nice song <3
User avatar
Spinner Sage
143 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Image Yue's Rain

General: Remove widescreen support, You don't have SB.


00:03:897 (5) - Ctrl+H.
00:04:601 (6,7) - Ctrl+G (these two notes).
00:07:882 - Maybe delete this note.
00:12:101 (7) - Change the place of this circle. x:256.
1
Image

00:15:382 (3,4) - Ctrl+G (these two notes).
00:23:819 (4) - x:56 (better flow and nice HDash, just suggestion).
00:24:757 (1) - x:224 (there You have little Dash).
01:02:491 (1) - Delete this note (Spinner should start at this place).
01:04:132 - End of Your spinner.


If You don't understand something. Write to me in-game.
Good luck.

Last edited by Ollapeu on , edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,594 posts
Offline
No kudosu yet.
Kandai-sa
Kandai-sa wrote:
Image Yue's Rain

General: Remove widescreen support, You don't have SB. Gero D:


00:03:897 (5) - Ctrl+H. Nop
00:04:601 (6,7) - Ctrl+G (these two notes). ^
00:07:882 - Maybe delete this note. I see no reason :c
00:12:101 (7) - Change the place of this circle. x:256. Okay
00:15:382 (3,4) - Ctrl+G (these two notes). again I see no reason u.u
00:23:819 (4) - x:56 (better flow and nice HDash, just suggestion). you're right
00:24:757 (1) - x:224 (there You have little Dash).sure
01:02:491 (1) - Delete this note (Spinner should start at this place). if someone else tells me, I'll change it
01:04:132 - End of Your spinner. I have to leave a little space between a circle and spiner :c


If You don't understand something. Write to me in-game.
Good luck.



Thanks for your mod >w<

Yue's Rain
Code:
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Claudia Bramnfsette - Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47140
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Yo Te Atrapo, Tu Me Atrapas (TV Size)
Artist:Claudia Bramnfsette
ArtistUnicode:Claudia Bramnfsette
Creator:Gero
Version:Yue's Rain
Source:Cardcaptor Sakura
Tags:Gumi Catch You Catch Me Clow Cards クロウカード  Kurō Kādo Megumi Hinata 日向 めぐみ CCS SCC Magical Girl Cardcaptors Shoujo Shojo Opening カードキャプターさくら Kādokyaputā Sakura Sakura Cardcaptors Sakura, Cazadora de Cartas Latino [Yue]
BeatmapID:361382
BeatmapSetID:145738

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
851,468.75,4,2,1,40,1,0
10226,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
47726,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
55108,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
55226,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
58858,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
58976,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
62374,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
62491,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66241,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
74913,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
75382,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
75851,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
76319,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
76788,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
77257,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
77726,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
78194,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
78663,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
79132,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
79601,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 238,226,83
Combo2 : 255,149,152
Combo3 : 186,154,124
Combo4 : 124,228,151
Combo5 : 68,200,238
Combo6 : 166,149,187
Combo7 : 153,153,153
Combo8 : 194,107,54

[HitObjects]
44,296,2726,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,288,3194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,240,3429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,240,3663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,3897,2,0,B|224:96,2,125,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,4601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,4835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,5069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,5304,6,0,P|224:320|160:224,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,6007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,6241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,6476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,6944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,7179,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,7413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,7647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,7882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,352,8116,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,32,8585,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,32,9054,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,352,9522,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,192,9757,2,0,B|160:192,1,125,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,10226,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,10460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,288,10694,2,0,P|96:288|128:352,1,125,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,11163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,11397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,11632,2,0,B|416:192,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,12335,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,12569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,12804,2,0,P|225:253|202:137,1,250
352,128,13507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,13741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,13976,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,14444,6,0,B|288:320,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,14913,2,0,B|352:320,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,15382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,256,15616,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,256,16085,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,192,16554,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,192,17022,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,160,17257,6,0,B|160:256,1,125,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,17608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,320,17726,2,0,B|324:320,1,125,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,18194,2,0,P|128:192|128:256,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,18663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,18897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,19132,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,256,19366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,352,19601,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,352,19835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,320,20069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,224,20304,2,0,P|160:256|240:272,1,125
64,160,20772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,21007,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,21241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,21476,1,4,0:0:0:0:
432,272,21710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,288,21944,2,0,B|352:288,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,22413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,22647,2,0,B|156:192,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23116,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,23351,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,352,23585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,288,23819,2,0,B|152:192,1,125,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,256,24288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,24522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,24757,5,8,0:0:0:0:
480,64,24991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,25226,2,0,B|224:64,1,125,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,25694,2,0,P|64:128|128:128,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,26163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,26397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,26632,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,320,26866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,27101,2,0,B|224:192,1,125,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,27569,2,0,B|156:64,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,28038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,28272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,28507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,240,28741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,28858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,28976,6,0,B|248:136,1,125,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,29444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,320,29679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,29913,2,0,B|416:224|416:224|352:192,2,125,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,30616,2,0,B|160:176,1,125
336,144,31085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,31319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,272,31554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,352,31788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,352,32022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,352,32257,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,288,32491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,32608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,32726,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,128,32960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,33194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,176,33429,2,0,P|96:208|176:208,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,33897,2,0,B|160:36,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,34366,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,224,34483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,34601,1,4,0:0:0:0:
432,224,34835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,35069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,224,35304,2,0,P|144:160|208:160,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,35772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,304,36007,2,0,B|112:336|112:336|208:256,1,250,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,36710,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,36944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,37179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,37413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,37647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,37882,2,0,P|64:304|160:304,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,38351,2,0,P|320:304|224:304,1,125
448,208,38819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,176,39054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,39288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,39522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,39757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,32,40226,5,4,0:0:0:0:
112,128,40460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,40694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,352,41163,1,6,0:0:0:0:
400,352,41397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,41632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,42101,5,6,0:0:0:0:
416,304,42335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,304,42569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,43038,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,160,43272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,43507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,43976,6,0,L|256:384,1,125,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,44444,2,0,L|448:240,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,44913,2,0,L|64:240,1,125
448,176,45382,2,0,L|448:48,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,45851,2,0,B|64:48,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,46319,2,0,B|475:229,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,46788,2,0,B|38:229,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,47257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,224,47491,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,47726,2,0,B|256:144|256:144|320:128,1,125,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,336,48194,2,0,B|352:336,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,48663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,48897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,49132,2,0,L|96:144,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,49601,2,0,B|416:144,1,125
208,192,50069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,96,50304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,50538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,50772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,51007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,336,51476,6,2,B|368:304|368:304|480:256,1,250,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,52413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,52882,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,192,53351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,53468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,53585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,53702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,53819,2,0,B|112:304|112:304|48:288,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,54288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,272,54757,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,54991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,55226,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,144,55460,2,0,B|480:144,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,55929,2,0,B|32:320,1,125
352,320,56397,2,0,B|480:320,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,56866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,57101,2,0,B|224:240,1,125
32,240,57569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,57804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,58038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,58272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,58507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,80,58976,6,0,L|208:80,1,62.5
368,80,59210,2,0,L|304:80,1,62.5
256,176,59444,2,0,B|380:176,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,59913,2,0,L|368:256,1,62.5
208,256,60147,2,0,L|144:256,1,62.5
256,336,60382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,80,60616,6,0,L|0:112,2,62.5
240,192,61085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,61319,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,192,61554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,61788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,62022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,62257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,62491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62608,12,0,63897,0:0:0:0:
480,192,64366,5,4,0:0:0:0:
32,192,64835,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,144,65304,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,128,65772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,66007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,240,66241,2,0,L|432:288,2,62.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,66710,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,66944,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,176,67179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,67413,2,0,B|384:32,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,67882,2,0,B|224:192,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,68351,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,68585,2,0,L|272:320,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,69054,2,0,B|16:192|16:192|176:192,1,250
32,336,69757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,336,69991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,70226,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,70460,6,0,L|96:128,1,62.5
224,128,70694,2,0,B|352:128,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,208,71163,2,0,B|16:208,1,125,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,71632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,336,71866,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,336,72335,1,4,0:0:0:0:
480,272,72804,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,272,73272,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,48,73507,2,0,B|256:176,1,125
32,192,73976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,74444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74679,12,0,79601,0:0:0:0:
User avatar
osu! Alumni
1,754 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.

General thoughts


  • Some of your difficulties have widescreen support on, make sure to disable that!
  • I have to agree more with Natsu here, I mean the diff names are fine and I get your idea... but the only problem is that I honestly wouldn't know what difficulty Facil is, or Dificil. You might want to consider changing them to English ones if this becomes a bigger problem but leave them if you want.
  • I think the SV change between the Hard difficulty to Insane is quite big, but I guess that doesn't matter that much.


Experto


  • Pretty much what I said in the general section, you could at least lower the SV till 00:10:226 (1) - here, like using a 0.75x speed sliders or that, but I guess that's more of a personal preference.
  • 00:11:163 (4,7) - It'd be nice if you could overlap it more smoothly, now it's not as perfect as it could be.
  • 00:13:624 (4,5) - These felt pretty weird to play considering you move your cursor a bit down, how about just make it a straight line instead like the slider? Would fit better, way better.
    Example
      Image
  • 00:25:226 (1,2) - I honestly felt these two sliders were pretty weird to play, their shapes were weird, I mean it didn't play that ''smoothly''. Why don't you just move the middle red point more up? It'd look way cooler and would play also nicely!
    Example
    Image
  • 00:28:038 (3,4) - I'd move them a bit further away so there isn't going to be any problems, but they are fine now. (If you decide to move these, apply this to your rest of sliders that has the same pattern, you know <.<)
  • 01:03:663 (5) - Meh, just disliking the way it curves and it's shape. I'd like this more:
    Example
    Image
  • 01:14:444 - I think it'd be way more fun to end the map with a note instead of the 1/8 repeative slider. So, if you want to, you could remove 01:14:210 (2) - 1-2 reverses from it and add a note there o3o
  • Good job!


Dificil


  • Waaay too unfitting settings, this breaks the diff spread a lot :^ (, try settings like: 6, 7, 6, would be better :3
  • 00:07:765 (5) - I'd stack this one with 00:07:413 (4) - , it would look nice and be somewhat consistent with the previous stack.
  • 00:09:288 (2) - 1/8 sliders in a Hard difficulty are quite tricky, take this as a warning (it might cause some problems imo)
  • 00:12:335 (1) - It'd be cool to add some CURVE on this, instead of downcurve, upcurve would fit better!
    Example
    Image
  • 00:14:913 (2) - This jump is like, what, 3x>? I'd make the spacing much smaller if I were you.
  • Nope, nothing else for me. Well done difficulty!


Mediol


  • 00:14:913 (1,2) - I think this NC is a bit unnecessary, I'd remove it.
  • 00:31:319 (2,3) - The rhythm isn't the best here (imo), what do you think of this? I think this would follow the music overall a bit better:
    Example
    Image
  • 01:10:694 (1,2) - I don't think these two should have own combo.
  • 01:12:569 (3) - I'd remove this note, why? Because it sounds too much. Yeah there's a sound but.. still D:
  • Gero learn to make mistakes o3o


Facil


  • Pro


Yeaah, such a poor mod, sorry D: GL with this song xD So funny (btw, you're the girl o3o/) 8-) (star for you baby)
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
3,413 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Mod por parte de Shinsei mapuu team
Image

Leyenda
:idea: Sugerencia
:!: Cambio
:arrow: Comentario

Easy
:idea: 00:03:429 (2) - puedes poner un slider que se repita haci: http://puu.sh/6FFWr.jpg
:idea: 00:05:304 (3) - Aqui podrias hacer algo igual que en ^
:arrow: 00:07:179 (4) - Ya aqui no, y quedaria un buen ritmo
:!: 00:14:913 (2,3) - En los Easy debe haber un palito de diferencia, me solprende de ti Gero D:
:idea: 00:14:913 (2) - Para que arregles lo de arriva puedes poner que este se repita tres veces
:!: 00:32:726 (1) - Es muy aburrido este slider, intenta poner mas circulos y sliders en este, en vez de un slider largo
:!: 00:34:601 (2) - ^
:!: 01:02:257 (2,3) - Lo de los palitos ._.
:!: 01:02:491 (3) - Solo una repeticion esta bien pero la segunda es aburrida
:!: 01:11:163 (2,3) - Lo se, talvez sea tu forma de mappear pero es muy dificil para un principiante lo de los palitos ;_;

Medio
:arrow: Una pregunta ._./, por que medio y no normal?
:idea: 01:07:647 - Creo que se escucharia mejor si pones un circulo aqui haciendo overlap en el slider

Dificil
Esto es un ejemplo de perfección :3

Gero, e modeado muchos mapas tuyos, y sabes que no es personal pero no modeo insanes ni CTB :v
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
834 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
mod request in Shinsei mapuu team
experto
01:04:249 (6) - creo que esa nota no va porque no ahí sonido allí
00:44:444 (2,3,4,5,6) - estas no están muy separadas ?

facil
01:01:788 - http://puu.sh/6FIzE en la easy no es bueno que aiga cambios de dirección tan de repente pero creo que este esta bien

lo único que encontré xD)
ahorita te dejo una strellita :) :) :) :) :) :)
User avatar
osu! Alumni
2,292 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.

Experto
00:51:476 (1) - me gustaría que alargaras este slider, así como está lo sentí mochado de como va la voz> http://puu.sh/6HxDi.jpg
01:04:366 (1,2,3,1,2) - Bueno, probablemente a estas alturas ya no vas a querer cambiarlo, pero aun así hago la sugerencia: En esta parte creo que desaprovechas la oportunidad de hacer unos buenos jumps en la leta «Eres El MeJor!»... ^^U


Dificil
Iba a hacer un nazi mod en un circulo, pero nahh, está bien ^^


Medio
00:24:757 (1) - x:176, y:120 ._.
00:41:163 (4) - NC?, aunque quedan solo de 3, creo que en esa parte lo amerita :)


Facil
Tomoyo want see you! X.x
Image
No podía concentrarme (?)

00:17:726 (1) - este está a 1.0x, cuando todo está a 1.10x... te digo que hasta yo me equivoqué y lo hice mal xD


Bueno, eso sería... sos demasiado pr0 como para hacer un mod muy largo, gomen ._.
User avatar
osu! Alumni
3,375 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Recuerdas que te dije que te iba a golpear con un bat?


Experto
0.8x spacing pls.
00:04:952 (2) - Siento que se jugarian mejor dos circulos aqui que el slider, ya que 00:05:069 es un beat mas fuerte y seria mejor tener una nota que golpear ahi en vez de soltar un slider.
00:07:765 (6) - ^
00:10:226 (1) - Este circulo se juega un poco raro, personalmente pienso que una pequeña pausa/un slider de 1/4 con un repeat aqui se sentiria mejor, asi el siguiente combo empezaria en 00:10:460 (2) haciendo juego con el instrumental.
00:10:694 (3,4) - *1er golpe* Incluso si esto es una Insane, este jump no queda para nada, si quedaria bien un pequeño jump, pero no uno que vaya de lado a lado de la pantalla. Una solucion facil, es aplicando la sugerencia de arriba y acomodando las notas como te muestro en la imagen.
collapsed text
Image

00:11:749 (5) - Esta nota deberia ir en 00:11:515.
00:13:624 (4) - Esta en 00:13:858.
00:37:882 (5,1) - El flujo aqui se siente algo raro, intenta volteando 00:38:351 (1,2,3,4) horizontalmente (Ctrl+H)
00:44:444 (2,3,4,5,6) - *2do golpe* Algo similar al 1er golpe, estos jumps son excesivamente largos, puedes tomar cualquiera de estas sugerencias o hacer algo diferente.
Sugerencia 1
Image
Code:
112,112,44210,5,0,0:0:0:0:
28,160,44444,2,0,P|4:106|18:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,208,44913,2,0,P|131:261|117:319,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,144,45382,2,0,P|156:90|170:32,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,192,45851,2,0,P|291:245|277:303,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,46319,2,0,P|328:74|342:16,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,46788,2,0,L|416:64,4,30,2|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Sugerencia 2 (esta requiere que se ajuste el slider que viene despues)
Image
Code:
128,104,44210,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,36,44444,2,0,P|245:73|257:131,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,90,44913,2,0,P|364:145|314:174,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,285,45382,2,0,P|334:281|290:241,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,351,45851,2,0,P|195:293|219:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,197,46319,2,0,P|140:165|198:171,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:51:476 (1) - Ctrl+G?
01:00:851 (1,2,3) - Si pudieras reducir un poco los jumps aca vendria bien.
01:04:835 - Preferiria que hubiera un ritmo asi, de esta manera el jugador golpea cuando las voces tienen mayor enfasis y seria mejor.
01:07:999 (4) - Esta nota deberia ir en 01:07:765.
Image
01:06:476 (5) - Remueve el finish del final.


Dificil
00:07:413 (4,5) - Se sentiria mejor un ritmo similar a 00:06:476 (2,3), un slider de 1/4 seguido de un circulo.
00:10:226 (1) - Al igual que mencione en Experto, una pausa aca vendria bien, asi que haz que este slider sea de 1/2 y que inicie en 00:10:460.
00:14:444 (1,2) - dis random jump, Gero pls *3er golpe*. Que te parece algo asi? (Hice un Ctrl+G en 00:15:616 (1)).
collapsed text
Image

00:36:007 (4) - Ctrl+G?
00:38:351 (1,2) - Encimadas se ven muy feas, :c tal vez algo similar a como te mostre en la imagen anterior con los sliders de 1/2?
00:56:163 (3) - Este slider aqui se siente muy simple, estas omitiendo varias cosas aqui, seria mejor que pusieras algunas cosas mas aca.
01:05:772 (2) - Siento que seria mejor si quitas el repeat y pones un circulo en 01:06:710, asi este circulo empezaria mejor el siguiente combo.
01:14:210 (1) - Remueve este NC?


Normal
Algo de lo que no me siento seguro es de este tipo de stacks en los patornes slider-circulo-slider, como en 00:14:913 (1,2,1), tienden a ser algo confusos en dificultades bajas.
00:10:226 (1) - Similar que en las otras dificultades, inicia este slider en 00:10:460 y hazlo de 1/2.
00:44:210 (1) - Te recomendaria terminar el spinner en 00:47:257 y poner un circulo al inicio del kiai, asi tendra mas enfasis y el jugador iniciaria a jugar en un downbeat.
00:32:726 (1,2,3) - Usaria un ritmo similar a este, es mas intuitivo ya que sigue mas correctamente los "¿por qué?~"
Image
01:14:444 (1) - Remueve este NC?


Facil
00:10:226 (1) - Mueve este a 00:09:991, la musica es mucho mas fuerte ahi y un jugador esperaria golpear ahi.
00:44:210 (1) - Te recomendaria terminar el spinner en 00:47:257 (o en 00:46:788 si te parece muy corto el espacio)y mapear desde el inicio del kiai, se sentira mucho mejor en mi opinion.
01:14:444 (1) - Remueve este NC?

Eso seria todo de mi parte Gero, buena suerte~
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
532 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Mod time /o/

ImageYue'sRain

00:12:804 (3) - try this slider
00:31:085 (6,7,8,9,10,) - try to make this jump more gentle
00:32:257 (1) - i think it would be nicer if this circle become hyperdash ( x = 122)
00:33:897 (8) - move it into x = 256
00:38:819 (8,9,10,11,12) - make the jump more gentle gentle
00:40:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be nicer if you make the three jump more variety 8)
For this one is my recommendation , but it would be better if you change it as your taste 8)
(for jump 1) 00:40:226 (1,2,3) -
00:40:226 (1) - move to ( x = 192)
00:40:694 (3) - move to ( x = 416)
(jump 3) 00:42:101 (1,2,3) -
00:42:101 (1,2,3) -make it like this

00:48:897 (5) - move it into ( x = 256)
00:51:476 (1) - ctrl+H
00:52:413 (1) - i think it's nicer if it's same as 00:51:476 (1) with opposide side
00:57:804 (10) - move it into x = 192
01:01:085 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the spacing more nicer
This is a BSS beatmap submission. Click here to view full beatmap information.
Reply 60 posts jump | 1, 2, 3, 4  next

Users browsing this forum: None


Jump to: